Shimotsuki, Zeda [Konoha Genin]

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Shimotsuki, Zeda.

THE INFO.

Name: Zeda Shimotsuki
Nickname:N/A
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance:

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Personality:

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Clan: Shimotsuki Clan ( wolf )
Nindō: To become the best ninja he can be

THE NINJA.

Origin:Leaf
Affiliation:Leaf
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities:Fire, Earth
Combat Style: Straight up: Zeda will fight his opponent face to face instead of hiding form them. But his one who will fight till he can not fight no more. Never trying to go to tick's to when a fight jusyt using what he got to take the fight home with him.
Special Characteristics:
Infinite Riches

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THE BACKGROUND.

History:At a young age Zeda showed that he was a well ninja better than most kid's is age. So he got special traning to master his keke geinki. So that he could become a great ninja. Like his father.

Academy:
he was then thrown into the wood's many time’s to see if he could realy survive on his own. So while in the wood's Zeda was attacked by pack of wolves to get his food. So Zeda had to use every thing to fight the wolve’s. And he had dune it whith just a kuni. All he had to do was make a camp and live threw the rest of the night. So e made a camp in a tree where he would be safe from most animal’s. But he still had to finnd te exit of the forest in the morning. When Zeda woke up he had only one thing left to do. He had to find his parint’s and get out alive. So as Zeda walked threw the forest,hoping not to find any thing that would try stoping him from finishing the test. And he got there with no problam . And he was now a genin so now his father would train him to be a great ninja.

Genin:
Zeda got onto a genin team. He didnt really contribute very much when they were on missions, because he didnt really wanted to become genin, but his father kept hoping that he one day would bring him fame and wealth. Zeda had no attention to do so, and rarely used his KKG. Despite the fact that Zeda didnt do much for the team, they all cared about him, because you simply couldnt hate Zeda for is great personality. You could be annoyed at his lazyness from time to time, but he was allways calm and collected, when the others were panicking, and sometimes, even though it was rarely, made out a point, that led to a strategy that would overturn the enemy. At this point noone considered Zeda as the new shooting star, that would become a great ninja of the village. He was often seen unnoticable in the background playing a tune on his saxophone. But that is not all Zeda was given lot's of money from all the scheme's his father had using his KKG. Making Zeda loaded
Roleplay Sample:http://narutodivinity.darkbb.com/t272-entering-the-village ( i am Oblivion )

THE ARSENAL.

Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.

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Jutsu

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.
Chakra Cost: 9

Name: Gansetsukon - Rock Spear
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take a small chunk of rock and turn it into the shape of a staff. The user can then use it as a weapon or throw it with pinpoint accuracy at their opponent.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will spin his or her opponent away. This technique can certainly cause a head ache.
Chakra Cost: 8

Name: Dynamic • Action (Dainamikku • Akushon)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user flips towards the opponent and attacks with a series of punches and kicks.
Chakra Cost: 8

Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo".
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Konoha Raiken - Leaf Thunder Fist
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user will spin to gain momentum and then lay a powerful strike into his or her opponent via punch.
Chakra Cost: 6

Name: Konoha Shoufuu - Leaf Rising Wind
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This jump uses the entire body as a spring by amassing power in the legs before kicking upwards. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user first uses the "Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance" to manuever his/hrt opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his/her opponent, the user will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he/she is unable to make a clean strike, he/she will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his/her target's attention and defense to one area. The user can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, the user will deftly rotate his/her body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest.
Chakra Cost: 7

Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent.
Chakra Cost:
Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4)
Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9)

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals and objects to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Signing this contract also allows the animal to reverse summon the human ninja to their location.
Chakra Cost: 5

KKg abilities: Zeda's animal is a Wolf

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I will need you to add at least one paragraph for the combat style. You know, how he fights and stuff. I will also need you to explain how you got the Infinite Riches SC in your History.

You also need a last name.

An RP Sample is also needed.

You also need a picture, no exceptions. Just try to find something that will fit your looks.

You also cannot have the Nodachi, or the Kakkou since you dont have the weaponry specialty.

After that, I don't really see anything wrong and should be approved.

Also I noticed you don't have the basic academy jutsu, I suggest you add them, since they don't count towards your limit of jutsu.

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Put last name in and is the rp sample really needed i am just going for Gennin. There is no picture that i can find so can i just do with out i. And i took the weapon's of.

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Please address all his points Elen, you require a picture and a roleplaying sample just like everybody else does. Thats why at the top of your page there is something that says INSERT CHARACTER IMAGE!

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But i can not find a picture that fit's the description of my character
role play sample added

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Then find a picture and alter your description. Your description if vague as, all you state is spikey hair and blue hairs, easy to find a picture for that if you searched in the right places. I still don't see a roleplay sample by the way.

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Rp sample is the link and added picture

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Since your specialties are Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, please remove all Genjutsu from your application.

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- Your history is still pretty messy and needs to be tidied up.

- Link the Shimotsuki Clan in your clan section please.

- Still need to actually outline the specific animal species of the Shimotsuki Clan that you are.

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Fixed

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Age : 36 Posts : 1004

After looking over this app I'll give it the BIG FAT thumbs ^

2/2

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Archived.