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Gabe
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 |  Subject: Kyru Clan Thu 11 Mar 2010, 7:13 pm | |
| (Quick note. nothing has changed to the clan since approval on US 1.0. Though I did add a paragraph to the history)
Clan Name:
Kyru
Clan Location:
Suna and Konoha
Clan Traits:
-Angelic looking bodies & well taken care of skin
Kekkei Genkai:
-Advanced Weapon knowledge (Used for their various weapon tech and bows)
-Archer's eye's (Doujutsu)
-Clan summoning (Optional) (Scorpion Nation)
Secret Clan Jutsu:
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- Name: Archer's Eye's
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The Kyru Clan developed their own doujutsu over time to help assist with their long range combat. When activated the user's eye's become enveloped with the pupil highly increasing their vision. The user can now see up to a mile in detailed vision. When used in close combat the user may be able to predict taijutsu soley based on muscel tension in the user's skin. When you go to life a hand muscel's tense up so it becomes capable of lifting up, the user can see these muscel's begining to lift or move ergo they can in a sense predict some taijutsu move's. However due to speed they may not beable to do any thing nor beable to see the muscel's tense up at times. One example of this working would be when an opponet throws a punch, as they do that they begin to throw a leg kick even before the punch is done, as result various muscel's in their body would tense up pointing at a leg begining to move so the user may be able to counter properly or set a 'trap' for the opponets attack. One last key featur is the filter of light. The user's eye's being enveloped by the pupil (Black portion of the eye) The pupil naturaly filters out light to its best ability. Now it is enhanced to the point the user could look up at the sun and have it appear as a bright circle or object for no more than 10 seconds before they would start to squint and have damage like a normal person begin.
Name: Arrow expantion Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This is a Kyru clan jutsu. The Kyru created this in an effort to fight large quantities of people at a time. The user will fire a basic arrow or arrow of any other kind before the seal is used. The arrow once the jutsu takes affect will grow to the size of a large balista's arrow. A balist's arrow usualy is as long as a car and weight's around 175 pounds. This arrow when it hits can cause extreem damage inernaly as well as becomes more of a blunt force object rather than attempt to cut them, although the blade is still capable of cutting the opponet some what.
Name: Summoning Arrow
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Desctiption: The Kyru Clan created this arrow to aid them in creating an opening for a summon to attack. The Kyru clan member will first obviously draw blood and wipe it on the feather portion of the arrow (end of the arrow.) From here the user will fire the arrow at the target and about mid flight they will activate the summoning contract. The summon will emerge with momentum flying at the target, the arrow will also be flying just ahead of the summon and often causes an opening for the summon to attack.
Name: Arrow Clone Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The Kyru clan created this in a similar method to Kage Bushin as well as SHuriken Clone Jutsu. The Kyru clan are anabled to create real copies of any type of arrow they fire. With a single use of this jutsu the user can create 10 cloned arrows, past that extra chakra would be needed.
Name: Chakra Arrow
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Varies
Description: The Kyru clan realized at times they would either run out of arrows or their quiver is taken from them. So in retunrn they developed this jutsu. The members are able to generate a arrow comprised from chakra. This arrow is stronger than any basic normal arrow and can peirce a target on another side of a tree of boulder. Elemental Chakra could be added to create a more devistating arrow.
Clan Weapons:
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- Weapons :
Name: Kyru Bow (Gabriale's)
Quantity: 1 Per-member
Rank: S
Appearance: Varies per-member
Description: Each Kyru member develops a bow for their use. Over time the members my create new bow or adjust their current ones to new. One key feture to each Kyru Bow is it can channel chakra through it. One featur is the 'string' of the bow, the tension is pulled taightly to the point most cannot pull it back very far. The string is made from a special material not common to find or on a bow. This material is perfect for a bow as it creates its own above normal tension. The highly increased tention allows a arrow to fly faster adn farther than any other bow around. This tension is what gives the Kyru the capablility of shooting their arrows up to 1 mile. Every Kyru Bow is differnt. Some have theirs made into swords or other wea[pns. Each bow can hold their own unique capabilities that makes each member deadly in their own right.
Name: Kyru Hat
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Per-member
Appearance: This hat is a common traditional style rice feild hat out lined wit the shiney valcanic ash.
Description: The kyru clan makes an abundant supply of valcanic ash due to the fact the material is hard to come accross. They use this material to refine into a blade. This blade is easily sharper than steel and most swrod materials naturaly. The Kyru clan use it to line their hats around the edges with. At times they make take their hat off and throw it at the opponet, the hat could pass through several trees before comming to a halt.
Name: Kyru Shoe's
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Per-member
Appearance: These are almost normal every day traditional style chinese sandles with the exception of being spiked allowing better traction.
Description: Due to the advanced knowlege of weaponry the Kyru clan is capable of inventing various gadgets. One being the Kyru Shoe's. Each member wear's a pair of these. In the bottom of the shoe is smaller spike's. This allows the wearer to turn on a dime with great percision. Should the person need to stop all momentum and turn they can do so now as well as pick up more speed due to better traction and the spikes digging into the ground giving more leverage. If a kick is thrown the spike's may add more damage if hit directly with them.
