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Kazama, Rai

THE INFO.

Name: Kazama Rai
Nickname:
Age: 11
Gender:Male
Appearance: Rai stands at five foot three, weighing in at one hundred and thirty pounds. His shaggy hair is black in color, a trait he inherited from his mother. However, he has dyed his hair on occasion to a blond color, very much like his father's own. from beneath these locks, a pair of chocolate brown eyes peers out at the world. He is very lean, mostly due to have the baby fat worked off of his body due to excercise, with compact muscules. His skin is tanned slightly, due to most of his training taking place out in the sun.

Normally, he can be found wearing simplistic clothing; loose t-shirt and shorts -- when it is deemed needed. When not on missions, or out in public -Anywhere that isnt deemed Kazama property.- he can usualy be found shirtless, and barefoot. Generally, he will wear Hakamas when lounging around home. While he is aware of of some of the kunoichi his age whispering behind his back about his looks, he is still modest enough to wear a shirt when answering the door.

When on missions, Rai favors his own style of clothing: an updated version of Kazama Jin's fashion. He is usually garbed in black pants and short sleeved shirt made from a strange material that seems to mute the normal sounds of movement (E.g. Clothes rustling). Normally, he wears a mask of the same material to cover the lower portion of his face, from the nose down, though on occasion, he removes it. Extenting from inside the right sleeve of his shirt are bandages made from the same material as his clothing. Tattoo'd on his left wrist is a seal linked to his genin kit so that he can 'fast draw' a weapon if he needs to.

Personality:Rai is a quiet child, not speaking unless he is spoken to. Even then, his responses are short, as well as very respectful.The outcome of this patient approach to socializing is often a witty remark, or wise saying. He’s polite and even gracious, particularly to people who treat him with respect. Those who do not treat him this way or those who insult him should know he will not hesitate to spit words of venom and bile in response and, when necessary, punch out a few teeth. His voice is soft, almost fragile, as if he is shy. His quietness often sets him apart. His elders often said that he would grow up to be "the strong, silent type". He is a thinker, not in the battle sense, but philosophical, due to the teachings that his parents instilled in him. He holds his father, Kazama Jin, in high reguards, seeking to emulate the jounin in nearly every way possible.

When out in the village, Rai tends to wander about, his curiostity getting the best of him at times. He adores music of all kinds, often standing in awe for hours on end listening to musicians play in the village, while staring transfixed as thier fingers weave magic with thier instruments. Other times, he is usually browsing weapon stalls, eyeing the knives and swords.
His favorite pastime -- beyond training and reading -- is to listen to music with a dish of fried dumplings.

Clan: None

Nindō: When there's something you really want, fight for it. Don't give up no matter how hopeless it seems. | My life is not my own. I live to protect those dear to me. I serve as the willing sacrifice for my people. If it takes for me to suffer for my brothers to see peace, then give me pain until I die.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Kaminari no Kuni | Kumogakure no Sato

Affiliation: Konohagakure

Rank:Genin

Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinities: Raiton (Main), Kanton (Sub)

Combat Style: Blitzkrieg ("Lightning war") is an anglicized word describing all-mechanised force concentration of tanks, infantry, artillery and air power, concentrating overwhelming force at high speed to break through enemy lines, and, once the latter is broken, proceeding without regard to its flank. Through constant motion, the blitzkrieg attempts to keep its enemy off-balance, making it difficult to respond effectively at any given point before the front has already moved on.

While Rai is not mechanized, he does focus on the latter of the tactic: Lightning fast warfare. Like his father and grandfather before him, his Taijustu focuses primarliy on speed complimented with the pure desctructive power of raiton.

Depending on the situation, the finer points of the style emerge.

Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

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Roleplay Sample:

The boy ran. Not from any one in paticular. He ran just to run. The joy of it, the power he felt as his body was pushed to do better than he was doing. But to the people who could see him, what he was doing was nothing short of amazing. To mere humans, what he was doing could not be done by them. The teen was running up the cliffside, not caring who saw his mild display of power. Step after step carried him further, until he exploded off the edge, his momentum carrying him airborn.

