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The Joker
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| Subject: Ryuzaki, Ranmaru [Kumo Genin] (WiP) Thu 14 Jun 2012, 10:22 am | |
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Ryuzaki, RanmaruTHE INFO. Name:Ryuzaki, Ranmaru Nickname:Demigod of Fire Age:13 Gender:Male Appearance:
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Ranmaru often wears his hair down. It is somewhat long but no long enough to in his eyes. It is a dark brown colour. On the left side of his face there is a scar from a burn. The burn was given to Ranmaru by his father, it starts from midway down his cheek and goes all the way up to the middle forhead. His ear also shows the burn scar and it stretches to the bridge of his nose. His iris' are a light yellow colour. His skin is quite pale which is unique considering he spends most of his time in the heat and playing with fire.
Ranmaru has two types of clothing he wears. His armour which is taken from his father. It is mostly a brownish and blood red where the plates are. The plates do nothing except look cool, they are extremely lightweight. There is a large collar which stretches up to Ranmaru's chin. There are plates over his shoulders and mid way down his upper arm. There is a mid-section which is paler than the blood red and has a belt at the waist. There are two long circular plates that stretch to Ranmaru's knees, also there is a diamond shape plate of the same length at the back. Under these plates there is a light material that has good flexibility, is light and thin but won't tear off easily. The material is quite baggy especially at the joints where it meets the vambraces and the knees where it meets the boots. The vambraces go up to Ranmarus fingers.
Finally, over this armour Ranmaru wears a large robe. This too is red. The Robe is worn at all times adn is only ever taken off during serious battles. It is more like a covering as it is only joined by a button just below Ranmaru's neck, as a result of this he can move it all behind him without actually taking it off and giving himself maximum movement and flexibility. Ranmaru's arms will often be moved out of the covering of the cape during serious combat, but during minor combat he only ever reveals his hands. This robe has a big hood that Ranmaru wears most of the time so he is not recognised. Personality: Quotes:"You're Pathetic." "I'm just getting fired up!" "Game Over." Clan:Ryuzaki Nindō:"Rise Above"
THE NINJA. Origin:Kumogakure no Sato Affiliation:Kumogakure no Sato Rank:Genin Specialties: Main:Ninjutsu Secondary:Weaponry; Ranged & Exotic Elemental Affinities: Main:Katon Secondary:Raiton Combat Style:
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Ranmaru it likely to enter combat using ranged weapon first. He will make distance and with try to force his opponent to use jutsu on him lowering their chakra so that when he pulls out the exotic weapons to get his opponents tangled up to skewer them with his ranged weapon or incinerate them with his beloved fire jutsu. However, he has been known to just go into some fights guns blazing trying to decimate his opponents early. He rarely uses raiton, only to power up his weapons and give them immense cutting power. Special Characteristics: Katon Prodigy
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Name: Katon Prodigy Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: Must have Fire Affinity Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a natural talent for fire manipulation and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the fire element becomes so talented that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy in the fire element. Because of this, the user's fire techniques are 20% more destruive with their increased in heat and size.
THE BACKGROUND. History: Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Klown was at his friends house for the night as he was having a sleep over with a few people his age, Klown hoped girls would be there so maybe he can finally get a girl friend but you never know. Zetsumei realized the time was nearly 6 o'clock and that it would be getting dark so he put on his light lavender, loose-fitting, long-sleeved, zip-up shirt, black pants cut off around mid-calf, bandages wrapped around his ankles, traditional shinobi sandals, and a purple, rope-like belt tied in an inverted bow around his waist, he put this on as it was light for training and fighting in. Klown swiftly left his friends apartment leaving a note saying gone to train be back at 21:15.
Klown knew exactly where the best spot for training was and he knew he had 3 hours of good long training to get through, Klown was at his calmest as he was about to do the thing he loves to do, train! Klown took a shortcut around the ramen shop to get to the park. No one should be in the part as it was dark so the conditions were perfect. Klown then started to listen and focus his mind to everything around him so he could be mentally and physically attuned for his training session. Klown started to close his eyes as he was on the outside of the park and focus his mind else where.
