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| Basic Information:
Name: Roxas Raidon
Secondary Title: 'God of Thunder' or 'Lightning God'
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:
Personality: When he was only four, Roxas would always smile whenever he was with his mother and he was regularly at her side, holding her hand. Despite crying whenever he lost in karate, he started to smile again as soon as he saw Tenshi, his sister, when she came to pick him up from the dojo. Nowadays, Roxas is a stubborn, short-tempered, occasionally confrontational, spontaneous, determined, outspoken, strong-willed, impulsive young man. Despite being witty and cynical, he is shown to be genuinely compassionate and empathetic about others such as bringing a Plus flowers or soothing others when they become doubtful. He is also extremely protective of his friends and family. This latter trait is the driving force behind many of his actions.
He attempts to maintain a detached and "cool" image, despite claiming to not care about what other people think about him. For this reason, he generally keeps his face set in an emotionless look, not showing any in depth feelings. However, despite this "uncaring" image he tries to maintain, he becomes extremely shy and uncomfortable around many women and girls, a thing that a high multitude of his friends have teased him for. He is also rather cocky and has been known to taunt and belittle his opponents when fighting. Conversely, he can also go into a state of deep depression when he loses a major battle or lets a friend down. Another thing that highly distinguishes Roxas from anyone else is his extremely analytical way of viewing things; his primary belief is that the bigs things would not exist without the little details, in which he finds focusing on the minor or minuscule details will always bring forth the 'big picture'.
Although his cocky, hot-headed, and spontaneous nature makes him only appear rather dimwitted to more composed and calculating individuals, Roxas is a highly capable analyst when required, and can instinctively catch on to most things much quicker than those around him. His natural yellow hair and rebellious disposition tend to annoy many intimidating figures, who constantly make the unwittingly stupid decision of picking a fight with him. Roxas claims that he does not care about other people's opinions about him (both in regards to his hair and other subjects), and seems to enjoy fighting people. Similarly, he is also a diligent researcher in the art of science, he constantly takes it upon himself to study the basic compounds and make-up of the atomic and molecular structure of solid materials such as steel or earth, this research helping him in the area of earth-bending.
Due to his constant fights with unintelligent passer-byers and his seemingly emotionless look, many students are rather afraid of him. Despite this, he has a warm and kind heart, defiantly looks out for those placed in his charge, and is, to a degree, quite compassionate once he understands another's point of view or opinion. This trait makes him quite likable to children and younger people. As such, he has almost never threatened or raised his voice to his friends . However, he has some trouble with authority and traditional respect, and is often quite rude and disrespectful when talking to those older than himself. Although he does not intend to be rude, he tends to call elders by nicknames such as 'gramps' and inadvertently disrespect high-ranked benders by referring to them by their first name.
Another tendency found in Roxas is his corrective personality. He tends to restate facts in a more technically correct fashion, which has earned him the title by some as a smart-ass or seen as too determined to be correct. This is not the point, however, Roxas's sole reason for correcting people's technical mistakes is to make sure everyone gets the correct idea, and do not believe what isn't necessarily true. At times, Roxas quite prefers a peaceful life of solitude, without the interference of others. He has an extremely improper social life, but is quite the strategic genius in battle; withholding the ability to conjure up plans at a moments notice, when they are most required - based on his own observations.
A few things that Roxas likes very much are fighting, training, science, and girls. Although he onlys fights if absolutely necessary, he enjoys it quite a lot. He is very well known for utilizing science when in any form of combat, this adding to his technique's lethality - because he will often combine them. What also makes him quite a foe to go up against is his creativity and imagination, which drives his high ability to combine his techniques in just the right way that makes them that much stronger. When he isn't training his butt off at the training ground or sparring a friend, he is deeply emerged in research or studying.
In contradicting of his likes, he also has some dislikes; for he is human, and every human dislikes at least something! Some of the things that he hates, which are the primary ones, would most likely be ignorance, arrogance, and bullies.
Catch Phrase: "It is rarely so that we, as humans, can be put to blame for our mistakes. For any person, man or woman, is only as perfect or imperfect as the world around them."
Clan Information:
Clan Name: Raidon
Clan Location: Konohagakure no Sato
Clan Traits: Members of the Raidon clan have quite a few natural traits other than their Kekei Genaki. A few of these traits consist of their completely natural primary affinity to the element of Lightning and usually Water as their secondary affinity. Another well-known trait of Raidon Clan members is that they are always born with blonde hair and blue eyes, which is completely natural for them; there has yet to be a member of the clan to not be born with said trait.
Kekkei Genkai: Members of the Raidon Clan possess a fairly unusual Kekei Genkai, one that finely corresponds with their natural elemental affinity to lightning. Their body is constantly flowing and emitting a minor electrical charge, capable of becoming amplified if applied to an aquatic setting. This constant flow of electricity throughout their body allows them to perform nearly any lightning technique with extreme ease and without the use of as many handsigns, and if they are able to master this flow of electricity, no handsigns at all.
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: Lesser Electric Pulse
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: By mildly harnessing the electric flow in their body, a Raidon Clan member is able to release it in a minor pulse around their body. The pulse itself is barely tangible but enduces a painful and minorly disorienting effect to anyone caught within it's two foot radius.
Name: Electric Pulse
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raidon Clan members who are a bit more skilled are able to increase their ability to utilize the electrical pulse in their body to have a larger effect and radius. The pulse in this form is more tangible and enduces a very painful and paralyzing effect to anyone caught within the three foot radius.
