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| Subject: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Sun 30 Jun 2013, 4:22 am | |
| Kousen, NaomiTHE INFO. Name: Naomi Kousen Nickname: Gentle Lady or White Storm Age: 19 Gender: Female Appearance:
Stature: Naomi is your typical nineteen year old when it comes to her physical presence as she stands at a mere five feet two inches tall. It doesn’t help that she is very “fit” for her size and so her weight doesn’t extend past 110 lbs. This definitely makes her noticeably smaller than almost everyone her age and some others that are younger; but she handles herself well and walks with extreme confidence. Now, since it has been stated that Naomi has the body of a very fit girl; it is only right that a more in depth explanation be given. Her muscular definition is actually rather great as her abdominals shine through her literally white skin without a flex necessary. Her arms appear small but have little fat that hangs off and so they give that tight and slightly cut look; which is mostly from her intense training in swordsmanship. She needs the required endurance that it takes to constantly wield a weapon, and so this is what gives her arms that cut and tight look. Moving on to her legs; Naomi’s lower half is very proportionate and looks great with her upper body. Her legs aren’t worked out too much and therefore they don’t have that overly thick or super muscular look. They are tight from her gluts to her calves and while there is a slight curve with her hips, they aren’t that much wider; which is what truly gives Naomi her fit and proportionate look.
Face/Head: Naomi’s hair is rather long and extends down just above her waist line and is pure black in color; which definitely goes along with her eyes, which appear to have all black pupils with a little bit of shine to them. Usually a person with straight black eyes appears to have an “evil” look, or so most people interpret anyhow, but the look given by Naomi is gentle, kind, and heart-warming. Her jaw structure is all feminine and gives her an exquisite facial structure. Her lips are small and go really well with her face, which helps with her looking her age or even slightly older. Moving on to other technical facts about Naomi, like her eyebrows and her nose. Her eyebrows are rather curved look and appear rather thin and well kept up with, something that most females enjoy doing. The overall look of this gorgeous young lady’s face is exactly that, beautiful, gorgeous, exquisite, or anything else that you can think of to go along with those words. This feature of her can certainly attract any of the men in the village or out of it.
Body: This part of the appearance is really only here to describe the womanly features of Naomi, because of her beauty and the curiosity that is arisen when such a lady is found or seen. Her breasts are able to fill the top piece of her clothing very graciously and even give off a perky look about them. Of course this would mean that they stick out ever so slightly; so don’t think of Tsunade when you’re imagining the boobs of Naomi, they are definitely smaller. For you people who know about the size of such matters, I suppose they would be around a 32D?
Now, to give you a better explanation of the lower half of Naomi, she is most definitely not flat in the gluteus maximus area, though seeing as she is not a bigger girl even by a little bit and enjoys maintaining her small frame, she has a nice bubbly butt that doesn’t really show through her silky pants that much, simply because they give a loose fit, but if you are ever lucky enough to catch Naomi is tight clothes, the joy in just looking at her would almost be overwhelming.
Skin: Just giving a little more information about the silky white skin that envelops Miss Naomi Kousen. You could almost say that she is albino because her skin is Orochimaru White. No one was really sure how her skin even came about such a color, the doctors just thought that it may have been a mutation in a gene. Though it’s ironic how most of her features ended up being the complete opposite of her father who was a kumo shinobi with dark skin, white hair, and white eyes. Her skin, as described earlier has a rather silky feel to it and is soft; to help create the perfect combination that immediately entrances most men.
Clothing: The upper body layer of clothing that Naomi wears is what you would call a kosode, or more commonly known as a kimono. Though they are usually short sleeved, Naomi’s particular style of kosode is long sleeved and a little darker shade of white than her skin. The feel of this kosode is very silky and gives off a very elegant and sexy look as her breasts can almost protrude from this piece of clothing. It is tied together by some strings that exist on the inside of the kosode and a black silky sash that is decorated with what looks like flowers and just unique random designs to help with the beauty of her entire outfit. Now, with her stylish upper half, Naomi loves to add a bottom half that looks just as good but allows her some leg room so she can be comfortable and free and she has found that the perfect look and feel is a pair of pants that are just as white and just as silky as her kosode. They flow all the way down to her ankles and leave just enough room for others to see the entirety of her sandals, which by the way are black in color and match her sash, without the intricate designs of course.
