Name: Hakuchou / Uchiha, Izanagi Nickname: Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance: Despite being an Uchiha, Izanagi looks absolutely nothing like one. Not even one trait from his clan is passed on him. For example, his hair, instead of being black and rather spiky like most members of the Uchiha clan have, Izanagis hair is a mixture of purple and dark blue. The hair isn't really long, it's actually a normal length for a boy, but it is rather abundant and feels really smooth. As for the eyes, it's the same. Nothing like a normal black eyed Uchiha. His eyes are rather long and quiet big with the colour of light blue, who strangely emit a faint shine in them giving him a quiet dazzling and deep look.
As for the physical appearance, Izanagi looks just like any other noble kid who actually cares about his look. He isn't all that tall, and neither too short standing on the average height of 146 cm tall and weighting around 50 kg and he isn't overly muscled since he isn't specialized in close quarter combat. There are no particular physical attributes such as small scars, which many kids would have from falling off a tree for example, mostly because he is a noble and as such he was looked over by either his parents, bodyguards, but mostly, his butler, also he is not a kid who will do thing recklessly, even in fights.
His attire however, is anything but regular and for a reason too. Just one piece of it is worth almost as a common house. And rightfully so, his shirt is made by the finest silk in the whole world, sewed on hand by the best tailors. Same goes for the rest he wears. The purple suit coat is not nearly as thick as other coats and it's actually quite flexible making it rather comfortable for fighting. For decoration the suit coat has few golden stripes and some more complex decoration on the chest. The pants are also thin and purple, comfortable and flexible enough for easy movement through the battle.
Now onto the accessories. The first useless accessory are six really thin silver bars, made from, of course, pure silver, attached on the hair. Next is the cloak. Not as useless as the bars, the cloak is quiet long and obviously, purple. The thing that attaches the cloak from one side to another is the most expensive accessory in Izanagis whole possession. It's the emblem of his fathers family, the swan, made by pure silver and decorated with the most expensive stones. Surely it's a dangerous thing to wear but Izanagi is confident enough that he won't get it stolen. Still he does have more of them stored in his house and he can easily get more if needed. The last accessory are a pair of belts made by the fines animal skin. Forehead Protector: The forehead protector is wrapped on one of the many belts Izanagi wears.
Personality: Due to the tragic loss of his parents, Izanagi was left with a tremendous mental scar. The event left such a big impact to him that if he went to a psychiatrist, he would be called insane.
POST-TRAUMATIC STRESS DISORDER The death of his parents left a tremendous scar in his head. Almost every night he has nightmares of how his parents were killed right in front of his eyes. Most of the time he doesn't sleep at all just so he would not experience that dreadful day again and when he does occasionally fall asleep, it doesn't last long. But sadly even not going to sleep doesn't help because the wound is still too fresh that sometimes he even experiences flashbacks of that day. It haunts him and it will never let go. Regularly you can hear things being thrown to the walls, smashed into pieces and cries of a kid if you pass near Izanagis house. Luckily Izanagi has his butler, Geboku, to calm him down, a shoulder to cry and grieve on. From PTSD Izanagi also developed a case of hyper-vigilance as he is constantly trying to detect threats or anything that doesn't look "normal" to his eyes.
ANGER MANAGEMENT ISSUES Another psychological illness he developed from PTSD is anger management issues. But not in a way that he just gets completely mad at tiniest bits. Sure he does get angry from time to time, but he is able to control that anger. The anger management issue he has is that he controls people through fear. Well not innocent people, but criminals, or whomever he is interrogating. It goes to a such extent that he is actually willing to hurt and torture the criminal until he gets what he wants, and in his case, information. Also as mentioned earlier, Izanagi tends to break stuff around his house while he is experiencing PTSD, occasionally he would even raise his hand at his butler not knowing what he is doing. Luckily he never hit him but when he came back to his senses, Izamagi felt so guilty that sometimes he was to ashamed to look Geboku right in the eyes.
DEPRESSION It was obvious that Izanagi would have a serious case of depression. He now finds no pleasure in anything he does, even once his favourite food, he does not find it delicious as he used to before the death of his parents. He also lacks any kind of feelings. Well almost. It's not that he doesn't have feelings, it's that he is just unable to express them. For example, he loves and respects Geboku since he does see him as a father figure, and even though he does not really show that, Geboku still knows what Izanagi feels about him. Sometimes he will do some acts of kindness to Geboku. As for other people, highly unlikely. Also another indicator that he suffers from depression is his affection to dark places. Because of it you will almost never see his bedroom windows open. His depression would be more sever if he didn't take anti-depressives.
