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BK-201
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Gotta pick a C rank,  Ruka.
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CleverYamanaka
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Note:

Nothing custom should be posted here, in this thread. Anything custom, such as Special Characteristics which are user made, or have user made components should be posted in Custom Registry and modded appropriately; the only exception being if someone has already had their special characteristic modded and approved for use, and they are just using this thread to claim it. If that is the case, however, please provide a link to the topic in which it was approved.
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BK-201
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Updated, except for Rukasu, who, as I said earlier, needs to select a C-rank SC to replace it.
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Chris
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PostSubject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) - Page 2 EmptyThu 14 Nov 2013, 8:37 pm

He's back for however long, so let's get him updated and ready for battle >.O

Character Link: Takeda, Shingen
Changes:


      Physical Based (copy the code below and paste in app, the SCs are in the Arsenal)

    From Improved Speed to [Tier I] Enhanced Speed

    Please add [Tier I] Improved Strength due to having trained Improved Strength without it ever being added here

    Also Advanced Stealth needs updating.

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Enhanced Speed
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
[b]Description:[/b] After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens.

[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Strength
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
[b]Description:[/b] Countless hours, days, weeks and even months of lifting weights, muscle stretching, exercise and pure raw-power training has built the shinobi’s strength to something comparable to an animal. These ninja are so talented in strength, they can lift objects of equal weight to the themselves, and strike with the ferocity of one and half of their peers. This boost is usually enough to cause serious damage to an enemy with a mere punch or kick; sometimes even fracturing or breaking a bone if struck in the right spot.

[b]Name:[/b] Advanced Stealth
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Physical Requirements:[/b] N/A
[b]Training Requirements:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restriction:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in the art of stealth. The ninja becomes very light and quick on their feet. Their movements no longer create sound and they now gain a natural skill for hiding and camouflage.




      Chakra Based (copy the code below and paste in app)


    Change Chakra Control to Monstrous Chakra Capacity

    Update Sensor Ninja + Experienced Medic Nin

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Monstrous Chakra Capacity
[b]Rank:[/b] S
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must have Enormous Chakra Capacity
[b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Effect does not stack with the previous ranks of Chakra Capacity.
[b]Description:[/b] The ninja's chakra capacity now becomes legendary as it transcends that of any normal ninja would ever possess. The ninja chakra reserves are now stronger than most jinchuriki and those around them can sense the intense power radiating from the user. Those with monstrous chakra capacity have their chakra reserves increased by 65CP.

[b]Name:[/b] Experienced Medic Nin
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must Specialize in Eijutsu
[b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] A trait possessed by medical ninja whose wishes to improve their healing ability with further Training and acquiring more knowledge in the medical field. After much Training the medical ninja becomes more experienced and gains greater knowledge in the art of eijutsu. The potency of their eijutsu control means that the cost of each Eijutsu technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as allowing them to heal at a quicker rate and more efficiently. They gain a skill which allows them to identify a persons illness from a general observation which makes them good in determining what parts of the body must be healed to ensure patient survivability. From continuous knowledge in poisons and pathogens the medic also can instantly identify and create medicine for B-Rank Poisons with proper supplies.

[b]Name:[/b] Sensor Ninja
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Physical Requirements:[/b] N/A
[b]Training Requirements:[/b] An 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Description:[/b] The ninja awakens a dormant talent they've possessed and develops a new type of sensory. Now being classified as a "Sensor Ninja" the ninja is capable of detecting the presence of other people through their chakra. A  sensor can detect their targets from a great distance which can extend 100m, as well as differentiate the characters by their signature chakra alone. They can pin-point any individual within their sensory limit even if they are surrounded in a crowd and even locate other sensor ninja. A sensor can determine a person's location and chakra capacity when in a locating position.



Thanks for all your work and these awesome updates ^__^
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Sörä♀
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Character Link: Kousen, Naomi

Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs:

Removed SCs:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Raiton Prodigy
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Physical Requirements:[/b] Must have Lightning Affinity
[b]Training Requirements:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Description:[/b] A trait given to ninja who possesses a natural talent for lightning manipulation and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the lightning element becomes so talented that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy in the lightning element. Because of this, the user's lightning attacks are 20% more destructive with their increased voltage and size.

Replace Raiton Prodigy with:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Clan Prodigy
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must belong to a clan
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] A trait given to ninja who possess an innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks cost 20% (rounded up) less chakra to perform, as well as an increased power and size.
[b]Special Effect:[/b] Possessors of this Special Characteristic can also grant their own spin to their clan techniques, setting them apart and identifying them as Prodigys. Given the diversity of clans and clan abilities, such distinguishing marks are left to the user's imagination.
Alter Quick Speed with:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] [Tier II] Advanced Speed
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Enhanced Speed” Special Characteristic.
[b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties.
[b]Description:[/b] Further training in high speed movement has given the shinobi valiant speed that can perform olympic sprinters with no effort. By now, the ninja can run twice as fast as their untalented peers, and can usually run for miles on end without breaking a sweat.

