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PostSubject: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 5:08 pm

Basic Information:

    Name: Eilforte Itsuhara

    Secondary Title:

    Age: 15

    Gender: Male

    Physical Appearance:
    Eilforte Normal Look
    Eilforte Battle Clothing

    In his normal look clothing Eilforte is very formal and wears some what of a robe. Depending on the situation he tends to wear very much different colors for every day. He has long blue jet hair that goes down just about his chest. Often wrapped up with a metal band into a pony tail. And a long bang which covers his right eye. He has blue eyes and very thin brows. He stands out to be about 5'11 and weights about 140 pounds without clothing. His top clothing is white while his bottom clothing is blue and sometimes the opposite. Most of the times he flips the colors. He wears blue sandals and on the side he tends to carry his dual scythe in case anything happens in anytime.

    His battle clothing is very trashy looking. Because he has gone through a lot almost the whole clothing is ripped up. He wears a black shirt underneath his armor. And on top of his armor he has his black cloack that pretty much covers the entire armor. Everyone that would look at him would think of him as very weird. And he is as his clothing is prety much messed up and tore up. His pants look like very much like old black pants from centuries ago, it is very much also tore up and dirty. While at the belt of the pants it has more like a hanger where he places his dual scythe and other weapons around it.

    Personality:
    Eilforte has no family what so ever therefore he tends to be a little lonely now a day. Because he has no family to share with he is very selfish and at very most cocky. He loves to train as well as to show what he has trained. Because of that most of the time he ends up getting into trouble. He makes harsh full decisions at every point of his life. When he is alone he tends to take naps all day if necessary. Though most of the time he chooses to trains until he can’t train any more. Because he is seriously ill he tends to take care of himself. And of course he puts his health before anything in his life. He rather takes care of himself than to take care of another. Since small he was thought that at some point he should be selfish because if he isn’t people would take advantage of him for being too kind. Tough at some time when he feels and know people are taking advantage of him he rather takes up another personality. And slowly this personality grows inside of him making him more devil-ish and he rather wants to kill everything that is in front of him.

    Eilforte in battle is very serious, he loves to fight though his mind somehow work differently than other people around him. In battle is where his kkg appears though not a kekkei genkai it should be considered as ability. Since small children’s members of the Itsuhara clan develop a rare disease. Though a disease it helps them in every way in life. And is rather a gift. Eilforte is very tactical and smart in battle and most likely to beat an opponent before they can realize what Eilforte can do. He is very fast and stealthy and with his ability of the clan he is even more deadly.

    When it c comes to girls. Eilforte is very gentle and likes to make women comfortable. And in any way offend her. He likes a woman who is strong and would defend herself. As he thinks that a women who can’t defend her self is simply on his way. He likes them very mature. He also likes a woman who trusts him in every way and doesn’t brag about everything.

    Catch Phrase:
    "Do I got to answer that?"

    "I'm better off alone."

    "Damn kids"


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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 5:08 pm

Clan Information:

    Clan Name: Itsuhara

    Clan Location: Kumogakure

    Clan Traits: N/A

    Kekkei Genkai:
    The Itsuhara family does not have a special ability of their own. Though every member of the clan is born with a certain disease. Though it can't be called a disease only in some ways. Members of the clan see everything in a different way. Meaning they are able to learn stuff in seconds that others cannot learn in hours. They also see everything in shapes, for a matter of fact if they see a horse they look around him determining the length, height, and in over all determining the weight of the horse by simply looking at him. The same with people. They can 'scan' their opponents a few time and try to find if anything is wrong with them. Any supernatural or not formal weakness that will put them to their advantages. They just need to simply see it then they would have it memorized in their minds. The ability is yet unknown to many people though members of the clan have their weaknesses and their strength. Because their mind is more 'advanced' they can learn stuff in matter of second about the opponent and use it agains this opponent by simply looking at him. Because they have so much in their minds he cannot be spoken by much people at a time, though a severe headache will grown instantly and make him weak. He can't also hear loud noises, otherwise he will become nervous and in some way find a way to calm down. At this state they cannot talk, or even fight and the only thing in their head will be running away form the sound or do anything they can to stop it.
    Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A

    History:
    Eilforte Itsuhara Lg_Tb0120

    The Itsuhara clan was mainly born in Kumogakure. The family remained for years in the village without having to take actions or even living as a ninja. They were mere civilians in the village. Though these civilians that were part of the Itsuhara family were known by their curse. A curse that made them famous around the whole fire country, years after they decided to finally get into the whole ninja life. And be like others. They were tired of being a simple family, they wanted to be like others and serve their village. Little by little they began to enroll themselves in the academy school. Some kids were able to resist their disease even in the school and some managed to be enroll themselves in the academy school. Soon after a while those academy students managed to be full ninjas and some were even Jounin of the village and others were Anbu of the village. These whom were ninja weren’t afraid of actually getting hurt. Others preerred to stay as civilians were often scared of getting hurt or even of the outside world and decided to stay in their houses. Many remained harmless others decided to take the role as criminals and others the life of the ninja. To protect or destroy was their goal.
    Clan Details:
    Open


Rank Information:

    Rank: Chuunin

    Village Affiliation:
    Kumogakure No Sato.


