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Kousen, Naomi

THE INFO.

Name: Naomi Kousen
Nickname: Gentle Lady or White Storm
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Appearance:

Stature: Naomi is your typical nineteen year old when it comes to her physical presence as she stands at a mere five feet two inches tall. It doesn’t help that she is very “fit” for her size and so her weight doesn’t extend past 110 lbs. This definitely makes her noticeably smaller than almost everyone her age and some others that are younger; but she handles herself well and walks with extreme confidence. Now, since it has been stated that Naomi has the body of a very fit girl; it is only right that a more in depth explanation be given.  Her muscular definition is actually rather great as her abdominals shine through her literally white skin without a flex necessary. Her arms appear small but have little fat that hangs off and so they give that tight and slightly cut look; which is mostly from her intense training in swordsmanship. She needs the required endurance that it takes to constantly wield a weapon, and so this is what gives her arms that cut and tight look. Moving on to her legs; Naomi’s lower half is very proportionate and looks great with her upper body. Her legs aren’t worked out too much and therefore they don’t have that overly thick or super muscular look. They are tight from her gluts to her calves and while there is a slight curve with her hips, they aren’t that much wider; which is what truly gives Naomi her fit and proportionate look.

Face/Head:  Naomi’s hair is rather long and extends down just above her waist line and is pure black in color; which definitely goes along with her eyes, which appear to have all black pupils with a little bit of shine to them. Usually a person with straight black eyes appears to have an “evil” look, or so most people interpret anyhow, but the look given by Naomi is gentle, kind, and heart-warming. Her jaw structure is all feminine and gives her an exquisite facial structure. Her lips are small and go really well with her face, which helps with her looking her age or even slightly older. Moving on to other technical facts about Naomi, like her eyebrows and her nose. Her eyebrows are rather curved look and appear rather thin and well kept up with, something that most females enjoy doing. The overall look of this gorgeous young lady’s face is exactly that, beautiful, gorgeous, exquisite, or anything else that you can think of to go along with those words. This feature of her can certainly attract any of the men in the village or out of it.

Body: This part of the appearance is really only here to describe the womanly features of Naomi, because of her beauty and the curiosity that is arisen when such a lady is found or seen. Her breasts are able to fill the top piece of her clothing very graciously and even give off a perky look about them. Of course this would mean that they stick out ever so slightly; so don’t think of Tsunade when you’re imagining the boobs of Naomi, they are definitely smaller. For you people who know about the size of such matters, I suppose they would be around a 32D?  

Now, to give you a better explanation of the lower half of Naomi, she is most definitely not flat in the gluteus maximus area, though seeing as she is not a bigger girl even by a little bit and enjoys maintaining her small frame, she has a nice bubbly butt that doesn’t really show through her silky pants that much, simply because they give a loose fit, but if you are ever lucky enough to catch Naomi is tight clothes, the joy in just looking at her would almost be overwhelming.

Skin: Just giving a little more information about the silky white skin that envelops Miss Naomi Kousen. You could almost say that she is albino because her skin is Orochimaru White. No one was really sure how her skin even came about such a color, the doctors just thought that it may have been a mutation in a gene. Though it’s ironic how most of her features ended up being the complete opposite of her father who was a kumo shinobi with dark skin, white hair, and white eyes. Her skin, as described earlier has a rather silky feel to it and is soft; to help create the perfect combination that immediately entrances most men.

Clothing: The upper body layer of clothing that Naomi wears is what you would call a kosode, or more commonly known as a kimono. Though they are usually short sleeved, Naomi’s particular style of kosode is long sleeved and a little darker shade of white than her skin. The feel of this kosode is very silky and gives off a very elegant and sexy look as her breasts can almost protrude from this piece of clothing. It is tied together by some strings that exist on the inside of the kosode and a black silky sash that is decorated with what looks like flowers and just unique random designs to help with the beauty of her entire outfit. Now, with her stylish upper half, Naomi loves to add a bottom half that looks just as good but allows her some leg room so she can be comfortable and free and she has found that the perfect look and feel is a pair of pants that are just as white and just as silky as her kosode. They flow all the way down to her ankles and leave just enough room for others to see the entirety of her sandals, which by the way are black in color and match her sash, without the intricate designs of course.

