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MrStygian
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PostSubject: Tsukuru, Kōton Release Tsukuru, Kōton Release EmptyMon Sep 19, 2011 10:02 pm

Clan Name: Tsukuru

Clan Description: The Tsukuru are a clan of expert blacksmiths, their lively hood for several generations now being the creation and distribution of forged items and weaponry. This has been their custom since before there family moved into the shinobi arts, and finding a Tsukuru that doesn’t have at least passing knowledge of weaponry and other forged items is going to be rare.

There are many Tsukuru, there family name spread well through Iwagakure, but the number that belong to the actual clan, and follow their beliefs closely, number no greater then 4 dozen.

The Tsukuru take weaponry seriously, holding close the belief that a well constructed weapon links itself to the soul of its wielder, and will preserve their soul even after death. Because of this, the core Tsukuru clan members all carry a weapon, usually intricately decorated and of fanciful design. These weapons are always Swords, Axes, Hammers, or Spears. This weapon is called their Konken, or soul weapon, even for those that do not practice the ninja arts.

The Tsukuru are of swarthy skin, always looking like they are fresh from the coal caked room of a forge. Their hair and eyes are usually a dark color, but always match. More importantly then that, their hair is almost always kept short, or in a tight hairdo for the women of the clan, since being around a Tsukuru forge with loose hanging hair would be a foolish idea at best.

Body shape and size is fairly varied, though most Tsukuru have a more bulk build than lanky and skinny, due to their line of work.

Clan Abilities

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Clan Jutsu


“Teitetsukon” Soul Forge Techniques
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“Kōton”, Steel Release techniques


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Clan Information

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PostSubject: Re: Tsukuru, Kōton Release Tsukuru, Kōton Release EmptyWed Sep 21, 2011 6:03 pm

This whole clan is like 3 KKG in one clan. Stronger Katon and Doton elements which can be achieved through SC, binding souls to weapons (which is a big no) and to top all that, steel manipulation, which I could approve if you would work more on it. But no spewing steel from your mouth. You will need to have some source of it near you, even if you have to carry it with you.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukuru, Kōton Release Tsukuru, Kōton Release EmptyWed Sep 21, 2011 7:55 pm

RockBoy wrote:
This whole clan is like 3 KKG in one clan. Stronger Katon and Doton elements which can be achieved through SC...
How are they stronger? All I stated was that the Katon was blue and Doton was black. Please elaborate why color changes are making a element more "powerful"

RockBoy wrote:
binding souls to weapons (which is a big no)
Binding souls is a big no? How is that? If that's the case, why do we have a craftsmen mission that requires the user to retrieve souls for the person's requested weapon? I'm not being rude or defying, but that seems rather contradictory. Besides, the user's soul is bound to the weapon, it's not I'm like stealing souls from individuals.

RockBoy wrote:
and to top all that, steel manipulation, which I could approve if you would work more on it. But no spewing steel from your mouth. You will need to have some source of it near you, even if you have to carry it with you.
No spewing Steel from the mouth? The Steel is in it's liquid state. That's just like telling the Lava Release clan no spewing from the mouth and dig down to the mantle and receive lava. What about the Boil clan? They spew acidic mists from their mouths and pores. What's the difference between mixing the Boil Clan's Katon and Suiton inside their own bodies than my clan's Katon and Doton inside of ours?

I'm not trying to be rude and I apologize if I come off that way, but it seems like you're just saying no with little to no explanations.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukuru, Kōton Release Tsukuru, Kōton Release EmptyThu Sep 22, 2011 4:55 pm

I'm not sure about the mission you are reefering to - and if such a mission exists, I would think it's more of a 'in theory' soul collecting (praying), rather than actual 'hutning' for dead people and their presences. In truth the Naruto Universe is rather... vague when it comes to death. Sure we had seen two or three ghosts, but never in the cannon and as such, we can't and don't know what Kishimoto's stance on souls are... though that shouldn't matter, as we are a non-cannon forum anyway. STILL I personally don't like adding souls, ghosts and other otherwordly stuff in to an already very open minded world. And I would agree with RockBoy - a Steel only clan would be very managable and I would gladly approve it, however on that one very important condition - no souls involved.

Now also to clarify, you're not making Doton stronger, however Katon increases in temperature as it does, when the flame turns from red to blue - basic Chemistry teaching. Therefore, higher temperature means more burns and more damage, which does equal in a stronger element... so RockBoy was right and yet, don't worry! I wouldn't be denying this straight away either. Just please rework your clan around the aspect of Steel only, and we'll see how things progress from there on. I think you will have a very good shot at getting your clan approved then!
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukuru, Kōton Release Tsukuru, Kōton Release EmptyThu Sep 22, 2011 6:58 pm

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Mission Title: 100 Souls.
Mission Type: Profession - Generic.
Mission Location: Any Minor Country.
Shinobi Requirement: Must be a Craftsmen.
Mission Rank: A.
Mission Objective: For buckets of Ryo, a mysterious man has tasked you with the job of collecting 100 souls of people by killing them with a special sword. Your objective is to do so, and report back to him inside your village.
Mission Time Limit: Two weeks.
Min Post Count: 8.

This is the mission I was referring to. The clan isn't hunting for deceased souls, ghost hunting, or anything in that nature; the clan is adding the soul of the user to his/her weapon, like a bond, the whole concept of "This is my weapon, there are many like it, but this is mine". The weapon and the user is linked, bound together, the techniques are just used with their weapon that's bound to them. It's like I stated before, the clan isn't taking souls from other people and bestowing it upon their weapons. If you guys still won't allow that much in it, then fine, I will get rid of it, but personally, what's wrong with linking someone to their weapon?

Ah, I forgot about that. I will go ahead and change the fire from blue to red. Easy fix.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukuru, Kōton Release Tsukuru, Kōton Release EmptyFri Sep 23, 2011 3:05 am

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If you guys still won't allow that much in it, then fine, I will get rid of it, but personally, what's wrong with linking someone to their weapon?

You will be hurt when you're weapon is damaged and die when you're weapon is destroyed.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukuru, Kōton Release Tsukuru, Kōton Release EmptySun Jan 08, 2012 10:47 pm


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