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BK-201
Posts : 1729
| Subject: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 12:35 am | |
| As some of you may have noticed, the Special Characteristic Update has (Finally) been finished. Here's a general overview of what's been changed;
- There are now two new classes of SCs; Social SCs and Afflictions.
- Multiple SCs have been added on and removed, while some have simply been altered in form.
- Certain restrictions have been placed on some of the Physical SCs; read them and be aware of them.
Now, some of you are going to be wondering "My SCs are completely different now/ one of my SCs has been completely removed/ What, do I have to retrain them all!?" That is not the case. We are simply going to implement a "Ticket Claim" system of sorts for the new SCs.
It works rather simply; you post the link to your character app; the names of the SCs you possess that have been heavily altered, removed, or replaced; and then the SCs you wish to have them updated/replaced with. If the SC allows for it via having some sort of fill-in-the-blank feature, you can also specify what you wish to have for it. Ex; Ninjutsu adept/mastery, Clan prodigy/mastery.
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[b]Character Link:[/b] [url=character.link]character.name[/url] [b]Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs:[/b] A, B, C. [b]Desired Replacement:[/b] Replacement A, Replacement B, Replacement C.
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| | | Cross
Age : 30 Posts : 1012
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 1:44 am | |
| Character Link: Mokuzai Kyuusaisha Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Clan Prodigy
Desired Replacement: Replace Clan prodigy with the new - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Clan Prodigy [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must belong to a clan [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] A trait given to ninja who possess an innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks cost 20% (rounded up) less chakra to perform, as well as an increased power and size. [b]Special Effect:[/b] Mokuzai has been able to change the color of his wood to an ash black hue. This doesn't affect the strength or texture of his wood release. It's merely a visual difference from many other Senju. It allows the wood to leave black marks upon contact with another skin or clothing. Simple visual difference, nothing too speical about the black marks.
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| | | Flare
Age : 28 Posts : 3640
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 2:31 am | |
| Character Link: Katsumi Kimiko Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: All three Desired Replacement: Monstrous Chakra Capacity; - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Monstrous Chakra Capacity [b]Rank:[/b] S [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must have Enormous Chakra Capacity [b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic [b]Restrictions:[/b] Effect does not stack with the previous ranks of Chakra Capacity. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja's chakra capacity now becomes legendary as it transcends that of any normal ninja would ever possess. The ninja chakra reserves are now stronger than most jinchuriki and those around them can sense the intense power radiating from the user. Those with monstrous chakra capacity have their chakra reserves increased by 65CP. Summoning Related; - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Summoning Related Jutsu. [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based. [b]Physical Requirements:[/b] Must have Ninjutsu and an Animal Contract. [b]Training Requirements:[/b] A 1200 word training post is required. [b]Description:[/b] After signing your contract with a species of animals your talent and power has become recognized and renowned throughout the entire species. You are now seen a leader in your own right and you become so respected by your contracted animals that you are now able to use techniques specific to that species for yourself, even creating combination techniques but all of which must still be trained. Additionally, those who possess this Special Characteristic can gain 1 additional summon. To replace Katon and Fuuton Mastery; - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Ninjutsu Master [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must have Ninjutsu Adept [b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] An ability acquired to highly experienced ninja whose power and knowledge in Ninjutsu could be considered legendary. Through intensive training and practice of the ninja arts, a ninja has attained a vast knowledge of all Ninjutsu and can identify every generic technique. With their now flawless chakra control and knowledge of Ninjutsu, the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 40% (rounded up). [b]Element Mastery:[/b] With an additional training post (800 words), users can gain more control over a particular element as well, reducing the cost of a technique of that element by a total of 50% (Rounded up). Said element may also exhibit a particular, unique aesthetic effect. Does not apply to Advanced Elements. [b]Element:[/b] - [b]Effect:[/b] - Elementalist; - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Elementalist [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must specialize in Ninjutsu [b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] Can only access three basic elements [b]Description:[/b] Elementalists are ninja that have chosen to become proficient with elemental ninjutsu. Through training and a natural talent in nature affinity