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Wakehi
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| Subject: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Thu 05 Apr 2012, 3:11 pm | |
| Wataki, KureaTHE INFO. Name: Wataki Kurea
Nickname: Sora
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Appearance: Kurea stands 4 feet 8 inches tall and weighs 90 lbs. Coupled with her pale skin and a slender build, people often mistaken her for a doll when she stays very still. Her hair is silky black and hangs down to the small of her back but she normally ties it in a loose pony tail so that it doesn’t obstruct her view. Her eyes on the other hand are emerald green in color.
For clothing, Kurea prefers to wear things that allow her to move around easily in. Therefore for her torso, she wears a unique dark green shirt that is sleeveless on the left side with a long kimono-like sleeve for the right arm. On her waist, there is a white sash with a slightly slanted cut at the ends. For bottoms, she wears a pair of light brown pants with a pair of black shinobi sandals on her feet. On her left arm, Kurea wraps a long white bandage around it which covers her arm from the lower end of her palm until her shoulder.
Forehead Protector: Tied left side of her waist on her sash.
Personality: Through training with her father, Kurea seems a bit more mature than other kids around her. Although often a bit shy, she knows and can tell the difference between private and official. Therefore, it seems almost as if she turns into a different person when on official business. Not talkative and coupled with being a bit shy, Kurea is never one to initiate conversation even with those she’s close to. However that does not prevent her from being daring and would often play tricks on someone if she wanted their attention in something. Even though she knows that her appearance makes people mistaken her for a doll most of the time, she does not like being treated as if she was a delicate doll. When in a playful or relatively happy mood, Kurea likes to play along with jokes even if it’s made on her. Kurea is generally a very patient person and could probably stay still in one place for a few hours at a time but she simply cannot stand people that rush into things without really thinking about their actions. They make her fly into a lecturing mode in which she would try to talk some sense into that person.
When Kurea is around unfamiliar people and is on official business, it would seem as if the girl has changed into a completely different person. She becomes very calm and likes to keep an eye on just about everything that she can notice. It is not easy to distract her when she becomes serious and would not waste a moment to reprimand anyone even if they were superiors. Also she keeps up a very polite nature around anyone she would meet even if they were hostile. And since she understands the importance of instructions and teamwork, Kurea would very rarely disobey instructions given to her unless a life was involved. However, Kurea is never one to be able to lead and so if she was asked to give an opinion with a choice, she would become indecisive and usually come to regret her choice.
Clan: Yuki
Nindō: “It doesn’t last forever.”
THE NINJA. Origin: Lightning Country
Affiliation: Kumogakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Eijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Main: Suiton Sub: Fuuton Advanced: Hyōton
Combat Style: When faced with combat, Kurea has calm and collected personality that plays a big role as she would be patient enough to observe her opponent before making her first move. She is not one that likes trouble and so she would always find ways to avoid being the one to instigate a fight and she would not make the first move while in combat no matter what.
Kurea is also quick minded enough to be able to form plans of escape or attack in the midst of a battle. She is also not afraid to take risks but does not favor them very much as she believes that every type of battle, whether they are against an enemy or even if it’s just a spar, it should be taken very seriously. Also, most of the time, Kurea likes to use a bit of trickery or a distraction of any type to distract her opponents that face them head to head normally for the first few moments of combat. This allows her to have enough time to observe her opponents.
Special Characteristics:
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Name: Increased Chakra Capacity Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
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Name: Clan Prodigy Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: N/A Trasining Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks are 20% more destructive with their increased power and size.
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Name: Improved Perception Rank: C Type: Mental Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Every physical motion is identified to the ninja whether its a movement in a leaf or change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with genjutsu as it makes the user capable in identifying an illusion of C-Rank or lower. However although they can sense the genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
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Kurea was born in Kumogakure to a shinobi family as the second child. Growing up, Kurea was always compared to her elder brother and she has never met her mother before who was said to be a member of the Yuki clan. The adults around her always tells her that her brother looked very similar to her mother while Kurea herself looks more like her father instead except for the silky black hair that she possesses. So even though she disliked the idea of being compared to her brother, she looked up to him a lot. He was also the one that gave Kurea her pet name, Sora. He said that it was taken from her name which meant ‘evening sky’ but he liked her name with just the last kanji more which meants ‘sky’.
