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Ichikawa Nakayama
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| NAKAYAMA, ICHIKAWATHE INFO. Name: Nakayama, Ichikawa [The First River in the Mountain] Nickname: N/A Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance:
Ichikawa is a rather tall and lanky young man, his most notable characteristic being his height. Often commented about him is that noticeable stature of his, with his broad shoulders and lengthy limbs. Arms and legs that reach far give him an advantage sometimes, but who's counting that? If you were looking to insult, you could say he was quite like a sloth. That would be exaggerating, however. Ichikawa's body is fit enough for his position as a shinobi, at least he's been working out to keep it that way. Recently, he decided to pick up on the title he had earned a few years back and continue work for his village.
This resulted in his body being once again toned properly for combat, that training having restarted about a year back. From head to toe, you would want to start with Ichikawa's hair. It's quite long, hanging slightly past his neck and onto his back. But all the length isn't just there, it is also quite visible in the front. His hair is often a mess, hanging down with a large strand between his eyes. The rest covers the side of his head, as presented in the picture above. It's very dark in color.
Following this is a pair of dark, yet friendly eyes. You won't find them looking down at you unless you've done something quite wrong, and that's not a common thing for Ichikawa, either. Accompanied with his eyes is a smile, as well as a range of other facial expressions that one can find from time to time. Skin that's somewhat pale is the final layer to all of his appearance, not including his clothing. Thinking of this clothing, the little things should be noted first.
On his feet, Ichikawa wears a pair of black, short-toothed geta. They're made of durable wood that can handle the elements, and accented with a very fine black polish that just doesn't seem to come off. They're by far Ichikawa's favorite pair of footwear considering the other selection of regular sandals. On his left middle finger, Ichikawa also wears a small, blank silver band. The ring doesn't have anything special to it other than a shine, being a simple accessory on his person.
For his actual clothing, Ichikawa wears a pair of navy sweatpants with his tool pouch attached to the right thigh. On parallel sides of his pant lets, Ichikawa also has two small pouches that hold three kunai each. It's a method used by Jounin for easy access to their tools that he adopted for combat, seeing as it makes it much easier to defend oneself in a pinch. The sweatpants have somewhat deep pockets in them, allowing Ichikawa to store other items if he so chooses.
Above this, Ichikawa wears a navy track jacket with a black v-necked undershirt. The jacket's collar sticks up about an inch, giving a sort of frame to his neck, and a place for his hair to hang over. The jacket has two pockets on either side where Ichikawa can rest his hands for warmth or comfort, as well as store items. On the inside of the jacket, there is an additional pocket that can be used to store hidden items or a wallet. Aside from this, Ichikawa doesn't really have anything else. In most cases, he appears like a civilian instead of a ninja, something that he doesn't mind.
As a final touch to his appearance, Ichikawa had his forehead protector sewn onto the left arm of his track jacket. It looks like a band of some sort, or a badge placed on the sleeve. It should also be noted, in regard to the Tool Seal, that he has a small dot placed in the center of his right palm, as well as a dot in his tool pouch. These are the seals used in the technique.
Forehead Protector: Part of his jacket.
Personality:
Ichikawa's personality is quite unique. Part of it can be assessed purely through his handwriting, revealing traits of his mind and how he faces the world with all its different situations. The following is his assessment in terms of his handwriting:
To start, it's been observed that Ichikawa's handwriting is midway between a right and upper slant. His words and sentences seem to lean in the direction like plants growing towards the faintest glimpse of sunlight peeking into their shadowy holes. As Ichikawa is able to relate to both those who withdraw from others and those who seek them, it gives him a level head and the ability to make well thought-out decisions when he deals with people. Even when dealing with high amounts of empathy, sympathy, passion, or rage, especially from those other shinobi, he was capable of taking the unbiased lean.