Forehead Protector: Naomi wraps her forehead protector around her waist line and blends it in with the sash that helps keep her kosode tied tightly around her upper body.
Personality: Naomi is a kind and gentle soul; one who loves to interact with others (especially boys) and make new friends, and it never seems to be difficult either, with her good looks and all. Her personality has grown throughout the years as she has gotten older and matured more; being able to understand better, how the world works and all. When she was younger she would just always be nice to everybody and it was easy to take her for granted but now that she has grown up in this world that ninja live in and she doesn’t allow for people to take advantage of her in any type of way. She has learned that there are people in this world who just don’t give a rat’s ass about anyone but their self and they can’t be changed, but for the people who seek a better life and attempt to better their self, those are the people she cares about and would help no matter the cost.
Outgoing: Miss Naomi is a very bright spirit (even though she doesn’t dress in that way) and enjoys the company of almost any person, no matter their age, sex, race, or even their attitude. As long as they stand for something good and try to make this world a better place for every civilian, shinobi, or royal person in it, because those are the type of people who make this world and continue to help it shine in the light and allow for people to bring children in to the world and be happy about it. She expresses herself in the most basic way and that is with a bubbly attitude and a joking side.
Gentle & Kindness: This beautiful lady is as kind and gentle as they come and accepts anyone who does good for this complex world. The tone of her voice rarely ever changes from the soothing and silky sound that it has when Naomi is just speaking to people in her regular voice. You can almost hear the gentleness coming right out and pulling you towards her, which is kind of how she likes it, she enjoys gravitating people to her and gathering new friends. It really makes her feel like she is doing something important with her life, outside of being a ninja and protecting the village.
Loyal: The loyalty that Naomi possesses for not only her village but for the people that get close to her is unbelievable. There is a bond that forms and just feels right, like everyone is destined to be friends/family, or just whatever. This young lady will give up her life for her village and for anyone that she deems worthy enough to have her life given for them. Of course those are only in extreme cases (well maybe not about the village because at any moment in time anything could happen and her life could be in danger) but the gist of this is that she would do A LOT for her village and friends and helps out whenever necessary, even for the smallest of things.
Training/Missions/Fighting: All three of these things are taken very seriously by Naomi and is given her utmost attention, making sure that she reaches higher places in training, passes her missions, and wins every fight that she is involved in. Her attitude towards these sort of things is completely opposite from what she is normally like, well, except maybe on certain missions, where she doesn’t have to be so tense and can relax a little (which is different from letting her guard down). Naomi will train at all hours of the day to satisfy her hunger for becoming an excellent shinobi which in turn helps her complete missions and win fights. She also wants to constantly learn something and so gaining experience through battles and missions also gives her that satisfaction.
Clan: Kousen Clan
Nindō: Be kind and grateful but kill if necessary.
THE NINJA. Origin: Kaminiri no Kuni Affiliation: Kumogakure Rank: Chunin
Specialties: Ninjutsu Weaponry – Close/Long Elemental Affinities: Raiton Suiton Ranton
Combat Style: Even though Naomi has an increased chakra supply, that doesn’t mean that she can go around just spamming jutsu whenever she freaking feels like it. That is exactly how people exhaust themselves and run out of chakra super quick. So Naomi’s fighting tactic usually includes using her swordsmanship and fighting close up for a bit to gauge how her opponents going to react to her moves or attacks. So, one could say that she is very offensive in that way, but she likes to be careful about how she is offensive. Naomi rarely ever makes unnecessary moves and this also includes rushing in blind to just attack because she may have been provoked or whatever. Her head stays calm and collected at all times during battle, that way she can come up with a sure fire strategy to win the damn thing. Another thing to note is that with her slender and small body, Naomi is very quick, fast, and nimble, which means she is hard to hit directly and get an advantage in speed. Opponents who can’t keep up have a hard time dodging all of her attacks and can sometimes get overwhelmed.
Now, I know only her close range weaponry was described, however, Naomi is able to use ninjutsu and long ranged weaponry, such as bows or whatever else she has with her. This is where her expertise comes in handy, because she knows you have to be cautious using jutsu and so she will carefully use her ninjutsu once her opponent is either caught off guard or to maybe catch them off guard if they are at a stalemate otherwise. She thinks that this is the best strategy for her because she isn’t overly strong, so trying to overwhelm someone with monstrous amounts of attacks and speed, then using long range weaponry and ninjutsu, gives her a pretty good and rather simply battle tactic.