By the time Kurea was old enough to walk and talk, her elder brother was a chuunin and she was never close to her father then since he was almost always never around. This caused Kurea to be taken care of by relatives who were jealous of Kurea and her brother’s ability to use Hyōton. Therefore, while she was not liked, she was never really treated badly either making her a bit shy when interacting with people.
Her life started to change when she was around six or seven years old. It seemed as if bad news were coming in one after another during those times. At first it was her father who was critically injured during a mission in which he could no longer be a shinobi even if he fully healed. Then it was her brother who apparently went missing in action after his whole team was ambushed by enemies. Through these events, Kurea was chosen to be the next in line in her family to serve the village. Although she didn’t like the idea of not being able to choose what she wants to do, she didn’t want to disappoint her father who is the closest person that is family that she can trust.
So in the end Kurea was enrolled into the shinobi academy while at the same time she took extra curriculum lessons from her father about the ways of the shinobi. Through him, she was forced to train herself to be calm and collected at all times and sacrificed all of the time she has to train instead of playing on the street with friends. However though, with the training she gets from her father, Kurea was naturally able to graduate from the shinobi academy without any problems at all. Although she doesn’t understand the concept of honor and pride that her brother and father held, she now wants to understand just what being a shinobi means.
Roleplay Sample:
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Something was definitely different. She couldn’t figure out what but there was something different in the air. She could just smell it. Slowly turning in a full circle, Namika took a deep breath again. She just couldn’t shake the feeling that she was being watched too. Feeling a disruption in the air, Namika quickly jumped a few feet back before settling to see a boulder hurtling past where she had stood just a bit earlier. “Come out!” She demanded, finally unsheathing her sword. The only answer she received was a small chuckle and the pounding of footsteps somewhere behind her.
A rush of air and the clang of metal on metal shortly afterwards sent Namika stumbling backwards a bit. They were definitely messing with her, she just know it. That blow was not aimed towards something fatal and she clearly felt the rush of air before they arrived. Mumbling something under her breath, Namika held a hand up with her palm facing away from her. After a moment, a circle glowed brightly a few inches from her hand but disappeared as suddenly as it appeared. A painful cry was heard before the snap of fingers brought light into the room she was standing in. To her side was a man tied up in magical chains while on her other side, a woman was holding her weapon arm. “I’m surprised that you were able to repel these two in the dark.” The leader of the three smirked before walking out into the light.
“Since when did the two of your underlings have been able to put a nick on me? Though I have to say, you did go easy on me. They were absolutely horrible.” Namika replied, her eyes never leaving the man before her. “So, what did you want me here for? I’m pretty sure you didn’t purposely make that notice for me only because you want to see me.” The woman said as she sheathed her sword again.
Not getting a reply, the man disappeared from her sight after a few seconds passed. Having been rather prepared for this happening, Namika stepped off to the side before blocking a blow at her from behind aimed at her waist. “Just why you try every single time is beyond me. You’ve never been able to land a hit on me yet with that technique and you still try?” Namika asked before realizing that something was different about the move.