Name: Triple Blade Spinner
Rank:C
Quantity: Varies Permember
Appearance: A simple round disc about the size of a shoe boxes width. When activated three long blades with emerge from the discs coil making the weapon around 42 inches wide.
Description: Developed by the Kyru Clan this blade folds up into a very small round disc about the size of some one's hand. Gabriale holds 4 of these on his belt. When taken out or off his belt 3 blades erect out, once thrown with a small bust of chakra not even close to a E rank jutsu the blades will begin to rotate at high speeds adding damage. These blades are also made from valcanic ash so they may cut through several trees or clothing/armour before 'stopping.'
Name:Kyru Quiver
Rank:A
Quantity: No more than 2 Per-member
Appearance: An average quiver with the exception of slots being placed in side to hold differnt types of arrows in a certian location. A seal is placed within the slots so that several of that arrow type can be held.
Description: Each Kyru member holds this quiver but may adjust it accordingly over time. The quiver may be located on various places on each member. The slots that holds the arrows doesnt mean the amount of arrows available. Each slot holds a seal. When an arrow is taken from the spot the seal opens up to replace one arrow to that spot, this seal is/has been made by Kyru members only. Each seal can hold upto 100 arrows.
Name: Kyru Wriste Blades
Rank:B
Quantity: 1 Per-member
Appearance: A metal arm band placed on the forearm of the user. When prompted a 2 ft blade will erect out of the slevees of the user.
Description: At times the Kyru members have had a need for close combat or deflection purposes. In turn they have invented these wrist blades. They act like any other pair of wrist blades in their fast ejecting motion however they are made from the same material as the swords in the Kyru Bow and as result can channel their elemental chakra into them resulting in whatever they did in the sword form only on a smaller level (wriste blade being smaller than the swords.)
Arrows:
Name: Scorpion Arrow
Rank: D
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A normal arrow with the exception of the arrow head being shapped like a Scorpions tail, this is the Kyru Clans signature arrow as result makin this arrow head unique.
Description: A basic arrow of the Kyru Clan this arrow's head is shaped in the fashion of a Scorpions Tail head. It is flat like any other arrow would be, the only real unique thing about this arrow is 2 things. Its shape being that of a dragon head and its unique featur to "Sink teeth" in its target. When/If the arrow hits any thing the arrow will erect 2 small blades that appear as teeth, this makes it harder to pull the arrow out if it's in some one.This arrow takes up 3 slots in Gabriale's Large quiver and one in his small quiver.
Name: Nara Arrow
Rank: B
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: Using the Clan's advanced knowlege of sealing the Kyru created this arrow. The Kyru clan wanted to hold an arrow that would represent each known clan in the leaf. As result they began to work with the various clans to seal effects of their KKG's. This is the only arrow the clan needs to work with a member of the Nara clan to create it. When working with the Nara Clan the Kyru develop an arrow that would essentialy trap an opponet as a normal jutsu of the Nara would. The nara clan member need's to charge their specific chakra into the Kyru seal for this arrow to generate. The pupose of this arrow is to be an advanced arrow for trapping of catching a target out side a basic net arrow. This arrow must either hit the opponets shadow or get hit by the seal's extending shadow. When the arrow hits the ground the seal activates either trapping the opponet or sending out a small shadow towards the opponet that can only travel up to 5 feet. If caught the target becomes in-modile for up to 4 posts for genin, 3 for Chuunin, 2 for Jounin, and possibly 1 for Kage level. Gabriale has one slot on his back quiver for this arrow.
Name: Inuzuka Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: Similar to Fang over Fang jutsu the Kyru clan created this jutsu in resembalance to it. This jutsu isnt required to have a clan member work on to create, the seal the Kyru members placed on it cause it to replicate the jutsu. Once the seal activates the arrow will begin to have a vortex form around it of high speed winds. This jutsu or arrow will appear to look like the Fang over Fang jutsu the Inuzaka's use. This jutsu also act's like a drill as it can cut through tree's as well as rock. Gabriale has 1 slot in his quiver on his back and one quicker in the on his hip.