Name: Greater Electric Pulse
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: The most powerful form of their electric pulse technique, the Greater Electric Pulse is much more powerful. It requires high mastery of the clan member's electric flow in their body to utilize. The user will release a very tangible pulse of electricity four feet outward. The electric pulse comes out as hundreds of small blades of lightning that are capable of slicing through near any material as well as rendering organisms that it touches paralyzed.
Name: Electric Neuropathing
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: By manipulating the very electric waves that control movement throughout their body, a Raidon Clan member is able to overcome near any paralysis. Meaning that so long as their spinal cord and mind are intact, they are able to move if they have enough chakra. The amount of chakra it requires is determined by the strength of the paralysis.
Name: Electric Blades
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: The user will shape lightning affinity chakra to the side of their hands and arms, which will then form large blades that reach from the tip of their elbow all the way to a foot
outward of the tip of their middle finger. The blades are extremely sharp and can cut through bone with ease, while disrupting their nervous system at the same time; although not enough to stun them, the disruption is enough to make movement hard and lethargic.
Name: Lightning God Release Technique - Raikouton no Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: The user only needs one hand to use this technique. They will form fair-sized compacted spheres of lightning and electricity at the palms of their hands before letting them loose, while sending them flying at incredible speeds towards their opponent's. The spheres spiral violently after being let loose, and once they hit something they will explode into electricity. The electricity is strong enough to strike a hole through pure concrete.
Name: Lightning Thrust
Rank: C
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: When the user throws a weapon they will release an extreme amount of lightning as it is leaving their hand. This lightning will stick to the weaponry as well as thrust outward behind it to give it a powerful extra boost, making it over three times faster than it's initial speed and lethality.
Name: Electric Conductor no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user will simply hold out there hand to the targeted source of electricity, before pulling it into their body. Once inside their body, the user will compact it into a small sphere in their body before nullifying it. Although this technique is very powerful, it takes a lot of chakra and is limited to up to B ranked electricity.
History: The clan has no really significant history.
Clan Details: Open to everyone that receive my permission, only.
Rank Information:
Rank: Jounin
Village Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Medical Jutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Water
Special Characteristics: Roxas is extremely determined and never gives up so long as he has the energy to keep going. He trains constantly and due to this is much more skilled in standard combat than the average shinobi.
Skill Information:
Jutsu Template:
Basic Techniques
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Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D - A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Non-Elemental Techniques
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Name: Chakra Replacement Jutsu (Also known as Chakra Phasing Jutsu)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu requires no handsigns, only a high ability to control their own chakra. The user's body will be turned into pure chakra for a span of four seconds. While this jutsu is activated, he will be able to phase through objects or attacks. The jutsu uses a good bit of chakra, but can not be used more than once a day because it would cause him to become disconfigured, including the systems within his body, meaning they will not be able to function right, and cause him to die.
Name: Ayametori - Pattern Links
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou: Ayametori is a Ninjutsu technique used by Shinobazu member Monju. Monju uses wire to form complex string figure designs with his hands. The wire itself is said to be stronger than steel. The figure Monju creates can then be launched from the string as a powerful cutting attack.
Name: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Name: Gentoushin no Jutsu - Lit Apparition Technique
Rank: D - A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Gentoushin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique created by Pain and used by Akatsuki to gather at one location, even while members are in different parts of the world. By forming the needed handseal, an astral form of their being will appear at the desired location. This spirit can act in conjunction with other members to do combination jutsu like the Genryuu Kyuu Fuujin. While in the spirit form, the member’s voice will sound deep and distorted.
Name: Gyaku Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Reverse Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Gyaku Kuchiyose no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which allows an individual to summon a person or being to their location using a summoning scroll. In normal Kuchiyose, the signed summoning contract allows the summoner to call upon his or her summons without the contract present. This modification allows for any individual to be summoned through the use of a scroll tied back to the one to be summoned. This scroll allows the individual to be far away and be transported instantly to the location of the summoning scroll. In this variation, Naruto created two clones to remain at Myouboku and gather Senjutsu chakra. Upon being needed, the scroll seal tied to one of the clones was activated, drawing one to his location.
Name: Gyorai Shin - Torpedo Needle
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou • Gyorai Shin is a Ninjutsu technique used by the thief Gosunkugi. Removing nails from his pocket, Gosunkugi will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his chakra the nails will travel into the ground. Then at his discretion, he can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his target to nail them in place. He can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces.
Name: Hari Jigoku - Hell Needles
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou: Hari Jizou is a Ninjutsu technique used by Jiraiya. After extending his hair around his body with Hari Jizou, he will launch a torrent of hardened hair in the form of needles towards his target. When he was a teammate with Orochimaru, Jiraiya would use this in combination with Orochimaru's Senei Jashu technique. After Orochimaru would bind the target, Jiraiya could launch his needles to pierce them.
Name: Hari Jizou - Underworld Guardian Spikes
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou: Hari Jizou is a Ninjutsu technique used by Jiraiya. After forming the needed hand seals, Jiraiya's hair will grow in length to surround and protect his body. In this form it also becomes ridged and spiked, forming a layer of protectiong from direct strikes and blows.
Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
Name: Kagonome - Mesh Cage
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou: Kagonome is a Ninjutsu technique used by Shinobazu member Monju. Monju uses wire which is said to be stronger than steel. After forming the needed hand seals, Monju can manipulate his string into an interlocking dome for protection. This dome can repel most basic Taijutsu attacks. Monju can reshape the wire within the dome as needed, changing it from a defensive structure to a binding string with ease.