Soon a blinding pain made her double over where she stood and she started coughing at the blow. That was completely unexpected and she could not figure out just what hit her. Pressing a hand to her side, Namika struggled to stand up to look at what the man did. She could only catch a glimpse of a glow on the man’s hand which meant he probably used a spell. “That was very clever of you…” She paused to catch her breath, “But do you think you can catch my attacks?” Namika watched as the smile slide off the man’s face as both of her hands started to glow.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu:
- Academy:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1CP to seal; 1CP to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Suiton:
Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu of equal rank and below. Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant. Chakra Cost: 8
- Fuuton:
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness. Chakra Cost: 5
- Hyōton:
Name: Hyōton Enchou | Ice Dome Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: Hyōton Enchou is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. The user can quickly create an ice dome around their allies and themselves to act as a defense. Though it is strong enough to withstand powerful hits, at least five exploding tags in a single general location will shatter this defense. Chakra Cost: 6CP
Name: Hyōton Disuku | Ice Disk Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: Hyōton Disuku is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu turns the moisture particles in the air into an ice disk. They can be hurled with tremendous force at a target and are hard to dodge because of their transparency. They can also be strung together to spy on areas. They can also be used defensively, creating highly durable shields. Chakra Cost: 5CP
Name: Hyōton Tsubame Fubuki | Swallow Snow Storm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: Hyōton Tsubame Fubuki is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu creates a cluster of ice needles in the shape of miniature swallows, which the user then throws at the opponent. These needles can change direction in midair for up to 3 times and will maim the opponent with their sharp wings. Chakra Cost: 5CP
Name: Hyōton Yukiarashi | Ice Release: Snow Storm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Description: After performing a series of hand seals, the user would stomp on the ground with their foot and a gust of wind, snow and ice shards would abruptly encircle the user for a short burst of time (1 post). The technique is used to knock back a charging opponent or deflect projectiles thrown at the user. Chakra Cost: 7CP
Name: Koori no Ken | Ice Blade Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Description: A jutsu that utilizes the moisture in the air to create a short sword (Think kodachi, so less than 60 cm long) The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. However the blade is susceptible of fire and can melt from fire jutsu of equal rank and above. Chakra Cost: 8CP (2 per post)
- Non-Elemental Ninjutsu:
Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals and objects to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Signing this contract also allows the animal to reverse summon the human ninja to their location. Chakra Cost: 5 (C Rank Summon), 10 (B), 15 (A), 20 (S)
- Eijutsu:
Name: Shousen no Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique Rank: C-A Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the higher the medical ninja's rank is the quicker they are able to heal more critical and serious injuries. Injuries of equal rank may be healed in 1 post, and completely restored in 2. If choosing to heal a wound higher than the rank of the Shousen used, it requires 2 extra post per rank. Thus C-rank Shousen healing an A-rank wound would require 5 posts to fully heal, while a B-rank wound would require 3 posts for instance. If healing a lower-ranked wound with a higher-ranked Shousen, the wound is fully healed in one post as opposed to two. Chakra Cost: C: 8CP (2 per post), B: 12CP (4 per post), A: 20CP (6 per post)
Weaponry/Items: - Quote :
- Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
FACE CLAIM. Character Claim: Unknown (Original Character) Source: Photobucket Image URL: https://2img.net/h/i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff244/Suzuki_Ruriko/11620101050.png
Last edited by Wakehi on Fri 06 Apr 2012, 9:22 pm; edited 2 times in total |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Thu 05 Apr 2012, 5:31 pm | |
| - Where is your character's forehead protector located? Be specific.
- Please expand on the personality some more. Your character seems like a cardboard cut out. She's shy, okay; but what's her real personality? Shy people just hide things from people they don't know. How does she react with her friends? Also, go on to elaborate how she feels when fighting, how she feels when talking to superiors, etc. Is her shyness so bad that she can't talk to anyone? Think of these kinds of things when making a personality. Also, try to expand on the amount of emotions she has. What happens when she's angry, sad, happy, etc.? There are plenty of things to focus on when making a personality.
- Explain in your history why your character's surname is not Yuki, or change your character's surname to Yuki altogether. Your character cannot just have a different surname for no specific reason.
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- Having faced a lot of shocking events throughout her life, Kurea is almost always able to stay calm and collected when faced with a hard to deal with situation.
You state your character has face 'shocking' events, yet her history fails to show any real shocking events All I saw was her brother disappearing and the father gaining a bad injury. The brother bit could work, but you showed no development between your character and her brother at all. Her father being injured really wouldn't count. He'd come home with injuries regularly. He was a ninja after all. A big injury would be sad, but nowhere near traumatizing. Also, I fail to see how having seen shocking events will make her more calm. Doesn't trauma usually leave people unstable and the complete opposite of calm?
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- Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining
Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu. Chakra Cost: 8 Add (2 per post) to the Chakra Cost.