elementalist ninja are able to access three elements instead of two. This allows for more powerful technique's and varied combinations keeping their opponents on their toes. Endurance; - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier III] Ferocious Endurance [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Immense Endurance”” Special Characteristic. [b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. [b]Description:[/b] The second last level in the art of endurance, having being only accessible to those who have undergone intensive training in increasing their raw power. The possessor of this talent has an increased strength of thrice that of their peers which makes them remarkably tougher and harder to down. At this stage their endurance has transcended so high that they are now immune to the sensation of pain, even at a point where others would have passed out. Looks like I have an extra SC slot going begging... happy times~~~ |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 2:33 am | |
| Character Link: Hanzoku Kirima Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Removed: Katon Prodigy Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Ninjutsu Adept [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must Specialize in Ninjutsu [b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] A trait possessed by ninja who have trained to improve their ninjutsu ability and acquire rigorous control over their techniques. After much training, the ninja becomes more experienced and exerts more control over the art of Ninjutsu. The potency of their Ninjutsu control means that the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as recognizing any C-rank and lower Open Ninjutsu. [b]Element Proficiency:[/b] With an additional training post (600 words), users can gain more control over a particular element as well, reducing the cost of a technique of that element by a total of 25% (Rounded up). Said element may also exhibit a particular, unique aesthetic effect. Does not apply to Advanced Elements. [b]Element:[/b] Fire [b]Effect:[/b] The user can handle heat in general better than others, when Chakra is not involved with said heat. The user can stand closer to fire than most and not feel too warm, she is less prone to heat strokes if under the blazing sun without water etc etc. Character Link: Hanzoku Kirima Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Altered: Evasiveness. Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Acrobatics [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and twists than their peers. Character Link: Hanzoku Kirima Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Altered: Great Endurance Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier II] Immense Endurance [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Improved Endurance” Special Characteristic. [b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. [b]Description:[/b] Further training in the discipline of dealing with injury has allowed for the shinobi The possessor of this talent has an increased endurance of double that of their peers which makes them considerably tougher. They are near immune to the sensation of pain which allows them to fight under harsh circumstances with normal efficiency. |
| | | lifeanddeath
Age : 31 Posts : 1490
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 2:48 am | |
| Character Link: Senju, Atsuhiko Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Chakra Capacity and Suiton Prodigy Desired Replacement:
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[b]Name:[/b] Increased Chakra Capacity [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
[b]Name:[/b] Clan Prodigy [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must belong to a clan [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] A trait given to ninja who possess an innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks cost 20% (rounded up) less chakra to perform, as well as an increased power and size. [b]Special Effect:[/b]As befitting of his more innocent persona Atsuhiko's Mokuton is capable of changing color from the more standard brown to what could only be described as a pure white color. This doesn't affect the strength or texture of his wood release. It's merely a visual difference from many other Senju. Additionally, Atsuhiko's Mokuton construct are often seen with a pure 'aura' because this white coloring seems to also be impervious to stain or marring of any kind even when physically damaged. Please be mindful of the spoilers please, if you could replace the title on the Suiton one with Ninjutsu, thank you.
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| | | Captain Konoha
Age : 32 Posts : 1912
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 3:15 am | |
| Character Link: http://www.ultimateshinobi.org/t8102-kaguya-yoroi-konoha-sennin Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Summoning Related Jutsu, Lightning Mastery, Clan Mastery, Flash speed Desired Replacement:
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Name: Summoning Related Jutsu. Rank: B Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: Must have Ninjutsu and an Animal Contract. Training Requirements: A 1200 word training post is required. Description: After signing your contract with a species of animals your talent and power has become recognized and renowned throughout the entire species. You are now seen a leader in your own right and you become so respected by your contracted animals that you are now able to use techniques specific to that species for yourself, even creating combination techniques but all of which must still be trained. Additionally, those who possess this Special Characteristic can gain 1 additional summon.
