Bachiatari, Kinzoku [Kiri Jounin]

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Basic Information:

Name:
Bachiatari (Bach-i-tar-y) Kaihaku
Secondary Title:
-Kinder: This title comes from his childhood upbrining. Batchitari had always a some what firery deminer about him. Always wanting to do his own thing or caues trouble. Kinder refers to tender used to start a fire. With out the Tender the fire is nothing.

-Rain:This title was bistowed upon him due to his ability to make it seem to rain offensive and defensive jutsus upon his opponet

-The Junker: This title or alias wasnt one Bachitari created. It was created by various villagers and other people who have meet him. Bachitari gives off a junkyard worker type appearance almost. He has a collection of various metal objects due to his KKG.

Age:
31
Gender:
Male
Physical Appearance:

Bachiatari, Kinzoku [Kiri Jounin] JACK_by_Pirate_Cashoo

Bachiatari once was a rather handsome man. However a horriable event occured one day causing Bachitari to be driven into insaniry and isolation. Bachitari fled into a heavily rocky mountian type terrain. Having lost the feel for trees, sun light, bread, or even the wind. This had some devistating effects on his body. First went his skin. With the lack of sunlight and rough living conditions his skin became not pale but darkend as if it were dead skin and extremly rough. Living in such rough conditions proves to not provide the best nutricous meals for him and as result Bachitari has lost most of his hair. He isnt quiet bald but the hair he does have doesnt cover up his head. The hair he does have is a light brown and appears to be frizzy.

Bachitari stands in at a very short statur being 4 ft 11 inches. This is due to a stunt in his growth. His body never fully developed properly forcing him to remain around this hieght. Having lived in the deep dark mountian for some time Bachitari has been forced to alter his physique. First is his posture, most people stand up straight on 2 feet with maybe a little hunch. Bachitari almost always is on all four's. His 'walk' is similar to that of a monkey's. This is due to having crawled around in tight spaces for so long. In fact Bachitari has even developed his own fighting style, not having any formal training. Just learning to fight with the new ways he moves.

He has a set of green eyes that do not appear as a normal set of eyes. First is the fact that he has no pupils its just a circle of green where his eyes are. Next would be the size of them, being so large. Bachiatari's physical physique is rather impressive to most. Not only is he cut but the size of his muscels are impressive for his size as well. Bachiatari weighs in only at 135 lbs. For his size that is extreemly good however most cant see him weighing so much, this is due to the fact muscel weighs more than fat.

Bachiatari had to have his Akatsuki robes altered due to his size. Underneath his robe Bachiatari wears nothing fancey but old tattered cloths hes worn since his departure into isolation. He wears a set of old torn up brown pants that doesnt even come down to his knees and a old dirty white shirt that resembles a wife beater. When not wearing his robe Bachiatari shows his abused body. His skin has several points and spots on it where it appears that he is stitched up. To help hide this the Akatsuki hat given to each member is worn. His hat is a bit reflective as it is lined with Valcanic ash a very sharp substance when refined like this.

The last promidant feature about him is his face. Bachiatari's face appears to be straight out of a horror film as he has stitches going from both the corners of his mouth to his ears. Bachiatari also has his ears peirced, the earings he wears are teeth hes taken from a dead opponet. When he opens his mouth a set of extreemly sharp teeth are shown. Almost as if he were a carnival...well thats acctually true. Having live in the terrain he did for so long proved that finding meals was hard. This forced Bachiatari to begin to kill and eat travlers passing by or ninja who attempted to come collect the bounty on him.

Personality:
When Bachiatari was young he was described as a very polite, curdious, and caring young man. He had no problem helping out when it was needed. He didnt particularly care to spare a enemys life but he didnt look to kill either. In this senes most saw him as a man of nutrality and good. However when he was younger in his teenage years a incident occured that drove Bachiatari from his home, family, and friends. He was driven into isolation as he began to live in a mountian like terrain. Becuse he lived by himself for so long, his mental state began to change.

First Bachiatari lost his trust for all humans. His former village had put a price out on his head for the crime he had commited. Many would seek him out and attempt to befriend him. The reason for this was if he was taken in alive the bounty for him would increase, so Bachiatari quickly learn that no one could be trusted any more. The next change would be the creation of "Rain" his alter ego. Having no trust in any one made it so he couldnt hold conversations. The process was indeed slow at first as he began to just hear vague voices off in the distance. His mind began to play tricks on himself as voices could be heard as if it were another person some place off. Slowly the voice would become more noticable to Bachiatari and audiable. Eventually the voice became clear enough to introduce its self as a man named "Rain."

Bachiatari can be very snide in his remarks to others, having no trust in people doenst help out his remarks. When getting into a fight often he will make remarks about what he plans to do to the opponets dead body wants he takes life from them. Often he may make a monolog about the things he plans to do. From feasting on their dead carcass, taking some of their organs to replenish his, taking their heart to add power to his aresenal, to using peices of their bones as tools. Bones, teeth, and other organs. All of these Bachiatari may be taken from his fallen foes to either add to his own body or make into tools. If he has no need for tools or parts then he may make what he considers jewlery to wear. Currently he has his ears peirced and wears a set of teeth earings.

When in a group of people Bachiatari remains silent and secluded from the group. He his timid around larg crowds of people simply to the fact that he doesnt have any trust for people. Even his AKatsuki partners he has trouble trusting. Many times if he feels threaten or in danger he may just lash out and start a rampage untile he clears the area out. However he is not just a brute, he is a very intelegent person. Having been taught by some of the best teachers his former village had to offer. While living in isolation he may of lost his sanity but his inteligent level remaind on its current state.

When speaking Bachiatari often gives off a sound of phlem rattling in his throat. However more notable than that would be the fact that rather than saying I or myself he says "we." This is ofcorse refering to the other personality inside of him. Rain has no real other characteristics that make him more noticable other than he may come accross a little more harsh when speaking to some one. Right now he has no real goals or objectives other than getting pay back against the earth for driving him away as well as making the leaf suffer for the pain they caused.

Before Bachiatari was sent into isolation he had discovered a object of high value. At the time he was with a childhood friend who wanted the object just as bad. Something drove both of them to claim the object as their own. However both of them wanted it so it posed a problem. At first they started off in a joking manner with some light soves and brisk remarks about the other not deserving it. Slowly things began to escelate to the point of a fight, worse turned to worse as it became a fight that both knew was going to end untile the other couldnt move.

Catch Phrase:
"We cant's wait to tastesez you!"

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Clan Information:

Clan Name: Kaihaku

Clan Location: Unknown - Wandering

Clan Traits:
Social Outcasts:
Having lived for years in isolation, Kaihaku are not very familiar with interacting with others. The majority of the clan lacks social skills, particularly the older generation, though the newer generation is leaning towards the contrary.

Weapon Masters:
The Kaihaku are often called the greatest blacksmith’s in the world, renowned throughout the world for their skill with metals. Kaihaku are taught about metals from a young age and are trained to become great blacksmiths just like their forefathers. Kaihaku who become ninja are often, if not always, Weaponry specialists.

Bearers of Weight:
Since they cannot create metal on the spot, Kaihaku usually carry large loads of metallic items on their person when going to battle to ensure they have a ready supply of metal available. With the amount of metal they carry, it is understandable that Kaihaku are much slower than ordinary ninja (ranging from 5-50%). However, thanks to the greater amount of pressure their bodies have to withstand, they are extremely powerful and well-built, possessing greater strength than their peers (ranging from 10-50%).

Bones of Steel:
At a young age, every Kaihaku has his bones infused with metal to strengthen them and allow them to withstand larger forces. This is done particularly to help the Kaihaku as they carry heavy loads of metal with them almost everywhere they go, which would normally damage an ordinary person’s bones. Their metal bones are obviously much stronger than regular human bones, being able to undertake larger forces without damage. However, this also means that they weigh more than regular humans and as such exert a much greater force on the ground. The bones' strength is 50% that of steel, and remains constant even if they rank up, since it has nothing to do with their skill or chakra levels.

Chakra Control:
Since the task of controlling metal on a molecular level is so difficult, Kaihaku are experts in the field of chakra control. From a young age Kaihaku are put through various tests and training sessions to enhance their skill in controlling their chakra. It is a common trait for Kaihaku to have the same chakra control as a Medical Ninja even if they do not specialize in that field.

Kekkei Genkai:

~|Kinzokugan|~
Metal Eyes
The Kaihaku clan’s Kekkei Genkai is the ability to manipulate metals as if they were an extension of their body. All Kaihaku are born with a special Doujutsu dubbed the “Kinzokugan” or “Metal Eyes”. This Doujutsu is permanently active at all times with the result that it drains very little chakra from the user. The Kinzokugan has no unique physical features as compared to a regular eye, perhaps being a tad bit more reflective than an ordinary eye. Even if this is true, one would still be unable to distinguish between a regular eye and a Kinzokugan. It was once believed that the Kaihaku’s eyes were actually made of metal, but it was soon found to be nothing but a rumor.

Using their Doujutsu, the clan members can project their chakra into a nearby metal and manipulate it to perform a variety of actions. This enables the Kaihaku to use metals in a unique way, being able to change its shape, its state, even its hardness or color by manipulating the metal’s structure on a molecular basis. Theoretically, they can do anything they wish with the metal. To control the metal, clan member may simply use their mind to manipulate it; however higher-ranked techniques require the usage of hand gestures reminiscent to Gaara’s style. Whether the metal is under magnetic influences or not does not hinder the clan’s ability to control it; however, if the metal already possesses another person’s chakra within it (be it a fellow clan member or not) then it cannot be manipulated.

The major flaw in their Kekkei Genkai is that the Kaihaku are unable to create new metal using their chakra, since all they can do is manipulate the metal. Therefore, they can only use metal which is already available around them, and only manipulate it so long as it is within their range. Fortunately, any metal used can be “recycled” and used again for other techniques so long as it is not destroyed. Since they cannot create new metals, Kaihaku usually carry a large stock of metallic items with them to battle, which they then proceed to manipulate using their Kinzokugan.

Another problem the Kaihaku often face is caused by the continuous alteration of a metallic substance's hardness. The more the clan member changes the metal's strength, the more brittle it becomes at the end of the technique. Whether the metal is made softer or harder, the metal shall be more weaker in its natural state (i.e. when it is not being used for clan jutsu) than it originally was. Every fourth time the metal's strength is changed (which is assumed to be done in nearly every clan jutsu unless stated otherwise), the metal's original strength falls by 10%. In other words, for every four clan jutsu that is performed (assuming they alter the hardness of course), there is a 10% decrease in the hardness/strength of the metal.