Name: Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu - Crow Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by Uchiha Itachi. This technique allows Itachi to create a clone composed of crows. The Itachi clone can disperse into multiple crows, which still maintain his consciousness. This allows him to speak and react while in crow form.
Name: Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken. More experienced shinobi are able to make hundreds of copies.
Name: Soushuuha - Manipulate Advancing Blades
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Soushuuha is a Ninjutsu technique used by Sand ninja Yashamaru. This technique allows Yashamaru to hover multiple kunai in the air while he approaches a target. The technique allows a ninja to unleash a torrent of kunai much more quickly than if each was thrown individually.
Lightning Techniques
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Name: Gian - False Darkness
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton • Gian is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After releasing his black Lightning elemental from his body, Kakuzu will use the spirit to release a strong bolt of electricity from its mouth. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
Name: Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton • Hiraishin is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After coming into physical contact with her opponent, Fuuka will raise her arm into the air. She will then generate a bolt of electricity which will travel through her body into the body of her opponent.
Name: Ikadzuchi no Kiba - Lightning Bolt Fang
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Ninpou: Ikadzuchi no Kiba is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kurosuki Raiga. Drawing together his dual short swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. A plume of of an electrified chakra-like essence will rise into the clouds above to activate the lightning to come crashing down on Raiga's target.
Name: Ikadzuchi no Utage - Lightning Bolt Feast
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raisou (Lightning Burial): Ikadzuchi no Utage is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kurosuki Raiga. Drawing together his dual short swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. He will then implant his swords into the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack each target individually
Name: Kakashi's Lightning Wolf Technique (Unnamed)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: This unnamed Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his hand, Kakashi will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from Kakashi's hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range.
Name: Kaminari Shibari - Thunder Binding
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton • Kaminari Shibari is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After launching his staff into the air, Kitane will form the needed hand seals and cause the staff to break into three equal pieces along its shaft. This tree smaller rods will then implant into the ground in a triangular shape around his opponent. These Raiton infused pierces will then create electrified fields between themselves to form a triangular shaped prison. The field can be penetrated by a more powerful Wind Element infused weapon. This weapon can then by used to cut through one of Kitane's staff pieces, which ends the jutsu.
Name: Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton • Kangekiha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. Darui will first create a protective wall of water using his Suijinheki jutsu. He will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through.
Name: Limelight (Raimuraito)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton • Limelight is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. Regarded as one of the ultimate Raiton jutsu, Limelight is created through the simultaneous Raiton usage of Kitane, Nauma, Seito and Tou'u. To begin, each ninja will take their place in one of the four cardinal directions. The ninja will then activate the jutsu, sending Lightning from their location over the center of the target. When all four Lightning arcs converge, they combine to rain down massive destruction on the area directly underneath. The jutsu is powerful enough to totally turn a village below into ash. The jutsu requires all four ninja to activate, if one of the users is taken out, the technique will fail.
Name: Raikyuu - Lightning Ball
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raikyuu is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kurosuki Raiga. One of Raiga's many lightning based jutsu, this technique is used in conjunction with his two swords. Drawing his two swords together, Raiga will form a ball of electricity which he can hurl at his opponent.
Name: Rairyuu no Tatsumaki - Lightning Dragon Tornado
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Ninpou: Rairyuu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kurosuki Raiga. One of Raiga's many lightning based jutsu, this technique is used in conjunction with his two swords. Drawing his two swords together, Raiga will raise them into the air and draw lightning down upon his body. The current will be contained within and around Raiga's form. He will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon and strike out against his opponent. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.
Name: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.
Name: Raiton no Yoroi - Lightning Armor
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton no Yoroi in a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Lightning Element. After surrounding and infusing his body with the Lightning Element, Raikage will greatly increase his speed, power and reaction time. This Lightning chakra will also act as a defensive shield, being able to greatly decrease the strength of incoming attacks, like a Chidori. The increase in speed will also grant him reflexes on par with Yondaime Hokage. These abilities will also be used in conjunction with his already powerful Taijutsu to create even deadlier attacks.
Name: Lesser Electric Pulse
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: By mildly harnessing the electric flow in their body, a Raidon Clan member is able to release it in a minor pulse around their body. The pulse itself is barely tangible but enduces a painful and minorly disorienting effect to anyone caught within it's two foot radius.
Name: Electric Pulse
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raidon Clan members who are a bit more skilled are able to increase their ability to utilize the electrical pulse in their body to have a larger effect and radius. The pulse in this form is more tangible and enduces a very painful and paralyzing effect to anyone caught within the three foot radius.
Name: Greater Electric Pulse
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: The most powerful form of their electric pulse technique, the Greater Electric Pulse is much more powerful. It requires high mastery of the clan member's electric flow in their body to utilize. The user will release a very tangible pulse of electricity four feet outward. The electric pulse comes out as hundreds of small blades of lightning that are capable of slicing through near any material as well as rendering organisms that it touches paralyzed.
Name: Electric Neuropathing
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: By manipulating the very electric waves that control movement throughout their body, a Raidon Clan member is able to overcome near any paralysis. Meaning that so long as their spinal cord and mind are intact, they are able to move if they have enough chakra. The amount of chakra it requires is determined by the strength of the paralysis.