Name: Hyuuga's Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: This Jutsu or arrow was developed off of the Hyuuga's Gental Fist jutsu. Due to the fact the Kyru lack the Byakugan they often dont get to hit all or most of the opponets chakra points. The user will first take the arrow and use chakra to activate the seal on the arrow. After firing the arrow at the target and the seal activates the arrow will break up into 361(exact number of chakra points in the body) smaller tooth pick type arrow's. These 'arrows' have chakra on their tips that when hitting the body they send into the opponet, similar to how the Hyuuga do with their gental fist. Often opponets try and use their hands to sheild the on comming berage, this often results in several chakra points in their hands being periced. Any location that takes the brunt of the berage has an increased chance of having several points hit. Never have no chakra points been hit nor have a number less than 20. With these points being hit means chakra must now find a way to travel around that blocked point. Should the hands be blocked then it would become almost impossible to use a large aray of jutsus. Gabriale has one slot in his back quiver for this arrow
Name: Aburame Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: This arrow is one of the Kyru clan's most unique arrow's. Inside the seal is some (30) special flying bug's the Aburame Clan gather for the Kyru clan from time to time. Once fired and seal activated bug's will begin to pour from the seal and attempt to feed on the chakra of the opponet. The arrow my peirce the opponet and cause damage if the opponet doesnt avoid the arrow's path. Gabriale has one slot on his back quiver and 1 on his hip's quiver
Name: Akimichi Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description The Kyru clan wanted to create a arrow or jutsu based on the Akimichi clan but already had an Arrwo expansion jutsu. Instead they used a seal that when applied and used helped the shaft of the arrow to extend. Once fired the shaft of the arrow extend forward. Becuse the arrow is already moving forward and its shaft is now extending forward often opponets get hit by it becuse of misjudging its speed or its sudden jolt forward causes damage to the person due to again its sudden speed in take. Gabriale has one slot on his back quiver and one on his hip quiver.
Name: Black Powder
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: This arrow is qunique only to the Kyru clan. Through the advanced knowlege of science's and weapon knowlege the Kyru clan learned to use black powder with arrow's. A Black Powder Arrow contains enough explosive power to clear a 10 feet radius. (Total of 20 feet diamiter for thoes who dont know what a radius is) How it works is just behind the arrow head is a small peice that igites the black powder which is stored in the shaft of the arrow. Gabriale has one slot in his back quiver and one in his hip quiver.
History:
The Kyru clan was Birthed out of various members of the Sand who sought to increase the defenses. The members all had extensive knowledge of weaponry while half were masters of Ninjutsu while the other half masters of Fuuinjutsu. Over time during Wars with other Shinobi villages the new Kyru clan had developed what they thought was needed most, long range combat. Archery was ideal for the clan as they could not create a fast array of ninjutsu that they could use at a long range, the same with Fuuinjutsu. The original members all had their knowledge of weaponry and began to think 'out side the box.' If they could improve the use of weapons to the point they could combat advanced shinobi and win then they would set what their goals would be. First thought was obviously archery. Using an bow and arrow was ideal for long range combat.
Firstly the clan members needed to perfect using the weapon to the point missing a target was rare. Once accomplished the clansmen began to experiment with the Ninjutsu and Fuuinjutsu masters. From this was the clans first KKG many came to know as Arrow jutsus. Over time the Kyru clan began to be revealed as a deadly clan and key defense for the Sand. One thing the Kyru realize they needed was to either develop something that enabled them to see long distance better. With increased vision the members could hit targets farther away. Slowly the members developed a doujutsu that became legendary as it enabled the clansmen not only to increase their range of fighting but help in close combat surprisingly.
During war times clans often sought out their own survival by offering their services to various employers, sometimes this included Nations. The Kyru had begun to work with the Leaf village alot more. Having regular missions and relations with them caused the clan to become divided. Several remained loyal to the Sand while the other half honnored the survival of the clan and saw the leaf as their best bet. Eventually the clan split down the middle. This occured once the Nations stopped fighting and clans were forced to choose who their loyalties belonged to. These two clans are now rivals enduring a secret war.
Clan Details:
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Last edited by Gabe on Sat 13 Mar 2010, 3:30 am; edited 5 times in total |
|   | | John
Age : 31
Posts : 2547
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Thu 11 Mar 2010, 7:41 pm | |
| | For starters, please use the correct template for the jutsus and weapons |
| | | | Gabe
Age : 34
Posts : 232
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Fri 12 Mar 2010, 3:18 am | |
| | Edited. |
| | | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Fri 12 Mar 2010, 7:21 am | |
| - Quote :
- Advanced Weapon knowledge
-Archer's eye's (Doujutsu)
-Secret Technique’s. Often members develop their own 'special' type of jutsus unique only to them to make them more suitable for other means of combat. (Optional)
-Clan summoning (Optional) (Scorpion Nation)
This would all have to be elaborated into an actual KKg form. Each, needs to be explained in full, especially your doujutsu. |
| | | | Gabe
Age : 34
Posts : 232
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Sun 14 Mar 2010, 9:28 pm | |
| | Edited, and the doujutsu is explained in full. Like 3 lines down it the jutsu. This is the same clan Pat and Adam approved on US, btw I took out the "back up skills thing." Just didnt seem to fit. |
| | | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Mon 15 Mar 2010, 6:19 am | |
| | approved. |
| | | | Wind
Posts : 730
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Wed 07 Jul 2010, 7:19 pm | |
| | Unapproved. This clan is not currently in line with the weaponry guidelines of US2.0. This clan needs heavy editing to be approval again. I will point out specific notes tonight, but a good deal of this can be fixed just by reading the weaponry topic, and fixing the numerous weapons that are mis-ranked. |
| | | | Elendril
Posts : 28
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Wed 07 Jul 2010, 7:49 pm | |
| Clan Name:
Kyru
Clan Location:
Suna and Konoha
Clan Traits:
-Angelic looking bodies & well taken care of skin
Kekkei Genkai:
-Advanced Weapon knowledge (Used for their various weapon tech and bows)
-Archer's eye's (Doujutsu)
-Clan summoning (Optional) (Scorpion Nation)
Name: Archer's Eye's
Description: The Kyru Clan developed their own doujutsu over time to help assist with their long range combat. When activated the user's eye's become enveloped with the pupil highly increasing their vision. The user can now see up to 5 mile's in detailed vision. . The user's eye's being enveloped by the pupil (Black portion of the eye) The pupil naturaly filters out light to its best ability.