Looking at some letters individually, we can also see that Ichikawa places his tittles very close to the stem of his I's. This has shown to be a trait of those who are very attentive to details, not missing many, if any, things. The things that are noticed can then be locked in an astounding memory, capable of holding on to them even with age. As for the stem itself, Ichikawa has shown the habit to have needlepoint strokes when writing them, as well as with his N's, M's, and H's. A quality that leads to comprehensive thinking, the ability to quickly size up situations, and increased curiosity. But this also leads to a negative effect: impatience. This can bring about unfavorable outcomes depending on the situation such a vice decides to rear its head. Ichikawa's practice has given him, hopefully, enough patience to keep it from happening.
In his younger years, Ichikawa also had very small handwriting. His concentration could have been labeled unmatched were mental disorders not present in the living world. But with recent times, his handwriting has grown a bit larger, and thus his concentration has slowly expanded to encompass even more things. Oft he'll find his brain whispering to him about things that aren't even important at the time. Rats that hide in his figurative walls, whimpering and scratching until they are acknowledged and set free. A negative quality that could surely be honed and repaired with time.
You'll also find that, along with an even baseline, Ichikawa's D's and T's have short stems rather than tall ones. The traits of both an independent thinker and a perfectionist; a man who sees life different from those who mindlessly conform, and a man who seeks all of his endeavors to be nothing less than precise. When he does have a project, given he can concentrate, Ichikawa will spend much time making sure that it goes as well as is within his human means. But, of course, with slight amounts of impatience can also come frustration. With Y's that do not have complete loops, and rather are stubborn stems that jab down into the next line, it is clear that Ichikawa suffers from physical frustration. Something is missing in his life, be it an obvious thing, it upsets him.
Ichikawa is someone with both positive and negative traits, someone left-handed, and someone with a working brain. Albeit young, Ichikawa is still ticking up above, and he plans to continue doing so for some time to come. His aspirations cannot go unfinished; that would be a shame.
With his handwriting analyzed, it can also be noted that Ichikawa is a kind individual. He's often selfless when it comes to others who need help, but he also isn't stupid about it, like some are. There is a good level of caution when making decisions, and he's not afraid to refuse an unreasonable offer or demand. It could be worded something along the lines as "kind, not merciful." In situations that are leaned more towards the definition of altercation, the traits from above can apply.
A final thing to note about Ichikawa's personality in general is that anger doesn't come very naturally to him, as it takes quite a bit to make him upset with you. You'll know when he is, but it'll require a bit of pushing before that side comes out. A level of confidence also puts some fear to rest, though he's not completely immune, he's not a pussy, either. When it comes to love, it's a very touchy subject. Don't expect that to happen easily.
Clan: N/A Nindō: While it may seem lazy of him, Ichikawa has yet to actually decide upon a Nindo for himself. His experience lacks a little too much for him to effectively decide upon something as potentially permanent as this just yet.
THE NINJA. Origin: Mizu no Kuni Affiliation: Kirigakure no Sato Rank: Genin (C) Specialties: Genjutsu, Fuinjutsu Elemental Affinities: Earth, Wind Combat Style:
Ichikawa's favorite thing isn't fighting people, but he's nonetheless decent at doing it. Usually, there are a variety of tactics that Ichikawa could employ depending on how the fight starts. He may have to observe his opponent's moves and try to deduce their specialties, elements, and range of techniques. Of course, that doesn't always work, and sometimes the enemy doesn't always make the first move.
Instead, he's forced to wait, or to make the first move himself. If anything, observation still plays the key role in his fighting style. Suggesting he has the opportunity, Ichikawa may try to use some of his more 'friendly' genjutsu in an attempt to sway his opponent out of the fight. Considering it's not his favorite thing to do, if he can avoid the altercation altogether and possibly make a friend because of it, that is the better choice to make. It's also useful if he knows the person he's up against is extremely powerful compared to himself, and that can pose serious issues.
If anything, considering Ichikawa's specialties, it will end up being a game of tricks and how convincing he can make those tricks be. Observing for weaknesses, attempting to exploit weaknesses, rinsing, and repeating.