Name: Electric Blades
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: The user will shape lightning affinity chakra to the side of their hands and arms, which will then form large blades that reach from the tip of their elbow all the way to a foot
outward of the tip of their middle finger. The blades are extremely sharp and can cut through bone with ease, while disrupting their nervous system at the same time; although not enough to stun them, the disruption is enough to make movement hard and lethargic.
Name: Lightning God Release Technique - Raikouton no Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: The user only needs one hand to use this technique. They will form fair-sized compacted spheres of lightning and electricity at the palms of their hands before letting them loose, while sending them flying at incredible speeds towards their opponent's. The spheres spiral violently after being let loose, and once they hit something they will explode into electricity. The electricity is strong enough to strike a hole through pure concrete.
Name: Lightning Thrust
Rank: C
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: When the user throws a weapon they will release an extreme amount of lightning as it is leaving their hand. This lightning will stick to the weaponry as well as thrust outward behind it to give it a powerful extra boost, making it over three times faster than it's initial speed and lethality.
Name: Electric Conductor no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user will simply hold out there hand to the targeted source of electricity, before pulling it into their body. Once inside their body, the user will compact it into a small sphere in their body before nullifying it. Although this technique is very powerful, it takes a lot of chakra and is limited to up to B ranked electricity.
Water Techniques
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Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.
Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Name: Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Haran Banshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Fuuka will create a waterfall to slam into her opponent.
Name: Ja no Kuchi - Serpent Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Ja no Kuchi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Fuuka will generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a serpent with a gaping maw. This serpent can twist and follow her target. After activation, she can create further serpents if needed. Fuuka may also use this jutsu in conjunction with Doton • Doro Houshi. The water of Ja no Kuchi will increase the momentum of the earth of Doro Houshi to create a more powerful mud slide.
Name: Jibashiri - Earth Flash
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton - Lightning
Description: Raiton • Jibashiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Lightning Element. After soaking her opponent with a Suiton, Fuuka will unleash an electric current which will run along the ground towards her opponent.
Name: Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.
Name: Suihashu - Water Wave Hand
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suihashu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Yamato will raise his hand into the air and emit a continuous jet of water to disrupt his opponent's attacks. Due to the nature of water, this attack works especially well against smoke based jutsu.
Name: Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.
Name: Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Name: Suiryuuben - Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suiryuuben is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra, which he will use to generate a whirling sphere of water. This sphere can then emit whips of water, which can seek out and impale his target.
Name: Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Name: Suishouha - Water Collision Destruction
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Nidaime Hokage does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.
Name: Suitenhoufutsu - Sky and Water Convergence
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suitenhoufutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes water to rise from the ground and surround the target. Ruiga can then use this water to drown his target or as a medium to call forth his fish summons. Because Ruiga uses groundwater to create the jutsu, if he is in a rocky area, he will have difficulty utilizing this technique.
Name: Suiun Suishi no Jutsu - Water Transport Dispatch Formation Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton - Water
Description: Suiton • Suiun Suishi no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. This jutsu was the preferred method of fighting a nearby fire by Chuunin.
Name: Oil Encampment Jutsu
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user will first form a string of three handsigns, before pulling their hand to their mouth on the last one. As the channel chakra to their mouth oil will form in their gullet before being released in a giant spray. The rank and amount of chakra used in the usage of this jutsu can vary on the scale of how much oil is sprayed out. Enough to cover a person is C rank, enough to cover a group of 5 people is B ranked, and enough to cover an entire building is A ranked. The oil is extremely prone to heat and if a heat source is near the oil, all the user has to do is form a single handsign to cause the oil to reacte with the heat and explode.
Name: Acidic Transformation Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user will form a single tiger handsign, before focusing on an embodiment of water. By focusing a fair amount of chakra into it, the user can turn the water into a steaming acidic green water. Even though the water is acidic, Pendo can still use his KKG to manipulate and utilize the acid as if it were regular water. The amount of water that can effected is about the size of a very large lake, basically as big as a lake gets.
Name: Mass Rain Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user will form a series of five swift handsigns, before raising his hands and arms to the sky. As soon as this is done, precipitation will gather to certain areas among the sky, all around the area, and it will begin to rain. The speed, pressure, and force of the rain can be continued by the user.
Name: Oceanic Ground Encampment Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user will form a swift string of four handsigns, before channeling chakra through their feet and into the gronud. The chakra will then multiply and spread through any area of a 30 meter radius, and 10 meters down, before transforming all the earth it covers into pure water for 8 posts.
Medical Techniques
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Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: A
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu is a special Ninjutsu techinque used by the Leaf ninja Yoroi. After activitating the technique, Yoroi's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases his advantage over his opponent.
Name: Chakra no Mesu - Chakra Scalpel
Rank: B
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.
Name: Chikatsu Saisei no Jutsu - Healing Resuscitation Regeneration
Rank: A
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Chikatsu Saisei is an advanced medical Ninjutsu technique. The technique allows the medical ninja to use the hair of the one injured as a medium to reconstruct damaged body tissue. The extent of the damage will control how difficult and long the procedure is. The injured person will be placed in the center of a square marked with rites for the procedure. One medical ninja will sit at each corner to provide precise chakra control to help in the cell conversion process. Another medical ninja will sit at the lead to guide the process.
Name: Doku Kiri - Poison Mist
Rank: B
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou: Doku Kiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Shizune. This technique allows Shizune to expel poision gas from her body. This can serve as cover to escape and as an offensive technique against her opponent.