At birth the clan member's are able to look 1 mile
to look 2 mile's 150 word training requirement
3 mile's 200 word's
4 mile's 250 word's
5 mile's 400 word's
Secret clan jutsu
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Name: Illusion Arrow
Rank: D
Description: The Kyru clan created this arrow based off the basic clone taught in the ninja academy. Seeing people become confused as to who the real person was. Once the arrow is fired the Kyru member will activate this jutsu, once activated several 'illusions' or fake copies of the arrow will surround the real arrow. Each arrow is aimed at a differnt spot on the opponets body so pin pointing where to block becomes hard.
Name: Summoning Arrow
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Desctiption: The Kyru Clan created this arrow to aid them in creating an opening for a summon to attack. The Kyru clan member will first obviously draw blood and wipe it on the feather portion of the arrow (end of the arrow.) From here the user will fire the arrow at the target and about mid flight they will activate the summoning contract. The summon will emerge with momentum flying at the target, the arrow will also be flying just ahead of the summon and often causes an opening for the summon to attack.
Name: Arrow Clone Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The Kyru clan created this in a similar method to Kage Bushin as well as SHuriken Clone Jutsu. The Kyru clan are anabled to create real copies of any type of arrow they fire. With a single use of this jutsu the user can create 10 cloned arrows, past that extra chakra would be needed.
Name: Arrow Earth Wall
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu is a general use of the Kyru clan, but Gabriale created this jutsu. Gabriale charge earth chakra into an arrow before releasing it from his bow. Once the arrow is let go Gabriale will activate this jutsu. The arrow is used mostly as a defensive jutsu, Gabriale will aim at an impending attack or object and fire the arrow at it. The arrow will fly at it with great speed and can be used 2 ways. One is it hits the attack or object or Gabriale may cause it to erupt or be used upon his command. When used or hit the arrow will expel the earth chakra and the earth will quickly bring up a wall made of the earth, this wall is 4 feet thick and 10 feet tall.
Name: Chakra Arrow
Rank: B
Description: The Kyru clan realized at times they would either run out of arrows or their quiver is taken from them. So in retunrn they developed this jutsu. The members are able to generate a arrow comprised from chakra. This arrow is stronger than any basic normal arrow and can peirce a target on another side of a tree of boulder. Elemental Chakra could be added to create a more devistating arrow.
Name: Arrow expantion Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: This is a Kyru clan jutsu. The Kyru created this in an effort to fight large quantities of people at a time. The user will fire a basic arrow or arrow of any other kind before the seal is used. The arrow once the jutsu takes affect will grow to the size of a large balista's arrow. A balist's arrow usualy is as long as a car and weight's around 175 pounds. This arrow when it hits can cause extreem damage inernaly as well as becomes more of a blunt force object rather than attempt to cut them, although the blade is still capable of cutting the opponet some what.
Name: Assasin's Shot
Rank: B
Description: Often the Kyru have been used to assasinate some one or need to conceal the trace of noise and over all presance of their arrow, as result this jutsu was created. The user will store chakra into their shaft of the arrow. Once fired the user will activate the jutsu, instantly the chakra inside will begin to mask all trace's of the arrow. The arrow will become black as it is enveloped in the chakra to mask it. The arrow will now not give off any wind trace or noise. Should a byakugan user be looking at it they could still see the chakra in it as well as a trace from the origin of the arrow. Often opponets never hear nor see this arrow fly from the user and as result get hit by it.
