Senju, Hanikaro [Suna Chuunin]

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le bump!

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More explaination on your extra chakra, why do you have more?

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Well, excess chakra is something someone is born with, as far as i've been able to detect, its just luck of the draw, and irrelevant to prior circumstances. I tried to explain as best I could, but I don't think there is necessarily a direct explanation as to why someone was born with more than others.

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I am very wary of additional chakra, but I won't refuse it.

Please wait for Dame to review this as well.

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bump for dame!

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erm, since flashes app has been approved is this app null?

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I'd suggest moving to Chunnin but as it is Kris is occupying the remaining Chunnin slot so its really up to you if you want to move down to Genin or just make a new application.

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*sigh* edited to chunin.

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Editing finished a jutsu in red means he does not yet possess the technique, but will when he reaches jounin level.

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I think Suna Chunnin may be full, I'll double check.

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any furhter news?

Subject: Re: Senju, Hanikaro [Suna Chuunin] Wed 24 Feb 2010, 2:54 pm

everything is closed in every village aside from genin.

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edited to genin.

Subject: Re: Senju, Hanikaro [Suna Chuunin] Thu 25 Feb 2010, 2:32 am

25% more chakra with out it being clan based or something is rather high IMO. Id say drop it down to about 10 and Id mark this app approved.

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Subject: Re: Senju, Hanikaro [Suna Chuunin] Thu 25 Feb 2010, 3:22 am

Approved

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Unlocked and Moved for Chuunin Updates.

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finished with chunin update.

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More looks for sure.

What did you add/edit?

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I have reviewed all the gen

Quote :: Name: False Handsigns
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description: This is a skill where the user's hands seem to perform a jutsu correctly without the proper handseals. This is intended to deceive opponents, making it impossible to discern what the true jutsu being performed is by handseals alone. It can even be used to make the handseals look like the correct seals for a jutsu of the same rank the user knows. Obviously, the user is still performing the correct seals, but their opponent can't see that. This technique requires no handseals.

You can not use such a gen without first applying either by handseals or by means of a focus, this seems require neither. I get the feeling this technique is intended to work as you use another jutsu but unless you have some way two different techniques at simultanously this genjutsu would already need to be in place. I imagine need to gen the user prior to taking advantage of it. Please also note using this to imitate techniques you know others have to confuse them will count as metagaming unless they are one of the basis 7 jutsu or your character has good reasons to know they possess them

Quote :: Name: Wisp
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This genjutsu creates a figmental wisp, a shining tree spirit, in the minds of the target that darts back and forth according to users will. It will appear from the undergrowth as if it is presence was natural and unrelated to the user. This flying ball of playful energy shines mischievously and induces those who can see it to chase it only to dash off as they draw nearer. This technique is a great way to lure others to a certain place or lead them off from another. This technique counts as a rank higher if used in a forest area which real wisps are predominantly found but is ineffective in the desert as its presence there is hard to conceive.

Wheres the credit Smile

? While you have consent to use this technique the consents isn’t transferable to others so don’t go teaching it

Quote :: Name: Windwalk
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Description The user weaves a few handsigns, then activates this jutsu. To all selected targets (effects a maximum of up to 3 at once) the user seems to have dissapeared completely, dispersing into a cloud of wind. They will make no sound as they walk, however, can be smelled, and seen by byakugan level sensory abilties (Sharingan that has 2 tomoe or more) Using this technique, the user will often be able to launch a surprise attack on unsuspecting foes, who have no way of knowing where he is or what he is doing. This lasts 4 posts or until kaied.

Increase to B rank since actual invisibility would be an A rank and given you can affect whole teams at once with this technique it is not in reality that dissimilar to true invisibility

Quote :: Name: Blood Loss
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description The target must have an already open wound that is currently bleeding a reasonable amount. While afflicted by this genjutsu, the target will believe that they are losing blood at a far more rapid rate than they actually are, and will usually try to tend to their wounds. If they choose to ignore it, and do not release the genjutsu, within three posts the brain will believe the body has lost too much blood and they will fall unconcious for at least 15 minutes

Seems fine just be aware this technique seems more susceptible to being released by pain given that the victim is already in pain and if he focuses his mind properly would doubtless have an easier means of breaking it in this manner

