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 |  Subject: Kimika Yamanaka Sun 13 May 2012, 8:59 am | |
|  Yamanaka, Kimika THE INFO.
Name:Kimika Yamanaka
Nickname:Mirage
Age:15
Gender:Female
Appearance:
For most teens Kimika is a very normal plain looking teenager, she does not stand out much against other kids her age, however being a yamanaka she stands out alot. She stands at a height of four feet nine inches, making her a short girl, while weighing about a hundred and eleven pounds. Kimika is a very petite girl, and she likes it that way. Her eyes match the yamanaka clan trait, being a very deep and bright blue, however she prefers a different choice when it comes to hair. She hates blonde hair, and since thats her natural hair color she will often dye it to a deep dark black. She dose not do this to stand out or be a rebel, kimika just prefers black hair. Her skin is a very pale light tone, and she is not very muscular. This does not mean she is weak, she is just not very toned.
When it comes to clothing she likes to keep very comfortable light weight clothes on. Most of the time she is wearing fish net tights with a ninja pouch hidden under her cloths. Her shinobi head band is tight around her inner thigh. She often wears a long black cloak, that comes fit with a hood and a chain to draw the two sides closed. Her feet are fashioned with dark navy blue shinobi shoes, with extra pad on the soles to make her steps quieter and softer. And thats about it, Kimika is not a fancy classy girl, she is very simple.
Personality:
Kimika has many personalities and attitudes, most times varying on what mood she is in or who she is around. Often times however you will not know she is changing moods, or what mood she was in the begin with, for she likes to keep to herself and is shy most of the time. When at home she acts like most girls her age, she is out going, laughs and jokes around. She spends alot of time reading and writing poetry. when out in public, like in town or at the market, she will stay calm and quiet, she wont draw attention to herself and will not speak unless needed. She does not like strangers, or atleast meeting them at first, and will be extremely shy until she knows you or feels comfortable around you. This is a total change when around her friends or comrades. She will talk non stop, laugh your ear off and be the life of the group. She enjoys hanging out with friends and having a good time, shes just afriad to meet new people.
In battle she often tries to keep a calm head about things, she is not one to jump the handle and go on a rage fueled killing spree. She is most of the time the one keeping her team collected and focused while in battle. She despises back stabbers and traitors, and will not hesitate to kill one herself. She is all about working together, working as a team and honoring each other as comrades.
Clan:Yamanaka
Nindō:"I shall always protect my comrades, no matter the cost, i will put others before myself, even if it means my life.
THE NINJA.
Origin:Fire Nation (Konoha)
Affiliation:Konoha
Rank:C (Genin)
Specialties:
Main:Ninjutsu
Sub:Genjutsu
Elemental Affinities:
Main:Fuuton (Wind)
Sub:Katon (Fire)
Combat Style:
Kimika is a very quiet behind the scene fighter. She prefers remaining in the shadows then being the front of battle. She is a metal warrior, not physical, meaning she is smart, clever and prefers fights on a mental level. she works best as a sensory ninja, a tracker ninja, and a interrogation ninja. She does have a few tricks up her sleeve, and should not be taken lightly, if thrown into a physical fight she can hold her own. However she would much more prefer lurking in the back ground, destroying her targets mind. She supports her allies as best as she can, looking out for them more then herself. She hopes to never let anyone down and always defend her comrades.
Special Characteristics:- Spoiler:
Name: Improved Perception
Rank: C
Type: Mental Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Every physical motion is identified to the ninja whether its a movement in a leaf or change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with genjutsu as it makes the user capable in identifying an illusion of C-Rank or lower. However although they can sense the genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell.
THE BACKGROUND.
History:- Spoiler:
Childhood Arc
Being the only female child in a large family, Kimika was kept hidden from the rest of the village. She was often complimented for ever single little thing. She was thought the basic genjutsus by her father and was raised as a lady by her mother. Her parents would raise her into thinking that she was more special than the rest of the children. They would shower her with gifts and other delicacies. Her pride would constantly grow everyday.
Academy
Being locked in the Clan's gates all her life, She didn't know what to expect ones she was headed into the academy life. She was known to be quiet in class and didn't get along well with others for her anti-social attitude. She wasn't good at making friends with younger children, but was fine talking to adults. She finally spread her wings and made her first pair of friends in the academy.
Her grades weren't that good, but they weren't that bad either. Needless to say they were pretty average. Since she was raised to have genjutsu as her specialty, ninjutsu and taijutsu were rather difficult for her. She finally got better at ninjutsu and was finally able to make her first clone. She still is rather slow at taijutsu and has great difficulty at blocking hits.