Name: Blocking Sun
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu is basicly the same Arrow Clone jutsu only on a much larger scale. The user will charge chakra into a arrow and fire at the correct angle up into the air. The angle needed it so that once it begins to desend from the sky it will be able to come down on top of the opponet. Once the arrow begins to slow down due to gravity and begins to revert its corse to the ground this jutsu will activate. Rather than 15 or 30 arrows being created hundreds are created and begin to rain down from the sky, this usualy last's around 30 seconds or so. This jutsu is named properly becuse the arrow's are so tightly packed that it essentialy 'block's out the sun
Clan Weapon's
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Weapons : Name: Kyru Bow (Gabriale's) Quantity: 1 Per-member Rank: S Appearance: Varies per-member Description: Each Kyru member develops a bow for their use. Over time the members my create new bow or adjust their current ones to new. One key feture to each Kyru Bow is it can channel chakra through it. One featur is the 'string' of the bow, the tension is pulled taightly to the point most cannot pull it back very far. The string is made from a special material not common to find or on a bow. This material is perfect for a bow as it creates its own above normal tension. The highly increased tention allows a arrow to fly faster adn farther than any other bow around. This tension is what gives the Kyru the capablility of shooting their arrows up to 1 mile. Every Kyru Bow is differnt. Some have theirs made into swords or other wea - Spoiler:
h bow can hold their own unique capabilities that makes each member deadly in their own right. Name: Kyru Hat Rank: D Quantity: 1 Per-member Appearance: This hat is a common traditional style rice feild hat out lined wit the shiney valcanic ash. Description: The kyru clan makes an abundant supply of valcanic ash due to the fact the material is hard to come accross. They use this material to refine into a blade. This blade is easily sharper than steel and most swrod materials naturaly. The Kyru clan use it to line their hats around the edges with. At times they make take their hat off and throw it at the opponet, the hat could pass through several trees before comming to a halt. Name: Kyru Shoe's Rank: D Quantity: 1 Per-member Appearance: These are almost normal every day traditional style chinese sandles with the exception of being spiked allowing better traction. Description: Due to the advanced knowlege of weaponry the Kyru clan is capable of inventing various gadgets. One being the Kyru Shoe's. Each member wear's a pair of these. In the bottom of the shoe is smaller spike's. This allows the wearer to turn on a dime with great percision. Should the person need to stop all momentum and turn they can do so now as well as pick up more speed due to better traction and the spikes digging into the ground giving more leverage. If a kick is thrown the spike's may add more damage if hit directly with them. Name: Triple Blade Spinner Rank:C Quantity: Varies Permember Appearance: A simple round disc about the size of a shoe boxes width. When activated three long blades with emerge from the discs coil making the weapon around 42 inches wide. Description: Developed by the Kyru Clan this blade folds up into a very small round disc about the size of some one's hand. Gabriale holds 4 of these on his belt. When taken out or off his belt 3 blades erect out, once thrown with a small bust of chakra not even close to a E rank jutsu the blades will begin to rotate at high speeds adding damage. These blades are also made from valcanic ash so they may cut through several trees or clothing/armour before 'stopping.' Name:Kyru Quiver Rank: C Quantity: No more than 2 Per-member Appearance: An average quiver with the exception of slots being placed in side to hold differnt types of arrows in a certian location. A seal is placed within the slots so that several of that arrow type can be held. Description: Each Kyru member holds this quiver but may adjust it accordingly over time. The quiver may be located on various places on each member. The slots that holds the arrows doesnt mean the amount of arrows available. Each slot holds a seal. When an arrow is taken from the spot the seal opens up to replace one arrow to that spot, this seal is/has been made by Kyru members only. Each seal can hold upto 100 arrows. Name: Kyru Wriste Blades Rank: D Quantity: 1 Per-member Appearance: A metal arm band placed on the forearm of the user. When prompted a 2 ft blade will erect out of the slevees of the user. Description: At times the Kyru members have had a need for close combat or deflection purposes. In turn they have invented these wrist blades. They act like any other pair of wrist blades in their fast ejecting motion however they are made from the same material as the swords in the Kyru Bow and as result can channel their elemental chakra into them resulting in whatever they did in the sword form only on a smaller level (wriste blade being smaller than the swords.) Name:Kyru short sword Quantity: 2 Appearance:[spoiler] 
Special Abilities/Characteristics: It is a basic short sword made to help a Kyru when they are forced to do close combat Arrows: Name: Scorpion Arrow Rank: D Quantity: 100 (Sealed) Appearance: A normal arrow with the exception of the arrow head being shapped like a Scorpions tail, this is the Kyru Clans signature arrow as result makin this arrow head unique. Description: A basic arrow of the Kyru Clan this arrow's head is shaped in the fashion of a Scorpions Tail head. It is flat like any other arrow would be, the only real unique thing about this arrow is 2 things. Its shape being that of a dragon head and its unique featur to "Sink teeth" in its target. When/If the arrow hits any thing the arrow will erect 2 small blades that appear as teeth, this makes it harder to pull the arrow out if it's in some one.This arrow takes up 3 slots in Gabriale's Large quiver and one in his small quiver. Name: Dragon Arrow Rank: D Description: A basic arrow of the Kyru Clan this arrow's head is shaped in the fashion of a dragon's head. It is flat like any other arrow would be, the only real unique thing about this arrow is 2 things. Its shape being that of a dragon head and its unique featur to "Sink teeth" in its target. When/If the arrow hits any thing the arrow will erect 2 small blades that appear as teeth, this makes it harder to pull the arrow out if it's in some one.This arrow takes up 3 slots in Gabriale's Large quiver and one in his small quiver. Name: Gravity Arrow Rank: A Description: Often the Kyru come up against an opponet who move's very fast or they need to combat but cant seem to get any thing to hit. AS result they created this arrow and seal. After being fired and seal being activated a 30 yard diameter area is set up. Within this area teh wright or gravity is increased drasticly for a set amount of time. The area become's weighed down by 3 times its normal amount. For instance bench pressing 100 pounds now becomes close to 300 pounds. Walking now becomse more of a hard event. Often people are forced to 'slow down' when in the arrow's affecting area. Lifting an arm, breathing, walking/running, hand jutsus, these all are drasticly slowed down to the point They appear in slow mo. Gabriale only holds one slot for these in his back quiver. Name: Black Powder Rank: C Quantity: 100 (Sealed) Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow. Description: This arrow is qunique only to the Kyru clan. Through the advanced knowlege of science's and weapon knowlege the Kyru clan learned to use black powder with arrow's. A Black Powder Arrow contains enough explosive power to clear a 10 feet radius. (Total of 20 feet diamiter for thoes who dont know what a radius is) How it works is just behind the arrow head is a small peice that igites the black powder which is stored in the shaft of the arrow. Gabriale has one slot in his back quiver and one in his hip quiver.
