Yuketsu, Jikkensha (Complete)

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Ok, so the kusagarami is essentially a body modification that allows you to harden and utilize the ear lobe to use as a weapon. That makes more sense.

Millenium eye now makes sense with the wording. Ill wait on Z and overview everything else so we dont need to do this again when i get out of class.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

RyuKage wrote:: Z
I also can't use elemental chakras that was another part of our deal mcjigger

Odd, I didn't see this stated on your application.

RyuKage wrote:: Z[spoiler].
Also this is anime not RL so Science and Technology is more advanced than RL. So the RL vs anime comparison is irrelevant. Anime will win everytime as far as accomplishments my shinobi.

I've heard this way too many times... Listen. Naruto technology < RL technology. Spiritual Energy ~ Machinery (~ meaning about the same(equivalents)). What we achieve in the real world, we achieve through superior technology. What is achieved in the Naruverse is done with energies. What naruto lacks in machinery, it makes up for in chakra. They are equal, no one is superior to the other. Although chakra defies some scientific laws, it abides by most of them. Recap: Technology is lower than RL, Science is about the same level but reached through different means.

Edit: This especially applies to Eijutsu

Age : 32 Posts : 95

Spoiler:

Has been in my app for some time now.

The Science thing you kinda just proved my point in a sense. The part you mentioned

Quote :: Although chakra defies some scientific laws, it abides by most of them.

This is all my character is doing......No elemental, or anything.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

RyuKage wrote:: Elemental Defect: Because Yuketsu has tried to many body modification upon himself he has damaged his body in a great way. Yuketsu has a accidently taken away his ability to perform elemental techniques.

Hmmmm. I'm almost positive this said Ninjutsu defect... guess I was wrong.

RyuKage wrote:

The Science thing you kinda just proved my point in a sense. The part you mentioned

Quote :: Although chakra defies some scientific laws, it abides by most of them.

This is all my character is doing......No elemental, or anything.

That is where you are wrong. For example, is it possible to liquefy a human being without some sort of morbid processing that would result in death?

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

The elemental defect WAS Ninjutsu defect. And the NInjutsu defect was a more balanced option than jutsu elemental jutsu.

Also... You have too many SC. Again. I get your character is a genius, and all that, and we mentioned this earlier, but at that age, he CANNOT have that many SC.

Body modification expert is unnecessary, Swordmanship is also unnecessary since it doesnt apply to direct melee combat and does not hold any sway towards actual sword skills, which is what the SC would grant. To be honest, almost none of your special characteristics are actual SC, and all I can see them being used for is to add more stuff to your character such as chemicals etc. Given the entirity of the app, some will need to be removed.

Quote :: Through his many years of life Yuketsu has become an average chemist among the R@D Institute but far among people of his age. With this knowledge Yuketsu has gained the knowledge to create and research chemicals that normally a genin wouldn't

Fix that description. At most you would have been at the research institute for a couple years, seen as how your Genin is only 16. I dont care how big of a genius you are, the Kage will appoint those with more experience than a Genin to be in the insititute.

Quote :: Name: Hidden Kusarigama
Quantity: 1
Rank: D
Appearance:http://ninjainformationdatabase.webs.com/kusarigama1.jpg
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Hidden deep within his left ear Yuketsu hides a Kusarigama. This is a small simple sycthe but it is as sharp as any other blade. This Kusarigama is attached to a long extendable rope-like ligament. This Kusarigama isn't an actual Kusarigama, it's a body modification that appears when Yuketsu pulls out the ligament the tip becomes sharp. (This isn't a Kusarigama while within the ear) Yuketsu seem to be rather skilled while using it.
Origin: This was a body modification created by Yuketsu himself just to be more well prepaired for battle.

Edit this to what you just told me otherwise the app will continued to be unapproved. Dont go in and just add to the description, actually go in and reword it.

