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.Raven
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| Subject: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Tue 14 Jun 2011, 10:55 am | |
| Hyuuga, Lan Fan.THE INFO. Name: Hyuuga, Lan Fan Nickname: Raven Age: 15 Gender: Female Appearance:
- Face:
- Lan Fan v1:
- Lan Fan v2:
Lan Fan is a really tomboyish looking girl who still maintains her feminine nature, standing about five feet three inches with short cropped black hair and a thin frame. She is pretty muscular for her age, but not so much so that it would cause health problems. Her eyes are the traditional, and only color of the Hyuuga eye, and that's an odd pale color. Words to describe her would be lithe and flexible, with the ability for easy movement. Her garb consists of black pants, black boots, and a black hooded jacket with armor over the chest, back, and shoulders. Lan Fan’s left arm was destroyed, and to replace it she was outfitted with a fully maneuverable and detachable metal arm known as an Auto Mail, within her clothing there are many spots to hide weapons for easy access. The metal arm is hidden within the sleeves of her clothing at most times, wearing gloves on her hands so that the metal fingers are not noticed, she does not do this because she is afraid of what people will think, but for tactical purposes.
Personality:
Lan Fan is a modest and proud woman who takes immense pleasure in performing martial arts. She has an intense love for the practitioners of any form of hand to hand combat, and because of this she has a mutual respect for many fighters within the world, making her a very open and receptive person to foreigners. To many she a kind and well known woman who takes pride in her work, and because of her pride she feels that she should serve a better purpose, to strive and better the world despite the odds placed against her. Lan Fan is a powerful woman and also has immense pride in her name and heritage.
She is cool in the head, decisive and does not take a loss as a defeat, merely a learning experience. She is forever loyal to those she makes as friends, and yet understands that because of her role as a ninja she may often find herself in unpleasant situations. She is typically good with people, especially her elders and all around enjoys the company of those who practice the martial arts.
Lan Fan is generally passive to those who she does not know, though should they cause trouble she will do all in her power to smite them, simply because she frowns upon disrespect to others. She has a high resolve, and is not easily frightened nor persuaded from her ideals or goals. She has a strong sense of justice and will try her damnedest to accomplish her ideologies; she views herself as a type of hero figure and aspires to save the world with her special brand of justice.
Clan: Hyuuga
Nindō: "Continue to step forward, even in the face of adversity."
THE NINJA. Origin: Konohagakure Affiliation: Konoha Rank: C - Genin Specialties: Ranged Weaponry, Sword Weaponry, Taijutsu Elemental Affinities: Fuuton;Katon Combat Style: Lan Fan prefers to toy around from afar, and then bring it home with close range combat. Using her weaponry to merely test the abilities of her opponent, or waste their energy. Special Characteristics:
Name: Improved Strength Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of strength accessible to those who have undergone intensive training in increasing their raw power. The possessor of this talent has an increased strength of 20% which makes them slightly stronger. They can lift larger objects such as large rocks and toss them considerable distances. They can also now naturally deliver more powerful physical blows that can cause agonizing damage to targets.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
The Fall:
A group of women would be seen holding the hands of a cute young girl. The girl was dazed and confused, but was otherwise happy that she was getting so much attention. The women were members of her mother's house, all Hyuuga members who knew their ninja arts well. However, unknown to her at the time she was being taken away from her family, including her brother Yin, whom she had formed a close bond with the young one year old infant. The sense of trouble was hidden from her, as hundreds of people fled the village of Konohogakure from something that was unseen to her. She would be picked up and placed into a carriage with her other clan members, and hauled away to a safer location. This is when she began to cry, realizing that she was leaving without her mother, father, and brother. Shortly after she cried herself to sleep in the arms of another woman and woke upon in an unknown room in an unknown land.
Adjusting:
The young girl known as Lan Fan was now eight years old, having spent three years without a single clue as to where her family was, she simply learned to accept their disappearance as a part of her life. Though, there were still nights that she would lay awake, looking at the stars, wondering where they were or if they were okay. She would ask her family members, but they would reply with answers that did not fulfill her answers, for they honestly had no clue either. She had come to find out that she was in the village of Kumogakure, and when she turned seven she decided that she wanted to advance herself. It was then, that she went to the Academy in Kumogakure and remained until she was eleven, learning Hyuuga martial arts all the while, and learning to her proficiency with weaponry, and began to teach herself the Dragon's Pulse.
