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Stephanie
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 |  Subject: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Fri 09 Apr 2010, 6:37 am | |
| Basic Information:
Name:
Sora Tomoko
Secondary Title:
Silver Eyed Witch(lol...)
Age:
24
Gender:
Female
Physical Appearance:
Sora is different from the rest of the women around her. Sora is slightly more muscular, leaner, and taller. She is a beautiful women, with a strong body to match with a strong mind. Sora is 6'0, and weighs One Hundred and Thirty pounds with 9% of that being body fat. Sora has a naturally tanned skin color, received from her dark skinned father in Kumogakure.
Sora's face is unique from the rest of the people in Konohagakure. She had a tatto starting at the forehead and traveling to the middle of the brow. The Tattoo reads "Brutality". She also has black tattooes lines on her face and around her eyes giving her a "cat eye" style. Sora has silver eyes. The woman has brown hair that goes to her breasts, however, ninety percent of the time she keeps it in a bun. She has two very long braids that hang to the floor. She has three senbon in her hair, disguised of course.
During the course of her duties she wears her combat armor, which is a mix between reinforced steel and hard leather. She wears a gold samurai mask that protects her identity, even though she is not in any special force. She likes the mask because it installs a fear into some of her enemies. When she is not on duty she wears normal cloths such as: Jeans, shirts, sweaters, coats. Surprisingly, she likes to stay in fashion.
Personality:
Sora is bipolar, and her personalities switch at random times. Both personalities are Sora, and they communicate in the mind of the woman. Sora is fully sane regardless of this hidden condition. One of her sides is brutal, deceiving, unloving, and bloody. She shifts towards this in more combat situations. This side of her is extremely insane. She is focused on her enemy, and literally forgets everything else. This does not mean she acts irrationally. She is still brilliant, but every thought and calculation is used against her enemy.
When she is not at battle she is in her other personality with is considerably more sane and calm. She speaks with purpose, is some-what kind, cares about things in life, and is pretty normal. In this personality she has a bad swearing habit and does not put up with bullshit except when she has to or if it is coming from a superior. Sora has no interest in men, and see's them as tools and inferior beings. She has been rumored to carry children from numerous one night stands, but these have yet to be confirmed.
Regardless of what personality Sora is in at the moment, she is extremely respective of people stronger than her. She has such obiedience that she can even snap from her rage mode in some cases. She does not measure strength by powers. She looks at the person as a whole, and thinks about what they have been through. Also, Sora is insanely protective of her family. Her family is her clan. If you pick on one, then you deal with her. The
Catch Phrase:
Does your character have any catch phrases? Optional.
Clan Information:
Clan Name:
Tomoko Clan
Clan Location:
Established in Konoha-Around the World.
Clan Traits:
When people are born, they are extremely ugly, and are often referred to as trolls. Once they hit puberty, they grow into highly beautiful people, and they often turn heads when they walk the streets of populated areas. Tomoko children develop their milestones in their childhood twice as fast. The Tomoko are extremely intelligent, and may be the most intelligent people in the world. They can calculate things extremely fast, find solutions to problems with ease. In more extreme cases some have a photographic memory.
Kekkei Genkai:
The Tomoko have the ability to see ones past by touching them after increasing the flow of chakra in the brain. There are different levels in which this can be done. Tomoko in the Academy Student range to the Genin range can see about 6 or 7 hours into the targets past. Chunin can see the targets past 24-48 hours. A ranked shinobi may be able to see up to 72 to 96 hours in the past, and S ranked shinobi can see the user's past week. When the user see's the targets past it usually happens in an instant as if the memories are copied, and then pasted in the users mind.
There is also a dark secret to the Tomoko. When a member dies, another member generations later will inherit thier memories. It is not known why, but the Tomoko believe that people will inherit the memories of another member who closely resembles them mentally and spiritually. The deceased and the living share a close bond. This bond should be closely monitored, because in some rare cases the user will actually become the deceased ancestor in a way. They will begin to think exactly like them, talk like them, act like them, and they might even change their appearance to resemble them. This is the clan's secret, and even Konoha know's nothing of it. The Tomoko can be equivalent to a library. They hold the world's future in many fragments.
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: 6 Hour Remembrance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: None
Description: After touching the target, the user is able to see the last six hours in the targets past. This costs 5% of the user's chakra.
Name: 24-48 Hour Remembrance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: After touching the desired target, the user is able to see the last 24-48 hours of the targets past. This cost 10% of the user's chakra.
Name: 48-92 Hour Remembrance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: After touching the desired target, the user is able to see the last 48-92 hours of the targets past. This cost's 15% of the user's chakra.
Name: Memory Seal
Type: Medical
Rank: A-S
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: After touching the desired target on the head, the user is able to literally delete that last month of the target's memory. This takes 80% of her chakra. This jutsu can be used one step further(S), in which the user deletes the entire memory of the target. The effect is that the user goes into a coma for 48 hours(Real time). After that it will take a full day(24 hours) to recover their chakra, and even then they will be weak. The target does not lose jutsu or abilties.
Name: 168 hour remembrance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: None
Description: After touching the desired target, the user can see the last 7 days(169 hours) of the targets past. This takes 20% of the user's chakra.
Name: Memory Subtraction and Addition
Type: Medical
Rank: S
Element: None
Description: After touching the target's head the user is able to either delete a specific memory or add an entirely new one. The user is able to add or subtract a maximum or two memories at a time. These memory changes are permanent . There is no way to reverse this or have the the target remember something that has been temporarily deleted. This can not be used in battle and must be used with a controlled target. This jutsu can take multiple hours.
History:
Kiki Tomoko, the Tomoko Clan Founder was rumored to appear as one of the first shinobi in the world. During the first wars she fought as a mercenary, and quickly rose beyond the position of a common mercenary. Soon Kiki had a company of her own mercenaries which fought alongside the uchiha for a short time before abandoning them to a rival clan. Tomoko's company was slaughtered and she was taken captive by the man in charge. Kiki was treated like a common slave, and eventually used her intelligence to become the commander's mistress. The army fought countless times against minor bloodlines and common mercenaries. Kiki soon became the brains behind the entire army. She was the meaning of the saying "Behind every great man lies a great woman."