SUBSTANCE DEPENDENCE While still in it's early stages, the illness is there and it cannot be ignored. Izanagi suffers from substance dependence to anti-depressives. He almost addicted to them as he can barely go with the day if he didn't take a least one pill. If for some reason he does not take his medication, he will get really nervous and he will get angry at anything that moves. Also, if he doesn't take the pill he will fall even more into depression and ultimately, he might even have suicidal thoughts. So sadly he cannot go without them, but than again, nothing good will come out of it if he starts to drink more and more pills as the time goes. It pains Geboku to see Izanagi at this state but he is powerless to do anything about it. Izanagi needs this pills because no matter how many psychiatrist visited him privately, none of them succeeded to at least reduce his depression.
OBSESSIVE-COMPULSIVE DISORDER The list of mental illnesses goes on and on. Izanagi also suffers from OCD. He has few traits that many people, who suffer from OCD have, such as attention to detail. Nothing escapes his eye, everything must be at it's place, and if there is any anomaly, he will notice it. Although it might be a problem in leading a normal life, he did develop good tracking skills from constantly noticing anomalies in the surroundings. Next is careful planning. Everything he plans, he plans it to the extreme. He never leaves any holes in his plan as everything has to be perfect. Luckily for him he can think fast, even when he is under pressure and thus he makes for a great strategist. The last trait he picked up from OCD is exaggerated sense of responsibility. This one is probably the reason he wants to become a shinobi, because he feels the need to capture all the criminals, and he is the only one that can achieve that. Obviously that is not true as there are other shinobis, and even more powerful than him, but still he has this need to capture criminals that he goes out at night, every night to stop small time criminals for the time being.
SUBLIMATION OF GRIEF AND BEREAVEMENT DISORDER Even though it is a disorder, it's probably the only thing that keeps him going. What he did is he sublimated or diverted his grief into something that would be helpful for everybody. And that is crime fighting. While it is a good thing that he redirected his grieving into something useful, it's a bad thing because he will never actually be relieve of this grief because he will be constantly fighting the crime and and that will constantly remind him why is he doing that, further worsen his grief. Another way you could look at it is that instead of venting his anger and sadness on somebody innocent, he will vent on criminals as much as he can. Indeed it is a dark thing for a kid to feel this kind of probably sadistic emotion, but as it says, he sublimated that feeling which was unacceptable to something that could seem acceptable since he is fighting criminals.
EGOMANIA Now you will think "Wait! How can he be self-centred if he wants to help people?". And you would be right to think that, but the way his egomania works is a bit different. What he believes is that he is the only one who can cleanse the world from criminals which automatically makes him an egomaniac because of his believes that he is the only one that he can do that all on his own, and nobody else can accomplish what he intends to do. And he is right, nobody can do it, not even himself, but he is blind to that truth, he believes he can as soon as he becomes more powerful that he will achieve his goal, but he can't, not alone at least.
SPLIT PERSONALITY DISORDER Another disorder that started to develop recently. The way it came to fruition is every time he was in a larger group of people, mostly when he is invited to some kind of royal parties, he would start to act more like a noble person, and not this mentally ill person. And so not to ruin the name of his family, the Hakuchou family, he created a new persona. The Hakuchou Izanagi. At this state Izanagi is an outgoing person and well versed in etiquette. Like a real noble person. Although he is still a kid, he is a ladies man, always charming and a gentlemen. Even though the women he hits on are only girls his age, he is still quiet popular, even amongst grown ups. Not to mention that he is rather handsome for a kid his age. Also, when he is acting as the Hakuchou, Izanagi won't show if he became annoyed or angered, he will act as everything is under control or he might throw a sarcastic comment if he was really angry. But he will never openly show his anger and other problems he has. And as soon as he leaves the group of people he reverts back to his real self, the Uchiha.
Clan: Uchiha Nindō: Heathens shall not know peace as long as I, the knight of the night, remain alive.
THE NINJA.