Forehead Protector: Naomi wraps her forehead protector around her waist line and blends it in with the sash that helps keep her kosode tied tightly around her upper body.

Personality: Naomi is a kind and gentle soul; one who loves to interact with others (especially boys) and make new friends, and it never seems to be difficult either, with her good looks and all. Her personality has grown throughout the years as she has gotten older and matured more; being able to understand better, how the world works and all. When she was younger she would just always be nice to everybody and it was easy to take her for granted but now that she has grown up in this world that ninja live in and she doesn’t allow for people to take advantage of her in any type of way. She has learned that there are people in this world who just don’t give a rat’s ass about anyone but their self and they can’t be changed, but for the people who seek a better life and attempt to better their self, those are the people she cares about and would help no matter the cost.

Outgoing: Miss Naomi is a very bright spirit (even though she doesn’t dress in that way) and enjoys the company of almost any person, no matter their age, sex, race, or even their attitude. As long as they stand for something good and try to make this world a better place for every civilian, shinobi, or royal person in it, because those are the type of people who make this world and continue to help it shine in the light and allow for people to bring children in to the world and be happy about it. She expresses herself in the most basic way and that is with a bubbly attitude and a joking side.

Gentle & Kindness: This beautiful lady is as kind and gentle as they come and accepts anyone who does good for this complex world. The tone of her voice rarely ever changes from the soothing and silky sound that it has when Naomi is just speaking to people in her regular voice. You can almost hear the gentleness coming right out and pulling you towards her, which is kind of how she likes it, she enjoys gravitating people to her and gathering new friends. It really makes her feel like she is doing something important with her life, outside of being a ninja and protecting the village.

Loyal: The loyalty that Naomi possesses for not only her village but for the people that get close to her is unbelievable. There is a bond that forms and just feels right, like everyone is destined to be friends/family, or just whatever. This young lady will give up her life for her village and for anyone that she deems worthy enough to have her life given for them. Of course those are only in extreme cases (well maybe not about the village because at any moment in time anything could happen and her life could be in danger) but the gist of this is that she would do A LOT for her village and friends and helps out whenever necessary, even for the smallest of things.

Training/Missions/Fighting: All three of these things are taken very seriously by Naomi and is given her utmost attention, making sure that she reaches higher places in training, passes her missions, and wins every fight that she is involved in. Her attitude towards these sort of things is completely opposite from what she is normally like, well, except maybe on certain missions, where she doesn’t have to be so tense and can relax a little (which is different from letting her guard down). Naomi will train at all hours of the day to satisfy her hunger for becoming an excellent shinobi which in turn helps her complete missions and win fights. She also wants to constantly learn something and so gaining experience through battles and missions also gives her that satisfaction.

Clan: Kousen Clan

Nindō: Be kind and grateful but kill if necessary.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Kaminiri no Kuni
Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Chunin

Specialties:
Ninjutsu
Weaponry – Close/Long
Elemental Affinities:
Raiton
Suiton
Ranton

Combat Style: Even though Naomi has an increased chakra supply, that doesn’t mean that she can go around just spamming jutsu whenever she freaking feels like it. That is exactly how people exhaust themselves and run out of chakra super quick. So Naomi’s fighting tactic usually includes using her swordsmanship and fighting close up for a bit to gauge how her opponents going to react to her moves or attacks. So, one could say that she is very offensive in that way, but she likes to be careful about how she is offensive. Naomi rarely ever makes unnecessary moves and this also includes rushing in blind to just attack because she may have been provoked or whatever. Her head stays calm and collected at all times during battle, that way she can come up with a sure fire strategy to win the damn thing. Another thing to note is that with her slender and small body, Naomi is very quick, fast, and nimble, which means she is hard to hit directly and get an advantage in speed. Opponents who can’t keep up have a hard time dodging all of her attacks and can sometimes get overwhelmed.

Now, I know only her close range weaponry was described, however, Naomi is able to use ninjutsu and long ranged weaponry, such as bows or whatever else she has with her. This is where her expertise comes in handy, because she knows you have to be cautious using jutsu and so she will carefully use her ninjutsu once her opponent is either caught off guard or to maybe catch them off guard if they are at a stalemate otherwise. She thinks that this is the best strategy for her because she isn’t overly strong, so trying to overwhelm someone with monstrous amounts of attacks and speed, then using long range weaponry and ninjutsu, gives her a pretty good and rather simply battle tactic.

