Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin]

Age : 33 Posts : 143

Basic Information:

Name: Fujita, Fushidara

Secondary Title: Fushi (short version of first name)

Age: 14

Gender: male

Physical Appearance:

He is a very thin person with not a lot of muscle showing. Has a little longer the average leg length. Upper body is average for his height and arms are average to. Has a narrow face, and check bones show a little. Has a long neck and adams apple is more the average visible. Hair is color a dark brown almost black and hangs over his eyes some but not where you can’t see them, has a mind of its own and kind of pokes out in spots. Has big dark dark brown eyes, that if u look into hard enough it seems you have fallen into a dark hole.

Wears glasses on face but doesn’t need them just likes the way they look on face and makes him feel smarter. Wears the same pattern of clothes everyday no matter what he is doing, a t-shirt with an open neck and jeans. His forehead protector is tied around his left arm between his elbow and shoulder. Face expressions are that of a smile, where teeth show a bit out of the left side, and one that looks blank when he is think about something. When he pulls up his shirt a belt is revealed revealing all his weapons he uses in battle, in his pocket you can usually find something that would be used in a prank.

Personality:
He tries to seem to be a very out going and happy person on the out side. Tries to fool everybody in to thinking he is happy all the time and has no problems at all. Jokes around a lot and laughs all the time at thing that aren’t even funny to most people. He loves to be around people and make friends but loves just as much to be around an enemy. Loves to be around friends to joke with and play pranks, and to talk about stuff. Likes to be around enemies to talk to see what they have to say about him and try to find out who they really are on the inside.

Inside though he is really a deep thinker that would rather be alone to dwell on his inner thoughts about things. He doesn’t want people to know what he feels inside scared they will judge him to hard. This side of him seems to come out when he is faced with a problem or in a fight. He is also really sad inside about his life and who he is wanting to be more then just a regular ninja and wanting to be one of the best but fears it will never happen. He also feels tormented that his father left when he was born and that he couldn’t protect his mother and a younger age. Feels weak half the time cause he is not physically strong and was picked on at a young age.

Catch Phrase:-----

Rank Information:

Rank:
genin
Village Affiliation:
Kiri

Special Information:

Character Speciality:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu,
Main:nin
Sub:tai
Elemental Affinity:earth, water
Main: water
Sub: earth
Special Characteristics: ----

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:

Quote :: Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Description: Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well. Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)

Name:Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank:C
Type: Attack
Element: Water
Description: Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent. Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique
Rank: C
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Element: Water
Description: Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water. Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)

Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: earth
Rank: D
Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized. Range: Close (0-5m)

Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: earth
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed hand seals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it. Range: Any

Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: earth
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. Range: Close (0-5m)

Name: Sennen Goroshi - One Thousand Years of Death
Art: Taijutsu
Rank: E
Description: Though it is called “Leaf’s Ancient Supreme Technique”, Sennen Goroshi serves more as an insulting shock technique rather than a skilled Taijutsu technique. The ninja forms their hands into the seal of the tiger, and then jabs their fingers into the nether regions of their target. The result is shocking violation of the targets sanctity and often their launching in the air to stop the awkward feeling.Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)

Name: Reppuu - Violent Wind
Art: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Description: Using quickness and agility the shinobi moves low to the ground and employs a spinning kick to sweep the opponent off their feet.Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)

Name: Shoufuu - Rising Wind
Art: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Description: Quite simple really. This technique is basically just a swift upward kick at the opponent or to a weapon that they may be holding.Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)

Name: Dainamikku Entorii - Dynamic Entry
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Description: The shinobi will throw a kunai or other object to distract the target’s attention. They will then use their speed and agility to quickly approach and attack the opponent from their blind side.Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Weapon Template:

Quote :

Name: throwing knifes
Quantity: 10
Rank: e
Appearance: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] Throwing-knifes

[They are 4 inches long. Made of silver and shiny. Only shape on one side. They also have 3 holes made in the center os the handle for a classy looking purpose.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: n/a
Origin: [left by his father, when he left him and his mother]

Name: [Fushi‘s pocket bombs]
Quantity: [13
Rank: [d]
Appearance: Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] B606061g-250-

Fujita, Fushidara [Kiri Genin] B606061g-250-

[3 inch long red tubes. They have a 2 inch black wick coming out of one end. Look rough and poorly built.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: [Causes a small explosion with about a 5-8 ft. range of damage. But can be thrown form 0-15 ft.
Origin: [He creates them himself. He got the idea one day when he was toying around with some firecrackers. He makes a tube out of sand paper and super glue then adds some black powder in the inside along with a wick to light.

Item Template:

Quote :: Name: [fake explosive tag]
Rank: [e]
Type: [other]
Natural Abilities: [simply used to prank someone, making them think it is a real paper bomb]

Kunia-5
Shrunken-10
Explosive Tags- 10
Smoke Bombs-2

Background Information[/center]

History:

early life:

When he was born his father left his mother not wanting a child since his parent where young when he was born. He grow to be close to no one but his mother and hated himself thinking it was all his fault his father left and that his mom was sad. He was a small child and very weak. Other kids picked on him a lot cause all he would do is stay around his mom. They would beat him up nearly everyday when he went outside, so he became use to running away and thus got his gift of quickness.

