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Mizuno, Mugen.

THE INFO.

Name: Mizuno, Mugen
Nickname:
Age: 19 years of age
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Forehead Protector: Not particularly proud of being labeled as a shinobi for Konoha, Mugen reluctantly embedded the forehead protector plate into the green and brown sash that secures his Death Spinner to his back.
Personality:
Clan: N/A
Nindō: "If living means bowing down to the bastards of this world, I'd rather die on my feet with my head held high."


THE NINJA.

Origin: Kusa no Kuni
Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin (C)
Specialties: Taijutsu | Weaponry (Main: Close, Sub: Long)
Elemental Affinities: Raiton (Lightning) | Fuuton (Wind)
Combat Style: As many could probably guess from his personality alone, Mugen is about as straightforward and subtle as a gun. Being a Taijutsu and Weaponry user, Mugen is fearless when it comes to a battle or skirmishes and prefers to dive right into the thick of things, without ever thinking twice about his actions. Although this may seem irresponsible of him, Mugen prides himself on his ability to adapt and overcome almost any situation he is put under, regardless of how others might choose to read it. This is of course achievable through the use of his prominent abilities in the martial arts of Capoiera, as well as Iaitō. By using these styles in combination with each other, Mugen is able to dazzle and confuse his enemies with a display of sheer athleticism and power before they ever have a chance to react quickly enough. While he may be bullheaded at times Mugen is certainly no fool, and will stop and reflect upon a situation before acting if the situation demands it. Being a loner for the majority of his life, Mugen has never worked well with others and considers them a burden upon everyone for the most part. Although so long as they can hold their own in a fight, Mugen is more than willing to put them to the test and see what they are capable of.
Special Characteristics:


THE BACKGROUND.

Birth of a Vagabond:

The Band of Seven's Offer:

Mugen's Betrayal:

Roleplay Sample:


THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu:

Taijutsu:

Weaponry Jutsu:

Weapons and Equipment:


FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Mugen
Source: Samurai Champloo
Image URL: Mugen


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Completion bump.
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Name: Kazaguruma | Windmill (Capoeira)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: These spinning kicks are utilized while the user is either on the flat of their back, or after performing a jump into the air. The user will launch two 360 degree spins with their legs extended outwards, forcing the opponents away from them. If any opponents are caught within the kicks while the user is on their back, they will be knocked to the floor causing moderate concussive damage and leaving them open for an attack. If the opponents are caught within the kicks while in the user is in midair, they will be sent flying from their starting position, causing moderate concussive damage in the process.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Sukaru | Ginga (Capoeira)
Rank: C-A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This technique forms the basic stance of what Capoeira is as a whole, and emphasizes the importance of keeping the body's nature rhythm flowing at all times. By sending chakra to enhance the correct muscles, it allows a Capoeira user to dodge and evade a majority of of incoming attacks using quick bursts of speed, whether it be physical or jutsu based. This is achived through the use of jumps, flips, somersaults, swaying, or just as simple as dropping to the ground. The user will also be able to incorporate this evasion tactic to boost the strength of following Taijutsu attacks by 20%, 40%, and 60% for one post dependent on rank, due to the centrifugal forces generated from such acrobatics.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Ryūkansen
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Most often used as a counterattack against a thrust or charge, the user will sidestep away from the forward-moving opponent as they move past them. In doing so, the user spins in a full circle, adding momentum and centrifugal force to the strength of the sword swing, which is then aimed at either the opponent's back or the back of the neck. This in turn makes it exceedingly difficult to recover or defend against.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Ryūtsuisen
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This attack is used from a position higher than an opponent, usually initiated by a powerful jump. Once achived, Ryūtsuisen uses the momentum of the fall to strengthen a two-handed sword swing that brings the blade down on the opponent's head or shoulder.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Ryūshōsen
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The opposite of Ryūtsuisen, Ryūshōsen is a rising attack meant to strike the jaw from below with the blunt end of the sword. For additional power, one uses one's free arm to apply force to the back of the blade and utilizes a powerful upward jump during the attack. This in turn usually sends the target flying if executed correctly.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Ryūtsuishōsen
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A combination of Ryūtsuisen and Ryūshōsen, Ryūtsuishōsen begins with the powerful jump and supported upswing of Ryūshōsen, giving the leap enough power to launch one's opponent in mid-air, and on the returning drop, Ryūtsuisen is performed. This in turn will most likely end with a fatal wound if landed correctly, or at the very least, several fractured bones for a none lethal approach.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Doryūsen
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: A ranged attack in which the user will drive their sword into the ground, while at the same time releasing an average amount of chakra. This in turn will shatter the area around where the blade landed, sending earthen debris flying towards the opponent, and causing moderate concussive damage. If the earthen debris makes contact with the opponent's head, they will be rendered unconscious for one post.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Dansurōtasu | Dancing Lotus
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Description: This kenjutsu technique delivers a massive flurry of strikes that is delivered to key locations or vital spots on the opponent. The sheer speed of the slashes makes this technique exceeding difficult to dodge or counter.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Shokkingu hōyō | Shocking Embrace
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Description: This jutsu is a fairly simple technique in which the user will manipulate Raiton chakra around the sword, as well as into the blade at later ranks. After a few hand signs, the Raiton chakra that was built up will go through the hilt and up into the blade, where it will remain until the end of the technique.