Throughout the years Kiki laid with the commander many times, and bore 12 children by the time of her death. 4 Children possessed the bloodline, though she kept it a secret. Kiki would soon murder her master, and flee leaving the children without the bloodline to fend for themselves at a young age. She took the children to a valley where they lived for 15 years. Soon after those 15 years Kiki died of a brain tumor. The children would continue the bloodline for the sake of their mothers memory.
For about 50 years the four children expanded the clan in that same valley, later named Tomoko Valley. However a massive blow would hit the clan. Surrounding people living in and out of the valley heard of the Tomoko's power, and began to think of them as witches and demons. Hundreds of people raided the villages of the Tomoko's and butchered well over half of the clan in the span of about a year. During these months the clan members were taught in the way of warfare and began fighting back. Some of them became complete savages. The Tomoko clan became to disorganized they began wandering around the world. Some became so poor they began to eat the bodies of their victims. The clan disappeared for about 100 years before a small tribe returned to seek safety. Soon after that time the Fire Country was established, and they wished to seek safety at the shinobi village. Throughout the years, women have been elected to lead the clan because a great woman had started it. Kiki became a god and was worshiped. There was a prophecy that whoever inherited Kiki's memories would rise to become a great woman, but would have a tragic ending much like Kiki's. The clan has also not forgotten the Uchiha's betrayal, and many members spit upon the mention of an Uchiha.
Clan Details:
Open, Members require my persmission
Rank Information:
Rank:
Jounin
Village Affiliation:
Fire Country Citizen
Leaf Village Shinobi
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Fuuinjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Earth
Special Characteristics:
-Sora is very intelligent, and can do many math calculations in very short times.
-Sora was born with Situs Inversus, which means her organs and major blood vessels are placed in the opposite side of the body. There are no health issues with this and people with it usually lead healthy lives.
-Sora is Bipolar
-Sora has had nerve damage in her right arm. She can feel little to no pain in that arm.
Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.
Weapon Template:
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Name: "Fate" & "Destiny" Quantity: 2 blades Rank: D Appearance: Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: These two swords were forged in the mountains of Kumogakure, by Sora's father. The father then used these blades for 30 years in service to Kumogakure. For every kill the blade recieved, the man would make a little chip near the hilt of the blade. After his death of disease, his blades were found by his wife, and then eventually passed on ten years to Sora. The first time the blades met Sora she noticed 113 chips on one katana, and 70 on the other. This was her first inspiration to become a warrior once she knew what these chips in the blade represent. After Sora came of age she cleaned up both of the blades, repairing them from the years of storage, when she was done there were two newly refitted Katana's. She named one "Fate" and the other "Destiny". She covered up the chips from her father, and plans to begin the cycle once more with herself.
Other Common Weapons:
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-10 Kunai
-10 Explosive tags
-6 Shurkian
-2 Explosive Smoke Bombs
-2 Explosive Gas Bombs
-4 Flash Tag's
Item Template:
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Name: Lady Sora's Battle Mask Rank: C Type: Amor Natural Abilities: This is the face mask Sora often uses while in combat. The face mask is made out of reinforced steel and can withstand blows from normal weapons, and can also withstand heat for short amounts of time.  Sora's Battle Suit Name: Sora's Combat Suit Rank: B Type: Armor Natural Abilities: This battle suit is made out of hardened leather, and reinforced Steel. The Shoulder plate, the upper chest piece, the Torso peice, the knee plates, and the shin guards are made of metal with leather placed over the top. The sheets of steel are thin, but are enough to keep Sora safe from some slashes from swords and most ranged attacks. There is a thin layer of metal on the spine to protect it from injury. The armor is effective at resisting the damage from Explosive tags. This armor can also take high heats for up to 2 posts before it begins to damage. There are also 8 knife holsters for quick throwing. Name: Sora's Cape Rank: A Type: Clothing Natural Abilities: This cape is very unique. It has two abilities. The first is it's flammability resistance. This is an effective barrier against fire, and can withstand all types of fire except extreme types, like the fire from the sharingan. This can only block against Fire Jutsu B rank or lower. The second is the ability to make the user invisible the user for up to 3 posts with no movement. This can be seen through by certain doujutsu Name: Sora's Gloves Rank: C Type: Clothing/Armor Natural Abilities: These gloves have a small secret weapon. All Sora has to do is flex her pinkey finger twice in quick succession and 2 inch spikes will sprout from each knuckle
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Background Information
History:
Birth & Early Childhood:
Sora was born in the land of lightning 24 years ago. Her father was a Village Shinobi, and her mother was a Tomoko. There were many custody battles over Sora. The clan wanted newly born innocent babies to be taken care by the clan in Konoha. Kumogakure wanted Sora so that they could make their own branch in their village. This was Important because the Leaf Village would no longer have the only clan of the Powerful Tomoko Bloodline.
This feud lasted a decade, until one side took action. The Tomoko had a meeting on night, with several of it's ANBU members. The Tomoko were small and weak in numbers, but they knew much about the village because of memories passed down from generations ago. They were a close family, and planned every event with everyones approval. The Tomoko decided that it was too unsafe to the clan and village, if Sora received the memories of a member from generations ago such as Kiki. Also, they had to keep other villages from creating a Branch of Tomoko. Three of the Tomoko who were ANBU were sent to retrieve Sora and leave no evidence.
That night the ANBU invaded the large estate of Sora's mother and Father. It was a rather quick affair. One of the Ninja came in through the window, in Sora's Bedroom, and grab her while she was sound asleep. The other two came in through other windows, and made their way to the parent's bedroom. They placed three explosive tags on the outside of the door, then proceeded in. They found the man standing there, fully prepared for battle.
The ANBU were suprised, they had no idea the father was a sensory type. It would not matter, the ANBU deceived him. They fought hard for several minutes with the result of the ANBU on the ground. One was dead, and the other lost purposesly when he knew he had no chance of killing him. As the man walked through the door he activated the tags, blowing a large crater in the house, and killing the father. The ANBU got up from the floor, grabbed the mom by the hair, and slit her throat.