Special Characteristics:
Chakra Based:

Physical Based:


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PostSubject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] EmptySun 30 Jun 2013, 4:24 am

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Birth Arc:

Pre-Academy Arc:

Academy Arc:

Genin Arc:

Chunin Arc:

Roleplay Sample:
Spoiler:

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Erise (Custom I think)
Source: Zerochan
Image URL: http://s1.zerochan.net/Erise.600.1511382.jpg
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PostSubject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] EmptySun 30 Jun 2013, 4:26 am

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu
Academy Jutsu:

Suiton Jutsu:

Raiton Jutsu:

Kumogakure Techniques:

Ranton Jutsu:

Non-Elemental Jutsu:

Weaponry Jutsu:

Chunin Kit:

C Rank Weapons:

Small scroll:

B Rank Weapons:

Medium Scroll:


*Note - There are I think 3 custom techniques in this. One is a lightning jutsu that allows for more speed. It doesn't coat my whole body so I felt that it was different enough from the Lightning armor that it would be allowable, if this is not the case then that is fine and I can just come up with a different jutsu. Just letting you guys know.


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PostSubject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] EmptyMon 01 Jul 2013, 12:21 am

We talked about most things over Skype. The application is very solid and very well written. I have no gripes about anything, and the only thing that needs moderating are the Customs.

I'm fine with [Hikari no Sokudo (Speed of Light)].

And I've also gone over the custom B Rank weapons.

I want to propose some changes for Sutōmubou and Sōdosutoraiku, but unfortunately it's late and I need to wake up early tomorrow, so I'm going to do so when I get back from school.

However other mods should feel free to comment on other aspects of the application until then.
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PostSubject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] EmptyWed 03 Jul 2013, 7:55 pm

Quote :
Name: Sutōmubou - Storm Bow
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Ranton
Description: After gathering chakra and performing the necessary hand seals, the user will stretch out his left arm, releasing Ranton Energy from the hand in the vertical directions. This energy forms a bow-like shape, that is almost perfectly straight with the exception of the curves at each end. Using this shape as a means of choosing direction and aiming, the user then releases Ranton Chakra along his arm, with his right hand manipulating the energy to create another straight shape - a smaller, sharper creation that looks like an arrow. With a small chakra burst, this arrow is then fired off at high speed. The arrow is capable of penetrating the skin lightly and it causes first degree burns as well as numbing where it lands. Two arrows can be created per turn, although arrows can be created indefinitely as long as the user has the necerssary chakra.
Chakra Cost: 8 Chakra + 2 Chakra per Arrow

Quote :
Name: Sōdosutoraiku - Sword Strike
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: The user will first gather Raiton chakra in their weapon of choice (preferably a sword), before resuming normal attacks. Although the weapon is charged with lightning, only a keen eye could spot the sparks and tendrils of electricity on the weapon's surface. At any point, the user can release this energy at the opponent in the form of a crescent wave of lightning, which can travel five metres away from the weapon before it disperses. Should this wave make contact, the opponent will suffer from first degree burns and will experience an electric shock as well as feel numb and slightly slower. An alternative way of using this energy, is by releasing it from the tip of the sword, when using it in a stabbing motion. Although the wave released is much more concentrated and hence, it's easier to miss, second degree burns, longer lasting numbness as well as a stronger electric shock will be felt by the opponent.
Chakra Cost: 11

How do you feel about these versions?
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PostSubject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] EmptyWed 03 Jul 2013, 9:29 pm

I like these versions better. Thanks Chris. I went ahead and added them, since I got off work earlier than I was expecting.

I believe this means that I have Chris' 1/2 on this, though I'm not exactly positive. He said in Skype I have his 1/2 with this done. Razz I'll contact him shortly.
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PostSubject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] EmptyThu 04 Jul 2013, 1:17 pm

Yeah you do :3

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PostSubject: Re: Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] Kousen, Naomi [Kumo Chunin] EmptyTue 09 Jul 2013, 6:54 pm

Wonderful application, an absolute joy to read! Sorry about the wait.

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