Since the Kaihaku only manipulate the metal and do not create it, it is not regarded as an advanced element, which explains why Kaihaku can still possess two basic elemental affinities like regular ninja. Metals with the Kaihaku clan’s chakra within them have shown a weakness to the Suiton element, with the two combined chakra resulting in an acceleration of the metal’s rusting process. Raiton and Katon techniques tend to conduct through the metals controlled by the Kaihaku, often having no effect.

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Rank Information:

Rank:
Jounin
Village Affiliation:
Kiri.

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Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Weaponry (Exotic & Ranged)
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Earth
Special Characteristics:
-Advanced Hand Speed: Similar to how boxers work on a speed bag to improve their swing speed Gabriale has practiced his forming jutsus he know's and is capable of doing a set of hand seals with in half the time a normal shinobi would. As long as Gabriale has 3 second reaction time Gabirale is able to send out some sort of jutsu.

-Quick Tactician: Gabriale has developed a large intellect. Using several methods. First is schooling. In school Gabriale studied hard and was sent to attend schools most shinobi don’t attend due to the fact they don’t see it as something they need. One way is playing the ancient game of Chinese chess. His mentors taught him how to control and move people around in a time of war, basic tactics and advanced one. Another way is often being in combat he may be forced into close range combat so he would need to think quickly on his feet in order to beat some one who excelled at close range combat at their own game. This has enabled bachitari to think at a high speed under pressure.

-Weapon Masters:
The Kaihaku are often called the greatest blacksmith’s in the world, renowned throughout the world for their skill with metals. Kaihaku are taught about metals from a young age and are trained to become great blacksmiths just like their forefathers. Kaihaku who become ninja are often, if not always, Weaponry specialists.

-Bearers of Weight:
Since they cannot create metal on the spot, Kaihaku usually carry large loads of metallic items on their person when going to battle to ensure they have a ready supply of metal available. With the amount of metal they carry, it is understandable that Kaihaku are much slower than ordinary ninja (ranging from 5-50%). However, thanks to the greater amount of pressure their bodies have to withstand, they are extremely powerful and well-built, possessing greater strength than their peers (ranging from 10-50%).

-Bones of Steel:
At a young age, every Kaihaku has his bones infused with metal to strengthen them and allow them to withstand larger forces. This is done particularly to help the Kaihaku as they carry heavy loads of metal with them almost everywhere they go, which would normally damage an ordinary person’s bones. Their metal bones are obviously much stronger than regular human bones, being able to undertake larger forces without damage. However, this also means that they weigh more than regular humans and as such exert a much greater force on the ground. The bones' strength is 50% that of steel, and remains constant even if they rank up, since it has nothing to do with their skill or chakra levels.

-Chakra Control:
Since the task of controlling metal on a molecular level is so difficult, Kaihaku are experts in the field of chakra control. From a young age Kaihaku are put through various tests and training sessions to enhance their skill in controlling their chakra. It is a common trait for Kaihaku to have the same chakra control as a Medical Ninja even if they do not specialize in that field.

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Background Information

History:

Birth Arc:
Bachiatari was born on what his family called a cursed day. This day was a day of much misfourtune. Their family had suffered personally on this day with family deaths, fights of great magnitude, financial suffering as well as personal losses for each member. To add insult to injury their village Iwagakure (Hidden Earth) would have several problems of their own occure. Such as assasinations, mission falure, poor economic conditions, war, good shinobi fallen in battle, among other things. As result his family saw it fit to name him Bachiatari meaning "Cursed." His 'birthday' was to be the worst day of the year. This didnt really affect his personality as he developed. However his own family and various village members wouldnt celibrate his birth nor really acknowledge his existance just for this day. Now most would take this and feel put off by it or feel put down, but it didnt really seem to affect Bachiatari really on the out side. On the inside he held contemptment against his family for allowing him to be born on the day he did as well as his friends for acting in the manner they wuold.

Now Bachiatari was born into the Kinzoku clan, this clan was still relitivaly new in the shinobi world. Iwagakure had used the clan for their metal manipulation for for more personal matter with in the village. However some indeed were becoming shinobi for their abilities. At First The Kinzokus werent a clan at all. They were just a group of miners and blacksimths who mined and forged weapons in the Earth village. Mining for metals took Long and was a hard task to do. The First Kinzoku was a miner and a shinobi named Koutetsu Kinzoku, who made up techniques so insted of mining for metal, he made it himself. He later had a son who grew up to be a shinobi. He was named Hagane Kinzoku.

Koutetsu tought his son how to use Kinzoku Ayatsuri (Metal Manipulation), but insted of using it for mining, He ran away to the Leaf Village and tought other how to use Metal Manipulation for battle. He even found a better way to use Metal manipulation, and created Ekimetaru Soujuu (Liquid Metal Manipulation) By breaking down the metals in the ground into a liquid state by projecting earth and lightning chakra into it. The people he tought formed a clan and named it after Koutetsu's Last name because he invented Kinzoku Ayatsuri (Metal Manipulation) with Hagane as the Leader. The Kinzoku's spreded out to all parts of the fire country. A tradition for the new Kinzoku Clan is to do a special jutsu on the unborn babies of the Clan infusing their bones with Metal that can be used for Kinzoku Ayatsuri (Metal Manipulation) Techniques.

Academy Arc:

Bachiatari was indeed born into a bad time. His village had a dire need for man power and good shinobi. Since the Kinzoku clan rarley were used for as shinobi it became obvious that the village was in dire need when the amount of shinobi heading off to the academy were Kinzoku. Bachiatari entered the Academy with his best friend, Haga. Haga was the son of Hagane the current leader of their clan. Upon entering the academy Bachiatari and Haga really seal and cemented their friendship as they faced many differnt hardships together. Amongst the other kids in the academy they were not as aware as the bond the two held nor their teamworking abilities. However among the village elders, teachers, and older shinobi they knew these two could and would indeed benifit from each other.

The first event that occured was when a little orphan girl named Takaski was getting picked on by some other classmates of Bachiatari and Haga. At the current time Bachiatari was the type of person to not only want to stand up for the little girl but to acctually follow through with it. He pleaded with Haga to back him up, but Haga knew they were out numbered by their classmates. It was indeed a hopless fight having one of the best fighters in the class (Bachiatari) and one of the worst (Haga) teaming up to take on 12 people. Bachiatari however couldnt just sit by and watch this little girl get bullied and pushed around, so he stepped up calling out the aggresors. After an exchange of words a scrap quickly broke out. Bachiatari excelled in his close combat and basic academy jutsus a bit more than his fellow classmates so at first he was capable of taking on various opponets with ease. The number game however quickly proved to be to much for him as he began to get overwhelmed.

Haga knew he needed to step in to help his friend and to prevent him from being overwhlemed by their classmates. However he also knew he would barley be able to take on just one of them by himself. This is when Haga picked up a kendow stick, his future weapon of choice. Between the duo the two took on most of the aggresive bullies with ease, untile the largest boy of the group came in with a right hook to Bachiataris face. It was apparent Bachiatari didnt see it comming and would get blasted and Haga knew with out him, he was screwed. So Haga did the only thing he thought was right and that was take the hit for Bachiatari as he knew he'd have a better chance at finishing the fight with success than himself. Haga and Bachiatari were fighting back to back but now Haga move in to take the blow from this rather large kid. Doing the sensiable thing of taking the blow in a spot that wouldnt hurt as much, Haga put his chest between Bachiatari's face and the boys fist. When the blow landed it sent Haga flying into Bachiatari and sent the duo to the floor. Bachiatari realized what had happend and cemented this moment in his mind. This moment was what defined their friendship early on.

Quicly various Academy teachers rushed in to stop the escilating fight and seperated Bachiatari from the rest of the students. Haga was indeed fine just had the wind knocked out of him. The teachers saw the willingness of Haga and his discission making capabilities in stressfull situations as well as Bachiatari and him teamworking capabilities. So once it came to the point of graduation and Gennin team assingments it was obvious to the teachers they needed to pair the duo up.

Genin Arc:

The day came for Bachiatai meet up with his sensei and fellow gennin teammates. Their sensei had them all meet high up in a near by, village controlled mountian. The terrain was good for rough training which was exactly what their sensei wanted. He intended on pushing the students as hard as he could for the village needed good shinobi to rise up and help take the responsibilities of the village at a younger age. When Bachiatari arrived he saw 2 very familiar faces. The first being his best friends Haga. The 2 easily got excited that their best friend would be going through this hardship together. The next face was unexpected as it turned out to be the little orphan girl Haga and Bachiatari stood up for long ago, Takashi. He didnt even know she was enrolled at the ninja Academy, but he did figure there were alot of of students and differnt classes so missing her was probabl.

The trio stood around for countless hours talking to each other, streching their limbs, showing off various things. All the while waiting on their sensei who seemed to have forgotten about them. As they waited a sound came echoing out from a dark cave near by. It was a noise that wasnt a average every day thing so the genin decided to kill some time by investigating it. Bachiatari and Takashi pulled out their Kunia while Haga pulled out a rather large Katana he had been given by his family. The noise steadily grew louder and louder as the trio travled deeper into the cave. It seemed to be hours for the trio as they travled down the cave but they did indeed make it to the end of the cave. Having been so catious the trio travled slower through the cave so they could indeed still see the cave enterance.

The end of the cave appeared to have no one and nothing inside of it. The noise also seemed to stop completly now that the trio was at its 'source.' The new genin decided something was wrong very quickly and decided to hurry up and get out of there. As they turned around to leave a figures shadow was casted down on them as it stood in the door way of the cave. The genin couldnt see who it was, at first the assumed it was their sensei and began to approach him. However as they stepped closer the figure altered his body stance so sunlight could shine on his imge a little bit more. This revealed that the figure was indeed not their sensei but a shinobi from the leaf. At the time Iwagakure and Konoha we not allies but foes. This shinobi appeared to be extreemly strong just from his appearance and the genin all knew there was NO way they would be capable of fighting this man off.

The Leaf shinobi began to give off a rather sinister laugh as he slowly began to bring his hands up to from a hand sign. The genin felt as though this was it, this was the moment they were going to die. At the hands of this leaf scum using some sort of jutsu. Once the leaf shinobi formed the hand sign his laugh stopped as a very serious look formed over his face. He quickly activated some sort of jutsu as smoke poofed out from him. The genin took an immediate stance against him as to help prolong their life. The smoke quickly cleared out to reveal the leaf shinobi was gone and in his place was a Rock shinobi. This man appeared to be more harden and buff. It was obviously a transformation jutsu. The man quickly let out a thunderous laugh. This put the genin at even more of a sense of unease. To help smooth things over the man told the genin he was their sensei and wanted to put the fear in them as well as see how they would react.

