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| Basic Information:
Name:Uchiha, Ranmaru (1 Tomoe)
Secondary Title:Sin,
Age:12
Gender:Male
Physical Appearance:
- Spoiler:
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Ranmaru's hair is not greatly long and is spiked up all into one point at the back of his head where the top meets the back of the head. He does however have some strands that hang of in several different places they go over his face and sometimes around the side. His hair is not over is ear as that would impede hearing which he doesn't want. His eyes are a piercing icy blue colour with no pupil. This is a genetic trait, though it does allow him to see clearly still. The eyes strike fear into others often as they seem to look into the core and send chills down your spine.
His eyebrows are rather thin and have barely any hair to them. they are shaped to a point at one end naturally. They are brown like his hair and add to the somewhat scary appearance of Ranmaru. His nose is rather small and is a missed appearance in his face as no one notices it, not even himself. His lips are very stiff as he barely ever shows emotions on his face and it adds to the fact that he doesn't talk much. they are a very light pinky/peachy colour.
His skin is a very pale white, rather like a ghost. His skin is very toned all around his body as well. His skin can never change colour as for some reason he cannot get a tan, sunburn yes but tan no. this is very odd but true. Ranmaru is a rather social freak due to this and often scares girls he is around. His pale skin is not a genetic trait as he is the only one in the family to have this skin colour.
Ranmaru never wears a shirt. He is always bare chested, sometimes when not fighting he has been known to wear the akatsuki cloak, but he rarely does. If wearing the cloak and he engages in a fight he will either pull it off or unzip it halfway down so he is bare chested. It is unknown why but he just likes to have nothing holding back the force of his punches like a shirt might.
Ranmaru wears some pads that increase the force if a punch over his hand and forearm. They are also used to block incoming attacks if he can react quick enough. These pads are metal and silver colored. They do have the akatsuki cloud sign on the part that covers the back of the hand. He also wears a long red glove that foes up to the forearm but doesn't cover his fingers or thumbs. This is so that the pads don't irritate his arm.
His torso is very ripped and toned. His muscles are very clear through his arms and torso. This is from training some many years ago and gives him a lot of physical strength. He has a six-pack and very muscular abs. Ranmaru is proud of this as it means that punches do somewhat less damage, but still hurt a considerable lot.
Ranmaru has several different pairs of the same baggy trouser bottoms. These are very light so as to not impede his leg speed when kicking they also are specially made to be very flexible so that they don't lessen his kicking power. They are black except for a fire pattern on the right leg that goes up to midway on his thigh. There is also more from flames flowing off it on the thigh in part on his left leg. The trousers do cover about 2 centimeters up on his torso because they are long and are held up by a belt that is thin but strong, it is black with a golden lining on the outsides of it.
Finally, Ranmaru doesn't wear shoes. He wears more pads like the ones he wears on his arm on his shins and the top of his feet. He doesn't wear shoes because he prefers to walk around 'bare' footed to strengthen his feet and the damage his kicks do. The guards on his shins are not seen because they are covered by the bottom of his trousers.
Personality:- Spoiler:
When Ranmaru was young he always had one personality which was timid and shy. This was obvious when he went into the academy. For he was always training alone and no one even knew his name until it was read out in class. Ranmaru was lacking confidence when he was younger but has out grown that. Now he is very confident, always. He does lack slightly in that factor however his bravery has always been sky high. When Ranmaru was younger due to this he was always trying to give his responsibility to the rest of his team. Despite this fact however he was very smart with an IQ of 150 he was easily a genius.
As Ranmaru got older he grew a strategic mind as his IQ went up, he was always a quick thinker but was somehow 'dead last' in the academy. He was never ever willing to move beyond his house, which is something he learned over the years. As Ranmaru grew so did his IQ everntually reaching a very respectable 200. This made Ranmaru always to be called upon by the Mizukage at the time for strategical advice and help with the village plans on defense. When he was younger he was always defensive, this is something he lost as he got older for he came to realize a great offense is just as good of a defense. He is now a offensive power hungry beast.
