Asagami Clan (Done I think)

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Clan Name: Asagami

Clan Location: Traveling Clan, but mostly found near Kiri and Konoha

Clan Traits:Clan Traits: The Asagami Clan has been recognized by many different things regarding their abilities and them being highly proficient in the use of taijutsu while being extremely athletic and flexible enabling them to do things that not many humans and do, giving them an inhuman advantages, or a better way at putting things at their physical abilities as them being born and well talented contortionists, and having a high tolerance for pain (ex: if they were diving towards someone preparing to strike with their right hand and had the left arm out in front and if the arm gets twisted around like a screw till all the bones have cracked they would keep going until they having completed the attack.)

(If you are wandering what a contortionist can do and what they are, here is a small list of what they can do... and on another note a user can put their bodies in weird ways that can be used with their acrobatics to reach different momentums and fight using weird grapples and using their flexibility to help influence their movements, making it nearly impossible for opponents to copy their movements.

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Another one of the clans traits are their incredible affinity with the wind element that used to in their fighting abilities, they have the unique ability with their wind element that allows their winds to absorb bits off pieces of chakra from what the winds hit weakening their opponent or target as well as from some jutsu's to make them weaker (think of it like the ability chakra absorption, but with wind).

One of the strange things and confusing thing about their clan are their normal sets of eye’s in which they look awfully similar to the Hyuga type eye’s when their Waikyoku Eye’s aren’t activated, giving confusion into others thinking that they might be from Hyuga, but the reason behind this is because of their blood inheritance from the Hyuga Clan that had affected their eye’s.

One of the last things about their Clan is they can create multiple personalities within themselves (only four personalities exist), the personalities are used to gain multiple skills (i.e.: one for acting normal and one for fighting, another that’s a combination of the two, and the last one is homicidal as well as being suicidal), also their training revolves around refining themselves a self hypnosis skills that enhances their abilities wielding certain types of weapons that they specialize in which is usually a sword and highly in the use of taijutsu. When a child is born into their clan they are given one name written two different ways in kanji, sometimes these personalities make it harder for them and others to get along with them, these personalities are used to try to gain multiple abilities and a higher use of different skills and abilities, verifying that not all of the same clan members have the same abilities, since all the personalities that members have are different they all poses different abilities, but their winds ability are still the same for every member, giving their opponents a hard time predicting the user movements and thoughts (what some of the personalities will do while in battle will sometimes switch off, but may have the same mind sets on their goal, which may be to kill / destroy their target), while one personality may be sufficient in only taijutsu and can’t use any other skill and the enemy may know that, but the other personality is actually skilled in genjutsu, but the opponent may not know that).

Kekkei Genkai: Waikyoku Eye's

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The Waikyoku Eye’s distorts the users vision and gives the user incredible clarity of dexterity, one of the reason behind this is because their eye’s were actually made for tracking fast moving objects and the strange rings around their iris, which is the purplish color, allows them to easily identify things that are unusual and sometimes (or mostly) not possible to be seen with normal sets of eye’s, giving them a special type of vision and be able to quickly identify the enemy and destroy them. It also allows them to sense (see) pain in the opponent / target. The doujutsu could see a human target or animal in a black kind of aura or pitch black body, and from this when or is the person or thing is damaged either physically or mentally the aura / glow of that target changes. I.e. red for physical pain and green for mental, as well as a purple for being posioned or paralized and the darker it gets the worse the damage is, also if their target is bleeding it comes up as a orange color, it also changes the surround color of their surroundings to a blue color helping them to easily identify their target. This way combined with the user with their abilities and taijutsu can pinpoint where the opponent is damaged and can cause optimum damage in return. How they are able to tell where the exacted point of pain the area is coming from is from the vibrations coming from their opponent’s heart and their blood flow sensing irregularities throughout their opponent’s body as also from their opponent’s body temperature.

These eye’s could also be extremely useful to medical nins helping them be able to locate the source of the pain and quickly heal it as well as helping the user know where to target their attacks and use what part of their enemy is damaged to their advantage in battle.

Since Genjutsu is created when a ninja extends their chakra flow through the cerebral nervous system of their opponent to control their minds chakra, thereby affecting the users five senses, a way for them to break out of some of the opponents jutsu’s is to stop the flow of chakra in their body, and then apply an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the casters chakra or in other words using Kai Release by applying a sudden surge of chakra, one of the ways of helping them to achieve this is that they would intentionally inflict pain upon the their own body by affecting one of their senses (touch), to have pain that’s not caused by the Genjutsu and having the pain utilizing the resulting pain to bring their senses back in order therefore breaking them out of the Genjutsu, the Asagami Clan over use this type of technique for breaking out of Genjutsu’s because of their high threshold for pain.