Special Characteristics:
- Chakra Based:
Name: Large Chakra Capacity Rank: B Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: Must have Increased Chakra Capacity Training Requirements: A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The ninja continues their mediation and physical training which further increases their chakra capacity. Ninja with large chakra capacities have an increased chakra of 35CP
Name: Raiton Prodigy Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: Must have Lightning Affinity Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A trait given to ninja who possesses a natural talent for lightning manipulation and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the lightning element becomes so talented that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy in the lightning element. Because of this, the user's lightning attacks are 20% more destructive with their increased voltage and size.
- Physical Based:
Name: [Tier II] Advanced Speed Rank: B Type: Physical Prerequisites: Character must have the “Enhanced Speed” Special Characteristic. Training: A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. Description: Further training in high speed movement has given the shinobi valiant speed that can perform olympic sprinters with no effort. By now, the ninja can run twice as fast as their untalented peers, and can usually run for miles on end without breaking a sweat.
Name: One-Handed Seals Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
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| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Sun 30 Jun 2013, 4:24 am | |
| THE BACKGROUND. History: - Birth Arc:
The birth of Naomi Kousen was an amazing site to see, especially when you consider the fact that she came out the complete opposite color of both her parents, who had dark skin and white hair. However, this was the only anomaly with her, as she was as healthy as she could possibly be. This beautiful young girl weighed 6 lbs 4 oz’s when she came out of her mother. The doctors had no real explanation as to why her skin had become overly white and why her hair was totally different than her father’s or her mother’s hair. It was something that wasn’t seen very often and so of course test were performed on Naomi to make sure that all of her vitals were actually normal (which they were). Her parents were told to take her home and if ANYTHING seemed abnormal then they were to immediately bring her in for a check-up. With the agreement of both parents, Naomi was able to go home and be able to sleep peacefully in her new crib after a week of those tests being performed. Luckily for not only her but her parents as well, she stayed healthy all throughout her first couple of years and had been taken off of a watch list that some doctors had. Meaning that it wasn’t an extreme emergency if she got sick randomly or something, they could treat it as any other illness. So the normalty of Naomi had been preserved, even if she had a different appearance than other people in their village, her parents didn’t care and would give her all the love that she deserved as their child.
- Pre-Academy Arc:
As the baby life had ended a couple of years ago for Naomi, her parents had decided that it was time for her to learn some stuff about what she would be doing in the future. So at the tender age of around 6, Naomi’s parents begin teaching her about ninja’s and what the world would be all about in her future. Seeing as she still had a couple of years before she started the academy, her mother and father figured that it would be nice if they went ahead and gave her a small head start on some of the other students. So Naomi’s life pretty much consisted of reading books and learning about what things were for the first year, which she actually enjoyed doing; she found that most everything she read was enlightening and very instrumental in her growth as not only a future shinobi but a person as well. Knowing the history of things that happened before your time and how everything has come about allows for greater knowledge and understanding of what one wants to do and is able to do with their life.
After the first year of studying about the way of the ninja and all of the types of techniques and basics, Naomi was finally going to learn some very basic ninja skills, such as shuriken and kunai, basic jutsu, and basic taijutsu as well. This got Naomi pumped as she was ready to get her feet wet in what she called hands on experience with this ninja stuff. It took a while for Naomi to get the hang of everything, especially the basic taijutsu because of the physical disadvantage that she had. She was rather tiny and wasn’t quite able yet to grasp the understand of how to user a person’s weight against them and so it took her a little more time to get that down pat. Right off the bat her parents could tell that her strength would be her speed and ability to accurately throw shuriken and kunai; though they would need to get her a little stronger, because the distance she could even toss the two weapons was not good at all. So, her dad came up with a simple workout routine for Naomi to do every morning. She was to run around the compound and then do push-ups, sit-ups, and then run around once more. Doing this every day increased her strength and stamina greatly and before long she was able to lauch kunai and shuriken three times as far as she could before. Naomi was so happy that she had improved so much over the past year with the help of her mother and father that the night before she was going to enter the academy, she had made a promise to them both that she would do the best she could and be the best kunoichi that the land of lightening had ever seen. It made them so proud to be her parents and as they laughed and smiled at her, they both thought they didn’t care, she was already the best in their eyes and they couldn’t ask for more.