This was the way of their sensei Mikoshu. He was a very harden man who believed hard work was essential in every day life and the only way to get better was to leave your body depeleted every day from its resources. Mikoshu took his team up into the mountians becuse physical training was tougher up here due to the lack of available oxygen. Often genin would start off with some intense physical training and then move on to forming their own paths as far as abilities. Over the first 2 years the genin went under alot of physical training and ninjutsu training. Mikoshu began each of their paths as a start.

-Mikoshu saw Bachiatari as more of a leader of the three as well combat ready so he decided developing his blood line abilities to its fullest would be smartest. No one from the Kinzoku clan had become a powerfull shinobi to date. Mikoshu thought that their abilities were indeed very strong and if developed properly they could be deadly. However he knew it had a weakness so he thought he would indeed need to find a alternate set of abilities to be safe.

- Mikoshu saw Haga as more of a back up, supplementry type of team member. His ability to weild a sword was suberb so that was his focuse for Haga. He wanted Haga to learn to use his bloodline abilities in another way to compliment his sword fighting and use of a sword.

-Mikoshu was stuck as far as Takashi. She was far more quiet than the others and she wasnt to good at hand to hand combat but he use of chakra was pretty good. Every team needs a medical expert of some sorts so he decided she would work on learning medical ninjutsu.

This genin team began to be one of the most divers genin teams around. Each member complimented the other in ways most didnt see comming. This group was a bit advanced for their age, it was all mostly due to Mikoshu's training and drive he put into them. Most genin teams took on D ranked missions and if they were good enough some C ranked. Mikoshu's team took on C ranked as a usual mission and at times B ranked should the village need them to. Mikoshu had no real rush in sending his gennin into the Chuunin exams. All the other genin in the village were being pushed to enter the Chuunin exams at a early date than normal. If they became chuunin then they could take on solo missions with each other as well as more jounin could take on newer genin. Mikoshu was a very elit shinobi and all the genin he has trained have become elit shinobi in what ever aspect of training they have taken. This was due to Mikoshu taking his time with his students and making sure they are fully developed from the training he has prepared for them. So for the next few years Moikoshu, Bachiatari, Haga, and Takashi continued ot train together and stay as a team.

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History Continued

Chuunin Arc:

Around the age of 16 Mikoshu decided his elite team was readyto begin to move on to the next level so he entered them into the Chuunin exams. The trio were ment to send a impressive statment to the other villages and they did just that. The first 2 rounds went by with ease as they finished in first place in both. This did draw some attention from various people. A team that worked this efficent together was indeed impressive. However they were more excited to see how the trio did individually in one on one competitions. The group knew they would have potential in facing each other, that is why Mikoshu decided that Haga and Takashi would yeild to Bachiatari. As stated before every one in the village saw Bachiatari as some one who could be individually one of the best shinobi of his generation. So the hope was to broadcast his abilities to all the other villages in hopes that they could show their military was still producing extreemly good shinobi.

The first round in the singles tournament none of the 3 Mikoshu squad fought each other. This was strictly due to overwhelming odds and luck. However in the grandfinally Takashi and Bachiatari were to face in the first round. While every other competitor was training to fight their first opponet Takashi and Bachiatari worked on how to stage their fight. Still making Takashi look good but to make Bachiatari not only look amazing but win. Haga was to face some Hyuuga his first round. This would choose to be rather challenging fight as using his Katana could be hard becuse of the Hyuugas suburb taijutsu abilities.

The time allowed for prepration had came and passed, Mikoshu trained Bachiatari for the fights after his first one while he traing Takashi to throw her fight and Haga to beat the Hyuuga. When all the gennin and their leaders arrived at the tournament Bachiatari was blown away at the how the other competitors had changed and grown. This made him reflect upon how he, himself had grown and changed as well as his teammates. He was amazed, this was something he hadnt really noticed till now. Seeing how much more advanced they were compared to how they were when they were first meeting up as a team in the cave. Bachiatari knew his abilities had grown alot as well as his teammates. He saw all the various competitors during the first tournament and some of their abilities, he was excited to see how they had grown and what new things they would be able to bring to the table.

The first round came and Haga's fight was the very first one. Bachiatari watched with much enthusiasme. His Mikoshu had taught Haga to use his metal manipulation in a more of a passive way. The Hyuugas Taijutsu proved to be extreemly fast as he was able to move around Haga's sword with ease. Every one would suspect that it was over for Haga. However when his shirt was ripped by the 64 trigrame jutsu it revealed a liquid metal covering his skin. When the Hyuugas hands would come in to slam Haga's chakra point the liquid metal would harden up to a chakra enduced plates of steel. The Hyuuga's jutsus were highly ineffective and as result a waste of chakra. As the fight progressed Mikoshu came up to take Bachiatari to the side. It is here that he began to explain the importance of the fight to him. Telling him that the leaf's military was breathing down the hidden earths neack and just maybe if he demonstrate suburb skill they would back off.

Just as Mikoshi finished talking, Haga's fight ended. He was the victor at the cost of not to much wasted chakra. Bachiatari watched the next few fights seeing some rather impressive displays of talent. Finially his and Takashi's fight came up at the end of the first round. As both competitiors took their place a sudden rumble shook the ground. The tournament of the Chuunin exams took place in the Earths village for financial purposes. Security had been put up to a max just to display their might was still indeed strong. However itappeared an invasion force was now on their door step. It was the hidden leaf who was indeed the force causing it. Obviously their fight would have to be post poned, so Mikoshu came down along with Haga and gave them their orders and where to go. They all quickly acted taking off to fight the Leaf invasion. Not only were shinobi being sent at them but various warriors as well. Mikoshu sent his 'semi former' genin to the front lines. It was time to unleash their power as a team. Bachiatari began his fight as he took warrior after warrior out, shinobi after shinobi. Haga continue to follow him watching his back, portecting him from his blind spot and harm. Takashi followed up behind Haga using he Chakra sensing abilities to find where the leading shinobi was as well as feeding her chakra to the 2 others for added strength.

The invading force was indeed astonished by the team working capabilities of these young shinobi. They continued to push forward slashing as they went, not making sure if they had killed their targets or not. Now Mikoshu knew he couldnt send out such a young team by themselves so he had been following them using his ninjutsu to help protect them. The trio continued untile they finally came to a small hut surrounded by gaurds. Mikoshu revealed himself to the team now and laid out a set of plans for them to carry out. Once each member memorized what they had to do they moved out to carry out their goals. Each person played an elaborate role in disarming the guards and taking them out.
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Once the gaurds were all either slain or knocked out the team busted into small newly formed hut. Inside stood a very glorified looking Hokage. This was more serious than Mikoshu thought, he was almost 100% sure they wouldnt be able to take down some one that strong. Takashi and Haga however were getting amped up, both ready to pounce at a moments notice. Bachiatari however seemed extreemly distracted as he was staring at a pendant the Hokage was wearing. Something seemed to be calling him to it, almost like he just wanted to pet it. This pendant seemed to give off a wispering voice of sorts that appeared only he could hear. Quickly thinking he was caught in a Genjutsu Bachiatari tried to release it. This made the Hokage laugh as he knew what was cuaing the boy to try that. Mikoshu began to try and talk to Bachiatari and refocuse him in on what was going on. Haga however decided it was time for action, not words and took off at full speed towards the Hokage. Mikoshu quickly turned his attention back to the fight and the now rushing in Haga. Quickly he pulled out a kunia and moved to try and pull Haga back. Haga thought that his Kenjutsu abilities would have surley been better than some Kage, however he didnt know that he was once a former 7 swordsmen from the Mist. Once Haga was with in striking distance he pulled his Katana out and prepared to strike the Hokage down. In return the Hokage threw out a single hand sign and summoned his sword. This sword just happened to be a giant clever (Zabuza style .) Haga knew it was to late as he was now in a comitment with his strike, it was to late to pull back. The Hokages massive sword came swinging down to greet Haga's katana. The weight, cutting power, and shear power of the cleaver proved to be to much for Hagas Katana as it snapped under the pressure leaving him completly defensless.

Haga knew that he was doomed the second his katana broke. He had never been faced with something like this before and wasnt sure what to do. Mikoshu however saw it commin and had moved in to make the save. Mikoshu was just behind Haga now and grabbed the clothing on his back. The sword was comming in to acctually cleav their heads off. This meant Mikoshu was now in danger as well. However his first priority was to save Haga, so he pulled him down to the floor and began to do a back bend to avoid the blade. Every thing appeared to be moving in slowmotion. The second Haga and Mikoshu hit the ground Haga was sent flying back to Takashi and Bachiatari by Mikoshu using his arm to essentially throw him back. Bachiatari exclaimed with much enthusiasme for their sensei was amazing. He felt like this Hokage stood no chance against Him let alone with their 'aid.' Mikoshu continued to lay on the ground however and the Hokage let out a smirk stating that the genin could be great one day and turned around to leave. Bachiatari flew to the side of Mikoshu. He had no idea what happened to him or why he wasnt responding. Once he got closer he saw a small pool of blood. How did he get hit?!

Bachiatari rolled Mikoshu over to see that his neck was bleeding at a steady rate. It appeared that as Mikoshu bended back wards and feel to the floor the Hokage turned the blade just enough to nick his neck hitting an artery. Takashi came to his side and began to try and work on him with medical ninjutsu. However the wound proved to be out of the young girls experience. The best she could do was prolong his life span from a matter minutes to a matter of a few more minutes as well as give him a drug that would take the pain away as much as she could. Mikoshu couldnt speak much but with his last words he said this; "Dont let the leaf win this war." From here blood filled his loungs and he passed away. Quickly rage over took Bachiatari, Haga, and even Takashi. This man had been a mentor to them for years now and even a father figure. What right did the Hokage have to come kill him?

The trio all looked up at each other almost at the same time just as Mikoshu passed on. They all had a determined look on their face and knew what was going to happen next. They were going to track the Hokage and kill him. They knew the chances of them succeding were slim but they needed retribution. Takashi instantly began to use her Chakra sensing abilities to track the Hokage. He wasnt to far off. Bachiatari used his abilities to fix Haga's sword. It was time to move and at the pace the Hokage was moving they would be following him for a while. Takashi reported she couldnt sense gaurds around the Hokage and that it was odd for him to be traveling alone. The trio moved quicker than they had ever before, for they had a purpose that was driving them. This reminded Bachiatari of all the times Mikoshu drove them to the point that even breath took the very last engery they had out of them. Now it seemed like that was so long ago.

The trio travled for what seemed to be forever! That is untile they entered into the Hidden Rain village. This place was indeed under a civil war. Various buildings were blowing up, shuriken flying past them but they didnt care. They just continued their path. It seemed the Hokage had came to a stop now and they were about to confront him. It seemed the Hokage was taking a break in a small ramen shop. This time Haga knew he couldnt take him alone and devised a plan with Bachiatari and Takashi. It all started by identifying that the Hokage had summoned some sort of cats to aid him in watching his back. Bachiatari made a mental not of this personal summon the Hokage seemed to have. Bachiatari first pulled out a small disc and pressed a button on it and threw it at the Hokage. Now the Hokage was full aware of the presence of the 3 and the object thrown at him. However he judge the distance that the disc wouldnt touch him so he sat perfectly still and allowed the disc to fly by. As the disc did the timer on it went off.

