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Doomquake
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| Subject: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Thu 03 Nov 2011, 8:43 am | |
| Kuroda, Chiba
THE INFO. Name: Kuroda, Chiba Nickname: Chi Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance: Chi has midnight black hair, with medium strands in wavy, uncombed fashion, his eyes are light grey and there is sadness in them from missing his kinsmen. He also has pinky, pale skin which is accustomed to the land of irons snow and cloudiness so he will burn easily as his skin is not used to the sun. He has a blood red scar running down the left side of his back after a training “accident”. He appears older than 14 being 5ft 10¨. He has a muscular and what looks like a much older boys body after hours of training with his father before he got to Konoha. He is 11 stone, from his large amount of muscle and thick bones. His diet consists of numerous healthy fruits and a balanced diet as upkeep for his powerful physique, and his stature is similar to that of a samurai, which isn’t surprising, considering his origin and upbringing. But unlike a samurai he was unusually tall. In the land of iron, he disliked wearing the samurai armor because it was unfitting to his stature, and they couldn’t find anything light enough in his size, and so he wore the civilian clothing. Chi wears fully black clothing; a dark black jacket with a hood he often puts up, a plain black shirt, and black trousers, tailored to fit him exactly, although he still wears black bandages tied around them to prevent any speed loss. The brightest thing about his clothing is the pendant around his neck, a leaving present from his mother, which is bright silver with his families emblem, she said that it would bring him good luck in his new life.
Personality: Chiba smiles often but does not laugh. People find this strange because he comes across as a happy person. Chi will often talk to him self for comfort. He has a relatively high IQ of 140 this is good because he finds that he can get good marks in tests and he is tactually aware. He is kind heart and will help out anyone in need. He did not like being a samurai because he was picked on for being taller unusually tall for a samurai. He also hated the amour because they were not built to fit him. He is the first samurai in his family to go to Konoha to be a ninja. He used to be told in the land of Iron that the was to merciful and he could easily do damage but never finish his opponents off. He was also the first samurai ever in his family to incorporate ninja techniques in his fighting style. He has a brilliant stamina and is able to run or fight for hours on end. Because of his stamina he will often train in his free time and if not that he will be messing about with his friends or reading. He hates genjutsu and thinks it is pointless. He stops concentrating the moment the lesson on it starts. He can quite often be mischievous and will play pranks and muck about only when no one else is around. He never wants to hurt anyone but will if he has to or his friends are hurt. He can also be very quick to anger and when he gets really furious he is not afraid to hurt anyone that has given him a reason to. He has an annoying habit to be prone to gaining weight and will become unfit if he does not train and exercise often. This is the main reason he will train for hours everyday.
Likes
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Swords Missions Mucking around with friends Training Ramen and sushi
Dislikes - Spoiler:
Sleeping Genjutsus Samurai armor
Clan: – Nindō: «If you waste your own time, your wasting your own soul» THE NINJA. Origin: Land of Iron Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato Rank: C ranked, Genin Specialties: - Spoiler:
Primary: Kenjutsu (Primary: Swords. Secondary: Exotic.) Secondary: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: - Spoiler:
Primary: Fuuton Secondary: Raiton Combat Style: He is a close quarters type fighter but will use shuriken to attack from a distance if the enemy is to powerful or as a sneak attack. He will only use kunai for close quarters. And use shuriken and jutsus only for long ranged. He prefers bladed weaponry and will almost always use it. The only time he will not is if he is not allowed to or they are broken and if they are that is his main weakness. He will use jutsus alot though.
Special Characteristics: - Spoiler:
Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort. THE BACKGROUND. History: Chiba was born and raised in the land of Iron. where his father was a high ranking official of the samurai. He was born on the tenth of October. As a baby he was sick as he was born prematurely. This meant that he had a bad start and as most samurai boys start training at 4 he started at 6. He got off to an amazing start when he did he was good for his age at brawling as his father had taught him the ropes and he was able to learn chakra techniques at an age of 9 which is great for a samurai. He left the village at the age of 11 because the village elders recommended that it would be good for him to be a ninja rather that a samurai. At first he did not want to go because he had heard stories about the ninja, but after a few weeks he soon realized he should go. He had a loving mother and father which made up for the fact he would be picked on by the older kids in his school. He was not liked by many of the people in the land of iron from the pranks he played and he did not really fit in but he never really understood why.