Notes: Quick speed is obviously in the Physical based spoiler for SCs.

Also, if you could keep everything nice and neat like they are that would be fabulous.
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Character Link: Hisoka Ryoku
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Chakra Conductivity [Removed], Improved Strength [Altered], Elementalist [Altered]
Desired Replacement:
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] [Tier II] Advanced Speed
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Enhanced Speed” Special Characteristic.
[b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties.
[b]Description:[/b] Further training in high speed movement has given the shinobi valiant speed that can perform olympic sprinters with no effort. By now, the ninja can run twice as fast as their untalented peers, and can usually run for miles on end without breaking a sweat.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Strength
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
[b]Description:[/b] Countless hours, days, weeks and even months of lifting weights, muscle stretching, exercise and pure raw-power training has built the shinobi’s strength to something comparable to an animal. These ninja are so talented in strength, they can lift objects of equal weight to the themselves, and strike with the ferocity of one and half of their peers. This boost is usually enough to cause serious damage to an enemy with a mere punch or kick; sometimes even fracturing or breaking a bone if struck in the right spot.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Elementalist
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must specialize in Ninjutsu
[b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Can only access three basic elements
[b]Description:[/b] Elementalists are ninja that have chosen to become proficient with elemental ninjutsu. Through training and a natural talent in nature affinity elementalist ninja are able to access three elements instead of two. This allows for more powerful technique's and varied combinations keeping their opponents on their toes.
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megz urs iz done bcuz im biased and obvi only cair bout u and am bad staf membur Call Me 
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Character Link: Shinikish Yuushi
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs:
Spoiler:
Desired Replacement:
Spoiler:
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Updated.