Name: Ninjutsu Master Rank: A Type: Chakra Based Prerequisites: Must have Ninjutsu Adept Training: A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: - Description: An ability acquired to highly experienced ninja whose power and knowledge in Ninjutsu could be considered legendary. Through intensive training and practice of the ninja arts, a ninja has attained a vast knowledge of all Ninjutsu and can identify every generic technique. With their now flawless chakra control and knowledge of Ninjutsu, the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 40% (rounded up). Element Mastery: With an additional training post (800 words), users can gain more control over a particular element as well, reducing the cost of a technique of that element by a total of 50% (Rounded up). Said element may also exhibit a particular, unique aesthetic effect. Does not apply to Advanced Elements. Element: Lightning Effect: All Yoroi's Lightning techniques have a bright white color to them, further contributing to his nickname, the White Dragon.
Name: Clan Master Rank: A Type: Chakra Based Prerequisites: Must have Clan Prodigy Training: A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: - Description: The title given to those elite ninja who've become legendary for their power and mastery over their clan's own secret arts. Being classified as a prodigy during their early years, the ninja has now mastered his clans techniques and has attained great power from their continuous training. The ninja's clan based techniques now cost 40% (rounded up) less chakra to perform and each technique is bolstered both in their power and size. The user can now more effortlessly manipulate the clan's secret element/power even to extent of generating an innate resistance to attacks of the same nature allowing them absorb or nullify such attacks that are of lower rank than the user, although they're still capable of feeling great pain when doing so.
Name: [Tier III] Flash Speed Rank: A Type: Physical Prerequisites: Character must have the “Advanced Speed” Special Characteristic. Training: A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. Description: Years of training one’s speed has lead them to the next evolutionary step in their ability. The shinobi can now go up to thrice as fast compared to others of equal rank. On top of this large speed boost, those with this speed can essentially outrun cheetahs and even appear as a swift blur to unsuspecting bystanders who happen to notice the character. Unfortunately, the high speed training does very little in further improving one’s already great stamina.
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| | | CleverYamanaka
Age : 29 Posts : 1688
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 3:46 am | |
| Character Link: Inoshi Yamanaka. Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Remove "Photographic Memory," "Eidetic memory," "Advanced Chakra Control," "Yin release." Desired Replacement: Replace photographic memory with (I'm unsure of what to do with Eidetic memory): - Code:
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[color=blueviolet][b]Name:[/b][/color] [color=plum]One-Handed Seals[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Rank:[/b][/color] [color=plum]C[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Type:[/b][/color] [color=plum]Physical[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Prerequisites:[/b][/color] [color=plum]-[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Training:[/b][/color] [color=plum]A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [color=blueviolet][b]Restrictions:[/b][/color] [color=plum]This cannot be used as a way to perform two jutsu at the same time.[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Description:[/b][/color] [color=plum]The ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.[/color] Replace Advanced Chakra Control with:
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[color=blueviolet][b]Name:[/b] [color=plum]Ninjutsu Adept[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Rank:[/b][/color] [color=plum]B[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Type:[/b][/color] [color=plum]Chakra Based[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Prerequisites:[/b][/color] [color=plum]Must Specialize in Ninjutsu[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Training:[/b][/color] [color=plum]A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Restrictions:[/b][/color] [color=plum]-[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Description:[/b][/color] [color=plum]A trait possessed by ninja who have trained to improve their ninjutsu ability and acquire rigorous control over their techniques. After much training, the ninja becomes more experienced and exerts more control over the art of Ninjutsu. The potency of their Ninjutsu control means that the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as recognizing any C-rank and lower Open Ninjutsu.[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Element Proficiency:[/b][/color] [color=plum]With an additional training post (600 words), users can gain more control over a particular element as well, reducing the cost of a technique of that element by a total of 25% (Rounded up). Said element may also exhibit a particular, unique aesthetic effect. Does not apply to Advanced Elements.[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Element:[/b][/color] [color=plum]-[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Effect:[/b][/color] [color=plum]-[/color] Replace Yin release with:
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[color=blueviolet][b]Name:[/b][/color] [color=plum]Illusionist[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Rank:[/b][/color] [color=plum]B[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Type:[/b][/color] [color=plum]Chakra Based[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Prerequisites:[/b][/color] [color=plum]Must have Genjutsu as a specialty.[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Training:[/b][/color] [color=plum]A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Restrictions:[/b][/color] [color=plum]-[/color] [color=blueviolet][b]Description:[/b][/color] [color=plum]This shinobi has shown a skill for genjutsu early on and can be considered to be more proficient than their peers. Their ability to make their illusions are considered to be at a prodigious level they can do so with much less effort than their peers as such they cost 20% less chakra(Rounded up) to form. Being well versed in genjutsu, that are additionally capable or recognizing any techniques they personally possess.[/color] I think I did all of the coding right in there
