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Socrates
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| Subject: Temna Clan Sat 24 Sep 2011, 3:03 am | |
| Clan Name: Temna Location: Kumo Signature Traits: Purple hair, and lightning. Kekkei Genkai: The Litiji, a power that blocks the user's lightning jutsus from being manipulated. It also unlocks a eye that has the capability for one ocular jutsu in each eye. History:Long ago in the days of yore there was a man named Odin, he was one of the founders of Kumokagure but hey I'm skipping ahead of myself. It all started when he began expirimenting on his DNA. Odin was the first to unlock the Litiji, and the power. He had sequenced his genes so that it would appear in his bloodline as well. Odin after finding this out sought out a mate and founded the Temna bloodline, it is said that since he had the power and his body was never found that he is still alive today. However most Temna's regard that as a fairy tale that overephises the power. Never the less Odin did a great many things, and if it was not for him not only would the Temna clan not exist but someone else would have gained the power which may have plunged the world into darkness. You see Odin had a friend named Zeus who studied along with him, Zeus was not trustworthy however and attempted to kill Odin after Odin discovered the power. It is said that they fought for a month before Odin took the power for himself and stripped Zeus' anger from him. Of course this may not have been what happened, or there may have been no Zeus. Never the less after that day Odin's eyes turned red and he was the first and only to use all the Litiji jutsus. With such power he decided to defend his village at all costs, and began the tradition of the Temna's working for the Raikage in the shadows. Not once has a Temna become a Raikage, however such offers have been made. Instead they sacrifice their livelyhoods for the good of the Village, and for the Raikage's will. Clan Jutsu:- Spoiler:
Name of Jutsu: Lightning Jump(Left Eye) Rank: C Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-20 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: Lightning jump is formed by a single handsign and the user is deassembled shot upwards in a lightning bolt and then shot back down in a different area up to twenty meters away. The user survives the jump as if nothing happened and it takes about 1.2 seconds to move using this jutsu. After ten jumps the user coughs up blood and must wait ten posts before using the jutsu again. If that is broken however the user gets a ten percent chance of passing out for the first use, 20% for 2nd and so on.
Name of Jutsu: Storm Summoning (Left Eye) Rank: B Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-50 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: This jutsu is formed with over fourty hand signs and takes a full post to cast, however the next post it forms instantaneously and immediately lightning bolts pelt everything within fifty meters except the caster. This leaves the user blind for two posts in his left eye.
Name of Jutsu: Light Shield (Left Eye) Rank: A Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Genjutsu Range: Anyone within eye sight Element Affinity: None Description: Once cast this jutsu will disguise the user from sight until they attack a person.
Name of Jutsu: Black Hole Sun (Left Eye) Rank: S Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-400 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: This jutsu requires six posts of preparation. Post 1: Purely handsigns, cannot move Post 2: A choir begins to sing from all around, cannot move Post 3: A giant ball of lightning begins to form fifty meters above the user, can move must still form handsigns. Post 4: Beings of light pop up around the chaster mimicking his movements, must still form hand signs. Post 5: The ball reaches its full size(25 meter diameter), beings continue handsigns User begins to float. Post 6: User Drops to the ground and all the beings of light enter into his body. Upon post 7 the user will now be one quarter faster and stronger(also carries to ninjutsu but only ninjutsu). Post 8 is when the ball of lightning turns black and begins exerting gravity upon everything within four hundred meters. This gravity is first one quarter more then at post 15 gravity is one half more and at post 20 the gravity is doubled. The ball follows the caster wherever he moves upon this jutsu's use and at any time may be made to impload and create a giant destructive force that consumes everything within one hundred and fifty meters including the caster. Upon post ten the user gains double the effects he has at post seven. Now at post 25 is when the jutsu begins to become scary. If the jutsu hasn't been dispelled by then the energy will go into the caster and allow him to harness its power for two posts before falling unconscious and losing five years from their life. The ball itself also will suck up any jutsu under rank A unless it is a wind jutsu. This may be used only once every five topics.
Name of Jutsu: Jutsu Drain (Right Eye) Rank: B Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-50 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: Once activated for the next three posts(of the caster) all jutsu will not occur. It has a five post cool down.