The button that was pressed was indeed a timer and now that it had gone off 3 long blades erected from the disc and began to spin at a quick rate causing it to fly faster at the hokage. This sent an alarm off in the Hokages eyes and he began to pull back to avoide it, however just with Mikoshu the blade nicked the neck of the Hokage as well as the necklass that held the pendant. The pendant went flying off to the side and Bachiatari moved in with Haga to retrieve it. Bachiatari caught it while Haga stood in a defensive position ready for any thing. A loud laugh was let out by the Hokage as attention was turned back to him. It seemed the blade had only drawn a small about of blood and the pendant took the brunt of the damage. Takashi was ready to kill now and dropped in from the ceiling kunia in hand ready to kill. This is when he summoned his sword once again this time cleaving Takashi in 2. He gave the remaining two a warning to turn back now while they were alive and good luck with their new pendant. The Hokage then took his leave for the last time.

Haga and Bachiatari feel to their knees as blood squirted accross their face. This was Takashi's blood, their long time friend. In the last few hours they had lost their sensei and now their best friend. The 2 conversed but barley on what to do. They knew they couldnt continue to follow the Hokage, unless they wanted to end up being killed. The now 'duo' knew they couldnt return to their village faced with this dishonoor. So they decided it was time they become a rouge pair of shinobi. Their team working capabilities would more than likely give them the ability to survive in life.

Missing Ninja Arc:

Bachiatari and Haga both became missing ninja after fleeing from the Ramen shop incident in the Hidden Rain village. The duo didnt want to head back to their village but they knew they needed some of their supplies from their home. That was their first 'quest' as a individuals. Having to sneak in didnt prove to be half as hard as sneaking out. However the duo eventually made it out safe and sound. They agreed to stay in the Earth country since they knew the terrain better than any place else and would have a better chance at defending themselves should they need to. As Bachiatari began to leave the village for the last time he pulled out the scroll his sensei gave him just days before the last round of the Chuunin exams. He knew it was too soon what was so important for his sensei to give it to him and tell him only to use on the most important basis of life and death.

Bachiatari and Haga moved high up into the mountians. Just out side their village where mostly travlers went and hardly ever any shinobi. It was terrain Mikoshu had taken them up to train on several times before so it was familiar to the duo. It is here that the duo began to fall. It all started by Bachiatari remembering he had taken the pendant from the Hokage in their small little fight at the Ramen shop. He searched through his bags untile he found it. The second he did its 'evil' began to speak out to Bachiatari and taint him. He began to cuddle with the pendant and stroke it as if a mother would to a newborn. At first Haga hadnt noticed the pendant, but he did notice Bachiatari withdrawing from the world and spending more time huddled up in a ball speaking to what he though was himself. Their food rations continued to dwindle over the next week or so. They knew they were in trouble so various travlers passing by they would use various tricks and ninjusu to steal food from them. However this proved to be very troublesome, so they discussed it and knew they would have to kill some one in order to get the full amount of food one of the travlers might have.

After the first month away from the village, the village elders had determined that Bachiatari and Haga had failed in their mission causing their senseis death as well as went astray to confront the Hokage causing their partners death. These were some serious offenses and Hunter ninja were being sent to track down the Duo. THe Hunter nin had no way of finding them however with no leads. That is untile various travles began to come up missing along the mountians path. Bachiatari and Haga had began to kill travlers passing through and would take their supplies. Bachiatari would 'hide' their bodies so Haga wouldnt worry, the pendant however began to melt his mind away starting by creating a canibale sense in him. Bachiatari began to eat the travlers corpse leaving more supplies for Haga. This began to worry Haga as he couldnt figure out why the amount of supplies he was getting was a surplus compared to Bachiatari's.

This went on for a while untile word reached the village of travlers who would take the path were comming up missing. This gave the Hunter's a potential lead at least. Even if it was to Haga and Bachiatari they would still be doing something productive in solving the problem. As the Hunter Ninja searched the mountian trails Haga confronted Bachiatari who now was begining to drastically change his posture about where the travlers bodies were being stored at. At first Bachiatari was unresponsive. Haga began to question every thing that was happening to him with the bodies, where all the tools made from bones were coming from, as well as the pendant he was consistantly fondling over. The last part is what caught his attention. Almost instantly Bachiatari leaped out and began to strangle his now former friend. He did so not even thinking, almost as if the pendant was driving him to do so.

The 2 continued to sprawl for a while both attempting to throw punchs and/or attempting to choke the other out. After an half hour of scrapping around their noise carried over to where the Hunters where at. Instantly they began to investigate and move to its source. Once they arrived they saw Bachiatari with his hands around Haga's throat screaming "ITS MINE." At first they didnt move in to do anything, but once Haga went limp and stopped moving they did. The 3 Hunters rushed in and pulled Bachiatari off Haga. One of the three knew some medical ninjutsu and was capable of doing some work on Haga. The other 2 Hunters rushed to Haga's side to see if they could aid their other member in anyway. As they all discussed amongst themselves, Bachiatari pulled out a scroll from his pocket. It was the scroll his sensei had given him long ago. The 'pendant' seemed to drive him to open it. When the 'pendant spoke' to him, it came accross as a alternate personality. Slowly he was begining to refer to this personality as "Hideyoshi" (Meaning Blessed.)

Hideyoshi commanded Bachiatari to open the scroll and promised it would help his life out even more. So Bachiatari foolishly listened. The scroll contained a Kinjutsu that his Sensei thought would be devistating for Bachiatari should he have the proper training, now it was just a gate way for Hideyoshi to come out. The scroll instantly shoot out hundreds of dark like threads into Bachiatari's body. These threads wooved into his body slowly making it a very painfull process. His screams sent alarm to the Hunters who now claimed Haga was dead at the hands of Bachiatari. As they turned their attention to Bachiatari, they saw his skin being ripped open in some places as the dark threads began to force their way into his body. Once they were all pushed it they sealed up the holes by stitching themselves up. The Hunters were indeed afraid but knew they had to take him out. All at once, the Hunters moved into eliminate him. However between his metal manipulation and his 'new found' abilities he proved to be to much for the Hunters. Bachiatari fisrt killed off their "medic" through the use of his metal, then in an instant he shoot out both hands and grabbed the other 2 by the throats and lifted them into the air. The threads seemed to almost instantly attack their bodies by forcing their way in and extracting their hearts. Here is where Hideyoshi fully came to be. The masks on his back could all represent a part of Hideyoshi and with each "new" heart Hideyoshi grew in power.

Leaf Arc:

Over time Bachiatari's body continued to alter its self. First his height began to retreat to just under 5 foot. His hair began to go next as he was balding, the remaining hair was long but scares. His skin continued to become discolored, instead of pale as if he he missed the sunlight it became darkened almost resembling dead skin as well as extreemly rough. Living in such rough conditions altered the way he began to move around. Bachitari almost always is on all four's. His 'walk' is similar to that of a monkey's. This is due to having crawled around in tight spaces for so long. In fact Bachitari has even developed his own fighting style, not having any formal training. Just learning to fight with the new ways he moves. He has a set of green eyes that do not appear as a normal set of eyes. First is the fact that he has no pupils its just a circle of green where his eyes are. Next would be the size of them, being so large. Bachiatari's physical physique is rather impressive to most. Not only is he cut but the size of his muscels are impressive for his size as well. Bachiatari weighs in only at 135 lbs. For his size that is extreemly good however most cant see him weighing so much, this is due to the fact muscel weighs more than fat.

Bachiatari lived in isolation for so long that his mental state almost completly changed along with his physical state. Bachiatari continued to live in various mountians for years and years. Consistantly training himself to defend against shinobi as well as plotting against the leaf. In the back of his mind remained enough sanity that he remembered what happened and the pact he took to get back at the leaf for what they did to him and his 'family.' Bachiatari almost trained 24/7 untile he reached the age of 45. Now Bachiatari lost track of what days were or months and as result he lost track of how old he was, but official records easily determined how old he was.

It was around this age that Bachiatari was approched by Kensei Uchiha Jr. At first he didnt reveal his name to Bachiatari becuse the second Bachiatari saw the man he attacked thinking he was either food or another Shinobi trying to hunt him down. As the 2 fought Kensei exchanged pleasuntries by introducing himself. This pissed Bachiatari off even more knowing that the man was a Uchiha meaning he was from the leaf. He even exclaimed this to the Uchiha and began to fight with full force. The 2 fought for hours all the while Kensei explaining his distaste for the leaf and how he was taking over a group called the Akatsuki and wanted Bachiatari to join in on the conquest. Almost instantly Hideyoshi came out and began to argue with Bachiatari saying he could trust this man and this man only, that it was not only safe to join with him but to take out his revenge on the leaf through the groups help. Now the fight had been pretty even up untile now, when Bachiatari gained the upper hand. Instead of killing the Uchiha at his feet, he bent over and picked him up and lowered himself to one knee as a sign of alligence.

Kensei and Bachiatari began to travel from here heading for what Kensei knew as the Hidden Leaf. Kensei would be putting himself out on the line with voutching for Bachiatari to the Hokage and councile, but if he could get them to accept him then the sky's the limit. A trial period was set up for Bachiatari under which the shinobi would be highly monitored. His social habits would be studied as well as his intentions. Bachiatari would be given missions to carry out as part of his trial period. These missions were among the most dangerous, to see how dedicated he was.

Kiri Arc:

Time came when the great Ninja war took its toll on each village. However the Leaf took the most damage at first and collapsed. This sent termoil accross the land the Leaf had previously owned. Many of the clans who lived in the land planned on staying to fight for their homes. The leaf may have fallen but they still did not want to flee from their homes. The remaining clans however decided it was time to move on to a more stable land. Bachiatari's new clan moved to Kiri to rejoin their bretheren. While Bachiatari lived on his own his clan moved on to Kiri as a majority and the Leaf as a minor. It was good to reconnect with his clan, however it would be better to reconnect with the entire clan as a whole.

During the travle over the Kiri the Caravan the Clan travled with was attacked by Kumo Shinobi. They grew wind of the Metal Clan looking for a new home again. The Earth country thought of the Kinzoku clan as a valuable asset. So a dispatch was sent to force the clan to rejoin the Village. The caravan was a priority to protect as well as each other. If these shinobi were here to force the clan to rejoin then they would have to do everything they could to stop'em. A fight broke out and many of the Kinzoku fell while few of the Kumo shinobi fell. Up untile this point Bachiatari was not apart of the fight. Several of the Kinzoku begged him for his support, but he decided he'd rather not join. Untile one Kumo ninja attempted to attack him. Quickly Bachiatari killed the shinobi and broke out in a blood lust. He began to attack with full force slashing and hacking his was through many of the foe. He came upon the shinobi who was leading this little expidition and decided if he was defeated perhaps the others would dispens.