They burned the entire house that night. The mother, father, and dead ANBU agent were turned into ash. Sora's memories were completely wiped, except those that were very important to her functioning. Instead, new memories were placed in the brain. Sora now knew that she had a new family, new friends, and a new home.
Academy Student & Genin Arc
Sora was brought to Konoha right before enrollment took place in the Academy of Konoha. Because of Sora's natural intelligence, she graduated after 3 months. She had her own private ceremony with her clan where she received her headband. Suspicion quickly arose about Sora in Kumogakure, and the clan was forced to keep her hidden for several months. During 7 months inside the Tomoko Compound she for 4 months solely on her Bloodline abilties.
Through her training it was discovered she was displaying traits of Kiki Tomoko, the first Tomoko to walk the earth. Sora began having dreams of war, cannibalism, and sexual intercourse. She was reliving the memories of Kiki Tomoko. After her training was complete people were convinced that she was bipolar. One side of her personality was some-what kind and loving, and the other was brutal and ferocious. Over the years, her more brutal personality evolved and became dominant over her other personality. The brutal personality was closely to that of Kiki Tomoko.
After an important meeting, it was decided that Sora was a direct descendant of Kiki Tomoko, had her memories, and would in fact be the next great clan leader when she became of age. The clan leader seemed overjoyed, but secretly was plotting. The girl was only 11. In 7 years an assassination would take place and the clan would be changed forever.
Because of how Sora was locked in the compound, she missed the first round of Chuunin Exams. She had 5 months to practice as hard as she could on her Ninjutsu abilities. As soon as suspicion had died about Sora, she was allowed to walk the village again, and was put in a team and was sent to work right away. As time passed she sought help from Imo Tomoko, the clan leader. To gain Sora's trust, Imo took Sora on as her part-time sensei. It was only part time because she was on another team as well. She was now receiving training from two jounin.
Sora completed 23 Missions while she was a Genin, and she had only failed one because her team mate was injured and had to be rushed to a medical room. By the time the Chunin Exams had arrived Sora was more than ready. She was not ready for the injuries she would receive though. Sora had easily passed the written exam, and then headed for the forest of death with her team. During the adventure she was injured when she was kicked off of a tree, and fell directly in a man eating poisonous plant. The jaw's began to close right when she fell in it had already began to swallow her arm. With her arm in it's throat the acid began eating away at it in an incredible pace.
Her team was able to uproot it, and catch it afire. The plant vomited, which released Sora. Her arm was badly eaten away when she was attended to. The best she could do was wrap it, sling it, and keep on going. The team was eventually able to finish the objective, and they passed. During the tournament Sora end up surrendering because of her injuries. Her intelligence and ability was expressed during the battle, and that scored her high in the Hokage's eyes. Two days after the exams, the Hokage would announce that Sora, and a few other would receive Chuunin Status. Sora was well on her way in making her mark in the world.
Chuunin Arc & Jounin
Sora had made it to Chuunin after only a year and a half from making her home in the Village. Sora was happy but secretly was fighting her own battles within. She was now having dreams nightly. Instead of nightmares, they were a little more calm. Sora had grown used to them and it rarely woke her up in a sweat. Every morning, she would record her dreams. These really weren't dreams..just memories becoming known. They came in waves. In one month she was dream every night, and the next she would rarely. Soon she had a small library. Much of the time period before the Leaf Village was now recorded. The Uchiha's treachery was now proven as well. These records and documents were kept secret from even the Hokage. Only Imo, the scribes, clan officials, and Sora knew about it.
Sora was now almost thirteen, and the trust between her and Imo was beginning to solidify. Imo had slipped up a couple times, but she was sure that it would mean nothing. The training in Ninjutsu was beginning to finish up, and Imo would begin teaching Sora in the ways of Taijutsu. Because of the Tomoko's ability to see memories by touch, it would be important for them to know close combat styles. Sora trained hard and complete one A rank mission, 11 B ranked missions, and 16 C ranked missions.
When Sora was 16 she was promoted to a Special Jounin. Because of her clan ability she would be a valuable asset to the torture team in Konoha. She would become part of the team. She spent two years there. During her duty in that team she had to see the memories of many people and she felt she was being abused by her clan, and by the village. For every person she touched, some of their memories were put inside her. She saw many bad things happen and learned much about Konohagakure and it's schemes and inner workings.
Two years was too much for her. She became a part time member of the Interrogation Squad. She would take the Jounin exams on the day before her 18th birthday, which was also the last day of duty on the Interrogation team. After being penned in the dealings of Konohagakure she was eager to become and official Jounin. Of course like everyone predicted, Sora had passed. The hours after her Jounin Status was given to her, she overheard one of her best friends reciting a memory to a scribe about the events in Kumogakure and Sora herself. That night she crept into her friends room and read the memories of her kidnapping. Sora was enraged, and murdered her friend in his own bed before leaving the room.
Her celebration party was at the Tomoko compound the next morning, and Sora had a plan of her own. Sora was able to get one of her friends to poison 4 glasses. She was able to play the card that she would be the clan leader in a few hours, and that it was a direct order. After the drinks were poisoned she directed the servers to serve the tray of drinks to the table of the clan officials.
Imo the clan leader's assassination was in place. Tomorrow and Urgent message would go to the Hokage, saying that several Tomoko members were rumored to be joining a rival village. Of course, the Hokage would send Tomoko members to deal with the mess. Sora would be amoung them. Sora would be followed by two squads of highly ranked Tomoko members, and they would turn on her and assassinate her.
There would be no chance. As soon as the toasting began hell broke loose. Imo and three clan officials began coughing, and soon blood began to come out of their mouths. After several seconds of chaos they feel dead on the table, and some even on the plates. Sora rushed to Imo to check her pulse. Though she was really scanning her memories. Because of this, she was able to avoid the assassination attempt the next day. The next morning she was named the leader of the clan and was worshiped because of her connection to Kiki. She is now gaining trust with her village for kidnapping her, before she plans to wipe it off the map.