History:
The Kyru clan was Birthed out of various members of the Sand who sought to increase the defenses. The members all had extensive knowledge of weaponry while half were masters of Ninjutsu while the other half masters of Fuuinjutsu. Over time during Wars with other Shinobi villages the new Kyru clan had developed what they thought was needed most, long range combat. Archery was ideal for the clan as they could not create a fast array of ninjutsu that they could use at a long range, the same with Fuuinjutsu. The original members all had their knowledge of weaponry and began to think 'out side the box.' If they could improve the use of weapons to the point they could combat advanced shinobi and win then they would set what their goals would be. First thought was obviously archery. Using an bow and arrow was ideal for long range combat.
Firstly the clan members needed to perfect using the weapon to the point missing a target was rare. Once accomplished the clansmen began to experiment with the Ninjutsu and Fuuinjutsu masters. From this was the clans first KKG many came to know as Arrow jutsus. Over time the Kyru clan began to be revealed as a deadly clan and key defense for the Sand. One thing the Kyru realize they needed was to either develop something that enabled them to see long distance better. With increased vision the members could hit targets farther away. Slowly the members developed a doujutsu that became legendary as it enabled the clansmen not only to increase their range of fighting but help in close combat surprisingly.
During war times clans often sought out their own survival by offering their services to various employers, sometimes this included Nations. The Kyru had begun to work with the Leaf village alot more. Having regular missions and relations with them caused the clan to become divided. Several remained loyal to the Sand while the other half honnored the survival of the clan and saw the leaf as their best bet. Eventually the clan split down the middle. This occured once the Nations stopped fighting and clans were forced to choose who their loyalties belonged to. These two clans are now rivals enduring a secret war. |
| | | | Wind
Posts : 730
| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Wed 07 Jul 2010, 10:37 pm | |
| This is Gabes clan. As I see it, only Gabe or an Admin is suitable for making edits to this clan. Here's the problems I see with it, because it is currently existing completely outside of the forum's rules.
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- Name: Archer's Eye's
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The Kyru Clan developed their own doujutsu over time to help assist with their long range combat. When activated the user's eye's become enveloped with the pupil highly increasing their vision. The user can now see up to a mile in detailed vision. When used in close combat the user may be able to predict taijutsu soley based on muscel tension in the user's skin. When you go to life a hand muscel's tense up so it becomes capable of lifting up, the user can see these muscel's begining to lift or move ergo they can in a sense predict some taijutsu move's. However due to speed they may not beable to do any thing nor beable to see the muscel's tense up at times. One example of this working would be when an opponet throws a punch, as they do that they begin to throw a leg kick even before the punch is done, as result various muscel's in their body would tense up pointing at a leg begining to move so the user may be able to counter properly or set a 'trap' for the opponets attack. One last key featur is the filter of light. The user's eye's being enveloped by the pupil (Black portion of the eye) The pupil naturaly filters out light to its best ability. Now it is enhanced to the point the user could look up at the sun and have it appear as a bright circle or object for no more than 10 seconds before they would start to squint and have damage like a normal person begin. I'm confused, this doujutsu makes little sense. Why does having long range vision allow them to see through skin to the tendons and muscles beneath? Please remove the portion of this KKG that predicts melee attacks. I understand the light blocking thing, but the melee portion of this has no place in this KKG. This is like stealing a small portion of the sharingan, just to have it.
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- Name: Summoning Arrow
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Desctiption: The Kyru Clan created this arrow to aid them in creating an opening for a summon to attack. The Kyru clan member will first obviously draw blood and wipe it on the feather portion of the arrow (end of the arrow.) From here the user will fire the arrow at the target and about mid flight they will activate the summoning contract. The summon will emerge with momentum flying at the target, the arrow will also be flying just ahead of the summon and often causes an opening for the summon to attack. This really needs a higher rank. I recommend A rank. The ability to summon a creature at range is rather crazy. I might even recommend this just be removed.
