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Elder Sage
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| Subject: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Wed 03 Aug 2011, 7:57 am | |
| .( The Wakutabi Clan )."Ninja Voodoo." Clan Name: Wakutabi. Location: Oto no Kuni - Land of Sound [Wandering]. Signature Traits:
|| Physical Appearance Wakutabi Clansmen are a hauntingly beautiful group of people with midnight hair and grim silver eyes.
|| Powerful Psychics [Necromancy] Clansmen of the Wakutabi are born with a natural Sixth Sense and are trained to hone that skill as a special characteristic. They are renowned for being the most dynamic and powerful group of psychics to ever inhabit the earth. Their minds are conduits of celestial energy and otherworldly mysticism which makes them capable of accessing powers of the supernatural and the divine alike. Due to the ignorance of humanity they are commonly associated with being demented, unnatural and even demonic by many people because on a surface perspective. However their allies tend to differ in view drastically by exercising the clans mystical talents to protect their village from present and future catastrophes. It is not uncommon for a mature member of the Wakutabi clan to be seen as a spiritual leader within their village and a medium between humanity and the true essence of Nature. Having a Sixth Sense, the clansmen of the Wakutabi are capable of seeing and communicating with the spirits of the dead, whether it be humans, animals, or deity. Unlike regular psychics however, they Wakutabi are capable of "Necromancy" the ability to fully manipulate spirits without any sort of negotiation. They are so skilled that they can even conjure them from any location on the planet without much effort. This allows them to gather foreign information from other countries if channeling the correct spirit. The Wakutabi also have a heightened sense of Clairvoyance; the ability to read a persons past. Instead of being limited to physical contact like most psychics, they can read a person by standing in medium range of them, less than ten meters.
|| Familiars Wakutabi are known to keep familiars by their side as a lifetime kinship and even as an instrument in their practical Voodoo. Familiars are small travel pets such as cats, monkeys, dogs etc. that have human spirits which the Wakutabi are capable of seeing and conversing with by using of their Sixth Sense. This allows the Wakutabi to always have another human companion per-say when wandering or on missions. Familiars must be created in the Pet Section or on your character application. A clansmen can only possess one familiar.
|| Shinigami Pagans The Wakutabi clan are devote followers of the Shinigami Religion which is thee most powerful and secretive cult following in current existence. Over the course of the millennium the essence and teachings of the god Shinigami has been misinterpreted several times by many religious doctrines. He is the god of darkness, malice, mysticism, one of the most sinister being in existence. He was originally depicted as the god of nature, which he is in his own right, but that title has been adopted by his sister Izanami because of her more peaceful nature. He has taught many cults his dark teachings which birthed a sinister religion unlike no other, one that performs sacrifice, prayer, and ritual. Clansmen of the Wakutabi are very religious and see killing as a glorification to Shinigami, which makes many of them sinister in nature. They also may meditate and engage in a prayer-ritual during the day which can involve a simple chant in an forest or even a dozen human sacrifices in an altar.
.Majutsu [Voodoo Release]. Within the Wakutabi Clan there is a powerful bloodline ability that allows them to manifest spirits into corporeal forms of chakra, which they call "Voodoo" for lack of better expression. This is not however a type of inherit kekkei genkai such as Doujutsu and many other physically inheritable mutations but rather a unique form of Yin-Yang Release that is also a close offspring to the clans Shinigami chakra. It took centuries after the clan devoted themselves to Jashin for their Voodoo to mature, each generation becoming slightly more talented than the last. However in recent generations their Voodoo has become ripe and more potent than ever before, which the clan sees as them becoming spiritually closer to their Lord. The complexities of the Wakutabi's Voodoo is simpler to grasp to the minds capable of looking past human reality. With their heightened Sixth Sense and Necromancy, the clansmen can conjure and control spirits to perform any task they wish. Their Voodoo however allows them to bring the spirits into the physical plane by supplying them with their chakra. When in the physical plane the ghosts can retain their previous physical forms before death although they appear phantasmal with spectral blue chakra as their body. Not only are they now able to inflict physical harm, but being composed of chakra they can even attack the chakra of their target similar to the Hyuuga. Animals are commonly invoked by the Wakutabi because of their more vicious and feral qualities which makes them more dangerous minions, whereas human spirits are invoked for more supplementary and ritualistic purposes. Manifested Souls are fairly powerful beings, one of their perks is that they're immune to poison because they're not of the living. But they can receive damage and be killed physically by regular means. When a spirit has been killed, they fade back into the spirit world. Wakutabi can even manipulate their own souls and the souls of the opponent as well, creating a variety of techniques that can establish this. They are shown capable of dividing and strengthening their souls to perform a variety of supernatural feats as well. Techniques derived from the Wakutabi clan are revolve around the manipulation and manifestation of souls. Only one summon-related manifestation technique can be performed at once and they cannot exist 50m from the user, which makes them in incapable of being sent around the world.
Kekkei Genkai: N/A.
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Name: Majutsu: Animēshon no Jutsu [Voodoo Release: Animation Technique]. Rank: D-A. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far(10+)A-rank only. Element: N/A. Description: Using their immense spiritual powers the user calls forth numerous spirits from the spiritual realm and manifests them into the physical world using their Mijutsu. Unlike other techniques the materialization of the spirits are only partial, meaning they are not fully brought into the physical plane and are only seen as distorted images of purple chakra. Because of their more ethereal articulation, they are able to perform small physical feats and be relatively unseen by the enemy, making them suited for moving purposes. Depending on the desired feat to be accomplish, the user can either summon a couple or a horde of souls to lift objects depending on their size. All objects move within a considerable pace when controlled, however if using a higher ranked version of this technique on smaller objects then their movement can become even faster to the point of blurring. In order to sustain the souls the user must continuously channel chakra into them to prevent them from fading back to the spiritual plane. The rank of this technique is dependent on the size of the intended object. Projectile weapons and small objects are considered D-rank. Humans and large animals are C-rank. Trees and boulders are B-rank. And finally large boulders and buildings are A-rank. This technique cannot be used on a PC. Chakra Cost: D-3[1] // C-5[2] // B-10[3] // A-20[5]
Name: Majutsu: Tamashī bīkon [Voodoo Release: Soul Beacon]. Rank: D. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: N/A. Description: The user secretly infuses a piece of their soul into a weapon. Then that weapon touches the target whether it be deflected, blocked or successfully hit, the soul of the user that was stored inside the weapon transfers into the target. This technique is harmless and the target won't even be clued on the move itself. What is does is, it allows the user to spiritually track the target by identifying their own soul which the target secretly hosts inside their own. With this in place the user can see targets on the spiritual plane that bypasses blocked vision. Chakra Cost: 3.