Origin: Kaminari no Kuni - The Lightning Country Affiliation: Kumogakure - Village Hidden in the Clouds Rank: Genin Specialties: Genjutsu / Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: Katon [Fire] Raiton [Lightning] Combat Style: Brain over brawn, and in his situation it's his genjutsu. He doesn't like to get too close and prefers to use genjutsu, mostly his creation, the Illusive Reality, to fool opponents and disable them because so far nobody has ever seen Izanagi use his new technique. If he is not using genjutsu to fool opponents than he is using his ninjutsu to pin them down or tire them with Fire and Lightning based attacks. Even though those two elements are considered to be more deadly than the other elements, he never goes for the killing blow because it's his code and he will never break that code no matter what the situation is and only fights the opponent until the opponent cannot fight any more. However that doesn't mean he won't hurt a criminal badly. As they say, a human can survive many things. Special Characteristics:
Yin Release
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Name: Yin Release. Rank: D-S. Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: Must have Genjutsu specialty. Training Requirements: 700. Description: Genjutsu is a notably skillful specialization that requires great intelligence and chakra control in order to perform. Those who have attained this special characteristic have met those criteria which has allowed them to take their illusions to the next plane. Genjutsu fittingly falls under the broad category of Yin Release and it has been revealed that those with superior talent in Genjutsu likewise have greater mastery in Yin Release. This type of mastery allows them to more accurately manipulate the victim's chakra flow to their brain and stimulate more powerful illusions, making you're illusions more realistic and bypassing a persons perception. Because of your more powerful illusions, it now takes double the chakra cost to perform a Kai Release than it normally would for targets.
Increased Chakra Capacity
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Name: Increased Chakra Capacity Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
Advanced Stealth
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Name: Advanced Stealth Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in the art of stealth. The ninja becomes very light and quick on their feet. Their movements no longer create sound and they now gain a natural skill for hiding and camouflage.
THE BACKGROUND.
History:
Before academy:
Izanagis story is a tragic one but it did not start as such. He was born in a wealthy family with parents that tried their best to help people. Their profession was obvious, medical ninjas. And even though both of his parents were excellent, if not one of the best medics in the village, the wealth they had came from his father who was the oldest son of the Hakuchou family. The Hakuchou is one of the richest families in the entire shinobi nation and is held in high regard. Their business? Medicine. And the best there is. Barely anybody can reach their quality and the amount they produce that they basically hold the monopoly in the medical business. And to keep it that way Izanagis father, Daisuke, decided to be a medical ninja to understand more how medicine works, to make it better. That's how he met Izanagis mother, Haruka. She was still a shinobi under training in medical ninjutsu while Daisuke was a bit more advanced. However Haruka had talent, even more than Daisuke himself, and she was an Uchiha too. And because of it she caught up with him pretty fast. They were put in a team together and slowly but steadily, they fell in love. After few years they had a kid, and that kid was Izanagi.
At the beginning, everything was completely perfect. The parents never fought as they matched perfectly, they had enough money to live and spend as much as they can for ten lives, even though Izanagis parents did have a lot of work, they still found a lot of time to spend it with him. They were living a fairytale. But than life threw Izanagi a sudden curve ball. Izanagis parents got few weeks free of work and so they decided to go on a trip around the country. For few days everything was fine, until they were attacked by a group of psychotic and very dangerous thugs. At first Izanagis parents believed the thugs wanted to rob them and to make this incident go as least painful as it can, they offered them money, an enormous amount of money. But little did they know that the thugs weren't interested in money at all. All they wanted was to kill somebody, a cheap thrill, adrenaline pumping through their veins as they mutilate their victims. They struck Daisuke first, killed on the spot. They immediately turned to Izanagi. And than from fear Izanagi activated his Sharingan, but since he was just a mere child, only 7 years old, there was nothing he could do. He closed his eyes and clenched his teeth. In an instant his mother took him and started to run. But as much as she wanted, she could not outrun a group of highly dangerous thugs with a child in her hands. And so, for the sake of Izanagis safety, she hid him in a bush while jumping in the forest so that the thugs wouldn't see where she hid him. While the thugs were closing in she told Izanagi to be quiet and not to move from here. She kissed him on his forehead and left. After a a minute he heard a scream of a women. Izanagi curled up in the bush and didn't leave from it for days.