Special Characteristics:
- Spoiler:
Name: Yin Release. Rank: D-S. Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: Must have Genjutsu specialty. Training Requirements: 700. Description: Genjutsu is a notably skillful specialization that requires great intelligence and chakra control in order to perform. Those who have attained this special characteristic have met those criteria which has allowed them to take their illusions to the next plane. Genjutsu fittingly falls under the broad category of Yin Release and it has been revealed that those with superior talent in Genjutsu likewise have greater mastery in Yin Release. This type of mastery allows them to more accurately manipulate the victim's chakra flow to their brain and stimulate more powerful illusions, making you're illusions more realistic and bypassing a persons perception. Because of your more powerful illusions, it now takes double the chakra cost to perform a Kai Release than it normally would for targets.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
- Early Life Arc:
Ichikawa's early life isn't really anything worth noting. Sometime during the year, some 17 years ago, he was born to a modest family with a reasonable amount of money to their name. From that point on, he would simply continue to live comfortably, with the support of loving parents, and regularly making friends that would come and go. Attachments would pass without warning, and new ideals would flourish in Ichikawa's young mind.
Now, perhaps the events of his life weren't that important to note, but they did cause important changes in his mindset as he grew. There's no treatment like the cold treatment of those in your early life, whom have yet to successfully develop themselves. When you get used to the users, the bullies, and the other stereotypes of the world, you can become a little bit more numb in the end. It helps with allowing you to make the right choices, and know who you truly like and want in your social groups. Ichikawa was no exception from these choices, and they did help him grow. But still, this wasn't a very big part of his life.
The biggest event of his childhood was attending the academy for so many years. That was probably the only thing worth noting, seeing as it taught him many skills he would later begin to take advantage of, and progress his abilities. During his time with the academy, Genjutsu and Fuinjutsu appeared to be not only Ichikawa's strong points, but the things that he was most interested in. The arts that did not involve hurting others more than was necessary.
- Academy Graduation to Early Teens Arc:
After Ichikawa's wonderful graduation from the academy and the entitlement of Genin that he earned, his life slowed down somewhat. His parents decided that they wanted him to go to a different sort of school that would further expand his intellect and knowledge. From the age he had graduated to later on in life he would continue to learn different subjects, expanding further in Language, Mathematics, the Arts, and a few other specifics that he chose to study himself when they caught his interest.
Particularly, Ichikawa was interested in the fields of Spagyrics, Botany, Writing, and Psychology. A very odd combination that seemed to go together well for him in his youth. The skills he learned gave him some knowledge of how the mind worked, the ability to write stories if he so chose, an expanded vocabulary paired with increased literacy, as well as some common knowledge about plants and how to get the most out of them through experimental processes. He never ended up expanding these fields into true specialties, but he still withholds their knowledge, and doesn't sacrifice them.
Such as, one concept that had always interested him was experiencing the effects of DMT. Or, otherwise known by its full name, Dimethyltryptamine. It's known in the medical world that this is the result of near-death experiences and power hallucinatory experiences, something that has intrigued Ichikawa since he first learned of it. The idea of death is an interesting concept to him, and the ability to experience it without actually dying is a perplexing thought. The experience has yet to come to him, but he wouldn't mind trying it. As such, the thought remains in his mind.
If Ichikawa were to attempt to experience those aforementioned effects, he does know the recipe for the material by heart. His studies of botany grant him the brief knowledge to find the proper plants, too. Spagyrics showed him the process of brewing it, but he never had the motivation to go out and do it alone. Simply for the matter that if something did go wrong, it wasn't good to be in a paralyzed state. Regardless, an interest is an interest. Maybe he'll try it in the future, with someone else who can indulge in the subject.
Another skill that Ichikawa learned from his studies was the ability to detect personality traits based on certain types of handwriting habits. As it was mentioned in his personality, he spent much time practicing this on himself, learning about the way his own mind worked. To be able to better understand one's own mind is a wonderful feat, as it brings you closer to making positive changes in your ethics and attitudes. But, that's not important now. There were others things that Ichikawa picked up, but life soon swept him away again as he made other choices.
