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Senju, Hijikata

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Name: Senju, Hijikata
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Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance: Hijikata has a rather stunning appearance, especially considering his clan. It is very different from the stereotype of the famed Konoha wood users. Rather than appearing wood like in nature, with brown hair and partially tanned skin, he looks more as if he lived most of his life in some artic wasteland rather than the vast wilderness he called home for so long. His skin is pale white, and his hair is even more so. Complimenting this are his blue eyes that are so intense that they seem to pierce like ice itself. This is more of a passive characteristic than something he can make happen, his eyes just stand out that way. Looking at him, almost nobody would assume that he is a Senju, especially with his attire. His mannerisms as well all hint towards perhaps a Yuki, but certainly not Senju. Although, he is built strong and sturdy like the trees of a great forest, a tribute to his intense endurance training throughout the years. He is stoic and strong, much like the forest, so his personality does account for his lack of appearance. This is best explained when looking at his parents. His mother was not Senju, and had the same porcelain skin, white hair, and icy blue eyes that Hijikata shows, whereas his body is built like that of a Senju, his father.

His attire also speaks towards something more of a...frozen wanderer type of idea, further insinuating that he might be Yuki. His clothes are dominantly black, but thats because his clothes are layered. He wears white pants with a layer covering up to just a few inches past his knees, which are black with a swirling pattern on them. On his chest he wears a while undershirt, long sleeve, with a black vest with a similar design on it, and covering his arms down to just before his arm sockets are sleeves much like those on his legs, only with gloves on the end. These sleeves are partially made of black animal fur, which give a somewhat barbaric feeling to the whole getup. This attire certainly keeps him warm, which isn't necessarily a bad thing way up on that mountain, but it is still a little strange. Clearly though, as out of place, especially for his clan, as it may be, Hijikata truly does not care about the opinions of others towards his attire. He wears it because he wants to, though this is generally whenever he can. He is not afraid to don more tradition Kumo nin gear for whatever reason, be it regulatory in some way, or going out on a mission that involves interaction with others on the villages behalf. Therefor he cares little about his appearance, but just wears what he does specifically because Akarui likes it.

Personality: Hijikata has been, by his actions, dubbed the opposite of his sister Akarui. His personality is almost exactly the opposite, a strange but interesting occurance. Rather than being bright and happy most of the time in the face of others, Hijikata is decidedly dark, quiet, and often serious. He doesn't talk much, only watches with evaluating eyes that analyze everything going on around him. Normally, when he does speak, his words are very serious, blunt, and straightforward. Naturally this tendency appeals to some, but repels others. It makes him rather popular with the authorities for his to-the-point mannerisms and reports, acting without pause or distraction. Others of course think that this makes him seem uptight or perhaps unnecessarily judgmental about everything. When something bothers him, he says it. When something is done wrong in his opinion, he says it. He is not afraid to hurt feelings, and often appears to not care when he does. He gives off the vibe that he does not really enjoy life very much, and doesn't know how to have fun, which really just drives people away all the more. He comes across as either cruel or boring, so not many have the patience to associate with him. That being said however, his devotion is unwavering and unmatched. He will carry out duties to the T, and he will protect and care for those he loves with an almost frightening conviction. He never complains, and due to his tendency to always speak the truth, nobody can disbelieve him when he says he is doing what he wants to do.

With that in mind, we come back to Akarui herself. She has a very bubbly and friendly demeanor, which some would think would repel Hijikata. To the contrary, however, it only draws him closer to his dear sister. He is with her whenever possible, often the voice of reason in her shenanigans. Despite being the obvious elephant in the room, were it not for Akarui's tendency to make friends, he would never interact with anyone else. He follows her, almost like a guardian, protecting her from herself. It can be hard to see, or even believe for that matter, but he is actually happy whenever he is with her, like her cheerful nature infects him. However, he also senses the deep rooted depression that plagues the inner most core of her character. It is always there and ever-persistent, like dead weight she just can't shake off. He can always see it behind her smile, which only triggers his instinctive protectiveness even more. It only causes him to care for her on a deeper level, and sometimes it throws people off. These twins are very close to each other, and everybody else can tell just by watching them. They have been through hell and back, and came out with an unbreakable bond. Some might say that their bond is even a little bizarre, that they are perhaps closer than they should be. This has neither been publicly confirmed or denied. Whatever the case, they are always seen together, and regardless of what they appear to be feeling, regardless of how often they argue, they couldn't live apart.