Secret Clan Jutsu: Faded Death Slash
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Rank: D -- S
Description: The user forms together their own chakra with their wind elements and combining the use of the Asagami Eye’s, the user can direct Kamitachi (slicing winds) along certain wind currents in the air, by using a bladed weapon the damage is an amplifier causing the winds to become sharper and faster when the user thrusts or slashes acting as a conductor and a director for the winds to appear, but the winds actually come from the tip of the blade and either the user has to slash the air or an object causing target to be slashed from unknown directions (such as if the user slashes in front of the opponent from a distance a slice a wind may attack the opponent from directly from behind), this ability usually requires the Eye's of Asagami to help them tell where the wind currents are and when they curve, the Waikyoku Eye’s are also used to help them tell where the enemy’s weak and injured parts are so they could attack them. The user can only create 3 wind slashes at a time.

Name: Eye's of Asagami
Type: Dojustu
Element: N/A
Rank: D -- S
Description: The Eye’s of Asagami are the last and extended as well as confusing ability of the Waikyoku Eye’s that allows the user to see the wind currents in the air, like what the Waikyoku mean’s is distortion, or in better words it allows the user to see certain things that can’t be seen with normal eye’s by distorting their normal eye views, asset from allowing the user to sense where the opponent in injured, the second form of them allows them to see the wind currents to actually help the user with some of their attacks to help them inflict more pain to their opponent.

By being able to see these wind currents in the air they are able to tell how the wind will effect both them and their opponents as well as movements, as well as letting them know when a projectile is going to curve with the wind (like how a sniper must monitor the wind and weather knowing if the wind is going to effect their bullets and how it will, it’ll suck to see a bullet that was supposed to be a head shot miss the target completely, because of a simple gust of wind) but they require quite a good skill in dexterity to be able to be used correctly while in combat, the first part of the eye are the Waikyoku Eye’s, which actually gives the user the status of their target, while the Eye’s of Asagami help give the user the necessary means to help injure the target by monitoring the wind currents to help influence some of their attacks to be closer to the enemy, as well as how the wind moves around the targets body (wind just doesn’t fly through you unless it knocked you down, it might move around you, depending on the force, which is when you feel the wind hit and move around your body to get to the other side, they actually see the wind flows / currents as they move as well as the exact direction wind flows.)

How one gains this ability can very from immense training or involving a near death experience in which the user failed to kill them selves in an intense situation and are put in a coma for an exstended amount of time, after they have awaken they would most likely have already received those eye's, or involving one or more of their personalities, but there is also a problem with this ability of that the eye’s posses, since the human eye’s were not supposed to be perceived this way, if a the user has low mentality it will cause the user to fall unconscious or possibly die after multiple uses without rest (4 post if the user is genin, 6 for chuunin, and they keep going up by 2 each rank they are, that they could keep them activated, if any longer it can be dangerous towards the users life and possibly kill them), but a user with great stamina and training may be able to withstand a lot of stress it can causes upon the users eye’s.

Name: Point of Death
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Rank: C -- S
Description: By focusing and collecting both their wind chakra and their own chakra, they can focus it to the tip or edge of their blade and have the chakra form around it constantly, helping the blade or weapon appear more sharper and stronger by covering the edge of the weapon with a blue type of aura, but that is only a bluff hiding the techniques actual ability and the moment it hits the target the user can choice weather to release it or not when the user does decide to release it, it spreads / explodes out along the opponents body moving in a snake like pattern along the target cutting an slashing what ever it touches as well as implanting their own chakra into the targets chakra pathways, not discerning where their target is but attacking what ever they are able to hit. What happens is the wind and chakra are around they blade and set up as a combustion of wind that attacks in random patterns and its second affect allows it to block or cancel out chakra tranfer. (The chakra pathway will only be blocked for one post. The user will usually have their Eye's of Asagami activated to help tell them where the wind will spread out from, since even though it moves in a snake like patern, it almost alway follows the wind currents in the air, that blow across / around the targets body.