The morning air was cool against his bare chest as he rose, brown hues momentarily blinded by the rising sun. But what goes up, must come down, and down he came, tucking his arms and legs to maximize his speed. At the last possible moment, he rolled, bringing his feet to the ground, knees bent to absorb the imapct. As he came into contact with the earth, it was launched outward, the ground below and around him cracking.

Once he realized that he he was fine, he uncoiled his legs, releasing the pent up energy, to spring forward again. In the distance, he could see a building, on the other side of what appeared to be a lake, surrounded by the beginings of a forest. Not even bothering to slow down, he continued, his steps carrying him over the lake's surface. The calm surface was no doubt disturbed by his bare feet, as he hydroplaned over it. Almost too soon, he was at the tavern door, moving too fast to stop. And so, something had to give, and in this case, it was the tavern door... A leap, feet thrust before him to crash against the door, taking the frail wood off its hinges.

THE ARSENAL.

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Academy Jutsu
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Non-elemental/Taijutsu
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Raiton - Shock and Awe

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Katon - Lets watch it burn...
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PostSubject: Re: Kazama, Rai [Konoha Genin] - Complete Kazama, Rai [Konoha Genin] - Complete EmptyFri 09 Sep 2011, 3:14 am


Hello Malkavian, just a few things need to be changed before it can be accepted.

I feel that your Appearance could do with some more work, right now it's lacking slightly in detail and I'm sure your creative mind is capable of much more. Try to expand more on your physical appearance, I've noticed that you've only written two sentences so please try to have a bash at expanding your sentences. Sometimes adding small pieces of information can add up to something great. Your Personality could also have a bit of an edit as well, try writing a bit more on your second paragraph please.

For your Origin, it's meant to be a country and not a village. But if you wish to mention a village then simply write something along the lines of, "Kaminari no Kuni | Kumogakure no Sato". Everyone also requires two Elemental Affinities, although we don't force you to use them we still wish for you to have two. So please have a second element placed in there.

Concerning your Arsenal, could you split them up into different [spoiler] tags so it's easier to read. Having everything in one jumble is quite a bugger to read and to also place information in later. Lastly, don't forget to fill in your face claim. Once all of this is done, I'm sure it can be approved and you'll be able to enjoy RP'ing!
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Fixed.
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Well seems fine to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazama, Rai [Konoha Genin] - Complete Kazama, Rai [Konoha Genin] - Complete EmptySun 11 Sep 2011, 2:05 pm

Unfortunately you will have to remove your Ninjato, as you don't have Weaponry as your speciality.

Dai Raiken needs to be a little more explained, mainly, how long does the technique last? Do you pay additional chakra for more punches?

Everything else is looking good ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Kazama, Rai [Konoha Genin] - Complete Kazama, Rai [Konoha Genin] - Complete EmptySun 11 Sep 2011, 2:33 pm

'Dai Raiken' is best thought of as a Raiton varient of 'Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit', hence the same chakra cost and range. The technique lasts for as long as I pay chakra into it. There's really nothing too special to it, but I'll fix it.

The ninjato, is a tricky topic. When I asked, I was originally told that I would not be allowed to change specialties for character development as Rai grew older. The effect upon the character would have been changing his ninjutsu specialty to Kenjutsu for the for the fact that as Rai grew older, he would begin to rely less on ninjutsu techs and more on Taijutsu enhanced with Raiton and Katon. That, along with the fact that the ninjato would be a family heirloom passed down for the boy to use.

This is why I included it now, as opposed to Rai gaining it through 'story'. With this way, he still would be able to keep in sync -partially- with his original story, However, in this variant, he uses the weapon as for what it is, not for the characteristics I originally planned for it; a sword meant for him to channel chakra through and increase his cutting power.
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Fixed
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Good stuff. Have fun Roleplaying!

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Archived.

Due to inactivity.
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