Quote :: Name: Chakra Disruption grenades
Quantity: 5
Rank: C
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Through a long precoss of research Yuketsu created bombs that were supressors to chakra. These in every way look just like a normal grenades and even so much as as the same. The only difference between these and grenades is that this bomb doesn't explode with a loud bang and damage all that is around. Infact this grenade doesn't make a loud explosion at all, it make a low sounding explosing that doesn't physically damage anything. Instead this bomb is infused with a chakra suppression serum that expands in an invisible/senseless gas. The effects of this jutsu causes the opponent or whoever is within a 2m meter radius to have great difficulty controlling their chakra. Meaning that evertime the someone uses a jutsu the chakra cost will double the origonal amount for the duration of 2 post.
Appearence: http://www.clker.com/cliparts/a/9/a/0/11949854771356015513kallisti-grenade_1_nurbl_01.svg.med.png

Name: Anit-Chakra Mines
Quantity: 5
Rank: C
Appearance: http://www.exchange3d.com/images/uploads/aff1441/TEMP2/landmine1.jpg
Special Abilities/Characteristics: After researching and develpoment Yuketsu creates a landmine he designed which is meant to be effective against chakra. Once its sensors pick up an anyones chakra, it detonates violently damaging anyone within a 2m raidus.
Origin: Mine created by Yuketsu himself just to be more well prepaired

2 meter DIAMETER not radius for the mines, 3 meter diameter for the grenades.

Quote :: Name: Pulse Descreasion Serum
Rank: C
Type: Other
Natural Abilities: This is a serum created my Yuketsu that lowers whoever is injected pulse rate so low that it's nearly impossibly to be detected by even the best medical ninja. This serum will last up to 3 post and the person injected doesn't have the ability to do anything. It's as if the injected person were a dead body.

Remove. This is A-Rank minimum.

Quote :: Poison Name: Superhuman Drug
Rank: C-S
C-B Ranked:Poison Description: Yuketsu has manufactured a "superhuman drug" that can slow down a person's perception of time. The drug is kept in a bottle by him, but also inside Yuketsu's body, which is blue in appearance upon release. It is able to make one second seem like 100 seconds for the unfortunate victim to whom it is administered. An undiluted dose of the drug causes the senses to speed up trillions of times while the relatively "slow" body fails to keep up, resulting in paralysis; on the other hand, it is implied that a diluted dose of the drug can greatly enhance the user's reaction speed.
Yuketsu only has non diluted of the drug
Gaseous State:
C-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 10sec 1/2 full post your in illusion.
B-Ranked: Make 1 second seem like 100sec 1 full post your in illusion.

*Reserved for Higher Rank:
Quote:

B-S Ranked:Liquid State: An liquefied dose of the drug causes the senses to speed up trillions of times while the relatively "slow" body fails to keep up, resulting in paralysis; on the other hand, it is implied that a diluted dose of the drug can greatly enhance the user's reaction speed. A single droplet would have to be diluted 250,000 times to be suitable for use.
Liquid State:
A-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 10 minutes and 3 post paralysis Illusion for a full post.
S-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 100 minutes and 5 post paralysis Illusion for 2 full post.

Caranore wrote:: Quote:
Gaseous State:
C-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 10sec I quarter of your post your in illousion.
B-Ranked: Make 1 second seem like 100sec 1/2 ofyour post your in illousion.

*Reserved for Higher Rank:
Quote:

B-S Ranked:Liquid State: An liquified dose of the drug causes the senses to speed up trillions of times while the relatively "slow" body fails to keep up, resulting in paralysis; on the other hand, it is implied that a diluted dose of the drug can greatly enhance the user's reaction speed. A single droplet would have to be diluted 250,000 times to be suitable for use.
Liquid State:
A-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 10 minutes and 1 post paralysis Illusion for a full post.
S-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 100 minutes and 2 post paralysis Illusion for 2 full post.

Time differences are WAYYYYYYYYYYYY too much. 1 second seeming like 100 minutes? So, to your character when he reaches S-Rank, one second feels like almost 2 straight hours, and the only downside is you have a 2 post paralysis.

The increase in processing speed required to utilize all this information would make your brain explode, literally. Point in case: there was a chess player who thought ahead I believe it was 100 moves in a chess game every move, and his brain exploded at the match causing him to die.

Secondly, you never specified how long this reaction speed boost would last. Given that, you could make it last an entire fight.

