Saru Saya - Kiri Chuunin

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

The Formation Yari is fine, howver Wind, keep in mind it does present a high difficulty in use and is historically used in formations due to its inability to be used in close combat. The most common tactic is called the Hedgehog or the Phalanx formation because it kept the advancing foot soldiers at bay. Due to the length, and weight however, once the formations were broken, the pikemen needed a close ranged weapon to utilize in combat or die. Since you have that covered though, again, its not a problem.

As for the range finder, Id like a more detailed explanation of what it can detect. Given its current description, one could assume it could detect anything from a leaf blowing in the wind up to 10 miles away to an enemy ninja 5 miles away. It is really vague and need to be edited as such. Also, 10 miles is too much for a C-Rank, or even up to an A-Rank. thats almost half a marathon. I dont know if youve run one or anything, but thats a really really really big distance. And if there are hill/tree's in the way and it still reaches that range, it definetely needs reworking, because I can see tat happening due to the description.

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Updated. And yeah, I know about the pike, it's just my clan's thing. The clan fights in formation frequently. It's just a range finder so it doesn't detect anything, really. Just measures distance. The reason I chose ten miles for a maximum range, is out to sea, the horizon is about 11 miles away.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Right I'd say we've filtered out all the bad from this application. Smile

Unless anyone has any objections they can unapprove this.

Aaproved! Very Happy

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Archived.