Edit: Sora, do you want to add anything to the special addition of your clan prodigy?
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Sörä♀
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Um, yes I do but I should probably talk to an admin about it.
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Chris' has been updated.
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Character Link: Hakai, Rukasu
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs:
A.
Quote :
Name: Katon Prodigy
Rank: C
Type: Chakra Based
Physical Requirements: Must have Fire Affinity
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a natural talent for fire manipulation and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the fire element becomes so talented that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy in the fire element. Because of this, the user's fire techniques are 20% more destructive as they increase in size and achieve higher temperatures.
B.
Quote :
Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
Desired Replacement:
Replacement A.
Quote :
Name: [Tier I] Enhanced Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
Description: After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens.
Replacement B.
Quote :
Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: This cannot be used as a way to perform two jutsu at the same time.
Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.  
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Updated.
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Character Link: Nagase, Uriko.
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: One-Handed Seals, Flash Speed, Iron Endurance, Medical Chief, Advanced Chakra Control, Keen Perception, Husk.
Desired Replacement:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] One-Handed Seals.
[b]Rank:[/b] C.
[b]Type:[/b] Physical.
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] None.
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] This cannot be used as a means of performing two jutsu simultaneously.
[b]Description:[/b] The ninja develops a talent that allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With such an ability, the ninja can fight whilst also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] [Tier III] Flash Speed.
[b]Rank:[/b] A.
[b]Type:[/b] Physical.
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Advanced Speed” Special Characteristic.
[b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties.
[b]Description:[/b] Years of training one’s speed has lead them to the next evolutionary step in their ability. The shinobi can now go up to thrice as fast compared to others of equal rank. On top of this large speed boost, those with this speed can essentially outrun cheetahs and even appear as a swift blur to unsuspecting bystanders who happen to notice the character. Unfortunately, the high speed training does very little in further improving one’s already great stamina.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] [Tier III] Ferocious Endurance.
[b]Rank:[/b] A.
[b]Type:[/b] Physical.
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Immense Endurance”” Special Characteristic.
[b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu or Weaponry as one of their specialties.
[b]Description:[/b] The second last level in the art of endurance, having being only accessible to those who have undergone intensive training in increasing their raw power. The possessor of this talent has an increased strength of thrice that of their peers which makes them remarkably tougher and harder to down. At this stage their endurance has transcended so high that they are now immune to the sensation of pain, even at a point where others would have passed out.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Medical Chief.
[b]Rank:[/b] A.
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra.
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must have Experienced Medical-Nin.
[b]Training:[/b] A 2000 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] None.
[b]Description:[/b] An ability acquired to highly experienced medical ninja whose power in healing could be considered legendary. Through intensive Training and studying the medical ninja has attained near superhuman knowledge of the medical field which includes but not limited to; anatomy, biology, chemistry and toxicology. With their now flawless chakra control and vast knowledge of Eijutsu, the cost of each Eijutsu technique is reduced by 40% (rounded up), as well as allowing them to rapidly heal wounds and heal through injuries others would deem impossible. They can identify injuries a person possesses from a single glance and can treat them accordingly. From their knowledge of poisons the medical ninja now has enough skill to create antidotes for virtually any poison given a sample and proper supplies.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Enormous Chakra Capacity.
[b]Rank:[/b] A.
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra.
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must have Large Chakra Capacity.
[b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Effect does not stack with the previous ranks of Chakra Capacity.
[b]Description:[/b] With an already increased chakra capacity the ninja starts to accumulate a natural skill for increasing their chakra reserves as they continue through their life. Along with some training and mediation, the ninja now gains enormous chakra capacity which increases their chakra reserves by 50CP.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Keen Perception.
[b]Rank:[/b] A.
[b]Type:[/b] Mental.
[b]Physical Requirements:[/b] Must have Improved Perception.
[b]Training Requirements:[/b] A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Description:[/b] The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Every physical motion is identified and picked up by the ninja whether its a movement in a leaf or a change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with Genjutsu, as it gives the user the capacity to quickly identify they are in an illusion with very minimal clues. However although they can figure out the Genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell. The ninja also becomes extremely perceptive and observant when it comes to people, being able to pick out mood changes or better understand character. In addition, this skill becomes useful in combat, where the Ninja grows to understand the patterns, habits and the 'rhythm' of the opponent over periods of time. At this higher rank, either the User is able to spot 'more', spot faster or both.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Kara [Husk].
[b]Rank[/b]: S.
[b]Range:[/b] Personal.
[b]Description:[/b] Many years ago, a bloody encounter left Uriko with just one arm. The jutsu used to remove her appendage not only left her with horrific scars, but something far more devious. Though it was unlikely her assailant's intention, the nefarious chakra he had drawn upon to perform the technique was embedded in the site of impact. The kunoichi's chakra flow has been marred ever since. It is a huge well of dark, violent energy that has been condensed and compressed into a relatively small physical area. Worse, it has some level of sentience. If she ever runs out of chakra, or is moments from death, the energy will pour out of her system. A murky, viscous liquid flows out from her scarred shoulder and seeps through her clothing. Instead of following a normal, gravitational path, it travels in all directions, spreading a network of blue-black substance all over the kunoichi's body. This only takes about ten seconds before her entire form (face included) is coated in this web. The local atmosphere becomes thick and heavy, severely hindering movement for those nearby. Quite suddenly, ten large, blue-black tendrils of chakra explode from Uriko's shoulder and tear towards the nearest human target. As they move, many more tendrils burst from the main stems and join the assault. Given the atmospheric conditions, avoiding this with physical movement is extremely difficult. Only a distant teleportation seal or something similar could assuredly take the target far enough away in time. The tendrils are capable of burrowing through the earth to reach their intended target, too and can reach up to twenty metres from the user. Once they have a hold of their victim, the transfer of the nefarious chakra begins - a painful procedure. Barely twenty seconds later the tendrils rescind into their new vessel. The black substance will melt away from their former host and leave and pale shell of a human behind. Literally speaking, as their skin has become charred and opaque, as if hollow. Uriko will survive for all of five minutes, her consciousness and ability to speak restored, before her heart gives out. There is no means of healing and no 'get out clause'. If this occurs, she dies.
[b]Long-Term Effects:[/b] A host to this energy will have their personality adversely affected, their negative emotions becoming more prominent and dark impulses much harder to resist. This happens despite attempts to cling to good nature (if attached to an already cruel human, they will only grow worse). While few might be able to endure this suffering and restrict how far they ‘fall’, it will be a constant struggle. The vessel will experience regular nightmares and therefore difficulty sleeping, and random physical pains are common. Occasionally, they will hear a phantom voice suggesting malevolent ideas. Lastly, they cannot ever run out of chakra or they will die and this process will begin again.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] None.
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Ancladar
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Character Link: Yamanaka Kiyomi
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Clan prodigy needs to be altered and Advanced Chakra Control needs to be replaced.
Desired Replacement:
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Clan Prodigy
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must belong to a clan
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] A trait given to ninja who possess an innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks cost 20% (rounded up) less chakra to perform, as well as an increased power and size.
[b]Special Effect:[/b] [Being debated.] Kiyomi's ability to use Yamanaka clan telepathy is boosted by -insert amount-.
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Increased Chakra Capacity
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic
[b]Restrictions:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
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Character Link: Orimono Kei
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Advanced Chakra Control should be removed and replaced with Increased Chakra Capacity, Evasiveness should be replaced with Improved Acrobatics
Desired Replacement:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Increased Chakra Capacity
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic
[b]Restrictions:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Acrobatics
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
[b]Description:[/b] The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and twists than their peers.
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Character Link: Ophelia Uzumaki
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Alter: Endurance, Replace: Suiton Prodigy
Desired Replacement: Endurance-> Improved Endurance
Suiton Prodigy->Ninjutsu Adept B rank

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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Endurance
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
[b]Description:[/b] Conditioning ones body in the art of pain has allowed for the ninja to have a heightened physical endurance. These ninja are so talented in dealing with pain that they seem to only feel a quarter of the pain that their peers would. This boost is usually enough to prevent serious damage to the person from a mere punch or kick; sometimes even preventing fracturing or breaking of bones.

