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Akimichi, Kuchi [Konoha, Genin]

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leon77
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Akimichi, Kuchi.

THE INFO.

Name: Kuchi
Nickname: Ton
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Forehead Protector:traditional way
Personality:
Spoiler:
Clan: Akimichi
Nindō: Stand tall... even if you stand alone.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Fire Country
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Taijutsu, Weaponry[close,long]
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton
Combat Style:
Spoiler:

Special Characteristics:
Clan Mastery
Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Spoiler:

Roleplay Sample:
Sample of past rp

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu

Clan Justsu
Spoiler:

Academy Jutsu
Spoiler:

Konoha Jutsu
Spoiler:

Taijutsu
Spoiler:

Weaponry
Spoiler:

Fuuton Jutsu
Spoiler:



Items

Genin Kit
Spoiler:

Scrolls
Spoiler:

Weapons


Spoiler:

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Akimichi, Choji
Source: Naruto (post Shippuden)
Image URL: Photo Link


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leon77
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Ready for evaluation.

Edit: Gonna add some more.
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Now ready for evaluation.
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Alright just a couple of things:
  1. Change the Konoha Skills spoiler to be Konoha Jutsu, and change the Basic Skills to Academy Jutsu.
  2. Inside that new Academy Jutsu header put the techniques found here inside of it. Remove the Storage technique from the fuuinjutsu as well as that header. These academy techniques don't count towards your 15 jutsu limit so you have room for 5 more.
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Updated.
I am aware I can have more jutsu but this is fine for now. I did however add in Fuuton as an element. As to add any Fuuton Jutsu I believe would be a contradiction to my character as he does not really do ninjutsu. However, I will develop some Fuuton jutsu to go along with weaponry in the future that is why I placed it there.
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Approved, one of two.
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Emperor of Rock
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  • I'd like to see a longer appearance. At least 500 words
  • Origin is for the country. For you it would be Fire Country or Hi No Kuni
  • For weaponry you must choose two of the three ranges [Close (0-5m), Mid (5-10m), Long (10+)]. Seeing how you have a bow in your scrolls, you will have to have the Long range and you are free to choose one more.

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Emperor of Rock wrote:
  • I'd like to see a longer appearance. At least 500 words
  • Origin is for the country. For you it would be Fire Country or Hi No Kuni
  • For weaponry you must choose two of the three ranges [Close (0-5m), Mid (5-10m), Long (10+)]. Seeing how you have a bow in your scrolls, you will have to have the Long range and you are free to choose one more.


Where would I list these weapon ranges?
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In the specialties, like this
Weaponry [Close, Long]

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Updated.
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Approved 2/2
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Archived.
Due to inactivity.
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