History:
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The origin of the Asagami clan came from a different and small clan, that clan held no special abilities, except for being able to manipulate the wind with being able to see the wind currents and able to create multiple personalities in the selves, the name of that clan was named the Fujou Clan. The leader of that clan was name Kinzo Fujou.

Kinzo was a type of scientist and researcher, and like a few people and wanted to combine both the Uchiha and Hyuga clan bloodline. He believed that if he combined both of the bloodlines that he would make a dangerous and powerful bloodline that would be used to increase their military power and bring a reputation towards their clan.

After a few years, he tried desperately tried to combine the bloodlines, but no matter what he tried he just couldn’t completely combine the two, he wanted the bloodline to have all of their abilities, including the use of each of the clans special eye’s abilities, mostly all that they were able to gain from this experiment was that they achieved the process of acquiring some of the Byakugan eye’s abilities that allowed them to see through objects, but only up to the users normal field of vision and able to see the chakra pathway systems, but the only way they could interrupt it is by using a blade to help them gain access by focusing their own chakra into the tip of the blades and attack them physically, by doing this, it allows them to cover up that they had inserted their own chakra into their opponents chakra pathways to tamper with, but the Byakugan lost its ability of seeing everything within 360o and the sixty four palm and being able to attack the enemy and damage them internally with their gentle fist, while from the Uchiha Sharingan eye, they managed to still obtain their great clarity of perception of being able to track fast moving objects and give them a chance to be able to tell recognize certain jutsu’s and helping them be able to make the enemy’s movements somewhat predictable, but lost its ability to copy jutsu’s and be able to use their special kind of hypnosis and all of their other types of abilities, Kinzo was greatly angered by this since he wanted a bloodline that had all their abilities in one, as much as he tried he couldn’t completely combine the bloodlines, it seemed the more he tried the more abilities the bloodline lost, but so far it has stayed to only this one was most promising, the bloodlines creator was named Koshite, who held that type of bloodline, but there were also people who weren’t to thrilled with having the two bloodlines combined and sought to destroy it, one of the small named clans that hated the Fujou Clan was the Oyashiro Clan, the leader was Kenchi Oyashiro he waged war and successfully captured Koishite, they were about to execute him, if it weren’t for Oyashiro quickly assembling a small squad of shinobi accompanied by himself, crushed what was left of Kenchi’s Clan, but it was not before Kenichi placed a type of curse upon Koishite, before he was slain that would cause him and what ever bloodline that followed him to have a type of instinct or impulse that caused them to turn into a crazed killer and have a suicidal type of nature that caused them to become a threat to their own bloodline and to others, it made them attack almost anything that came across their path, it was made so that the bloodline would destroy themselves.

Kinzo didn’t want all of his efforts to go in vain and just vanish like that, so he decided to combine that bloodline with that of the Fujou clan since the Fujou Clan’s bloodline aloud them to create multiple personalities’, (only 4 or 3 personalities have ever been noted of to exist in the person’s body) within them selves, he thought that if he did this he might be able to have the cursed side to become part of another personality that would save the user of that bloodline in which it did, but there were still occasions of where that side would appear, but it was still contained by the other personalities come together to help overpower their homicidal and suicidal self , he believed that having a strong mind and power would be able to control one’s self. Kinzo later named this bloodline the Waikyoku bloodline, and named it the Asagami Clan.

After it was created the Asagami Clan became most renowned for its members to be able to create multiple personalities within themselves, and the use of the wind element and their special eye’s after the Fujou Clan had died out (the reasons behind how the Fujou Clan had died out remains a mystery lost in the sands of time). The personalities were later used to gain multiple skills (i.e.: one for acting normal and one for fighting, as well as keeping the cursed side in check). Also their training revolves around refining themselves a self hypnosis skills that enhances their abilities wielding certain types of weapons that they specialize in which is usually a sword and highly in the use of taijutsu. When a child is born into their clan they are given one name written two different ways in kanji, stating that it was the fusion of two separate bloodlines into the combination of the two (the one being there name and the two being the two different ways of writing their name).

But today there aren’t too many of the Asagami Clan and their bloodline left, the reason behind this is because of the curse that Oyashiro put on them that caused them to become rampant and attack their own kind and sometimes others if their mind is too weak for them, but the other personalities help keep it in check, since that personality sometimes only arises when their life is near death when their thoughts and mentality are greatly low or usually when something traumatic happens, where their other self can easily take over in which the other personalities are too weak to help and are too slow to take over that personality in time, or one with the same blood as them is near. In which they remain scattered throughout the land.