This is unapproved until revamped drastically. Id even go as far as saying you need to remove it.

This wasnt even edited in the slightest. Again, Im going to say remove it. C-Rank: One second lasts 10 seconds, no time limit, and you only suffer 1 post paralysis. Now, Im not sure how much you know about human speed and reaction time, as well as brain functions, but apparently you didnt read my post about this at all in the first place. Just remove this, I know what you want with it, but you wont get it without excessive editing and I can see based on previous comments on this application I will need to bring this up atleast 2 more times.

Quote :: Name: Nan Kaizou (Soften Serum)
Rank: C
Type: Enhancer
Natural Abilities: Nan Kaizou is a serum that allows a ninja to make their body very malleable. It was originally developed for spying activities. This technique can be done after surgery and actual body modification. When used the ninja can stretch and twist their body at any angle, allowing them to surprise their opponent. This serum will last 4 post and then nullifies making the body back into normal.

No matter how much modification you have, what you are talking about is an actual Jutsu from the show. The guy who fought Kankuro? Thats either a jutsu or a KKG, since we dont have it as a KKG here its a jutsu. Which would be approximately C-Rank per post. MAYBE D-Rank. What you have here is an item that takes no chakra to use, allows the same effect, lasts 4 posts, and has no drawbacks.

Quote :: Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.

Unless you have a summon on this application, you cant really have this. You learn the technique from the scroll holder or the animal who is the contract holder, you just dont automatically know it wihtout a summon.

Quote :: Name: Thousand Step
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: With this technique, the user will increase their speed 25% for a single second, allowing them to move forward for about 10metrers in an instant, This allows the user to step foward and attack with his/her blade at incredible speed that is almost impossible to block with normal effort alone.

10 meters in a split second without shunshin is unreasonable, a Jounin cant even do that with a 50% speed increase. Th 25% speed increase would increase your speed 25% compared to other Genin. Based on that, the force exerted by the blade would not be that much unless you manage to precisely draw and land at the same second that the kinetic energy reaches where you want it to be to perform this technique, along with muscular structure and reaction time speed. CHange it.

Quote :: Name: Hilt Force
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Throwing her sword directly at the enemy and kicking off directly behind it, Bui will send both of her feet down to hold the sword's handle between them. Using her force of motion, Bui will crash through an opponent's defense with her sword striking first. This move can be cancelled simply by kicking the sword up and flipping back onto her feet.

I dont know who Bui is.

Quote :: Name: Doppel Rund Streich [Double String Around]
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Description: It involves two horizontally swung strikes that can hit multiple opponents. It starts from the right, and is the sword is swung almost 320 degrees around. Then the sword is swung back to the right into its original position.

I have no idea what this description means.

Quote :: Name: Mord Schlag [Killing blow]
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Elemental affinity: N/A
Description: Its purpose is to use the hilt like a war-hammer to pierce armor and other hard defenses. If one is strong enough, the sword can be used to destroy stone and other hard surfaces.

a). You are grabbing the katana by the blade to do this. Expect missing limbs.
b). Go look at your picture of your katana. The hilt isnt anywhere near effective to do what you want. If you have a rapier or a fencing sword type guard, sure. But not with a katana

Quote :: Name: Passos Straordinario [Extraordinary Step]
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Elemental Afinity:N/A
Description:It is a stabbing attacking that's power is fueled by the user's speed and striking strength. The sword impales the target almost entirely to the hilt. Then the sword is pulled out as quickly as possible with a slight angle added.

Edit that description. The sword WILL impale the target regardless, which is godmodding, based on the description.

Quote :: Name Rokushiki: Kenkyaku - Blade Storm
Rank C
Type Kenjutsu
Element N/A
Description During the swing of a blade, the user many release chakra through the tip of the blade, sending outward a blade like projectile of chakra that is just as sharp as the tip of the blade itself. It will continue forward until it comes in contact with something that could stop the blades swing, most likely a dense or thick object. It can easily, however, cut through normal wood and human flesh; even rock, but most metals will be considered safe from any real damage from this technique beyond scratches

Remove. This requries the sword to be chakra conductive, which is B-Rank minimum.