C: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, but stop at the beginning of the blade, allowing a nearly invisible glow of electricity to radiate one inch around the blade. These electrical currents will cause numbness to any appendage touched in this manner. If an appendage is hit more than once, it will be paralyzed for 1 post until it regains feeling once more. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 2 posts.

B: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, and travels half way up the length of the blade, allowing a clearly visible crackle of electricity to radiate one inch around the blade. These electrical currents will now cause moderate burns and muscle spasms, in addition to effects from C rank to any opponents touched by the blade. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 3 posts.

A: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, allowing the maximum amount Raiton chakra to enter the blade. This time the electrical currents will form a cackling vortex that will radiate three inches around the blade, while the chattering noise of the surge can be physically be heard. These electrical currents will now cause heavy burns and muscle spasms, in addition to effects from C rank to any opponents touched by the blade. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 4 posts.
Chakra Cost:

Name: Shure~tsu | The Shredding
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0-5 meters)
Element: Fuuton
Description: This jutsu is a fairly simple technique in which the user will manipulate Fuuton chakra around the sword, as well as into the blade at later ranks. After a few hand signs, the Fuuton chakra that was built up will go through the hilt and up into the blade, where it will remain until the end of the technique.

C: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, but stop at the beginning of the blade, allowing nearly invisible air currents to radiate one inch around the blade. These air currents will cause minor lacerations to any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents also raise the speed in which the weapon is swung by 20%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 2 posts.

B: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, and travels half way up the length of the blade, allowing clearly visable air currents to radiate one inch around the blade. These air currents will now cause moderate lacerations, and is capable of fracturing the bones to any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents will further intensify the speed in which the weapon is swung by 40%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 3 posts.

A: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, and bypass most of the hilt, allowing the maximum amount of Fuuton chakra to enter the blade. This time the air currents will form a swirling vortex that will radiate three inches around the blade, while the chattering noise of the air stream flowing can be physically be heard. These air currents will now cause heavy lacerations, and is capable of tearing through flesh and bone as if it where paper for any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents will further intensify the speed in which the weapon is swung by 60%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 4 posts.
Chakra Cost:

All need chakra cost. You also must realize that you have to pay for higher ranked versions of those jutsu as you rank up.

You need more appearance and personality as well.