As he grew older after many hardships in his life he became a shizophrenic and has Dissociative Personality Disorder so now for every persoanality has its opposite. This began a fact when the lazy Ranmaru became a jounin. He became energetic. He also has great honour to his opponents as he believes that they have made it thus far so they deserve hat honour, however he believes that respect is something that has to be earned. Ranmaru is also very forgiving and will instantly befriend anyone who has proved to be a 'hazard' in his life. He also believes in helping others those who have helped him. Ranmaru also beleieves that with hard work any normal shinobi can surpass a 'genius' of the shinobi world which is why he believes in constant and severe training.
Ranmaru presently has a rather firey fierce nature. He always has been and always will be. Ranmaru's personality often gets him into many fights; but he doesn't mind for he usually wins them. Ranmaru is always upbeat and rather joyful, unike most in the akatsuki. Ranmaru is however quick tempered and is quick to judge others on power level and looks. Ranmaru does love fire though and this is reflected in his personality, as he acts just like fire. He is calm and
safe until you add a 'fuel' that angers him to make him angry, this is to do with fires getting bigger and hotter. Ranmaru is also unpredictable and overwhelmingly random in attacks.
Ranmaru does have a rather arrogant and celestial side to his personality though which is why he often thinks he is high and mighty and can defeat everyone. When Ranmaru is like this he will rush into things with out analysis and is often punished for this. But yet again Ranmaru is a shizophrenic. So every personality has an opposite so just like him being calm and quick tempered he is also reckless and a master strategist. When he is thinking like a strategist he often analyses things rather swiftly and accurately and is always quick to think of his plan of action. Ranmaru likes being in this mind frame for a fight as he is very hard to counter as he always has a back up waiting and always thinks through the attacks with hundreds of possibilities.
Ranmaru's most common mind frame however is the unenthusiastic one: which is where he is lazy and is rather like a vegetable. In this state of mind he would rather watch clouds play board games than actually get up and do something productive with his time. Despite this Ranmaru will never turn down a battle for he likes the site of bloodshed. Ranmaru also always pretends to be doing something to drop responsibility. With this though comes the counter part which is the strong commitment sense of Ranmaru that everyone likes to be with because although he lacks slight confidence his bravery is always there. He is very committed and most enthusiastic. This is when Ranmaru must do something like catch infected people and such.
After becoming a member of the akatsuki he became mysterious and shows great self control. He also learned how to control his emotions at times to show that the opponent cannot stop him. He has constant composure aswell. He often compliments fighters on their abilities and never explains his power without a fully justified way to show his oppoenents. He also shows great wisdom in times of panic and never lets his guard down. Ranmaru often shows great intuition and is rarely caught decieved and when he is he is quick to realise the truth.
Ranmaru is also rather much of an antagonist at times and often shows a sadistic way of dispatching his opponents. Often he is seen as sad for his childhood was not great at times but he doesn become happy rather easily. Ranmaru hates waiting and hates to keep others waiting aswell. Ranmaru is also sometimes cold-hearted and uncaring. He also cared little for human life as he sees that if they are weak there is no point in them living. He is often cruel to others and holds a down to earth look on everything and barely ever shows emotions when an obstacle is put in his way.
Ranmaru is quite often calm and serious while in battle. He does however sometimes joke around and disrespects those around him, even his opponents when in this mind frame - this often leads to cruel deaths of his opponents often leading in the amputation on limbs and usually feeding them to something. Ranmaru does however show respect to those who has something he wants, for example a powerful sword or something like a very powerful jutsu. Ranmaru is rather power hungry and only shows respect at this time to those who have either defeated him or have put up a good fight.
Finally Ranmaru often hears voices in his head telling him to do bad things and punish people for challenging him and such. Often these voices are easy to reject however sometimes they are difficult to ignore and often make Ranmari snap making him go crazy unleashing sheer power everywhere which depletes his chakra and often ends in his unconsiousness. The voices are always bad and never good, they often tell him to kill everyone and take over the world.
Catch Phrase:
Prepare to meet your maker!
Do you Fear the Reaper?