Name: Majutsu: Majome [Voodoo Release: Witches Eye]. Rank: D. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: N/A. Description: The Majome is one of the Wakutabi's renowned techniques and is classified as a more powerful variant of the Killing Intent Technique. The user infuses their eyes with Shinigamic energy as well as their own soul, turning it from it's original silver color into a bloody red for a brief moment when eye contact with the target is made. Using the eyes as a gate way to their soul, when the target looks at the user and vice versa, the user projects Shinigamic energy into the target which reaps them great mental misfortune. It will give the victim visions of their own gruesome death while stunning them for a few moments in fear. Furthermore it will induce them a painful migraine for 2 of their posts. Cannot be re-used on the same target within a single thread. Chakra Cost: 3.
Name: Majutsu: Andeddobitori [Voodoo Release: Undead Birds]. Rank: D. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m+). Element: N/A. Description: Andeddobitori is a Mijutsu technique that invokes the dead spirits of birds. After forming a seal, the user uses their Necromancy to call forth the spirits of two large birds from the spiritual realm around themselves. They then imbue the spirits with their chakra, manifesting them into the physical world. Like all manifested spirits, the undead birds are phantasmal and are composed of spectral purple energy. Now physical they can be controlled by the user to perform a variety of maneuvers and attacks according to the user's wishes. They can inflict damage using their beaks and talons. Furthermore they are also capable of siphoning chakra from their targets if struck. For each post that a target is hit by a bird, they lose 3CP. Chakra Cost: 3[1]
Name: Majutsu: Genso no shutsugen [Voodoo Release: Elemental Apparitions]. Rank: C. Type: Mijutsu. Range: N/A. Element: Varies. Description: Genso no shutsugen is one of the Wakutobi's most renowned of techniques and is signature amongst clansmen who possess nature affinities. It requires great spiritual power and is fairly difficult to master, whoever once learned it is quite favorable in combat situations. Using their Necromancy the user will call forth two powerful humanoid spirits from the spiritual realm. By saying the name of their elemental natures aloud, they can infuse their elemental chakra into the spirits and manifest them into pure elemental beings. These elemental apparitions embody their element physically and are even capable of flying. They are of equal size of the user and at a regular speed. They are incapable of performing any projectile attacks and rely more on tackling their targets and hurting them with their elemental bodies. They are also capable of withstanding a considerable amount of damage before being destroyed as well, similar to Shadow Clones. Fire Apparitions are composed of regular fire and can burn whatever they touch | Water Apparitions are composed of water and can drown or assault targets with a strong pressurized force | Lightning Apparitions are composed of electricity that can shock and burn targets they attack | Earth Apparitions composed of rock and can deliver devastating tackles as well as withstand more damage because of their structure | Lastly Wind Apparitions are composed of air and can deliver a series of cuts to targets they they attack. Chakra Cost: 7[2]
Name: Majutsu: Tamashī no kyūketsuki [Voodoo Release: Vampiric Soul]. Rank: C-S. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A. Description: A sinister Shinigamic technique which led to the Wakutabi being associated with vamparism centuries ago. It literally involves siphoning the chakra and soul from a victim by consuming their blood, even at a distance. The process is done by the exposure of enemy blood, which the Wakutobi use as a opening to the body and soul. To start the user channels the spirit of Shinigami throughout their body which causes spectral purplish chakra wings to sprout from their back as well as horns on their head. Once the transformation is done the user is able to hauntingly magnetically attract the target's leaked blood and flow it through the air towards their mouth where it can be consumed that way. The user gains chakra for every post they consume the target's blood, although that and the distance is determined by the rank. C-rank is close range and 5CP | B-rank is mid range and 10CP | A-rank is long distance and 20CP. The target is capable of stopping the process by sealing their wound(s) or going out of distance. Chakra Cost: C-5[2] // B-10[3] // A-20[5]
Name: Majutsu: Chakura būdoūkyō no ningyō [Voodoo Release: Chakra Voodoo Doll]. Rank: C-A. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: N/A. Description: A unique jutsu that is used as a followup of the Soul Beacon technique or anytime the target possesses a piece of the user's soul within their body, however it is canceled if this technique ends. It is involves channeling that piece of soul and using it as a medium to the targets spirit which the user uses as a connection to their Voodoo Doll. By performing a short sequence of handseals, the user can summon a small raggedy Voodoo Doll covered in black dots that represent the target's Tenketsu Points. Using a needle, the user is able to puncture a T.P. of a doll and inflict traumatizing internal harm on the enemy as well as destroying chakra, very similar to the Hyuuga Style. The distance one can perform this and how much chakra is destroyed depends on the rank of this technique. C-rank is close range and 5CP | B-rank is mid range and 10CP | A-rank is long distance of 20m and 20CP. By going out of distance or destroying the doll, the target can free themselves of this technique. Chakra Cost: C-5[2] // B-10[3] // A-20[5]
Name: Majutsu: Kasoke-tai ridatsu [Voodoo Release: Astral Projection]. Rank: C-S. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10m+) Element: N/A. Description: A ritual technique fit for the Wakutabi's practices of the Soul and The Craft, for it involves manipulating and manifesting the soul through the spirit realm and even the physical plane. Like many techniques derived from The Craft, it must be prepared in a ritualistic fashion in order to be performed. This is done by the user drawing a circular seal on the base of a floor, and using incense or candles to bless their spiritual journey. After performing a string of handseals while sitting in the center of the seal, the user is then able to Astral Project. In this state the user's soul leaves the body and travels freely over the physical plane as a spirit, capable of witnessing anything however not being seen in return. However, with the Wakutabi's skill in Majutsu, they are capable of bringing their Astral Spirit to the physical world where it can be seen and interact with the environment slightly. However when manifested the user still looks transparent and ghostly, and very physically weak. If attacked in this state the user disperses back into the spirit world where they must wait four posts before turning physical again. The range one can reach is dependent on the rank of the technique. C-rank is 100m| B-rank is 200m | A-rank is long distance of 300m | S-rank is halfway around the world. Chakra Cost: C-5[2] // B-10[3] // A-20[5] // S-30[9]
Name: Majutsu: Andeddotaigā [Voodoo Release: Undead Tiger]. Rank: C. Type: Mijutsu. Range: N/A. Element: N/A. Description: Andeddotaigā is a Mijutsu technique that invokes the dead spirit of a large tiger. After forming a seal, the user uses their Necromancy to call forth the spirits of a tiger from the spiritual realm around themselves. They then imbue the spirit with their chakra, manifesting it into the physical world. Like all manifested spirits, the undead tiger appears phantasmal and is composed of spectral purple energy. Now physical, it can be controlled by the user to perform a variety of maneuvers and attacks according to the user's wishes. The tiger is incredibly strong and vicious, capable of using its claws to crate gashing wounds, strong pounces, reflexes, and a powerful jaw. Furthermore it is capable of siphoning chakra from their targets if struck. For each post that a target is hit by the tiger, they lose 7CP. Chakra Cost: 5[2]