After four days a group of Kumogakure shinobi passed by the road where Izanagis family has been murdered. When they saw Izanagis dead father and recognized who he was, they immediately started to search for his wife and son. After just a couple of minutes they found Izanagi, still cuddled up and shaking. He didn't eat, drink or sleep for all those four days. When they gave him food and water, he didn't want to open his mouth at all as if he didn't want to live anymore at all. Not knowing what to do they took him back to Kumogakure in the hospital. His buttler, Geboku, came immediately. When Izanagi saw him he just hugged him and wanted to cry all over again, but he had no more tears to shed. After few hours of silence Izanagi calmed down a bit and Geboku fed him. After few days of care they released Izanagi from the hospital. Few days later the funeral of his parents took place. All of Kumogakure attended to it. Every villager offered condolences to Izanagi, but each and every word they said fell on deaf ears as all Izanagi could hear was the screaming of his parents.
A year has passed since the tragic death of his parents and the pain is still there, still fresh and painful as if the incident happened only yesterday. He didn't know how to cope with such pain and he didn't know what to do with himself. Too often would he go mad and scream only to be calmed down by Geboku over and over again. Once did Geboku ask him what could he do to relieve him of this pain. He screamed only one word. Revenge! A sudden thunder broke that brief silence and the rain started to fall. Geboku has said "As much as I want to help you my young master, that is a wish I sadly cannot fulfil...". Few days later Izanagi has noticed that the academy for shinobis has opened his doors for newcomers. At that instant he finally saw the possibility of getting his revenge that he so craves for. He decided to join the academy and become a powerful shinobi so that one day he can catch the killers.
Academy years:
While Geboku was against it, he understood why Izanagi wants to become a shinobi, and so he let him join the academy. Just few days later and the classes have started. The first day of school. Everyone was getting acquainted with each other, professors presented themselves but Izanagi cared nothing about that. All he wanted, all he needed was the knowledge on how to become a powerful shinobi. In the end he learned nothing on his first day, except the names of the professors and the names of his classmates. Few tried to approach him but he quickly turned his back at them. He did feel a little guilty later but he is too much invested on his goal to make friends. From the next day the real class will begin and Izanagi will only study and train, everything else is irrelevant. And just in few weeks Izanagi has become the best student in the class. He was the role model, what every kid wanted to be if he wanted to become a successful shinobi. Some were of course jealous of him as he had it all. The money, the smarts, the looks and well the girls. Even though he was usually quiet, girls seemed to like him. He didn't know why though. And that's when he started to create this another persona. A more outgoing kid. He created it so that he would not ruin the reputation of his family. He started to hang out more with other kids and he even made some friends. But as soon as he left their presence he would shift back to the real him.
After a couple of years the exams for becoming a genin had finally begun. Every student was a bit nervous because they were scared that they would fail, except one. And that one was Izanagi. He wasn't scared to fail because he could not afford himself to fail. And of course he passed every test with 100% score. He was perfect which isn't surprising since he has spent all day, every day, in training and studying. And so he has finally received his headband. The next day Geboku planed a small party. However Izanagi wasn't really interested in it. All he wanted to do was to train and study even more. But little did he know that Geboku has invited every student from his class. While Izanagi was reading Geboku called him for dinner. When he entered the dinning room and was surprised to see all his classmates and their parents with them. At first he was a bit angry at Geboku but what has been done cannot be undone. And so he shifted to the outgoing kid and spent the rest of the day hanging out with the kids and actually having fun. After the party was over Izanagi helped Geboku clean the mess. He mumbled "Thanks.". Geboku just smiled.
Genin years:
Since he only became a genin Izanagi didn't get a chance to do any mission as he wasn't assigned to a team either. But that will soon change.
Roleplay Sample:
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Near the borderline of the Fire and Bear country you could find a rather big camp. At the first look it could look like a normal camp with few inhabitants. However the reality was far from that. The camp was originally made by some traveling merchants but few years before it was overtaken by Mori and Toji who made what is now a quiet big nukenin band. These past years the band wasn’t as successful as they would want to be. But today their luck changed drastically. They managed to steal goods from the merchant, and more importantly, the merchant was transporting valuable metal from none other than the Hinamori clan which can get ridiculous prices in the black market.
From the time they arrived to the camp the band of nukenins didn’t stop to celebrate. Mori, as usual was the head of the party. “Haha! Now we will be the best! Nobody is going to make fun of us now!” The band wasn’t taken very seriously before by many other bands because of their constant failure in theft and they were constantly getting caught by the authorities. Of course they would escape easily, but their reputation was very low. But now that they have stolen from the Hinamori clan, their reputation will skyrocket. Toji too was saying how this is their big break in the ranks.
