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| Subject: Hyuuga, Kuruichi [Konoha Genin] Mon 20 Jun 2011, 12:58 pm | |
| Hyuuga, Kuruichi.Kuru-Ichi- meaning Dark one Name: Hyuuga, Kuruichi Nickname: Zero, people call him zero because its perfect. He never has anything to say. He never wants input really. He would want to be left alone. Those are all reasons people have gotten used to the name, but there is more to it. When Zero was younger his father told him he was a failure and that he would be nothing to him ever. He told him he was Zero. He wears this name to prove he will exceed expectations. Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: Most of Kuruichi's appearance corresponds with his personality. From years of pain his face is left emotionless. He is covered with tattoos each representing a lost, or lesson. His most important are the two that read: "Serenity" and the one that reads "Rage" His hair used to be Jet black like the rest of his clan but he deemed it unfit for himself dying his hair at the aged or only 10. His hair has been white ever since. Kuruichi's face is pale like the rest of his body where scars aren't. He has solid white eyes.( A gift from his clan ) With thick eyebrows and a long face.
Kuruichi usually walks around without a shirt showing of his pain. Not as an ego boost, but as a reminder. It reminds the people around him that he doesn't play around. He doesn't look like the most muscular person but his strength is well-known among his piers. His muscles aren't big but they're cut. His arms, legs and abdomen. His relaxing outfit consist of baggy jeans and nothing else.
When Kuruchi goes on missions he suits up. He changes from such basic stuff to a whole combat suit really. He takes off his jeans and puts on pants like the anbu blue ones only his are jet black. Also, he puts on a white shirt with breast-plate armor attached. Next is his equipment jacket which he uses to store his swords, kunai, tags, medicine, etc. He carries two swords on his back and a couple kunai on each side of his waist. Next he throws on his soft and comfortable combat slippers. Finally, he puts on his metal gauntlets and painted mask.
Personality: A realist most people would call him. He wont lie to someone to protect them, because that isn't how he was raised. He isn't just a man of one personality. His second personality is his sarcasm. It's just something he enjoys about correcting people in a sarcastic manner. He gets a sense of sensation. He isn't a douche bag type of sarcastic, however. Kuruichi is very educated he uses clever words to insult. His occasional joke is always complex and usually goes over peoples heads.
Kuruichi has had nothing like a pleasant life. He has experience much pain and it is apparent in his personality. He is seen as a young man with little tolerance for people who don't put in full effort. Also, he lacks passion and sympathy. Kuruichi can withstand both mental and physical pain better then most trained Jonin. Zero tends to give off a negative aura while standing next to him. But as you get to know him you'll see a change. You will see an ease in tension and a humorous side of Zero. If you get the chance to become one of his friends you will see he is just an ambitious young man and will do almost anything to strengthen himself. Zero doesn't have many friends, only one or two. He prefers it that way because he doesn't trust anyone. All his friends are close and his close friends get close by respect. Zero replaces respect with trust. He can't bear himself to trust anyone anymore and that might never change. That isn't part of his nindo but its something he follows closely. He believes following his nindo is one of the most important things life offers. Clan: Hyuuga Nindō: "Plan to die like you've done it before"
THE NINJA. Origin: Fire Country Affiliation:Konohagakure Rank: C-rank Genin Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: Katon, Fuuton Combat Style: Kuruichi likes to analyze his surroundings if possible. Then when finding the right route to take he engages swift and aggressive, but not reckless. If his initial plan doesn't work he will get real close where real damage can happen. He isn't very usefully at long range. He is a mid to close fighter. Special Characteristics:- Spoiler:
Chakra Capacity
Name: Increased Chakra Capacity Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
Name: Evasiveness Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: Must Specialize in Taijutsu or Medical. Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and dodging basic forms of physical attacks by reading an enemies movement.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
Thirteen years ago a boy was born into the Hyuuga clan's lower branch. His name was Kuruichi. He was destined for failure by very wise men and woman. He had a troublesome beginning years. His father didn't want him but there was no where else for him to go. His father didn't like him but he wasn't cruel enough to leave him on the streets. Yet...Since he was destined to be weak his father didn't train with him at a young age like most of the clan. Many people taught he was just a servant.
As he became aware of his surrounds he began to train. He was 7 the first time he started training. He started late but trained harder then anyone else. He had no family duties since no one cared for him. He would leave at 3am every morning and nobody would even notice. He stayed out untill 10pm got food and cloths from hunting. One time he left for a whole week surviving in the woods thats the first time someone noticed. It was his mom she saw him came back exhausted and cleaned him up and let him sleep. His mom was the only one who cared from the beginning, but his father threaten to kill her if she showed him sympathy. Later His mother Kioko talked to his father Ryu about putting Kuruichi into the academy.