Name: Majutsu: Akumatsubasa [Voodoo Release: Satanic Wings]. Rank: C. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m). Element: N/A. Description: A defensive base Mijutsu technique that involves manipulating ones soul in the form of a large pair of ghostly skeletal hands in the shape of wings. When activated the wings are summoned on the back of the user and can wrap around the user to encase them in a skeletal shell. This provides protection from the user from external forces and is arguably as strong as bone. The user is also capable of unfolding the wings and using them offensively if wished as well. They can grapple and smash opponents as a means of attack. Being only 5ft in length the wings cannot extend far but are formidable in close range. Chakra Cost: 5[2]
Name: Majutsu: Andeddoerefanto [Voodoo Release: Undead Elephant]. Rank: B. Type: Mijutsu. Range: N/A. Element: N/A. Description: Andeddotaigā is a Mijutsu technique that invokes the dead spirit of an elephant. After forming a seal, the user uses their Necromancy to call forth the spirit of a elephant from the spiritual realm around themselves. They then imbue the spirit with their chakra, manifesting it into the physical world. Like all manifested spirits the undead elephant appears phantasmal and is composed of spectral purple energy. Now physical, it can be controlled by the user to perform a variety of maneuvers and attacks according to the user's wishes. The elephant fits it's physical characteristics given it's species, making it capable of trampling those in it's way. Furthermore it is capable of siphoning chakra from their targets if struck. For each post that a target is hit by the elephant, they lose 10CP. Chakra Cost: 10[3]
Name: Majutsu: Shisha no jōshō [Voodoo Release: Rise of the Dead]. Rank: B-S. Type: Mijutsu | Kinjutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m+). Element: N/A. Description: An epitome of Shinigamic techniques accessible to those who truly understand and connect with the dark forces of nature and the Death God himself. Due to it's malevolence uses by some of the most sinister Necromancers in history it was labeled Kinjutsu and associated as the offspring of the Edo Tensei, which in actuality isn't too far from the truth, however it's mechanics are entirely different. It involves the user conjuring and manifesting souls into the physical realm through corpses, animating them as a result. The risen corpses are controlled by the user due to their Necromancy talents. This all starts with a string of handseals and quoting an incantation from the scriptures of Jashin. Depending on the rank of the technique in which it is used, a certain amount of corpses can be risen from the grave. If no corpses are within the vicinity, then the user is capable of summoning the corpses through this technique as well. Risen corpses are animated by spirits and thus are immune to feeling pain of any sort. They are grayish declared bodies that are considerably physically strong and fast. They are incapable of performing Jutsu of any sort and can only be defeated by total mutilation of their body. B-rank four corpses | A-rank eight corpses | S-rank twenty corpses. Chakra Cost: 12[3] // 20[4] // 30[5]
Name: Majutsu: Andeddo urufupakku [Voodoo Release: Undead Wolf Pack]. Rank: A. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m+). Element: N/A. Description: One of the more powerful animalistic manifesting techniques of the Wakutabi where instead of a single animal being risen, an entire wolf pack of large wolves is called. After forming a seal, the user uses their Necromancy to call forth the spirits of six large wolves from the spiritual realm around themselves. They then imbue the spirits with their chakra, manifesting them into the physical world. Like all manifested spirits the undead elephant appears phantasmal and is composed of spectral purple energy. Now physical, they can be controlled by the user to perform a variety of maneuvers and attacks according to the user's wishes. The wolf pack is terribly ferocious and powerful, capable of hunting and killing with their numbers. Furthermore it is capable of siphoning chakra from their targets if struck. For each post that a target is hit by a wolf, they lose 20CP. Chakra Cost: 20[4]
Name: Majutsu: Kindan no kank [Voodoo Release: The Forbidden Rapture]. Rank: A. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m - 50m). Element: N/A. Description: A powerful Shinigamic technique that is feared by many which come across it. According to legend, Jashin himself used it as a weapon against the Goddess of Creation, destroying her lands and causing her eternal sorrow. What it does is, after forming a seal it allows the user to summon an expanding sinister dark cloud from themselves that literally drains the life force from nature itself. It is typically used to exile one from their native elements, due to its ability to destroy nearly every element within the area. The cloud can decompose and destroy all plant life, water and rot the dirt so much that it becomes brittle and collapses on itself. This technique is capable of turning a flourish forest of life into a cold barren wasteland. Chakra Cost: 25.
Name: Majutsu: Kurafuto būdoūkyō no ningyō [Voodoo Release: Craft of the Voodoo Dolls]. Rank: S. Type: Mijutsu | Kinjutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m+). Element: N/A. Description: A technique only accessible to the most powerful of practitioners of the Shinigamic Cult which makes it the epitome of both Mijutsu and The Craft. It's name alone can being fear and reckoning to even those who heard of it through rumor, so much that anyone capable of performing it were considered devils during their time. With this technique the user is able to manipulate their targets to a horrific degree, gaining complete control over their mind, body, and spirit, owning them entirely. This is all done by the use of a powerful ritual involving Voodoo Dolls, which the Wakutabi are known to be very skilled at. To perform this ritual, the user must acquire a DNA sample of a living being from either a blood sample or a hair. Once acquired, the user will move to a dark secluded area which is usually their hideout and begin to prepare the ritual. They will draw a intricate seal on the ground, light incense, candles, and align skulls around the seals. Then they will summon a Voodoo Doll and sit with it in the center of the seal. They will then pour the blood of the target onto the Doll, or wrap the hair around it as a medium. Performing a long sequence of handseals and repeating dark invocation, the user is capable of instantly controlling the person no matter how far they are from the seal. They are helpless to this control and won't even realize they are being controlled for the duration. Chakra Cost: 35[9]
History: Like most clans whose history extends back to the ancient days, the Wakutabi started off as a small nomadic group of people with basic desires and structure. They consisted of only thirteen members, seven of which were by marital union. Back then villages had yet to emerge by the dominance of clans, so nearly every landscape was free for travel and residency. The Wakutabi traveled and lived in many terrains, ranging from forests, desserts, grass fields and even mountains. However, they only habitat that able saw livable was actually the cave lifestyle within what is now known today as Bear Country. They didn't know why, but they were drawn to the dark and secretive lifestyle while also being close to forest nature. That is wear it all began. Years later, a massive earthquake struck the land and shattered a giant cave nearby that was once sealed. The Wakutabi were curious as to know what was inside, and traveled inside leisurely. They walked inside the cave for days, going through different chasms and passage way. However they were amazed on how mysterious it was and were naturally drawn to it. One day, the young boy, traveled even deeper into the cave when his clansmen were sleeping. He came across a wall with seals written all over it in what would appear to be blood. With nothing but childish curiosity guiding him, he touched the the seal, and accidentally cut his finger on chippy surface, putting blood on the wall. Then out of nowhere, a giant demonic figure was summoned inside the room with the boy. He was so tall that he reached the ceiling of the cave and his devilish appearance was just as immense. The boy turned around but saw nothing, he looked around nervously at the sense of someone was in the room.