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Name:Heaven's Fangs
Rank: C-S
Type: Weaponry
Appearance:

These twin retractable double-edged blades are just over one foot in length, and cast a heavenly white glow to the eye due to the nature of the metal. There is one secured onto the top of each of the user's forearms, which are hidden beneath white hand wrappings. When the user flexes their arm in a certain manner, the blades will spring upwards, effectively providing them with two deadly weapons. The blades themselves hold no true abilities in and of themselves, though due to the special metal alloy composite of the blades, they are extremely durable in every sense. In addition, these blades do not impede the user from forming hand seals.
Quantity: 2
Storage: Concealed underneath wrappings and secured to each of Mugen's forearms.
Special Abilities: Chakra Conductive at B rank and up.

Name: Death Spinner
Rank: C-S
Type: Weaponry
Appearance:

A unique sword that was obtained by Mugen at a young age, during his days as a mercenary and thief, which appears to be an amalgamation of the Okinawan sai and Japanese katana. It displays a curved double-edged blade that extends three foot in length, with a two pronged hilt that is sheathed across his back. On the opposite end, a small tanto concealed at the end of his scabbard. The concealed tanto feature of the weapon was added by Megen himself, always referring to it as his "Trump Card" in battle.
Quantity: 1
Storage: It is sheathed across Mugen's back.
Description: What makes this sword truly unique is the special metal alloy in which both blades are made from. When this metal is exposed to an opponents bloodstream, it acts like a toxin that specifically targets the victim's motor skill functions. Each time the victim is cut, their reaction time will decrease by 4%, 8%, and 10% dictated by the rank of the sword. These decreases will then cap out at 20%, 40%, and 60% respectively. In addition, the Death Spinner will become chakra conductive at B rank and up.

Just make these C-rank and upgrade them once you rank up.

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When this metal is exposed to an opponents bloodstream, it acts like a toxin that specifically targets the victim's motor skill functions. Each time the victim is cut, their reaction time will decrease by 4%, 8%, and 10% dictated by the rank of the sword. These decreases will then cap out at 20%, 40%, and 60% respectively. In addition, the Death Spinner will become chakra conductive at B rank and up.

Yeah sorry but no. That is more poison material than anything.

Your face claim is a bit too old to be 15. Make him 17.
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PostSubject: Re: Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 28 Sep 2012, 1:47 am

Done, I tried to expand as much as I could onto looks and personality, but there is only so much you can wright without breaking out into some kind of long random tangent. Let me know what you think. bounce
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PostSubject: Re: Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 28 Sep 2012, 4:26 am

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Name: Sukaru | Ginga (Capoeira)
Rank: C-A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This technique forms the basic stance of what Capoeira is as a whole, and emphasizes the importance of keeping the body's nature rhythm flowing at all times. By sending chakra to enhance the correct muscles, it allows a Capoeira user to dodge and evade a majority of of incoming attacks using quick bursts of speed, whether it be physical or jutsu based. This is achived through the use of jumps, flips, somersaults, swaying, or just as simple as dropping to the ground. The user will also be able to incorporate this evasion tactic to boost the strength of following Taijutsu attacks by 20%, 40%, and 60% for one post dependent on rank, due to the centrifugal forces generated from such acrobatics.
Chakra Cost: 4 | 8 | 12


Name: Shokkingu hōyō | Shocking Embrace
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Description: This jutsu is a fairly simple technique in which the user will manipulate Raiton chakra around the sword, as well as into the blade at later ranks. After a few hand signs, the Raiton chakra that was built up will go through the hilt and up into the blade, where it will remain until the end of the technique.

C: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, but stop at the beginning of the blade, allowing a nearly invisible glow of electricity to radiate one inch around the blade. These electrical currents will cause numbness to any appendage touched in this manner. If an appendage is hit more than once, it will be paralyzed for 1 post until it regains feeling once more. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 2 posts.

B: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, and travels half way up the length of the blade, allowing a clearly visible crackle of electricity to radiate one inch around the blade. These electrical currents will now cause moderate burns and muscle spasms, in addition to effects from C rank to any opponents touched by the blade. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 3 posts.

