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Ambience
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| Subject: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Wed 10 Mar 2010, 3:49 pm | |
| Basic Information:
Name: Amber Kimojo Secondary Title: N/A Age: 13 Gender: Female
Physical Appearance: Amber is a small cute little girl. She weighs 97 pounds and is 5'3". Her skin is a light tan, with deep hues of dark. In the summer her skin seems to be a golden crisp color, useally from the dark pigments in her skin. Her hair is dark brown with little hints of blonde here and there. Not like a untidy blonde but it blends in with her brown. It is always brushed and hangs down to her mid back. She takes pride in her hair. Ambers eyes are bright blue, like crystal water. Most say they can she there own face in her eyes.
She loves the color white and blue, which is why most of her wardrobe is colored as such. She loves to wear robes adn kimonos, to cover up the netting she wears under her robe. This is for light weight running and mobility. Her head band rest above her eyes on her forhead, but i shidden by her hair that extends over her face. She loves to cover her face with her hair for she thinks she is ugly, which is oppsite of what everyone else claims. Her shoes are most of the time padded shinobi shoes, or comfortable running shoes. As long as it is comfortable.
Personality: The best way to describe amber is a sweet fun loving girl who has no fears or worries. She is the type to always smile even when to worst of things has just happened, sadness is not something she finds a custom to. In fact when it gets down to it she actually hates to be around people with sour and hateful attitudes. Amber is always out playing and having a good time, trying to find ways to get stronger but have a little fun also. She enjoys humor and often is seen around the village pulling pranks and messing with other people, but all in a good manner.
In actually combat sh ekeeps the same personality, with a slight adjustment due to she knows oh to well that life is on the line in combat. Amber will back her friends up and stay by there side, even if it means death for her. Betrayle is one thing she can not stand, not matter who it is from. She will never back down from a fight unless she knows there is no other choice, and will always find the best situation to make sure everyone comes out safe. Death is not an option in many cases fo rher, and could be a majior downfall for her. She will hinder a enemey and often let them go except for cases in which her own life is hanging by the line.
Overall amber is a kind gentle person with a wild imagination and act for fun. Her favorite past time is swimming, finding it relaxing to lay in a nice hotspring and just glide under its surface. She enjoyes company and tried to keep people around her at all times, and if they are in a bad mood she would be happy to cheer them up. Most see her as the life of the party, the girl you will never forget.
Clan Information:
Clan Name: N/A Clan Location: N/A Clan Traits: N/A Kekkei Genkai: N/A Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A History: N/A
Rank Information:
Rank:Genin Village Affiliation:Konoha
Special Information:
Character Speciality: Main:Ninjutsu Sub:Medical Elemental Affinity: Main: Wind Sub: Fire Special Characteristics:Amber has a unique act for telling if people are lyeing or not, she can sense when something is told to her and if the intentions of what was said are bad or good. This helps when dealing with hostiles for she can tell if they are trying to tell her something that is not true. Also Amber is adept in the medical feild, so she can tell when someone is poisoned and most of the time what kind it is. She has a slightly larger immunity to basic poisons, like she never gets poison ivy and can breath is posoinus gas and smoke.
Skill Information:
Jutsu Template:
Basic ninjutsu
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Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E-S Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D-S Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Cannon Fire
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Name: Endan - Fireball Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.
Cannon wind
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Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Custom Medical
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Name: High Rise Type: Medical Rank: C Element: Fire Description: The jutsu takes effect in a ten foot radius area. The area is filled with medical chakra, but anyone who is within the area will start to feel a rise in tempature. There tempature will rise ten degrees for every post they are within the area of effection. If there tempature hits deadly hiegths they could pass out and suffer damage to their brain and other mental functions. Medical use/Bastardized use: This is used to rise low tempatures in the body, if someone is frezzing or suffering from majoir cold tempature the jutsu can be used to bring a patient back to normal tempature.
Name: Thin cutter Type: Medical Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Chakra will flow onto her hands and create small sharp spikes on her finger tips. The chakra flows up and down creating a cutting like movement. The cuts can only go one inch deep but will sever anything it touches. Can not go through metal but can slice clothing, rubber and other easy to cut objects. Bone is also able to withstand the cutters due to its strength. The cutters only form on the middle three fingers of both hands, and can be used willingly. As for strength and duration they last as long as the user wants, but uses up chakra the entire time. Medical use/Bastardized use: Is used when operating on someone to cut open the skin with out causing much damage. this can be used to remove a weapon or cut a dead nerve.