"Oh a child this time, how interesting." Shinigami said at the oblivious young boy. "Why can't I see you" The boy asked to what he saw as air. "Oh, dear child." Shinigami hissed as his voice twirled around the room. "Humans can't see the dead." After a few moments the boy responded. "I want to see you." "Very well child, how about this. Every night, you come give me just a drop of your blood and I'll teach you to see me." Shinigami told the boy. "..Deal."
From hence forth the boy did as what was requested. Each night when his family was sleeping, he would sneak deeper into the cave and give blood to Shinigami, and each time he did so, he saw Shinigami a little bit more clearly. At first he appeared ethereal and transparent, then as the weeks came by, Shinigami was fully visible to him in all aspects. The god and the boy was beginning to have a master and student connection. Shinigami taught him the ways of the Craft and how to perform Necromancy with his new ability to communicate with the dead. The boy became quite powerful under his teachings, but it was time to move. Now a young man, when the boy came back to the room where he usually met Shinigami to say his goodbye, Shinigami was gone. He never knew what happened to Shinigami from that day forth, but many later generations believed that Shinigami had possessed the boy and secretly lived within his spirit to achieve his real goal to walk amongst the living once more. The teachings of Shinigami began to pass down from generation on generation starting from the boy. He taught his children the Shinigamic Craft and how to train their now inherent ability to see the dead.
Over the centuries the Wakutabi Clan lived in many villages and settings, all of which weren't in favor for their supernatural talents or beliefs. In many occasions the villagers would believe that the clansmen were bring curses and plagues to their village and as a result would try to cast them out, or worse. But it wasn't until that Wakutabi came across Sound Country did they live a life of peace and salvation for a extended period of time. Sound Country was just starting out in that era, it's political system was still fresh and it's traditions were written in water. Because of that the clan had an opportunity to introduce themselves without judgement, and thankfully they did so without retaliation. Being embraced by their fellow villagers, the clan lived in small homes and lived a somewhat traditional life as a citizen of Sound Village. They created a small but powerful coven based off their Shinigamic religion, they would go to the riverbanks and caves of Sound Village and pay tribute to their Lord Jashin. It wasn't until the wars erupted between the clans such as the Senju and Uchiha was Sound village and many other minor countries introduced to Ninjutsu. Wakutabi started to learn the basics of Ninjutsu to protect themselves and their beloved villagers. They even learned to use their new ability to manifest souls to aid them in their combat against enemy ninja, and were deemed exceptional Ninja within Sound Country. After the war with Konoha, nearly half Wakutabi clansmen fled the village in fear of their safety but many still reside their.
Clan Status: Open [Permission Required]
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| | | Elder Sage
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 06 Aug 2011, 11:34 pm | |
| Completed | Ready for Checking // Approval. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Mon 08 Aug 2011, 8:39 am | |
| Tagged.
(I'll get a start on this Deme after I hand my assignments in tomorrow ^^) |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Mon 08 Aug 2011, 9:43 am | |
| I also want to give my input on this clan. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Tue 09 Aug 2011, 5:44 am | |
| I know a lot of work has been put into this clan and on that note I would like to commend you on your efforts.
However, there are a few problems which need to worked out before I can move on. I will focus on your special traits and KKG first before going onto the jutsu as there will be things that need to be changed (I know your jutsu incorporate your abilities and just make a note that I have read them. I am just not going to mod them just yet).
- Personally, I feel there are too many aspects going on in this clan. As it stands it is an incredibly powerful ability due to the share vastness and versatility for which you can create justu. You are following down too many paths and trying to connect them together making a superpower of a clan ability. I don't like the idea of combining a manipulation of spiritual energy/spirits with the Jashin cult. Incorporating them both within the same clan is not plausable, although I do understand that if IC a character was to combine the two it would be possible, they would need to individually find the cult themselves to attain that power instead of it already being a part of the clan.
- As it stands these are the separate abilities that can see the clan possessing: Psychic's, necromancy, soul manipulation (within themselves and others), Jashinic energy/power from the Jashin Cult, direct charka damage/harming, manifestation of souls, telekinesis, and mind control. Now this is quite the list of main abilities for which this clan is focused around and it needs to be severely cut down. Many of these abilities have connection but not natural connection within the narutoverse. The 'spirit plane' has not been explained indepth within the narutoverse so it is fine to expand on this and branch into your own idea on this, but it needs definitive limits. I would prefer you to focus around the idea of spirits, souls etc. That would mean mind control, telekinesis, anything Jashin related, and necromancy would have to be removed.
- As it stands if you are still wanting to keep this 'demonic' side to the clan then I would think of using Tayuya as a canon example of the possible route you should take inspiration for this clan from. Her Oni Demons which are controlled are spiritual entities made from chakra. Some that is in the realm of that (but can naturally be expanded on) would be the only way I could see this rationally working within the context of naruto and on an RPG.
(Note: With necromancy, the reasons that I say it should be removed is because I see necromancy as the manipulation of the dead in the way that you are raising physical bodies. Whereas, the main focus of this clan seems to come from the 'spirits' or 'souls' of the deceased. So, only able to use them in the form of chakra entities etc).
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| | | Elder Sage
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Tue 09 Aug 2011, 6:56 am | |
| Necromancy doesn't necessarily need to be removed because it's stated in the clan that it's based around the simple manipulation of the deceased, whom of which are dead, not the living undead.
I'm also not grasping how I'm going down too many paths. No matter who flashy or demonic I make it, every technique is centered around manifesting souls and manipulating souls one way or another. Telekinesis is simply summoning a soul to move an object, and Mind Control is just possessing the target with a soul. You make it seem like the concepts are scattered but they're all branched from one main ability.
And in regards to the connection of narutoverse, Dead Demon Consuming Seal and Soul Removal both revolve around spirits so one can at least assume that they do exist, but that's neither here nor there.