Unfortunately, there is something that can easily separate the two of them. Whereas their opposite personalities only serve to bring them closer together, this can divide them when presented. During the fire that burned down the twins' house and killed their parents, the twins were momentarily separated. Akarui was stuck in the middle of the house, near the source of the fire with their parents. When it erupted and started burning down the house rapidly, she was knocked out temporarily. When she awoke, she was was trapped in the room and the corpses of their parents were burning in front of her. She was surrounded by fire, and felt deaths searing hot caress just long enough to traumatize her for life. Before the fire completely consumed the house, Hijikata, who had been elsewhere, stormed into the blocked off room to rescue her. Because of this, Akarui grew up with an intense phobia of fire, while Hijikata developed an acute fascination with it. He cannot help but marvel at its destructive power while Akarui trembles before it. This difference in interest sometimes causes them to seriously fight, while other times it brings them closer together. At any rate, Hijikata himself sometimes cannot resist the allure of fire, and often finds himself observing it intently, forgetting himself, or playing with it in dangerous ways, much to Akarui's dislike.

All in all, Hijikata is like Akarui's other side. Two sides of the same coin, two sides of the same person. He is solemn, analytical, quiet, and serious where Akarui is happy, carefree, cheerful, and friendly. They compliment and complete each other on one of the basest of levels, which only serves to bring them closer together. Hijikata truly is a good guy, looking out for everything that is important in his life with stoic resolve, while serving his duties of a Kumo shinobi loyally. He can be a great friend if you have the patience, and sometimes he even acts nice if he likes someone enough. So far, only Akarui has gotten close enough to see his sweet side. Indeed, underneath the hard shell is a soft, caring, and very charming individual that cares for his sister like a lover would. Whether this is just a result of their intense bond or perhaps something much more in anyone's guess, but together they make one of the most admirable pairs in all of Konoha.
Clan: Senju
Nindō: "Protect that which you love with the strength and tenacity of the forest."

THE NINJA.

Origin: Fire Country
Affiliation: Kumo
Rank: Genin - C
Specialties: Primary: Ninjutsu / Secondary: Medical
Elemental Affinities: Primary: Earth / Secondary: Water / Combination: Wood

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Alright, Sean and I had made edits over Skype. This application is fabulous, well written, and all that jazz, yadayadayada.

Good job, honey.

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Hijikata [Kumo Genin] Senju, Hijikata [Kumo Genin] EmptyThu 12 Apr 2012, 5:08 pm

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Name: Mokuton: Moku Bunshin no Jutsu | Wood Release: Wood Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Clan: Senju
Description: Mokuton: Moku Bunshin no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. A clone that is created by altering the user's own cells with chakra. It has more endurance than the normal Shadow Clones and doesn't disappear when hit by the enemies' attacks. Moreover, since it has the ability to merge with plants and trees, it is also great for reconnaissance missions. They have the ability to travel far distances from the user and are able to communicate with the original. The clones can be as simple in function as a wooden dummy for use in the Body Replacement Technique. The basic concept of the Shadow Clone Technique also applies to the Wood Clone Technique. it gathered and changes the shape of the clone.
Chakra Cost: 8CP

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Name: Mokuton: Jubaku Eisō | Wood Release: Curse-Binding Nest
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Clan: Senju
Description: JMokuton: Jubaku Eisō is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. This technique is relatively powerful and holds opponents much more gracefully, with less of a strain on the user, because the user sinks them into the ground. Afterwards, the user can enclose the opponent so that their body implodes.
Chakra Cost: 5CP
Please remove these two. They are currently under-ranked, and I plan to modify this in the Encyclopedia. Sorry for holding up the app with minor things, but it's best to do it now than to run through it again in a few days.