Name: Rebreath Type: Medical Rank: D Element: Wind Description: A large amount of air will fill up in the users lungs. this air is normal air that humans need to breath. Can be shot from the mouth. is not very strong but can blow out flames or project small objects. Medical use/Bastardized use: Is used when comrads or others have lost breath, cant breath or have taken in poison in the lungs. Can be used to refill lungs or pump out deadly poison they have breath in.
Name: Immune shut down Type: Medical Rank: C-S Element: N/A Description: The jutsu will fill the users mouth with chakra. This chakra is medical based. When the user breaths onto the target the chakra will enter through pores on the skin and enter the blood stream. This will shut down the immune system of the target. The better then ninja the stronger it shuts it down. At C rank and B rank the immune system with slow down but still be functional. It will be affected by small things like the flu and so forth. At A ranked the system is damaged enough that more virus and such can be caught and the effected gets sick very fast and often. At S rank the immune system is gone, destroyed and the target is able to catch just about anything at anytime. Medical use/Bastardized use: This is used to allow certian medicines and antidotes to be used on someone without being destroyed by there bodies protective immune system.
Name: Minor heal Type: Medical Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Chakra will cover her hands. This chakra will be medical chakra capiable of healing small cuts, wounds and any for of elemental damage. Can only heal very small areas and only minor wounds such as cuts and burns. Can heal small wounds to the upper layers of th eskin, mostly only effecting areas up to two inchs. Medical use/Bastardized use: Used to heal of any damage or attacks. Is minor but can take away pain from small attacks.
Custom Non-elemental
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Name: Minor detect Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: After the seal is preformed the user will be able to see any forms of chakra trails or presences in a fifteen foot area. This allows her to be able to see any hidden person or where someone has been. this is useful in ambushes and tracking a certain person. No matter how to person tries to hide themselves she will be able to see there chakra presence for up to fifteen feet.
Name: Night eye Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Is a simple jutsu that allows the user to be able to see in any type of darkness. No matter how dark it is the jutsu will fill the eye retana with chakra, allowing light to be filtered and make seeing in the dark so much easier.
custom wind
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Name: Up lift Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: A small burst of wind will burst from either under the user or under someone else in a ten foot area. This burst of air is used to propel someone higher up into the air, like a super jump. This air will send someone up to twenty feet in the air, and then send them back down to the ground. The jutsu can only be used on a target already above the ground, in mid air. A small jet of air will push off the ground sending them higher than they already are.
Name: Body wind Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: After the two signs wind will begin to spin around the user creating a small sort of vortex. This is used for defense most times but of used correctly can be a great attack. The wind will spin around the user at close to 70 mph, used to block taijutsu attacks and weak elemental attacks.
Name: Instant wave Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: Does not require any hand seals or signs. At the will of the user a small gust of wind will be shot from the users hand or any other area of force. All that is needed is a fast push of an object to give the wind a moving medium. Name: Great push Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: A small wave of wind will be pushed out from the users body in a 360 area. Acts as a push agaisnt weapons or close range attacks. Can be bested by strong attacks or really fast movement.
Custom fire
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Name: Heated spit Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: The salvia of the user will become heated in the mouth by fire chakra. This will not hurt the user. This can be spat or placed on an object. As the target touches the spit a strong burning sensation will be felt in the body. Not an actually burn but the feeling of hot and burning. Name: Fire lash Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: After the two seals a long string of fire will form in the users hand. A whip like shape will form out of the fire and be tangible by the user. This can be swung around much like a whip but is easy to blow away with a wind based attack.
Weapon Template:
Name: Duel Kantamaru Fans Quantity: two Rank: D Appearance: - Spoiler:
The frame is made out of light weight steel to make it stronger. The cover is made from animal hide and does not tear easily. Special Abilities/Characteristics: Two mid sized fans that can close up and be conceal under her robes. Can be used to disarm or block a weapon, but is ultimatly used in conjunction with her wind style ninjutsu, used to blow gust fo wind. Origin: Both fans belonged to her mother, were used also in battle. They were given to her by her grand mother, which in turn got them from one of the leaders of tea country. her grandmother was sent on a mission to the tea country and completed it well. As a reward the fans were given to her as a gift. As they got older the fans were reworked on and past down to amber.