Quote :: Name: Liquefaction Serum
Rank: C-S
Type: Supplement
Natural Abilities: When Yuketsu's injects himself with his serum, it has the ability to transform Yuketsu into a liquid form. Doing so doesn't kill him, as it is a last resort item, but instead simply leaves him highly resistant to attacks and resist him from attacking, making it an effective escape tool. He commonly can move around in this form and speak as well.
C-Ranked: He reforms after a few hours (3 post) but without any of his previous body modifications. This ability is a result of the extensive level experimentations he has done on himself.
B-Ranked: He reforms after a few hours (2 post) but with half of his previous body modifications. This ability is a result of the extensive level experimentations he has done on himself.
A-Ranked: He reforms after a few minutes (1 post) but with all of his previous body modifications. This ability is a result of the extensive level experimentations he has done on himself.

Remove the timelimits and use posts only. A few hours is much more than three posts, since each post in a fight is approximately 5 minutes. Actually, remove this. Theres too much medical research that would need to be done that a Genin wouldnt be able to create this on his own. Yeah you cant attack, but you basically cant take damage, and can use it to infiltrate buildings with no reprecussions for the usage.

Quote :: *This steroid has to be taken ahead of being attacked by a jutsu and only works for the duration of 4 post. If beaten either before or after the 4 post requirement these effects of this serum will not any effect what-so-ever, leaving the user .

Edit this. Based on this little tid bit here, you can ALWAYS take the steroids before the jutsu wihtout being defeated.

Also. If we DO allow you to keep the superhuman drug, you CANNOT take it with the steroid serum. Period.

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Quote :: Name: Chakra Blocker Serum
Rank: C
Type: Enhancer
Natural Abilities: One of Yuketsu many great inventions. This is a serum created to guards the chakra points within Yuketsu body. He made this due to his knowledge of the Hyuuga and Uchiha. This serum covers the chakra point so they cannot be damaged or seen by the Hyuuga, Uchiha, or anyone else for that matter. Only the user chakra can't be seen by their doujutsu The only downfall to this serum is that when used Yuketsu himself can't use any chakra based jutsu as well.*This serum has a 2 post duration.

In order to remain unseen and have your system blocked from Hyuuga and Uchiha, youll needto block your entire system. The tenketsu are just points used to expel chakra, as the Hyuuga can see the entirity of the system. So, sure, you can ahve this if you wanna kill yourself.

Age : 32 Posts : 95

RyuKage wrote:

Quote :: The Science thing you kinda just proved my point in a sense. The part you mentioned
Quote:
Although chakra defies some scientific laws, it abides by most of them.
This is all my character is doing......No elemental, or anything.

Z Wrote

Quote :: That is where you are wrong. For example, is it possible to liquefy a human being without some sort of morbid processing that would result in death?

Exactly what I meant, no it isn't possible but however humans in RL can't use chakra in ways the anime world can. The anime world would be able to attempt the feat and succeed.

Cara Wrote:

Quote :: Name: Pulse Descreasion Serum
Rank: C
Type: Other
Natural Abilities: This is a serum created my Yuketsu that lowers whoever is injected pulse rate so low that it's nearly impossibly to be detected by even the best medical ninja. This serum will last up to 3 post and the person injected doesn't have the ability to do anything. It's as if the injected person were a dead body.

I decreased the abilities to be more suitable for genin.

Cara Wrote:

Quote :: B-S Ranked:Liquid State: An liquified dose of the drug causes the senses to speed up trillions of times while the relatively "slow" body fails to keep up, resulting in paralysis; on the other hand, it is implied that a diluted dose of the drug can greatly enhance the user's reaction speed. A single droplet would have to be diluted 250,000 times to be suitable for use.
Liquid State:
A-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 10 minutes and 1 post paralysis Illusion for a full post.
S-Ranked: Makes 1 second seem like 100 minutes and 2 post paralysis Illusion for 2 full post.

Time differences are WAYYYYYYYYYYYY too much. 1 second seeming like 100 minutes? So, to your character when he reaches S-Rank, one second feels like almost 2 straight hours, and the only downside is you have a 2 post paralysis.