Name: Fukumi Hari - Hidden Needles
Rank: C
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Fukumi Hari is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Shizune. Shizune is able to call forth needles into her mouth and then spit them at her opponent with great accuracy.
Name: Inyu Shometsu - Secret Healing Injury Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Inyu Shometsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kabuto. Focusing his chakra to an area to be hit, he can begin the cell creation process the moment the area becomes injured. This ability to activate his cells and create new ones is the very reason why Orochimaru favored Kabuto's talents.
Name: Souzou Saisei - Creation Rebirth
Rank: S
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Souzou Saisei is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Sannin Tsunade. It is said this technique will prevent Tsunade's falling in battle. Over time Tsunade will concentrate chakra to a spot on her forehead that takes the form of a diamond. When she releases the seal on the jutsu, the chakra disperses and stimulates the proteins of her body to increase the speed of cell division and reconstruction of cells. This allows her to recreate all organs and tissues. The technique itself does not regenerate the old cells, rather it hastens the creation of new ones through division. Unfortunately a body's cells can only split a certain number of times in a lifetime. By speeding up this process Tsunade is shortening her life. She may not die in battle, but she can die by speeding up its natural lifespan.
Another potential side effect of this technique is her body losing its youthful form. After using this jutsu in battle, the effects will show as her body regains it's natural older form. It is only after rest that she can cause her body to regain its false youth.
Weapon Template:
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30 x Kunai
25 x Shuriken
20 x Explosive Tags
20 x Senbon
30 x Meters of Diamond Alloy Wire
Item Template:
Name: Electrified Water Canteen
Rank: B
Type: Other
Natural Abilities: This canteen is designed with a special material to where it works in unison with Roxas's natural electrical current flowing through his body. This means that the electrical current is able to electrify the water and the canteen maintains said electric flow. This way, Roxas is able to utilize this water for normal water ninjutsu to increase their effectiveness.
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| Background Information
History: It was a cold winter night in the Hidden Leaf Village, all was silent, and all was peaceful. Not for long though, for a scream filled the area with a piercing cry. The source of this noise came from a home not to far from the Konohagakure Medical Hospital. "Hold on!" Tatsu Koroshima, Pendo's father, told his wife soothingly. "We'll get you to the hospital!" he picked her up gently, and ran out the door towards the Medical Building as fast as he could. He then body flickered into the room in front of the receptionist. "My wife is giving birth help us!" he shouted, as another piercing scream echoed through the building. The receptionist seemed to hesitate with fear before pressing a small button on the desk and a beep was heard. "A baby is coming!" she shouted, frantically as medical ninja came in with cot, placing the woman on it, and rolled her through the emergency doors. Tatsu followed his wife Nibu as the medical ninjas rolled her away. He prayed silently to himself as they prepared to remove the baby by applying anesthetics and soothing the mother.
"We're losing her!" a medical ninja shouted, now becoming nervous as a drop of sweat swelled up and dropped from his forehead. "We can only save one and kill the other!" another shouted, looking towards Tatsu. "Save...Nib..." he began, but his wife gripped his hand with strength. "Save...our son..." she told him, her eyes watering as she let out another piercing cry. "I-I Ca-a-an't..." he told her, beginning to cry as well. "Save...him" she told him, now demanding before her grip grew weak and she screamed once more, now gripping the blanket. "We need an answer now!" the medical ninja shouted. "Save...the child..." Tatsu told them, forcing out the last two words like raw meat. "Save...Pendo..." he repeated as he crouched down taking his wife's hand as he caressed it gently. "Please. Take care of Pen..." she tried to say but it was too late. Her eyes sat emotionless and her face expressionless. She was now dead and the cries of a baby filled the room as the medical ninja wrapped it in a blanket and handed it to Tatsu.
He looked at the baby with loving eyes as it cried. He began to softly rub the baby's head as it stopped crying and looked back at it's father with curious eyes. "I love you..." he said, looking towards his wife as tears streamed down his face. He didn't care about anyone else's shinobi way. He would cry if he wanted to, and he needed to. He walked out of the hospital back home and placed the baby in the crib they had bought in advance. After covering up the baby and giving him a warm bottle of milk Tatsu went upstairs to his room where he lay sprayed out on the bed ready to be overcome by sleep. That day had been the worst day of his life. He lost his wife. But not only that, although he has lost a life he had also received a new one. 'His name is...Pendo Nibu Koroshima...' he thought, drifting off into the empty void of sleep. He knew that he had long days ahead of him and a bigger job. He was now a single father and he would probably have to live in an apartment unless he was able to go on more missions.
"Da-da?" Pendo said, adorably. "That's right..." Tatsu told him lovingly as he picked up his infant son in his arms and cradled him gently. "I'm Da-da." he told his son, as he tickled his exposed belly. Pendo was only one and a half years old and wore only a diaper as he lay in his father's arms. "Ma-ma in hee-aaven?" Roxas asked, his eyes goggling as he looked past his fathers gentle and encouraging face to the pattern of the roof. "Yes. Mama in heaven." he reassured his son as he carried him outside. Many of Tatsu's friends passed by as they waved at Pendo. Some stopped to hold him or play with him, or even introduce him to their pets or own children. Pendo seemed to never be interested in any of it though. He would normally pay attention to everything around people, like nature, the sky, and everything that wasn't man made. He loved nature and the sweet scents of flowers and the colors of the different petals that were like sugar for his eyes. Although he yet to knew what any of this meant he was a pretty smart baby.