He and his mom where very pore when he was coming up and didn’t have much, sometimes nothing to eat. He watched his mom do anything for money or food to feed him, not sell her self like a hooker just any kind of work work. His mom was a very beautiful woman and men would always mess with here when they went into the city to get stuff, although he didn’t understand what they meant with there actions he could tell it made his mom sad and he tried to protect her his best, although he would fail many times and think he was worthless.

Ninja Academy:

When he was 8 he joined the ninja academy hoping to learn some fighting tech nets to protect his mom. At first he had no tension of becoming gennin and fighting for the leaf just to be able to protect his mom. At first he was doing very badly in the academy, and kept himself separate from all the other students.

But one day he found a friend in the academy and things started to change; he started to try harder in the academy and learned that he could mina plate his chakra very well and quickly became one of the top students in the academy. He learned in the academy that his dad had been a chunnin rank ninja and that when he left him and his mom he became a missing nin. He also learned that his father used the earth element had that he had it to. He decided to become a gennin because of the love he had developed from the use of chakra in the academy and to fatter his skills, hoping to one day meat his father and kill him for what he did. He learned a Doton justu to pass the academy.

Gennin:

He has now made it to a gennin rank nin. He has became gifted in using doton and has made it his main way of fighting. He also took some time to learn some taijutsu which focuses more on his speed then his strength.

He doesn’t see his mother as much as he used to, and he has gotten use to not being around her. He has become more social with other people, and seems to enjoy being around them and joking around. He now dreams of being a strong jounin so he can have a better chance at defeating his father one day.

Role-Play Sample:
The wind blow throw the leafs as the rustle of a bunch of squirrels could be heard in the tree above me. It was hot out side but the shade of the tree was quite pleasant and relaxing. Fushidara had been laying here for the past hour running the thought through his mind over and over again. Although he was happy he was selected to do the mission tomorrow, he was uneasy about the risk he would be taking. He had been lost in thought and could now since that he had that blank look on my face, makeing him look like someone who was all cracked out. Yeah, it made perfect since that he was chosen for the mission cause of his speed ,but he would have felt better not going at it alone. Fushi was to meat up with a merchant on the far side of the village at daylight tomorrow and by sunset be at the check point with the supplies for our allies, but the catch was that in order for him to get there he had to go straight through woods where bandits camped out. So many strategies where running through his head at one time; it felt so confusing ,and his head pounded from it. Yet, it was a felling he loved and got a rush from the feeling of solving a problem with a million answers and having to pick the best one. He sighed as he rubbed his temples and stretched. Over the time he had spent here his stomach had become soar from the lack of food. He decide to continue his thoughts over a hot meal, witch would probably help him think anyways.

Age : 31 Posts : 2547

Pick a last name. Once you've done that, edit the topic title to Lastnamehere, Fushidara [Suna Genin]

Also, when you roleplay, you don't write "I" and "me" because you aren't narrating, you're writing fiction.

Wrong: I had been laying here for the past hour running the thought through my mind over and over again.

Right: Fushidara had been laying there for the past hour running, the thought through his mind over and over again.

Your grammar could use a little tweaking too. Some of the sentences have typos and are worded in a confusing manner.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

fixed sorry about that

its my same ch. form the old site and it never had last name so i didn't think it needed one, and i used the old rp sample to which would make sense of the i and me, cause i was a begging rper at the time (if you would like i will amke a new one)

amd as far as my grammmer goes i have a form of Dyslexia and use word to help with the problem so i am sorry but other then that there is not much i can do... i try my hardest at my grammer though

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Change all links to pictures, I don't want to click links.

For your jutsu, make it all one quote, its annoying with:

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Make it:

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Age : 33 Posts : 143

edited

Age : 31 Posts : 2547

Looks fine to me.

Official John-Approval.

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You have numerous rank errors, most of those jutsu are higher ranks than what you've stated.

Also, remove the list codes if you don't intend to use them.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

which jutsus are aver ranked i got them form some website that had list of jutsu and thats the rank it gave them... i'l check each one of them at wiki and see what rank it gives them

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Don't check Wiki, Leafninja.com

Age : 33 Posts : 143

i believe i fixed them all

is it good now

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List commands are still present.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

hate to be a pain but i cant seem to find them anywhere

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They're gone now.

You do have a broken center command though, most likely because you put two center commands rather than just one.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

fixed; im sorry for being so much trouble

Age : 33 Posts : 143

it is okay if my ch isn't apartof a clan right

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If its fine with you, theres nothing barring approval due to it.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

k so is my ch good to go now

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Your special characteristic needs more details. Why? How much? How did that happen? Etc.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

edited

Age : 31 Posts : 2547

Regarding Special Characteristics, running from bullies isn't really going to increase your character's speed and dexterity by all that much, and you do realize that even if you say your character is faster than most Genin, you won't be able to say that in a topic right? Granted your sub skill is Tai, still, your character would most likely be average speed.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

i got rid of it

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Put your history into arcs with two paragraphs each

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All Suna ranks are closed now.

Age : 33 Posts : 143

edited

i made the history thing the way you said

that suck that all the sun genin ranks got taken up, god i had to leave and that happens
oh well look out kono here i come

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Approved.