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Clan Name: Naka
Clan Location: Suna
Clan Traits: Donton is automatic main element
Kekkei Genkai: Mud is a liquid or semi-liquid mixture of water and some combination of soil, silt, and clay. Ancient mud deposits harden over geological time to form sedimentary rock such as shale or mudstone

because of this combo of rock mud is fairly easy to control when having mastery over the element of Earth

Muck is a soil made up primarily of humus from drained swampland. It is known as black soil
This clan can use the rocks in humus to control and minupulate the muck in swampland this is used when naturally in swamp lands

Concrete is a construction material composed of cement as well as other cementitious materials such as fly ash and slag cement

The slag in this mixture is usable if the rank of the ninja is high enough

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name:Reshape And Reform
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: Earth
Description: The only secret jutsu of the clan the user takes the Metomorpic rock in the earth to reshape them in any sape form or wepon of their choice within a 15 mile radius and the time span is 6 post max the chakara cost is equal to the max chakara in the avarge genin

History:

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At the Start this was an earth village clan but during the great ninja war the clan migrated and they were attacked by a group of anbu on the way to their new home almost an entire generation was killed but a 20 year old man survived and became the leader of the clan
Settling in the desert, hoping to find refuge from the years of challenges to combat, the members sparred amongst one another, keeping their skill strong and minds sharp. Forming the first homes using their Doton element to easily transform their landscape into a survivable area

Over many hundreds of years of refinement, the four clan founders were the only ones said to have achieved the highest level of the bloodline; many have come close, but found it just out of reach to complete their Kekke genkai having finally completely mastered their bloodline the clan moved to the hidden sand village as immagrants they having no money they settled in the slums living in peace until one boy got out of line and snuck into the fatted duck stealing a sack of food on his way back he was jumped but amazingly the 12 year-old fought back and winning after hearing this he was trained by the clan head who was amazed 4 years later he was entered in the suna battle royal and won winning 50,000 dollarsenough to leave the slums which is what he did that boy was insei`s father and that being done insei was forever placed on a pedestal and respected by the rest of the clanged

Clan Details: Closed

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Mud is a natural Doton ability, as displayed by the Third Hokage in his fight with Orochimaru. Your clan can be extremely proficient with the Earth element, and prefers to use mud, but mud alone is just Doton.

Also, the history needs to be longer, and the Kekkai Genkai needs explained better.

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ready

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Specifics. Can a member do anything unique at each rank? Like if your proficient, what can be done at each rank?

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Like Zat?

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You would need to treat this clan as a kind of advanced element that is from the based element of Doton. So for your clan traits you would need to have say that all clan members must have Doton as their main element. Also you could have another trait that all doton based techniques cost 25% less chakra, as your clan is so proficient in this area.

Quote :: can control any mud produced by the clan member so if mud wall is is punched through any mud left on the opponent can be used as a jutsu of clan origin at choice

if they become an anbu Anbu rank they can learn a forbidden jutsu that alows them to control a person covered in mud much like shadow possesion jutsu but untill then from B-S they can move mud thats on the opponets Example: mud on shoes can travel anywhere on clothes while mud on skin can move to mouth ears nose ect

This description is not satisfactory. You need to explain what mud actually is, as if we are incredibly stupid. How you can manipulate the substance ie. connection with chakra? the level per rank at which the manipulation occurs, the volumes of mud that can be manipulated, the range, and how you can manipulate it as in your surroundings? Like, as gaara manipulates sand from his surroundings can this clan do that also?

I suggest looking at the Tetsumi Clan description in Custom Open Clans, that is paper manipulation which is quite similar in the fact that it isn't quite an advanced element like mud. I also suggest looking up what mud is on wikipedia and given base information from their in your KKG.

Quote :: Natural Drawing ability

This would need to be explained better, what is its connection with your KKG?

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Good?

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delelte this joinin ulkiras clan

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