At the age of two he began to develop a liking for fruit. He loved how fruit could be eaten without drink because of how much moisture was in it. He especially loved cherries, tomatoes, and sometimes he could eat parts of watermelon if it wasn't too rough or hard. He was still interested in God and Heaven and about his mother and constantly asked his dead what his mother was doing. The same reply came every time "She's watching over us from heaven. She's with Jesus." Pendo loved to learn and mostly enjoyed his father reading him stories about past ninjas and sometimes even make believe books of ninjas that never even really existed. He loved the stories a lot none the less. He always asked his dad if he was ever a ninja and Tatsu felt a low wave of despair as he answered. "I gave that up a while ago." Tatsu told his sun. "Why?" Pendo asked, in that broken tone that only babys had. "Because I wanted to spend more time with you." Tatsu said, picking up his son and tossing him into the air before catching him skillfully in his arms. This always made Roxas giggle because he enjoyed the thrill of flying.
When he was three years old he began to dream of becoming a ninja. "Daddy, I'm going to be the best ninja that ever lived! I'll even beat the Hokage himself!" Pendo shouted, as he jumped around punching pillows. "No one will stand a chance against me!" and with that he kicked the pillow into the air and punched it into the wall. "I won't let anything happen to my little ninja..." Tatsu said, as he came up behind Pendo and tickled him. Pendo was subdued as he fell to the floor laughing as he was tickled nearly to death. Pendo loved playing ninja and loved to dream. His father wanted to do anything he could to help his son achieve his dream of becoming the most powerful ninja ever, although Tatsu doubted it was possible but he believed in his son and began to train him at the young age of 6.
"Dad! I've finally got it!" Pendo shouted, as he leapt into the air and spun in a complete three-sixty rotation tossing kunai and shurikens as he swirled. Every kunai and shuriken hit their bulls-eye except for two or three that hit a couple of inches off. He was now seven and very skilled with kunai and shuriken and that sort of basic weaponry. He enjoyed training with his dad and that was one of their favorite things that they did together. As Roxas trained harder and harder each day he finally completely mastered the move at the age of 8 when he first began to gain his abilities, his Kekei Genkai. He was able to make his movements precise and complete the thrust and angle with such effectiveness that it was hard to miss.
Now nine years old Tatsu enrolled Pendo in the academy. Pendo was the only Koroshima in his class and at time he felt left out among the others. Pendo loved learning new jutsus such as the academy jutsus and when he had mastered them all, which was easy for him, he graduated from the academy and finally became a Genin at the age of nine. He loved being a Genin and wore his headband as soon as he received it. His father was so proud of his son and his accomplishment and took him out to celebrate at Ichiraku's ramen shop. They ordered the usually and had a good time as they ate and talked about the future to come and how Pendo wanted to one day become the Hokage.
Pendo began to spend a lot of time on missions but still spent some time with his dad and some of his friends when he wasn't working hard to help out his dad. He wanted to make everything perfect and make it where they could move back into their old house. Someone was currently living it it but they planned on buying it back so Pendo was saving up. His dad was saving as well from selling ninja gear. He sold shurikens, kunai, scrolls, ninja wear, and other items that were essential to a normal ninja in Konohagakure. His best seller were senbons and they were a personal favorite of Roxas as well. His father always told him it wasn't the strength or size of something but the skill of the user using the item. He taught his son that honor and virtues were the most important part of life and to not dabble in money and riches but love and good always conquered evil and hatred. Pendo always loved to hear what his father had to say and wanted to teach the same to his son when he grew up.
Pendo was now eleven and the Chuunin Exams were coming up. He wanted so badly to win and finally be promoted to a Chuunin in his turn. It wouldn't be just' another step to achieving his goal, it would be a large step, an important step. Anything but 'just' a step. He signed up and registered as soon as the stands opened up. The line was pretty long but Pendo was a very patient person and finally registered. He felt excited and couldn't wait. His anticipation was rushing through his veins with every passing day as the week ended and it was close to the first exams. He spent the last three days training as hard as he possibly could before the first test began. The first one was a written test, he had read many books on the material and has passed with a breeze. After all it wasn't that hard.
The second portion of the Chuunin exams was what he had been waiting for. The fighting. He faced off against a Hyuuga and easily defeated him and won the match, and moved on to the next portion. After defeating a regular clanless ninja in that portion after a vigorous battle, he was finally moving on to the finals. They would determine who became a Chuunin and who wouldn't. He was kind of nervous but he shook it off after remembering his past matches that flew by like a breeze. They hadn't even been hard and he doubted that this one would be any more difficult. When the day came he found out that he would be facing off against a powerful Uchiha. After intense training Pendo had nearly mastered his kekei genkai abilities, and had even made his own jutsus. The match started off with his opponent winning but Pendo came back easily and defeated his opponent, winning the Chuunin Exams and becoming a Chuunin.
He ran home to tell his father about what had happened and his father was so proud of him. Roxas loved being a Chuunin, now instead of the boring old D rank missions he was now going on C and B rank missions. There was a lot more action and adventure and he loved practicing and training with his dad. They would even spar from time to time, his father defeating him most of the times but Pendo winning occasionally. Pendo couldn't believe his life. It was utterly perfect in itself. He was a success as a ninja so far and hoped that his success continued. His dream remained the same, he wanted to become Hokage and be the greatest ninja who ever lived and maybe even make Konoha more powerful. It was possible but doubtful. He still dreamed such dreams of these concepts though even though no one believed any of it could ever happen except his father. His father always believed in him.
