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| Subject: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:08 pm | |
| Basic Information:
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:08 pm | |
| Clan Information:
Clan Name: Itsuhara
Clan Location: Kumogakure
Clan Traits: N/A
Kekkei Genkai: The Itsuhara family does not have a special ability of their own. Though every member of the clan is born with a certain disease. Though it can't be called a disease only in some ways. Members of the clan see everything in a different way. Meaning they are able to learn stuff in seconds that others cannot learn in hours. They also see everything in shapes, for a matter of fact if they see a horse they look around him determining the length, height, and in over all determining the weight of the horse by simply looking at him. The same with people. They can 'scan' their opponents a few time and try to find if anything is wrong with them. Any supernatural or not formal weakness that will put them to their advantages. They just need to simply see it then they would have it memorized in their minds. The ability is yet unknown to many people though members of the clan have their weaknesses and their strength. Because their mind is more 'advanced' they can learn stuff in matter of second about the opponent and use it agains this opponent by simply looking at him. Because they have so much in their minds he cannot be spoken by much people at a time, though a severe headache will grown instantly and make him weak. He can't also hear loud noises, otherwise he will become nervous and in some way find a way to calm down. At this state they cannot talk, or even fight and the only thing in their head will be running away form the sound or do anything they can to stop it. Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A
History: The Itsuhara clan was mainly born in Kumogakure. The family remained for years in the village without having to take actions or even living as a ninja. They were mere civilians in the village. Though these civilians that were part of the Itsuhara family were known by their curse. A curse that made them famous around the whole fire country, years after they decided to finally get into the whole ninja life. And be like others. They were tired of being a simple family, they wanted to be like others and serve their village. Little by little they began to enroll themselves in the academy school. Some kids were able to resist their disease even in the school and some managed to be enroll themselves in the academy school. Soon after a while those academy students managed to be full ninjas and some were even Jounin of the village and others were Anbu of the village. These whom were ninja weren’t afraid of actually getting hurt. Others preerred to stay as civilians were often scared of getting hurt or even of the outside world and decided to stay in their houses. Many remained harmless others decided to take the role as criminals and others the life of the ninja. To protect or destroy was their goal. Clan Details: Open
Rank Information:
Rank: Chuunin
Village Affiliation: Kumogakure No Sato.
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main:Weaponry Main: Exotic Sub: Polearm Sub: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity:
Main: Katon [Fire] Sub: Fuuton [Wind] Special Characteristics: Able Bodied The character is in excellent physical shape. He heals quickly and is seldom ill.
Photographic Memory The character remembers everything he sees and hears with absolute clarity. To represent this extraordinary gift, the player controlling the character should take copious notes throughout play to represent his character's memory.
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:09 pm | |
| Jutsu Template: Jutsus:
Custom Fire Jutsu C / A Rank - Spoiler:
Name: Flame Dart Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire [Katon] Description: By performing a single hand signs the user will open his palm and fire will generate in top of his palm creating a small dagger that looks like a dart. It can be thrown at high speeds at the opponent. Its able to burn the skin abit. Or the user can release a bunch of dagger like darts at the opponent as soon as they are created they will release to the opponent. It releases about 5 long daggers to the opponent.
Name: Small Fireball Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: Fire [Katon] Description: A technique that is similar to the fire ball technique. It needs the same requirements except it takes up less chakra than the normal fireball itself. It is smaller and causes less damage.
Name: Fire Arrow Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Katon Description: By performing a set of hand signs the user will create an arrow to burt out of the tip of the finger at his opponent. This will be strong enough to burn skin flesh.
Name: Solar Flare Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fre Description:The user collects chakra in their hand and shoots it into the sky where it explodes, making a powerful light for a few posts. The purpose of this jutsu is tolight up dark areas, but can it can be used for defencive purposes.
Name: Phoenix Rotation Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description:After the needed hand seals are performed, the user spins around in a 360 direction. Small yet harmful fireballs are released in all directions. About 10 fireballs will be released. Capable of burning the skin.
Name: Fire Encasement Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description: After performing the necessary hand signs the user will engulf themselves with flames. Creating a 360 degree bubble made out of fire around him. This will stop anyone from getting close without burning. Though this does not burn the user. Though this can be used for about 5 posts before his chakra is drained out. The area of this bubble is of about 15 meters.