- Early Adulthood Arc:
Once his additional schooling had been finished, Ichikawa spent much of his time up until the last year living the life of a civilian. Having fallen out of line for participating in a Jounin's team due to being in another school, he hadn't taken the opportunity to return to ninja life until recently. While outside of that occupation, he worked in other simple jobs, making money for himself and saving up for things he enjoyed. Of course, that wasn't the most exciting thing, and when he realized that he didn't want to continue doing that, Ichikawa made his return to the life of a Shinobi.
Now, utilizing the skills he learned in his youth, he's making his comeback and building a future. The very first steps to that were practicing his known techniques, developing a few extras as practice after a long break, and then attempting to find a mentor to once again show him the powers of ninja. Not that he'd seriously forgotten, but to show him more of that power. The abilities that came with being beyond a mere Genin level. The thought was absorbing for Ichikawa, the pondering as to what he could do with himself when he had the ability to protect his desires and interests.
What could a civilian do against a Jounin? Nothing at all, really. Unless they were one lucky bastard, it was all too true that they would need experience to be remotely capable. Ichikawa wasn't going to be that weakling. There was more to things than that. Nowadays, Ichikawa can be found attempting work as a Shinobi, seeking a sensei, or simply at home with his parents. They live in a reasonably large home, about 3,000 sq ft, two stories. Outfitted with a large kitchen full of almost every piece of cooking equipment one could imagine, a decent living room and den with modern (site modern) electronics and other entertainment facilities, furniture, and whatnot. Three full bathrooms and a garage with some spare tools in it, as well as a bicycle. The garage hasn't really been touched for awhile due to Ichikawa's father being a busy man.
Ichikawa's room in particular has a queen sized bed with several blankets upon it and about six pillows, since he sleeps comfortably. His wardrobe has a few different outfits which may be used in character in later topics, as well as spare tools that didn't fit into his pouch or holsters. There's a rather comfortable couch in the corner of the room with a table in front of it, and on an across wall there is a wide bookshelf containing many articles. From the things that Ichikawa enjoyed studying to other subjects such as clans and their known information, as well as books on the different ninja arts like Ninjutsu and Genjutsu. There is also an encyclopedia of weapons present that Ichikawa has thumbed through a few times, and lastly, a book about Fuinjutsu and its different applications. There are other miscellaneous items around the room that change periodically.
Since he's out more often than not, his room isn't that interesting. There's also a television at the same distance from the table that the couch is, sitting parallel to the couch. This can also be found in the living room and den of the home. Ichikawa, seemingly spoiled as he is already, also has his own laptop. Despite the computer being low power, considering the time period of Naruto and the actual technology it has, it's not extremely useful. However, it can still be used for entertainment if you know the right places to go.
In the back yard of the home, there is a practice area set up for bukijutsu and taijutsu. Seeing as Ichikawa was making his return to being a ninja, he set this up a few months ago to aide with the rigorous practices of physical combat. Even if it's not his specialty, he is still capable of doing it, as any other ninja is.
Roleplay Sample:
- Sample:
It seemed that within a few short moments much had changed about the circumstances of the battlefield; not only did the ground collapse from just under their feet, the boy whom he was fighting had vanished within it. But this did not stop Madara's ascent towards the heavens with yet another jump propelling him higher and higher. He flew through hand seals, but something had interrupted his train of thought as he reached the final hand seal for his technique. All the world around him had come to a brief and momentary silence; the heaving of the storm stopped in a large radius.
With his inhale, it immediately began to move once more, circling quickly and accurately towards the hole Madara now had his eyes on. The other man of their duo was a water release user, and his technique had drawn Madara's interest above what this little man was doing. Such a massive amount of liquid moving without hindrance towards its target, acting as a shield against Madara's own technique. Whatever this man was expecting, he had expected correctly. With a flash, the blazing sun settled ferociously upon the mass of gathering water. Steam and smoke alike rose into the clouds, the sound of the clash being even greater than that of the once raging depression.
The end of the flames' spew signaled Madara's descent back to the earth, his feet making contact with the ground and causing it crack. He stood at the edge of the chasm created by, what he assumed to be another technique of the water release user. Earth and water together would be an interesting combination, as it mirrored the skills of Madara's rival. The mass of water had sunken to the depths of the hole, making it a cesspit of mud and dirt. Kizu emerged from below, but his appearance had changed. He was now covered in black, almost in a perfect chameleon state for the environment they were in.