Item Template:
Name: Med kit Rank: D Type: Supplment Natural Abilities: A small bag of knives scaples and scissors used to work on a sick or infected person. Can not used to attack fo rthey are small and easy to break. Can however be used in battle if time and situation permit.
Name: Antidote for numbing venom Rank: C Type: Medicine Natural Abilities: Can cure and heal effects from the numbing venom before the intended time for it to have worn off.
Poison Name: Numbing Venom Rank: C Poison Description:Is a light greenish pale color that is slightly gloopy. Its a liquid in the sense that it is free forming and moves as gravity permits, but its not a clean as water, having a slimy texture to it. It is in a clear container with a seal closed lid, no holes in the top. Amber keeps it in her weapon pouch with her kuni and shurkin. Liquid State: Poison Effect(s):The Numbing venom is used how its name describes. It is used to numb small parts of th ebody, killing any feeling and/ or control to that part. This can both be used in working on someone to cut them or remove smoething, or used in battle to disarm someone from useing a weapon or completed a attack. The area is only a hale a foot that can be affected. So if the hand is cut and the venom is exposed to the cut, the hand will go numb. [ Post 0 / Turn of Infection/Injection] [ Post 1 /Feeling is lost to that are, but can still be moved and used ] [ Post 2 / Feeling is completly gone and the area cant not be moved or used] [ Post 3 / The poison is entered the blood stream, the part is completly useless to the target] [ Post 4 / poison has wore off]
Background Information
History: Birth-Amber was born to Masikoto, her father, and kimoko her mother. They lived in a one story house just outside the main part of the village. In the small little community of living space where many middle class ninja lived and worked. Her dad was a former anbu black ops member, but nobody other than amber and her mother knew that. To many people he was a simple black smith that lived in the village and provided many of the shinobi with there weapons. Her mother was a medic ninja who worked with the medic squad in the ninja barracks. She helped to find new cures and help create better poisons for use in the field. Both tried to make the best for their daughter so her mom ended up retiring from being a medic ninja. Her young life was how most middle class childerns were, full of love and company. But her father could see a fire in her eye, one that wanted to be let out and he knew that his baby girl would follow in the foot steps of both him and his wife.
Childhood- As Amber grew up her family began to teach her how to read write and basicaly grow as a kid. she played with many of the local children and watched as the new groups of genin came to train in the local park. She would often climb up a tree with her friends to watch them train and play. She loved it so much that she began to mimic there moves and would go home kicking and jumping. This always made her family laugh and they never got bored around amber. Soon time came where her father started to train her in the art of ninjutsu. He wanted her to join the academy and become a great ninja like him and his wife. So she went on the join the academy and took lessons from both her parents and the teachers.
Academy- Life as a academy student was fun for her. She made many new friends and also impressed alot of people. She grew strong both as a person and a ninja. Altough she was not as skilled in ninjutsu as the other students she showed great potential in the medical field. Being trained by her mother she learned how to heal wounds and find the basic structure of the body. The exams were soon to come and her parents wanted to make sure she passed the first time. All of her grades were top notch and her skills were way better than what they needed to be to pass. So as she took the test and showed what she had learned she eventually became a genin, earning the right to wear the head band and be called a shinobi of konoha.
Genin- (in process)
Role-Play Sample:
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Everything seemed to happen in slow motion. It seemed the battle was going in Mirage's favor, her always finding a way to triumph over her attacker, but the duel just took a unexpected turn for the worst, a worse case scenario that mirage hoped it would not come to. The evil man turned and instead of attacking her like he had been, he turned to face a woman with a fairly new born baby in her arms. She could see the evil grin on his face and almost instantly knew what his plans were. She reared back and attempted to fly at the sword as it left the mans hand, she could try and intercept it, but she was not fast enough. The thin blade pirced the womans chest and went right through the baby like butter. Everything went silent.
She had expreinced death before, but was never good at coping with it. As the shrieks of the mother rang out, members of the crowd grew angry, some sad and full of pity. But something else was growing inside Mirage, a feeling she did not welcome but was doomed to live with. It over took her to the point where she could not control it any longer. With a blood thirsty yell she turned to face the man once again. YOU MONSTER! YOU KNOW NO MERCY! She spun around flapping her wings, the wind picking up and making the dirt and dust fly up around her. she aimed her wand right at the man and sped up right for him, he had just picked his weapon back up so she had just a second to attack. three magic missiles zoomed at the mans torso, all filled with deadly rage and anger. She was a kind creature, but this demon had provoked her inner rage.