The increase in processing speed required to utilize all this information would make your brain explode, literally. Point in case: there was a chess player who thought ahead I believe it was 100 moves in a chess game every move, and his brain exploded at the match causing him to die.

Secondly, you never specified how long this reaction speed boost would last. Given that, you could make it last an entire fight.

This is unapproved until revamped drastically. Id even go as far as saying you need to remove it.

I the effect are the limits of how long the injected it paralyzed. The illusion is a little shorter then the actual paralysis. That is stated I'm not sure why you can't see that. This serum has somewhat of a genjutsu effect that makes time seem slower. I changed the wording a little bit along with the timing.

Quote :: Name: Doppel Rund Streich [Double String Around]
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Description: It involves two horizontally swung strikes that can hit multiple opponents. It starts from the right, and is the sword is swung almost 320 degrees around. Then the sword is swung back to the right into its original position.

Golly, guy all this is saying my character spins in a semi circle stops and spins the other way.

Everything else either erased or edited accordingly.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Z wrote:: Recap: Technology is lower than RL, Science is about the same level but reached through different means.

Edit: This especially applies to Eijutsu

I think your missing the entire point of what I said... you must think I said the exact opposite of what I actually posted... I suggest re-reading my entire post.

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Liquifying yourself without a KKG like Suigetsu is nigh impossible without being a Jounin. Thats about that, Yes Med Nin might be able to come up with a formula, but a GENIN would not have that knowledge. This coincides with what I said about you being a Genin. Not a higher rank.

Age : 32 Posts : 95

I erased liquifying Serum......It hurt me to the bone though

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Z wrote:: Anti Chakra Mines: Chakra sensitive weaponry is beyond the scope of a genin, remove.

Chakra Suppression Cloak : See the above chakra sensitivity comment.

Chakra Disruption Grenade: The chakra use in weapons also applies to poisons/medicine.

Note: Genin can only have 2 poisons/medicines

Healing Serum: What range of injuries can it heal?

Venom Serum: "any" shouldn't be the word to use here, there are multiple systems in which a poison can enter the body.

Age : 32 Posts : 95

Good geez man how am I suppose to survive with that little I already taken away my elemental usage.

The deal was that I get more poison/venoms to get more scientific things....and my weapons should be fine because they are scientifically made as well.

I also stated the range of wounds it heal....obviously an A ranked injury wont be a flesh wound

Quote :: Name: Chakra Disruption grenades
Quantity: 5
Rank: C
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Through a long precoss of research Yuketsu created bombs that were supressors to chakra. These in every way look just like a normal grenades and even so much as as the same. The only difference between these and grenades is that this bomb doesn't explode with a loud bang and damage all that is around. Infact this grenade doesn't make a loud explosion at all, it make a low sounding explosing that doesn't physically damage anything. Instead this bomb is infused with a chakra suppression serum that expands in an invisible/senseless gas. The effects of this jutsu causes the opponent or whoever is within a 3m meter Diameter to have great difficulty controlling their chakra. Meaning that evertime the someone uses a jutsu the chakra cost will double the origonal amount for the duration of 2 post.

Doesn't Use chakra.

Quote :: Name: Chakra Supperssion Cloak
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance: http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100402024727/kingdomhearts/images/5/56/Cloak.jpg
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Yuketsu has created himself a cloak that hides his chakra presents. This cloak is worn at all time and hides his chakra for a short time being.(3 post) This is meant for the use of spying and sneaking up on people.
B-Rank and above can detect it.

also doesn't use chakra.

Anti Chakra Mines: Has been changed to proximity mines.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Elements aren't everything, you don't even have ninjutsu as a specialty so elemental jutsu don't really matter. If you are to have extra poisons this needs to be included somewhere in your app and I will allow 2 extra (total of 4)

Notice that I didn't say "uses chakra". I said "Chakra sensitive" as a broad statement of things that can cause good, bad, or neutral affects to a chakra system or by using a chakra system. Meaning things that can cloak or detect it are also included.