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Name: Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu | Wood Release: Great Forest Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Clan: Senju
Description: Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan.A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time, if one changes the ends into sharp stakes, turn them into countless, sharp, spear-like piercing weapons. This technique has also been used to break through stone walls. When a small hole is found the tree will squeeze in the hole and grow into a square shape and increase the size of the hole so a human can pass through.
Chakra Cost: 6CP
This is also a bit overranked, but I'm a nice guy and have given you an alternative to it. A c-ranked version if you will:

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[b]Name:[/b] Mokuton: Semaijurin no Jutsu | Wood Release: Small Forest Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
[b]Element:[/b] Mokuton (Wood Release)
[b]Clan:[/b] Senju
[b]Description:[/b] Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan.A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time. These branches, though not sharp, are still capable of performing ranged blunt damage and bind the target. Though a powerful technique, it's not capable of destroying a solid surface very easily, and is a beginner's version of Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 8CP (2 per post)

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Mokuton: Sakuhen | Wood Release: Splinter
How does the wood explode? Wood can't just suddenly explode and release energy. It can catch fire, but then that requires a Katon jutsu. A large chakra center would still require a spark. I wouldn't mind the shrapnel addition, but at least add an explosive tag into the wood. I fail to see how it suddenly explodes.
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Mokuton: Moku Shuuren | Wood Release: Wood Drill
First of all, can this drill rotate? Second: Raise to 7CP. 6CP just seems a bit.. low.
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Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Add (2 per post) to Chakra Cost.
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Tsuchi Hokku - Earth Hook
Several things: How many fists can one create at one time? It should cost X chakra per fist (with no initial cost. It can be something like 2CP per fist). How far can these fists travel before they no longer move? How big are these fists?
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Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Add (2 per post) to Chakra Cost.
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Water Release: Water Drowning Technique
Add (1 per post) to Chakra Cost.
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Shousen Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique
Please replace your current Shousen with this one. This is just a more elaborate version. Thank you.
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[b]Name:[/b] Shousen no Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] C-A
[b]Type:[/b] Medical Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the higher the medical ninja's rank is the quicker they are able to heal more critical and serious injuries. Injuries of equal rank may be healed in 1 post, and completely restored in 2. If choosing to heal a wound higher than the rank of the Shousen used, it requires 2 extra post per rank. Thus C-rank Shousen healing an A-rank wound would require 5 posts to fully heal, while a B-rank wound would require 3 posts for instance. If healing a lower-ranked wound with a higher-ranked Shousen, the wound is fully healed in one post as opposed to two.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] C- 8 (2 per post), B- 12 (4 per post), A- 20 (6 per post)
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Zoukyou Ryoku - Augment Strength
Several things. First: How does this actually work? Is chakra directly applied to ALL of the muscles, or just a few of them? If all, it can't be as low as C-rank, and the chakra cost would be incredibly high. How about 'Pick a pair of limbs or the chest'. Arms would give strength, legs would give speed. I guess if you picked torso it would be endurance. On that note, there are no defined limits as to how long this jutsu last, and there's no chakra per post. Add a maximum time allotment for the jutsu, unless you plan on having the medical ninja constantly make contact with the target. Make sure the limit is reasonable. Not something like 5 posts for 7CP.

That is all in regards to jutsu. Sorry for the trouble.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Hijikata [Kumo Genin] Senju, Hijikata [Kumo Genin] EmptyThu 12 Apr 2012, 10:25 pm

-Removed the first two jutsu. I always did feel those were technically too much to be C rank, so I'm not suprised to see them go. Replaced wood clone with water clone, also.