Klown could hear the whistle of the wind scrapping through the trees that would make some cringe for it was not a pleasant sound, however Zetsumei seemed to like it alot. He hear the birds tweet as they told there children to go sleep or eat other then that there was a bitter and eerie silence that was usually on horror films right before a character dies.
Zetsumei could feel the wind brush through his over gelled spiky hair and through the gaps in his fingers, it was soothing. He feld the warm yet cool wind whip his face softly. This was the kind of conditions Zetsumei wanted but hardly ever happened as it was usually boiling hot. Zetsumei continued to walk towards his destination in the perfect frame of mind he was in, he then opened his eyes.
Zetsumei saw the deep, crimson sky through the gaps in the trees as the number of trees grew as he went deeper into the park. The grass was a luscious green and obviously well looked after. The trees had every single leaf on them and were massive. Zetsumei liked the park the setting was beautiful and definitely had great targets to train with. Zetsumei swiftly grabbed for a kunai and threw it through the tree branches to kill an annoying bird, which he hit. He then turned to look natural as if it wasn't him and when he looked up he saw his chuunin exam buddy knock into a stronger looking shinobi and begin to fall.
Suddenly, Zetsumei began to taste this shinobis masses amount of chakra which made him rapidly turn from a slow walk to a sprint to see if Aaron was alright and if the other shinobi would bother him. As Klown was running he yelled "Akimaru!" he quickly arrived beside Akimaru and was relieved to hear the shinobi say sorry and didn't want to harm him, and at that instant Aaron was helped up by a hand from the ground and Akimaru was upright again. Klown then began to speak "Hey Akimaru, ain't seen seen you since the chuunin exams a while back how have you progressed?"
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| Subject: Re: Ryuzaki, Ranmaru [Kumo Genin] (WiP) Thu 14 Jun 2012, 10:42 am | |
| THE ARSENAL. Jutsu Basic Ninjutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Ninjutsu
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Name: Kumogakure no Jutsu - Hidden Cloud Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: - Description: Kumogakure no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique utilizing no element. A technique that imitates that of the Kirigakure no Jutsu, once the user has performed the required handseals they will be able to call upon a thick and heavy cloud that will appear almost out of nowhere. The cloud will be able to cover a ten metre radius around the user and only the user is able to sense where others lurk within the cloud. Those with doujutsu or chakra sensing techniques are also able to see through this thick cloud but without any aid, then you'll be blind within the cloud. If a C - Rank or above fuuton technique is activated, then the cloud will be blown away. Chakra Cost: 4
Katon Ninjutsu
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Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Chakra Cost: 8
Raiton Ninjutsu
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Name: Rakurai - Lightning Strike Rank: D Type: Nin - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: Raiton Description: Rakurai is a ninjutsu and taijutsu mixture utilizing the lightning element. After gathering chakra to the fist, the user is able to create multiple sparks of electricity to form around the top of their hand for it then to alter into a source of lightning. This lightning is to enhance the pain when delivering a punch and also numbs the area of attack for an entire post. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Raitoningu no Kenshutsu - Lightning Detection Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m) Element: Raiton Description: Raitoningu no Kenshutsu is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the lightning element. After performing the required handseals the Hidden Cloud member will be able to send out a pulse of lightning, covering a radius of five metres with the user being at the centre. The dome - like lightning will allow the user to detect any chakra - enhanced traps, people, animals or weapons coming at them from blind spots. This can only be used once per post and anyone who is caught in the pulse will feel a tingling sensation covering their entire body. It's use is to ensure that safety is always maintained for the Kumogakure shinobi. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Clan