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- Name: Hyōton Disuku | Ice Disk
Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: Hyōton Disuku is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu turns the moisture particles in the air into an ice disk. They can be hurled with tremendous force at a target and are hard to dodge because of their transparency. They can also be strung together to spy on areas. They can also be used defensively, creating highly durable shields or disks to stand on to hover in the air. Chakra Cost: 5CP Please remove the hovering in air part. It makes no sense how the character can hover using ice. Even quantum levitation requires sub-zero temperatures and magnets.
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- Name: Hyōton Tsubame Fubuki | Swallow Snow Storm
Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: Hyōton Tsubame Fubuki is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu creates a cluster of ice needles in the shape of miniature swallows, which the user then throws at the opponent. These needles can change direction in midair and will maim the opponent with their sharp wings. Chakra Cost: 5CP Add a limit to how many times it can change direction in mid air. Else this jutsu is over powered for a C-rank.
- Change the shousen technique to this:
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[b]Name:[/b] Shousen no Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique [b]Rank:[/b] C-A [b]Type:[/b] Medical Ninjutsu [b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m) [b]Element:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the higher the medical ninja's rank is the quicker they are able to heal more critical and serious injuries. Injuries of equal rank may be healed in 1 post, and completely restored in 2. If choosing to heal a wound higher than the rank of the Shousen used, it requires 2 extra post per rank. Thus C-rank Shousen healing an A-rank wound would require 5 posts to fully heal, while a B-rank wound would require 3 posts for instance. If healing a lower-ranked wound with a higher-ranked Shousen, the wound is fully healed in one post as opposed to two. [b]Chakra Cost:[/b] C- 8 (2 per post), B- 12 (4 per post), A- 20 (6 per post)
- Kindly add a picture to your app, and a face claim. Though not entirely necessary, it greatly helps to know what the character looks like for people who may choose to look at your character.
I realize the jutsu I listed are a part of the Encyclopedia, but that is currently being updated. Thank you. |
| | | Wakehi
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| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Fri 06 Apr 2012, 7:32 am | |
| Edits are made. Though for the pic, I have not been able to find one that I like to use to represent my character so would it be okay if I omit it now and ask to have one added when I find one?
Also I decided to redo the personality as I did not like the one that I originally had up after rereading it again. |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Fri 06 Apr 2012, 8:20 pm | |
| Looks great to me! As for the picture, I'm sure we could work something out~ It's not entirely necessary to have a face claim anyway, as long as the appearance is imaginable.
[1/2] Approved! |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Fri 06 Apr 2012, 8:25 pm | |
| Hello there! Enzo granted you his approval but I would like to point out some issues I stumbled upon while reading through your application.
So to start, since you have not chosen any image it is okay to not add one. As for the Face Claim, it is a rule that applies to images so not having one cancels out the rule itself until you eventually add a picture of your character. You can PM a staff member your image and face claim as soon as you get it, but please try to find one.
Apart from that, I would like you to check through your Appearance for spelling mistakes and probably rewrite some parts - and your History for grammar, as at some point you jump from past to present and the other way around in a confusing way. Although I can understand what you say, please try and fix these things in order to be easier for the reader to completely understand.
Finally, please explain your nickname, or remove. There is nothing mentioned in your personality nor in your history that indicates the nickname Sora, which actually means sky.
As long as you take care of what I mentioned above, you can have my approval. Thank you for your work. |
| | | Wakehi
Posts : 68
| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Fri 06 Apr 2012, 9:28 pm | |
| Alright, edits made though I'm not sure if that's what you are looking for. I added a bit to explain her nickname but as for grammar I'm not exactly sure if I really fixed much there. I did reword a few lines here and there for appearance and history though it's not that much. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Fri 06 Apr 2012, 9:42 pm | |
| That's okay, actually. Your willingness is what matters so I believe everything is now fine.
Really thank you for your work here.
Approved 1/2. |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Fri 06 Apr 2012, 11:00 pm | |
| [2/2] Approved! (Again) |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Wataki, Kurea [Kumo Genin] Tue 08 Jan 2013, 10:39 pm | |
| Archived. Due to Inactivity. |
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