Rising:
At the age of thirteen now, she would have developed a heightened prowess for marital arts and the use of weaponry. Her skills with the Byakugan were phenomenal for a child of her age. This is when Lan Fan became very interested in her history and heritage, coupled with that and her clan her pride for both soared. As a genin she performed very well for the village, until one day on a mission she lost her left arm. It was a horrible loss for her, and a blow to her moral, but for her country she knew that she could not allow that to defeat her. This is when she heard of the technology known as AutoMail, which would allow her to continue on her path as a ninja. At the age of thirteen she was given the new arm, having to endure six months of hard rehabilitation. When she became fourteen she became more focused, and serious, knowing that her chances to save the world were limited, and so it was that at the age of fifteen she was fully fledged in her art. Now, during this age she returned back to Konoha, a ninja bred in a different culture.
Rp Sample:
- Spoiler:
A room filled with several different ornaments, all hung at various angles and suspended from different elevations. These circular golden discs were easily breakable with the right amount of force, and were often used for the type of training he was about to commence. Standing in the center of the room he would take in a deep breath and mentally visualize their locations, his eyes closed. Each one appeared as a shiny white blip on the black mental imaging screen. He knew with precise accuracy where each target was, despite not having seen them being placed. His aunt and uncle had placed them many times before in this area, all in different locations, every time. His body would tense up and then quickly release, using a Sumashuu jutsu that allowed him a minor form of levitation, he would quickly hit the first golden plate, causing it to crack. Then deactivating the jutsu at the point of impact his momentum would cause him to continue forward towards the thick wooden pillar, his feet would press up against it and propel him to the next location, where his fist would make contact, causing lines of stress fractures to appear on the second golden plate.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsus:
Academy Jutsu:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:
This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:
This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:
This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:
This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description:
By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description:
This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:
This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Clan Tech
Name: Byakugan (Activation) Rank: E-S Type: Bloodline - Doujutsu Range: Description Clan: Hyuuga Description:
Byakugan "White Eye" is a dōjutsu kekkei genkai of the Hyūga clan. This technique is the activation of the ability from the eyes previous dormant state. When activated the users lavender eyes become more focused, their pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge. Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one small blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra. The second ability is being able to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The user is able to see into vasts distances in which a regular eye cannot behold. They are capable of seeing insects behind trees with distinct perception and look behind wall with the Byakugan's ability. The third and one of the greatest uses of the Byakugan is the ability to see chakra, chakra flow as well as the chakra circulation system inside the body with great detail. It is from this particular ability that they are able to employ their ultimate attack style: Gentle Fist. It was also noted that the Byakugan can also discern a transformation and a real person using the eye's ability to see chakra, as well as barriers. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from member to member. [C-Ranked] users are able to see 100m in radius. [B-Ranked] uses are able to see 500m in radius. [A-Ranked] users are able to extend 800m in radius. And finally [S-Ranked] users are able to extend 2km in radius. Chakra Cost:
Name: Hiratehi-ru Dageki | Palm Heel Strike Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Description:
Hiratehi-ru Dageki is a very base technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage which will temporarily paralysis an opponent for one of their posts. The opponent loses 10CP if struck. Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Chakura Hari no Jutsu | Chakra Needle Technique Rank: D Type: Taijutsu - Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Description:
Chakura Hari no Jutsu is a common technique performed by the members of he Hyuuga Clan. After focusing chakra outside the body, the chakra is formed into needles and propelled at the user's target. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used to hit very small targets, such as bees etc. This attack can also be used to attack a persons chakra network by performing accurate shots into their chakra system, and even destroy substances made of chakra. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Hakke Kūshō | Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Description:
