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| Subject: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Sun 16 Dec 2012, 7:35 pm | |
| Itou, Mardoc.THE INFO. Name: Mardoc Itou Nickname: Doc Age: 16 Gender: Male Appearance: Mardoc stands at 5’8 and weighs only roughly 120 pounds. His black straight hair falls on his face and reaches just below his chin. Mardoc’s eyes are a deep shade of sapphire blue, he usually appears wide eyes he hates when people squint their eyes so he tries to make sure he doesn’t. He has an average sized nose, Mardoc never thinks about his facial features other than his eyes which he remarks on from time to time. He shares and thin chin and round face with his deceased father. Mardoc has rather pale skin for an average shinobi, due to the fact that he spends his time outside when the sun is setting to night. Mardoc wears dark top attire. He wears a tight black sleeve less shirt. Above that he wears a black leather vest that he shines every night and morning, he takes pride in his vest. His leather gloves are mostly black, both bearing the symbol of Konoha, the gloves themselves are thin enough not to cause bad sweating and thick to grab hotter objects without burning himself. His off-white pants seem a tight fit buy are actually very breathable. He hold his pants yo with a brown leather belt, on the belt Mardoc had three pouches that he uses for his ninja tools, Mardoc keeps his Ninjato on the right side of his belt. He places the sheathe between his belt and himself. He wears the usual type of open toed sandals that have become popular among ninja. Forehead Protector: Mardoc only wears his forhead protecter during a fight, he normally keeps the head stored in his left read pouch. Personality:Mardoc’s always tries to make sure that any given task given to him is done completely and quickly, his second objectives are personal safety. He wants to put the mission before his own life but holds life in general before all else. Mardoc is very self-critical when it comes to correcting himself in any way. Mardoc is very caring about people and life. He is also gentle and may appear timid when addressing someone older or at a higher point in authority over himself. When addressing a peer he is more confident and sterner. Mardoc believes nothing should be set and stone, that there is always a more effective way to do any task, and wants things to remain orderly and is highly against anarchy views. If Mardoc believes he is right he won’t budge an inch on his position, but if he is unsure he is not unreasonable. Mardoc possess a form of OCD, he hates seeing messes and can’t help himself then to tidy up any given situation. When talking to someone Mardoc gets a “feeling” about that person, and whatever feeling in his gut he gets he usually goes with. Mardoc is very loyal to his friends and allies, especially his home village of Konohagakure. He hates the feeling of betrayal, he feels that betrayal is one of the worse things a person can do. Mardoc puts a lot of his faith in his instincts and intuitive. MArdoc is Patient when it comes to stressful situations, devoted to protect his friends and protective of his village. He is also light hearted and doesn’t think he could make a kill but loves the thrill of the fight. In jams Mardoc looks for creative ways to solve the problems. Mardoc prefers detailed tasks over broad tasks and also prefers having someone to have his back.
Clan: NA Nindō: Always try to save everyone, life needs saving. Period.
THE NINJA. Origin: Hi no Kuni Affiliation: Konohagakure Rank: Genin Specialties: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu Elemental Affinities: Fire, Wind Combat Style: Mardoc uses both taijutsu and ninjutsu, his preference is to use Taijutsu. Mardoc uses kicks above punches in fights, doing so has resulted him to have more balance on his feet. He studied a type of fighting style known as Chāquán. Chāquán is a martial art stlye that features graceful movements and some acrobatic aerial maneuvers. Upon studying this form of fighting mardoc has come to rely on his kicks far more than his punches. A major advantage to this form of fighting style is all the leg control a person can get from it. Mardoc is slightly faster than some of his peers and more agile. Chāquán is more focused on fast accurate movements over slow powerful ones. One disadvantage to this type of fighting style is the lack of work on the arms. Mardoc prefers to keep his ninjutsu at a range, primarily focusing in the fire element and using the wind element as a secondary to amplify his fire.
Special Characteristics:
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Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
Name: Improved Endurance Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of endurance accessible to those who have undergone intensive training. The possessor of this talent has an increased endurance of 20% which makes them slightly tougher. They can withstand greater damage that could otherwise stun them in pain, and continue fighting.
Name: Evasiveness Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: None. Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and dodging basic forms of physical attacks by reading an enemies movement.
