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Nara, Shazamaru

THE INFO.

Name: Nara, Shazamaru [Japanese Format]
Nickname: Shaz
Age: Fifteen
Gender: Male
Appearance: Standing at 5'10, Shazamaru is just the right height for his age. Also he is the perfect proportion of weight, so he is not obese in anyway. Like all Nara he has a black hair, but he does not put it in a ponytail so it sticks up, this way he is not one with the crowd when hanging around with other clan members. Having green eyes, this makes him also stand out from many as it is rarely seen nowadays. Shazamaru looks very thin and scrawny when wearing his clothes, but he is quite muscular and often surprises the others.

Wearing a musky green long sleeved top which the sleeves are usually rolled up to the elbows, he has the Nara clan symbol stitched the right arm at the top. This is to show that he is proud to be part of the Nara clan. Going down he wears beige three quarters with many compartments so he cant fit things that he needs in them, also he wears the basic ninja pouches. Shazamaru has his headband around his neck, which fits perfectly. Also he wears the basic ninja sandals but his are blue, where others differ from time to time.
Personality: Shazamaru is the basic guy. He likes laugh with friends and generally have a good time with others. Many people think that he is a nice, kind guy as he always helps people when they are in need. This gives him a good reputation around Konoha, which many people say hi to him which he replies with a smile. Shongi being a hobby of his, he goes round to a special place where they always play it, this gives him a piece in mind but also helps him relax.

On the battlefield his whole mind changes, he does not have laughs and pretty much takes everything serious. This is so he does not miss anything by laughing at a joke, his team mates may call him up tight but it has been pretty much working for him since. Being a Nara his IQ is quite high, so he analyzes everything in his area, this helps him make better strategies when on the battlefield. Shazamaru also likes to use his shadows alot.
Clan: Nara
Nindo: 'May the darkness of the shadow make your judgement.'

THE NINJA.

Origin:Konohgakure
Affiliation:Konogakure
Rank:Genin
Specialties:Main: Ninjutsu | Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities:Main: Fuuton [Wind] | Sub: Suiton [Water]
Combat Style: Knowing that he has to be good in many ways. Shazamaru has adapted to go close also. He does not stick to one plan as there are different people out there using different plans, he adapts to what he has got.
Special Characteristics:
Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
- Was brought into the world by his mother and father. They were very proud to have their first child and named him Shazamaru after his granddad who passed away while fighting for Konoha.
- Learnt his first nara jutsu, while under intense training with his dad. This made his father very proud of him and that was the day that he got a shirt with the nara clan symbol sewed onto it.
- Enrolled into the academy. This also made his parents proud, as he was following what his granddad did. Shazamaru never got too see his granddad so this was the closest he would get to knowing him.
- Learnt all the basic academy jutsu, very fast and became very well known in the academy as a smart person. Also his class mates began to look up at him.
- Passed the Genin test with his flying colours, this made most people proud of him. Even the teachers congratulated his as he was doing very good through the time he was at the academy.
- Got his headband, which he then wrapped around his neck as it was the most comfortable place which it could be in.
- His first mission as a genin was too collect a scroll from a nearby shrine outside of the village. It was not meant to be hard but it changed. Shazamaru collected the scroll but it was not as easy as it was said to be.
He bumped into another ninja who wished to get it for his village, so Shazamaru had to get rid of him, which was not what he wanted.
- Upon killing his first person, Shazamaru did the mission but did not tell of the killing that happened. If the Hokage knew then something would surely happen.
- Shazamaru then treated his parents to something nice with the yen he got from the mission. It was nothing big but it helped him understand what it was like to be on his own.
Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.

Basic Jutsu:

Clan Jutsu:

Fuuton Jutsu:

Suiton:

Taijutsu:

Weapon:


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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Shazamaru [Konoha Genin] Nara, Shazamaru [Konoha Genin] EmptyThu 09 Jun 2011, 10:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Shazamaru [Konoha Genin] Nara, Shazamaru [Konoha Genin] EmptyThu 09 Jun 2011, 11:14 am

-Kenjutsu isn't a sole specialty. It would be edited to weaponry and then you get two choices within weaponry so it would look like this e.g. Weaponry (Main: Kenjutsu Sub: Exotic).

- Shadow Manipulation isn't an element please remove.

- Your history is way too short. Even though you are allowed to bullet point your history it should be more of a detailed timeline. Should a 2-3 sentences for each bullet-point. Its really not too hard. ^^
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Alrighy doneo
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History still not good enough. I suggest looking at someone who has completed their history to get a better idea. You are nearly there it just needs a few more memorable points.
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Added a few more points
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2/2 Approved


Still think you shouldn't had just let the Uchiha just die so easily. >.>
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Due to inactivity.
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