Of course not all the grunts were celebrating. Toji placed a larger part of them to actually guard the camp from intruders. It was possible that the Hinamori clan will try to get their metal back but Mori was pumped up, he won’t lose to anybody anytime soon. Some of the grunts were preoccupied and scared. They said that the Hinamori clan is too powerful for them and that they will surely come here for revenge. Mori just sighed and said “Let them come! I am not afraid of them!” He lifted his arms showing off his muscles “These two boys will end their puny lives.” And he burst in laughter.
Toji than approached Mori and ordered him to watch over the camp. “Aww c’mon! Don’t we have enough guards guarding the camp? Ehh fine…” Mori stud up and became serious. He was angry at Toji because he believed that there was no need for him to guard the camp as he would rather party than guard the camp. Some of the grunts laughed at him. He looked angrily at them “What are you laughing? Stand up now and scatter around the camp! NOW!” The grunts quickly stood up and in a second they were gone. “That will teach them. Laughing at me…”
THE ARSENAL.
Academy techniques
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1CP to seal; 1CP to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Uchiha techniques
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Name: Sharingan Activated: One Tomoe Rank: - Type: Bloodline - Doujutsu Accessible To: C-Ranked Uchiha Description: The One-Tomoe version of the Sharigan is accessible to young Uchiha who skills have deemed them C-Ranked in power and skill. Like all versions of the Sharingan, the user is able to see the flow of chakra whether it be internal or external. Such skills derived from his ability include being able to identify clones, detecting chakra barriers and genjutsu, and even telling if someone is placed under a genjutsu by detecting chakra irregularities. Being the beginner form of the Sharingan, the One-Tomoe form grants the user the basic skill of the Sharingan which is being able to grant its wielders incredible levels of perception and clarity. In a more simplistic explanation, the user's vision is now able to see perceive things in slow motion. From flying weapons, to enemy movements, everything is slowed to a speed readable of that of the user. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react. Chakra Cost: 2CP per Post
Katon techniques
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Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Chakra Cost: 8
Raiton techniques
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Name: Raitoningu no Kenshutsu - Lightning Detection Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m) Element: Raiton Description: Raitoningu no Kenshutsu is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the lightning element. After performing the required handseals the Hidden Cloud member will be able to send out a pulse of lightning, covering a radius of five metres with the user being at the centre. The dome - like lightning will allow the user to detect any chakra - enhanced traps, people, animals or weapons coming at them from blind spots. This can only be used once per post and anyone who is caught in the pulse will feel a tingling sensation covering their entire body. It's use is to ensure that safety is always maintained for the Kumogakure shinobi. Chakra Cost: 8
Genjutsu techniques
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Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates up to 5 false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it. If these clones leave 5m radius of the caster, they will disappear. Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single-Target Range: Line of Sight Element: - Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. If the target sees these leaves, the Gen jutsu will be cast. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. Chakra Cost:4 (1 per post)
Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Far (0m - 20m) Element: - Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. The object must be within 20m of the user. Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Multi-Target Range: Far (0m - 25m) Element: - Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over. The caster must remain in the shadows, or within 25m of the targets to maintain this Genjutsu. Only 3 people may be influenced by this Genjutsu at one time. Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
Name: Kumo Bo - Cloud Tomb Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single-Target Range: Close (0 - 5m) Element: - Description: Kumo Bo is a genjutsu technique. Once the user has performed the required hand seals and is standing within a ten metre radius of the opponent, they will be able to call upon clouds from the air to suddenly drop from the sky and encase their opponent. The illusionary clouds will make the target feel as if they are tapped within them and will struggle to break free, the only way to break free from the technique is through the usual process of using 'Kai' or inflicting self pain. Chakra Cost: 4 [1]