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| | | Ulkira
Age : 31 Posts : 1836
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 4:04 am | |
| Character Link: Murasami Kai Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Alter "Evasiveness", "Advanced Stealth", and "Sensor Ninja". Desired Replacement:
Evasiveness:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Acrobatics [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] N/A [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this Special Characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and twists than their peers. Advanced Stealth:
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[b]Name:[/b] Advanced Stealth [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Physical Requirements:[/b] N/A [b]Training Requirements:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this Special Characteristic. [b]Restriction:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in the art of stealth. The ninja becomes very light and quick on their feet. Their movements no longer create sound and they now gain a natural skill for hiding and camouflage. Sensor Ninja:
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[b]Name:[/b] Sensor Ninja [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Chakra [b]Physical Requirements:[/b] N/A [b]Training Requirements:[/b] An 1200 word training post is required to gain this Special Characteristic. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja awakens a dormant talent they've possessed and develops a new type of sensory. Now being classified as a "Sensor Ninja", the ninja is capable of detecting the presence of other people through their chakra. A Sensor can detect their targets from a great distance which can extend 100m, as well as differentiate the characters by their signature chakra alone. They can pin-point any individual within their sensory limit, even if they are surrounded in a crowd, and even locate other Sensor Ninja. A Sensor can determine a person's location and chakra capacity when in a locating position. Please be mindful of the coding in the spoilers. |
| | | BK-201
Posts : 1729
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 4:50 am | |
| Updated.
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| | | TwinnyPuppy
Age : 30 Posts : 1637
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 6:24 am | |
| Character Link: Tanaka, Kyousuu
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Replaced Speed Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Enhanced Speed [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. [b]Description:[/b] After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens. Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Replaced Endurance Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Endurance [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. [b]Description:[/b] Conditioning ones body in the art of pain has allowed for the ninja to have a heightened physical endurance. These ninja are so talented in dealing with pain that they seem to only feel a quarter of the pain that their peers would. This boost is usually enough to prevent serious damage to the person from a mere punch or kick; sometimes even preventing fracturing or breaking of bones. Please and thank you. ♥ |
| | | BK-201
Posts : 1729
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 6:32 am | |
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| | | Aaron
Age : 27 Posts : 2538
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 10:27 am | |
| Character Link: Nara, Shikaruto Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Pin-Point Accuracy Desired Replacement: - Enhanced Accuracy:
Name: Enhanced Accuracy Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: The Character must have either Weaponry as one of their Specialties or Improved Speed as one of their characteristics. Training: An 800 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: - Description: A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in throwing weapons. From a combination of practice and natural talent the ninja starts to acquire an enhanced accuracy which allows them to hit multiple targets in precise locations along with hurling their weapons at a greater speed.
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| | | BK-201
Posts : 1729
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 11:43 am | |
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| | | Ashin
Age : 30 Posts : 356
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 11:50 am | |
| Character Link: Kessho, Ikatashi Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Improved Speed, Clan Prodigy Desired Replacement:
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Name: [Tier I] Enhanced Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: - Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. Description: After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens.
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Name: Clan Prodigy Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Prerequisites: Must belong to a clan Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: - Description: A trait given to ninja who possess an innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks cost 20% (rounded up) less chakra to perform, as well as an increased power and size. Special Effect: Possessors of this Special Characteristic can also grant their own spin to their clan techniques, setting them apart and identifying them as Prodigys. Given the diversity of clans and clan abilities, such distinguishing marks are left to the user's imagination.