Hakke Kūshō is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. This technique is similar in practice to Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin, but has a specific target rather than a general area. To perform it, the user precisely pinpoints the enemy's vital points with the Byakugan and releases a high-speed palm thrust. A "vacuum shell" compressed using the Gentle Fist is formed to violently push the opponent away. This technique can destroy 15CP of an enemy if hit. Chakra Cost: 7CP
Name: Hakkeshō Kaiten | Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Description:
Hakkeshō Kaiten is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack. If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack. Chakra Cost: 6CP
Name: Hakke Taikyaku Hirate | Eight Trigrams Retreating Palm Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Description:
Hakke Taikyaku Hirate is a technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. The user focuses chakra out thei tenketsu points into the area around themselves. They will then extend their palm outward and withdraw it back in, sucking in the chakra back into their tenketsu. Along with the chakra, anything in the direction of their palm will be unsuspectingly 'pushed' towards the user as well. Chakra Cost: 6CP
Name: Shugohakke Rokujūyon Shō | Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Hyuuga Description:
Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms is a special technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. This jutsu allows the user to emit a constant stream of chakra from their palms, creating extremely sharp chakra blades. With their natural flexibility, they can reach any point around themselves, allowing them to hit any target within their field of vision. While using this jutsu, the user moves extremely fast (their movements become a blur), allowing them to hit hundreds of targets with extreme precision, much like the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms. It is so precise that it can cut smaller targets (like bees) in half. The technique is powerful enough to knock back a a boulder. With the addition of the users flexibility, the technique creates an "absolute defense" effect similar to that of the Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin, though the cutting nature of the chakra prevents any outside force from restricting it. In this way, the technique can be used as both an offensive and defensive maneuver. Chakra Cost: 9CP
Name: Hakke Sanjūni Shō | Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Hyuuga Description:
Eight Trigrams Thrity-Two Palms is a technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 32 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, and finally 32. This damage forcibly closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. Those who fall victim of this technique lose 10CP which limits their ability to perform jutsu. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Hakke Rokujūyon Shō | Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Description: Hakke Rokujūyon Shō is a technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 64 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, and finally 64. This damage forcibly closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. Those who fall victim of this technique lose 20CP which limits their ability to perform jutsu. Chakra Cost: 7CP
Custom Tech:
Name: Ikken Atemi - Glancing Strike Rank: C-S Type: Taijutsu Element: Futon Range: C-4in B- 5in A- 7in S-9in Away from Body Clan: None Description:
The user of this jutsu places wind chakra throughout their body, when they make a punch or kick, or any movement against another it hits them with a force that varies upon the rank of the jutsu. It creates an invisible wind chakra cocoon around a body part and allows for the user to hit people without actually having to hit a person. This allows for them to throw false feint punches or kicks, and actually allows them to hurt. The amount of damage varies per rank of the jutsu used. At C rank, in can cause minor bruises, and muscle stiffness. At B ranked it can do the previous, and it can cause major bruises, and can break the skin. At A rank it does the previous, it can cut the skin, and has the ability to break bones. At S ranked this technique has the ability to punch through boulders as if it were a hot knife through butter. Chakra Cost: C Rank - 7pts B Rank - 13pts A Rank - 22pts S Rank - 37 Pts
Styles:
Name: Jūken | Gentle Fist Style Clan: Hyuuga Emphasis: The Jūken emphasizes light high speed attacks that inflicts internal damage and disrupt the body's Chakra Pathway System to ultimately inhibit and an opponent's use of chakra as well as causing severe internal damage. Requirements: Must have the Byakugan (Activated) Description:
The Gentle Fist (柔拳, Jūken) or Gentle Fist Style (柔拳法, Jūkenpō) is a form of hand-to-hand combat used by members of the Hyūga clan. It inflicts internal damage and disrupt the body's Chakra Pathway System so as to ultimately inhibit an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user surgically injects a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The infiltrating chakra can then be used to disrupt or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu.Targeting the Tenketsu can enhance the havoc and control a Jūken user can impose upon an opponent's chakra network. These special nodes, 361 in total, are key gate-keeping interceptions in the chakra circulatory network, thus forcibly opening or sealing them in whatever manner the Jūken-user sees fit is a powerful tactical option to have. Harming the chakra network in this way can directly damage internal organs due to their proximity to the chakra circulatory system. Even the slightest tap can cause severe internal damage, hence the name "gentle" fist.