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Early years Mardoc was born to Akada Itou (his mother) and Kotaro Itou (Father) at a Konohagakure hospital. The hospital was over packed and understaffed. Akada went into a premature labor, while Kotaro sought help and doctor found her in pain and delivered the baby. The baby was the oldest and only child of the two parents. He was born with deep sapphire eyes just like his mother, and dark hair like his father. Mardoc was named after his grand-father, and shinobi that died in combat. Mardoc grew up on the right side of town, a very friendly neighborhood. Mardoc was barely able to walk when he saw his father spar with his uncle. The two loved to test each other’s abilities. Mardoc contistly watched them even when his mother told him not to. His father was a good man; he had a thin chin and a round face. Mardoc’s father kept his long black hair in a ponytail. Mardoc remembers the long dark ponytail of hair above anything else when he remembers his father. When Mardoc was only one year old his father had a training accident. He was training with other jounin when one of them set off a paper bomb close off to him, Kotaro jumped with the explosion and fell unto a rock, which snapped his neck instantly. The whole event made his mother hysterical and she didn’t want Mardoc to become a Shinobi. Mardoc was too little to understand everything that had transpired. His mother started to drink and become abusive which Mardoc would have to live with for years to come.
At the age of four Mardoc had shown signs that he could use ninjutsu, and he preferred the fire element much like his father. His uncle had token him from his mother’s custody. His mother spiraled into a deep depression and began to resent and ignore Mardoc whenever he came around. His uncle took the responsibility (having no children of his own) to take care of Mardoc. His uncle was a medical jutsu specialist and worked at the hospital, he started to call Mardoc “Doc” due to his desire to make sure everything was completed fully and right, him being protective over his village, and his will to help all of his fellow villagers. Mardoc’s uncle was decided that Mardoc should follow his father’s footsteps and become a shinobi. At the age of five Mardoc was enrolled into the Konohagakure Academy for Ninja.
Academy Arc. Mardoc’s adaptation to a class room was hard at first; he was an isolated kid in his early years. His only real interaction was between his mother and uncle. At first he didn’t talk to any of the other kids. He felt that he was out casted from them. A few days into the academy the kids invited him to play with them, Mardoc became a natural with other people once he came out of his shell. He studied to learn all of the needed ninjutsu to graduate. Mardoc enjoyed learning all the ninjutsu he could, he told his uncle he wanted to excel in fire ninjutsu like his father. He uncle smiled down at Mardoc and told him after he got the basics down he would gladly show Mardoc the robes in ninjutsu. That day seemed like everything was going Mardoc’s way, until a man in a white animal mask appeared. He talked to Mardoc’s uncle beyond Mardoc’s ear shot. His uncle’s expression was grim. He told Mardoc to continue his studies Mardoc did so. His uncle didn’t return until late in the evening. The next day Mardoc would learn that his mother had killed herself. This made Mardoc feel alone in the world, he had known both of his parents and now they were gone. His class mates made him a lot better by inviting him to their houses and hung around him. This made Mardoc feel like the village was hid family and inspired his loyalty to his village. Mardoc progressed through the academy and got all the basics down and he graduated from the academy at the age of 11.
Genin Arc After the academy Mardoc’s uncle held true to his promise and taught Mardoc some of the back fire ninjutsu. Also upon graduating Mardoc’s uncle gave Mardoc a very special give, it was his father’s headband. Mardoc took the head band and promised to only wear it in battle; his uncle also made him a black vest to help him in battle. Mardoc spent most of his time practicing his jutsu. Mardoc showed interest in learning taijutsu. During the time he spent learning taijutsu he had grown a liking to kicks over punches. Thus he altered the way he moved and fought around his kicks. Mardoc once asked his uncle “Would there be a way to improve my fire?” His uncle told him that it would just take time for him to get better at his ninjutsu. Mardoc continued to practice his jutsus and combat understanding. He studied battle tactics and strategies from the local library, while reading he learned that wind element jutsus could be used with fire element jutsus to amplify the power. Although Mardoc showed little interest in the wind element he did take the time to learn a few new jutsus to make himself better in combat. As the winter months approached Mardoc’s uncle received a letter stating that medical ninja were needed in the field and he had been called to duty. Mardoc had hoped that he may get the chance to see his uncle in the field. Mardoc had and will continue to train to become a shinobi his village would be proud of.