Its getting cold isn't it
Clan Information:Clan Name: Uchiha Clan Location: Konoha Clan Traits: The Uchiha have a number of traits which set them apart from the normal ninja. First off being that they all seem to have black hair. Also, every one in this clan has a main element of fire. They seem to be very proficient in the three basic jutsu arts of Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu (This does not mean Uchiha characters can have three specialties), and are usually known as the elite brand of shinobi. Uchiha generally seem to work with their speed rather then raw brute strength and are very agile and quick. * Must have Fire as main element and either Ninjutsu or Genjutsu as a specialty Kekkei Genkai:Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential. The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye. The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area. Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin. An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there. Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals. The Mangekyō Sharingan ( Literally meaning Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye) is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, and erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from a sibling. The new Sharingan is dubbed the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The techniques used by this eye vary from person to person and is limited to one technique per eye. It can be achieved by the killing of someone who is very close to the user as a display of being willing to sacrifice anything for power. This can not be fooled and be a fake friend. It must be a real and true strong connection so it takes a certain kind of individual to be able to get it. It can also be gotten by extremely brutal and long training, taking many many many years to obtain of constant hard work and dedication, though the person can not be aiming for it and it actually just happens at random. Even with the hardest work, it is possible for an Uchiha to never achieve this level of eye mastery. Secret Clan Jutsu:Name: Demonic Illusion - Mirror Heaven and Earth Change Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Element: - Description: A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent. This technique requires the user to have three tomoe in each eye to use it. Name: Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade Type: Weaponry Rank: C Element: - Description: A Weaponry technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them. Name: Ephemeral Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Element: - Description: A Genjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha clan members. They will start this technique by using only one finger on their right hand. The target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, they can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them. History:
The Uchiha clan was descended from the elder of the two boys entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with the power and will of the way of the ninja. The elder believed that might would bring peace. The Sage chose the younger as more fitting to be his successor, causing the elder to be vengeful. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha. Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.
Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they found that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha. Eventually a revolt was attempted by a select few Uchiha members, but this was crushed quickly and they were thrown in jail or put to death based on their role in the uprising. The Uchiha who did not partake in it, were not held accountable and after that the relations between the Uchiha and the rest of the village grew stronger and trust was finally instilled.
Clan Details: Open
Rank Information:
Rank:
Genin
Village Affiliation:
kirigakure
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
You may pick 2 skills:
Main:Ninjutsui
Sub:genjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main:lightning
Sub:fire
Jutsu Template:
Genjutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: --
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: --
Description: Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast, the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion, playi
katon- Spoiler:
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fireballs. The ninja can also hurl a projectile, which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent, the attack appears to be only the balls of flame. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles will still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest, and then immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire, which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames, the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Academy- Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Background Information
History:
Birth Arc- Spoiler:
Upon Ranmaru's birth he was always negleted and never really cared for over the limits of him barely surviving. He was overlooked by his older brother who was failing at the academy, his brother was 10 and was dead last. Despite this, Ranmaru still loved his family as all they did was try to help their failing son.
by the time Ranmaru was 3 he was started to be cared for as his brother had miraculously passed the exams and as such his family started to care for him a lot as well. Ranmaru was then taught upon becoming 5. He was exceptionally gifted. He was a master at taijutsu for his age, already mastering 2 D-rank taijutsu moves over his expected requirement at the academy. This did not come without its flaws however as it seemed that he was unable to use chara.
At the age of 8 and just before being allowed into the academy he started being able to use chakra which was a good sign for his parents as it meant that he could use the clan techniques to boost his taijutsu potential and gain a serious advantage against any opponent.
Academy Arc- Spoiler:
When Ranmaru was ten he was accepted into the Cloud villages academy. He was exceptionally gifted. He was by far the most gifted in battle at the time, however he was never bothered to do any work and as such even though very smart he was bottom of the class. He was paired in a three man cell with two others but rarely worked with them and was always training alone. His sensei was the only one he would talk to.
When it came to missions like getting cats off a tree Ranmaru was always doing them himself as he found it rather easy to do. He had fun times with missions like these because he got to spend time with animals which he loves. Animals are the only things he cares for, other than his sensei and Raikage. Ranmaru often has to train alone for his non cooperation with his team and as his sensei was the same as him basically it was perfect for training.
Finally when Ranmaru was 12 and ready for the genin exams he was in tip top shape for it from all the one on one training with his sensei. This made Ranmaru rather happy as his sensei was like his Dad who had died when he was 5. Ranmaru even sometimes sleeps over at his sensei house as they have grown a father and son like bond together. Ranmaru would always protect his sensei as his sensei is his idol and father like figure in his life.