After a very difficult A rank mission that had been bestowed upon Pendo's agenda, Pendo was promoted to highly respected and wanted rank of Jounin. All of the Jounin except for a couple were out of the village and those couple were busy so Pendo was the only one left. He was the strongest Chuunin and was sent with two other Chuunin on the mission. It was a mission to retrieve information from Sunagakure and it went by smoothly and after bringing the information back to their village Pendo was promoted to Jounin and not soon after that, he aquired his first team of Genin. He was now twenty-four and extremely skilled in Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu. His father, not soon after, died by the hand of a missing ninja while out for a walk through the forest. Pendo had offered to escort him but his father insisted that he went out alone, but he never returned.
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The room was near silent, the only sound being the pitter patter of rain outside. Everything seemed motionless at first, not even a bug crept through the small box-like room, until the slightest of movement showed at least a single sign of life. The young jounin known only as Pendo awoke by his own hand, as he always did. He tended to wake himself up at the perfect time, because as he looked at his soundless clock he realized what time it was. Yes, time for the beginning of a very dreary day, as well as a funeral. He pulled his legs over the side of the bed and sat up to prop his head on his arms. As his hands met his face, he relaxed his neck and thought about life, death, and how the two met in battle so many times in the ninja world. Death would often fight off life and claim it's victim, but sometimes when life cared about a certain individual, it would fight even harder to save it from death, but even so - death had it's own feelings as well about who it wished to claim.
It was a fairly good analogy, Pendo thought it was anyway. It fit well, and he knew that the day that Ayumu had died, there must've been a tremendous clash between the two forces of life and death. Both wanting to save or claim a common victim. Pendo was sure that death was reluctant to take Ayumu's opponent, but even something as dark and sinister as death lived by a set of rules that it must follow. The rain began to grow much louder as the sound thickened into a thumping on his roof. He would be required to attend the funeral, not that he would've attended it anyway, but he had inquired the idea of everyone being punctual and he would not be the one to displace his own ideas. He wasn't tired though, he never was despite the fact that he attained only four hours of sleep at a time. He did this to save time and to be ready if anything new comes up.
He retained his hands to their placements within his pockets before moving to his closet. He pulled the two panels of wood aside to reveal an encampment of clothes of his own choosing. Different kinds were there: suits, heavy training gear, light training gear, armor, robes, all kinds of clothing. He slowly pulled out a black suit hung on a single hanger, and glanced over it before nodding to himself. It was a very nice and formal attire that would slightly fit in, being black, but also stand out from the usual visual of gray. Pendo closed his closet once more before laying the silk suit on his bed. He then proceeded to remove his current clothes that were of casual sleeping attire, before slipping on his pants, shirt, and then suit jacket. When he was completely set he moved to the kitchen to get a bowl of cereal to eat, careful not to spill a single drop on his new silk suit.
After finishing his breakfast he placed the bowl and spoon in the sink, noting to wash the dishes when he returned from this important event. He sighed, looking out his window into the wet darkness beyond the paned glass window. His eye wandered back to his hand which had began to shake, clenching to the counter as if for dear life. Another important life lost in Konoha...Someone who had killed one to save a thousand. Pendo felt a large pang of guilt that he hadn't been there to help, he could've done something, something to have stopped the tragedy that sat in the corner of everyone's mind, that was even unnoticed in the minds of some. How could he just sit here in his nice suit, with his nice cereal, and yet not feel the pain that the young ANBU leader had felt?
Pendo's mind whirled as it processed it all, he had always thought that Konoha wasn't at war when they were, at war with missing ninja...with Akatsuki. Both were a grand and monstrous threat to the currently sorrowful village. Remorse and sadness lingered around him, as if it were the very oxygen he was breathing in. Every second, he realized, was just as important as the one before it. Pendo once again let out a sigh, as he released his now whitening grip on the counter. He turned to face the western wall of the kitchen before walking out the side door that led into the alley way. It was a good exit because it led out into a clear path, where there were no villagers or anyone else in the way. The rain felt gently down, taking the risk of getting close to the master of water, but seemed to bounce off of thin air as it came within a centimeter of him. He was repelling the water from his suit so that it would not get soaked.
He walked down the cement-paved area with a perfect execution of steps that showed his skill and swiftness with each strident step. Any on-lookers would never even think about coming too close at first glance, but he also had a hint of humbleness to his look, his face was only slightly stern but also kind and comforting. Pendo enjoyed the rain though, and if he weren't wearing such an ancient family heirloom he would've let it fall freely upon his skin, and even drench his clothes. Soon, within only seconds, the large-scale funeral came into view. Although only one person had died, nearly the entire village had taken time from their daily tasks to accompany each other in this dark hour. The young jounin silently took a seat in the front row to listen to the wise words of the Hokage.
"Fellow citizens and shinobi of Konoha. We are gathered here today, to celebrate, honor and remember one of our greatest young hero’s ever to come from not only our village, but our country. Over time, many noble sacrifices have been made to keep our village safe from dangerous enemies and devastating forces. Just over a week ago, Ayumu Peinto, one of Konoha’s young and most skilled ANBU members, died at age seventeen. Ayumu was one of the unique young fighters I had ever met, and surely managed to progress quickly, making co-leader of the black op’s squad by the age of sixteen. Reaching what some of you would call the top, elite of the elite." Orito spoke confidently, and his sorrow could be clearly felt by many in the audience of the funeral. Pendo himself felt the coldness that lingered in the air, the coldness of death.