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Mardoc was stretching and getting ready for his training. ‘Maybe I’ll work on my kunai throwing or maybe increasing my speed’ The fundalmentals were important to any Genin. And Mardoc was far from mastering them. Being a light weight lad gave him a speed avantage over bigger opponents in fights, but also mean he wasn’t as physically strong as the others. He was hoping to perhaps learn some ranged ninjutsu or maybe in the future use some Genjutsu. Taijutsu was deffinaitly out of the question for Mardoc, unless he could figure out a way to use his speed to compensate for his lack of arm muscle, or maybe throw kicks more often than punches. Thoughts on how his training would unfold he heard a male voice off to the side.
"Hey. Mekura Uchiha.” The young man introduced himself as “I'm about to do some training as well. Would you care to join me? .......Ooh. I almost forgot. Your name must be.....?" Mardoc looked at him, just a inch or so under Mardoc’s own height. Mekura Has long black hair and matching black eyes. His skin was a lighter shade than Mardoc’s. He was wearing a black hoodie with off-white pants. What caught Mardoc’s attention was the symbol on the front left of the hoodie. It was the easily recognizable fan of the Uchiha. It would make sense, he introduced himself as much.
“Sure, Mekura, my name is Mardoc Itou.” He fixed his eyes on Mekura after a moment of a stare down another voice appeared out of the woods. Mardoc saw the man, taped hands and arms, a mostly blue loose outfit. The man spoke, "Hello guys...how about you guys show one of your dear Jounin how the genin represent themselves nowadays?..." The man’s hair was bi'mafaggotlack much like Mekura’s and Mardoc’s. His hair’s length was in fact longer forming a ponytail, his facial hair was also unkept. Mardoc saw that the man was also smoking a pipe. Quick flashes of memories of his own father smoking ran in Mardoc’s head, his focus was reestablished when the man continued to speak. "My name is Enden. An elite Jounin.” This is what caught Mardoc’s attention over anything else. An elite Jounin. This would be perfect for Mardoc to see how far he has come during his last spar.
“I agree to your terms of a two on one spar” Mardoc looked at Mekura, “Let’s show him he aren’t just push overs.” Mardoc reached into his pouch and pulled out his Tsurugakure head band and tied it tight. “My name is Mardoc Itou.”
THE ARSENAL. Items
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Name: Ninjato Rank: D Type: Primary/Close Range Quantity: 1 Description: Short and straight, this blade takes a similar form of a katana, but without the curvature in the blade. With the blade measuring no more than one and a half feet, and a square guard on top, this weapon has been popularized by many ninja, especially the ANBU, hence the name.
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Quantity: 1 Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
Name: Small Scroll Rank: D Type: Supplementary Quantity: - Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimetres. Storage:
Academy Jutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Katon
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Name: Endan - Fireball Rank: D-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m – 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After doing the necessary hand seals, the ninja draws chakra to their lungs before swiftly exhaling it, allowing them to blow a jet of fire from their mouth. Depending on the rank at which it is performed, Endan ranges in size and heat. Starting at a moderate level of heat and a reach of up to 3m, at D rank, and increasing in temperature to an intense heat and up to a 10m reach, when performed at A rank. Chakra Cost: D: 4 (1 per post), C: 5 (2 per post), B: 12 (3 per post), A: 23 (5 per post)
Name: Honoo Ha - Flaming Leaves Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: Katon Description: Honoo Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user will be able to launch out three oak tree shaped leaves made up of fire from their mouth. It takes a triangle formation, one fire leaf at the front and two following behind it. The leaves are capable of burning the opponent and their clothing, however, the user must ensure that they are within ten metres of the opponent. For once the fire leaves pass this limit, they will simply fade away. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Shōmei Heirō - Illuminating Halo Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: Katon Description: Shōmei Heirō is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user is able to call forth a ring of fire above their head. This halo - like ring has the same circumference as the users head and is also able to light up a ten metre radius around the user. It's often called a golden ring, due to the perfect ring having golden - yellow flames occupying it. At the centre of the ring an oak tree leaf made of fire is found, it's used for a sequence attack. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Gōruden Ikari no Ha - Golden Leaves of Fury Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: Katon Description: Gōruden Ikari no Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After having the Illuminating Halo active the user is able to perform the sequence attack in case of danger arising. In order to do so, the golden oak tree leaf made up of fire, will rise up from the centre of the halo and begin to launch seven copies of itself towards the users opponent. After preforming the tiger seal, one can direct the leaves by a simple point of the finger. If hit, the target will be met with minor burns on the skin and possibly have their clothes set alight. Once the technique has been performed, the golden leaf will settle back into the centre of the halo where it must recharge for two posts. Chakra Cost: 5 + 2 for recharge
