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Hyuuga, Kuruichi [Konoha Genin]

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Hyuuga, Kuruichi.

Kuru-Ichi- meaning Dark one

Name: Hyuuga, Kuruichi
Nickname: Zero, people call him zero because its perfect. He never has anything to say. He never wants input really. He would want to be left alone. Those are all reasons people have gotten used to the name, but there is more to it. When Zero was younger his father told him he was a failure and that he would be nothing to him ever. He told him he was Zero. He wears this name to prove he will exceed expectations.
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Most of Kuruichi's appearance corresponds with his personality. From years of pain his face is left emotionless. He is covered with tattoos each representing a lost, or lesson. His most important are the two that read: "Serenity" and the one that reads "Rage" His hair used to be Jet black like the rest of his clan but he deemed it unfit for himself dying his hair at the aged or only 10. His hair has been white ever since. Kuruichi's face is pale like the rest of his body where scars aren't. He has solid white eyes.( A gift from his clan ) With thick eyebrows and a long face.

Kuruichi usually walks around without a shirt showing of his pain. Not as an ego boost, but as a reminder. It reminds the people around him that he doesn't play around. He doesn't look like the most muscular person but his strength is well-known among his piers. His muscles aren't big but they're cut. His arms, legs and abdomen. His relaxing outfit consist of baggy jeans and nothing else.

When Kuruchi goes on missions he suits up. He changes from such basic stuff to a whole combat suit really. He takes off his jeans and puts on pants like the anbu blue ones only his are jet black. Also, he puts on a white shirt with breast-plate armor attached. Next is his equipment jacket which he uses to store his swords, kunai, tags, medicine, etc. He carries two swords on his back and a couple kunai on each side of his waist. Next he throws on his soft and comfortable combat slippers. Finally, he puts on his metal gauntlets and painted mask.


Personality: A realist most people would call him. He wont lie to someone to protect them, because that isn't how he was raised. He isn't just a man of one personality. His second personality is his sarcasm. It's just something he enjoys about correcting people in a sarcastic manner. He gets a sense of sensation. He isn't a douche bag type of sarcastic, however. Kuruichi is very educated he uses clever words to insult. His occasional joke is always complex and usually goes over peoples heads.

Kuruichi has had nothing like a pleasant life. He has experience much pain and it is apparent in his personality. He is seen as a young man with little tolerance for people who don't put in full effort. Also, he lacks passion and sympathy. Kuruichi can withstand both mental and physical pain better then most trained Jonin. Zero tends to give off a negative aura while standing next to him. But as you get to know him you'll see a change. You will see an ease in tension and a humorous side of Zero. If you get the chance to become one of his friends you will see he is just an ambitious young man and will do almost anything to strengthen himself. Zero doesn't have many friends, only one or two. He prefers it that way because he doesn't trust anyone. All his friends are close and his close friends get close by respect. Zero replaces respect with trust. He can't bear himself to trust anyone anymore and that might never change. That isn't part of his nindo but its something he follows closely. He believes following his nindo is one of the most important things life offers.
Clan: Hyuuga
Nindō: "Plan to die like you've done it before"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Fire Country
Affiliation:Konohagakure
Rank: C-rank Genin
Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon, Fuuton
Combat Style: Kuruichi likes to analyze his surroundings if possible. Then when finding the right route to take he engages swift and aggressive, but not reckless. If his initial plan doesn't work he will get real close where real damage can happen. He isn't very usefully at long range. He is a mid to close fighter.
Special Characteristics:
Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Thirteen years ago a boy was born into the Hyuuga clan's lower branch. His name was Kuruichi. He was destined for failure by very wise men and woman. He had a troublesome beginning years. His father didn't want him but there was no where else for him to go. His father didn't like him but he wasn't cruel enough to leave him on the streets. Yet...Since he was destined to be weak his father didn't train with him at a young age like most of the clan. Many people taught he was just a servant.