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| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Tue 09 Aug 2011, 9:48 am | |
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- Necromancy doesn't necessarily need to be removed because it's stated in the clan that it's based around the simple manipulation of the deceased, whom of which are dead, not the living undead.
Mmkay. Necromancy, in the form of apparition, manipulation of spirits of the deceased into chakra forms shall be allowed. But that needs to be the sole ability for which sub-abilities can branch from. As I see it now, with the numerous different abilities listed above mainly Jashinic, telekinesis and mind control they are too broad of a spectrum to combine into this clan. Even your clairvoyance ability should have its own section explaining its extent in full.
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- I'm also not grasping how I'm going down too many paths. No matter who flashy or demonic I make it, every technique is centered around manifesting souls and manipulating souls one way or another. Telekinesis is simply summoning a soul to move an object, and Mind Control is just possessing the target with a soul. You make it seem like the concepts are scattered but they're all branched from one main ability.
As I see it combining, any Jashin into this clan is null and void and will not be excepted. As I stated earlier if a member was to independently IC become a part of the Jashin Cult and devote their lives to it then it would be possible. However, not actually are part and parcel concept within the clan. As for telekinesis and mind control, both of those are broad terms for concepts which can be expanded on a lot within themselves, that is what I am trying to get at. Yamanaka already is focussed around mind manipulation not even mind control and that is sole focus of their clan for which is renowned. You could even argue that they have a soul-based ability anyway with Shintenshin no Jutsu. To actually control something completely that is an advanced ability especially within a RPG environment. Complete control delving to the realm of Edo Tensei stuff.
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- And in regards to the connection of narutoverse, Dead Demon Consuming Seal and Soul Removal both revolve around spirits so one can at least assume that they do exist, but that's neither here nor there.
Yes, it is neither here or there but I am saying I do not mind if you expand on the spirit plane side of things as long as you focus it around the narutoverse (which you are kind of only limited by using chakra as a power source). Dead Demon and Soul Removal are canon examples but you need to put it in perspective. They are both S (perhaps even SS) ranked Kinjutsu. You are formulating a whole clan ability around the ideas for which they incorporate.
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| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Tue 09 Aug 2011, 11:27 am | |
| Too many abilities, shouldn't relate to the Jashin religion whatsoever, still decline the idea of Genjutsu immunity. As for the spirits themselves, I don't get it. Manipulation of spirits is weird enough to incorporate into our universe, but then you talk about mind control with them [which is an example of the excessive expansion of the ability] but I ask something that should probably be obvious but don't recall seeing it, others can see the spirits right? |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Tue 09 Aug 2011, 5:36 pm | |
| Clairvoyance is an ability of the Sixth Sense which is one of our listed SC's. The clan slightly extends on that which does has it's own section, I even restated the SC's ability. I'm not understanding the skepticalness of Telekinesis and Mind Control. If I'm able to summon spirits to inflict physical harm on someone I'm pretty sure they can lift some stuff to my will, it's not actual telekinesis. Mind control isn't even targeting the mind, it's summoning a spirit to possess someone which is a pretty mainstream ability of a soul.
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- To actually control something completely that is an advanced ability especially within a RPG environment. Complete control delving to the realm of Edo Tensei stuff
We have Yamanaka and Uchiha abilities to control someone as well, and theirs are a lot stronger than mine.
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- Dead Demon and Soul Removal are canon examples but you need to put it in perspective. They are both S (perhaps even SS) ranked Kinjutsu. You are formulating a whole clan ability around the ideas for which they incorporate.
Well there isn't one technique in my clan that revolves around ripping someone's soul in half and sealing them inside a Demon God. Furthermore I'm not understanding what you mean about the italicized part, you make it sound like it's a problem.
And yes, they can see spirit. Which is why I kinda stated their appearance on each jutsu and the kkg itself. I'll make them susceptible to Genjutsu. |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Wed 10 Aug 2011, 12:33 pm | |
| I don't think we permit the mind control when it comes to Uchiha's and you have to take into account the risk for a Yamanaka when doing so, not to mention the fact that their clan revolves around that ability and of course should be stronger than yours.
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Thu 11 Aug 2011, 9:23 pm | |
| Alrighty || Possession has been removed. However I would like to keep the telekenetic technique because I really find it essential and rather basic for a spirit to move an object. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 4:49 am | |
| Why should they be able to move things with their mind? seeing as they are chakra entities they technically don't have a mind. They should just be able to pick object up surely? |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 5:22 am | |
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- Manifested Souls are fairly powerful beings, obviously they are immune to Genjutsu
Still in there. |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 7:03 am | |
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- Why should they be able to move things with their mind? seeing as they are chakra entities they technically don't have a mind. They should just be able to pick object up surely?
Yes Todd, they don't move it with their minds but with their hands.
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- Why should they be able to move things with their mind? seeing as they are chakra entities they technically don't have a mind. They should just be able to pick object up surely?
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| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 9:56 am | |
| Telekinesis is moving things with your mind o.o so if you don't want to do that but simply being able to pickup objects, then why do you telekinesis?
- Also edit the stuff up above that needs to be removed e.g Jashin etc. |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 2:37 pm | |
| I also fail to see this as a Release Kekkei Genkai. Referring to the fact that its called Voodoo Release. Or am I being nitpicky? |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 5:09 pm | |
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- Telekinesis is moving things with your mind o.o so if you don't want to do that but simply being able to pickup objects, then why do you telekinesis?
Changed the name.
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- - Also edit the stuff up above that needs to be removed e.g Jashin etc.
I removed things about invoking his power and such, but I see nothing wrong with the religeon aspect.
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- I also fail to see this as a Release Kekkei Genkai. Referring to the fact that its called Voodoo Release. Or am I being nitpicky?
I don't see it as a big deal. |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 5:31 pm | |
| I thought releases was a term used for elemental techniques, if you would branch out and consider Yin and Yang release elemental. Voodoo isn't really an elemental release. |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 13 Aug 2011, 5:43 pm | |
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- I thought releases was a term used for elemental techniques, if you would branch out and consider Yin and Yang release elemental. Voodoo isn't really an elemental release.
It's a deviant. "Voodoo Style" "Voodoo Release" It's comes down to the own clan's interpretation of the technique, which they find as a "-Release" since they see it as a style of their religion. |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Mon 15 Aug 2011, 6:37 am | |
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- Clansmen of the Wakutabi are born with a natural Sixth Sense and are trained to hone that skill as a special characteristic.
Does this take up a SC slot or is it a 'free-bee'?