Role-Play Sample:
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2 Weeks Ago- Present
It was troublesome, Tanaka wasn't going to lie. His partner up and left him at the gates. So what did Tanaka do? Normally Iva would have killed him as fast as possible. Tanaka however was more passive. He had summoned Buddha for a long period of time and had his giant Liger track the Akatsuki member a while after he left. It didn't help that Tanaka's partner wore a kimono with an akatsuki robe. It was hot in Konoha and he left strong scents behind for Buddha.
He also had another advantage. His unique shoes would leave a more noticeable imprint in the ground. It would sink in more than the average shoe. Tanaka also used this to track him. It'd been two weeks of this. He was going to get to the bottom of things. One thing that surprised him is that he wanted to kill his partner. Usually Tanaka was a pacifist but this was fucking annoying. Finally on a hot afternoon he found his partner.
He had no idea why his partner left. Tanaka was kind, didn't argue, and was polite to him. This is why he also wanted to investigate. If your partner up and left you wouldn't think nothing of it. Tanaka didn't cause this so he wanted to see what was behind it.
Present:
"Hmmm..."
Tanaka was looking over the edge of one of the large statues where water flowed in between. He was watching two Ninja spar. His partner had left him without any word. That did piss him off, worse was that he had reckless qualities when he first met. To top it off he had heard of requests to change partners. That didn't usually happened. It only happened when one died. Tanaka sighed. He would grant his wishes of a transfer. He would get a transfer to hell.
Tanaka did some hand signs, and he disappeared mostly from thin air. From the distance of the fight it would make him seem invisible. Tanaka sat on the head of the statue and let his feet dangle from beneath him. He took out his violin and began playing. Soon he would make a move, but for now he would play paradise. He was within Earshot of the two men and he had made sure he arrived here undetected. Unless these ninja had chakra sensing capabilities(Must be in profile.) Then they would be completely unaware of his presence. Tanaka decided to them them waste chakra, until it was his time to strike.
He began playing, a soothing tropical sound began to flow out towards the two men sparring. It was peaceful and was not influenced by any of Tanaka's sound Genjutsu. This was just purely for fun. When he wanted to strike, he would. For now though he would sit back, enjoy the sun, relax, and go with the flow of the music he produced. "Gotta love it." He thought, thinking about how simple things were in life
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| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sat 10 Apr 2010, 9:43 am | |
| Jutsu Template:
Commonly Known Techniques:
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The 3 Basic Academy Jutsu
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Other commonly known Techniques
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Lightning Ninjutsu
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Name: Lightning Clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: The user can create a number of clones that are solid and resemble the user exactly. Once they are hit once or twice they disperse sending a static shock through the ground that will stun anyone in a 6 foot radius for 3 seconds. Any information the clone gets is sent back to the user. Barely any chakra are sent into the clones(Less division of chakra) therefore the cant perform any jutsu unless the user inputs more chakra(Higher Division of chakra).
Name: Lightning Palm Shields
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: After performing a row of hand-seals, the user emits an electrical lightning shield from both their palms. This lightning shield is used as a barrier to fend off incoming weapons or projectiles. After having done its defensive measure the shield bursts into a large electrical blast which is then directed towards the opponent at a incredible speed. The blast will most likely shock and blow the target away.
Name: Lightning Clone Explosion
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: This jutsu works in combination with the Lightning Clone Technique to create a Lightning clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill or severely injure an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.
Name: Lightning Barrier Armor
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: After performed 4 hand seals, a thin layer of Lightning Elemental chakra covers the surface of the targets body. When flesh comes in contact with this layer is is violently shocked. This technique can take the attack of jutsu depending on rank. (4 D, 3 C, 2 B, 1 A, 0 S)
Name: Raiton Ookami
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: This unnamed Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his hand, a ninja will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from a ninja's hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range to around 50ft. If it connects with her target it will electrocute them.
Name: Electric Potential
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: After performing 9 hand seals, the user's electricity technique's are increased in strength by 30%. This lasts 6 posts and can only be used once per topic.
Name: Hidden Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: The user performs 4 handseals and slams thier palm on the ground. A lightning bolt will come from thier palm, and travel at high speeds(70 MPH) through the ground. It will come up from beneath the opponent and hit them from below causing electric damage to the body. People around will see the ground crack and crumble as the bolt moves. This can extend to thirty feet before dissipating.
Name: Flash Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A-S
Element: Lightning
Description: After performing a single hand hand sign, the user will essentially body flicker, with double the speed. The body will take the form of a bright large lightning bolt. The downside is that the user can only move up to 20 feet away(A rank) or up to 40 feet away(S rank). If the user comes into contact with another human, it will send them flying back with a large force which will most like break bones on the other person. If the user comes into contact with a hard object, a rock wall for example, then it will most likely knock them unconscious and cause many injuries. This jutsu takes up a shunshin
Owner: Fox
Name: Lightning Release • Great Surge
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: This is a powerful technique whereby the user creates a surge of bioelectricity in their body. This it speeds up the synaptic connections in their brain, allowing the user to think and move in excess of ten times faster than usual. Additionally, any organic being that comes into contact with the user while he/she is in this form will receive a severe electric shock. The technique can be dangerous if used carelessly, because too much electricity will cause permanent damage to the connections. In this form, the user crackles with electricity and leaves a spark when they move at speed.
Earth Jutsu-Hages Permission Recieved
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Owner: Hage
Name: Earth Style, Ghost Walking Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: By using the subjects Earth elemental affinity the user is able to cover up any tracks or markings made in the earth by the user’s passing. Other elements, however, are unaffected such as smell. This jutsu does not function over water or over worked stone, only natural earthen materials.
Owner: Hage
Name: Earth Pillars Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: An earth chakra using ninja strikes the ground and causes three large pillars to rise in front of him, each three to four feet tall. Although this could stop an attacking opponent, this jutsu has another purpose.