She knew it was a wrong kind of feeling but she felt glad as mirage watched her spells slam into the mans torso. Her attacks sent him flying to the ground, obvisouly in pain. She did not want to kill him, but if he did not let up on his assualt, she would not back down. He stood once more, a little slower to react this time, and picked up his sword in the other hand now. She pointed her wand at the man and dared him to attack again. But he seemed to have other plans.
Running at her he swung the blade in a rapid wild motion, not even aiming but hoping to land a lucky stab. The unpredictabilty of the attack allowed for her to dodge it, but not with out a cut to her lower arm. The steel slit her skin and bright red flowed from her skin. As she turned to attack, the man was gone into the crowd, a word of meeting . She would love to meet this man again, and next time he would not be so lucky.
Last edited by Ambience on Thu 18 Mar 2010, 2:15 pm; edited 2 times in total |
| | | Ambience
Age : 34 Posts : 10
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Thu 11 Mar 2010, 3:53 pm | |
| completed |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 12 Mar 2010, 3:33 am | |
| Personally I would put all fire jutsu under one spoiler, wind under another, etc. This way you just have like four spoilers instead of so many.
The medical jutsu Im going to need Hage or Z to look over as Im not that proficient with medical jutsu myself. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 12 Mar 2010, 4:20 am | |
| High Rise : I really don't see why this would have to be medical when you even stated that it uses fire chakra. Besides that there are some grammatical errors that need fixing.
Thin Cutter: 3 inches would be what I consider a small dagger rather then a small spike. How long do these claws last? Does it use it on both hands? Also, bone is not an easy to cut object, just thought that needed to be stated.
Rebreath: This would be a wind element cannon jutsu, since there really isn't anything to differentiate that jutsu from this one.
Immune Shut Down : This sounds like a jutsu I have, but thats irrelevant. How does the effectiveness of the technique vary with rank? How long does this immune shut down last?
Deep Darkness Needs a lot more detail for such a technique, since putting someone to sleep is effectively immobilizing them and winning a battle. This would also be higher then C-rank and pain wakes people up, if this jutsu prevents pain along with putting them asleep then it would be even more advanced.
Minor Heal How deep can this heal? |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 12 Mar 2010, 11:59 pm | |
| Platform lift was applied for as a jutsu by someone else, and I do believe it has been decided that the technique is B-Rank due to the chakra control requirement. And that was only for making one platform, which dissipated immediately after, not for walking on.
Instant wave and Great push are just slightly modified versions of the two canon wind technqiues you already have, in my opinion.
Uplift needs to state that it only effects users in the air, based on its description. If it affects users on the ground by picking them up and putting them in the air, its B-Rank atleast.
Hot spot in my opinion should be B-Rank due to you not actually creating fire, but heating up the surrounding area with the fire chakra. This actually could fall under heat jutsu category, which is claimed by Todd's Magma clan. |
| | | Ambience
Age : 34 Posts : 10
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Mon 15 Mar 2010, 2:16 pm | |
| edited as such |
| | | Ambience
Age : 34 Posts : 10
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Wed 17 Mar 2010, 2:44 pm | |
| bumpies |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Wed 17 Mar 2010, 11:29 pm | |
| - Ambience wrote:
Name: Med kit Rank: C Type: Supplment Natural Abilities: A small bag of knives scaples and scissors used to work on a sick or infected person. Can not used to attack fo rthey are small and easy to break. Can however be used in battle if time and situation permit.
If this is only a simple kit of knives, scalpels, and scissors than I believe this can be ranked as 'D'. |
| | | Ambience
Age : 34 Posts : 10
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Thu 18 Mar 2010, 2:15 pm | |
| i agree, fixed |
| | | Ambience
Age : 34 Posts : 10
| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 19 Mar 2010, 3:13 pm | |
| so is this approved or what is left to be fixed? |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 19 Mar 2010, 9:45 pm | |
| Minor Detect and Night Eye are too close to Kekkei Genkai traits and thus should be removed. |
| | | Hugh
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| Subject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Thu 06 May 2010, 1:12 am | |
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