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- The Wakutabi also have a heightened sense of Clairvoyance; the ability to read a persons past and desires. Instead of being limited to physical contact like most psychics, they can read a person by standing in medium range of them, less than ten meters.
Reading pasts and desires can be abused for meta-gaming etc as seen with a clan idea proposed by John a while back. You will need to list some safeguards and limitation for this to not be the case such as actually describing what a clan member would be able to 'sense' from another. I would also think touch would be appropriate for such a thing as it would help eliminate the ability from a combat situation (but not actually make it impossible).
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Wakutabi are known to keep familiars by their side as a lifetime kinship and even as an instrument in their practical Voodoo. Familiars are small travel pets such as cats, monkeys, dogs etc. that have human spirits which the Wakutabi are capable of seeing and conversing with by using of their Sixth Sense. This allows the Wakutabi to always have another human companion per-say when wandering or on missions. Familiars must be created in the Pet Section or on your character application. Limit this to being only able to have a single pet of a specific type. Also, I am not quite sure what the purpose of this is? what the strengths of this and weaknesses?
- Jashinic Pagans: I am sorry but this needs to be removed like I said earlier (not going to budge on this). You are more than welcome to invent a new religion with no added spiritual bonus of power to it and use it instead of Jashin. But, because of the canon (known) power behind this specific religion and its complexity it is not suitable to simple be a special trait of this clan.
- Remove all Jashinic relation in your Voodoo Release, history and jutsu.
- You clearly state that your Voodoo Release is not a Kekkei Genkai stating that it is a Ying/Yang Release which is where I would place it as well. But, you need to move it from the KKG section regardless and put it in your signature traits.
- I am not sure about being able to manipulate their own souls as that is diving into the Yamanaka secret technique's too much for my liking, but everything else is fine.
- I would like you to put a range limit for which the souls can 'exist' from you (S-Rank highest would be no more than 50m). Also, a limiting factor of how many you can summon at a time and the varying levels (format it in the way a special summoner would).
- After this is all done I will check your jutsu.
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Mon 15 Aug 2011, 7:19 am | |
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- Does this take up a SC slot or is it a 'free-bee'?
They must have Sixth Sense so that's a SC slot.
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- - Jashinic Pagans: I am sorry but this needs to be removed like I said earlier (not going to budge on this). You are more than welcome to invent a new religion with no added spiritual bonus of power to it and use it instead of Jashin. But, because of the canon (known) power behind this specific religion and its complexity it is not suitable to simple be a special trait of this clan.
The religion doesn't give any spiritual bonuses, so I'm not understanding. Secondly this site is different from Canon, the Jashin in canon could be entirely different from the Jashin on here, granted the canon Jashin isn't even described. The only factual thing you can base off Jashin is that fact that one of his followers was immortal, which is nowhere related to my clan. I'm not understanding why you're so critical on this subject, whether the god is Jashin, Sprint, or Voldemort, it's simply a religion that doesn't even tie to to the clan's jutsu.
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- Reading pasts and desires can be abused for meta-gaming etc as seen with a clan idea proposed by John a while back. You will need to list some safeguards and limitation for this to not be the case such as actually describing what a clan member would be able to 'sense' from another. I would also think touch would be appropriate for such a thing as it would help eliminate the ability from a combat situation (but not actually make it impossible).
I took out the desires part but I see no real problem with reading someone's history.
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- - I would like you to put a range limit for which the souls can 'exist' from you (S-Rank highest would be no more than 50m). Also, a limiting factor of how many you can summon at a time and the varying levels (format it in the way a special summoner would).
The first part is a no-no unfortunately, a range limitation from the user is not how I want it to work. But I did add that only one summon technique can be done at once.
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- Limit this to being only able to have a single pet of a specific type. Also, I am not quite sure what the purpose of this is? what the strengths of this and weaknesses?
I added that they're only permitted one. Secondly it's a talking pet, it doesn't need to have strengths or weaknesses. God forbid someone makes something just for fun. |
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Mon 15 Aug 2011, 8:39 am | |
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- The religion doesn't give any spiritual bonuses, so I'm not understanding. Secondly this site is different from Canon, the Jashin in canon could be entirely different from the Jashin on here, granted the canon Jashin isn't even described. The only factual thing you can base off Jashin is that fact that one of his followers was immortal, which is nowhere related to my clan. I'm not understanding why you're so critical on this subject, whether the god is Jashin, Sprint, or Voldemort, it's simply a religion that doesn't even tie to to the clan's jutsu.
The fact that Jashin may be developed as a site project in the future would mean that this would be limiting factor for it as it already has a (small) connection to a custom clan, where otherwise, it could be fully developed like that of Sage Release. The site's foundation is based off canon and canon idea's are expressed and developed on US that have not been done in canon yet. Thus, Jashin doesn't fit into a clan ideal purely, so I don't particularly want it included in here for that limiting factor alone. Like you have listed other things in association (gods and such), its not overly difficult to find another demonic source. How about Shinigami?
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- I took out the desires part but I see no real problem with reading someone's history.
Does this include OOC and IC histories? i.e complete character histories & topics/posts, or only topics/posts.
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- The first part is a no-no unfortunately, a range limitation from the user is not how I want it to work. But I did add that only one summon technique can be done at once.
Don't particularly like the fact that you could sent a spirit or manipulate a spirit from half way around the ninja world. Whether it be an AOE style of range or not, there needs to be some kind of limitation on the ritual (its placement from the user).
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- I added that they're only permitted one. Secondly it's a talking pet, it doesn't need to have strengths or weaknesses. God forbid someone makes something just for fun.
I am not saying that xD. I was just wondering what kind of effects can be used from your familiar. Usually a user and their familiar work in tandem (e.g Inuzuka/Ninken). Does it work that the familiar is able to use specific jutsu like the Inuzuka clan (because you are saying it is to be filled out in the pet template) and also, can the clan member use the familiar as a source of spirit manipulation etc? |
| | | Elder Sage
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Mon 15 Aug 2011, 3:19 pm | |
| Changed the god to Shinigami.
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- Does this include OOC and IC histories? i.e complete character histories & topics/posts, or only topics/posts.
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Don't particularly like the fact that you could sent a spirit or manipulate a spirit from half way around the ninja world. Whether it be an AOE style of range or not, there needs to be some kind of limitation on the ritual (its placement from the user). Added a limit.
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- I am not saying that xD. I was just wondering what kind of effects can be used from your familiar. Usually a user and their familiar work in tandem (e.g Inuzuka/Ninken). Does it work that the familiar is able to use specific jutsu like the Inuzuka clan (because you are saying it is to be filled out in the pet template) and also, can the clan member use the familiar as a source of spirit manipulation etc?