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- Name: Arrow Clone Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The Kyru clan created this in a similar method to Kage Bushin as well as SHuriken Clone Jutsu. The Kyru clan are anabled to create real copies of any type of arrow they fire. With a single use of this jutsu the user can create 10 cloned arrows, past that extra chakra would be needed.
It should be noted that this can only be used with normal arrows, or it needs its rank drastically increased.
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- Name: Kyru Bow (Gabriale's)
Quantity: 1 Per-member
Rank: S
Appearance: Varies per-member
Description: Each Kyru member develops a bow for their use. Over time the members my create new bow or adjust their current ones to new. One key feture to each Kyru Bow is it can channel chakra through it. One featur is the 'string' of the bow, the tension is pulled taightly to the point most cannot pull it back very far. The string is made from a special material not common to find or on a bow. This material is perfect for a bow as it creates its own above normal tension. The highly increased tention allows a arrow to fly faster adn farther than any other bow around. This tension is what gives the Kyru the capablility of shooting their arrows up to 1 mile. Every Kyru Bow is differnt. Some have theirs made into swords or other wea[pns. Each bow can hold their own unique capabilities that makes each member deadly in their own right. This needs to be removed, or a note needs to be added that only S ranked ninjas can use this bow. The weaponry rule dictate what weapons the different ranks are able to use, and S ranked weapons are in very few people's hands. It makes no sense that every member of a clan gets an amazingly powerful bow. If you want to add different rank clan weapons, then you are welcome, but Genin are only able to use a C ranked bow. Chuunin only a B ranked, and Jounin an A ranked.
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- Name: Kyru Hat
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Per-member
Appearance: This hat is a common traditional style rice feild hat out lined wit the shiney valcanic ash.
Description: The kyru clan makes an abundant supply of valcanic ash due to the fact the material is hard to come accross. They use this material to refine into a blade. This blade is easily sharper than steel and most swrod materials naturaly. The Kyru clan use it to line their hats around the edges with. At times they make take their hat off and throw it at the opponet, the hat could pass through several trees before comming to a halt. This item makes no sense, and is clearly not D ranked. A chain saw couldn't cut through several trees when thrown at it, let alone a hat with some ash on it's brim. Please remove this item.
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- Name: Kyru Shoe's
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Per-member
Appearance: These are almost normal every day traditional style chinese sandles with the exception of being spiked allowing better traction.
Description: Due to the advanced knowlege of weaponry the Kyru clan is capable of inventing various gadgets. One being the Kyru Shoe's. Each member wear's a pair of these. In the bottom of the shoe is smaller spike's. This allows the wearer to turn on a dime with great percision. Should the person need to stop all momentum and turn they can do so now as well as pick up more speed due to better traction and the spikes digging into the ground giving more leverage. If a kick is thrown the spike's may add more damage if hit directly with them. Any increase in speed is a special ability. These need to be made B rank, and have their bonuses better quantified. Speed and Damage increases are far to vauge. Also, turning on a dime can be done in many shoes, which numerous people with broken, twisted, and sprained ankles will tell you. How do these shoes protect the wearer's body from the forces involved in stopping and turning so quickly?
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- Name: Triple Blade Spinner
Rank:C
Quantity: Varies Permember
Appearance: A simple round disc about the size of a shoe boxes width. When activated three long blades with emerge from the discs coil making the weapon around 42 inches wide.
Description: Developed by the Kyru Clan this blade folds up into a very small round disc about the size of some one's hand. Gabriale holds 4 of these on his belt. When taken out or off his belt 3 blades erect out, once thrown with a small bust of chakra not even close to a E rank jutsu the blades will begin to rotate at high speeds adding damage. These blades are also made from valcanic ash so they may cut through several trees or clothing/armour before 'stopping.' Increase this to B rank, because C rank weapons can have no special abilities, or chakra involved. If you want this to be able to cut through "several trees or clothing/armor" then increase it to A or S rank. If you want it to cut through armor, explains the ranks at which it does so. A B ranked weapon will not be cutting through S ranked armor, for example.
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- Name:Kyru Quiver
Rank:A
Quantity: No more than 2 Per-member
Appearance: An average quiver with the exception of slots being placed in side to hold differnt types of arrows in a certian location. A seal is placed within the slots so that several of that arrow type can be held.
Description: Each Kyru member holds this quiver but may adjust it accordingly over time. The quiver may be located on various places on each member. The slots that holds the arrows doesnt mean the amount of arrows available. Each slot holds a seal. When an arrow is taken from the spot the seal opens up to replace one arrow to that spot, this seal is/has been made by Kyru members only. Each seal can hold upto 100 arrows. You will need to give this item a sliding scale on both rank, and capacity. Unfortunately genin can not use A ranked weapons.
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- Name: Scorpion Arrow
Rank: D
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A normal arrow with the exception of the arrow head being shapped like a Scorpions tail, this is the Kyru Clans signature arrow as result makin this arrow head unique.