But his shadow did not save him from Madara's vision, and it even provoked a comment. "Would you look at that? Trash arising from the waste." But this wasn't enough as he arose from the hole and stood parallel to Madara. It seemed his immediate response was an attack, as something dark shot across the vale. While Madara lacked the time he needed to dissect what kind of projectile was being directed his way, it was easily dodged. A simple sidestep saw it sent behind him, and now his attention was directed to the beast that fought on endlessly. The water had carved its fur in the direction of the ripping waves, giving it a seemingly permanent new appearance.
A fun thought entered Madara's mind as his expression twisted into a dark smile. He glanced only momentarily at Kizu, allowing his eyes to shift into the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, their glow being the easiest thing to see at their distance. Looking back at the charging animal with the mixture of beasts protruding from its body, Madara activated only a partial amount of his Susano'o. The sound of bones forming and cracking into existence was followed by the ignition of flames, the purple illuminating a small area around Madara. Half a ribcage surrounded his body, protecting him from any minor interruptions from Kizu. An arm without flesh extended from it, and a large hand swiped up the beast as soon as it came into range.
In a tight grip restricting nearly all movement, Madara turned as the ribcage formed all around him. He looked on at Kizu with his sinister grin, his brow furrowing downward, and his eyes piercing the distance once again. Booming his voice, he called out to Kizu, wanting all of his attention. "This is what I am going to do to you, Shinobi of the Rain." A second arm and hand emerged nearly instantaneously, gripping onto one of the snakes. In a swift, violent tear, the snake was no longer a part of the beast. Blood would spew out incessantly as the snake was tossed down into the pit. "One by one," The next snake was torn from the body and tossed with the other. "I shall rip the limbs from your body," By this point, the animal should have been shrieking as blood coated the fingers of Susano'o.
In the finale, the summon was held head in one hand, and behind in the other, before being ripped completely in half. "As you beg." The bony hands of Susano'o dropped the remainder of the animal down into the pit, and the hands vanished in a haze of purple fire that dissipated in an equally quick time. Ribcage still protecting his body, Madara then leaped up into the air above the pit, flying through a string of hand seals. His exhale brought out a flamethrower of fire, the Great Fireball Technique's second variation, a continuous stream rather than a ball. A wave flew at Kizu before moving downward into the pit, striking the mud where the summon would have sunk.
The heat cooked the surface and most likely a foot under, trapping and immobilizing the animal within. Even with its powers of regeneration, it would take time for it to re-emerge now, and Madara was pleased with the display it granted him. With the flames coming to an end, he descended towards the other side of the pit. If Kizu hadn't moved back from the flames, Madara would land near him, and immediately draw his kama from its resting place. But this encounter wasn't to grant Kizu the privilege of facing Madara in melee combat; instead he body flickered, disappearing from Kizu's immediate range.
The sound of footsteps clanking against the hard metal of the industrial pipes would be very apparent to Sanshu. Madara was standing several feet away from him, still smiling. "I'm going to dance you with next. It would be disrespectful to leave you out of the ball I'm having." Madara's grip tightened on his kama as he prepared to move.
THE ARSENAL.