It can't use Jutsu however it can be used in Jutsu since it has a soul, but nothing of that sort is on the application however. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Thu 18 Aug 2011, 6:57 am | |
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- It can't use Jutsu however it can be used in Jutsu since it has a soul, but nothing of that sort is on the application however.
Make a note of this in the description please.
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- They are so skilled that they can even conjure them from any location on the planet without much effort.
With the points made above this needs to be deleted or edited still.
- Still Jashin-related things in your KKG description.
- There needs to be time limit for all these animations to be able to travel to this world for (it should be general over all determined by rank) please include this as they are not including in any tech or anything.
- Can all speed relation to the corpses be measured by the basic throw of a kunai i.e in Majutsu: Animēshon no Jutsu [Voodoo Release: Animation Technique] and other techniques.
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- Name: Majutsu: Tamashī bīkon [Voodoo Release: Soul Beacon].
Rank: D. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: N/A. Description: The user secretly infuses a piece of their soul into a weapon. Then that weapon touches the target whether it be deflected, blocked or successfully hit, the soul of the user that was stored inside the weapon transfers into the target. This technique is harmless and the target won't even be clued on the move itself. What is does is, it allows the user to spiritually track the target by identifying their own soul which the target secretly hosts inside their own. With this in place the user can see targets on the spiritual plane that bypasses blocked vision. Chakra Cost: 3. Increase to C-rank, needs to range for how far you can track and I do not like the 'secret' part please edit this out of the description (that is an IC thing not something that should be included in the description).
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- Name: Majutsu: Majome [Voodoo Release: Witches Eye].
Rank: D. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: N/A. Description: The Majome is one of the Wakutabi's renowned techniques and is classified as a more powerful variant of the Killing Intent Technique. The user infuses their eyes with Shinigamic energy as well as their own soul, turning it from it's original silver color into a bloody red for a brief moment when eye contact with the target is made. Using the eyes as a gate way to their soul, when the target looks at the user and vice versa, the user projects Shinigamic energy into the target which reaps them great mental misfortune. It will give the victim visions of their own gruesome death while stunning them for a few moments in fear. Furthermore it will induce them a painful migraine for 2 of their posts. Cannot be re-used on the same target within a single thread. Chakra Cost: 3. IF you want 2 post length then you will have to increase the rank. Eye contact must be maintained for whole time? Also, this is basically a genjutsu ability without the genjutsu, how can one escape? please detail the weakness. Otherwise this should be edited to a genjutsu.
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- Name: Majutsu: Genso no shutsugen [Voodoo Release: Elemental Apparitions].
Rank: C. Type: Mijutsu. Range: N/A. Element: Varies. Description: Genso no shutsugen is one of the Wakutobi's most renowned of techniques and is signature amongst clansmen who possess nature affinities. It requires great spiritual power and is fairly difficult to master, whoever once learned it is quite favorable in combat situations. Using their Necromancy the user will call forth two powerful humanoid spirits from the spiritual realm. By saying the name of their elemental natures aloud, they can infuse their elemental chakra into the spirits and manifest them into pure elemental beings. These elemental apparitions embody their element physically and are even capable of flying. They are of equal size of the user and at a regular speed. They are incapable of performing any projectile attacks and rely more on tackling their targets and hurting them with their elemental bodies. They are also capable of withstanding a considerable amount of damage before being destroyed as well, similar to Shadow Clones. Fire Apparitions are composed of regular fire and can burn whatever they touch | Water Apparitions are composed of water and can drown or assault targets with a strong pressurized force | Lightning Apparitions are composed of electricity that can shock and burn targets they attack | Earth Apparitions composed of rock and can deliver devastating tackles as well as withstand more damage because of their structure | Lastly Wind Apparitions are composed of air and can deliver a series of cuts to targets they they attack. Chakra Cost: 7[2] Some of your rankings are crazy....This is at least A-Rank please edit.
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- Name: Majutsu: Tamashī no kyūketsuki [Voodoo Release: Vampiric Soul].
Rank: C-S. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A. Description: A sinister Shinigamic technique which led to the Wakutabi being associated with vamparism centuries ago. It literally involves siphoning the chakra and soul from a victim by consuming their blood, even at a distance. The process is done by the exposure of enemy blood, which the Wakutobi use as a opening to the body and soul. To start the user channels the spirit of Shinigami throughout their body which causes spectral purplish chakra wings to sprout from their back as well as horns on their head. Once the transformation is done the user is able to hauntingly magnetically attract the target's leaked blood and flow it through the air towards their mouth where it can be consumed that way. The user gains chakra for every post they consume the target's blood, although that and the distance is determined by the rank. C-rank is close range and 5CP | B-rank is mid range and 10CP | A-rank is long distance and 20CP. The target is capable of stopping the process by sealing their wound(s) or going out of distance. Chakra Cost: C-5[2] // B-10[3] // A-20[5]
Don't like this technique let alone it being more powerful then the general absorption technique that we have on the forum. Please remove as I don't really see the connection with your general abilities (i.e soul..oh and chakra?).
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- Name: Majutsu: Chakura būdoūkyō no ningyō [Voodoo Release: Chakra Voodoo Doll].
Rank: C-A. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: N/A. Description: A unique jutsu that is used as a followup of the Soul Beacon technique or anytime the target possesses a piece of the user's soul within their body, however it is canceled if this technique ends. It is involves channeling that piece of soul and using it as a medium to the targets spirit which the user uses as a connection to their Voodoo Doll. By performing a short sequence of handseals, the user can summon a small raggedy Voodoo Doll covered in black dots that represent the target's Tenketsu Points. Using a needle, the user is able to puncture a T.P. of a doll and inflict traumatizing internal harm on the enemy as well as destroying chakra, very similar to the Hyuuga Style. The distance one can perform this and how much chakra is destroyed depends on the rank of this technique. C-rank is close range and 5CP | B-rank is mid range and 10CP | A-rank is long distance of 20m and 20CP. By going out of distance or destroying the doll, the target can free themselves of this technique. Chakra Cost: C-5[2] // B-10[3] // A-20[5] Edit this to just A-rank and give it the maximum CP costs.
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- Name: Majutsu: Kasoke-tai ridatsu [Voodoo Release: Astral Projection].