The fight began and went on for an increadiable amount of time. It was not a fair fight as the Shinobi's support would jump in from time to time to attack Bachiatari. This was quickly draining Bachiatari of his strength and chakra as he was forced to deal with this amount of opponets. Just when he thought the battle would be lost a kiri ninja named Saigo. He was indeed a life saver. The duo rose up and defeated the lead Kumo shinobi. Just as Bachiatari predicted, the remaining shinobi fled. The caravan continued its journey to Kiri under Bachiatari's and Saigo's protection. This was indeed a great new "Freindship" created that would sure be a deadly team.

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Role-Play Sample:

(Average post, on the low side)
Gabriale stood off in the far distance. He had is Doujutsu: The Archer's eye's activated currently. Although this would be near impossiable to see due to the fact he wore a metalic mask. This mask gave off the appearance that he had only one eye. Gabriale wasnt like the other ANBU. He alway's wore this mask as it conected with his metalic suit he wore. From time to time Gabriale did change the looks of the mask to 'throw' people off as best he could. Today Gabriale was training his close combat capabilities. Gabriale had both of his wrist blades erected and with the aid of his Doujutsu Gabriale was both deflecting throw shuriken as well as repell some rather experienced swords men. (NPC's)

Off to the side laid Gabriale's back quiver, side quiver, and large bow. Since this exercise was to work on his close combat capabilities and the use of his wrist blades he would need to set them to the side out of the way. Gabriale still wore his round 'straw' hat. However being out side and see as the sun seemed to be bright today his hat gave off a minimal reflective shine. This was due to the fact that Gabriale's hat was lined with refined valcanic ash. This made it into a weapon and capable of cutting through simple shuriken, kunia, or even a basic katana. This hat was pushed back a bit more so than normal. This was so Gabriale's vision could be maximized to its normal as well as fullest potential and as result this showed much of Gabriale's metalic mask. It was obviously conected to the clothing Gabriale wore below it, a black metalic suit. I would appear as though it would be for defensive purposes however this wasn't true as it was desinged for it aerodynamic's and increase in speed for Gabriale. At best the suit could defend against thrown shuriken and kunia.

Gabriale's suit was covered by a green ranger's cloak. This was somthing a type of archer might often wear. Due to Gabriale's large amount of movement's and various amount's of wind comming in, the cloak appeared to be blowing all over the place. Gabriale flipped and moved about blocking various shuriken thrown at him from some fellow shinobi up in the tree's. As he did so he also went about blocking various sword blow's from other shinobi Gabe asked to help. At one point while deflecting a ariel sword blow Gabriale took notice to 2 specific shinobi off in the distance. One being the Silver Leaf and the other being a more than advance fuuinjutsu master. Gabriale knew nearly every one in the village as well as their most of their preferred skill's. Being an ANBU Gabriale needed to keep tab's on every one 'just in case.' Knowing their capabilities helped greatly. One it provided potential ANBU canidates. Two should some one begin to rise in power then it could mean a 'closer eye' is needed on them.

Gabriale knew both of these people and knew both were near future ANBU canidates due to their great amount of skill. Knowing both were fuunijutsu users Gabriale thought it would be benifitial to drop in due to the fact he was pretty decent in using fuuinjutsu. He was the most superior one in his clan at least in using fuuinjutsu. "That is enough." Gabriale commanded just as he blocked the man's latest attack. Instantly all the men stopped and took a head nood in a sing of respect and fleed from the area. From there Gabriale quick made his way over to his stuff and quickly grabbed it all and suited up. The duo were off in the distance, far enough that most people would just be capable of seeing blurry image's but due to Gabriale's Doujutsu he was capable of seeing them perfectly clear.

In a matter of moment's he was upon them up ontop of a roof top. He was unsure if they would know who he was or not. Most of the time Gabriale was to keep off in the back round away from 'public' veiw. Usually only the higher up and more informed shinobi of the village knew of his existance and capabilities. However one of the 2 may know of him or they both may not. Gabriale decided to drop in from the roof top that was off to the side in the distance. "You, are a Fuuinjutsu master are you not?" Gabriale said in a very manatone soldier like metalic voice. As he walked twords them he carried him self much like a 'proper' soldier would with his shoulder back and chest out. He appeared to be very stern in his walk but not as if he was faking, more like it was his acctual normal way of walking.

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Weapons

Name: Round Hat
Rank: B
Quantity: One
Description: Bachiatari has an abundant supply of valcanic ash (stock up on it) due to the fact the material is hard to come accross. He uses this material to refine into a blade. This blade is easily sharper than steel and most swrod materials naturaly. Bachi use's it to line his hat around the edges with. At times he make take the hat off and throw it at the opponet, the hat could pass through several trees before comming to a halt. This hat is considered B rank due to its cutting ability,

Name: Small Spiked Shoe
Rank: D
Quantity: One set
Description: Due to the advanced knowlege of weaponry Bachi has he is capable of inventing various gadgets. One being the Small spiked shoe. Each member wear's a pair of these. In the bottom of the shoe is smaller spike's. This allows the wearer to turn on a dime with great percision. Should the person need to stop all momentum and turn they can do so now as well as pick up more speed due to better traction and the spikes digging into the ground giving more leverage. If a kick is thrown the spike's may add more damage if hit directly with them.

Name: Triple Blade Spinner (sealed)
Rank: C
Quantity: 4
Description: Developed by Bachi this blade folds up into a very small round disc about the size of some one's hand. Bachi holds 4 of these on his belt. When taken out or off his belt 3 blades erect out, once thrown with a small bust of chakra not even close to a E rank jutsu the blades will begin to rotate at high speeds adding damage. These blades are also made from valcanic ash so they may cut through several trees or clothing/armour before 'stopping.'

Name: Missile Javlen (sealed)
Rank: C
Quantity: 4
Description: Bachiatari keeps several of these sealed in a very small scroll kept on his belt. When pulled out of the seal the Javlen will resemble a tekie tourch. This is very accurate as the tip top container contains a flamable liquid. When the user goes to throw a spear they will press down on part of the spear's saft. This will cause a spark to flare up and start a 5 second timer. After the 5 seconds the liquid will expload with the force of 5 exploading tags. He developed this while working in the village prior to his isolation.

Name: Bone Shuriken (sealed)
Rank: D
Quantity: 3
Origin: Various times Bachiatari will use his fallen opponet or praeys body for various tools. He only has 3 for now but once he takes another opponets life he will increase that amount.
Description: Often Bachiatari will take the bodies of his fallen foes and use alot of their body for parts. He may take their organs for himself or other reasons. However the Bones he uses for weaponry. Having lived in the isolation for so long supplies became rather slim and as result he was forced to use his knowlege of weaponry and the knowledge of the human body to create these shuriken. These shuriken becuse they are made of bone will not break against other weaponry unless it is a blunt force like a hammer swing.

Name: Junk Sack
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Description: Bachiatari needs metal to use his KKG. Like many of his clan members Bachiatari carries as many metal peices with him as he can. Inside this large sack he carries on his back is a collection of swords(6), plain sheets of metal (5), shuriken (30), senbon (50), Doors (2), and set of armour (3). This all weighs up to a whooping 275 lbs. This onviously slows Bachiatari drastically but due to his clans special trait it doesnt slow him down as much as it would a normal shinobi. Bachitari uses this for his KKG. The various peices of metal inside the sack that is. Becuse he is more than often on all fours his appearance gives off a insect or scorpion appearance.

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Scorpion Summons/Related Jutsus

Name: Scorpion Bushin
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Bachitari created this jutsu personally. A single bushin comprised of regular sized scorpion. These bushin can only take a single hit before being destroyed. When the clone is stricken it will decay into around a hundred scorpions who may attack the foe with their poisionous venom. (Poision is the same as the other scorpion summons) Should the bushin be destroyed not around the opponet, the scorptions will still make their way to the opponet. They will scurry at a fast pase. They will last for 5 posts before breaking apart. Their venom if inflicted will slow the motor skills of the opponet for 3 turns. After that the venom will begin to become deadly. Within an 2 posts of the venom coursing through the opponets body their vision will become blurred and their motor skills will be even more slowed as their joints begin to swell. This will begin to worsen with every post the opponet makes. After 10 posts paralasis will begin to set in. Very small movement will be able to be made by the opponet. Things like hand signs wont be able to be made. Speech will barley be plasable. Finger movements will be barley plasable but major movements wont. After another 10 posts of this the opponet will be dead from the venom shutting down various major organs.

Summons:

Name: Sasoriso Do
Rank:A
Elements: Earth/Fire
Species: Scorpion
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Description: Sasoriso is a scorpion given to Gabe at birth. This scorpion travled with Gabe through out his life and began to grow on him. Over time both Sasoriso and Gabe began to grow older and larger. Sasoriso now measurs in at roughly the size of a rather large Tank. Gabriale is seen mounting Sasoriso at all times he is summoned. If Gabriale has too leave his back then his opponet must be a rather hard one. Sasoriso is considered a A rank creatur due to its deadly capabilities and chakra supply but takes roughly B rank to summon. His venom is the same as the other summons. Their venom if inflicted will slow the motor skills of the opponet for 3 turns. After that the venom will begin to become deadly. Within an half hour of the venom coursing through the opponets body their vision will become blurred and their motor skills will be even more slowed as their joints begin to swell. This will begin to worsen with every post the opponet makes. After about an 2 hours paralasis will begin to set in. Very small movement will be able to be made by the opponet. Things like hand signs wont be able to be made. Speech will barley be plasable. Finger movements will be barley plasable but major movements wont. After another hour of this the opponet will be dead from the venom shutting down various major organs.

Jutsus:

Name: Tail extention
Rank:B
Description: Yoigo can send his tail triple the distance it can normaly reach. The tail can wrap around an opponet or simply sting the opponet with its poisiones stinger

Name:Poision Feild
Rank:A
Description: Yoigo contains a posiones sack within his lungs. He will inhale a deep amount of air. Then using Chakra to increase the posion amoun in the air he will begin to expel it. This quickly envelops a large area. A regular city block in length is enveloped.

Name: 8 Leg increase
Rank:B
Description: Yoigo will double his leg speed. Each leg provides him with the great speed he has. Now with the use of this jutsu each leg will seem to double in the rate at which they move.

Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.