- Academy Arc:
Naomi entered the academy at the age of 8, with high hopes of becoming a fabulous kunoichi. Though, her first day didn’t really go as planned for Naomi and she went home with tears in her eyes and a heart that had seemed to break right in half. She had been picked on by the other kids in her class because of the color of her skin, which was different from all of theirs. They all had dark skin or at least a normal color of what most defined as “white.” Naomi’s skin was truly white however, and the other students didn’t know how to react, so they are picked on the poor girl and bullied her to no end. Her parents of course, understood that kids were kids and didn’t really know better at this age, so they just gave Naomi a little life lesson about bullies, no matter the age. If you take everything in stride and don’t let them know that it bothers you and truly accept what they say, then all of it will calm down. The one thing not to do is retaliate because someone has gotten to you emotionally because then you may do something that you regret and it could seriously hurt you in more than one way.
After that day and that very talk, Naomi took every bit of bullying that the kids had given her the next day and just accepted what they said and she even embraced her abnormally white skin even more. It was a part of her and she shouldn’t allow what people say about any part of her hurt her feelings in any way. She had understood what her parents said and they were definitely right, little did she know that it would prove to be a far greater lesson than what she had originally thought. For now though, Naomi just worried about getting through her first year at the academy without a huge hiccup and she ended up doing a damn good job. She finished the school year with some of the best grades in her class and to top it all off, she had managed to get every single classmate to enjoy her presence. That’s right, Naomi had befriended every member in her class and had become by far the most popular student among anyone in the academy.
During the second year of the academy, Naomi had grown so fond of doing school work and everyone that was in her class, she started helping other students who couldn’t quite grasp some of the work. Think of her as a young little tutor that just wanted all of her friends to pass and become a ninja like she would one day. So since she had offered herself up as a tutor (for free), it must be no surprise that her grades far surpassed that of any other student and it continued down this same path for the next two years as well. Naomi had ultimately finished the academy with a perfect attendance record and two awards, one for graduating as number 1 in her class and the second award was for excellent leadership, in the way that she took charge and helped other friends who wouldn’t have passed if Naomi didn’t help them through. Her parents were so proud of her as she was about to begin her ninja career and become a fully-fledged cloud genin. She would begin missions and be assigned a team to help her along and further her career into becoming a better person, ninja, and village protector.
- Genin Arc:
Naomi had reached the rank of genin at the age of 12 and while she had her bubbly personality, she was still a little nervous about becoming a true shinobi. She had realized that she could possibly face true danger, now that she was a ninja and would be going on missions and such. Luckily, she had an AMAZING Jonin sensei that gave her great advice and even helped her train with her weapons, though mainly her swordsmanship, when her parents couldn’t because that was a specialty of his. With every completed mission and every successful training session, the confidence of Naomi grew and grew and she ultimately became a very frightful genin to face off against. It took her 4 years to get the rank of Chunin and she did it threw 15 D rank missions and 6 C rank missions. Each one of those missions was given a passing grade with the highest marks on them. They hadn’t shown one bit that there was a lack of confidence in any of the team members. During the Chunin exams, she was relied heavily on by her teammates for strategy and it ultimately got them all through and allowed them all the chance to truly become chunin. Sadly enough though, Naomi was the only one to advance to Chunin on her team, because of her skill with her abilities but also because of how she thinks. She wants to save as many lives as possible and still get the mission completed. She isn’t a mastermind in strategy by any means, but she does consider herself to be fairly smart and competent. So as the Chunin exams had ended, the Raikage had called her to his office and awarded her the rank of Chunin and asked if she would teach in the academy, which she graciously accepted his offer and began her journey as a Chunin.
- Chunin Arc:
Naomi spent the first several years of her Chunin life as an academy teacher, however, she felt as though her skills were far greater than that of an academy teacher and so she went to the Raikage and told him of her resigning as an Academy teacher. She explained that she wanted to help the village in different ways and that she was truly ready to do that and so, since her departure from the academy, she has been training her ass off to hone her skills and become the village protector that she had dreamed of being from day 1. Her number would start being called soon enough to go out on missions again and when it happened, she would be ready and willing.