Description: A basic arrow of the Kyru Clan this arrow's head is shaped in the fashion of a Scorpions Tail head. It is flat like any other arrow would be, the only real unique thing about this arrow is 2 things. Its shape being that of a dragon head and its unique featur to "Sink teeth" in its target. When/If the arrow hits any thing the arrow will erect 2 small blades that appear as teeth, this makes it harder to pull the arrow out if it's in some one.This arrow takes up 3 slots in Gabriale's Large quiver and one in his small quiver. This is C ranked, because it has a special design. Remove mention of your character, and state that it takes up 3 slots in any quiver.
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Name: Nara Arrow
Rank: B
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: Using the Clan's advanced knowlege of sealing the Kyru created this arrow. The Kyru clan wanted to hold an arrow that would represent each known clan in the leaf. As result they began to work with the various clans to seal effects of their KKG's. This is the only arrow the clan needs to work with a member of the Nara clan to create it. When working with the Nara Clan the Kyru develop an arrow that would essentialy trap an opponet as a normal jutsu of the Nara would. The nara clan member need's to charge their specific chakra into the Kyru seal for this arrow to generate. The pupose of this arrow is to be an advanced arrow for trapping of catching a target out side a basic net arrow. This arrow must either hit the opponets shadow or get hit by the seal's extending shadow. When the arrow hits the ground the seal activates either trapping the opponet or sending out a small shadow towards the opponet that can only travel up to 5 feet. If caught the target becomes in-modile for up to 4 posts for genin, 3 for Chuunin, 2 for Jounin, and possibly 1 for Kage level. Gabriale has one slot on his back quiver for this arrow.
Name: Inuzuka Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: Similar to Fang over Fang jutsu the Kyru clan created this jutsu in resembalance to it. This jutsu isnt required to have a clan member work on to create, the seal the Kyru members placed on it cause it to replicate the jutsu. Once the seal activates the arrow will begin to have a vortex form around it of high speed winds. This jutsu or arrow will appear to look like the Fang over Fang jutsu the Inuzaka's use. This jutsu also act's like a drill as it can cut through tree's as well as rock. Gabriale has 1 slot in his quiver on his back and one quicker in the on his hip.
Name: Hyuuga's Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: This Jutsu or arrow was developed off of the Hyuuga's Gental Fist jutsu. Due to the fact the Kyru lack the Byakugan they often dont get to hit all or most of the opponets chakra points. The user will first take the arrow and use chakra to activate the seal on the arrow. After firing the arrow at the target and the seal activates the arrow will break up into 361(exact number of chakra points in the body) smaller tooth pick type arrow's. These 'arrows' have chakra on their tips that when hitting the body they send into the opponet, similar to how the Hyuuga do with their gental fist. Often opponets try and use their hands to sheild the on comming berage, this often results in several chakra points in their hands being periced. Any location that takes the brunt of the berage has an increased chance of having several points hit. Never have no chakra points been hit nor have a number less than 20. With these points being hit means chakra must now find a way to travel around that blocked point. Should the hands be blocked then it would become almost impossible to use a large aray of jutsus. Gabriale has one slot in his back quiver for this arrow
Name: Aburame Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description: This arrow is one of the Kyru clan's most unique arrow's. Inside the seal is some (30) special flying bug's the Aburame Clan gather for the Kyru clan from time to time. Once fired and seal activated bug's will begin to pour from the seal and attempt to feed on the chakra of the opponet. The arrow my peirce the opponet and cause damage if the opponet doesnt avoid the arrow's path. Gabriale has one slot on his back quiver and 1 on his hip's quiver
Name: Akimichi Arrow
Rank: C
Quantity: 100 (Sealed)
Appearance: A Basic arrow with the exception of a seal being placed onto the shaft of the arrow.
Description The Kyru clan wanted to create a arrow or jutsu based on the Akimichi clan but already had an Arrwo expansion jutsu. Instead they used a seal that when applied and used helped the shaft of the arrow to extend. Once fired the shaft of the arrow extend forward. Becuse the arrow is already moving forward and its shaft is now extending forward often opponets get hit by it becuse of misjudging its speed or its sudden jolt forward causes damage to the person due to again its sudden speed in take. Gabriale has one slot on his back quiver and one on his hip quiver.
These are all techniques based on the secret jutsu from other clans. You have no mention of anything like this in your clan's very brief history. Denied. Remove these. You don't just get to steal other people's secret jutsu.
I understand that this clan was approved before all the guidelines for weapons and equipment were published, but this needs to catch up with the times if anyone is going to play it. |
| | | | Phantom Heart
Age : 31
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| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Thu 08 Jul 2010, 12:36 am | |
| | Gabe is gone for three months, more or less. So I suggest using a different clan. Sorry for the inconvenience, but until he get back, and corrects the problem, this clan cannot be used. ;/ |
| | | | Kris
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| | Subject: Re: Kyru Clan Sun 11 Jul 2010, 1:54 am | |
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