Another thing about the Asagami Clan are their eye’s, when a member is born they have similar eye’s to that of the Hyuga clan eye’s this is probably because of the Hyuga bloodline in them, and that their Waikyoku Eye’s activate just like the Uchiha’s Sharingan does, but instead of receiving them from a life threatening situation that could be used to save their life, how they developed their eye’s are when the user tries to kill them selves, but if they fail to kill themselves they are put in a type of coma for and unknown period of time, and when they awaken they receive their Waikyoku Eye’s, this part was probably the result of the curse that was put on them by Oyashiro that tried to kill them, and instead of dying they lived and gained the eye’s, to signify their battle between life and death.

Another note about their clan is that their clan symbol is also a seal that must be carried or near (can be tattoed on their bodies) the members to try to help prevent them from attacking each other the Kinzo had made, just in case the personalities weren't strong enough to hold back the negative personality, when the negative personality does arise, the negative side will only be consuisos for 10 minutes before the other personalites take over, or the user falls unconsiuse, but there has been some cases in which the negative personality would actually help the clan member other than trying to kill them.

Clan Details: It can be open, but only 9

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I think I'm done and ready for it to be checked.....

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This clan needs to be more original, currently it appears to be odd combo of the sharingan and the byukagan. From what I can tell you can see chakra networks, differentiate them by colour, do something incredibly similar to Juuken and have Sharingan perception/muscle movement ability. On top of this the ability to see wind and immunity to eye based genjutsu. I am also not quite sure how you can see both wind and chakra with the same dojutsu and you gen immunity needs a cleared explanation.

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The Asagami Eye's are actually a secound form of the Waikyoku Eye's that's develpoed after a type of training, but i edited it though, this clan is actually desended from both the Uchiha and Hyuga bloodline, but i edited it to try to be original though

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Every clan trait needs its own paragraph description with details.

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Nanaya wrote:: Name: Point of Death
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Rank: C -- S
Description: Since they are able to see the Chakra Pathways in the human body, they are able to trace them along the outside of the opponents body by fusing their wind elements how they accomplish this is by focusing their chakra and collecting small bits of wind to the tip of the blade of their weapon, when it they are able to focus it to the tip of their blade, and the moment it hits the flesh it spreads out along the opponents skin, cutting their skin as it traces the pathway and spreads out, this does attack the opponent internally, but only externally the reason why it can’t attack internally is because the moment it hits the skin is the moment the wind and chakra is released (it’s like a trigger being set off) like wind sickles and would have already spread out among their body, and the jutsu needs the wind element they use to help spread out among the opponents attacked body part, but right after the slash starts the user can implant their own chakra into the opponents Chakra Pathway to help temporary holt chakra transfer (or in more specific words temporary paralysis) from that part for only 3 minutes. Why would they need to see the chakra pathways is because it allows them to see where chakra is moved inside the opponents body, and by seeing it they know just where to target and try to destroy quickly to incapacitate their opponent. The reason why the ability is called Point of Death means that it causes the body part to be temporary incapacitated for a short while, the wind slashed along the opponents attacked body part is supposed to be meant as an distraction for it to become paralyzed.

By 3 minutes, how many posts would that be?

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i was thinking one post maybe

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Can you put that in the jutsu description, please?

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i already did

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If one of the personalities is always suicidal, why hasn't the clan died off? What's stopping the suicide attempts? The other personalities? What's the process of this?

Also, the Byakugan/Sharingan hybrid Doujutsu is a no. It's still way too similar, not to mention overpowered. I'd say remove it all together, because if you don't there's going to be some SERIOUS limiting.

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I thought i put it in the history in which the other personalities keep it in check, and that it only arrises when their life is threaten or near death in which their mind and thoughts would be low in which the other personailites can't hold it back anymore, and i removed some stuff, but i have to have you check it

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Quote :: The clan has the ability to see the chakra circulation system inside living things as well as being able to see through solid objects, but only up to their actual field of vision when activated.

This is one of the abilities of the Hyuuga clan.

Quote :: The other abilities that the eye’s give the user an incredible clarity of dexterity, one of the reason behind this is because their eye’s were actually made for tracking fast moving objects and things that are unusual to be seen with normal sets of eye’s and be able to quickly identify the enemy and destroy them.

This is the one of the abilities of the Uchiha clan.