Roleplay Sample: - Spoiler:
Christos was definitely hoping to get to know this boy as he seemed to be fond of him; it was nice to meet someone and just talk for a while. Recently he had been all about sparring and fighting people, something that wasn’t completely out of the ordinary for him but it certainly wasn’t his whole personality. There was more to him and he wanted to show that side; a sensitive side that cared about people and wanted to get to know them on a personal level. Thus, he had asked the question to Rin, the question that would allow him the ability to get to know him. The only problem with this was, would the boy answer Christos’ question with absolute truth or would he answer at all? He may have possibly been the type to just talk with people, not really indulge in the opportunity to understand someone. The silver haired genin would have his answer soon enough though; and it would be to his liking.
”So, will you tell me a little bit about yourself Rin?”
”Stop me if I go on for too long, as I do tend to ramble” This was the reply that the boy, Rin, had given; it seemed to be a forewarning to Christos, making sure that he would not let the boy ramble on too much. It wouldn’t matter to Christos if the boy had wandered off with his words, he was there to just talk and take in the moment. He would honestly prefer if the kid had babbled on and on as it would take up some of the day and allow Christos an excuse to put off some training.
“Well what is there to say about myself. Well my name is Tsukiyomi, Rin, I am sixteen years of age, and I am from Konoha, born and raised. I live with no one but my cat named Kuro. I love music, fishing, eating, and training. I use weapons and jutsu based attacks, I am in Konoha squad bravo, and I have a total body count of two, he said. I know that last bit was completely unnecessary and I have no idea why I added it.”
The young shinobi had begun to listen as words trickled out of the mouth of Rin. The boy had given his full name, he gave his age, and also had told Christos that he had been born and raised in the beloved Konohagakure no sato. All off this information was basic enough and could have been guessed by just about anyone that dared to do so. While he did enjoy such basic knowledge from the boy, he wanted to know more, he wanted to be enlightened on the good stuff. Such things would include, jutsu, chakra type, his squad (if he had one), and how he likes to fight people. Soon it was clear that Christos’ thoughts had ran wild through his head a little too soon; because Rin was giving him more information and it was the good stuff.
He talked about his cat Kuro, that is apparently who he lived with, no one else was Christos’ assumption. Rin also enjoyed music, fishing, eating, and training. Once more he was naming rather basic information, though he started to say something about training, so it could be a lead in to the more juicy material. His mouth kept moving, it was like he didn’t run out of things to say and finally he had gotten to what Christos wanted to hear. He uses weapons and jutsu based attacked; Christos only guessed that the boy meant ninjutsu, as pretty much all attacks were some form of “jutsu.” The boys’ team was squad Bravo, though that helped Christos very little, seeing as he knew no one on the team, he gave zero specifics. This last bit of information that was given, it had come as quite a shock to Christos, he simply didn’t really believe in his heart of hearts that this boy had done such a thing. Rin had just confessed that he had killed two people, well not in such words; he stated that he had a “body count of two.” Was this even plausible? How could he remain in the village if he had killed two people?
The young genin was certainly speechless for a few moments, his mouth slightly agape with his eyes enlarged in disbelief. He wasn’t sure what to say, even though he truly wanted to say something to the boy. Maybe it was that he just wasn’t able to say something; not that he didn’t exactly know what to say. After all, how often did a twelve year old hear the words “I have a body count of two” come out of a GENINS mouth, or anyone’s mouth for that matter!? He could hardly contemplate anything at this moment in time and because of this, the boy’s next words seemed only like a kid muttering something.
The only bit that Christos could actually hear and comprehend was something about he needed to eat and that Christos was welcome to go along with him. What would he say? Would he agree to go along with the boy and risk being attacked? No, of course not! Such a thing would not be allowed by Christos and it was for that reason that he would deny the boy’s offer.
”N..no.”
He quickly exited the Hokage monument with a pretty much ruined perspective of it now and most likely would not return, at least for some time. Thanks to this kid, his bright and shiny day had just turned in to what seemed like a rainy and dreary night. It was something horrific and he just wanted to go home and get away from this weird boy. So he would exit just as he entered, since he was in hurry. Chakra had been charged to his feet and allowed him the ability to run down the cliff, leaving the boy behind to go eat by himself.
