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REM
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| Subject: Kaitou Clan Sat 10 Apr 2010, 11:36 am | |
| Clan Name: Kaitou Clan Location: Sound Village (Originated) Present: Scattered Clan Traits: Special Attunement to Oto(Sound) element. Acute hearing. Kekkei Genkai:
Founding of Bloodline The bloodline was founded by the founders whose name is unknown trained for days at a time. She placed herself in dangerous situations to test her ability controlling sound. She would infiltrate villages at night and sneak into high security areas. On one of these little missions she encountered a man under interrogation in Konoha. She watched from a distance as the man blew them away by unleashing sound chakra. She was amazed by his strength and confronted the man. The man startled shot another blast at the founder. She managed to avoid this and a fight continued. Eventually they both tied from lack of chakra and after much silence spoke to each other…some years later after this they were married and the bloodline was established from the union of two very powerful sound users.
Abilities for users of the Bloodline
Ninjutsu Users: The users of Ninjutsu are considered one of the most powerful in the clan; they manipulate the bloodline to the greatest extent. They can eliminate all sounds or make sounds, imitate people’s voices and shoot large amounts of sound chakra from their mouths or hands. These users receive the most training and attention due to the fact that they could be one of the most powerful tools to the country and clan. There have been exceptions to this if the parent had betrayed the village the child will receive even more attention then others and be taught forbidden Jutsu of the clan to avenge the honor of his immediate family
Taijutsu users: The Taijutsu users are the other powerful bloodline application. The Taijutsu users of the clan are taught to focus of power of their bloodline into their feet and fists to cause more damage upon impact, they are also taught to some extent how to mask the sounds of their attacks and sounds they make. There are some very unique and inventive Jutsu made for Taijutsu users of this clan with the bloodline ability.
Genjutsu users: Genjutsu users are so rare and few to the clan that there is almost no training regiment for them what so ever. The Genjutsu users are often left to their own training and told to make the clan proud and invent Jutsu and training regiments for themselves, the council hopes after many years of this they will have the Genjutsu area of their clan developed from learning from the regiments and Jutsu from them.
Other: Bloodline users that go into other professions are not well known and is highly doubted they would be of any use to them.
History:
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CLAN HISTORY:
Clan History: B.V before villages. The beginnings of this clan are not very clear but it is assumed that two great sound users became married and wished for their children to learn the ability to control sound. They settled in the area now known as Oto. For the first few years of the clans beginning the 2nd founder (The male/Husband of the founder) stole to support his family. He stole many artifacts from the Wind country to The Sea country. (Some still located in the compound) With each successful theft the house they lived in grew larger and larger. Eighteen years later the once small house they lived in had grown into a large compound. The Founder had eight children at this time and three of them had the bloodline trait.
The 2nd founder started to take the three on missions with him to steal from other countries. While on missions he taught them some of the basic principles they should follow (most of which are now laws to the clan). Over the next ten years some of the children of the founder took wives and husbands of their own. In this generation seven out of sixteen had the bloodline. In this generation the bloodline found other uses other then thievery. Some of the children found battle use for the Bloodline by accidentally blowing a hole in the wall of the compound while training their Taijutsu. The 2nd was impressed by this and actually sought training from his grandchild. Over the next twenty years the clan grew from a medium sized family living together under one roof of a very large compound which was ever growing, to a large family of about fifty living under one roof. The founder decided that she wanted to go on one more mission (even though she was 59 by now) sadly she never returned from that mission. The 2nd was crushed by his loss and went into depression.
The 2nd generation of the Keepers now had to take on the responsibility of supporting the clan. The eldest of the clan decided to establish a code for those who left the compound to steal for the clan or earn money. The eldest of the clan was a woman, and two men. They were the first Council of the keepers. The clan devolved for many years. Then after their power had grown and their numbers were around one hundred and fifty villages started to be founded. The keepers had already established their power so they did not fear the villages, but they did build an underground complex under the complex for those who could not fight to hide if they ever came under attack. The council saw the villages as potential prey, now that people were in even larger groups it would be easier to find and steal artifacts of great worth. This is how tensions between the clan and other villages were formed. The clan keeps stealing objects of power and worth to this day.
When Oto (the village) was established, the clan sought an alliance since it always helped the weak and poor, the clan did not say this but offered their power and skills to protect it. Oto accepted and the large clan merged somewhat with the country and village. The clans non bloodline users either became normal ninja who left to other villages given the choice to go to another village, or stay loyal to Oto, false loyalty is a dangerous thing and that is why the council decided to do this. Surprisingly very few left Oto and the clan maintained its power and now was in all levels of society. Recently since Orochimaru’s death the clan has sent a request to the new Otokage to became her personal guard.