A: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, allowing the maximum amount Raiton chakra to enter the blade. This time the electrical currents will form a cackling vortex that will radiate three inches around the blade, while the chattering noise of the surge can be physically be heard. These electrical currents will now cause heavy burns and muscle spasms, in addition to effects from C rank to any opponents touched by the blade. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 4 posts.
Chakra Cost: 5 | 10 | 15

Name: Shure~tsu | The Shredding
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0-5 meters)
Element: Fuuton
Description: This jutsu is a fairly simple technique in which the user will manipulate Fuuton chakra around the sword, as well as into the blade at later ranks. After a few hand signs, the Fuuton chakra that was built up will go through the hilt and up into the blade, where it will remain until the end of the technique.

C: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, but stop at the beginning of the blade, allowing nearly invisible air currents to radiate one inch around the blade. These air currents will cause minor lacerations to any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents also raise the speed in which the weapon is swung by 20%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 2 posts.

B: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, and travels half way up the length of the blade, allowing clearly visable air currents to radiate one inch around the blade. These air currents will now cause moderate lacerations, and is capable of fracturing the bones to any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents will further intensify the speed in which the weapon is swung by 40%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 3 posts.

A: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, and bypass most of the hilt, allowing the maximum amount of Fuuton chakra to enter the blade. This time the air currents will form a swirling vortex that will radiate three inches around the blade, while the chattering noise of the air stream flowing can be physically be heard. These air currents will now cause heavy lacerations, and is capable of tearing through flesh and bone as if it where paper for any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents will further intensify the speed in which the weapon is swung by 60%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 4 posts.
Chakra Cost: 5 | 10 | 15

As you rank up you'll need to buy the next rank of jutsu. Just so you know.

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Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].

Name: Kunai Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 24 Kunai [24], 8 Exploding Notes [8]

Can't have both yet. Get rid of one please.

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Name: Doryūsen
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: A ranged attack in which the user will drive their sword into the ground, while at the same time releasing an average amount of chakra. This in turn will shatter the area around where the blade landed, sending earthen debris flying towards the opponent, and causing moderate concussive damage. If the earthen debris makes contact with the opponent's head, they will be rendered unconscious for one post.
Chakra Cost: 6

That unconscious varies on the size of the debris. Remove that part please. If you feel a large rock would knock them out and they shrug it off talk to an eval mod to look at the topic and judge for you.

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Name: Shokkingu hōyō | Shocking Embrace
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Description: This jutsu is a fairly simple technique in which the user will manipulate Raiton chakra around the sword, as well as into the blade at later ranks. After a few hand signs, the Raiton chakra that was built up will go through the hilt and up into the blade, where it will remain until the end of the technique.

C: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, but stop at the beginning of the blade, allowing a nearly invisible glow of electricity to radiate one inch around the blade. These electrical currents will cause numbness to any appendage touched in this manner. If an appendage is hit more than once, it will be paralyzed for 1 post until it regains feeling once more. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 2 posts.

B: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, and travels half way up the length of the blade, allowing a clearly visible crackle of electricity to radiate one inch around the blade. These electrical currents will now cause moderate burns and muscle spasms, in addition to effects from C rank to any opponents touched by the blade. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 3 posts.

A: The Raiton chakra will flow through the hilt, allowing the maximum amount Raiton chakra to enter the blade. This time the electrical currents will form a cackling vortex that will radiate three inches around the blade, while the chattering noise of the surge can be physically be heard. These electrical currents will now cause heavy burns and muscle spasms, in addition to effects from C rank to any opponents touched by the blade. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 4 posts.
Chakra Cost: 5 | 10 | 15

Change 3 post and 4 post to 2 and 3 respectively please. You will also need an upkeep cost on this due to it lasting longer than a post.

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Name: Shure~tsu | The Shredding
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0-5 meters)
Element: Fuuton
Description: This jutsu is a fairly simple technique in which the user will manipulate Fuuton chakra around the sword, as well as into the blade at later ranks. After a few hand signs, the Fuuton chakra that was built up will go through the hilt and up into the blade, where it will remain until the end of the technique.