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| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Sun 30 Jun 2013, 4:26 am | |
| THE ARSENAL. Jutsu
- Academy Jutsu:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easily be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Suiton Jutsu:
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a solid bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby. Chakra Cost: 9 (2 per post)
Name: Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. The user will form the needed hand seals and then place his/her hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his/her fingers to attack his/her opponent who is in the water below. Chakra Cost: 15
Name: Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack. Chakra Cost: 12 (4 per post)
Name: Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications. Chakra Cost: 13
Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel water from his/her gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. User is left vulnerable when using this technique, and it requires an entire post to create a pool of water. 3 posts can mimic a lake. Chakra Cost: 14 (3 per post)
Name: Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target. Chakra Cost: 12 (3 per post)
Name: Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target. Chakra Cost: 12 (3 per post)
- Raiton Jutsu:
Name: Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: The user will first create a protective wall of water (must be done with a water technique, it is not included with just this technique). They will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through. The electricity only affects the water for the post it is used, and the stunning effect only lasts as long as the user is making contact with the water. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Name: Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: After coming into physical contact with the opponent, the user raises their arm into the air, generating a powerful bolt of electricity which will travel through their body into the body of the opponent. Chakra Cost: 10
Name: Hikari no sokudo (Speed of Light) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique does not require any hand seals, as it just needs the concentration of chakra into one’s own two feet. This does not provide any defensive qualities and is used purely as a speed booster. The amount of speed that it does provide isn’t really as much as the name of the technique hints at and only provides a 20% boost to speed. Plus, this is a hassle to keep up with it costing 4 extra chakra every post that it is used. Chakra Cost: 10 (4 per post)
- Kumogakure Techniques:
Name: Raitoningu no Kenshutsu - Lightning Detection Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m) Element: Raiton Description: Raitoningu no Kenshutsu is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the lightning element. After performing the required handseals the Hidden Cloud member will be able to send out a pulse of lightning, covering a radius of five metres with the user being at the centre. The dome - like lightning will allow the user to detect any chakra - enhanced traps, people, animals or weapons coming at them from blind spots. This can only be used once per post and anyone who is caught in the pulse will feel a tingling sensation covering their entire body. It's use is to ensure that safety is always maintained for the Kumogakure shinobi. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Kumogakure no Jutsu - Hidden Cloud Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: - Description: Kumogakure no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique utilizing no element. A technique that imitates that of the Kirigakure no Jutsu, once the user has performed the required handseals they will be able to call upon a thick and heavy cloud that will appear almost out of nowhere. The cloud will be able to cover a ten metre radius around the user and only the user is able to sense where others lurk within the cloud. Those with doujutsu or chakra sensing techniques are also able to see through this thick cloud but without any aid, then you'll be blind within the cloud. If a C - Rank or above fuuton technique is activated, then the cloud will be blown away. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Raitoningu no Kengen - Lightning Manifestation Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m), Far (10m+) Element: Raiton Description: Raitoningu no Kengen is a weaponry technique utilizing the lightning element. Using their lightning affinity, the Kumogakure shinobi is able to enhance any weapon they possess and coat it with lightning chakra to give it a more powerful hit. The lightning will be able to numb the area where the weapon strikes and also cause minor burns. Any weapon can be enhanced by this attack, Kunai, Shuriken, Blades or even Arrows. The technique can only be used on weapons though, once the weapon has struck something the lightning will fade away. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Kaminari no Ishi - Will of Lightning Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: - Description: Kaminari no Ishi is a ninjutsu technique utilizing no elemental affinity. By gathering chakra to their dominant fist, the user will be able to create a larger version of an eagles head that is covering their hand and is completely made up of chakra. This bald eagle - head can be launched outwards at an opponent where it will be able to cause great cuts against the target or they could use this in a combination with taijutsu attacks, to give a more powerful hit. If someone was so unlucky to be hit by this eagle head, they would find themselves with deep cuts made by the sharp chakra - shaped beak. The head can only reach ten metres before it begins to fade away and can only be used thrice during a topic. Chakra Cost: 12
- Ranton Jutsu:
Name: Reizaa Akuto - Laser Act Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close, Mid (0m-7m) Element: Ranton Description: After making two hand signs the user channels ranton chakra into on of their limbs and releases a single beam of energy that can have its trajectory changed freely. It has an impact force equivalent to two explosive tags. The user must remain still in order to control this technique and it is released in a "stream" so if it hits something or that stream is interrupted the jutsu will end. Chakra Cost: 5 + 2 per post up to 3 posts.