Clan Information: The Keepers is a clan has been used in many missions and given many important positions. They are in every level of society in Oto from the humble shop keeper to the village or government official. The clan is very fanatical about Oto and would do anything for the good of the village. They would be the kind of people who would go on a suicide mission if it meant the betterment of the village and clan. They would be hunter-ninja, and used in stealing and covert infiltration most of the time.
There are still those who excel in hand to hand combat and guarding Prominent Officials. They are very friendly with the other clans that inhabit Oto and are one of the richest in Oto. They gain their riches through obtaining rare items from enemy countries then selling them on the black market to the highest bidder. The clan is a government within a government and has its own rules as well as following the village’s rules.
Clan Details: Open [Just PM me if you want to join]
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| | | REM
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| Subject: Re: Kaitou Clan Mon 12 Apr 2010, 11:27 am | |
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Secret Clan Jutsu: Name: Immobilizing Blast Rank: C Range: N/A Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The user will focus Chakra into their lungs and build it up over a long period of time constantly (1 post). During the time of the charging the user will not be able to speak or the Chakra will be unleashed. Only so much chakra can be focused into the lungs into it involuntarily is let out of the lungs and will come out of the mouth of the user no matter what is going on. This does not cause anything more then temporary Deafness, Extreme head aches. But it will cause extreme pain to those with sensitive hearing. This is commonly used with Genin of the Keepers.
Name: Minor Sound Manipulation Rank: C Range: Medium (Within ten meters) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers escription: The user will perform the needed hand seals, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around an object and eliminate the sound by controlling the movement of said particles. This Jutsu is such a low level that it cannot eliminate anymore than the sounds of creaking floors or heavy breathing any louder than those and the Jutsu will be ineffective not doing anything at all to dull the sound.
Name: Sounds of the Wild Rank: C Range: N/A Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The user will perform the needed hand seal, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around his/her mouth in a specific way. They will then make soft noises or then manipulate them as they are made and will change the sound into maybe a cat meowing or a dog barking. This is very useful when a guard is suspicious of something and wonders what is around. Genin will not and I repeat will not be able to manipulate the air particles around their mouths well enough to impersonate some ones voice.
Taijutsu Rank C
Name: Sound Barrage Rank: C Range: Punching and Kicking Distance. Jutsu type: Taijutsu/Bloodline Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The Taijutsu user will send sound chakra into their hands and quickly jab at the opponent sending shock waves around them by vibrating the sound particles with their bloodline so even if they miss they will cause the opponent to be disoriented making it easier for him/her to be hit. The disorientation lasts for a mere 1 post. The shockwave is strong enough to knockback them for a few meters.
Name: Sound Disruption Rank: C Range: Punching and kicking distance Jutsu type: Bloodline/Taijutsu/Style Elemental affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: This is a style in which the keepers utilize their bloodline by focusing sound Chakra into their hands and feet. After this is done they will attack and create minor disturbances which can cause the opponent to get massive head aches blurred vision and loss of some hearing for a short time. This can be a very effective Style but the downside is it can drain Chakra at a fast rate. The technique itself can be kept as long as the chakra of the user can supply the required chakra. And its effects only lasts for 1 post.
Taijutsu rank B
Name: Open Palm blast Rank B Range: Close (1 to 3 meters) Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/bloodline Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The user will focus Sound Chakra into their palm and shoot their palm forward while it faces at the target, The sound will push the target back and possibly cause some minor internal damage (bleeding no organ damage at this level) . The the ninja lands a hit the target will become disoriented for a short time opening him/her up for attack.
Name: Deafness (Taijutsu) Rank: B Range: Close ( Within 2 inches of the Targets ears) Jutsu type: Taijutsu Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The User will focus sound Chakra into their fists and throw punches at the sides of the targets head, when the fist comes close to the ear the user will release the Chakra in a blast large enough and close enough to the targets ear to rupture the targets ear drum causing intense pain and possible deafness.
NINJUTSU RANK B
Name: Deafness Rank: B Range: Close (within five meters) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The user will perform the needed hand seals, then using his/her bloodline will manipulate the air particales in the targets ear. They will manipulate it in a way to block out all sound except very loud sounds at close range. This is achievable because the entrance to the ear is so small that it does not take much to control the particales in such a small area. The downside to this is you must keep the hand seal formed for it to stay in effect, Some have been able to accomplish this with one hand but it has only been achieved by Jounin.