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| | | BK-201
Posts : 1729
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 11:54 am | |
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| | | Ruka
Age : 31 Posts : 1495
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 1:34 pm | |
| Character Link: Nakotsumi, Mana Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: All three Desired Replacement:
Increase Chakra Capacity
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[b]Name:[/b] Increased Chakra Capacity [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP. One-Handed Seals
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[b]Name:[/b] One-Handed Seals [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] [b]This cannot be used as a way to perform two jutsu at the same time.[/b] [b]Description:[/b] the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack. I'll just keep one spot free instead of my Yin Release so just remove it. |
| | | BK-201
Posts : 1729
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 1:47 pm | |
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| | | BK-201
Posts : 1729
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 4:18 pm | |
| Character Link: Takeshi Gouka Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Quick Speed, Sensor, Evasiveness, Improved Perception Desired Replacement:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier II] Advanced Speed [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Enhanced Speed” Special Characteristic. [b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. [b]Description:[/b] Further training in high speed movement has given the shinobi valiant speed that can perform olympic sprinters with no effort. By now, the ninja can run twice as fast as their untalented peers, and can usually run for miles on end without breaking a sweat.
[b]Name:[/b] Sensor Ninja [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Physical Requirements:[/b] N/A [b]Training Requirements:[/b] An 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja awakens a dormant talent they've possessed and develops a new type of sensory. Now being classified as a "Sensor Ninja" the ninja is capable of detecting the presence of other people through their chakra. A sensor can detect their targets from a great distance which can extend 100m, as well as differentiate the characters by their signature chakra alone. They can pin-point any individual within their sensory limit even if they are surrounded in a crowd and even locate other sensor ninja. A sensor can determine a person's location and chakra capacity when in a locating position.
[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Acrobatics [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and twists than their peers.
[b]Name:[/b] Improved Perception [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Mental Based [b]Physical Requirements:[/b] N/A [b]Training Requirements:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Most physical motions are identified and picked up by the ninja whether its a movement in a leaf or a change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with Genjutsu as it allows the user to identify the fact they are in an illusion in less time and with less clues than one would otherwise need. However although they can sense the Genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell. The ninja also becomes extremely perceptive and observant when it comes to people, being able to pick out mood changes or better understand character. In addition, this skill becomes useful in combat, where the Ninja grows to understand the patterns, habits and the 'rhythm' of the opponent over periods of time.
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| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 4:26 pm | |
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| | | Søren
Posts : 1187
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 8:57 pm | |
| Character Link: [url=character.link]Akira Tenshi[/url] Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Quick Speed, Increased Chakra Capacity, Lightning Prodigy - Dragon Slayer (I guess) Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier II] Advanced Speed [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Enhanced Speed” Special Characteristic. [b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. [b]Description:[/b] Further training in high speed movement has given the shinobi valiant speed that can perform olympic sprinters with no effort. By now, the ninja can run twice as fast as their untalented peers, and can usually run for miles on end without breaking a sweat. - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Increased Chakra Capacity [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP. - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Ninjutsu Adept [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must Specialize in Ninjutsu [b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] A trait possessed by ninja who have trained to improve their ninjutsu ability and acquire rigorous control over their techniques. After much training, the ninja becomes more experienced and exerts more control over the art of Ninjutsu. The potency of their Ninjutsu control means that the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as recognizing any C-rank and lower Open Ninjutsu. [b]Element Proficiency:[/b] With an additional training post (600 words), users can gain more control over a particular element as well, reducing the cost of a technique of that element by a total of 25% (Rounded up). Said element may also exhibit a particular, unique aesthetic effect. Does not apply to Advanced Elements. [b]Element:[/b] Raiton [b]Effect:[/b] Gives a yellow/white auto to certain Raiton techniques. |
| | | Ancladar
Age : 32 Posts : 544
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Wed 06 Nov 2013, 11:41 pm | |
| Character Link: Yamanaka Kiyomi Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Clan prodigy needs to be altered and Advanced Chakra Control needs to be replaced. Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Clan Prodigy [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must belong to a clan [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] A trait given to ninja who possess an innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks cost 20% (rounded up) less chakra to perform, as well as an increased power and size. [b]Special Effect:[/b] When Kiyomi uses mind transfer jutsu for the cost of an extra 5Cp she can see normally, and control the flight of her soul so she has an increased chance of hitting a target. - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Increased Chakra Capacity [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] - [b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
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| | | TwinnyPuppy
Age : 30 Posts : 1637
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Thu 07 Nov 2013, 9:10 pm | |
| Chronical: Updated.