Role-Play Sample:
US 2.0- Spoiler:
Klown was at his friends house for the night as he was having a sleep over with a few people his age, Klown hoped girls would be there so maybe he can finally get a girl friend but you never know. Zetsumei realized the time was nearly 6 o'clock and that it would be getting dark so he put on his light lavender, loose-fitting, long-sleeved, zip-up shirt, black pants cut off around mid-calf, bandages wrapped around his ankles, traditional shinobi sandals, and a purple, rope-like belt tied in an inverted bow around his waist, he put this on as it was light for training and fighting in. Klown swiftly left his friends apartment leaving a note saying gone to train be back at 21:15.
Klown knew exactly where the best spot for training was and he knew he had 3 hours of good long training to get through, Klown was at his calmest as he was about to do the thing he loves to do, train! Klown took a shortcut around the ramen shop to get to the park. No one should be in the part as it was dark so the conditions were perfect. Klown then started to listen and focus his mind to everything around him so he could be mentally and physically attuned for his training session. Klown started to close his eyes as he was on the outside of the park and focus his mind else where.
Klown could hear the whistle of the wind scrapping through the trees that would make some cringe for it was not a pleasant sound, however Zetsumei seemed to like it alot. He hear the birds tweet as they told there children to go sleep or eat other then that there was a bitter and eerie silence that was usually on horror films right before a character dies.
Zetsumei could feel the wind brush through his over gelled spiky hair and through the gaps in his fingers, it was soothing. He feld the warm yet cool wind whip his face softly. This was the kind of conditions Zetsumei wanted but hardly ever happened as it was usually boiling hot. Zetsumei continued to walk towards his destination in the perfect frame of mind he was in, he then opened his eyes.
Zetsumei saw the deep, crimson sky through the gaps in the trees as the number of trees grew as he went deeper into the park. The grass was a luscious green and obviously well looked after. The trees had every single leaf on them and were massive. Zetsumei liked the park the setting was beautiful and definitely had great targets to train with. Zetsumei swiftly grabbed for a kunai and threw it through the tree branches to kill an annoying bird, which he hit. He then turned to look natural as if it wasn't him and when he looked up he saw his chuunin exam buddy knock into a stronger looking shinobi and begin to fall.
Suddenly, Zetsumei began to taste this shinobis masses amount of chakra which made him rapidly turn from a slow walk to a sprint to see if Aaron was alright and if the other shinobi would bother him. As Klown was running he yelled "Akimaru!" he quickly arrived beside Akimaru and was relieved to hear the shinobi say sorry and didn't want to harm him, and at that instant Aaron was helped up by a hand from the ground and Akimaru was upright again. Klown then began to speak "Hey Akimaru, ain't seen seen you since the chuunin exams a while back how have you progressed?"
This as well
US 1.0- Spoiler:
Ryuusei slowly walked up to the two other shinobi who were standing there he looked at them both and guessed they were his team as he had recieved a small piece of paper saying Today you have each been assigned to a squad. Please meet me on field 13 at noon.Ryuusei began to speak to speak in a hushed demonic tone "Im guessing you two are the members of the team i have been assigned to. So do any of you two have a clue where sensei is?" It was approximately 12:00pm. Ryuusei had arrived an hour early hoping his team were there and that he could possibly learn a thing or two from them.
Ryuusei had baby blue coloured spiky hair that was pointy and could do some little amount of damage. Ryuusei wore a vibrantly coloured headband with intriguing markings on them. His eyes were pure white baring no pupils, sadly for Ryuusei this swiftly gave him off as a hyuuga. His face was clean and white. He wore a significantly patternted top with markings of the same sort of his headband had. The top was white and had Ryuuseis headband was tied around his neck, it was black and silver and showed his loyalty to Sunagakure no sato. Ryuusei was wearing three-quarter lengths which were black and had his pouch which contained kunai, string and shuriken on the rear of his right thigh. He had two secret kunai hidden in the sleeve of his jacket just incase he ever needed some kunai swiftly.
Ryuusei saw a desert style plain piece of land, it showed no leash of life except for him and is two companions. It was just sand and wind there but the sand was also blowig around like a sandstorm effect which made the training area seem like it was tough and going to be very difficult conditions of training, something Ryuusei had guessed his sensei was hoping for. Ryuusei look at one boy just zoned out and oblivious from everything around him. however the other boy looked bigger and stronger and more aware, and seemed he had just been training. Ryuusei looked at them once more and turned away.
