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Yamamoto Yoru.

THE INFO.
Name:Yamamoto Yoru
Nickname:
Alias: Chen Kenichi
Age: 18
Gender:Male
Appearance: Standing at a height of 5'10 and weighing at an even 190lbs. Keeping an athletic build when he is not on missions he is running around the village to stay in shape. His white hair is always spikey no matter how much he tries to comb it down or keep it fixed. His blood red eyes stand some times make people think that he is an Uchiha using his Sharingan but when people look deep into them they feel a deep form of kindness. Along the right side of his face is a deep jagged scar from and accident involving his fathers favorite sword.
While on missions he wears normal ninja outfit with a few changes of his own. On his right leg he keeps a holster for his kunai and scrolls. On his left leg is another holster for a scroll he keeps filled with weapons that he could use at any moment. While stashed up both of his sleeves Yoru keeps kunai for any random moment. His headband is a bright red made from that was his fathers that he had gotten after his death.

When he is not taking part in missions Yoru tends to wear a simple t-shirt and shorts. Though under no reason he is still armed to a small extent. Stored within his cargo pockets Yoru keeps several scrolls either filled with weapons or empty for whatever use he could come up with. Unlike his mission outfit Yoru does not wear his fathers headband but instead wears his mothers sea green headband.

During formal occasions Yoru chooses to wear a black Jinbaori which allows him to look good for any situation. Printed on the back of his Jinbaori is the symbol for his village since his headband does does not mesh well with the outfit. However at the same time it allows him so many different locations to hide weapons in. Under his obi he keeps the two fans his father had given him for combat. Up both sleeves he keeps his kunai that he also wears when he is in his mission uniform.

Forehead Protector: On the forehead.
Personality:At first glance Yoru looks uncaring and some what evil due to his hair and eyes. However that could be as far from the truth as possible. He cares deeply for those around him. His loyalty to his village and its members is unquestionable, even if another member of the village doesnt get along with him he will still be there for them at a moments notice if it is life or death.
One of the few things Yoru loves is reading, he could spend hours reading about a single topic if it grips him enough. This can also make it very dangerous for him because it can tear him away from the outside world. When it comes to people who share an interest in books and scrolls Yoru tends to treat them with a bit more respect. In his free time he can be seen walking around reading or partaking in his other favorite past time, eating Taiyaki. He has not traveled very far but in the few places Yoru has been he has sampled Taiyaki. Due to that he has started making a list of his favorite Taiyaki places.
When Yoru is not running around reading and eating Taiyaki, he is off doing the missions he is required to do. During this time he attempts to perform them with speed and efficency. He keeps a level head about the entire thing and focuses on what needs doing even if it is a low job where he is simply deweeding a garden. Yoru takes pride in being told that he has done a good job.

Clan:N/A
Nindō:"Arguing amongst ourselves will not help anything...here eat some Taiyaki."

THE NINJA.
Origin:Land of Fire
Affiliation:Konohagakure
Rank: Master Jounin
Specialties:
-Main:Ninjutsu
-Sub:Weaponry (Main: Short Range, Sub: Long Range)
Elemental Affinities:
-Main:Fuuton/Wind
-Sub:Katon/Fire
Combat Style:
Yoru has a habit of attacking his opponent in a up close and personal style. Usually pushing his opponent to the point that they only choice they have is to defend against his attacks but not counter attack. However when he is faced with an opponent that is more skilled in close combat or he knows they are skilled with close quarters combat he will keep his distance. Thus using his wind and fire ninjutsu to keep his distance from his opponent. However Yoru is still experimenting with his combat style in order to find his ace in the hole.

Special Characteristics:
Chakra Special Characteristic
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Physical Special Characteristics
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Skill Based Special Characteristics
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Mental Special Characteristic
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Social Special Characteristic
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THE BACKGROUND.
History:
Childhood
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Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.
Academy Jutsu
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Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Taijutsu
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Weaponry
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Tools/Weapons:
 

FACE CLAIM.
Character Claim:Assassin Class
Source:Ragnarok Online
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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyTue 14 Aug 2012, 2:30 am

Well... Your app has a minor mistake with your jutsu lapping into the face claim section..

You also need to fill out the face claim section as well.


Could you also spoiler the jutsu?

And Finally add more to your Roleplay sample and Combat history as a solid paragraph is required.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyTue 14 Aug 2012, 9:44 am

You need to still add more to combat style. Your personality and appearance could also benefit if you added some more to it. Your roleplay sample could also get a bit more added to it as well.

You also get one special characteristic that is at C-rank.