- What we are saying is that you can't have best of both worlds. You will have to get rid of one and focus on one of those points. Seeing as you have a taijutsu based clan trait you might want to keep the uchiha style ability. From that, think of something that is related to that which would benefit a clan member.

Here is a idea off the top of my head;

Quote :: How about you have the ability to sense ('see') pain in the opponent/target. The doujutsu could see a human target or animal in a black kind of aura or pitch black body, and from this when that person is damaged either physically or mentally the aura/glow of that target changes. i.e red or physical pain and green for mental. Or it could change colour as the damage gets worse, maybe from yellow to red in a gradient like way. This way, combined with your taijutsu you can pinpoint where the opponent is damaged and you can cause optimum damage to in return.

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(sorta went with the idea you gave.

Subject: Re: Asagami Clan (Done I think) Wed 17 Mar 2010, 6:16 pm

- With the first trait about physical abilities, I would like you to expand a bit more as to just how far this goes. You give one example. At least three should be provided to give an adequate understanding because somethings are circumstantial. Provide some examples that depend on circumstance. Also there needs to be a solid and logical reason that the clan members have this because it doesnt seem to go with the KKG at all.

- Wind trait is going to need a lot better explanation, as well as a reason that it ties in with every thing else in your clan. Right now it basically reads that they can do what any other wind element user could do. That doesnt belong as a clan trait unless, as I said, provide a better explination as to how you are more proficient (what can you do with wind that others cant) and also how it ties in with your clan. Really your going to have this part denied unless you can tell me how it ties in because you have a very intricate dojutsu and physical
aspects amped.

- Personalities, again, how does this tie in with the rest of the clan and to what end do these personalities have a purpose for.

-All human bodies maintain a body temperature of 98.6 so you need to remove the false information about every body having a different temp and that people can be identified by their temp. This simply, is not true. Other then that you have a very solid dojutsu that i like very much, nice creative defense against eye contact dojutsu and totally justifiable.

As a final note, it seems that you took some ideas that seemed really cool and just kind of threw them together. That isnt always bad, but it is bad in this case because you have no explanation as to how they tie into one another, which is a must. Your either going to have to provide an explanation that does that or pick one of the many aspects of this clan, and do with out the others.

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Edited i think i editied the things you said

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Quote :: One of the most strange ability that the eye’s possess is that it is harder for genjutsu that could effect the opponents mind through eye to eye contact, why this is so is because when the Waikyoku Eye’s are activated they aren’t looking at their opponents external features, but are actually looking at their opponents whole body as their opponents body is enveloped in a black kind of aura that only shows where their opponent or target is damaged / hurt which prevents them from being able to see their eye to eye contact, but if the targets eye is damaged that would actually allow them to make eye to eye contact, bypassing their strong defensive against genjutsu from eye to eye contact.

This needs to be removed as it is no longer logical and connected with your new abilities.

- But you may be able to tie it in somewhere to do with pain, as pain is a measure to get out of genjutsu. Seeing as you have used my idea of a pain style clan then you can even extend this further. You could make it so you could influence pain within your own body, i.e with the pain recepters in your body etc. You could limit pain in some areas and cause it in others (small amounts to get out of genjutsu). Though, the positives would have to be combined with the negatives.

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Quote :: One of the known ways that helps them to break out of some genjutsu’s is by inflicting pain upon themselves/body since some of the ways to break out of jutsu’s is by inflicting pain upon themselves, and using their Waikyoku Eye’s to pick up on the pain that travels through their bodies via pain receptors, the much more pain they inflict upon themselves the easier it is to break out of them, (i.e.: lets say if someone was having a head ace, but someone broke their finger, which pain would they be focusing on the moment and few seconds after pain they’d be focusing on the head ace or the finger being broken).

Doesn't really make too much sense. There are a couple of spelling and grammar issues that need to be addressed. But, you need to focus and explain how this is possible. Don't just quote what I have said as that was only a rough guide. You need to elaborate on the how and why.

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Quote :: Name: Armor of Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Rank: D -- S
Description: Allows the user to create a large gust of wind that circles around their body (stretching four feet away from their body when its activated) for a few seconds that could be used to protect them selves from some projectiles and sometimes close range fighting if they have time to activate it, its a type of defensive technique, it can be combined with different elements to help provide multiple uses.

Remove this, it doesnt really seem a clan specific jutsu. Just add it to your clan app.
Once complete your clan should be good to go.

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edited an awaiting approval

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Approved my son.

Good patiences.