Closer inspection reveals that the pillars are separated into twelve pieces each. The ninja who created the pillars then sweeps his hand around in a circular sweeping motion and strikes the top portion of each pillar, sending it flying off towards an opponent. This is repeated twelve times before the pillar is expended, not necessarily successively
Owner: Hage
Name: Earth Style, Imitation of Nature Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: Using earth chakra the user creates imitations of other objects, excluding cloning the user. This jutsu could be used to make a scale diagram of something a ninja has seen, for example. This jutsu can also imitate living creatures, but cannot move unless directly manipulated.
This jutsu is often used by recon ninja to accurately describe what was seen. This jutsu relies on subconscious memory, which means that even if it was seen for only an instant, it can be perfectly replicated as the subconscious remembers nearly everything.
Complex shapes, such as those will moving parts, cannot be made to function unless the user also saw the inside of it and how it functions (ex. This jutsu could not replicate a working puppet just by seeing it, the user would have to also see the exact mechanics and inner workings to make a working replica.
Owner: Hage
Name: Earth Style, Witch’s Cauldron Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: A ninja with chaotic chakra, or expert chakra control, can place their palms on the ground and cause the earth to stir and spin like a whirlpool of earth. The whirlpool spreads out at about 5 feet per post if the user is Chunin, 10 feet if Jounin, and 15 feet at any rank above. This includes the first post, meaning the initial use is that large.
Anything captured in this whirlpool is drug down into the center, which they are trapped in if they reach it. A ninja with enough psychical strength could swim against the current of earth, or attempt to jump out. If a ninja is caught in the center, jutsu and movement is impossible and only an immensely powerful ninja could break free by sheer force.
Name: [Name of jutsu]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: [E,D,C,B,A,S]
Element: Earth
Description: [A well detailed description of your jutsu. Remember to add in such fetures as it's range, chakra cost, drawbacks, etc to give an overall view of the technique.]
Owner: Hage
Name: Stone Shard Impact
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: By striking a large rock, boulder, or other stoney substance, a ninja is able to shatter it into shards which will embed themselves into a target, causing immense pain and adding nearly 5lb of weight to a ninja per use of this jutus due to weight of the stone shards stuck into an opponent. Multiple uses can leave a ninja’s body to heavy to move.
Owner: Hage
Name: Restoration of Nature Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: Due to the immense damage that some ninja deal to their surrounding environment during combat, it was inevitable that a jutsu to repair that damage by invented. First the user spends an hour meditating, gathering information as to how the earth was like before the damage was dealt. This may be skipped if the ninja viewed the damage being dealt.
After the meditation, the ninja is aware of the original structure of the earth and then by touching the earth, and relinquishing all but a few scraps of their chakra, they are able to reform the earth as it originally was.
Although invented to repair damage from Shinobi wars, this jutsu is just as easily used to cover up damage dealt by ninja who strive on not leaving a trace. This jutsu can repair damage within a 3m radius, but the damage must be less than a week old.
Name: Stone Wall
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: The user will place a palm on the ground, and a 40 foot tall wall will quickly surround them in a second. The Stone wall will create a circle with a diameter of 10 feet. This stone wall can block all attacks B rank or lower once. Water and wind attacks will do no real damage unless it has a strong enough force to knock down a stone wall. If the wall is pierced, it will crumble.
Name: Earthen Claws
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: Earth
Description: The ninja will do the necessary hand seal and place their hands on the ground, the earth then crawls up the hands and forms claws made of hardened earth around the entire hand and over the back of the wrist. The claws increase strength and can shred targets apart.
As the ninja increases in rank so can the cutting strength of claws. Skin and muscle at C, bones and soft metals at B, harder metals at A, and cut through metal and bodily limbs at S Rank.
Name: Earth Signals:
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu allows the person to hear steps that other's cant hear. The user must put their ear on the ground floor and they can hear footsteps from the earth. At C-Rank you can hear up to 1 mile, C-Rank is 2 miles, B-Rank is 3 miles, A-Rank is 4 miles and S-Rank Miles is 5 miles. Other things may come into your ear at C-Rank but when the jutsu become's higher the more you can focus on the signal you want.
Name: Underground Coffin Technique.
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: A coffin will come from the earth and open it's door. Once the user is inside the coffin is able to sink back into the ground and travel at the owners will.
Name: Earth Wall
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: After meditating for one post, the user is able to raise a 20 foot earthen wall. This wall can be wrapped around something. The wall can go up to 400 feet. This wall is weaker than a stone wall, and is weak to lightning, water(Mud). It is strong against fire and wind.
Name: Covering Lid
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Otoshi Buta is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. A large earthen pot will then fall from the sky to cover and contain the target summon. A powerful enough summon will be able to overturn the pot and escape.
Name: Stone Hardening
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: After performing the needed handseals, the User's skin will turn into stone. This is resistant to most technique's that pierce or drill through. This armor is very weak to Raiton Attacks. The user's skin takes on all properties of stone. This makes them slower, but highly resistant to many attacks. There are plates of stone that cover the user's bod. Piercing attacks can make it more easily though the cracks in between the stone plates
Fuuinjutsu
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Name: Chakra Sensory Seal
Type:Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C(Single Barrier,B(Two Barriers), A(Three Barriers)
Element: None
Description: This seal creates an Invisible Seal around the user which can sense any chakra within the said area. Several Barriers can be made though that costs for chakra. The range of a single barrier is 45 feet in diameter. A Maximum of three barriers can be made.
Name: Seal Location
Type:Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: The user is able to place a very small seal on an object or person, and will be aware of it's location until the seal is taken off. A good range for detection is 10 miles away, that, or anything beyond that is sketchy and the user will be off by a small amount. It's a different ballgame if the seal is located in a different country. If it gets to that point, the user will only be able to tell that it's in a country, since they tend to be vast. They will not have a clue as to where they are in the country though. The seal also feeds off of a minuscule amount of chakra. If the host dies, it can not feed, and thus stops working. If it stops working the person trying to locate the seal will fail.