Rank: C-S. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10m+) Element: N/A. Description: A ritual technique fit for the Wakutabi's practices of the Soul and The Craft, for it involves manipulating and manifesting the soul through the spirit realm and even the physical plane. Like many techniques derived from The Craft, it must be prepared in a ritualistic fashion in order to be performed. This is done by the user drawing a circular seal on the base of a floor, and using incense or candles to bless their spiritual journey. After performing a string of handseals while sitting in the center of the seal, the user is then able to Astral Project. In this state the user's soul leaves the body and travels freely over the physical plane as a spirit, capable of witnessing anything however not being seen in return. However, with the Wakutabi's skill in Majutsu, they are capable of bringing their Astral Spirit to the physical world where it can be seen and interact with the environment slightly. However when manifested the user still looks transparent and ghostly, and very physically weak. If attacked in this state the user disperses back into the spirit world where they must wait four posts before turning physical again. The range one can reach is dependent on the rank of the technique. C-rank is 100m| B-rank is 200m | A-rank is long distance of 300m | S-rank is halfway around the world. Chakra Cost: C-5[2] // B-10[3] // A-20[5] // S-30[9] This should be A-S rank at least.
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- Name: Majutsu: Andeddotaigā [Voodoo Release: Undead Tiger].
Rank: C. Type: Mijutsu. Range: N/A. Element: N/A. Description: Andeddotaigā is a Mijutsu technique that invokes the dead spirit of a large tiger. After forming a seal, the user uses their Necromancy to call forth the spirits of a tiger from the spiritual realm around themselves. They then imbue the spirit with their chakra, manifesting it into the physical world. Like all manifested spirits, the undead tiger appears phantasmal and is composed of spectral purple energy. Now physical, it can be controlled by the user to perform a variety of maneuvers and attacks according to the user's wishes. The tiger is incredibly strong and vicious, capable of using its claws to crate gashing wounds, strong pounces, reflexes, and a powerful jaw. Furthermore it is capable of siphoning chakra from their targets if struck. For each post that a target is hit by the tiger, they lose 7CP. Chakra Cost: 5[2] B-Rank.
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- Name: Majutsu: Akumatsubasa [Voodoo Release: Satanic Wings].
Rank: C. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m). Element: N/A. Description: A defensive base Mijutsu technique that involves manipulating ones soul in the form of a large pair of ghostly skeletal hands in the shape of wings. When activated the wings are summoned on the back of the user and can wrap around the user to encase them in a skeletal shell. This provides protection from the user from external forces and is arguably as strong as bone. The user is also capable of unfolding the wings and using them offensively if wished as well. They can grapple and smash opponents as a means of attack. Being only 5ft in length the wings cannot extend far but are formidable in close range. Chakra Cost: 5[2] Remove this. No where did it state that your ability allowed for advanced "general" chakra manipulation which is the only reason one would be able to use shape manipulation in a way to form wings just out of your chakra.
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- Name: Majutsu: Shisha no jōshō [Voodoo Release: Rise of the Dead].
Rank: B-S. Type: Mijutsu | Kinjutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m+). Element: N/A. Description: An epitome of Shinigamic techniques accessible to those who truly understand and connect with the dark forces of nature and the Death God himself. Due to it's malevolence uses by some of the most sinister Necromancers in history it was labeled Kinjutsu and associated as the offspring of the Edo Tensei, which in actuality isn't too far from the truth, however it's mechanics are entirely different. It involves the user conjuring and manifesting souls into the physical realm through corpses, animating them as a result. The risen corpses are controlled by the user due to their Necromancy talents. This all starts with a string of handseals and quoting an incantation from the scriptures of Jashin. Depending on the rank of the technique in which it is used, a certain amount of corpses can be risen from the grave. If no corpses are within the vicinity, then the user is capable of summoning the corpses through this technique as well. Risen corpses are animated by spirits and thus are immune to feeling pain of any sort. They are grayish declared bodies that are considerably physically strong and fast. They are incapable of performing Jutsu of any sort and can only be defeated by total mutilation of their body. B-rank four corpses | A-rank eight corpses | S-rank twenty corpses. Chakra Cost: 12[3] // 20[4] // 30[5] Remove the Jashin term in this tech. Edit rank to only S. There needs to be description of the actual corpses and their capabilities, how can they be killed?
- Make a note that only one animalistic technique can be performed at one time (so you cannot stack animals).
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- Name: Majutsu: Kindan no kank [Voodoo Release: The Forbidden Rapture].
Rank: A. Type: Mijutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m - 50m). Element: N/A. Description: A powerful Shinigamic technique that is feared by many which come across it. According to legend, Jashin himself used it as a weapon against the Goddess of Creation, destroying her lands and causing her eternal sorrow. What it does is, after forming a seal it allows the user to summon an expanding sinister dark cloud from themselves that literally drains the life force from nature itself. It is typically used to exile one from their native elements, due to its ability to destroy nearly every element within the area. The cloud can decompose and destroy all plant life, water and rot the dirt so much that it becomes brittle and collapses on itself. This technique is capable of turning a flourish forest of life into a cold barren wasteland. Chakra Cost: 25. Remove this technique. There is no connection to your ability here it is just a OP technique.
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- Name: Majutsu: Kurafuto būdoūkyō no ningyō [Voodoo Release: Craft of the Voodoo Dolls].
Rank: S. Type: Mijutsu | Kinjutsu. Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m+). Element: N/A. Description: A technique only accessible to the most powerful of practitioners of the Shinigamic Cult which makes it the epitome of both Mijutsu and The Craft. It's name alone can being fear and reckoning to even those who heard of it through rumor, so much that anyone capable of performing it were considered devils during their time. With this technique the user is able to manipulate their targets to a horrific degree, gaining complete control over their mind, body, and spirit, owning them entirely. This is all done by the use of a powerful ritual involving Voodoo Dolls, which the Wakutabi are known to be very skilled at. To perform this ritual, the user must acquire a DNA sample of a living being from either a blood sample or a hair. Once acquired, the user will move to a dark secluded area which is usually their hideout and begin to prepare the ritual. They will draw a intricate seal on the ground, light incense, candles, and align skulls around the seals. Then they will summon a Voodoo Doll and sit with it in the center of the seal. They will then pour the blood of the target onto the Doll, or wrap the hair around it as a medium. Performing a long sequence of handseals and repeating dark invocation, the user is capable of instantly controlling the person no matter how far they are from the seal. They are helpless to this control and won't even realize they are being controlled for the duration. Chakra Cost: 35[9]
This boarders too much along the lines of the Yamanaka techniques + Edo Tensei. It should please be removed. You can ask for another opinion on this technique if you want but as I see it it's way too overpowered and alike to other technique's. This is a complete control technique which is not allowed.
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| Subject: Re: Wakutabi Clan [Voodoo Release]. Sat 03 Sep 2011, 11:29 pm | |
| I respect your insight and thank you for reviewing my clan, but no tea no shade, I like this clan too much to watch it get watered down to crap through moderation.
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