more stuff for ling

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Name: Spark Gloves
Quantity: 2
Rank: D
Appearance: White gloves, fit nicely, no visible seams
Special Abilities/Characteristics: These gloves are coated in a special material, that when rubbed together quickly(such as in snapping your fingers), they spark.
Origin: In order to create fire based attacks, Ling created these gloves, allowing him to create a spark, which he can then amplify, with alchemy.

Name: Ling’s Big ol’ toothpick
Rank: E
Type: Basic Item
Natural Abilities: None, it’s just a hard wood toothpick, that’s a good 8 inches long. He’s been known to use alchemy to use it offensively, but only in an insulting manner.

Name: Distance Transmutation Kunai
Quantity: 10
Rank: C/B/Moderate
Appearance: A very simple kunai, except for the white tag on the end, which has a special transmutation circle in red, which resembles a pentacle.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: To do a long distance transmutation, Ling will throw five of these, which form the points of the pentagram. This allows him to send alchemical energy over a distance ranging from 10 to 30 meters. He is limited to Basic and Moderate transmutations for this message, however. Ling can also draw pre-scribed pentagrams on an area he knows will be a battlefield, and use them for surprise attacks. The Major drawback, however, is that alchemy costs one rank more (a pre basic is basic, basic is moderate, and moderate is complex).
Origin: Studying the eastern alchemy of his old country, Ling learned of this method of transmutation. It allows the channeling of energy through the earth and air, allowing transmutation to be done over a distance. Because the energy isn't used instantly, however, more must be used, hence the rank increase.

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ραττýcακëš wrote:: Name: Distance Transmutation Kunai
Quantity: 10
Rank: C/Moderate
Appearance: A very simple kunai, except for the white tag on the end, which has a special transmutation circle in red, which resembles a pentacle.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: To do a long distance transmutation, Ling will throw five of these, which form the points of the pentagram. This allows him to send alchemical energy over a distance ranging from 10 to 30 meters. He is limited to Basic and Moderate transmutations for this message, however. Ling can also draw pre-scribed pentagrams on an area he knows will be a battlefield, and use them for surprise attacks. The Major drawback, however, is that alchemy costs one rank more (a pre basic is basic, basic is moderate, and moderate is complex).
Origin: Studying the eastern alchemy of his old country, Ling learned of this method of

I think some of the Origin was cut off. Or is that just me?

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Yeah, my bad! Fixed now =]

Age : 37 Posts : 1136

Sparks gloves should be made D rank

Distance Transmutation Kunai should be made B rank

Otherwise looks fine

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Well, I mean spark is prebasic/basic

which is the equivalent of E/D

and the distance transmutation is moderate

which is the equivalent of C/B

Age : 37 Posts : 1136

Roger. Approved

Posts : 126

I'm going to start by apologizing. I know it looks like I'm picking on you, but that isn't my intention.

My problem is with your Distance Transmutation Kunai. While you have weaponry, a kunai with a special seal is more of a fuuin thing then a weaponry thing. I'm sorry to say that I can't approve of a weapon that consists of a normal kunai with a special tag that lets you transmute over a distance without the fuuin spec or someone who made them for you, in which case you would be limited to a certain number which would be permanently used up after use. Thus the person would have to do threads to keep making more for you as you used them.

Unapproved.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

haha, again...Ling is gone, these may be deleted, or preferably archived.