Not to long after,his mother died of "natural causes". Knowing his mother was the only person who believed in him he left his so-called home. He entered the academy at the age of 10. He only had 3 years of basic training you would usually get in your family for 7 or 8 years, but his three years were more advanced. When Kuruichi who now had the nickname Zero(His father gave it to him when he joined the academy) trained he focused on balancing his rage and serenity. Also, he trained for 18 hours strait while others only trained for 3 or 4. He didn't know this nor did anyone else know that he was far above everyone else skill level.
Kuruichi quickly became the academy's best student and by a huge margin. He could have graduated the first year but no one could believe how good he was. After three pointless years Zero graduated atop his class. That was the day his father died. Some say it was Zero who did it. Most sensible people know Kuruichi wasn't strong enough and his father died of a heart attack.
As a genin Kuruichi is 15 and he spends most of his time doing petty missions and earning money to pay for his own living. He now lives alone in a single little house. He doesn't get out much and spends most of his free time training waiting to be assigned to a team.
Roleplay Sample:
Kuruichi was excited for once in his life! He was on his was to get a mission from the Hokage and he just had a feeling this was the real deal. Zero has been waiting for a mission other then " we need you to catch a cat" "Get my dry cleaning?" or "two little kids are fighting break it up". He knows its different this time. Getting to the Hokage's office in record time three minutes.(In usually takes 10). Huffing and Puffing the Hokage can see the eagerness in the young mans eyes.
"Kuruichi we have lost a Jonin who was sent on a mission 4 days ago. He should have been back in a day's time. He isn't one to be late. Now what I need you to do is see if you can find him and carry him back." After listening for a few more minutes getting details he was off for his mission. Kuruichi approached the gate beaming. His beam soon faded noting that he shouldn't mess up on his first mission.
Kuruichi started on his journey. It was 4 hours to get the location he was sent. He slowed when he was thirty minutes away to move more discretly. This move made the last 30 minutes an hour, but he foundthat it was worth it. When he got there he could all ready smell the dreaded scent of fresh blood. Peering from behind bushes Zero could see and man nail against the wall being beaten and asked information. Seeing the man around the village Zero could clearly identify the man ask the Jonin he was supposed to bring home.
Knowing he wasn't strong enough to defeat the camp of people there Zero was sad at the fact his mission was failed. He began to silently mope. Then coming back to life he wanted to make the most out of this experience. He swore to not make the man's sacrifice for the village inn vain. He quickly back traced and headed for the village. A strong feeling came over him that he never experienced before.
Is this beginning of something new?
THE ARSENAL. Academy Jutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost:1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name:Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu [Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Byakugan
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Name: Byakugan (Activation) Rank: E-S Type: Bloodline - Doujutsu Range: Description Clan: Hyuuga Description: Byakugan "White Eye" is a dōjutsu kekkei genkai of the Hyūga clan. This technique is the activation of the ability from the eyes previous dormant state. When activated the users lavender eyes become more focused, their pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge. Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one small blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra. The second ability is being able to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The user is able to see into vasts distances in which a regular eye cannot behold. They are capable of seeing insects behind trees with distinct perception and look behind wall with the Byakugan's ability. The third and one of the greatest uses of the Byakugan is the ability to see chakra, chakra flow as well as the chakra circulation system inside the body with great detail. It is from this particular ability that they are able to employ their ultimate attack style: Gentle Fist. It was also noted that the Byakugan can also discern a transformation and a real person using the eye's ability to see chakra, as well as barriers. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from member to member. [C-Ranked] users are able to see 100m in radius. [B-Ranked] uses are able to see 500m in radius. [A-Ranked] users are able to extend 800m in radius. And finally [S-Ranked] users are able to extend 2km in radius. Chakra Cost:
Name: Jūken | Gentle Fist Style Clan: Hyuuga Emphasis: The Jūken emphasizes light high speed attacks that inflicts internal damage and disrupt the body's Chakra Pathway System to ultimately inhibit and an opponent's use of chakra as well as causing severe internal damage. Requirements: Must have the Byakugan (Activated) Description: The Gentle Fist (柔拳, Jūken) or Gentle Fist Style (柔拳法, Jūkenpō) is a form of hand-to-hand combat used by members of the Hyūga clan. It inflicts internal damage and disrupt the body's Chakra Pathway System so as to ultimately inhibit an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user surgically injects a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The infiltrating chakra can then be used to disrupt or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu.Targeting the Tenketsu can enhance the havoc and control a Jūken user can impose upon an opponent's chakra network. These special nodes, 361 in total, are key gate-keeping interceptions in the chakra circulatory network, thus forcibly opening or sealing them in whatever manner the Jūken-user sees fit is a powerful tactical option to have. Harming the chakra network in this way can directly damage internal organs due to their proximity to the chakra circulatory system. Even the slightest tap can cause severe internal damage, hence the name "gentle" fist.