- Techniques:
- Academy:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Genjutsu:
Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates up to 5 false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it. If these clones leave 5m radius of the caster, they will disappear. Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Far (0m - 20m) Element: - Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. The object must be within 20m of the user. Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single-Target Range: Line of Sight Element: - Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. If the target sees these leaves, the Gen jutsu will be cast. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. Chakra Cost:4 (1 per post)
Name: Ninpou; Sakkaku o Tareru - Dripping Illusion Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single Target; Mental Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: -- Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After the formation of the needed hand seals, the user will face their palms towards the user. Should the target look at the user's hands or arms during that phase, they will be caught under a visual based genjutsu. This genjutsu will cause the noise of dripping water to echo steadily through the target's head to the degree that it becomes hard to hear themselves think. Because of the steady pattern, it is extremely hard to fall asleep with this dripping, and thus it can be used as a torture method against many. The jutsu ends at the end of the topic, if not otherwise dispelled. Chakra Cost: 3 (1 per post)
Name: Flower Petal Escape Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: If the user comes under attack, she or he can use this technique to cover her or his escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the user's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her or his opponent while she or he escapes or hides. This technique works very similarly to substitution, but can also be used to delude the enemy with more flower petal based Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Multi-Target Range: Far (0m - 25m) Element: - Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over. The caster must remain in the shadows, or within 25m of the targets to maintain this Genjutsu. Only 3 people may be influenced by this Genjutsu at one time. Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
Name: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Far (0m - 30m) Element: - Description: After the user forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his or her target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety. The fireball cannot reach further than 30m. Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Ninpou; Kuroi Kiri - Black Mist Nightmare Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Illusion Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Med (5m ~ 10m) Element: -- Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After the formation of the needed hand seals, the user will expel a large amount of black mist from their mouths. The effective range of this genjutsu is ten meters, which is soon covered by the black mist. This genjutsu works in a way to enter the target(s) head and find their darknest fears before creating them and having them emerge from the black mist. Basically, this jutsu is a jutsu that does nothing more than create optical illusions of what the target(s) fears the most in order to pray on their weaknesses and fears during combat. Chakra Cost: 10 (3 per post)
Name: Sore wa daijōbuda, no wa ohanashi shimashou. - It's okay, let's talk. Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Sight (Single Target) or Touch (Single Target) Range: 0-5m (Short) or Touch Element: N/A Description: The user will perform the Snake hand seal before putting their palms together as though they were rubbing their hands, or simply clasping them out of awkwardness. Because of how casual this hand movement can be, it's difficult to tell that this is the initiation of a technique. Either from seeing this hand action take place, or from seeing the face of the user, the victim will be placed under a relaxing genjutsu. This second also has a second form of activation which involves the user placing their hand on the victim in some way, removing the need for hand seals by having direct contact with the victim's chakra.
The actual effects of the technique are very simple, and cause the opponent to be free of anxiety or stress. This can be used when preparing to talk to someone about a touchy subject in order to prevent them from overreacting, or, depending on the circumstances, to avoid a fight by calming their nerves. If the person isn't very stressed to begin with, it's possible the technique can instead cause them to feel happy for a short period of time. It's formed on the basis that in Psychology hand gestures can send different signals to the mind, telling you how to feel about that person's intentions. (In this case, the user's intentions.) The genjutsu lasts three posts, and can be Kai'd out of if the target can truly tell they are under its effects. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post for three posts.)
Name: Joiasu sonzai - Joyous presence. Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Sight (Single Target) Range: 3m Element: N/A Description: The user of this genjutsu will perform this technique in a similar fashion to It's okay, let's talk. The user will perform the Snake hand seal before putting their palms together as though they were rubbing their hands, or simply clasping them out of awkwardness. Because of how casual this hand movement can be, it's difficult to tell that this is the initiation of a technique. After performing the hand seal, the user will give their intended target a charming smile, which will cause the activation of the Genjutsu for the victim.
Upon seeing the user's smile, it will seem as though the user has a metaphorical glow to their person. They will seem exceedingly pleasant to be around, and their presence will feel powerful in regards to the enjoyment the target of the Genjutsu may be feeling at the moment. Depending on how the target reacts, the technique can possibly change the target's disposition towards the user. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post until canceled or for three posts)
Name: Atsuryoku u~ōku no Gen - Pressure Walk Illusion Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Sight (Single Target) Range: 0-5m (Short) Element: N/A Description: After performing a brief set of three hand seals, the user of the technique will crouch and place their hands on the ground. Upon this act being seen, chakra will begin to radiate around them, and it will appear as if little bits of earth are beginning to break apart under them. The visual effect of this Genjutsu is to make it appear as though the user's chakra is extremely heavy, causing significant pressure wherever they walk.
As the user walks closer to the target, the target will begin to feel weight upon their body. The closer the user gets, the more weight they will feel. Halfway to the victim, they will have difficulty moving under the imaginary weight. Upon reaching the victim, the difficulty is increased to be twice as much, and they will most likely lower themselves to the ground as a result. The genjutsu lasts for two posts, and can be Kai'd out of if the victim can determine that it's not a ninjutsu.