Name: Reverse Summoning Seal
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Element: None
Description: This seal reverse summons anything that is summoned to the battlefield. The seal must be placed on the object or summon, and takes the rank of the thing that is being reversed summoned
Name: Mental Intertwine
Type: Fuunjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: If the user places this seal on the body of two individuals, then the two people will be able to share thoughts of one another. This can last up to two weeks, but has the range of 2 miles
Name: Chakra Donation
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: The user can place a seal on two individuals, and then they will be able to give chakra to one another. One can not take chakra from the individual however. They can only donate. Once the seal is undone, any remaining chakra another person will return. This can be used multiple times.
Name: Chakra Seal
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: This seal sucks the chakra from the carrier of the seal until the point where the carrier will have just 50% left. This seal will suck away 10% chakra of the host every post until they are at 50%.This is a continuous thing, so when chakra is produced, it will be placed in the seal if it goes over the 50% range.
Name: Fuuinjutsu; Seal of Transfer
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: None
Description: This seal is located on Sora's Left hand. In order to use this seal Sora must either be brought into close combat or draw her opponet into close combat. Once done so Sora will activate the seal and attempt to stamp her opponet open palmed. Minimal damage is done by the blow but enough to cause a bruise. The opponet will not be capable of seeing the seal on their clothing but only their skin. When ever the opponet attempts to use any sort of Elemental attack the seal will activate and prevent them from doing so. Instead the chakra used and jutsu will be transfered to the other seal on Sora's hand.
Name: Fuuinjutsu; Seal of Release
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: None
Description: This seal is located on Sora's Right hand. In order to use this seal Sora must either be brought into close combat or draw her opponet into close combat. Once done so Sora will activate the seal and attempt to stamp her opponet open palmed. Minimal damage is done by the blow but enough to cause a bruise. The opponet will not be capable of seeing the seal on their clothing but only their skin. When an opponet use's some sort of elemental attack the seal previously stamped upon them will activate and prevent it by transfering the jutsu and chakra used to the seal on Sora's right hand. 1 post later Sora will release the jutsu the opponet was preparing to use onto them. The opponet will more than likley be highly confused when the jutsu they attempted to use does not work and as result may get blind sided by the jutsu.
Name: Fire Sealing Technique
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: Fuuka Houin is a Fuuinjutsu technique that allows the ninja to seal away a nearby fire. After unrolling a scroll to hold the fire, the ninja writes the needed sealing incantation onto the scroll. Then by forming the needed handseals, a vapor will emanate from the scroll to encompass the fire and take it back to the scroll for sealing. This can not be used in combat
Name: Five Seal Barrier
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description: Gofuu Kekkai is a Fuuinjutsu technique. The five "kin" (prohibition) seals act together to form a barrier to an entrance. The entrance itself is marked with one tag, and four other tags are located within a few hundred meters of each other. To remove the barrier, all five tags must be removed at the same moment. This can be difficult because the tags can be hidden far distances from each other.
Name: Finger engraving seal
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description: By forming the needed sealing chakra on his finger, The user can engrave a message into an object.
Name: Element Containment
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: This seal is special because it can contain any elements that is put into the seal. This means large bodies of water, Strong gusts of wind, fire, or even lightning strikes can be contained in this seal. The element must directly hit the seal in order for it to be captured. No S rank attacks can be sealed
Name: Elemental Release
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: None
Description: If an element is captured, the user can release the seal on a scroll, and the elemental attack will come from the seal towards a desired destination. No S rank attacks can be released
Non Elemental
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Name: Invisible Cape
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: After performing a single hand seal, the user is able to cover themselves with their cape, and turn invisible. This allows minimal movement and does not cover smell or hearing. This lasts for 3 posts.
Name: Empty Shell Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description: Forming the needed handseals, the user will project his voice to different area to hide his location and the number of allies at his side.
Name: Art of the Silhouette
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description: The user uses an advanced form of henge and makes his body appear to be a silhouette or a shadow. This is extremely useful for sneaking up on opponents.
Name: 6 Hour Remembrance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: None
Description: After touching the target, the user is able to see the last six hours in the targets past. This costs 5% of the user's chakra.
Name: 24-48 Hour Remembrance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: After touching the desired target, the user is able to see the last 24-48 hours of the targets past. This cost 10% of the user's chakra.
Name: 48-92 Hour Remembrance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: After touching the desired target, the user is able to see the last 48-92 hours of the targets past. This cost's 15% of the user's chakra.
Summoning Contract
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Name: Ishi(Which means 'Stone' in Japanese) Rank: A Appearance: Ishi has most of the physical characteristics of an Eagle. Ishi has brown feathers on his body, and grayish feathers on the ends of his wings. Ishi also looks a bit more "Fluffy". He carries two layers of feathers for protection against fire. Ishi is 9 feet tall and weighs about a ton. Ishi's beak, eyes, and claws are coal black. The bird is about 14 feet long Contract Type: Blood Donation Species: Eagle Elemental Affinity: Earth Special Abilities/Characteristics:-Ishi is a very big bird, and it's beak snapping strength is similar to that of a large alligator. -Ishi has the ability to completely turn to stone, This is the birds natural abilities and costs no chakra. When turned to stone the speed is reduced by half. -Ishi can travel up to 80 miles per hour, and can travel to 100 miles per hour when diving. Background: Ishi is among the rare race of giant eagles in the mountains of Kumogakure, the race of eagles is named the Ishi. There are about 8 in all, and they are very unaware of humans. Ishi was tamed by Sora's father before she was born. Ishi became very attached to Sora's father. When he died, the Scroll was burned along with the rest of the house. Sora soon traveled to Kumogakure when she was a jounin to find Ishi, and reclaim him. It was a long journey which almost claimed Sora's life but when she reached the peak, the Ishi Eagles were waiting for her. The particular eagle that belonged to her father recognized Sora right off the bat. Sora explained her intentions, and Ishi refused. Sora prepared to get him by force, but Ishi declined her offer once more. Sora threatened to destroy their nesting ground, and still he refused. Finally Sora left. On her journey downward there was an avalanche. She was buried deep into the snow. The Ishi Eagles managed to dig her out after an hour of her being there. Ishi realized that if his master was alive, he would want him to look after the daughter. After that near death experience they became bonded, and she made the contract. Summons Jutsu: [What jutsu does your summon possess, if any?] [quote] Name: Birds Eye View Type: None -(Natural Ability)- Rank: - Element: None Description: Ishi has the natural ability of enhanced sight. He is able to see up to 300 feet down with clear vision. 