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Name: Hiratehi-ru Dageki | Palm Heel Strike Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Description: Hiratehi-ru Dageki is a very base technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage which will temporarily paralysis an opponent for one of their posts. The opponent loses 10CP if struck. Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Chakura Hari no Jutsu | Chakra Needle Technique Rank: D Type: Taijutsu - Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Description: Chakra Cost: Chakura Hari no Jutsu is a common technique performed by the members of he Hyuuga Clan. After focusing chakra outside the body, the chakra is formed into needles and propelled at the user's target. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used to hit very small targets, such as bees etc. This attack can also be used to attack a persons chakra network by performing accurate shots into their chakra system, and even destroy substances made of chakra. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Hakke Kūshō | Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Description: Hakke Kūshō is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. This technique is similar in practice to Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin, but has a specific target rather than a general area. To perform it, the user precisely pinpoints the enemy's vital points with the Byakugan and releases a high-speed palm thrust. A "vacuum shell" compressed using the Gentle Fist is formed to violently push the opponent away. This technique can destroy 15CP of an enemy if hit. Chakra Cost: 7CP
Name: Hakkeshō Kaiten | Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Description: Chakra Cost: Hakkeshō Kaiten is a technique performed by members of the Hyuuga Clan. A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack. If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack. Chakra Cost: 6CP
Name: Hakke Taikyaku Hirate | Eight Trigrams Retreating Palm Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Description: Hakke Taikyaku Hirate is a technique performed by the members of the Hyuuga Clan. The user focuses chakra out thei tenketsu points into the area around themselves. They will then extend their palm outward and withdraw it back in, sucking in the chakra back into their tenketsu. Along with the chakra, anything in the direction of their palm will be unsuspectingly 'pushed' towards the user as well. Chakra Cost: 6CP
Katon
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Name:Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range:Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range:Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Chakra Cost: 8
Fuuton
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Name:Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame. Chakra Cost: 9
Name: Kamaitachi - Cutting Whirlwind Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: This technique requires a fan or wind-inducing weapon. By freely manipulating the gale brought forth by her or his fan/wind-inducing weapon, the many air currents collide and create vacuums pockets. The person enveloped by this gale is assaulted by countless invisible blades, carving up their body. Also, the strong wind power will blow away all incoming projectile weapons and will even make the opponent unable to stay on their feet. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques. Chakra Cost: 8
Weapons
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Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type:Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Taijutsu
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Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description:The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Senpuu - Leaf Whirlwind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element:N/A Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Dynamic • Action (Dainamikku • Akushon) Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element:N/A Description: The user flips towards the opponent and attacks with a series of punches and kicks. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind Rank: C Type:Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks. Chakra Cost: 5
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Kuruichi [Konoha Genin] Tue 21 Jun 2011, 1:29 am | |
| Done |
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Kuruichi [Konoha Genin] Tue 21 Jun 2011, 7:53 am | |
| -One of the lines that your character does not posess one personality, could you describe more than just that brief statement? It seems that your character is interesting personality but I don't get that feeling with the short paragraph. It doesn't have to be much just a minimum of another paragraph will suffice.
-You have five more jutsu than the starter amount a genin can have. Please remove accordingly.
-Not to get on you for (another may have a problem so I'll hit it off at the moment) but you may want to fix the coding from the jutsus as half of them are bolded. Also, delete "Code" over the top of the jutsu's as well. |
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Kuruichi [Konoha Genin] Tue 21 Jun 2011, 9:11 am | |
| - Trickster Polymath wrote:
- -One of the lines that your character does not posess one personality, could you describe more than just that brief statement? It seems that your character is interesting personality but I don't get that feeling with the short paragraph. It doesn't have to be much just a minimum of another paragraph will suffice.
-You have five more jutsu than the starter amount a genin can have. Please remove accordingly.
-Not to get on you for (another may have a problem so I'll hit it off at the moment) but you may want to fix the coding from the jutsus as half of them are bolded. Also, delete "Code" over the top of the jutsu's as well.
All done, thanks for helping me improve my rping |
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| Subject: Re: Hyuuga, Kuruichi [Konoha Genin] Tue 21 Jun 2011, 9:12 am | |
| I shall give my 1/2 |
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