C: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, but stop at the beginning of the blade, allowing nearly invisible air currents to radiate one inch around the blade. These air currents will cause minor lacerations to any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents also raise the speed in which the weapon is swung by 20%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 2 posts.

B: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, and travels half way up the length of the blade, allowing clearly visable air currents to radiate one inch around the blade. These air currents will now cause moderate lacerations, and is capable of fracturing the bones to any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents will further intensify the speed in which the weapon is swung by 40%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 3 posts.

A: The Fuuton chakra will flow through the hilt, and bypass most of the hilt, allowing the maximum amount of Fuuton chakra to enter the blade. This time the air currents will form a swirling vortex that will radiate three inches around the blade, while the chattering noise of the air stream flowing can be physically be heard. These air currents will now cause heavy lacerations, and is capable of tearing through flesh and bone as if it where paper for any opponents that come within 1 foot of the blade, even if the blade does not make physical contact with the victim. These currents will further intensify the speed in which the weapon is swung by 60%. The effects of the jutsu at this rank will last for 4 posts.
Chakra Cost: 5 | 10 | 15

Remove the post count and the swinging speed. Wind is good for extending blade reach and cutting easier. Not swinging speed. Other than that just add an upkeep cost and we will be good.
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PostSubject: Re: Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 28 Sep 2012, 4:54 am

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As you rank up you'll need to buy the next rank of jutsu. Just so you know.

I know.

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Can't have both yet. Get rid of one please.

Done.

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That unconscious varies on the size of the debris. Remove that part please. If you feel a large rock would knock them out and they shrug it off talk to an eval mod to look at the topic and judge for you.

Done.

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Change 3 post and 4 post to 2 and 3 respectively please. You will also need an upkeep cost on this due to it lasting longer than a post.

Done.

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Remove the post count and the swinging speed. Wind is good for extending blade reach and cutting easier. Not swinging speed. Other than that just add an upkeep cost and we will be good.

Done. Although wind is not only good for offensive purposes, it can be used to increase the speed in which an object moves. The same as Raiton chakra can be used to speed a person's muscle speed.
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PostSubject: Re: Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 28 Sep 2012, 4:56 am

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E Rank: N/A
D Rank: 1 CP Per Post
C Rank: 2 CP Per Post
B Rank: 3 - 4 CP Per Post
A Rank: 5 - 6 CP Per Post
S Rank: 9 - 10 CP Per Post

Please go back through and use that for your upkeep system. Your fighting style also needs it unless you just use it only one time.

Edit: Just noticed this.

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E Rank: 1 - 2
D Rank: 3 - 4
C Rank: 5 - 9
B Rank: 10 - 15
A Rank: 20 - 25
S Rank: 35 - 39

You don't follow our jutsu cost entirely. Please fix that.
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PostSubject: Re: Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 28 Sep 2012, 7:50 am

Done, I didn't know about those costs. Thank you for posting them.
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PostSubject: Re: Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 28 Sep 2012, 6:09 pm

Coolio. I love Mugen personally so I hope you make him into a BA here on US Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] 287405.

Approved 1/2
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PostSubject: Re: Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] Mizuno, Mugen [Konoha Genin] EmptySun 21 Oct 2012, 5:16 pm

Hi there! We are very much alive yes!

Sorry for the wait, but for future reference whenever you need something checked or want to bump something that has been waiting for more than 2 days; then please post in here: http://www.ultimateshinobi.org/t5757p20-application-topic-checking

One thing I noticed with your profile, is that when you pick weaponry you have to have two ranges listed.
Like: (Main: Close, Sub: Long) for an example. Smile

Other than that, everything looks pretty good so you will get the 2nd approval after editing that small thing! And I'm a fan of Mugen, so look forward to seeing him in action!

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Done.
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2/2 Approved.


Now you should go here and make your account. Smile
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Archived.
Due to inactivity.
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