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PostSubject: Kaitou Clan Kaitou Clan EmptySat 10 Apr 2010, 11:36 am

    Clan Name: Kaitou
    Clan Location: Sound Village (Originated) Present: Scattered
    Clan Traits: Special Attunement to Oto(Sound) element. Acute hearing.
    Kekkei Genkai:

    Founding of Bloodline
    The bloodline was founded by the founders whose name is unknown trained for days at a time. She placed herself in dangerous situations to test her ability controlling sound. She would infiltrate villages at night and sneak into high security areas. On one of these little missions she encountered a man under interrogation in Konoha. She watched from a distance as the man blew them away by unleashing sound chakra. She was amazed by his strength and confronted the man. The man startled shot another blast at the founder. She managed to avoid this and a fight continued. Eventually they both tied from lack of chakra and after much silence spoke to each other…some years later after this they were married and the bloodline was established from the union of two very powerful sound users.

    Abilities for users of the Bloodline

    Ninjutsu Users: The users of Ninjutsu are considered one of the most powerful in the clan; they manipulate the bloodline to the greatest extent. They can eliminate all sounds or make sounds, imitate people’s voices and shoot large amounts of sound chakra from their mouths or hands. These users receive the most training and attention due to the fact that they could be one of the most powerful tools to the country and clan. There have been exceptions to this if the parent had betrayed the village the child will receive even more attention then others and be taught forbidden Jutsu of the clan to avenge the honor of his immediate family

    Taijutsu users: The Taijutsu users are the other powerful bloodline application. The Taijutsu users of the clan are taught to focus of power of their bloodline into their feet and fists to cause more damage upon impact, they are also taught to some extent how to mask the sounds of their attacks and sounds they make. There are some very unique and inventive Jutsu made for Taijutsu users of this clan with the bloodline ability.

    Genjutsu users: Genjutsu users are so rare and few to the clan that there is almost no training regiment for them what so ever. The Genjutsu users are often left to their own training and told to make the clan proud and invent Jutsu and training regiments for themselves, the council hopes after many years of this they will have the Genjutsu area of their clan developed from learning from the regiments and Jutsu from them.

    Other: Bloodline users that go into other professions are not well known and is highly doubted they would be of any use to them.

    History:
    Symbol Unknown
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    Clan Details:
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou Clan Kaitou Clan EmptyMon 12 Apr 2010, 11:27 am

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Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: Immobilizing Blast
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The user will focus Chakra into their lungs and build it up over a long period of time constantly (1 post). During the time of the charging the user will not be able to speak or the Chakra will be unleashed. Only so much chakra can be focused into the lungs into it involuntarily is let out of the lungs and will come out of the mouth of the user no matter what is going on. This does not cause anything more then temporary Deafness, Extreme head aches. But it will cause extreme pain to those with sensitive hearing. This is commonly used with Genin of the Keepers.

Name: Minor Sound Manipulation
Rank: C
Range: Medium (Within ten meters)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
escription: The user will perform the needed hand seals, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around an object and eliminate the sound by controlling the movement of said particles. This Jutsu is such a low level that it cannot eliminate anymore than the sounds of creaking floors or heavy breathing any louder than those and the Jutsu will be ineffective not doing anything at all to dull the sound.

Name: Sounds of the Wild
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The user will perform the needed hand seal, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around his/her mouth in a specific way. They will then make soft noises or then manipulate them as they are made and will change the sound into maybe a cat meowing or a dog barking. This is very useful when a guard is suspicious of something and wonders what is around. Genin will not and I repeat will not be able to manipulate the air particles around their mouths well enough to impersonate some ones voice.

Taijutsu Rank C

Name: Sound Barrage
Rank: C
Range: Punching and Kicking Distance.
Jutsu type: Taijutsu/Bloodline
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The Taijutsu user will send sound chakra into their hands and quickly jab at the opponent sending shock waves around them by vibrating the sound particles with their bloodline so even if they miss they will cause the opponent to be disoriented making it easier for him/her to be hit. The disorientation lasts for a mere 1 post. The shockwave is strong enough to knockback them for a few meters.

Name: Sound Disruption
Rank: C
Range: Punching and kicking distance
Jutsu type: Bloodline/Taijutsu/Style
Elemental affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: This is a style in which the keepers utilize their bloodline by focusing sound Chakra into their hands and feet. After this is done they will attack and create minor disturbances which can cause the opponent to get massive head aches blurred vision and loss of some hearing for a short time. This can be a very effective Style but the downside is it can drain Chakra at a fast rate. The technique itself can be kept as long as the chakra of the user can supply the required chakra. And its effects only lasts for 1 post.

Taijutsu rank B

Name: Open Palm blast
Rank B
Range: Close (1 to 3 meters)
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/bloodline
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The user will focus Sound Chakra into their palm and shoot their palm forward while it faces at the target, The sound will push the target back and possibly cause some minor internal damage (bleeding no organ damage at this level) . The the ninja lands a hit the target will become disoriented for a short time opening him/her up for attack.