Name: Konkorudo no Hikō - Flight of the Concorde Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single-Target Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m), Far (10m+) Element: - Description: Konkorudo no Hikō is a genjutsu technique. After performing the required handseals and the opponent has maintained eye contact with the users body, the user will be able to call upon a flock of eagles that appear from a cloud surrounding the user within a two metre radius. The group of five average sized bald eagles will fly out of the cloud and at the opponent, to then attack them with their vicious claws or with the use of their sharp beaks. The technique is commonly used to scare opponents away or to distract them enough for a follow - up attack. Chakra Cost: 7 [2]
Illusive Reality
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Name: Illusive Reality Rank: C-S Type: Genjutsu Range: - Element: Yin release Description: Illusive Reality could be considered as an evolution of genjutsu itself. It's a powerful technique yet it's quiet easy to use but still hard to master. The story of creation of this technique isn't all that glorious as some would believe, in fact, the technique was created by a mere child. And so this technique hasn't reached it's full potential. As for how the technique works, it's actually quiet simple when you know how. The first and most important thing is to be able to use the yin release since without it, this technique cannot be used. Now we look at the definition of what is yin release actually is. Yin release is a technique, based on the spiritual energy that governs the imagination and can be used to create form out of nothingness. Now, even if yin release can create something out of nothing, that something has no substance, it "doesn't exist" and henceforth it's an illusion, a genjutsu. However, one is not needed to make eye contact to create this "illusion". It works the same way a regular clone is made and the the affinities are the same, none of them "exist". So with this technique anything can be made, from animals to even gigantic creatures (only for higher ranked ninjas). Now the kicker of this technique. Once somebody sees the "illusion", he will immediately fall under the genjutsu the user of this technique has cast. These creations become focuses of the real genjutsu that follows and what also makes this technique powerful is that nobody will ignore the creations, in fact, a normal reaction from anybody is to look at the new creation the user of this technique has made. But this does not affect just one person, it affects anyone that looks at the creation. So for example, when the user creates an "illusion", like a dragon, anybody who sees the dragon will fall under the genjutsu which will show them the dragon destroying anything in his path, while in reality, nothing is actually happening.
Name: Illusive Reality: Avatar Rank: C/B Type: Genjutsu Medium: Genjutsu Focus Range: 0~30 meters Element: Yin release Description: The genjutsu starts with the user creating 5 bunshins with the help of Yin energy. As soon somebody sees the bunshins, they will fall under this genjutsu. While under this genjutsu the opponent will see that the bunshins are real and are capable of using at first 2 elements that the user wants and if the higher rank of this genjutsu is used, the clone can use all the 5 elements, fire, water, earth, air and lightning without any trouble. This genjutsu will stop only when the opponent uses Kai or pain. The genjutsu affects sight and touch. Chakra cost: C: 9 (CCpP: 2) / B: 15 (CCpP:4)
Name: Illusive Reality: Ferocious Animals Rank: C/B/A Type: Genjutsu Medium: Genjutsu Focus Range: 0~30 meters Element: Yin release Description: This one is a quiet simple genjutsu. First the user will create an image of an animal jumping through the bushes or somewhere else. At the lowest rank the user is able to create a smaller animal and as the user becomes stronger he will be able to create bigger animals or a pack of smaller. C Rank: 1 smaller animal (1 meter or less) B Rank: A pack (5) of smaller animals or 1 big animal (5 meters or less) A Rank: A pack (10) of smaller animals or a pack (3) of bigger animals or 1 huge animal (10 meters or less) The genjutsu affects sight and touch. Chakra cost: C: 6 (CCpP: 2) / B: 13 (CCpP: 4) / A: 23 (CCpP: 6)
Name: Illusive Reality: Weapon Master Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Genjutsu Focus Range: 0~30 meters Element: Yin release Description: Again, a fairly simple genjutsu to use. The user will create an image of a cold weapon of any kind in his hands. As soon as somebody sees the weapon, he will fall under this genjutsu. The genjutsu will make the opponent see the user being a master of weapons. And also while under this genjutsu, the user can replace the weapon with any other cold weapon he wants. The genjutsu affects sight and touch. Chakra cost: 7 (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3)
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
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Last edited by RockBoy on Mon 14 May 2012, 11:57 pm; edited 39 times in total
For now I'll say lengthen history and break each section apart into multiple paragraphs. Doing this creates a mindset for RP'ing in the style that you've demonstrated in the RP sample.
Outside that if any of your jutsus are custom please say so now. I noticed a few grammatical and spelling errors in a few of the Illusive Reality Jutsus. I'd like to know if they are your own mistakes or mistakes made by the staff.
Illusive reality is custom, aka mine. I'll check again for those grammatical errors. As for history, that was me being lazy and hoping it will pass. Well since it didn't I'll lengthen it tomorrow since it's almost midnight here.