Quote :
Name: Shinrin Gādian
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
Element: -
Description: Shinrin Gādian is a genjutsu technique. After performing the required handseals and direct eye contact has been made with the user, they will be able to create three average - sized male lions that are made up of leaves. The illusionary lions will appear by walking from behind the user, each one having a mane made up from more leaves. They are able to run up and attack the users opponent, but once bodily contact has been made by the lions, they will simply fade away like normal clones. An advantage to these fake lions is that if attacks are thrown at them, they will always be able to dodge by avoiding the attacks or having the leaves form gaps so something such as a kunai doesn't touch them. They are used for distraction purposes and possibly for the opponent to flee the scene.
Chakra Cost: 6 [2]

The leaves making holes to dodge kunai is fine but they can not always dodge. Please edit that out.
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1/2 Approval
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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyFri 17 Aug 2012, 1:57 am


A few more edits away from gaining my approval.
  1. Title; Don't forget to title your topic correctly please, it should be "Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Genin]"
  2. Personality; I've noticed that on your third paragraph of your personality, you seem to contradict yourself. You say you're cold hearted killer, yet you wont kill women or children. Thus leaving only adult males to kill. Now that doesn't really sound like a cold hearted killer to me, so I'd recommend doing a bit of rewording or removing the reference.
  3. Combat Style; Right now there isn't a whole lot of detail within your Combat Style, all I really understood from it is that you use Taijutsu and fight from the shadows, yet you don't even have Taijutsu as a Specialty nor any Taijutsu related techniques. What you need to mention are subjects like your Ninjutsu and Weaponry capabilities, the range you fight at, your strengths and also your weaknesses. This allows members to get a grasp of how you truly fight.

That's all for now.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyFri 17 Aug 2012, 3:47 am

I wasnt entirely sure what to put for range so yea edited unless you say something different
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Thanks for making the edits, with that I can now deem it approvable.
Be sure to make an account topic to ensure you gain your colour and rank.

Approved.
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Archived.
Due to inactivity.

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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyThu 30 May 2013, 2:50 am

SC GONE TIME TO RP!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyMon 03 Jun 2013, 2:09 am

    # PERSONALITY
      "Though he lives by a very strict moral code that only he understands out he hopes to one day find and punish those that took his real mother away from him."

      I think you accidentally a few words there.


    # HISTORY
      "The day of his birthday of his first year was one of sorrow. Though he has not memory of it his family was attacked by bandits. Not wanting to lose her son and end the line of her dead husband she took him and ran."

      Uhh... who?


    # JUTSU
      Ikite iru sukāfu - Living Scarf
      How is this done? Is it a seal on the scarf, or do you need to channel chakra through the scarf to do this?
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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyMon 03 Jun 2013, 3:24 am

once again edited NOW LET ME RP AGAIN!!!XD
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    # JUTSU
      Ikite iru sukāfu - Living Scarf
      You say that it can be used as a weapon, but you don't have anything that allows it to be a chakra conductive weapon.
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Took the easy edit
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Still waiting....
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PostSubject: Re: Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] Yamamoto, Yoru [Konoha Master Jounin] EmptyMon 10 Jun 2013, 8:13 pm

  • TwinnyYamaki wrote:
    His coat is made of flame retardant fibers to keep it from catching on fire when faced against flame jutsu. On the coat he added small sheets of armor so as to protect him from blades. His pants which are made of the same fire retardant fibers are also combined with a light metal armor so as to protect him from projectiles. His belt though a quite a few people think it’s a bit over the top however it does have a useful purpose. The buckle of the belt comes off and becomes a makeshift shuriken. On his belt he has a small pack of ninja tools and the belt buckle itself contains a few shuriken and kunai.

    - Do the coat/pants protect Yoru from Katon jutsu?
    - Surely higher ranked Katon jutsu can still ignite them?
    - What ranked blades does they protect Yoru from? I’d feel more comfortable if the coat/pants were part of your application as equipment, rather than simply under appearance, given their purposes.
    - The belt will need to be added to your application as a weapon if it can be used a such.
    - Please state how many projectiles are stored in the “small pack of ninja tools”, as this gives you more projectiles than somebody simply using them from a ninja kit.

  • Your combat style needs to be a lot longer. At least 250 words. Yours currently stands at 98. Try to include your character’s signature attacks, strengths, weaknesses, strategies, etc.

  • You have 2 SCs. Genin are only allowed to start with 1. Did you train the second SC when you were previously approved?

  • You have only 14 out of 15 of your starting jutsu limit. Whilst not compulsory, I recommend you take advantage of the extra starting slot, as you’ll have to pay for jutsu once approved.

  • You have a custom kit, which you are not allowed to start with, unless it was previously approved when your character was approved?

  • You have nothing in your small scroll or your second medium scroll?
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edited lets get the approval going
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Approved
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Time to bring him back from the grave
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    Approved.
 
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