Name: Domu - Earth Spear
Rank: B
Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank:B
Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Name: Bicachu
Rank: C
Elements: Wind
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Contract Type: Blood
Species: Scorpion
Description: Bicachu is a vary unique scorpion. His size comes in at roughly a around a puppys size. Gabe meet this summon around his early 20's. Bicachu is used for speed not power. Bicachu's speed is double that of any human. This is just his natural speed, this is becuse of the position his legs are at and the amount of legs he has. Bicachu looks very repulsive but is indeed loyal to the contract of the scorpion nation. He has become especially fond of Gabe. He has only a few select amount of jutsus. His tail carries the same deadly venom the other scorpions do. Their venom if inflicted will slow the motor skills of the opponet for 3 turns. After that the venom will begin to become deadly. Within an half hour of the venom coursing through the opponets body their vision will become blurred and their motor skills will be even more slowed as their joints begin to swell. This will begin to worsen with every post the opponet makes. After about an 2 hours paralasis will begin to set in. Very small movement will be able to be made by the opponet. Things like hand signs wont be able to be made. Speech will barley be plasable. Finger movements will be barley plasable but major movements wont. After another hour of this the opponet will be dead from the venom shutting down various major organs.

Jutsus:

Name: Tail extention
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Bicachu can send his tail triple the distance it can normaly reach. The tail can wrap around an opponet or simply sting the opponet with its poisiones stinger

Name:Poision Feild
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Poision?
Description: Bicachu contains a posiones sack within his lungs. He will inhale a deep amount of air. Then using Chakra to increase the posion amoun in the air he will begin to expel it. This quickly envelops a large area. A regular city block in length is enveloped.

Name: 8 Leg increase
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Bicachu will double his leg speed. Each leg provides him with the great speed he has. Now with the use of this jutsu each leg will seem to double in the rate at which they move.

Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

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Non-Elemental

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope or wire binds.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Chakra Suppression
Rank: D
Description: Ninja are trained to sense other’s presence and Chakra. Allowing them to sense when danger nears. This Technique was created by ANBU to facilitate Assassination missions and Covert infiltrations. By Calming their Chakra flow though focus and momentary concentration, the ANBU member can minimize the “Ambient noise” created by their chakra, reducing it’s delectability, allowing them to move without being sensed through such means. Even the most Chakra sensitive Shinobi will have difficulty detecting the ANBU member using this technique approaching them. This however does not conceal the ANBU member physically, they will be just as visible as usual.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu – Body Flicker
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Bunshin Bakuha [Shadow Clone Explosion]
Rank: A
Range: Close, Medium
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Description: At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but one can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion. The chakra used for this clone is not the same as a regulat Bushin. It is far less.

Name: Voice Thrown
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user causes their voice to be thrown. The user can make the sound of their voice come from another object or person. The user can do this without moving their mouth if they choose. Similar to that of a vantrilaquist.

Owner: ~Fox~.
Name: Kouki no Chakra [Chakra Ropes].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: None.
Description: The user forms the seals and flings their hands toward the target in an energetic gesture. Multiple ‘ropes’ of thick blue chakra surge from their hands and through the air, covering a distance of up to twenty metres. Upon reaching the target they wrap themselves around it (around their arms, legs, hands, torso and neck) and binds it in place. Once the target is caught, the user can remove the ropes from their hands and attach them to a solid object instead – they will hold just as sturdily but allow the user to perform other techniques.

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Lightning Jutsus

Name: Destructo Disk
Rank: B
Range: Close-Far
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu.
Elemental Affinity: Lightning.
Description: In this jutsu Gabriale holds one of his arms upwards and focuses lightning chakra above his palm once he dose so he can make a spinning disk of pure lightning he can then throw this at a target it can hone in on them but if timed right you can dodge it before it hits you then it will fly by and keep moving till it hits something. The disk can be one large one or many smaller ones depending on the chakra amount put into it. Should it be a large disc more power will be put into it. Allowing it to fly faster and give it more destructive power. Should there be multiple disc's then it simply becomes a number game.

Name: Raiton • Raijuunida Inmetsu [Lightning Release • Lighting Wolf Pack Destruction].
Rank: S.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: Raiton [Lightning].
Description: The user forms a couple of hand seals before quickly gathering lightning chakra in each hand. Swiping both hands at the target will then cause ten separate channels of lightning surging towards a target or targets. The direction of each lightning channel can be controlled by the user. Once each one leaves the user’s hand, it takes the form of a feral wolf. Until the attack is complete, the ‘wolves’ leave trails of lightning leading back to the user’s hand. Upon contact, each ‘wolf’ explodes with enormous electrical force, sending wave upon wave of deadly lightning blasting through the target’s body and the surrounding area. Like similarly powerful Raiton techniques, it is said that the lightning in this jutsu can pierce any material or object.

Name: 6 Chamber Bolt Fire
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user will state a distance and firing speed, then he/she will launch 6 lightning bolts of the speed/distance at the target, maximum speeds of 70 Mph, maximum distance of 70 meters. The user can control when the bolts are fired and can target different ones to different distances. If the target isn't at the same distance the power will be lessoned if further, strengthened if closer. It has enough punch to throw a person several meters off their feet and knock the wind out of them.

Name: 6 Chamber Bolt Fire, Mass Produce
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user will duplicate the amount of chambers to a maximum amount of 20 (Thus 120 Bolts) they all can be targeted at different ranges and speeds also at different targets or points they wish to fire. This will kill someone if more then 18 bolts hit them.

Name: Final Storm.
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu.
Elemental Affinity: Lightning.
Clan: None.
Description: This is one of Bachitari's finest Lightning Jutsu he firstly charges lightning around his fist’s and continues to flow down his arms. once lightning has covered his lower arm he throws his fist’s in front of himself opening his palms as he dose so once he does the lightning around his hands will pour outwards focusing into a beam both beams will fuse together making a very large and powerful beam of lightning that packs a hefty amount of punch. This beam is gives off a bright light and as result the user must aquier a target before shooting it. If the user or target looks directly into the beam to long their vision may be damaged for 2-3 posts. This beam is around a foot in diameter. This beam gives off an extreem heat. Should the beam miss by a few inchs the target may recieve 1st degree burns. Should the beam hit the target, the target will either recieve 3rd degree burns and a temporary paralasys of 20 seconds or it will mealt an object.

Name: Eye of the Storm
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Lightning
Clan: None
Description: This jutsu is the lesser verion of Final Storm. The user will only charge lightning chakra into one hand. It will continue to flow through his amrs untile it reachs his elbows. From here the user will extend his hand out twords a target and open his palm letting lose a rather smaller beam compared to that of the Final storm. This beam is about half a foot in diameter. However this beam can still pack a hefty punch. The damage of this jutsu may paralyze an opponet for a few seconds. 2nd degree burns can also be produced if hit with the beam.

Name: Raiton Soutei Kusari [Lightning Element • Binding Chain]
Rank: C
Description: The user gathers chakra in one arm and it begins to spark with electricity. The user then thrusts their arm forward, sending forth a chain made of lightning that wraps around the opponent, stunning, binding and injuring them. This Chain can reach up to 25 yards. These give off a small electric current into the traget it htis or wraps around. This may stun them for a brief few seconds if it strikes them or stun them as long as the chain is wrapped around them. This chain travles no faster than a simple shuriken.

Owner: Mr. K
Name: Raiton: Dendou Jiyuu no Jutsu [Lightning Release: Electric Freedom Technique]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A jutsu so simple it doesn't require any hand seals! The jutsu is performed by using the most basic of elemental manipulation to create elecricity, but instead of using the outsides of the hands the user creates it inside a muscle, causing intense pain with no lasting side effects. This jutsu's only real use is for breaking genjutsu, since it hurts the user instead of a target.

Owner: Mr. K
b]Name:[/b] Raiton: Dendou Anago no jutsu [Lightning Release: Electric Eel Technique]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A basic Raiton technique. The user must perform two hand seals while gathering chakra either in a concentrated spot or all throughout their body. This part may be performed as much as thirty seconds in advance of the actual attack and held in till released. Upon release a high voltage shock will either travel through the point of concentration or through the body as a whole, delivering a shock capable of stunning and causing uncontrollable muscle spasms in the victim. To be hit by this technique a person must be either in contact or withing three feet of the user under normal conditions. While under water this effect widens substantially to withing ten feet of the user. This technique is incapacitating for a full ten seconds (meaning two combat posts) and is strong enough to stop a human heart if concentrated and directed correctly. As the effects wear off a person may feel a burning or tingling sensation all over their body, though the technique does not physically leave more then first degree burns even when focused.

Owner: Mr. K
Name: Raiton: Jinrai no Jutsu [Lightening Release: Thunder Clap Technique]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A basic lightening jutsu requiring two hand seals. The user performs the two seals and concentrates their chakra into their hands creating a negative charge in their hands opposite a positive charge in the air, created by the release of chakra from the body. The two charges create an area extending one foot away from the charged hands of the user that is filled with miniature lightening. The lightening creates a bright white flash that is capable of blinding, and creates a pressure wave that sweeps forward in a 180 degree ark from one side of the user to the other. The pressure wave can rupture ear drums and at close to medium range can knock a person off their feet (melee-20ft aprox). If a person is actually within the foot range of the hands severe electrocution will follow. This technique is built to disorient, not as a melee attack.

Owner: Mr. K
Name: Raiton: Tsuchi Kujono Jutsu [Lightning Release: Earth Destruction Technique]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A basic lightning jutsu requiring the use of two hand seals. The shinobi performs the hand seals and uses elemental manipulation to convert their chakra to the lightning element. Then the user transfers the energy into the ground to any spot of their desire within 50 feet of their current position. When activated with a release seal from the user that area, consisting of a three foot diameter circle, will explode due to rapid expansion from heating from the electricity running through the dirt and rock. This is near the strength of an explosive tag when the spot chosen is just normal dirt; however, if a small to medium sized rock outcrop or pile of earth were on top of the chosen location the blast becomes much stronger. Composition of ground is important when using this technique as rock will create small fragments that act akin to shrapnel, while plain dirt will act more like a concussion grenade. This technique can be used against constructs created by earth specializing ninja.

Owner: Mr. K
Name: Raiton: Mayoko Rakurai no Jutsu [Lightning Release: Ark Lightning Technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A long range technique requiring four hand seals. The user builds up an electrical charge, usually in the hands, via elemental manipulation of lightning chakra. This is done while the hand seals are being performed and can be seen by electricity arcing between the hands. The user then simply directs their attack by pointing at the spot they wish to attack, unleashing a blast of lightening from said pointing finger at the target. This attack is strong enough to severely burn the point of impact, throw a person several feet through the air, or make rock formations explode as they rapidly are heated. As usual with a lightning element there is a considerable shock at the end of this lightening bolt. People hit often lose consciousness, convulse, froth at the mouth, smoke from the hair, and can possibly have their heart stopped. This jutsu is effective at up to 100 feet away, but becomes less accurate over distance. At 50 feet it is very accurate, at 75, moderately, and at 100 it requires some luck to hit a person sized target.

