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Mordio, Rita [Konoha Genin] Rita

MORDIO, RITA.

THE INFO.

Name:Mordio, Rita
Nickname:
Age:15
Gender:Female
Appearance:Rita stands at about 4ft 5 and is slim built, she has short cropped red hair and blue eyes.

Her dress sense is somewhat unusual, she can be seen wearing a red and black outfit with long black sleeves, around her right arm is tied a ribbon, Rita wears odd boots one is long and stripy the other is short and black, on her person she has several items, on her head are a pair of goggles, she also carries a pair of glasses, a small pocket book,writing instruments and a small change purse, around her waist is a thick striped bit of cloth acting as a belt or sash.
Personality:Rita is a scholar and inventor so is interesting in anything unusual and new to her, she loves to dig around in old books, look at old buildings and tinker with anything she can. Despite her cold-hearted attitude, Rita can make friends with almost anyone if she tries although most of the time she does so because the person really interests her, she is very protective of anyone she deems a friend and will die for them. Because she devotes so much time to research, Rita makes absolutely no effort into cooking. As such, the meals she prepares tend to be plain, but not unpleasant. Rita is also one of if not the smartest person to come out of the Konohagakure Shinobi academy in years or so she believes
Clan:None
Nindō:"If it ain't broke, then I haven't touched it yet"
"Hypothosize, Plan, Test, Put into practice"

THE NINJA.

Origin:Konoha
Affiliation:Konoha
Rank:Genin
Specialties: Main:Ninjutsu Secondary:Fuuinjutsu
Elemental Affinities:Main:Katon Secondary:Suiton
Combat Style:Rita likes to stand back and attack from range instead of close up and personal relying on allies to deal close up melee damage although when push comes to shove rita does have an array of weapons to pick from.
Special Characteristics:

High IQ
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

*Rita was born in the main part of Konoha at home where her mother and father decided they wanted to have their first child. The birth was straight forward with no complications and Akki was born at 4:30 am weighing 6 stone 7 ounces.

*Rita's mother was a medical ninja and her father a teacher at the academy, both worked hard to put a roof over Rita's head and food in her mouth.

*From a young age at around 6 months it was obvious Rita was bright she was talking and walking quicker than most children at that age and reading from a very young age only 1 year old.

*At the age of 3 Rita would route around in her fathers book collection reading what ever she could and asking many questions she was very very inquisative or everything that went on around her.

*At the age of five Rita was talking everything she could get her hands on apart to find out how it worked and what made it take, one year after that she was starting to think up crazy ideas of things she could make herself, at this time she also joined the Ninja academy.

*While at the academy Rita soaked up anything she was taught whether it was Ninjutsu,Taijutsu or Genjutsu, learning quickly and easily as if second nature, due to her swotting she was shunned a little by alot of the other student but this didn't stop her from carrying on.

*During her time at the Academy Rita made her first invention nothing significant a small frog that could have chakra run through it to work the mechanism so it could catch flies she was highly proud of her invention and named it Kaeru.

*Passing the Genin exams was an easy thing for Rita passing first time with no problems at all. After graduating she befriended an old man, after helping him out with a few things troubling him, in return he taught Rita the basics of Fuuinjutsu and one seal, she was greatful to him and promised him that she could become great.

*Rita now plans on becoming a great scholar and inventing something to make life easier for everyone in the world but to do so she would have to spend alot of time with her nose in a book and planing things out and getting down to some serious hard work and on a side not she plans on making a few friends along the way

Roleplay Sample: Rita sat at a table with her note book open she was scribbling away, next to her note book sat her fly catching frog, she reached out with her hand and put a little chakra into it. The frong jumped to life flipping into the air shooting out a sticky mechanical tongue and catching a fly that was buzzing around Rita's head.

"Ok so if it works like that then if I do this that should work, arghhh not that won't work at all" Rita mumbled to herself, she slid back out of her chair and started to pace the floor, talking to herself, she then walked over to the book case and pulled a book out, flipped it open and started to scan.

"Nope that won't work either, hmmm maybe if no that won't work either" Rita was so involved with her thinking she hadn't even noticed her father had been in and placed a meal on the table for her, Rita returned to her note book and started scribbling again. Rita was like this all the time always contemplating something always scheming and planning some grand plan.

Rita bounced up from her chair and charged out the door, shouting to her parents that there was something she had to check. Rita darted down the street, she stopped in the middle of the town and started at the Mountain with the Kages faces on them, it was then that something clicked in Rita's head

"Aha got it, wings,wings if i add wings the frog can get around with more than just a single fly per jump" she grinned to herself and ran home to make changes to her fly catching frog.

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.

Jutsu

Academy
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Katon Jutsu
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Suiton Jutsu


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Fuujnjutsu

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Weaponry

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Last edited by Rita on Wed 22 Jun 2011, 10:48 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Mordio, Rita [Konoha Genin] Mordio, Rita [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 22 Jun 2011, 9:29 pm

A couple of your spoiler coding is messed up.

Also, the spaces between the jutsu template are too far, you'll need to close them up a bit.

You need to add a few more words to your history points (Particularly the one liners)
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PostSubject: Re: Mordio, Rita [Konoha Genin] Mordio, Rita [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 22 Jun 2011, 10:49 pm

Ok added a few more words, sorted out the spoilers, I missed some code and I've fixed the spacing, didnt even notice id done that hehe.
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