350 feet is blurry, and at 400 feet Ishi can make general outlines of what is below Name: Message Inscribed Feather Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: None Description: Ishi has a few feathers that are able to be transported manually, from Ishi. These feathers glide high in the sky. The feather can be enlarged to that of a half-sheet of paper and reduced to a tiny speck. Ishi is also able to see what the feathers see. With Sora's Fuuinjutsu, she can inscribe a message on the feather. Name: Feather Hardening Armor Type: None -(Natural)- Rank: - Element: Earth Description: Ishi is able to turn every single feather, his claws, and his beak into stone. The only thing that can pierce this armor is a strong drilling attack(B+) or a strong lightning Attack(B+). This can only be used up to two times in battle. Name: Feather Hardening Armor Transfer Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: Earth Description: This is similar to the Feather Hardening Armor. Ishi is able to turn every single feather, his claws, and his beak into stone. This Armor however is very hard. Drilling attacks or Strong Lightning Piercing attacks(A+) can go through the armor. Because this armor is extra hard, the bird can not move. If anything is touching the bird, it also becomes stone, and will not be able to move again until the jutsu is ceased
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| | | | Stephanie
Posts : 87
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sun 11 Apr 2010, 3:12 am | |
| | Completion bump |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sun 11 Apr 2010, 6:10 am | |
| | An rp sample is needed. |
| | | | Stephanie
Posts : 87
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sun 11 Apr 2010, 11:36 am | |
| | Done. |
| | | | Adam
Age : 31
Posts : 8965
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sun 11 Apr 2010, 1:17 pm | |
| | I would like you to provide me an explanation why you have Lighting Citizen in your Village Affiliation section to appear that you have an affiliation with Kumogakure of course which you would possibly think grants you some kind of special situation of jumping villages, your affiliation is Konohagakure, nobody else. |
| | | | Stephanie
Posts : 87
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sun 11 Apr 2010, 10:42 pm | |
| | Yeah, I know. I changed my character's concept from a civilian to a fighta and I forgot to change it. |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Tue 13 Apr 2010, 3:00 am | |
| | A-aa-a-a-APPROVED |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 35
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Tue 13 Apr 2010, 4:23 am | |
| | Unapproved. The clan has not yet been approved. |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 35
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Tue 13 Apr 2010, 7:31 am | |
| Your normal RP sample is 80 words short for the Jounin minimum. That minimum is 350 words, you are barely making Chuunin in that.
Edit your clan section to what was just approved. |
| | | | Stephanie
Posts : 87
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Tue 13 Apr 2010, 8:34 am | |
| | Word count's are dumb, and is inaccurate to determine one's role playing ability. If you are responding to someone who posts a pitiful 100 words it'll be damn hard to actually make a quality post. Anyways, I took out the short one. I'll use the bigger one. I also edited the clan. |
| | | | Uchiha Osore
Posts : 1044
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Tue 13 Apr 2010, 1:50 pm | |
| | I'd like to point out that you have a few blank templates or blank spots on some jutsu on this application and that needs to be corrected. |
| | | | ₡amisado
Age : 30
Posts : 1256
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Tue 13 Apr 2010, 2:09 pm | |
| | I would like to point out as I did in Pat's app, that Thermal Vision would require Eijutsu. |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 35
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Tue 13 Apr 2010, 4:04 pm | |
| Word counts are there. If you cannot respond to said person appropriately, and considering noone on this site is ALLOWED to make a 100 word post (Genin are 150, Chuunin are 25, Jounin are 350), then you PM a staff member and have us correct them. Also, if you cannot average 350 words a post, which is an excessively small amount, then you shouldnt be applying for this rank.
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- Name: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: [E,D,C,B,A,S]
Element: Lightning
Description: [A well detailed description of your jutsu. Remember to add in such fetures as it's range, chakra cost, drawbacks, etc to give an overall view of the technique.]
- Quote :
- Name: [Name of jutsu]
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Genin – Chunin: C / Jounin: B / Jounin: A
Element: None
Description: This counterattack is used when the opponent is trying to stab the user with a sword. Since a sword is too big to use the counterattack number one, with this counter the user will avoid the danger of being stabbed with turning around for 360 degrees. While turning when in the half way till finishing the spin the user will grab the opponents arm only for a brief moment to push him forward and make him lose balance. After that the user will turn rapidly and hit the opponent with his elbow on the opponent’s neck. The opponent should get knocked on the floor but if the hit was made by a jounin the opponent will get knocked out. And if the jounin is a taijutsu expert the hit could possibly kill the opponent.
Those two need to be finished. or removed.
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- Name: Supa Strength!?
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: None
Description: This requires great chakra control. The user is able to concentrate and build chakra in different point in the body, then release it in an instant, causing massive force to back up their physical attacks.
This is part of Tsunade's Taijutsu. Remove. |
| | | | Stephanie
Posts : 87
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Wed 14 Apr 2010, 4:33 am | |
| Oh, I'll be able to do the required word count.
I took out Taijutsu, and replaced it with Fuuinjutsu. I also added a summon contract. I guess those need to be checked. |
| | | | Stephanie
Posts : 87
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Thu 15 Apr 2010, 7:39 am | |
| | Bump |
| | | | ₡amisado
Age : 30
Posts : 1256
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sat 17 Apr 2010, 1:47 am | |
| Battle Mask: Doesn't have a rank
Cape: Tone it down with the fire resistance, making it only able to be damaged by that high level of fire is OP to fire users. What do you mean by cloak?
Lightning Palm Shields: If the shield is hit/broken, it shouldn't retaliate at the attacker.
Electrical Potential: Once per topic*?
Hidden Lightning: Give it a range before it dissipates.
Flash Lightning: Will have to take up a shushin as well.
Stone Hardening: More detail
Reverse Summoning: If it isn't on the ban list I'm going to bring it up because I find it very OP.
Great Cascading Falls: Water isn't one of your elements, remove please.