Quote :: Name: Invulnerable
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description: This genjutsu makes the target believe that the user is invulnerable to every attack they try. It will appear that the target is unaffected by any genjutsu, immune to their ninjutsu, and that physical attacks seem to bounce off him. The reality is that in fact the user is either dodging, or blocking the attacks, and is simply using this genjutsu to disguise that fact

Add a disclaimer that this technique ends should the victim by hurt or feel any pain, after all Invulnerable people cant be damaged

Quote :: Name: Extreme Chakra
Rank: C
Element: None
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A genjutsu used mostly ffor intimidating the target. The user makes no hand signs, but simply closes his eyes, as if focusing his chakra. When his eyes open, to all afflicted by the genjutsu, sensor or not, he will appear to have an Enormous amount of chakra, so great that it seems to be greater than that of S-rank nin. Of course, this chakra is simply an illusion, but it is very subtle and therefore hard to realize that Hanikaro is not in fact simply letting his own chakra be released.

How do you apply this to targets technique without using handseals and even more without LOS since it involved closing your eyes?

Quote :: Name: No Pain
Rank: C
Element: None
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This technique affects the targets pain receptors in the brain, and renders them completely incapable of action, therefore preventing the target from feeling physical pain of any kind, allowing people to fight beyond what most would consider possible.

Hmm I am a little iffy with this technique sounds medical. Secondly since pain can be used to break upto c rank techs it seems to be a counter to that and direct counters to one or two main forms of releasing gen aren’t generally allowed. For the moment bumb it to B rank so it at least doesn’t impinge on the latter

Quote :: Name: Medusa's Gaze
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The user makes eye contact with the target, and once this occurs, they will seem to see the user's hair turn into snakes, and his or her eyes grow brigh green. AFter this happens, the target will think his entire body is turning to stone, starting with his legs and working its way upward. The target has only a post to identify it as genjutsu and release it before his entire body is turned to stone. Once this happens the victim will be paralyzed for three posts before the genjutsu wears off.

Reduce time paralysed to 2 posts

Quote :: Name: Last March of the Ents
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Wood
Description: A powerful, and potent genjutsu that afflicts all nearby beings, friend or foe. This jutsu is commonly used to make the user seem vastly more powerful than they actually are. The user must be in a forested area for this technique to be most effective, as it won't make much sense in areas such as the Land of Winds. This technique lasts as long as the user desires, but they cannot use any additional jutsu while retaining it. However, once it has been released by any of the afflicted, friend or foe, teh user will immeadiatley recognize this to be the case, as they too view the Genjutsu's effects, which will be broken for them as well when a person has released it, tipping them off to stop channeling the genjutsu should they be an enemy. (When fighting alongside allies, The user first weaves a long and complicated series of handsigns, then places their hands on the ground. A sound like a deep horn blast will emit over the entire area, and all nearby trees will appear to literally uproot themselves and come to life. This continues, with large numbers of treeants joining the army of trees as well, along with wisps, and dryads of the forest. This army will then proceed to appear to charge the enemy, and attack. The enemies, and allies, will believe this army to be completely physical, however normally allies are aware of the nature of this technique and know what is happening. This army of trees can inflict damage to enemies, but it is only in their minds eye. However, should an enemy let themself be killed by the technique, they will be jerked back to reality, but be stunned and shocked for a post, as well as losing a B-ranks worth of chakra. Often times, the enemy is convinced that what they are fighting in is in fact reality, and therefore will often use their cahkra resivoirs to use jutsu to defend themselves- any such actions appear to have very real effects on targeted forest warriors, but the numbers are so vast that the enemy will usually be overwhelmed anyway, and simply have wasted chakra in the process.

Reduce to Chakra lost from dying to C rank. As for the technique I am a little confused about how its applied, does it affect a set area, use sound, handsigns etc?

Some interesting gen on the whole with the odd exception

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False Handsigns

This is mostly used to disguise ninjutsu for example, in my opponents eyes, I'd do a ninjutsu with no handsigns to surprise them. I could not use this with other genjutsu at the same time obviously.

Wisp

Sorry about that, added credit.

Windwalk

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Invulnerable

This technique makes them believe that I am invulnerable, not that they are. Therefore, the pain method would do little against this, as their perception of themselves remains the same.

Extreme Chakra

This activates when I open my eyes, making it based on LOS. I simply close my eyes for added effect.

No Pain:

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Medusas Gaze

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Last March of the Ents:

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