As he became aware of his surrounds he began to train. He was 7 the first time he started training. He started late but trained harder then anyone else. He had no family duties since no one cared for him. He would leave at 3am every morning and nobody would even notice. He stayed out untill 10pm got food and cloths from hunting. One time he left for a whole week surviving in the woods thats the first time someone noticed. It was his mom she saw him came back exhausted and cleaned him up and let him sleep. His mom was the only one who cared from the beginning, but his father threaten to kill her if she showed him sympathy. Later His mother Kioko talked to his father Ryu about putting Kuruichi into the academy.

Not to long after,his mother died of "natural causes". Knowing his mother was the only person who believed in him he left his so-called home. He entered the academy at the age of 10. He only had 3 years of basic training you would usually get in your family for 7 or 8 years, but his three years were more advanced. When Kuruichi who now had the nickname Zero(His father gave it to him when he joined the academy) trained he focused on balancing his rage and serenity. Also, he trained for 18 hours strait while others only trained for 3 or 4. He didn't know this nor did anyone else know that he was far above everyone else skill level.

Kuruichi quickly became the academy's best student and by a huge margin. He could have graduated the first year but no one could believe how good he was. After three pointless years Zero graduated atop his class. That was the day his father died. Some say it was Zero who did it. Most sensible people know Kuruichi wasn't strong enough and his father died of a heart attack.

As a genin Kuruichi is 15 and he spends most of his time doing petty missions and earning money to pay for his own living. He now lives alone in a single little house. He doesn't get out much and spends most of his free time training waiting to be assigned to a team.

Roleplay Sample:

Kuruichi was excited for once in his life! He was on his was to get a mission from the Hokage and he just had a feeling this was the real deal. Zero has been waiting for a mission other then " we need you to catch a cat" "Get my dry cleaning?" or "two little kids are fighting break it up". He knows its different this time. Getting to the Hokage's office in record time three minutes.(In usually takes 10). Huffing and Puffing the Hokage can see the eagerness in the young mans eyes.

"Kuruichi we have lost a Jonin who was sent on a mission 4 days ago. He should have been back in a day's time. He isn't one to be late. Now what I need you to do is see if you can find him and carry him back." After listening for a few more minutes getting details he was off for his mission. Kuruichi approached the gate beaming. His beam soon faded noting that he shouldn't mess up on his first mission.

Kuruichi started on his journey. It was 4 hours to get the location he was sent. He slowed when he was thirty minutes away to move more discretly. This move made the last 30 minutes an hour, but he foundthat it was worth it. When he got there he could all ready smell the dreaded scent of fresh blood. Peering from behind bushes Zero could see and man nail against the wall being beaten and asked information. Seeing the man around the village Zero could clearly identify the man ask the Jonin he was supposed to bring home.

Knowing he wasn't strong enough to defeat the camp of people there Zero was sad at the fact his mission was failed. He began to silently mope. Then coming back to life he wanted to make the most out of this experience. He swore to not make the man's sacrifice for the village inn vain. He quickly back traced and headed for the village. A strong feeling came over him that he never experienced before.


Is this beginning of something new?




THE ARSENAL.
Academy Jutsu
Spoiler:
Byakugan
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Katon
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Fuuton
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Weapons
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Taijutsu
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-One of the lines that your character does not posess one personality, could you describe more than just that brief statement? It seems that your character is interesting personality but I don't get that feeling with the short paragraph. It doesn't have to be much just a minimum of another paragraph will suffice.

-You have five more jutsu than the starter amount a genin can have. Please remove accordingly.

-Not to get on you for (another may have a problem so I'll hit it off at the moment) but you may want to fix the coding from the jutsus as half of them are bolded. Also, delete "Code" over the top of the jutsu's as well.
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Trickster Polymath wrote:
-One of the lines that your character does not posess one personality, could you describe more than just that brief statement? It seems that your character is interesting personality but I don't get that feeling with the short paragraph. It doesn't have to be much just a minimum of another paragraph will suffice.

-You have five more jutsu than the starter amount a genin can have. Please remove accordingly.

-Not to get on you for (another may have a problem so I'll hit it off at the moment) but you may want to fix the coding from the jutsus as half of them are bolded. Also, delete "Code" over the top of the jutsu's as well.


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