For the first post, the user will feel an unusual pressure on their body. On the second post, the pressure is felt more, however the user can pay an additional 4 CP instead of 2 CP in order to make the opponent fall to their knees from the weight. Chakra Cost: 10 (8 + 2 on the first post, unless canceled. 4CP on the second post if the added weight effect is used. If not, only 2CP is paid.)
- Fuinjutsu:
Name: Chozou no Jutsu (Storage Technique) Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1CP to seal, and 1CP to unseal
Name: Gofuu Kekkai - Five Seal Barrier Rank: C Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: The five "kin" (prohibition) seals act together to form a barrier. To remove the barrier, all five tags must be removed at the same moment. They don't all have to be lumped together; being able to be at least a good hundred meters apart Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Shikoku Fuuin - Finger Engraving Seal Rank: C Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user concentrates chakra into their finger and using the heat from that can apply writing on whatever they want. This allows them to write on the skin of animals, iron plates, or a wide range of things. Must be delicate with chakra control when using this technique. If used on flesh; will scar. Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
Name: Tool Seal Rank: D Type: Fuinjutsu Range: Self Element: N/A Description: By placing a seal on their palm and a seal inside their tool pouch, the user of the technique is capable of moving a kunai from within their tool pouch to their palm for easy use. Limited to one use per post, and can only draw a single kunai at a time. Chakra Cost: 3
- Weapon Kit:
Name: Kunai Kit Rank: C Quantity: 1 Contents: 24 Kunai [24], 8 Exploding Notes [8]
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Last edited by Ichikawa Nakayama on Mon 15 Jul 2013, 4:59 am; edited 11 times in total |
| | | Ichikawa Nakayama
Age : 27 Posts : 20
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 14 Jul 2013, 4:57 am | |
| Done. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 14 Jul 2013, 5:18 am | |
| Hey there!
Here are some things I would like to point out:
- First things first, I do suggest adding a Clan and Nindo, but that's a personal preference, and also a "disadvantage" to be clanless.
- Please elaborate more on your history, it is really short and lacks many details. Avoid synopsis and be more descriptive. However, I won't push you if you can't effectively make great changes.
- You have to start off with a standard Kit (we suggest the Genin one) from this list and request to create your own custom one after you're approved and earned EXP Points.
Please take care of these matters so that I can go on and carefully read through your Jutsu. |
| | | Ichikawa Nakayama
Age : 27 Posts : 20
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 14 Jul 2013, 5:31 am | |
| Thanks for pointing out the Nindo. I completely missed that somehow.
The kit has been changed and I've added a bit to my history. Hopefully that'll be enough, since I'm not too sure what else to detail without writing out an arc by itself.
As for the clan, I'd rather stay clanless. More fun that way, less work on the app. It'd be easier if I didn't have to make major edits just to fit into a clan. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 2:58 am | |
| Alright, there are a few things I need to point out.
Tool Seal: Too much for just an E-Ranked technique. Please change to D rank with a high enough cost and limited use after first uses in battle, or maybe once per post and only for single tools. Or else, change it to C rank and have a decent chakra cost, allowing it to seal mutliple tools but with extra cost. And of course, elaborate as much as possible after making the changes.
Let's Talk & It's Okay: These two seem to be pretty similar and serve almost the same purpose. You can blend them into one single jutsu or include the "it's okay" circumstance in "Let's Talk". Also, change the rank and chakra cost to C-Rank, since you mention that the user can affect the way the target is thinking.
Pressure Walk Illusion: As for this one, I can personally give you two options. Either remove it, as it can be misused and become too much for a simple genjutsu, or turn the duration to two posts, stating that during the first post the target simply feels unsusual pressure or weight, or maybe fear. You will, however, need to add an extra cost for the second post in which you actually make the target fall to their knees. You could also resort to giving it a C-B rank according to power and intensity. |
| | | Ichikawa Nakayama
Age : 27 Posts : 20
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 3:21 am | |
| Tool Seal For the tool seal, the intended use was as you described. One item per post per use. I have, however, edited the technique to state that it is only usable for kunai, and only draws one per use, per post. I hope this will keep it E-Rank, unless you still believe that is too much, and I will change it to D accordingly.