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This is also a bit overranked, but I'm a nice guy and have given you an alternative to it. A c-ranked version if you will:
-Done, and thanks.

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Mokuton: Sakuhen | Wood Release: Splinter.
-Its not an actual explosion, as the jutsu describes. There is no fire or smoke, I just compare the resulting force to that of an explosion. The wood rapidly splinters in itself until it releases an intense burst of force built up inside of it by the splintering, throwing off small chunks of wood, like sharpnel in an actual explosion. It basically just releases a force equal to an explosion, not creating an actual one.

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Mokuton: Moku Shuuren | Wood Release: Wood Drill.
-No, it can't. You could say that the wood rotates in on itself until it extends outward into a point, but other than that, there is no rotation. Its just called a drill because of its shape, not its function. CP also raised.

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Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
-Done

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Tsuchi Hokku - Earth Hook
-The description says only two per jutsu use, for 7 CP per use. The range is mid, so they could travel up 10m before falling short. As for the size, they are decently large, not like a standard human fist. I would say each one is 5 feet in diameter. I'll edit that in.

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Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique, Water Release: Water Drowning Technique, Shousen Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique
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Zoukyou Ryoku - Augment Strength
-It does affect all the muscles, but consider the multiple ranks and what they do. At C rank its equivilent to a C rank strength SC, so the increase is not very substantial, almost as if there is just enough chakra to spread thin through each muscle. I also plan on making seperate, similar jutsu, one for each physical attribute, so you could say that the chakra affects the muscles to contain/release more energy when exerted. At the same time, one relating to speed will affect the muscles in such a way to respond to stimuli faster, and move in certain directions faster, rather than producing more energy. For endurance the muscles will be able to absorb more harmful energy before becoming damaged. Also, the description does say that the effect lasts for 3 posts per use, and cannot be used on the same person again for 3 posts after the effect wears off, and this is the same for each rank.
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-Its not an actual explosion, as the jutsu describes. There is no fire or smoke, I just compare the resulting force to that of an explosion. The wood rapidly splinters in itself until it releases an intense burst of force built up inside of it by the splintering, throwing off small chunks of wood, like sharpnel in an actual explosion. It basically just releases a force equal to an explosion, not creating an actual one.
Okay, seems fair.
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-No, it can't. You could say that the wood rotates in on itself until it extends outward into a point, but other than that, there is no rotation. Its just called a drill because of its shape, not its function. CP also raised.
Again, fair enough. I can tell this was inspired by the Kaguya Drill TEEHEE
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-It does affect all the muscles, but consider the multiple ranks and what they do. At C rank its equivilent to a C rank strength SC, so the increase is not very substantial, almost as if there is just enough chakra to spread thin through each muscle. I also plan on making seperate, similar jutsu, one for each physical attribute, so you could say that the chakra affects the muscles to contain/release more energy when exerted. At the same time, one relating to speed will affect the muscles in such a way to respond to stimuli faster, and move in certain directions faster, rather than producing more energy. For endurance the muscles will be able to absorb more harmful energy before becoming damaged. Also, the description does say that the effect lasts for 3 posts per use, and cannot be used on the same person again for 3 posts after the effect wears off, and this is the same for each rank.
First off, sorry for not noticing the 3 post limit. I have no idea how that missed my eyes when I was reading it. Anyway, since the SC cannot stack, and there's a 3 post limit, I see little abuse in this. Fair enough; I'll allow it Razz

Anyway, only one more change. Use this for the new Water Clone:
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[b]Name:[/b] Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] Suiton (Water)
[b]Description:[/b] Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 7
It just clarifies the range and raises the cost a bit.
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Again, fair enough. I can tell this was inspired by the Kaguya Drill
-Yeah pretty much lol

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Anyway, only one more change. Use this for the new Water Clone:
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Thanks! Seems fine to me, and since only jutsu edits have been made:

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