When he left the village as if to prove him self of his bravery he requested to go to Konoha by him self. This took him 3 weeks as he was not able to run as fast as the ninja. In the woods he learnt to track animals and find food but he enjoyed it because with out anyone there watching him he could do what ever he wanted. He made numerous hideouts from trees and bushes and after that he felt like he had learned to survive better in the woods which he thought might aid him on missions. In his time in the woods he got to work on the power of his jutsus and with out any other training before by the end of the time he could almost uproot a tree with his gale wind palm and heavily damage wood with his electromagnetic murder.
When he got to Konoha the village had already been told about his arrival so they sent a genin to show him to his apartment. He went to the academy 1 week after he arrived which meant he got lost often because he had not taken time to learn about his new surroundings. At first the people were mot used to land of iron kids and he was sometimes mistreated or excluded but after a while he started making lots of friends and got into the main gang. This was when he started to concentrate more and he started doing better in class. He was also doing well in blades and ninjutsu and pretty good at ninjutsu. The one thing he could not grasp was genjutsu to him that was pointless. He got to be friends with a Nara and was liked by his father and the father had told him that if he ever wanted a new place live he could come and be with them for a short while. At first the teachers doubted him and thought he did not have any potential but he proved them wrong and he shortly got stuck in and after a year had past he looked like he had a good future as a ninja.
Roleplay Sample: Chi awoke early tired and ravenous to the sound of birds chirping, he had only had four hours of sleep but he was used to that. As he lay there staring into space he could feel the ice cold metal of his necklace pressing deep into his skin. The smell of freshly baked bread wafted through his open window on the breeze. He stood up and looked around him. He through on the usual a panther black jacket with his families crest on over his plain black shirt. He sprinted out of his room and attacked the first thing he saw. Toast. Chomping it down like a wild beast. “Should I go on a run before academy?” He asked himself. He decided to as he slipped on his trainers and got going. He decided on running to the training field and doing something there. He headed in that direction. IOn his way he passed Ichiraku and waved to the owners preparing a steaming bowl of ramen for their first customer. “Hello!” He called to the builders working on an extension for BBQ. He reached his destination. Chi decided to start of practicing kicks and punches. So he went up to a tree and went mad. “1,2,3...97,98,99,100” The same again. “1,2,3...97,98,99,100” Next he decided to do sit ups and press ups. He left the training field sweaty and breathless. And not a moment to soon the class was about to start, he sprinted in the direction of the academy. He arrived 3 minuets late.
“Sorry sir.” Chi said, as he found his seat. “ Now since you are all here we will have a test. One written, one practical.” The teacher barked. Most of the class moaned in frustration as the teacher handed out the sheets. The sheet was simple 20 questions of simple questions. Chi flew through it but only question 17 was hard and it took him a few minuets to figure it out. “Hey Chi,” his best friend whispered. “Yeah.” He answered. “Do you want to come into town with us later?`’ His friend asked. "Sure after this.” For Chi the test seemed to go on for ever, the seconds dragged by and he started wishing he did not know it all already. To make up for time he decided to see of he could work on his cloning. "Sir can I go to the toilet?" He asked. The teacher nodded chi silently went out. He tiptoed along the hall way and whispered. "Bunshin no Jutsu." There was aloud and angry cough. "What do you think you are doing mister Kuroda." The teacher asked. " Just going back to class." Chi replied. As he was marched back to class. “Next!” the teacher bellowed. “You shall be fighting a clone of me, it will only be a fraction of my power but it will still be hard to beat. Some of the class looked ahead in horror. Chi was to be the seventh fighter and his fight soon came. The clone sent to fast punches and he evaded three of them but the fourth caught him off guard, he went sprawling back. He got up quickly and retorted with a series of kicks and punches to the stomach and head as the clone went flying from his hardest punch Chi had ever done. Chi thought of something. He did a gale palm which added extreme velocity to the clone and it hit the wall with a sickening crack. As the clone lay there in a daze chi uppercutted him to the jaw, which at first seemed like a good idea but then everything went horribly wrong. The pain from the punch re-awoken the clone and it sent a fury fueled punch Chi’s way. Chi tried to evade but could not, it caught him right in the stomach which made Chi double over in pain. The clone came with a smashing axe kick down on his back but Chi rolled away in the nick of time. He spun around on the floor tripping him up which sent the clone spinning along the ground. He quickly sent an axe kick down on the clones solar plexus. The clone stopped. He tried to get up but Chi was on him spearing him and making sure he could not get up. He jumped back landed lightly an the balls of his feet. Chi decided to quickly finish it, he sent an electromagnetic murder towards the clone hoping to stun the clone but it hit his temple, It may have only been a c-rank jutsu but anything is fatal to the temple. The clone’s body went into spasms and Chi released his Kakkou and drove it deep into the clones windpipe. The clone exploded into dust. “Well done mister Kuroda.” The teacher shouted. Chi smiled at him and then the earth seemed to rush up towards him and he blacked out.