Ryuusei heard the whisper in the wind and the sand hitting his flesh, it was a rather soothing sound like the ocean. Other than that there was no sound except his feetsteps of him crunching the sand beneath his feet as he walked up to the two young, much like himself, shinobi. Ryuusei waited to hear a response as he had turned away from them to look at the sun which had rose up and shone and shone beacoing its like to all civilians of the sand village. Ryuusei began to think of how his trainign session would go, it made him smile. Ryuusei began to listen to the peace that had went through the training area, he enjoyed it very much.
Ryuusei felt a warm feeling in the depths of his stomach,it made him feel good about himself and those around him. He felt that the two standing close to him were going to become good friends of his, however Ryuusei began to think about the bad times and many of his close friends and relatives abandoning him, this made him feel sad and depressed and made him hope it didn't haped again. Ryuusei decided not to hope and wish as only time will tell what to make of the two lads infront of him. Ryuusei was thinking about his sensei and what he might know, or what he doesn't now and if he will be able to teach him sufficiently enough so that Ryuusei can pass the chuunin exams whenever they come up in the hopefully near future.
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|  | | Caranore
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 18 Apr 2010, 6:47 pm | |
| | As I have been informed, and checked, all of your Academy jutsu have been taken from someone elses application, Sage's without permission. Remove them. As it stands this is plagarism issue and will not be dealt with lightly. We provide a template for all Canon Academy jutsu, so there was no reason to go and copy all of these. |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 18 Apr 2010, 9:35 pm | |
| | tbh it was an accident...was looking over his app as he got it done with a day and was wandering how and as i had to do my char i jus copied them cos i thought they were the normal...Im sorry if it wasn't it was just a careless mistake of me not reading them... |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 4:38 pm | |
| | Completion bump |
| | | | Caranore
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 5:21 pm | |
| Your history needs ATLEAST 3 more paragraphs. Birth through the academy, make it work.
Shadow leaf taijutsu techniques is konoha only, Shishi rendan is too i believe. Not only that, but it is your definition, use the description on leaf ninja atleast.
- Quote :
- Kekkei Genkai:Ice
Remove that.
- Quote :
- Name: Lariat
Type: taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description:The user first puts lightning natured chakra through there arm .The user then charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move. This strike is powerful enough to blow away the target's entire chest. The attack is straightforward, though, and can be easily seen through with the Sharingan.
Define blow away the opponents chest. As it stands to utilize the move you are talking abou with the chakra and the power shown in the manga, its atleast B-Rank. |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 6:08 pm | |
| edited.
Also as i wish to cause no trouble again, i didn't ask todd for this clan i jutsu realised when checking my pms as i thought i had. Is that still okay as the clan says open...not Open with my permission? |
| | | | John
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 9:06 pm | |
| | You're not in trouble for that, but you will need to get his permission. |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 11:49 pm | |
| is there anyway i could get hold of Todd o.o cos he's went somewhere for 4 weeks and his activity isn't good (if i remember right heck he might be back  ) so... |
| | | | Caranore
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 11:56 pm | |
| | hes back, if you havent noticed the 'Who's Online' section, or jutsu creations, etc where he has been commenting. Theres also the PM function. |
| | | | ₡amisado
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 5:42 am | |
| | Todd bump |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 4:30 pm | |
| | he said no so im thinking of another clan to join... |
| | | | ₡amisado
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 6:55 pm | |
| | All right, jst ring me when your ready for another check |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 10:16 pm | |
| | is kiri uchiha still open? |
| | | | ₡amisado
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 10:48 pm | |
| | I believe its still open, but don't quote me on this. |
| | | | The Joker
Age : 28
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 2:42 pm | |
| | Alright im done, finally. ready for checking |
| | | | ₡amisado
Age : 30
Posts : 1256
| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 5:54 pm | |
| | Clean up all of the misplaced coding on the app and I'll approve it |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 5:59 pm | |
| | done |
| | | | ₡amisado
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 6:05 pm | |
| | You still have a [list] next to rank |
| | | | The Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 23 May 2010, 8:17 pm | |
| | done |
| | | | ₡amisado
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 23 May 2010, 8:21 pm | |
| | approved |
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