Name: Red Burning Feathers Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description:After performing the necessary hand signs the user will form a large cloud that will expel from their hands of red feathers that will fly and float around. They look like crow feathers though when they are touched the ignite creating a big explosion.
Name: Fire Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description: This jutsu allow you to surround a weapon completely with fire increasing its power and possibly its length. This allow the user to increase a burning effect on the weapons and if they come in contact with the person they cause severe burning damage and blisters.
Custom Weaponry
C / A - Spoiler:
Name: Heat Slice Type: Weaponry Rank: C/A Element: Katon Description: A technique that one requires to slice the ground with the weapon. This will cause friction with the ground and the weapon and cause the weapon to become heated. In this the user can slice the opponent and burn them the same time. (C) Cause minor burns. (B) Cause more damaging burns. Hurts like 50 bee stings on your body. (A) Causes severe burns and blisters.May fry the skin in some parts. Causing the area to be immobilized for 1 post.
Name: Fire Arrow Type: Weaponry Rank: C Element: Fire Description:By performing a set of hand signs the user will make an arrow that is being shot at the opponent to turn into flames. Enhancening the power and speed of the normal arrow.
Name: Wind Chains Manipulation Type: Ninjutsu/Weaponry Rank: C Element: Fuuton Description: By manipulating wind the user can manipulate the chains that they tend to use. This will allow for faster movements as well as to increase the length of the chains to reach farther areas. Increases the length up to 5 feet.
Name: Coiled Serpent Type: Weaponry Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Using a polearm, this attack uses a twist and snap motion to attack. The twist motion breaks down the defence of the enemy, while the snap strikes the enemy at full power. This is combined with an element by stronger ninjas to deal some real damage.
Name: Cutting Weapon Type: Weaponry Rank: C Element: N/A Description: The user sends chakra through the blade/weapon, which releases in a burst of energy. The energy is visible, and flies off the blade when slashed through the air. This is a simple and almost has no effect at all though it has a long range of 20 feet.
Name: Star Shower Technique Type: Weaponry Rank: B Element: N/A Description: This allows for the user to use a bow and shoot out about 30 small start like bullets at his opponent in about 3 seconds. This can all be shot continously or one at a time so it last longer. This reaches up to 20 meters.
Name: Crush Slap Type: Weaponry Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Using a pole arm gale force is made sending a burst of air from the weapon in possession to blow the opponent back. Can get incredible results upon impact being able to send the opponent flying into a wall or obstacle.
Name: Rapid Crushing Technique Type: Weaponry Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Using a pole arm the user will strike the opponent rapidly. Every hit its harder because the user gathers speed as he keeps on going. The last hit the pole arm will shot out a blast of chakra to the opponent sending the back about a few meters away.
Cannon Fire Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.
Name: Head Mincing Pain Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Description: Katon • Zukokku is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kakuzu. After releasing the Fire elemental from his body, Kakuzu will command the entity to release a large flaming mass from its mouth. This mass will quickly spread along the ground and race towards its target, burning anything in its path.
Name: Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.
Name: Endan - Fireball Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.
Custom Fuuton Jutsu C / A - Spoiler:
Name: Wind Pulse Type:Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: This move does not require hand signs the user will simply stand and use the wind around him will form around his feet. This will only give a hard push from beneath the feet making the user fly onto the direction they are standing. This will instantly for a 1 post increase the speed for about 20%. Thus allow you to jump higher.
Name: Petal Blade Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fuuton Description: After performing the necessary hand sign the user will focus his wind chakra on a petal leaf. This will somewhat harden the petal leaf and sort of give it a shine to it. This petal leaf can be used as a small blade and thrown at high speeds. (It has the normal cutting effects as a shuriken)
Name: Wind Chains Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fuuton Description: After doing the hand signs the user will manipulate the air around the opponent. Then manipulating it to a certain density and wrap the opponent with the air creating chains to wrap the opponent until they are unable to move.
Name: Wind Shield Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Wind Description: By manipulating the wind around him he will form a shiled on his hand that is able to cover his whole frontal body. This thin layer of air is able to stop taijutsu attacks and even weapon jutsu that comes near him.
Basic Jutsu E / A - Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Other commonly known Techniques
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance..