Beep, beep, beep was all Chi could hear. He looked around him and recognized Konoha hospital’s children’s ward. “Rise and shine.” A young nurse said. “Excuse me but why am I here?” Chi asked. “Well after the fight you blacked out, this is because you were running low on blood you see when...” The nurse said. “ Ok spare me the lecture just tell me what is wrong.” He interrupted. The nurse looking a little surprised at the way she was being treated finally said. “ You are bleeding internally after the punches to your gut and your collar bone is fractured, is there anything I can get you by the way?” “Actually yes one pork and chicken ramen please.” Chi told her. “ Ok it will be five minuets.” The nurse told him. She hurried off to put in his request. Slumping back Chi smiled to him self. He left three days later. “Don’t do anything to strenuous,” the doctor had told him. He laughed remembering that as he sprinted off towards the training field.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc. Academy techniques. - Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1 Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1 Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1 Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1 Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4 Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3 Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Weapons. - Spoiler:
b]Name:[/b] Katana Rank: C Type: Primary/Melee Quantity: 1 Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
Name: Kakkou (Retractable Wrist Blade) Rank: C Type: Primary/Melee Quantity: 2 Description: As its name implies, the user equips these retractable wrist blades so that the attach to their forearm without risking exposure. These blades can spring forth when needed to surprise any opponent fought in hand to hand combat.
b]Name:[/b] Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Meters of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Fuuton
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Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques. Chakra Cost: 8
Raiton
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Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Konoha Only
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Name: Burēdo no Ha - Blades of Leaves Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m) Element: - Description: Burēdo no Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing leaves. By using the leaves that are scattered across the ground in the surrounding five metre radius, the user is able to lift ten leaves by using chakra alone and launch them at their opponent. If contact is made, the intended target will suffer from small scratches that the leaves have to offer. The technique will only be able to lift ten leaves at a time, it's also not strong enough to kill, only to scratch the flesh to the point of blood being drawn. Chakra Cost: 4 Kenjutsu. - Spoiler:
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them. Chakra Cost: 4 Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them. Chakra Cost: 4
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| | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32 Posts : 869
| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Thu 03 Nov 2011, 9:26 am | |
| You don't have taijutsu as specialty so remove them all and replace them with weaponry since you did put weaponry as specialty. Other than that it's good. |
| | | Doomquake
Age : 27 Posts : 38
| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Thu 03 Nov 2011, 9:46 am | |
| Changed taijutsu bump |
| | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32 Posts : 869
| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Thu 03 Nov 2011, 10:37 am | |
| And now you don't have ninjutsu as specialty.... Think before you chose what you want. |
| | | Doomquake
Age : 27 Posts : 38
| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Thu 03 Nov 2011, 7:47 pm | |
| I am confused what do I do?
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| | | Doomquake
Age : 27 Posts : 38
| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Sat 05 Nov 2011, 10:59 am | |
| Changed bump
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| | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32 Posts : 869
| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Sun 06 Nov 2011, 11:09 am | |
| Sorry for the wait, approved 1/2 Also remove the WiP from the title. I though you were still working on it. |
| | | Ashin
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| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Sun 06 Nov 2011, 7:37 pm | |
| Approval 2/2 |
| | | Cookie Monster
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| Subject: Re: Kuroda, Chiba [Konoha genin] Mon 09 Jan 2012, 4:05 am | |
| Archived.
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