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Chakra Cost: 8
Wind
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Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame. Chakra Cost: 9
Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques. Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness. Chakra Cost: 5
Taijutsu
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Name: Dynamic • Entry - Dainamikku • Entorii Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: This jutsu simply appears to be a flying jump kick, often performed on the face of an enemy, while dramatically screaming the words "Dynamic Entry". Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Senpuu - Leaf Whirlwind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo". Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit Rank: D Type: Nin / Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: Katon Description: Bureijinguhitto is a ninjutsu and taijutsu combination utilizing the fire element. By charging a small amount of chakra to the dominant fist, the user is able to ignite their hand so that it's enveloped in a glove of fire. By delivering a punch to their opponent, the user is able to add on a burning effect equivalent to that of a scalding tea kettle to the location that has been hit. The fire will only be visible on the top of the hand, covering the top of the fingers, knuckles and hand. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Konoha Shoufuu - Leaf Rising Wind Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: This jump uses the entire body as a spring by amassing power in the legs before kicking upwards. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user first uses the "Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance" to manuever his/her opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his/her opponent, the user will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he/she is unable to make a clean strike, he/she will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his/her target's attention and defense to one area. The user can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, the user will deftly rotate his/her body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Chimei-teki Fera - Fatal Blow Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: - Description: Chimei-teki Fera is a taijutsu technique. After charging a small amount of chakra towards the dominant leg, the user will try to use their speed and strength so that they can perform a sideways kick to the opponents ribcage. In order for direct contact to be made the shin, where most of the chakra is stored, will hit the centre of the ribcage forcing a shock wave of pain to make it's way across the body. If the technique is performed correctly, they will be able to force their opponent to the ground and possibly even stop them from being able to stand back up. Chakra Cost: 7
Ninjutsu
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Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals and objects to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Signing this contract also allows the animal to reverse summon the human ninja to their location. Chakra Cost: 5 (C Rank Summon), 10 (B), 15 (A), 20 (S)
FACE CLAIM. Character Claim:Original Source: Deviant Art Image URL: http://fazzeagle.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=fighter&offset=72#/d1oa3fq
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Sun 16 Dec 2012, 10:09 pm | |
| You are missing your face claim section. |
| | | Doc
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Mon 17 Dec 2012, 3:20 am | |
| Edits made |
| | | Kiseki
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Mon 17 Dec 2012, 3:37 am | |
| You need more.
- Appearance
- Personality
- Combat Style
- History.
You need to edit/remove
- Typos in your combat style.
You need to elaborate on why your nickname is Doc. |
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:06 am | |
| Added more detail |
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:21 am | |
| You aren't a medical ninja so your doc nickname makes no sense as it currently stands. You can easily just get it as a childhood nickname for always playing doctor or something. You also need to remove the part about being a medical ninja in your history. |
| | | Doc
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:24 am | |
| My character's uncle was a Medical Ninja and gave the nickname to Mardoc because he wants to protect and help people, like a passion a doctor would have, plus it's short for Mardoc.
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- His uncle was a medical jutsu specialist and worked at the hospital, he started to call Mardoc “Doc” due to his desire to make sure everything was completed fully and right, him being protective over his village, and his will to help all of his fellow villagers.
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| | | Kiseki
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:30 am | |
| http://gyazo.com/c99bab7a9f5f25d6cbf4559f4797d9ad
Says right there you went into the field of medical ninja in the winter. You aren't medical ninja. Remove it. |
| | | Doc
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:34 am | |
| I said my Uncle was called into action and left in the winter. - Quote :
As the winter months approached Mardoc’s uncle received a letter stating that medical ninja were needed in the field and he had been called to duty. |
| | | Kiseki
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:38 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 1:46 pm | |
| Approved 2/2
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| Subject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Sun 14 Apr 2013, 4:13 pm | |
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