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Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jun 2010, 8:21 am | |
| Archived due to User Inactivity. |
| | | leon77
Age : 33 Posts : 143
| Subject: Re: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Thu 28 Oct 2010, 9:07 pm | |
| ready to be approved once more |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Fri 29 Oct 2010, 2:39 am | |
| Your coding is off, capitalization is nice. If you dont want a clan etc remove that entire section.
Please review the cration guide for the list of basic jutsu everyone knows and use that instead of your own creation. All of them.
If you want any Taijutsu, add them now.
If you want anymore Doton jutsu, add them now. You can also have a second element if you want.
Your RP sample is 20 words under the Genin limit. Id fix that. |
| | | leon77
Age : 33 Posts : 143
| Subject: Re: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Sat 30 Oct 2010, 9:34 am | |
| once agian ready |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Mon 01 Nov 2010, 7:17 pm | |
| Ill review after class. So figure in about 4 ish hours |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Mon 01 Nov 2010, 11:53 pm | |
| Approved |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Sun 12 Dec 2010, 11:06 am | |
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