Custom Basic Jutsu
E / A
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Name: Advanced Hiding on an Object Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A ninjutsu technique that allows you to get inside any animal around the place to travel to another location. This is just like the Hidden in a Toad technique except you can go in any animal around to go anywhere without being spotted.
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:10 pm | |
| Weapon Template:
Name:Arrow Quiver Quantity: 1 Rank: C/B/A Appearance: http://img.alibaba.com/photo/255156765/archery_Belt_Quiver.summ.jpg | Special Abilities/Characteristics:A special assembly quiver, laid out with special storage seals on the inside. This allows to carry more arrows than a normal quiver could possibly hold. The C ranked version can have up to 100, The B ranked up to 300, and The A Ranked up to 500 arrows sealed inside. Origin:
Name: Chain Quantity:2 Rank: C Appearance:The Chain Saber is twelve inches overall with a six and a half inch blade, and is made almost exclusively of iron. It stretches up to 10 feet. Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin:
Name: Danger Quantity: 2 Rank: C Appearance: A very crude version of a normal curved dagger, the jagged dirk is even more dangerous. It's jagged edges will surely leave torn wounds, whether the user slashes or thrusts at his opponent. There is also a small spike on the back of its hilt which can be used to counter an arm wrench. | Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin:
Name: Trident Pole Arm Quantity: 1 Rank: C Appearance: A weapon normally around 5 to 8 ft in length. the handle is what makes up most of the size which can be either wood or some metallic material around one inch thick. with one long point that is sharp on both sides. similar to a knife with two shorter ones on the side. the large point is around six inches to one foot | Special Abilities/Characteristics: N?A Origin:
Name: Winged Spear Quantity: 1 Rank: C Appearance: The winged spear's tip is a double-sided straight blade, and it has two small blades sticking to the sides at its base. The spear's total length is approximately 6 feet. | Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin:
Name: Dual Scythe Quantity: 1 Rank: C Appearance: very uncommon weapon. There aren't many who use scythe-type weapons, some due to the belief that a scythe is a peasant's tool. But this special scythe was developed especially and for the sole purpose of killing things. It has two sharp inwardly curved blades to either side of the pole. Total length is about 6 feet. | Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin:
Name: Iron Plate Armor Quantity: 1 Rank: C Appearance: The armor is made of a lot of interlocking plates of soft iron, allowing for more flexibility than most full body armor would allow. On the pinky side of each wrist is a clasp, where a Katanas/weapons hilt can be placed. The blade can be placed pointing forward, and slightly in, for stabbing and extra range, or pointing backwards, for slicing and blocking. | Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin:
All the weapons were made by a fellow blacksmith in Kumo. https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/character-applications-f11/eilforte-itsuhara-wip-t593.htm#4423
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:10 pm | |
| Background Information History: ~~Enter the Itsuhara Prodigy:(Birth Arc) Eilforte was born in Konoha. Among many of the clans that stood in it. He himself was part of a clan or a family which ever you may call it. Though his family didn't had a kekkei genkai though most likely something that is like a curse that many thinks is good to have. Many of the Itsuhara clan members do not live long due to their disease. Though those who live long they live long enough to make a living of themselves.
Eilforte was born a small branch of the family, the family where he was on was most like a middle class at the moment. Though the family often used to be on missions so he wasn't one of those kid who played with anyone. Though very kind he developed a second personality. For being a lone in the dark with no one to live with he developed this evil ish personality that most fear.
Eilforte ofcourse has the same disease every other family member have though he used this disease as an advatange. It allow him to see better and the things clearly with no trouble. For that reason his mind work like a puzzle, and it's just to hard to be controlled by anyone. At the age of 6 was when he first committed his first crime. At this point although alone he had pretty much the intelligence of a smart 15 year old boy. He acted like one too.
At that age he noticed he didn't spent much time with his parents. For that same reason in one cold night when his parents came back from a mission. He surprised them, he knew every weakness that a family member of the Itsuhara clan member had and he used it to his best. He manage to kill the two parents and left his little sister alive. Not because he thought she was pathetic but because he knew she would someday comfront him in the future.
That same day he managed to get rid of the bodies, where no one would actually find them. He dropped them in the village's dump. There he went back to the village, and enrolled himself on the Academy.
Entering the Academy: (Academy School Arc)To everyone he seemed like a very quiet person though some had experienced his full personality head on. Most used to bother him, because of his disease. The thing was that they didn't knew that this disease was basically a power that Eilforte used to his best and as good as possibly.
