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Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin]

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Kudo, Null.

THE INFO.

Name: Kudo, Null
Nickname:
Age:16
Gender: Male
Appearance:Null have piercing light blue eyes as he shares with his now deceased mother.. He also posses snow white hair that reaches just above his ears. Being convinced that his hair style is aerodynamic, Null keeps his hair comb back at all times. His outfit consists of a light brown mask that covers his lower half of his face, his shirt is the same shade of brown and made of very light and tight fabric. On his left arm Null had a straight line of brown ink, representing neutrality towards the world. Which means he will not carry out personal requests over mission objectives. On his right arm he has the same tattoo but in red, representing the blood of the bloody mist village. His shirt, although tight, is made of a type of leather made out of the local fish and wildlife. His pants are more loosely fitting but are made out of the same material as his shirt. His pants hold four pouches, two on each leg on the outside of the leg. These pouches hold his equipment such as kunais, shurikens, and explosive tags.

Null keeps a kunai taped to the bottom half of his right leg, in case he loses the pouches in combat or they are taken. Null wears the traditional ninja sandals, as are a common thread among shinobi.  Null stands at 5’10 and weighs in at about 145 pounds. Although he isn't big he does have defined muscles for someone of his age. Null wears the same brown outfit in causal settings as well as the battle field. His sword is holstered on his back, being connected in his shirt. Null cuts two horizontal holes on the back of his shirt to place the sheath of the blade in. Null wears his forehead protector as a belt, because he wants it to always be visible at all times. If he carries any other weapon he will placed in different places, for example. His ninjato will be tied horizontally on his lower back or how he slings a bow on his shoulder. Null likes to wear his weapons to show off their deadliness.

Forehead Protector: Null wears his Forehead protector as a belt.

Personality: Null is hot headed, and he doesn’t know when not to fight. He knows right from wrong but he doesn’t seem to care. He shows little fear while fighting. Null will go out of his way to get the mission done. When he is angry, Null doesn't make his emotions a secret. But if he is happy he hides it, while being unpredictable. When you think he is going to do something most the time he does something else. Although he has problems controlling his anger, he always thinks of a saying “If you cannel your anger it won’t be your weakness but it will become you greatest strength.” No matter how hard he tries anger gets the best of him. Null is fearless, a thrill seeker one could say. He is excellent when there is a crisis situation; he has great hand-eye coordination. Null is good at following through with a project, and tying up loose ends.

He takes pride in his ability to take the next correct step. He doesn’t smile very often. He is driven by anger he tries to do all he can to hold back his anger and not to lash out against people who don’t deserve it. He always has some sort of a weapon. Null is not very trusting and tends to keep to himself. But when someone does have his trust, Null is one of the most loyal shinobi that a person could ask for. Null has a minor obsection with weapons. He likes to use different ones and plan out all sorts of combos he could pull off. Null likes to believe he has an aresnal that any shinobi would take pride in. Null sees alittle of himself in each weapons he usues. His favorite weapon would be the katana he used to kill his father with. The katana, to Null,
Clan: NA
Nindō: "Anger isn't a weakness, not directing it is."

THE NINJA.

Origin:Mizu No Kuni
Affiliation:Kiri
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Weaponry(main:Close-Sub:Long), Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities:Suiton, Raiton
Combat Style:Null’s fighting style is a very balanced. He mostly relies on his sword and lets his anger flow through his movements allowing him to be more aggressive with his attacks. He is a very ground based type of shinobi, not much jumping and or acrobatic movements. While his offensive tactics are very aggressive Null keeps his defense conservative. Meaning that he when he is one the defensive he doesn’t attempt a counter after every move. Instead he waits for a perfect time to strike and thus unleashes his aggressive offense. Null prefers to use his water Ninjutsu over using any other type of Ninjutsu. He does not believe in a take all prisoners attitude. He fights to win by any means necessary. He wields a katana in his right hand and uses his left to make hand signs for his jutsu. He is a very offensive ninja and this can be exploited by being able to out endure him.
Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
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Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.
Academy Jutsu

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Weaponry
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Suiton
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Raiton
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Non-Elemental
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Gear
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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Null
Source:Metal Gear Solid
Image URL:http://raikofu.deviantart.com/art/null-is-a-ninja-181438556


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lifeanddeath
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PostSubject: Re: Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin] Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin]  EmptySat 19 Jan 2013, 3:51 pm

Just a few things to note:

  • I would like just a few more lines of both personality and appearance as two paragraphs is the standard norm. However given the slightly large size of the paragraphs you already have, it wouldnt take much more than three to four more lines and a bit of separation to make the two paragraphs.

  • The weaponry spec is supposed to be divided into categories; with each category being Close, Mid or Long in references to ranges. When picking the weaponry specialty, you are required to pick two of these categories and list them as main and sub within the weaponry specialization. For example: Weaponry; [Main: Long- Sub: Close]

  • You only have 13/15 Jutsu you can have at Character Creation. It's a personal choice to use all of the allotted slots, but it is advised you do so.

  • You possess two Jutsu that require a weapon you do not possess. Senbon Shower requires a needle umbrella of some sort and Dust Wind requires a fan.
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PostSubject: Re: Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin] Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin]  EmptySat 19 Jan 2013, 4:17 pm


Few nitpicky stuff from me.
  • Quote :
    Null shares the light blue eyes that all of his clan members from the Mist village have.
    You say that you share the traits of clan members yet you are not part of a clan at all.

  • Quote :
    On his left arm Null had a straight line of brown ink, a symbol of his clan of adult hood.
    Again, you are not in a clan.

  • As MrMoney said, add few lines in both appearance and personality and split it in two paragraphs.


That would be all seeing how MrMoney said it all.
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Chaos
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PostSubject: Re: Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin] Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin]  EmptySat 19 Jan 2013, 4:32 pm

added and edited.

I know I only have 14 jutsus now, but I don't see any others that I can use that I want.
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PostSubject: Re: Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin] Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin]  EmptySat 19 Jan 2013, 4:39 pm

Now the only issue I see is that you cannot have a C rank bow as long range weaponry is your sub specialty. Sub weaponry can only be used up to one rank below your character rank.
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Emperor of Rock
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PostSubject: Re: Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin] Kudo, Null [Kiri Genin]  EmptySat 19 Jan 2013, 4:42 pm

Well, even though I would like a longer RP sample, it fits the minimum word count of 250 words for genins. So, this app looks decent enough. If you are sure you don't want any other jutsu I deem this application

Approved 1/2
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(2/2) Approved.
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