LT and IO As for the two techniques which you say are similar, I would like to state that the effects are meant to be significantly different in each one. While in one post it removes anxiety and relaxes, the other technique causes a jolt of excitement, which could create anxiety. It's meant to be a 'powerful', not really powerful, but I suppose potent mood lifter. The effects I am imagining are different in how they work, seeing as the first technique (Let's Talk) isn't meant to make the target happy with anything, just to mellow them out in a sense.
That was a really ramble-ey and probably confusing explanation, but hopefully it shows my point in a reasonable enough manner. If you still want the techniques to be combined after that, I will gladly do so, but I'll need to further specify what they do. What kind of cost should they have for C-Rank if that still applies?
EDIT: I have updated their ranks to C and costs to 4 (1 per post for three posts) and 4.
Pressure Walk Illusion I have edited the Pressure Walk Illusion to further state the effects of each post. I am assuming that the first post is the post after activation. If not, I will revert that to be the post of activation. Please let me know about that.
Thanks. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 3:39 am | |
| Tool Seal: Please change to D and adjust the chakra costs.
LT & IO: You could combine the two in a single one that affects the mood of the target. Relieving, reassuring, exciting, etc. All through the mind or something. I also don't like the fact that you can affect intentions through a D-Rank. A C-Rank one would seem fine with a 6 chakra cost and 1 per post maintaining.
Pressure Walk: Change the range to Close (0-5 m) and make it 2 posts, first one being the post of activation. This is too much to last three posts and having your character walking towards the enemy for three posts, too. In addition, make it 8 chakra points for activation, 2 more for second post maintainance and 4 more to make the target fall on their knees. Total 14. I need it to be less powered as it can easily cost a whole battle if the enemy cannot Kai out of it. |
| | | Ichikawa Nakayama
Age : 27 Posts : 20
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 4:46 am | |
| Tool Seal: Raised the rank to D and changed the cost to 2CP. I can make it higher if that's not enough.
LT & IO: Done. The new technique is in the same place as Let's Talk.
Pressure Walk: Done.
I added a new technique to take up the slot that It's okay once took. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 4:58 am | |
| Tool Seal: Please change to 3CP. It's a rule.
I can't understand why rename that, but if you insist, it's okay by me. Just make sure you don't try and use those two to -let's say- "control" enemies. It will be too much.
After that I can proceed and give you first approval.
Edit: I believe that "Storage Technique" is included in the Academy free techniques. That means it doesn't count for your jutsu limit. |
| | | Ichikawa Nakayama
Age : 27 Posts : 20
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 5:02 am | |
| I have changed the cost of the tool seal. Sorry for not knowing the proper costs right away, I'm still reading through all the rules. Should probably check that stuff first.
I don't plan on using those two at the same time, since it'd end up being unfair to other players. I only planned on using it in a social context, since making someone happy in combat can be disadvantageous when mixed with the improper personality traits. So, don't expect any of those shenanigans from me.
And wonderful. I'm glad to have worked this out. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 5:06 am | |
| Have you seen the edit I made to my post? You have one jutsu slot open.
Other than that, and unless you add anything that needs to be changed,
Character Approved! [1/2]
Good job, sir! |
| | | Ichikawa Nakayama
Age : 27 Posts : 20
| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 5:10 am | |
| I'll go without that last technique for the sake of a quick approval. Thanks for pointing that out, though. It is indeed in the academy techniques. |
| | | CleverYamanaka
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| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 15 Jul 2013, 12:37 pm | |
| Approved [2/2].
Make your account here. |
| | | BK-201
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| Subject: Re: Nakayama, Ichikawa [Kirigakure Genin] Fri 27 Sep 2013, 11:37 am | |
| What in the hell are you going on about now? Stop wasting my time. |
Archived due to inactivity. |
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