Like always he turned bad things into good thing where he could make of good use. He spent about 2 years and a half in the academy until he was about 9 years old. Where he could graduated he didn't and decided to leave school and work on his training by himself. Since that point he was training the best he could. Until he couldn't no more he stood training by others side until he reached his strong point at his age.
He was actually the strongest genin among most of the village genin and he had proven so by fighting with them. Though a new generation had been born and most of them are to be careful of. At this point he was as evil as a talking bear that wants honey. And decided that he could no longer live in Konoha. Rumors were around that he was gonna be on a full time jail for the murder of his parents. Though there was no proof he had done it. But that was what most people though of Eilforte.
Leaving the Village: (Kumogakure Arc) Sucesfully he had left the village. Far from the boring life of Konoha. And now he was heading towards Kumogakure village in search of a new home. He spent many years traveling about 4 years to be exact until he was at the age of 15. He had perfect figure, and even though he had a disease he was practically perfect in any way. At 15 years old was when he had received most of his weapon in Kumo. From a fellow black smith he met as soon as he entered the village.
The blacksmith introduced himself as Cross Momonex. And since then the blacksmith had begun to make weapons for Eilforte. Since the Cross had been like a dad for Eilforte. Then he enrolled himself in the village as one of the genin. Starting a new life as a genin and beginning to understand people.
Role-Play Sample: He was plainly alerted of his surroundings. His bugs quickly began to run around in look out for his opponent. He couldn't quite get where the boy was though Taiko had somehow guessed where the boy was. There was nothing around where he could possibly hide except in the small forest. It wouldn't be called a forest though as it was just about 20 feet of area with trees. At the moment he wasn't minding the other, as of matter of fact he didn't even payed attention to him.
"I got to watch out for the other Jounin too." Taiko said as he began to run towards the forest where he could go in and disguise himself and his bugs. As he was running towards the forest he grabbed about two smoke bombs form his back pouch and threw them inside the forest as his body completely got engulfed among it. Now there was no sight for anyone to see inside it.
Though at this point Taiko would have the advantage on a place like this. About 30 bugs had already spread around the place. One in each trees and the ground in look out for his opponent. After about 5 seconds the bugs had spotted the opponent. Standing among the forest. "Got you little brat." Taiko said as he began to perform hand signs and charged some medical chakra onto his fist. Then performed another single hand signs and covered his body so much that it looked only like his shadow until he ran towards in front of the boy.
He couldn't really see him though he knew the location because of his bugs so that's all he needed to know. As soon as he felt his presence he trusted his palm against the boy's chest, or at least that's what he could feel. He felt his hand slap against his chest, though he was un-sure if it was.
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| | | Ace
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 6:30 pm | |
| Completion bump. |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 6:43 pm | |
| The things you have under skill information should be under special characteristics
physical appearance must be a picture and 2 paragraphs, or just 2 paragraphs
Check the weaponry guide for all the types, but you must pick a main and sub for weaponry or kenjutsu (Such as "Main:Sword Sub:Exotic")
based on what you choose, you'll have to change the weapons you have
A smaller fireball would be D rank
How many fireballs are released in phoenix rotation?
I don't know that a flash of light is really an ability of Katon
For fire arrow, fire can't pierce, only burn
No Chakra infused weaponry at below B rank, this occurs in a few of your weaponry jutsu
Wind pulse isn't very well explained |
| | | Ace
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Thu 04 Mar 2010, 7:15 pm | |
| I fixed the stuff, Though I kind of left 'Heat Slice' since you can still make friction and heat the weapon. So it wouldn't matter whether it had katon or not.
I cant seem to find the Weaponry Guide, anywhere at all. But I guess Im planning to use only weapons, not like sword and kenjutsu related thing. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Fri 05 Mar 2010, 8:59 am | |
| There is a chuunin position open that I would like you to go for, as in my eyes this application is good enough. So edit it to a B-ranked Chuunin and anything else you want to add. I will have a look at it. ^^ |
| | | Ace
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| Subject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Fri 05 Mar 2010, 5:04 pm | |
| I added some B rank Jutsu and now I also need to get my clan approved. And then I might just be able to get started. Thank you for the position. |
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