Special Information:

    Character Speciality:

    Main:Weaponry
    Main: Exotic
    Sub: Polearm
    Sub: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity:

    Main: Katon [Fire]
    Sub: Fuuton [Wind]
    Special Characteristics:
    Able Bodied
    The character is in excellent physical shape. He heals quickly and is seldom ill.

    Photographic Memory
    The character remembers everything he sees and hears with absolute clarity. To represent this extraordinary gift, the player controlling the character should take copious notes throughout play to represent his character's memory.


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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 5:09 pm

Jutsu Template:
Jutsus:
Custom Fire Jutsu
C / A Rank
Spoiler:

Custom Weaponry

C / A
Spoiler:

Cannon Fire Jutsu
Spoiler:

Custom Fuuton Jutsu
C / A
Spoiler:

Basic Jutsu
E / A
Spoiler:

Custom Basic Jutsu

E / A

Spoiler:


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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 5:10 pm

Weapon Template:

Name:Arrow Quiver
Quantity: 1
Rank: C/B/A
Appearance:
http://img.alibaba.com/photo/255156765/archery_Belt_Quiver.summ.jpg

Special Abilities/Characteristics:A special assembly quiver, laid out with special storage seals on the inside. This allows to carry more arrows than a normal quiver could possibly hold. The C ranked version can have up to 100, The B ranked up to 300, and The A Ranked up to 500 arrows sealed inside.
Origin:

Name: Chain
Quantity:2
Rank: C
Appearance:The Chain Saber is twelve inches overall with a six and a half inch blade, and is made almost exclusively of iron. It stretches up to 10 feet.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin:

Name: Danger
Quantity: 2
Rank: C
Appearance:
A very crude version of a normal curved dagger, the jagged dirk is even more dangerous. It's jagged edges will surely leave torn wounds, whether the user slashes or thrusts at his opponent. There is also a small spike on the back of its hilt which can be used to counter an arm wrench.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin:

Name: Trident Pole Arm
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance:
A weapon normally around 5 to 8 ft in length. the handle is what makes up most of the size which can be either wood or some metallic material around one inch thick. with one long point that is sharp on both sides. similar to a knife with two shorter ones on the side. the large point is around six inches to one foot

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N?A
Origin:

Name: Winged Spear
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance:
The winged spear's tip is a double-sided straight blade, and it has two small blades sticking to the sides at its base. The spear's total length is approximately 6 feet.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin:

Name: Dual Scythe
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance:
very uncommon weapon. There aren't many who use scythe-type weapons, some due to the belief that a scythe is a peasant's tool. But this special scythe was developed especially and for the sole purpose of killing things. It has two sharp inwardly curved blades to either side of the pole. Total length is about 6 feet.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin:

Name: Iron Plate Armor
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance:
The armor is made of a lot of interlocking plates of soft iron, allowing for more flexibility than most full body armor would allow. On the pinky side of each wrist is a clasp, where a Katanas/weapons hilt can be placed. The blade can be placed pointing forward, and slightly in, for stabbing and extra range, or pointing backwards, for slicing and blocking.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin:

All the weapons were made by a fellow blacksmith in Kumo. https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/character-applications-f11/eilforte-itsuhara-wip-t593.htm#4423


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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 5:10 pm

Background Information

History:
~~Enter the Itsuhara Prodigy:(Birth Arc) Eilforte was born in Konoha. Among many of the clans that stood in it. He himself was part of a clan or a family which ever you may call it. Though his family didn't had a kekkei genkai though most likely something that is like a curse that many thinks is good to have. Many of the Itsuhara clan members do not live long due to their disease. Though those who live long they live long enough to make a living of themselves.

Eilforte was born a small branch of the family, the family where he was on was most like a middle class at the moment. Though the family often used to be on missions so he wasn't one of those kid who played with anyone. Though very kind he developed a second personality. For being a lone in the dark with no one to live with he developed this evil ish personality that most fear.

Eilforte ofcourse has the same disease every other family member have though he used this disease as an advatange. It allow him to see better and the things clearly with no trouble. For that reason his mind work like a puzzle, and it's just to hard to be controlled by anyone. At the age of 6 was when he first committed his first crime. At this point although alone he had pretty much the intelligence of a smart 15 year old boy. He acted like one too.