Age : 32 Posts : 95

How about I get rid of all jutsu and have my character rely on Science and technology.....

I can be somewhat like Rock Lee in a sense if you kno wat i mean....

please man help me out I really want to be approved before the 1st I want to rank up this charry.....

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Well... the 2+ poison thing was meant to help you out really. In the end you would have more than other ninja by having +2 to the base of your rank. (at S-rank it'd be 10+2=12)

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Quote :: The deal was that I get more poison/venoms to get more scientific things....and my weapons should be fine because they are scientifically made as well.

There was no deal that was made as far as Im aware.

Quote :: Main: Medical
Sub: Weaponry
Main: Exotic
Sub: Swords

Removing elemental affinity, or hell, even Ninjutsu in general isnt a draw back now. The only thing you cannot do is imbue your weapons with elemental chakra, and thats not that big a deal. The fact that we are accepting that is a drawback should be god send to you based on everything else.

Quote :: How about I get rid of all jutsu and have my character rely on Science and technology.....

I can be somewhat like Rock Lee in a sense if you kno wat i mean....

please man help me out I really want to be approved before the 1st I want to rank up this charry.....

If you remove all jutsu in the first place, you are honestly no better than a 50 year old science researcher with experience. You will need some jutsu.

The reason this is taking so much editing is because you are basing your character, item and jutsu wise, off of the two most over powered people in the manga/anime: Sasuke and Naruto. Your first application was within the power range of a Genin, this application at start was a Jounin level Genin, now its most likely Chuunin level. You need to understand the characters age, the lack of experience, and the lack of knowledge in certain subjects that a Genin would have when making the application. Based on your age and rank, you shouldnt even be a member of the research institute, at best you would be an apprentice who does menial labor equivalent of D-rank missions for the higher ups, no matter what your IQ or aptitude, so thats another thing we are allowing.

Also, since you havent told me what you have edited beyond the.. three or four things you did previously, Im going to need to go over this entire application again. I listed everything that needed to be fixed/explained, and you either didnt fix them/explain them, or told me only the couple things you did fix. Everything on my long post above is whats wrong with the application, plus whatever Z decides to throw in there. Id suggest editing everything we have stated to a GENIN rank, keep in mind your extreme disadvantages due to lack of experience, and list EVERYTHING that you have edited in a post, including ALL of mine and Z's requests.

Age : 32 Posts : 95

Z Wrote:

Quote :: Well... the 2+ poison thing was meant to help you out really. In the end you would have more than other ninja by having +2 to the base of your rank. (at S-rank it'd be 10+2=12)

I see their is no place for me to win here so I erased all poison down to 4

Now my app is weaker than grandma's pussy

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

No, your application is GENIN level. Not Chuunin level while applying for Genin. If you think its weak go look at Keitaro's app, who embraces what a Genin out of the Academy should look like. Just do it, and youll get approved faster since we are making everything work with respect to rank. The longer the arguing goes on, the less likely you are to get approved by the first.

Age : 32 Posts : 95

cara I substituted my ability to use elementals to gain more poison.

and from the looks of it no one is arguing or even considering this an argument but you

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Actually, arguing can be construed as trying to get something else when people say differently, thus you were arguing with us to keep half your stuff that would have made the character overpowered.

And good, you did that. What about the rest of my post?

Age : 32 Posts : 95

everything else is finished

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Then you shoulda said that sooner and this would have been fully reviewed yesterday

Age : 32 Posts : 95

So is that an approval??

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

No, it means I need to read the entire application over again with Z since you just said it was edited, and didnt tell us what was edited to what or changed. Thats why I asked for a complete list of everything you edited.

Quote :: Id suggest editing everything we have stated to a GENIN rank, keep in mind your extreme disadvantages due to lack of experience, and list EVERYTHING that you have edited in a post, including ALL of mine and Z's requests.

Since that didnt happen, I need to spend more time reviewing everything again.

Age : 32 Posts : 95

O shit I may as well give up this is the last nite I can get approved before the CE's......

I already listed everything i did once and I just stated I erased my poison what more do u want from me?

This app has just officially been a waste.