Name: Ikazuchi Kumo Naitekishuuha - Thunder Cloud Inner Wave Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close, Mid, Long (0-20m+) Element: Ranton [Storm Release] Description: The shinobi uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him in the shape of a toroidal or a "doughnut" around them that extends a single meter from their body. The diameter of the cloud is proportional to the width of the users body. This creates an offensive and defensive ward. The user can then uses these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing their enemies from getting close. It will also repel enemy kunai and metal based weapons due to electromagnetism as well as accelerate those of the user. This jutsu will last for up to 3 turns or until the user expends 9 lightning bolts, cancels the jutsu, or is killed/knocked unconscious. Chakra Cost: 10 + 4 per post.
Name: Sutōmubou - Storm Bow Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Ranton Description: After gathering chakra and performing the necessary hand seals, the user will stretch out his left arm, releasing Ranton Energy from the hand in the vertical directions. This energy forms a bow-like shape, that is almost perfectly straight with the exception of the curves at each end. Using this shape as a means of choosing direction and aiming, the user then releases Ranton Chakra along his arm, with his right hand manipulating the energy to create another straight shape - a smaller, sharper creation that looks like an arrow. With a small chakra burst, this arrow is then fired off at high speed. The arrow is capable of penetrating the skin lightly and it causes first degree burns as well as numbing where it lands. Two arrows can be created per turn, although arrows can be created indefinitely as long as the user has the necerssary chakra. Chakra Cost: 8 Chakra + 2 Chakra per Arrow
- Non-Elemental Jutsu:
Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent. Chakra Cost: Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4) Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9) Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15) Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)
- Weaponry Jutsu:
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The properties of the wire also allows the user to guide fire down it with any number of Katon Jutsu. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Sōdosutoraiku - Sword Strike Rank: B Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: The user will first gather Raiton chakra in their weapon of choice (preferably a sword), before resuming normal attacks. Although the weapon is charged with lightning, only a keen eye could spot the sparks and tendrils of electricity on the weapon's surface. At any point, the user can release this energy at the opponent in the form of a crescent wave of lightning, which can travel five metres away from the weapon before it disperses. Should this wave make contact, the opponent will suffer from first degree burns and will experience an electric shock as well as feel numb and slightly slower. An alternative way of using this energy, is by releasing it from the tip of the sword, when using it in a stabbing motion. Although the wave released is much more concentrated and hence, it's easier to miss, second degree burns, longer lasting numbness as well as a stronger electric shock will be felt by the opponent. Chakra Cost: 11
- Chunin Kit:
Name: Chuunin Kit Rank: B Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai [10], 16 Shuriken [8], 12 Senbon [4], 15 Makibishi [3], 6 Exploding Notes [6], 6 Exploding Pouches [2], 6 Smoke Pellets [2], 18m String [6], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
- C Rank Weapons:
Name: Katana Rank: C Type: Close Range - Long Blade Quantity: 1 Description: Commonly referred to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
Name: Senbon Launcher Rank: C Type: Long Range - Launcher Quantity: 10 (50) Description: Usually hidden on either of the user's forearm under loose cloth, this launcher can be used to send needles at their opponents at higher speeds with better accuracy. Up to five needles can be launched at once, resulting in deadly surprise.
Name: Katana Rank: C Type: Close Range - Long Blade Quantity: 1 Description: Commonly referred to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
- Small scroll:
Name: Small Scroll Rank: D Type: Supplementary Quantity: - Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimetres. Contents: Katana
Name: Small Scroll Rank: D Type: Supplementary Quantity: - Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimetres. Contents: Katana
- B Rank Weapons:
Name: Erementaru (Elemental) Rank: B Type: Close Appearance: - Spoiler:
The katana appears all black in color; this includes the blade, the hilt, and the sheath. Now this type of black is a shiny metallic color and that goes for the entire sword. The hilt is ten inches in length, which is long enough to use both hands to swing the sword comfortably. The blade of Erementaru is exactly twenty-six inches; making the total length of Erementaru three feet. Now there is a little design that shows its self on the sheath and on the hilt, and it is flowers. Just like the flowers that cover the black sash across the mid-section of Naomi. Quantity: 1 Storage: Sheathed on the back of Naomi Special Abilities: The sword gets its name because of the abilitiy that is possesses - it is a chakra conductive weapon. This allows the user to perform ninjutsu, and especially, elemental ninjutsu with the sword acting as a medium. Name: Utsukushī (Beautiful) Rank: B Type: Long Appearance: - Spoiler:
In this picture, the bow is mostly white, which is not true; as it appears mostly black and carries the same design that Erementaru does; the flowers that are placed along the wooden part of the bow. In fact, the entire bow is made from wood; however it is hickory, which is known to be very strong and sturdy. Now, this bow is between sizes as it is larger than a short bow and smaller than a long bow. The exact length of Utsukushi is right at about five and a half feet. The black is a matte black that gives off a dull look which makes the white flower designs pop out a little more. Quantity: 1 Storage: Medium Scroll Special Abilities: The special ability of this bow is that it is chakra conductive and as a result, is able to fire off arrows that are purely made of chakra, as well as, the normal physical arrows.