[b]Name:[/b] Ninjutsu Adept
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must Specialize in Ninjutsu
[b]Training:[/b] A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] A trait possessed by ninja who have trained to improve their ninjutsu ability and acquire rigorous control over their techniques. After much training, the ninja becomes more experienced and exerts more control over the art of Ninjutsu. The potency of their Ninjutsu control means that the cost of each Ninjutsu  technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as recognizing any C-rank and lower Open Ninjutsu.
[b]Element Proficiency:[/b] With an additional training post (600 words), users can gain more control over a particular element as well, reducing the cost of a technique of that element by a total of 25% (Rounded up). Said element may also exhibit a particular, unique aesthetic effect. Does not apply to Advanced Elements.
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Effect:[/b] -
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MsMoney
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PostSubject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) - Page 2 EmptyThu 26 Dec 2013, 2:29 am

Updated.

Ancladar, I updated you as well to keep order on things here but you will have to send me a PM (or another staff will simply update it) when a decision has been made about the effect of your Clan Mastery.

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Strawberry, you are still C rank so you can't have Ninjutsu Adept just yet. Contact a staff when you have it and it will be added to your app.
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Character Link: Hahen Kusari
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs: Endurance
Desired Replacement: Alter Improved Endurance with updated version
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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Endurance
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
[b]Description:[/b] Conditioning ones body in the art of pain has allowed for the ninja to have a heightened physical endurance. These ninja are so talented in dealing with pain that they seem to only feel a quarter of the pain that their peers would. This boost is usually enough to prevent serious damage to the person from a mere punch or kick; sometimes even preventing fracturing or breaking of bones.
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Updated.
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Seriously am I late to the party or am I late to the party!


Character Link: Tsurino.Kaguya
Altered/Replaced/Removed SCs:Improved endurance, Clan Prodigy, Elite Evasiveness,
Desired Replacement:

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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier I] Improved Endurance
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] -
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
[b]Description:[/b] Conditioning ones body in the art of pain has allowed for the ninja to have a heightened physical endurance. These ninja are so talented in dealing with pain that they seem to only feel a quarter of the pain that their peers would. This boost is usually enough to prevent serious damage to the person from a mere punch or kick; sometimes even preventing fracturing or breaking of bones.
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b]Name:[/b] Clan Prodigy
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Chakra Based
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Must belong to a clan
[b]Training:[/b] A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] A trait given to ninja who possess an innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks cost 20% (rounded up) less chakra to perform, as well as an increased power and size.
[b]Special Effect:[/b] Possessors of this Special Characteristic can also grant their own spin to their clan techniques, setting them apart and identifying them as Prodigys. Given the diversity of clans and clan abilities, such distinguishing marks are left to the user's imagination.

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[b]Name:[/b] [Tier III] Swift Acrobatics
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Physical
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] Character must have the “Enhanced Acrobatics” Special Characteristic.
[b]Training:[/b] A 1600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
[b]Restrictions:[/b] The Character must have either Taijutsu, Weaponry, or Medical as one of their specialties.
[b]Description:[/b] By further training their proficiency in aerial manoeuvring  as well as their flexibility a swift acrobat can not only perform various aerial manoeuvres on command but they can also jump to greater heights as well as safely fall greater distances.
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PostSubject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) - Page 2 EmptyTue 18 Feb 2014, 11:02 pm

Endurance and Evasiveness replaced.

As for the Clan Prodigy SC, what about the special effect? It's meant to be filled in by the individual, so unless you don't have anything you'd like to put in there, please replace the filler text with Tsurino's special effect.
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Ancladar
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PostSubject: Re: SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) SC Overhaul Claims (Now Open) - Page 2 EmptySun 02 Mar 2014, 1:19 am

I know this is really late, but I just realized I don't have a Social SC on Kiyomi. Would I be able to request artist?
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I would think that you need to train a Social SC at this point. That was what I had to do anyway.
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Ancladar wrote:
I know this is really late, but I just realized I don't have a Social SC on Kiyomi. Would I be able to request artist?

Just to be a butt and butt in, the claims was only to replace or update outdated and/or no longer existing SCs. As you have already updated your SCs, and possess no "social" SC to replace/update, then yeah, like Satan said, gotta train it.
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