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Name: Ryuzaki Flame Rank: D-A Rank Type: Clan Ninjutsu Range: (D Rank: 0-5M), (C Rank: 6-10M) (B Rank: 11-25M) (A Rank: 25-50M) Element: Fire Description:The members of the clan can use fire at will and control natural flames if they submit an equal amount of flame to control it. The way the clan summons up flame is with the use of a snap in the hands. The amount used is gauge within the ranking of the shinobi. Lighting a small candle or burning a tip of a rope or something similar in that aspect is considered D rank usage. Anything the size of a softball to the size of a beach ball, As well as flame engulfing the hands and up to the elbow or Feet up to the kneecap is at C rank cost. B Rank usage of fire is anything larger than the size of a beach ball or longer than 30 feet of rope, up to the size of a Shed is considered to be B rank usage of flame. Anything the size of the Kage's mansion, distance from the Fire temple to the location of grass were team Kakashi was trapped is considered A rank usage of fire/fire chakra. Chakra Cost: (D Rank 4) [C Rank 8] (B Rank 12) (A Rank 22)
Name: Ryuzaki Style: Ryuzaki Inferno Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Short (0-5M) Element: Clan Description: The most used jutsu within the clan. The jutsu allows the user become engulfed in flames. Mostly the body parts of the hands to the elbow and the feet to the legs. This jutsu adds a effect that gives the target a burn once the flame come in contact with the body. This jutsu can be used again to power up the flame and adds the effect to give the target a third degree burn once the jutsu comes in contact with the target’s body Chakra Cost:5
Name: Flaming Shuriken Rank: D-A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Range: Close (0-5m), Mid (5-10m) Description: A different form of the tile shrunken jutsu. By channeling flames within shrunken and projectiles, Blaize is able to control them at will. Using the flames he will be able to levitate the projectiles to hit its mark. The shuriken will stop being controlled when it hits its target or lands on another target (i.e. Tree, door, etc). With the adding of fire chakra the target will leave a burning effect when it hits the target. During its D rank form Blaize can control up to five projectiles. When it is in C rank, Blaize can control up to 20 projectiles. When B rank 50 projectiles, A rank 75 projectiles. Chakra Cost: (D: 4) (C: 8 ) (B:12)
Weaponry
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Name: Raitoningu no Kengen - Lightning Manifestation Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m), Far (10m+) Element: Raiton Description: Raitoningu no Kengen is a weaponry technique utilizing the lightning element. Using their lightning affinity, the Kumogakure shinobi is able to enhance any weapon they possess and coat it with lightning chakra to give it a more powerful hit. The lightning will be able to numb the area where the weapon strikes and also cause minor burns. Any weapon can be enhanced by this attack, Kunai, Shuriken, Blades or even Arrows. The technique can only be used on weapons though, once the weapon has struck something the lightning will fade away. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The properties of the wire also allows the user to guide fire down it with any number of Katon Jutsu. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency. Chakra Cost: 3
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| Subject: Re: Ryuzaki, Ranmaru [Kumo Genin] (WiP) Thu 14 Jun 2012, 10:44 am | |
| The Items Basic Items
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Name:[b] Genin Kit [b]Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Name: Pen/Pencil Rank:E Type: Personal Appearance: A writing utensil used to write messages or notes on scrolls and other material. Best used to write a message to pass along with a carrier bird. Quantity: 2 Storage: Ninja Holster Special Abilities: N/A
Weapons
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Name:Bow of superiority Rank:C Type:Ranged Quantity:1 (50 Arrows) Description:The bow is a simple Steel Bow. It is roughly 1 metre long, and the steel is about three inches thick. There is abosolutely nothing special about it, nothing that makes it unique to Ryuzaki, Ranmaru except that it can have chakra conducted through it to allow it to have better piercing power and force when the arrows strike something. It is stored in one of the scrolls in Ranmaru's genin pack.
Name:kyoketsu-shogei of Pain Rank:C Type:Exotic Quantity:2 Description:The Kyoketsu-shogei is simple a blade with a chain on the end and a weighted ball on the end you hold it. The blade is 7 inches long, the chain is two metres long and the ball weighs 20 kilograms. The blade is sharp enough to cut through trees with immense ease, and the ball is heavy enough to shatter bone should it hit someone. Stored in Ranmarus first genin scroll
Name:Chains of Anguish Rank:C Type:Exotic Quantity:1 Description:The chains are very big and very thick. Made of pure titanium the chains are very strong and hard to break. It can also be wrapped around Ranmaru's arm and he can put his fist through on of the links to give his punches much more power. Especially useful to tie people up with, around things like trees. Stored in Ranmaru's second genin scroll.
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