- Medium Scroll:
Name: Medium Scroll Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: - Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a medium scroll will measure up to thirty centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching one metre. Contents: Utsukushi (Naomi’s Bow)
*Note - There are I think 3 custom techniques in this. One is a lightning jutsu that allows for more speed. It doesn't coat my whole body so I felt that it was different enough from the Lightning armor that it would be allowable, if this is not the case then that is fine and I can just come up with a different jutsu. Just letting you guys know.
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| | | Chris
Age : 29 Posts : 3145
| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Mon 01 Jul 2013, 12:21 am | |
| We talked about most things over Skype. The application is very solid and very well written. I have no gripes about anything, and the only thing that needs moderating are the Customs.
I'm fine with [Hikari no Sokudo (Speed of Light)].
And I've also gone over the custom B Rank weapons.
I want to propose some changes for Sutōmubou and Sōdosutoraiku, but unfortunately it's late and I need to wake up early tomorrow, so I'm going to do so when I get back from school.
However other mods should feel free to comment on other aspects of the application until then. |
| | | Chris
Age : 29 Posts : 3145
| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Wed 03 Jul 2013, 7:55 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Name: Sutōmubou - Storm Bow
Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Ranton Description: After gathering chakra and performing the necessary hand seals, the user will stretch out his left arm, releasing Ranton Energy from the hand in the vertical directions. This energy forms a bow-like shape, that is almost perfectly straight with the exception of the curves at each end. Using this shape as a means of choosing direction and aiming, the user then releases Ranton Chakra along his arm, with his right hand manipulating the energy to create another straight shape - a smaller, sharper creation that looks like an arrow. With a small chakra burst, this arrow is then fired off at high speed. The arrow is capable of penetrating the skin lightly and it causes first degree burns as well as numbing where it lands. Two arrows can be created per turn, although arrows can be created indefinitely as long as the user has the necerssary chakra. Chakra Cost: 8 Chakra + 2 Chakra per Arrow - Quote :
- Name: Sōdosutoraiku - Sword Strike
Rank: B Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: The user will first gather Raiton chakra in their weapon of choice (preferably a sword), before resuming normal attacks. Although the weapon is charged with lightning, only a keen eye could spot the sparks and tendrils of electricity on the weapon's surface. At any point, the user can release this energy at the opponent in the form of a crescent wave of lightning, which can travel five metres away from the weapon before it disperses. Should this wave make contact, the opponent will suffer from first degree burns and will experience an electric shock as well as feel numb and slightly slower. An alternative way of using this energy, is by releasing it from the tip of the sword, when using it in a stabbing motion. Although the wave released is much more concentrated and hence, it's easier to miss, second degree burns, longer lasting numbness as well as a stronger electric shock will be felt by the opponent. Chakra Cost: 11 How do you feel about these versions? |
| | | Sörä♀
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| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Wed 03 Jul 2013, 9:29 pm | |
| I like these versions better. Thanks Chris. I went ahead and added them, since I got off work earlier than I was expecting.
I believe this means that I have Chris' 1/2 on this, though I'm not exactly positive. He said in Skype I have his 1/2 with this done. I'll contact him shortly. |
| | | Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Thu 04 Jul 2013, 1:17 pm | |
| Yeah you do :3
Approved 1/2 |
| | | Aaron
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| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Tue 09 Jul 2013, 6:54 pm | |
| Wonderful application, an absolute joy to read! Sorry about the wait.
Approved 2.2
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| Subject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Sat 04 Jan 2014, 10:55 pm | |
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