Name:Voice changing technique Rank: B Range: N/A Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The user will perform the hand seal, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around his/her mouth in a specific way to mimic the voice of a person. The user must have heard this voice before to be able to mimic the sound vibrations. This goes great with Face stealing Jutsu and other under cover Jutsu.
NINJUSTU RANK A & S
Name: Sound elimination Rank: A & S Range: (1 to 20 meters) Jutsu: Ninjutsu Elemental affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: This is the much more advanced control of the Sound control of the keepers. It requires years of training and Practice but once mastered the user will be able to eliminate all but the loudest of sounds but if the user uses almost all of his Chakra he can eliminate all sound for a short time within a twenty meter radius
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| | | Dan
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| Subject: Re: Kaitou Clan Tue 13 Apr 2010, 1:36 pm | |
| Mhmmm. Alright then.
Name: Immobilizing Blast Rank: C Range: N/A Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The user will focus Chakra into their lungs and build it up over a long period of time, During the time of the charging the user will not be able to speak or the Chakra will be unleashed. Only so much chakra can be focused into the lungs into it involuntarily is let out of the lungs and will come out of the mouth of the user no matter what is going on. This does not cause anything more then temporary Deafness, Extreme head aches. But it will cause extreme pain to those with sensitive hearing. This is commonly used with Genin of the Keepers.
---How long is a 'long period of time?' as stated in your first and second lines. ---I don't honestly believe this Jutsu is worthy to be of 'C' ranked Chakra and rank. Temporary Deafness, Extreme Headaches and extreme pain is not C ranked worthy.
Name: Sound Barrage Rank: C Range: Punching and Kicking Distance. Jutsu type: Taijutsu/Bloodline Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The Taijutsu user will send sound chakra into their hands and quickly jab at the opponent sending shock waves around them by vibrating the sound particles with their bloodline so even if they miss they will cause the opponent to be disoriented making it easier for him/her to be hit.
---How long does this disorientation last and how strong is this shockwave?
Name: Sound Disruption Rank: C Range: Punching and kicking distance Jutsu type: Bloodline/Taijutsu/Style Elemental affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: This is a style in which the keepers utilize their bloodline by focusing sound Chakra into their hands and feet. After this is done they will attack and create minor disturbances which can cause the opponent to get massive head aches blurred vision and loss of some hearing for a short time. This can be a very effective Style but the downside is it can drain Chakra at a fast rate.
---Again, how long will this last and how strong/effective is this?
Name: Thunder Punch Rank: A Range: Close ( within 3 meters deadly , 10 meters possible Major Damage, 20 meters Nasty head ache and blurred vision) Jutsu Type: Taijutsu Elemental Affinity: Sound Clan: Keepers Description: The Jounin level clan bloodline user member will focus a large amount of Chakra into his fist and punch at the enemy’s direction a A Large blast of Sound Chakra will be launched from his Fist at such High power that the ground underneath the blast will crack and crumble launching large amounts of Dirt into the air. The blast looks like a distortion in the air similar to the look of heat coming off a fire. If the user is hit with the blast at close range ( within 3 meters) The sound will tear apart his body from the force of the blast, Ten meters will cause bleeding of organs which can be fatal and 20 meters will cause severe head aches and blurred vision. ( This attack will take 2 – 3 posts to prepare since it is so high powered ) ( This you will also need to use the system used by Suna to gain it.)
---I do not like this Jutsu one bit. Too overpowered for such a bad description and too overpowered for an A rank Taijutsu attack. I would strongly suggest changing the rank of this jutsu or the effects of it. Lessen it.
This application needs to be massive tidied up. Spelling and Grammar are a must! As well as simple details such as the spacings between Clan: and Description: I would suggest following the example of my own app, Sousakara Clan |
| | | REM
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| Subject: Re: Kaitou Clan Tue 13 Apr 2010, 2:03 pm | |
| All jutsus explained, Thunder Punch jutsu Removed.
And made it better. |
| | | Dan
Age : 30 Posts : 1236
| Subject: Re: Kaitou Clan Tue 13 Apr 2010, 2:57 pm | |
| Your first jutsu is fine! There are no spaces between the clan and description like in your first, i want that for the rest! Then I'll continue. |
| | | REM
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| Subject: Re: Kaitou Clan Fri 16 Apr 2010, 4:00 pm | |
| BUMP? |
| | | Dan
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| Subject: Re: Kaitou Clan Fri 16 Apr 2010, 4:15 pm | |
| Mhmm. I thought I had approved this for you Kessen. I apologize.
Approved. |
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