Hagane Clan [Complete]

Subject: Re: Hagane Clan [Complete] Mon 28 Mar 2011, 9:56 am

Make edits or ditch it. We are not trying to ruin your creativity, we are trying to do our jobs. No more arguements, no more debate. One or the other

Age : 36 Posts : 1004

O yea I forgot to say....I did edit all of these lol....

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Ok here is my two cents on this application which I have been asked to have a look over.

A common occurrence with your clans are they their abilities are quite broad in the respect that they do not have definitive connections between the various abilities, so I am here to help with this and resolve the squabble. From what I can see this is mainly based around the clan members skin, something which you should focus on. Why not have an ability focussed around this. You would be able to gain these resistance and physical bonuses through this. Here is a small description here;

Quote :: Involves clan members being able to use their skin as a weapon and as an extension of them self. By manipulating the skin cells themselves, they can cause rapid grow e.g excess skin. they can harden their skin and shape it as well. Since they are manipulating the cells themselves, external wounds and damage taken heal would also much quicker.

A KKG around this would allow you everything you want. I am not a fan of "experiments" as a way to gain abilities, something like this hereditary, would work in a similar way to the Kaguya clans manipulation of calcium deposits etc. You could focus it around your taijutsu style and taijutsu as a whole as well.

* This is just an option. The debate was getting out of control up above, I prefer to give a viable option instead of slugging it out..

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

PS, you need to think of some different jutsu the uncreativity of copying the Hyuuga clan techniques is bullshit and a style much like them would still be known as Hyuuga Clan techniques even if they're not targeting chakra points, they are still the same attack.

Age : 36 Posts : 1004

Achieve this...BTW the Hyuuga use Tai Chi as an art not Wing Chun or Muay Tai or the art was completly different..infact it was or related to Rock Lee style with I agree a little Hyuuga...

I'm tired of this squabbling as well just archieve it and it's over....

Thanxxx Todd that was a great idea but I'm us gonna be canon...

I'll wait and see what all gets approve here before I eve try to create another clan

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archived due to request.