Apologies for the wait, I'll review this app properly once I go through it with Dari. For now though; please update all of your jutsu, including Academy, Elemental Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and even custom Genjutsu to follow the new encyclopedia jutsu and the new Genjutsu Jutsu Template. Clan techniques may have been updated as well, just so you know. Here are some links to save you some time:
Subject: Re: Hakuchou / Uchiha, Izanagi [Kumo Genin] Fri 11 May 2012, 4:18 am
Alright, I'll begin my evaluation now. Nothing seems wrong with the character in general, although I do have some issues with your custom Genjutsu (Don't forget to update them to the new template!)
They're ridiculously over powered for simple C-ranked techniques. As a general, unwritten rule of thumb, C-rank is allowed to manipulate upwards of 2 senses with minor skill; or 1 sense greatly. B-rank upwards of 3 senses, with 1 expertly or 2 with mediocre skill. A-rank upwards of 4-5 senses a bit, with a few expertly performed. S-ranks, are pretty much Genrape, and can manipulate all the senses to create a virtual reality. As such, your current Genjutsu provide incredible power for C-ranks. Even though they are illusions; you have to remember that C-rank is VERY basic. Such things as Haze clones (Which affect only sight), or the falling fireball (again, only sight) are both C-rank. Your Genjutsu affect all five senses, at minimal cost; not to mention the limits to your jutsu are greatly exaggerated. Please tone it down to affecting 1-2 senses for each of your C-ranks. You may add a third, but do remember that controlling 3 senses for a low rank is not only incredibly difficult, but also very ineffective in combat.
Emperor of Rock
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Subject: Re: Hakuchou / Uchiha, Izanagi [Kumo Genin] Fri 11 May 2012, 7:19 am
Ok so I added the senses it affects or should I say removed? Also I raised the chakra cost. And should't I be able to use genjutsu a little bit more effectively since I have Yin release?
Enzo
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Subject: Re: Hakuchou / Uchiha, Izanagi [Kumo Genin] Sun 13 May 2012, 8:38 am
Though I am very skeptical about giving a Genin such a powerful technique, I cannot outright deny it. The basic premise is okay, though it is very powerful for a low-ranked technique. Oh, do note that the entire SC list is currently being revised due to inconstancy, errors, and overall usefulness. So though Yin Release may say it grants a variety of effects now; later on it may become something different.
In the meanwhile; I do have a few questions/proposed fixes, if you don't mind.
First off; your combat style should be greatly expanded.
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Illusive Reality
I'm assuming this is more of a 'Genjutsu Style', and not really a jutsu on its own. Just verifying.
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Illusive Reality: Avatar
Reduce it to only the base 2 elements. You may make it C/B ranked, in which case the B-ranked version can affect all 5.
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Illusive Reality: Ferocious Animals
Couple things. First of all, is the 'bush rattling' thing just a metaphor/exaggeration; or can the illusions actually do that? I hope not.. The other thing: the animal picked. Define approximately how big it must be. Also, what's the advantage of summoning a singular animal over a pack of them? If there is none, I'd advise you to make this C/B ranked as well, and simply have B-ranked allow for more animals; or larger singular animals.
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Illusive Reality: Weapon Master
'Any weapon he wants' makes it sound like you could create a railgun and fire it off at the user. Of course, it's all based on their creativity and imagination; but if someone were to be really inventive.. I see a nuke being very plausible. Although it is an illusion, it still takes a variety of skill to perform such mentally stressing attacks. Anyway, do be less broad than 'any weapon'.
The following are not your fault, and simply errors in the current encyclopedia.
-[Illusive Reality: Ferocious Animals] The bush doesn't rattle, it just makes it look that the animal jumped out of the bushes but in reality nothing "rattles" since the genjutsu doesn't start until the opponent sees the animal, and actually I don't think I wrote anything about rattling bush. And ranked it from C to A.
-[Illusive Reality: Weapon Master] I was thinking of cold weapons aka swords, blunt weapons, knives, whatever, not nukes and railguns.
And the encyclopedia jutsus were edited.
Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
Subject: Re: Hakuchou / Uchiha, Izanagi [Kumo Genin] Wed 16 May 2012, 12:16 am
All seems good now.
[1/2] Approved!
Cookie Monster
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Subject: Re: Hakuchou / Uchiha, Izanagi [Kumo Genin] Sun 20 May 2012, 4:59 pm
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