Ancladar: The special effect of your Clan Prodigy SC needs to be changed as it cannot be approved as-is. |
| | | Mister B
Age : 34 Posts : 58
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Fri 08 Nov 2013, 12:26 am | |
| Character Link: Senju, Genji Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Improved strenght replaced by new version Desired Replacement:
Name: [Tier I] Improved Strength Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: - Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. Description: Countless hours, days, weeks and even months of lifting weights, muscle stretching, exercise and pure raw-power training has built the shinobi’s strength to something comparable to an animal. These ninja are so talented in strength, they can lift objects of equal weight to the themselves, and strike with the ferocity of one and half of their peers. This boost is usually enough to cause serious damage to an enemy with a mere punch or kick; sometimes even fracturing or breaking a bone if struck in the right spot. |
| | | NuclearTreerat
Age : 48 Posts : 1036
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Fri 08 Nov 2013, 1:19 am | |
| Character Link: Hinamori, Toshiro Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Large Chakra Capacity, Suiton Mastery, Flash Speed, Immense Strength Desired Replacement: - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Large Chakra Capacity [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must have Increased Chakra Capacity [b]Training:[/b] A 800 word training is required to gain this special characteristic [b]Restrictions:[/b] Effect does not stack with the previous rank of Chakra Capacity. [b]Description:[/b] The ninja continues their mediation and physical training which further increases their chakra capacity. Ninja with large chakra capacities have an increased chakra of 35CP - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Ninjutsu Master [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must have Ninjutsu Adept [b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] - [b]Description:[/b] An ability acquired to highly experienced ninja whose power and knowledge in Ninjutsu could be considered legendary. Through intensive training and practice of the ninja arts, a ninja has attained a vast knowledge of all Ninjutsu and can identify every generic technique. With their now flawless chakra control and knowledge of Ninjutsu, the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 40% (rounded up). [b]Element Mastery:[/b] With an additional training post (800 words), users can gain more control over a particular element as well, reducing the cost of a technique of that element by a total of 50% (Rounded up). Said element may also exhibit a particular, unique aesthetic effect. Does not apply to Advanced Elements. [b]Element:[/b] - [b]Effect:[/b] - - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier III] Flash Speed [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Advanced Speed” Special Characteristic. [b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. [b]Description:[/b] Years of training one’s speed has lead them to the next evolutionary step in their ability. The shinobi can now go up to thrice as fast compared to others of equal rank. On top of this large speed boost, those with this speed can essentially outrun cheetahs and even appear as a swift blur to unsuspecting bystanders who happen to notice the character. Unfortunately, the high speed training does very little in further improving one’s already great stamina. - Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier II]Immense Strength [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Type:[/b] Physical [b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Improved Strength” Special Characteristic. [b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. [b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties. [b]Description:[/b] Further training in the art of killing and brute force has lead the ninja down a road full of power. They can now lift objects up to two times heavier than they are, and their physical strength has also improved to about twice as great compared to ninja of equal rank. By now the shinobi can punch a log in half, and even crack stone with their bare hands. The increase in strength has also blessed them with the ability to jump significantly higher than their peers, though this not exactly a useful benefit. |
| | | Rukasu
Age : 33 Posts : 510
| Subject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) Fri 08 Nov 2013, 4:58 am | |
| Character Link: Hakai, Rukasu Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: A. - Quote :
- Name: Katon Prodigy
Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: Must have Fire Affinity Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a natural talent for fire manipulation and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the fire element becomes so talented that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy in the fire element. Because of this, the user's fire techniques are 20% more destructive as they increase in size and achieve higher temperatures. B. - Quote :
- Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack. Desired Replacement: Replacement A. - Quote :
- Name: [Tier I] Enhanced Speed
Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: - Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. Description: After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens.
Replacement B. - Quote :
- Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: - Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: This cannot be used as a way to perform two jutsu at the same time. Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
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