At that age he noticed he didn't spent much time with his parents. For that same reason in one cold night when his parents came back from a mission. He surprised them, he knew every weakness that a family member of the Itsuhara clan member had and he used it to his best. He manage to kill the two parents and left his little sister alive. Not because he thought she was pathetic but because he knew she would someday comfront him in the future.

That same day he managed to get rid of the bodies, where no one would actually find them. He dropped them in the village's dump. There he went back to the village, and enrolled himself on the Academy.

Entering the Academy: (Academy School Arc)To everyone he seemed like a very quiet person though some had experienced his full personality head on. Most used to bother him, because of his disease. The thing was that they didn't knew that this disease was basically a power that Eilforte used to his best and as good as possibly.

Like always he turned bad things into good thing where he could make of good use. He spent about 2 years and a half in the academy until he was about 9 years old. Where he could graduated he didn't and decided to leave school and work on his training by himself. Since that point he was training the best he could. Until he couldn't no more he stood training by others side until he reached his strong point at his age.

He was actually the strongest genin among most of the village genin and he had proven so by fighting with them. Though a new generation had been born and most of them are to be careful of. At this point he was as evil as a talking bear that wants honey. And decided that he could no longer live in Konoha. Rumors were around that he was gonna be on a full time jail for the murder of his parents. Though there was no proof he had done it. But that was what most people though of Eilforte.

Leaving the Village: (Kumogakure Arc)
Sucesfully he had left the village. Far from the boring life of Konoha. And now he was heading towards Kumogakure village in search of a new home. He spent many years traveling about 4 years to be exact until he was at the age of 15. He had perfect figure, and even though he had a disease he was practically perfect in any way. At 15 years old was when he had received most of his weapon in Kumo. From a fellow black smith he met as soon as he entered the village.

The blacksmith introduced himself as Cross Momonex. And since then the blacksmith had begun to make weapons for Eilforte. Since the Cross had been like a dad for Eilforte. Then he enrolled himself in the village as one of the genin. Starting a new life as a genin and beginning to understand people.

Role-Play Sample:
He was plainly alerted of his surroundings. His bugs quickly began to run around in look out for his opponent. He couldn't quite get where the boy was though Taiko had somehow guessed where the boy was. There was nothing around where he could possibly hide except in the small forest. It wouldn't be called a forest though as it was just about 20 feet of area with trees. At the moment he wasn't minding the other, as of matter of fact he didn't even payed attention to him.

"I got to watch out for the other Jounin too." Taiko said as he began to run towards the forest where he could go in and disguise himself and his bugs. As he was running towards the forest he grabbed about two smoke bombs form his back pouch and threw them inside the forest as his body completely got engulfed among it. Now there was no sight for anyone to see inside it.

Though at this point Taiko would have the advantage on a place like this. About 30 bugs had already spread around the place. One in each trees and the ground in look out for his opponent. After about 5 seconds the bugs had spotted the opponent. Standing among the forest. "Got you little brat." Taiko said as he began to perform hand signs and charged some medical chakra onto his fist. Then performed another single hand signs and covered his body so much that it looked only like his shadow until he ran towards in front of the boy.

He couldn't really see him though he knew the location because of his bugs so that's all he needed to know. As soon as he felt his presence he trusted his palm against the boy's chest, or at least that's what he could feel. He felt his hand slap against his chest, though he was un-sure if it was.


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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 6:30 pm

Completion bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 6:43 pm

The things you have under skill information should be under special characteristics

physical appearance must be a picture and 2 paragraphs, or just 2 paragraphs

Check the weaponry guide for all the types, but you must pick a main and sub for weaponry or kenjutsu (Such as "Main:Sword Sub:Exotic")

based on what you choose, you'll have to change the weapons you have

A smaller fireball would be D rank

How many fireballs are released in phoenix rotation?

I don't know that a flash of light is really an ability of Katon

For fire arrow, fire can't pierce, only burn

No Chakra infused weaponry at below B rank, this occurs in a few of your weaponry jutsu

Wind pulse isn't very well explained
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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 7:15 pm

I fixed the stuff, Though I kind of left 'Heat Slice' since you can still make friction and heat the weapon. So it wouldn't matter whether it had katon or not.

I cant seem to find the Weaponry Guide, anywhere at all. But I guess Im planning to use only weapons, not like sword and kenjutsu related thing.
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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyFri 05 Mar 2010, 8:59 am

There is a chuunin position open that I would like you to go for, as in my eyes this application is good enough. So edit it to a B-ranked Chuunin and anything else you want to add. I will have a look at it. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyFri 05 Mar 2010, 5:04 pm

I added some B rank Jutsu and now I also need to get my clan approved. And then I might just be able to get started. Thank you for the position.
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PostSubject: Re: Eilforte Itsuhara Eilforte Itsuhara EmptyMon 29 Mar 2010, 2:36 pm

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