Weapons:
Basic Kit:
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls. x3 Smoke Bombs
Custom Weaponry:
Name: AutoMail Arm Rank: C-S [Resistance to Attack Increases as Rank Increases, Chakra Conductive at B] Type: Melee/Ranged Quantity: 1 Description:
See Looks:
A steel alloy mechanized arm that is insulated with rubber to prevent the user from being shocked to death. It is more light weight then the average human arm, but retains a hardness that allows it to remain functional. This arm is connected to the nerves of the user, thus working as a normal functioning arm, meaning that full movement is there, and it can have chakra passed through it, though the user does not feel the pain inflicted upon the metal. The arm is able to rotate all the way behind the user at the shoulder, at the elbow it can rotate in a three hundred and sixty degree area, and the wrist can swivel in all directions. At the bottom of the elbow, there is a hidden blade, that when activated extends from the elbow to the full length of two feet. When the blade is not extended, there is a sharp point that hides the tip of the blade from view, this tip acts as another tool to stab people. On the knuckles there are spikes that are made of a hardened carbon alloy, close to the hardness of diamond, used to easily bludgeon those who are hit with it. Within the forearm there are three smoke bombs at are dispensed via the opening of a door within the palm. Within the fingers are coil and pulley systems that have invisible wire wrapped within and can be released via the tip of the finger (nail part, and bottom of nail part)
Name Two Foot Retractable Blade Rank: D-S [C][Multi rank because it has the ability to conduct chakra, but at this time Lan Fan Cannot do it] Type: Melee Range: 2 Feet Descriptions:
Retractable blade hidden within the pointed area of the elbow. (See Image 1 For Point)
Name Smoke Bomb Gate Rank: E Type: Door? Range: Hand Quantity: 1 Descriptions:
A simple door in the palm of the arm that allows for Smoke bombs to exit the forearm of the AutoMail, once hitting the ground, or squeezed the bombs will erupt.
Name Knuckle Duster Rank: E Type: Melee Range: Hand Quantity: 1 Descriptions:
See Image v1
Shitty studs that hurt like hell, otherwise not worth a damn in comparison to a D rank weapon.
Name Finger Wire Pulleys Rank: E Type: Ranged Quantity: 1 Descriptions:
See Image v1
Small pulleys that allow the wire that is in the hand to be released, and retracted.
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| | | .Raven
Age : 31 Posts : 92
| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Tue 14 Jun 2011, 12:49 pm | |
| - Completion Bump/ Edit |
| | | Big Sean
Age : 31 Posts : 208
| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Tue 14 Jun 2011, 6:18 pm | |
| I don't really think we're allowing custom Special Characteristics at the moment, I'll have another staff member confirm or retract that statement. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Wed 15 Jun 2011, 6:14 am | |
| - Your main spec weaponry is allowed two sub-types of weaponry. So it would be Main: ranged Sub: ?. Have a look at the systems for info.
- You are allowed a single SC to start with if you want it.
- Remove diamond brass knuckles
- We already have retractable wrist blades in our encyclopedia under equipement. Please use our description.
- Just add the smoke bomb and amount into your genin kit if you want it (and remove the other full templating).
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| | | .Raven
Age : 31 Posts : 92
| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Wed 15 Jun 2011, 10:41 am | |
| - Edited - Placed - Edited to "Studded Knuckles" - It is not a wrist blade, it is a retractable blade hiding behind the back part of the elbow, it makes sense if you look at the image V1 - Done
Note: All weapons below the Automail arm, are attached or applied to the arm. |
| | | Hollow Allegory
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Jun 2011, 4:03 am | |
| -Unless Todd has more to say about the now "Studded Knuckles", I don't see anything wrong with this. Though the spacing for your jutsu and whatnot could use some cleaning up...I'll leave it up to you to fix that though.
-And yes, I see that your blade is special for your arm and that it extends from the elbow. Very cool. Thanks for clarifying that.
I'm excited to see how you use this character in RP, and I look forward to evaluating your topics as you do them.
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| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Jun 2011, 7:28 am | |
| Immense hardness for E-ranked weapon essentially? Edit the description to a standard knuckle duster. |
| | | .Raven
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Jun 2011, 10:09 am | |
| edited
" Shitty studs that hurt like hell, otherwise not worth a damn in comparison to a D rank weapon." |
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Lan Fan [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Jun 2011, 11:53 am | |
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