Owner: Mr. K
Name: Raiton: Seidenki Ittai no Jutsu [Lightening Release: Static Zone Technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A technique that requires four hand seals. The ninja uses elemental manipulation to disperse lightning chakra into the air, creating a highly charged environment for 150 feet in all directions from the user. This zone is prone to static discharge and can be triggered by the smallest of movement. The discharge isn't harmful more then getting shocked on a car door in a windy day, instead this shock alerts the user of the static field to the position of the discharge, making this zone almost impossible to hide in effectively. This technique acts as a sort of radar for the user, giving him a sixth sense that can't be fooled by traditional genjutsu. However, this does have its disadvantage in that the field cannot distinguish what created the discharge, often getting discharge off of nearby animal life or teammates. The more objects the user has to track at once the more stressful a situation can be, leading to headaches if the user is subject to many discharge sources over an extended period of time. Lasts five posts before the user must recharge the field with more chakra or let the jutsu end

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Earth Jutsus

Name: Doton Ishi no Yari - Earth Element Stone Spear
Rank: B
Description: By using chakra to control the earth below and around them, the user turns it into sharp spears. This jutsu can be used both offensively and defensively. The user can either create a spear to block an opponent's movement or they can hurl the spear at their opponent using chakra. The spears cannot be pulled from the ground without using chakra. The user can pull out up to 20 spears from the ground at a time.

Name: Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

Name: Domu - Earth Spear
Rank: B
Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Bachitari will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank:B
Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Name: Mother Earth's Fist.
Rank: A
Description: Without noticing, at fast speed, a X (each takes more chakra) a mound of earth hands will come up out of the ground and wrap around the enemies legs. It will begin to keep wrapping around till the hands reach the head. And slowly the earth hands which are fully wrapped around the enemies begins to slowly crush them or simply bind them. This jutsu may also be used to bash into the opponet. They travel at speeds around 40 mph if done from a distance. When this jutsu is used 12 hands are created. Should the user choose to creat any more each hand created would cost the amount of a C rank.

Name: Spikes of the Earth
Rank: A
Description: With the name being an exaggeration, Gabe is able to create hundreds of earth spikes in the area around him. Reaching from heights of 3 feet to 10 feet, they'll vary in size. The spikes will last for about 3-5 minutes before colasping back into the earth.

Name: Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: This is a simple jutsu. The user will charge earth based chakra through their leg and stomp the ground sending the chakra out in a blast. The user will aim this at a target or object. The chakra will send a missle like appearance through the ground. Should it hit the target's location it will inflict bashing damage. The fissure moves at a very quick pace but only follows a traigh path. It in no way can curve

Name:Mutli-Shields of Stone
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Using the earth element, Gabe can create several 6 ft x 3 ft walls of earth random anywhere he wants. This is a pure defense move but can also be used in offensive ways if used correctly. The wall is about 2 1/2 feet thick. Each wall weights 200 lbs.

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Clan Jutsus

Name: Metaru Supaiku (Metal Spikes)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kinzoku (Metal)
Description: The user does a series of hand seals then liqid metal starts to seep though their pores from the users bones (thanks to the metal infused within their bones when they are born.) , and then the liquid metal shapes into sharp spikes all over the users body. This can be used to counter incoming taijutsu attacks or for offence. The distance of this attack can not exceed 25 yards.

Name: Metaru Bunshin (Metal Clone)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kinzoku (Metal)
Description: The user does a series of hand seals then presses their palms against the ground ontop of a set of metal and takes the form of the user. The number of clones made depends on how much metal is layin on the ground. This clone is better than most clones as its made out of metal. This Clone specializes in Taijutsu and can only use metal related jutsus, no elemental jutsus (non-elemental can be used.) This clone can take a beating, as far as Tiajutsu alot of damage would need to be done in order to defeat the clone, however it is directly hitting metal so the user will likely be hurt. Weapon damage is VERY minimal. A sword with special chacteristics would be capable of doing damage but little. A single S rank jutsu would most likley be capable of destroyin it. The speed of the clones movement is not restricted.

Name:Metaru Liquid
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kinzoku (Metal)
Descrpition: The user will start by either shooting or throwing some form of metal at a target or opponet. At mid point to the object the user will activate this jutsu using the OX hand sign. The peice of metal will then turn into the liquid form and become sticky as well as expand into its thinest layer. Should a peice of the liquid hit the opponet or target, the rest of the rather wide but thin layer of liquid metal will whip around and pull back to the spot the first peice touched. The user will then release the OX hand sign and the liquid will quickly turn back to its solid form. This increases it weight. This can be used to slow an opponet down or trap them. If enough metal is used it could potentially kill some one.

Name: Metal Mend
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kinzoku (Metal)
Description: The user will use simple techniques of his metal manipulation to either fix or break a weapon or metal object. For instance if a user swing a sword at the user they can break the sword by claping their hands onto the blade's flat surface. This can be done with any metal object. The same principal stands for fixing a broken metal object.

Name: Metal Trednills
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kinzoku (Metal)
Description: The user will slam their hands together pulsing chakra through their body. The metal placed on their bones at birth will move to their back and shoot out 10, 25 feet long trednills made from the metalic substance. These can be used for defense slicing up various objects of offensive purposes. The user can use them to walk with as the end of the trednills will turn to a more flat surface allwoing the user to have them walk for him. The user may use them as a effective spear keeping the points shar allowing them to stab various things. Lastly the user may have them form flexiable swords used for slicing purposes. A combination can be used if needed. This lasts for 10 posts.

Name: Metaru Kinko (Metal Spear)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kinzoku (Metal)
Description: This is a simple jutsu. The user requiers no hand seals to activate it. Simple use of chakra will do as a rod will jet out from underneath the clothing of the user. This rod is around 6 ft long making it about the length of a spear. The ends of the the rod are sharppend making it an excelent tool for stabbing or slashing.

Name: Metal Mastery
Rank: N/A
Type: Doujutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple technique that allows a Kaihaku to manipulate metal in any way they wish using their Doujutsu, the Kinzokugan. The clan member can project their chakra into the metal to control it, so long as it is within their area of manipulation. An important note is that metals which already possess chakra within them cannot be manipulated. Based on the rank of the clan member, their range of manipulation differs.

- C-Rank: Circular radius of 10 meters.
- B-Rank: Circular radius of 20 meters.
- A-Rank: Circular radius of 30 meters.
- S-Rank: Circular radius of 50 meters.

So, if a clan member wishes to make a kunai float through the air, he will only be able to do so within his range. This Doujutsu is active at all times and by itself does not utilize any noticeable amount of chakra to stay active. It only acts as a baseline for the clan member's manipulation. Unless the clan member is using the eyes for a jutsu, it does not cost them any chakra.

Name: Blacksmith’s Touch
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A move where the Kaihaku will use an outside source of metal to repair any damages to metallic structures and items. The clan member must be touching the object to be repaired and will then use his Metal Eyes to manipulate any metal within a 15ft radius to fix the said damages. So long as there is plenty of metal available, the damages themselves do not take long to fix, often repairing themselves in less than one post. An alternate solution is to have the item’s metal shift and cover up the damages, though this is not usually done since the item will be in no better condition.

Name: Metal Levitation
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: One of the most commonly-used and basic techniques of the Kaihaku clan, this technique allows the clan member to lift metallic objects into the air, move them around, even stop or repel incoming metals heading towards them. Hand gestures are a necessity for the use of this technique as they are used to direct the chakra flowing from the Kaihaku’s Kinzokugan to the metal. The clan member is able to lift any metallic substances within his range of manipulation using this technique. Of course, the mass of the metallic objects must be taken into consideration. The maximum mass of the object (or the total mass) that can be levitated is dependent on the amount of chakra the clan member is expending.

- D-Rank Chakra: A maximum mass of 100 kg can be levitated.
- C-Rank Chakra: A maximum mass of 250 kg can be levitated.
- B-Rank Chakra: A maximum mass of 500 kg can be levitated.
- A-Rank Chakra: A maximum mass of 1000 kg can be levitated.
- S-Rank Chakra: A maximum mass of 2000 kg can be levitated.

For every two posts that the object is kept in the air, it requires a chakra cost equivalent to one rank below the used rank (e.g. if a 300 kg mass was lifted into the air, every two posts the Kaihaku would use up a C-Rank amount of chakra to keep it in the air). The objects can only be kept in the air so long as it is within the clan member's range of manipulation, of course.

Name: Metal Needle Barrage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The Kaihaku will slam his hand onto any metallic structure and will send a pulse of chakra into it, causing a 4 ft tall wall of metal to rise up out of the structure with a thickness of 3ft. The Kaihaku will then place his hand on the wall and will once more send another pulse of chakra into the wall. This will cause the wall to break up and launch a barrage of tiny metal needles at the target at a high speed. While these needles shall travel in a straight line, their speed shall make it difficult to dodge them at close range. Also, the speed at which they are flying will allow them to slice through C-rank defenses.

Name: Metal Flight Disk
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a clan favorite and is used by many Kaihaku. A Kaihaku shall use his ability to manipulate metal to form a six inch thick disk of metal with a five foot radius out of a source of metal. The Kaihaku can step onto the disk and use his Kinzokugan to levitate the disk into the air. The disk shall be strong enough to hold the Kaihaku’s weight and lift him into the air. Once the disk has been molded, it shall not require any chakra to maintain, with the clan member only having to sacrifice a D-Rank’s worth of chakra each post he is in the air. The disk can also move through the air with the clan member atop it, and at roughly at a speed of 40 mph. The disk shall last for as long as the clan member can keep maintaining the “flight cost”.

Name: Metallic Skin
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: After forming a series of handseals, a Kaihaku will send chakra into any metallic structure through physical contact. This will cause the metal to travel up their body like liquid from the point of contact to cover their entire body in less than a second. Once covered, the metal layer will appear to have retained its liquid-like form and will be constantly shifting over their body. When an attack is about to land on a Kaihaku’s Metallic Skin, the liquid metal will harden in the place where the attack is about to hit and will protect the Kaihaku from the damage of the attack.

Any physical attack of the same rank and below will have no effect on the Metallic Skin. Projectile attacks will glance off the Metallic Skin upon contact. All elemental attacks of the same rank and below (aside from fire attacks) will have no effect on the Metallic Skin. Suiton attacks of the same rank and above can break through the Metallic Skin by causing it to rust and fall away. Raiton and Katon attacks of one rank above can be protected against, but only 1 of said attacks can be taken before the Metallic Skin is destroyed.

If it is not destroyed, the Metallic Skin will last for a total of 3 posts before falling off the Kaihaku like liquid.