The Hokage was only silent for a brief moment before once again speaking. "This hero, died, to ensure we could all continue to live peacefully and with help from his partner, he managed to kill the one of the most dangerous figures ever too oppose Konoha. Unfortunately, this man, managed to get the best of Ayumu and eventually defeat him, bringing him to an early death. But his sacrifice was one that will never be forgotten and therefore I hope you all can join me in a one minute’s silence, not only to honor Ayumu, but all who have had made the ultimate sacrifice to protect us and make sure we can live in peace" those were the final words spoken before a long silence shrouded the area. Everyone, including Pendo, dipped their heads in silence. His eyes were closed for the seemingly-eternal moment before they once again peeled open at the sound of a new voice.
A few tears escaped Pendo's eyes, streaming gently down his cheeks as Ayumu's partner began yet another speech. "Ayumu Peinto was my co-ANBU leader, a fellow konoha shinobi but furthermore, my best friend. I stuck by him until his ast moments, fighting the former Akatsuki Leader and Ayumu destroying him; however to a cost. Ayumu also fell in the battle and i would give anything to trade places of our fates. I cannot describe what I saw, nor what I felt as I watched him fall prey to the unavoidable fate. As you know I am the leader of the ANBU and I am not the leader because of public speaking. So I apologise for being so short with my speech, but he was truly the closest thing I had to my real brother, He truly was the closest thing I had. And all I can say is that I know he is at peace and i know that he is looking down, on all of us. So as Ayumu said in his final moments; Long...Live...Konoha." Pendo listened intently, his mind and thoughts tending to every word as if he were on a remote island, and the words were his only sources of food.
He continued to sit in silence as the speeches ended. Nothing else mattered to the Konoha shinobi at the moment. He was only focused on the hopes that the young ANBU leader had made safe-passage to a happy eternity in the spirit world. Even after everyone had left, and Pendo was left alone in the dim area, he sat there in silence. Ignoring everything else that went on, but simply focusing on one thing. That one hope alone combined with the hundreds of others that sat in the hearts of the villagers of Konoha would swade destiny into allowing the ninja safe-passage, and hopefully it worked like that. With one last glance at the black coffin, Pendo slowly left the area as the coffin would now be buried since the funeral was officially over. Although there was a death in Konoha, the great village would continue to live as mighty and strong as it always had for decades prior to today...
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| | Wait, Raidon's your clan? OR do you have permission to use it? |
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| | It ish my clan. :3 |
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| | Subject: Re: Raidon, Roxas [Konohagakure Jounin] (Completed) Mon 15 Feb 2010, 4:06 pm | |
| More Combat Skill? Why? How? I expect much more detail about this, and a logical explanation for what makes you special in combat and why.
Remove every Canon reference from your jutsu, be less lazy about your copy paste. Its insulting to look at an application where you can't even take the time to remove names from things when you could've. Especially if you want to be a Jounin, it downright unacceptable.
Chakra Replacement: No, you could use this to dodge any attack you pleased, denied. I don't care how many uses you get per day, you have Shushin and Kawarmi, use those, you don't need additional aid in dodging attacks.
Pattern Links + Mesh Cage: No. Those would be more fitting to a KKG based around using wires, remove them.
Crow Clone: Unless you have a crow summoning, I want this removed as well.
Manipulate Advancing Blades: Suna only, and also it requires a puppetry string as Chiyo has demonstrated.
Lightning Bolt Fang + Lightning Bolt Feast + Lightning Dragon Tornado: They only worked because of Raiga's swords, so obviously you can't use these techniques, remove them or fix them so they don't rely on swords.
Lightning Armor: OP, remove it.
Acidic Transformation: Denied, you would have to have an Acid based KKG to do this.
Ocean Ground Encampment: Easily S Rank as you describe it, and Jounin are A Rank, so either fix the description to be less OP or remove this technique completely from your application.
Chakra Absorption: Denied. You should know very well why, the user of these techniques had to have their bodies modified, you have no such modification, so don't add such jutsu to your application.
Creation Rebirth: In the RP universe, this jutsu is OP, so remove it.
Diamond Allow Wire: No, just no. You can't even have a diamond alloy, an alloy is made of metals, diamond is a crystal. Remove.
Put your history in arcs.
That RP Sample is a bold faced lie. You don't post anywhere near 1k a post. Your latest, longest, post on US was 600 words and you've dipped down into 200 words on some posts, while your sample is 1.5k in words. If you doubled your larger posts you wouldn't get that amount.
I had to inform you that some of your jutsu were banned by the site, you didn't take the time to do anything but copy-paste jutsu from other sites, and then you ignore the announcement about RP Samples. This is just plain lazy and incredibly disrespectful. |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
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| | Subject: Re: Raidon, Roxas [Konohagakure Jounin] (Completed) Mon 15 Feb 2010, 4:47 pm | |
| You have way too many weapons. You've got
4lbs oz Kunai
3lbs Shuriken
1lbs of Senbon
and about 20lbs of wire (Diamon coated metal, though also impossible tomake would be incredibly heavy.)
This doesn't even take into account the shear amount of space all of these would take up |
| | | | Hugh
Age : 37
Posts : 1136
| | Subject: Re: Raidon, Roxas [Konohagakure Jounin] (Completed) Mon 22 Mar 2010, 1:31 am | |
| | Archived due to no progress on app in a month |
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