Name: Deafness (Taijutsu)
Rank: B
Range: Close ( Within 2 inches of the Targets ears)
Jutsu type: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The User will focus sound Chakra into their fists and throw punches at the sides of the targets head, when the fist comes close to the ear the user will release the Chakra in a blast large enough and close enough to the targets ear to rupture the targets ear drum causing intense pain and possible deafness.

NINJUTSU RANK B

Name: Deafness
Rank: B
Range: Close (within five meters)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The user will perform the needed hand seals, then using his/her bloodline will manipulate the air particales in the targets ear. They will manipulate it in a way to block out all sound except very loud sounds at close range. This is achievable because the entrance to the ear is so small that it does not take much to control the particales in such a small area. The downside to this is you must keep the hand seal formed for it to stay in effect, Some have been able to accomplish this with one hand but it has only been achieved by Jounin.

Name:Voice changing technique
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The user will perform the hand seal, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around his/her mouth in a specific way to mimic the voice of a person. The user must have heard this voice before to be able to mimic the sound vibrations. This goes great with Face stealing Jutsu and other under cover Jutsu.


NINJUSTU RANK A & S

Name: Sound elimination
Rank: A & S
Range: (1 to 20 meters)
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Elemental affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: This is the much more advanced control of the Sound control of the keepers. It requires years of training and Practice but once mastered the user will be able to eliminate all but the loudest of sounds but if the user uses almost all of his Chakra he can eliminate all sound for a short time within a twenty meter radius



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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou Clan Kaitou Clan EmptyTue 13 Apr 2010, 1:36 pm

Mhmmm. Alright then.




Name: Immobilizing Blast
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The user will focus Chakra into their lungs and build it up over a long period of time, During the time of the charging the user will not be able to speak or the Chakra will be unleashed. Only so much chakra can be focused into the lungs into it involuntarily is let out of the lungs and will come out of the mouth of the user no matter what is going on. This does not cause anything more then temporary Deafness, Extreme head aches. But it will cause extreme pain to those with sensitive hearing. This is commonly used with Genin of the Keepers.

---How long is a 'long period of time?' as stated in your first and second lines.
---I don't honestly believe this Jutsu is worthy to be of 'C' ranked Chakra and rank. Temporary Deafness, Extreme Headaches and extreme pain is not C ranked worthy.




Name: Sound Barrage
Rank: C
Range: Punching and Kicking Distance.
Jutsu type: Taijutsu/Bloodline
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The Taijutsu user will send sound chakra into their hands and quickly jab at the opponent sending shock waves around them by vibrating the sound particles with their bloodline so even if they miss they will cause the opponent to be disoriented making it easier for him/her to be hit.

---How long does this disorientation last and how strong is this shockwave?




Name: Sound Disruption
Rank: C
Range: Punching and kicking distance
Jutsu type: Bloodline/Taijutsu/Style
Elemental affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: This is a style in which the keepers utilize their bloodline by focusing sound Chakra into their hands and feet. After this is done they will attack and create minor disturbances which can cause the opponent to get massive head aches blurred vision and loss of some hearing for a short time. This can be a very effective Style but the downside is it can drain Chakra at a fast rate.

---Again, how long will this last and how strong/effective is this?




Name: Thunder Punch
Rank: A
Range: Close ( within 3 meters deadly , 10 meters possible Major Damage, 20 meters Nasty head ache and blurred vision)
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sound
Clan: Keepers
Description: The Jounin level clan bloodline user member will focus a large amount of Chakra into his fist and punch at the enemy’s direction a A Large blast of Sound Chakra will be launched from his Fist at such High power that the ground underneath the blast will crack and crumble launching large amounts of Dirt into the air. The blast looks like a distortion in the air similar to the look of heat coming off a fire. If the user is hit with the blast at close range ( within 3 meters) The sound will tear apart his body from the force of the blast, Ten meters will cause bleeding of organs which can be fatal and 20 meters will cause severe head aches and blurred vision. ( This attack will take 2 – 3 posts to prepare since it is so high powered ) ( This you will also need to use the system used by Suna to gain it.)

---I do not like this Jutsu one bit. Too overpowered for such a bad description and too overpowered for an A rank Taijutsu attack. I would strongly suggest changing the rank of this jutsu or the effects of it. Lessen it.






This application needs to be massive tidied up. Spelling and Grammar are a must! As well as simple details such as the spacings between Clan: and Description:
I would suggest following the example of my own app, Sousakara Clan
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou Clan Kaitou Clan EmptyTue 13 Apr 2010, 2:03 pm

All jutsus explained, Thunder Punch jutsu Removed.

And made it better.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou Clan Kaitou Clan EmptyTue 13 Apr 2010, 2:57 pm

Your first jutsu is fine! There are no spaces between the clan and description like in your first, i want that for the rest! Then I'll continue.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou Clan Kaitou Clan EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010, 4:00 pm

BUMP?
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou Clan Kaitou Clan EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010, 4:15 pm

Mhmm. I thought I had approved this for you Kessen. I apologize.

Approved.
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