Name: Metal Wall
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A Kaihaku will spread his feet apart and slam his hands together, which shall cause a large forward-curving wall of metal to rise up from any metal surface or, alternately, cause small metallic objects to fly towards him and group together to create a large metal wall. This wall shall be 8ft tall, 4ft across, and six inches thick.

As it is made of metal the Metal Wall will provide protection from physical attacks of its rank and below (e.g. Taijutsu, Weaponry, etc.). Projectile attacks will glance off the Metal Wall due to it being made of strong metal unless they are strong enough to break through metal. Elemental attacks of the same rank will be cancelled out by the Metal Wall. Raiton attacks of the same rank and below will be conducted into the earth by the Metal Wall, as shall Katon attacks. Suiton-based attacks of the same rank and above will cause the wall to rust and break apart.

If it is not destroyed, the Metal Wall will last for a maximum of 3 posts (though it can be dispersed before then), after which it will melt back into whatever substance it was originating from or split into the component objects it was made from.

Name: Metal Octopus
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Another clan favorite, a Kaihaku will wave his hands above his head, causing all metal objects within his range to come flying towards him. The objects shall cluster and fuse together to form a large, shiny metal sphere fifteen feet in radius. This sphere will be kept in the air by the use of the Kaihaku’s Kinzokugan, and can even be made to move through the air. Using his Metal Eyes, the Kaihaku can cause 15 ft long, tentacle-like structures to extend from anywhere on the sphere’s surface. These tentacles are quite thin and strong (the latter due to their metallic composition) and are quite sharp, capable of leaving deep cuts when hitting human flesh. The tentacles are sharp enough to slice through defense of B-Rank and below with ease, and are very fast as well, requiring above-average reflexes and speed to dodge. They even possess enough strength to crush an unarmored human.

Name: Forge
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: Yet another clan favorite, this is a move where the Kaihaku uses his Kinzokugan to shape metal into different kinds of weapons and items, this move is one of the reasons why Kaihaku are called “The Greatest Blacksmiths”. It allows them to speed up the process of forging metal to create practically anything they wish out of metal, whether it is a chair or a knife, or even a metal apple.

Only objects of the same rank as the clan member may be created, and only those in which the clan member specializes (e.g. a Kaihaku who uses swords and pole arms can only create those two weapons). Basic ninja tools such as kunai or shuriken can of course be created regardless of specialty.

This move requires the clan member to keep his concentration throughout the molding. If his concentration is broken the technique will not work. The jutsu requires at least half a post of concentration to work.

Name: Metal Sinkhole
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This move requires the victim to be standing on metal. After forming the necessary handseals, a Kaihaku will focus on the target’s feet and will use his Kinzokugan to create a sinkhole beneath the target’s feet by softening the metal, causing them to sink down into the metal. Once the target is far down enough, the metal can returned to its original solid state. This sudden change in state will cause the target’s body trapped within the metal to be crushed completely, ultimately killing them.

Name: Metal Shell
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The Kaihaku will form the required handseals which will cause any metallic structure within a 20 meter radius to lunge at the target. The metal will first aim to bind the target’s legs and will then cover their arms and will finally form a large rectangular box around them, encasing them inside a shell it and restricting their movement completely by sticking their metal-covered arms with the box’s sides. Once the target’s limbs have been bound, it is nearly impossible for them to escape the rest of the justu.

The box will be impervious any physical attack of the same rank and below. Ninjutsu attacks of the same rank and below will have no effect on the Metal Coffin, and the Metal Shell itself restricts all body movements, even simple movements such as forming handseals. This jutsu is used to setup the use of the “Wrath of Metal” technique.

Name: Wrath of Metal
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A jutsu mostly performed after the usage of Metal Shell, the Kaihaku will use his Kinzokugan to make the metal encasing the target constrict tightly, crushing the target’s bones and organs and killing them instantly. Alternatively, the clan member can simply have a series of sharp spears grow from the box’s inner walls and impale the target, fatally wounding them if not killing them instantly. This move cannot be used in the same post as Metal Shell (or any other binding technique).

Name: Metal Clone
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: After forming the needed handseals, the Kaihaku will cause a clone made out of metal to rise out of any source of nearby metal. This Metal Clone will be a metallic version of a regular Shadow Clone, except that its metal body allows it to take up to two hits before dispersing. Otherwise, the potential of these clones is the same as a normal Shadow Clone and as such requires the same amount of chakra.

Name: Forbidden Jutsu: Metal Statue
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: One of the Kaihaku clan’s Forbidden Jutsu, the Forbidden Jutsu: Metal Statue technique allows a Kaihaku to change a human body into metal, in other words turning them into statues of themselves. The Kaihaku shall make use of the iron in the target’s blood and have it being duplicating as in Metallic Regeneration, only at a much faster rate. As the amount of iron in the victim’s body increases, the iron shall begin seeping out through openings in their skin (pores, sweat glands, nose, mouth, eyes, etc.), slowly covering them from head to foot in metal. For four posts, the target's limbs shall be encased, followed then by the remainder of their body. In other words, after five posts, the target shall find themselves trapped inside a covering of metal, the chemical and physical properties of which have been altered to strengthen it immensely.

The victims themselves will still maintain conscious even after their bodies have been turned to metal, but they will no longer have control over their body since it shall be covered by metal. They will remain for as long as their statue forms remain, though they will be able to see and hear like any person, but will not be able to call out for help or move. The technique itself requires that the Kaihaku to maintain physical contact with the victim for the entire length of the encasing as he manipulates the iron in their blood using his Kinzokugan, after which they will turn to statues. This technique requires a large supply of chakra to use, and once it has been performed, the clan member will be too exhausted to continue a fight.

Since the metal is only a covering, the target can be freed from it by having it broken from the outside.

Name: Ultimate Jutsu: Metal Giant
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: One of the most powerful techniques of the Kaihaku clan, this allows the clan member to create a hundred foot tall, featureless, humanoid figure made out of metal that lacks any form of nose, mouth, eyes, or ears. Obviously, for this to be possible, an extremely large amount of metal is necessary for this to be accomplished, which is why it is rarely used. Clan members usually make use of the Metallic Regeneration jutsu in combination with this technique to create a giant from a small source of metal. Whatever method the clan member uses, at least three posts of concentration are required for the clan member to successfully perform this technique. Kaihaku will usually place numerous forms of protection around themselves to ensure they are not interrupted.

Once the giant has been completed, the Kaihaku will then send a signal to it using his Kinzokugan to “mark” the enemies and allies. The giant shall then go on a rampage as it attacks the target or targets. Because of its size, the giant is not easy to outrun, even though it is quite slow in its motions. The giant shall have enough strength to punch through an entire mountain. While it shall be incapable of performing Ninjutsu, it shall be able to launch various metal projectiles at the target/targets.

Even after the giant has been formed, the clan member may not cease his concentration. The longer the clan member concentrates, the longer the giant remains, however as with most maintainable jutsu, every three posts that the giant is kept, the Kaihaku must sacrifice a B-Rank’s worth of chakra. Should the Kaihaku’s concentration be broken or should he end the technique, the Metal Giant shall crumble into fine particles of metal. The side-effect of using such a powerful jutsu is that the clan member shall faint from mental strain of maintaining the jutsu and shall remain unconscious for two real life days. If the technique is held for too long it can also result in the clan member’s death.

Name: Metallic Growth
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a difficult one to pull off, one that can only be performed by the most skilled and talented of Kaihaku. This jutsu requires the clan member's full concentration; as such it cannot be used in the heat of battle. After making physical contact with a particular spot on a metallic substance, the clan member shall concentrate and can then have the metal begin duplicating itself. This is useful in increasing the amount of metal available for the Kaihaku to use. For every post, the amount of metal that is made doubles. The Kaihaku can use his Kinzokugan to further shape the additional metal as it forms. For this jutsu to be used, a source of metal is necessary, of course. Also, for every post that the clan member duplicates the metal, he is required to sacrifice a B-Rank's worth of chakra to maintain the jutsu.

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I hate to be a pain dude but could you please use the summoning creature(s) template for this forum. I'll give you the link:-

.Summoning Template

Also...

Quote :: Name: Scorpion Bushin
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Gabriale created this jutsu personally. He will create several bushin comprised of regular sized scorpion. These bushin can only take a single hit before being destroyed. When the clone is stricken it will decay into around a hundred scorpions who may attack the foe with their poisionous venom. (Poision is the same as the other scorpion summons) Should the bushin be destroyed not around the opponet, the scorptions will still make their way to the opponet. They will scurry at a fast pase. They will last for 10 min before breaking apart. Their venom if inflicted will slow the motor skills of the opponet for 3 turns. After that the venom will begin to become deadly. Within an half hour of the venom coursing through the opponets body their vision will become blurred and their motor skills will be even more slowed as their joints begin to swell. This will begin to worsen with every post the opponet makes. After about an 2 hours paralasis will begin to set in. Very small movement will be able to be made by the opponet. Things like hand signs wont be able to be made. Speech will barley be plasable. Finger movements will be barley plasable but major movements wont. After another hour of this the opponet will be dead from the venom shutting down various major organs.

Instead of clones & vemon taking days/hours/minutes to occur i'd change them into post(s), it makes it easier to calculate. Could you also state how many times an opponent must be stung before the venom effects are the same as if they were stung by the fully grown version.

Once you're summonings are sorted out i'll continue ^^

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Gabe wrote:: Name: 6 Chamber Bolt Fire, Mass Produce
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user will duplicate the amount of chambers to a maximum amount of 20 (Thus 120 Bolts) they all can be targeted at different ranges and speeds also at different targets or points they wish to fire. This will kill someone if more then 18 bolts hit them.

Can't have an S-Ranked Jutsu at the moment. Either cross it out or take it out, thank you.

Code:: Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.

You'll need this technique to summon things.

Your clan will also need to be put in the clan creation area.

And you'll need a final approval by Adam when the mods are done checking over you, too. You should pm him.

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Okay your application now seem's passable dude, alot of your jutsu are pre-approved by their previous owner/creator(s). As for your own they seem to be in order, i'm saying it's approved. If no one else decides to look over it and give their opinion i'll move this to be checked by admin.

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Just found something dude, we don't have 'E' ranked jutsu on this forum so could you please change them to 'D'. Much appreciated B)

EDIT:- IGNORE THIS POST I'M CRAZY.

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Commander wrote:: Just found something dude, we don't have 'E' ranked jutsu on this forum so could you please change them to 'D'. Much appreciated B)

We do have E Ranked Jutsus on this forum. o.o

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Scratch that, i can't find the post i read previously. My bad, sorry Nate. Marcus, have you looked over this application or just my post?

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You need to define your weaponry skills, as in what two subclasses.

I'll look over the rest later.

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