Fire Sealing Technique: Put a limitation on it so it can't be used in battle and if it can, it needs a rank limitation on fire attacks it can seal.
Finger Engraving Seal: I wouldn't say this is a seal at all. You have a cannon reference in the jutsu.
Elemental Containment/Element Release: No sealing S-rank jutsu with this.
Invisible Cape: Duration |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 35
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Sora Tomoko-DONE- Sat 17 Apr 2010, 2:06 am | |
| - Quote :
- Name: Fuuinjutsu; Seal of Transfer
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: D
Element: None
Description: This seal is located on Sora's Left hand. In order to use this seal Sora must either be brought into close combat or draw her opponet into close combat. Once done so Sora will activate the seal and attempt to stamp her opponet open palmed. Minimal damage is done by the blow but enough to cause a bruise. The opponet will not be capable of seeing the seal on their clothing but only their skin. When ever the opponet attempts to use any sort of Elemental attack the seal will activate and prevent them from doing so. Instead the chakra used and jutsu will be transfered to the other seal on Sora's hand.
Any elemental attack, including up to S-Rank. able to transfer the entire jutsu, chakra and all to your hand, at D-Rank cost? Im sorry, no. Not happening. The magnitude you are talking about makes this just A-S Rank, atleast.
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- Name: Fuuinjutsu; Seal of Release
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: None
Description: This seal is located on Sora's Right hand. In order to use this seal Sora must either be brought into close combat or draw her opponet into close combat. Once done so Sora will activate the seal and attempt to stamp her opponet open palmed. Minimal damage is done by the blow but enough to cause a bruise. The opponet will not be capable of seeing the seal on their clothing but only their skin. When an opponet use's some sort of elemental attack the seal previously stamped upon them will activate and prevent it by transfering the jutsu and chakra used to the seal on Sora's right hand. Almost instantly Sora will release the jutsu the opponet was preparing to use onto them. The opponet will more than likley be highly confused when the jutsu they attempted to use does not work and as result may get blind sided by the jutsu.
if anything, you would get hurt by this. "Almost instantly" entails that there is maybe a 1 second delay between the transfer and the reusage. This means that if your hand was by your side, or closed, or in any postion NOT directly at the opponent, the jutsu would misfire.
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- Name: Great Cascading Falls
Type: FuuinJutsu
Rank: A-S
Element: None
Description: After opening a huge scroll, the user will activate it. A large column of water will shoot in the air for up to 15 minutes(1 post), or a half hour(Two posts). A minute later, the water will begin to fall as a heavy rain that can last up to 20 minutes(one post). This can be used as an attack also, as it can be aimed somewhere else and the coloumn of water will shoot at a target. The amount of water inside the scroll is compared to that of a very large lake. After being used, it will require that more water be sealed within which will take two posts.
Remove the minutes reference and just use posts. For your reference, 15 minutes actually is more like 3-5 posts, given the amount of thought in posts, maybe barely a minute will pass. Secondly, 2 posts to reseal that amount of water into the scroll, given the assumption that all the previous water ejected had been used, is too little a time. You would either need to find another lake, or completely drain a water user of chakra given that most dont know the Water Creation jutsu Kisame used. All in all, this is very poorly designed.
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- Name: Seal Location
Type:Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: The user is able to place a very small seal on an object or person, and will be aware of it's location until the seal is taken off.
I have a seal like this. Its C-Rank, and much better described. Put a range on it or more description. You will not be able to tell exactly where said seal is if its 10 miles away north east etc.
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- Name: Chakra Donation
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: The user can place a seal on two individuals, and then they will be able to give chakra to one another. One can not take chakra from the individual however. They can only donate. Once the seal is undone, any remaining chakra another person will return. This can be used multiple times.
Im not even allowing this unless there is a range, etc put on it. This allows for someone in the village, or two people, to transfer chakra to oneperson miles away who is in a battle. Not happening.
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- Name: Chakra Seal Jutsu
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Element: None
Description: This seal sucks the chakra from the carrier of the seal until the point where the carrier will have just enough chakra to function. This is a continuous thing, so when chakra is produced, it will be placed in the seal. The rank depends on the strength of the Ninja, and it goes by rank.
S-Rank. Draining chakra until the user has barely enough to live, no time limit, etc. So, as this is S-Rank, remove it from your application. there are no S-Rank Shinobi yet.
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[b]Name:[/b] [Name of your Summon? Provide an English name if you use a Japanese as well.]
[b]Rank:[/b] [What rank is your summon? E to S]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[table border="1"][tr][td]INSERT PICTURE HERE[/tr][/td][/table][What does your summon look like? Provide a detailed Description and a picture. Use the space provided for your picture.]
[b]Contract Type:[/b] [How is it summoned? Human sacrifice, blood donation? the most used will be blood, by far]
[b]Species:[/b] [What Species of Animal is your summon?]
[b]Elemental Affinity:[/b] [Does your contract have an element?]
[b]Special Abilities/Characteristics:[/b] [Does your summon have any unique abilities or characteristics?]
[b]Background:[/b] [How you met your Summon? Where did you make the contract? This should be very detailed, two paragraphs or more.]
[b]Summons Jutsu:[/b] [What jutsu does your summon possess, if any?]
[quote][b]Name:[/b] [Name of jutsu]
[b]Type:[/b] [Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Puppetry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu]
[b]Rank:[/b] [E,D,C,B,A,S]
[b]Element:[/b] [Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire]
[b]Description:[/b] [A well detailed description of your jutsu. Remember to add in such fetures as it's range, chakra cost, drawbacks, etc to give an overall view of the technique.]
[b]Link:[/b] [When making new jutsus you must train them. Read the Training Page in rules. post the link here for admins to check]
[b]Medical use/Bastardized use:[/b] [Only add this if the technique is a Medical jutsu. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.][/quote]
THAT Is the correct summons template. Edit accordingly, and ensure you have Kuchiyose no jutsu on your application. That can be found in the summons creation guide. |
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| | I apologize, many of these things had mistakes I had not noticed so that is why there was a lot you had to look over. I THINK I fixed everything from both of these posts. |
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