Genin
As a genin, Kimika improved her skills well. She was rather excited at her new independent life as a genin. It wasn't until her parents had pressured her into doing better that she got scared. Now faced with ninja life, missions, and her parents' pressure she is now more scared than ever.
Roleplay Sample:
- Spoiler:
Mirage smiled as he told her his name was Kreos. He was a handsome looking man with details that outlined his face. he seemed to be a friendly kind gentleman so mirage did not put up many defenses, she was in no mood to fight. and Kreos did not look like he wanted a fight either, he looked tired and a little annoyed, whether it was with her or him having been knocked out. either way she did not want to bother him. He introduced his animal companions and then held out a raw smelling piece of meat asking if she would like to try some. She could not smell it completly but it did not look all that appitizing, but what was life if you never tried any thing new, so she scooted over and sat next to Kreos.
Nice to meet you Kreos. You have a lovely dog there. She looked at the dog then back to the meat he was holding. reaching out her soft gentle hand she took the salty rough meat. placing it in her mouth, her teeth beat agaisnt its leathery surface. it was salty and a little spicy, flavor flooded into her mouth. WOW! this is good. i have never had anything like this before, what is it called? She was a little courious as to what she was eating, but something more she began to wander why this man was out in these woods.
Warmth touched her smooth soft skin as she lay there in deep sleep. Her dreams drifted in and out of her mind as she layed there lost in her own mind. But something was tugging to bring her back to reality. A warm brezze blew across her face and her eyes slowly opened to see a sight much different from the one she had seen before she went to sleep. Before she was awake and the man was asleep, but now it was the other way around. She was laying in the grass with a cloak laying o her, and the man sat under a tree eating some kinda of food. A dog was sitting next to the man along with a floating ball of light, most likly a wisp. So she sat up, keeping the cloak draped over her legs and looked at the man, starting a fire.
Um thank you for the warm cloak, but may i ask who you might be? i saw you laying here in the dark and did not know if you were ok. i must have fallen asleep beside you. She brushed her hair from her face and smiled at the man, her playful smile dancing across her face. my name is Mirage, what might yours be? She then shook her hair and laughed a bit as she asked the mans name. She was glad she had found him for she did not like being alone at night, and with the growing darkness she loved company.
THE ARSENAL.
- Academy Jutsu:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Range: N/A
Medium: Optical
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others.
Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread.
Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Clan Jutsu:
Name: Shinranshin no Jutsu | Mind Transfer Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Description: Mind Transfer Jutsu is a technique used by the members of the Yamanaka clan. This technique allows the user to enter the mind of another person or even an animal. The user transfers their consciousness to the opponent, giving them complete control of the body for the duration. Their original body is left defenseless while this jutsu is active, leaving it susceptible to attack until they return. The mind transfer is quick but moves in a straight direction, and takes a few seconds to return to the user's body if it misses. Should any physical injury befall the victim's body while the mind-link is active, it would cause the user's body to also receive those same injuries. For example, should the victim's arm be detached, the user's arm would be detached as well, leading to the conclusion that, should the victim die, the user would also die. This can be rectified if user cancels the jutsu before the victim's body receives the damage. This technique can be used on both characters, and NPC.
Chakra Cost: 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Seishinetsudoku | Mind Reading
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m)
Description: Seishinetsudoku is a technique used by the members of the Yamanaka clan. By placing a hand on the target's head, the user will be able to enter the target's subconscious and extract any information needed, even if the target has forgotten it himself or has had it blocked.One may not learn specific details such as secret clan jutsu through this method.
Chakra Cost: 6CP
Name: Yamanaka's Telepathic Communication
Rank: C-A
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Clan: Yamanaka
Description:
Chakra Cost: Yamanaka's Telepathic Communication a special technique used by the members of the Yamanaka clan. This technique allows the user to telepathically communicate with others at distances in proportion to the amount of chakra focused into this technique. At C Rank the user can telepathically communicate to others within Close range. At B Rank the user can communicate with others in Mid Range. At A Rank the user can communiate with others within miles. Retaining constant telepathic communication slowly drains the users chakra. This technique may only be used on comrades.
Chaka Cost:
C Rank - 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
B Rank - 10CP (Additional 3CP Per Post)
A Rank - 20CP (Additional 5CP Per Post)
- Fuuton Ninjutsu:
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques.
Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
- Katon Ninjutsu:
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
- Non-Elemental Jutsu:
Name:Basic Chakra Sensing
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Mid
Element:N/A
Description:The user of this justu will place both hands together, forming a single sign, and they will close their eyes. As long as the ninja holds the sign and keeps their eyes closed they can sense any form of chakra from a C rank or lower person or technique. They can pin point the exact location of the target and even the size or amount.
Chakra Cost:
Name:Increased Smell Activation
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Long
Element:N/A
Description:User of this jutsu must first complete a single sign, then close their eyes. The sign can now be released however they must continue to keep their eyes closed. They can pick up on all smells and aromas of anything C ranked or lower. They can determine distance, elemental affinity and strength of the target.
Chakra Cost:
Name:Increased Sight Activation
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Long (Up to 50m)
Element:N/A
Description:The user of this jutsu must complete a single sign and hold the sign for the duration of the jutsu. While holding this sign the user can see up to 50m even through things that may hinder sight, such as mist, fog, smoke and dust.
Chakra Cost:
Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent.
Chakra Cost:
Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4)
Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9)
Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15)
Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)
- Genjutsu:
Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: -
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates up to 5 false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it. If these clones leave 5m radius of the caster, they will disappear.
Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Far (0m - 20m)
Element: -
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. The object must be within 20m of the user.
Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Flower Petal Escape
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: -
Description: If the user comes under attack, she or he can use this technique to cover her or his escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the user's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her or his opponent while she or he escapes or hides. This technique works very similarly to substitution, but can also be used to delude the enemy with more flower petal based Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Multi-Target
Range: Far (0m - 25m)
Element: -
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over. The caster must remain in the shadows, or within 25m of the targets to maintain this Genjutsu. Only 3 people may be influenced by this Genjutsu at one time.
Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
FACE CLAIM.
Character Claim:Xion
Source:Kingdom Hearts
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|   | | Mirage
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| | Subject: Re: Kimika Yamanaka Mon 14 May 2012, 5:55 am | |
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| | | | Enzo
Age : 29
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| | Subject: Re: Kimika Yamanaka Fri 18 May 2012, 1:21 am | |
| Apologies on the long wait; but the rest of the staff seems to be 'busy' or something. Anyway;
- Your appearance, and some instances throughout the app seem to contradict each other a bit. Here's an example:
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- For most teens Kimika is a very normal plain looking teenager, she does not stand out much against other kids her age, however being a yamanaka she stands out alot.
Please fix and clarify a bit more. Oh, and you fail to mention a forehead protector or headband anywhere on your appearance, which is a requirement.
- Expand your personality some more, so that it is not very ordinary. The personality is essentially the soul of the character. It would be very boring RPing as a character with such limited emotions. Feel free to explain how she reacts to other people, or what makes her angry, sad, happy, etc. You can even mention her likes, dislikes, hobbies, etc. in more depth.
- Your origin is just the country your character was born in, not the city as well. Thus in your case, it would just be "Fire Country" or "Hi no Kuni".
- Please expand on your combat style. You can express what ranges your character prefers to fight with (when in actual combat, and not sneaking around), and what types of techniques she prefers. Does she use genjutsu mainly, or ninjutsu? If you need help; here's an excerpt from the creation guide.
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- How does your character like to fight? Hit and run tactics, a fearless tank on the battlefield or do you lurk in the shadows and kill silently. There are many different tactics and here is where you can write a brief description of the combat style in which encapsulates your character. This in some regards can be seen as a characters 'Combat Nindō'. Include such things as your strengths/weaknesses, the range in which your character likes to fight, any martial or other styles they have learn't, and your 'trump card' or otherwise known as 'Signature Jutsu'.
- GREATLY expand your history. It's not very believable that your character had only 3 paragraphs worth of adventure over the course of her 15 years of existance. You may look at other members' histories if you need help.
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- Basic Chakra Sensing
You'll need the sensory SC for this technique. One cannot just do something sensory ninja are trained to do in a jutsu; it makes the whole existence of the SC unnecessary. Remove or exchange your SC for sensory.
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- Increased Smell Activation
What is a "C-rank smell". You can't really classify smells based on ranks. Simply state a range and compare the smell to that of another animal. Makes it easier for the opponent to grasp. Also add a chakra cost and maintaining cost.
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- Increased Sight Activation
Increased sight is fine, but through matter not only makes no sense, but borderlines dojutsu. You may keep increased sight, but cannot see through substances. Even if they are gases or vapors. Add a chakra cost and maintaining cost.
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