Name of Jutsu: Creeping Shadows (Right Eye) Rank: S Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Genjutsu Range: N/A Element Affinity: None Description: This jutsu will cause blindness if used too often(25 uses). Once activated the jutsu creeps into the target's brain and translates all images into their worst dreams furthermore it will cause blindness in five posts that lasts a single post.
Name of Jutsu:Static Strings Technique Rank: D Users: Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-60 meters Element Affinity:Lightning Description:This skill allows the user to create strings of electricity that can either act physically as strings, or as a medium that can send small shocks to an opponent. One of this technique's most useful features is its ability to allow the user to detect outsiders. When the strings are placed around an area, they are often fairly difficult to see, and unnoticed by the quick eye. But when the string is used to detect outsiders, they can adapt a quality that is string-like and electrical at the same time. This quality makes the static strings into a string of electricity, but with such a weak current that it is rarely noticed by Shinobi who accidentally walk through the strings. However, when this happens, the user at once will feel a small shock in their fingers, or where ever else they are keeping the strings intact. But unless the opponent felt the weak current as they walked through the strings, the opponent will usually never know the strings were there. But beyond its ability to detect outsiders, this skill can be used as a normal string when it is needed but none is around, or it can be used to create small shocks to other people. However, the shocks are only a little bit stronger than static electricity, and usually do no damage at all.
Name of Jutsu: Transferring Current Rank: D Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: Touch Element Affinity: Lightning Description: An overall simple yet very effective technique, the Cloud-nin creates a sort of electrical current on his hand, this current can then be transferred onto any weapon he happens to be holding at that moment be it a kunai, senbon, shuriken, or even a sword. The next physical attack he performs is charged with this electrical current, if he blocks a weapon attack with his own weapon the current transfers over shocking the attacker. If by chance the user is not carrying a weapon he can transfer this current into his opponent's weapon shocking him, or can even hit him with this current.
Name of Jutsu: Lightning Magnet Rank: C Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: This jutsu creates electrical clouds around the area that attract metal, any metal projectiles thrown will be altered because of the clouds. This can be dangerous for both parties
Name of Jutsu: Electrical Overdose Rank: C Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: Touch Element Affinity: Lightning Description:The user takes one post to channel a large amount of electricity into a limb, making the chakra visible. Upon contact with the opponent, the electricity is shot into him and the target’s weight almost doubles, making it harder for the victim to move.
Name of Jutsu: Control Loss Rank: C Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: Touch Element Affinity: Lightning Description: A rather sophomoric skill in itself forming electricity into the primary hand of the Cloud-Nin the shinobi delivers a full on palm strike to the body, the voltage of this particular technique is considered high enough that the target generally loses control of the bowels and bladder causing a rather distracting mess in their undergarments. Obviously the catch is however that one has to be hit by the palm strike to fall victim to this immature tactic.
Name of Jutsu: Electric Skin Rank:C Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element Affinity: Lightning Description:making a simple couple of handsigns the user makes sparks travel along their skin to power up lightning type jutsu's for 5 minutes (posts) (7 for jounin)(10 for Kage/sannin) this move also makes it very difficult to make contact with the user for the danger of being severly electricuted.
Name of Jutsu:Electric Snake Rank: B Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-50 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: A capturing technique, after flashing the necessary handseals the shinobi brings electric chakra into his hands, shoves his fingers into the ground, and fires electricity through the ground towards an opponent. The target can generally see this technique coming as small bolts of Lightning dance across the ground towards them, later if they have done nothing to avoid this technique a chain of lightning bursts out of the ground and wraps itself around the ankles of the target. As long as the Cloud-Nin has his hands his fingers buried into ground the target is ensnared. While ensnared the nin is unable to move his legs but is still able to use his arms and hands, however for every minute the user has been ensnared he receives an electric shock.
Name of Jutsu:Rising Storm Rank: B Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element Affinity: Lightning Description: A defensive technique that covers the immediate area of the Cloud nin from a large degree of angles. Collecting electricity through his entire body he immediately pushes all of it into the ground below him, almost instantaneously bolts of lightning begin rising from the ground in a rhythmic fashion covering his front, back, and side, but still allows him to be attacked from above. Most form of projectiles (i.e. shuriken, senbon, kunai) are deflected in the process but strong ninjutsu can drive though this maneuver. Also while one is performing this move he must keep his hands on the ground so he is unable to attack others while performing this move.
Name of Jutsu: Lightning Kunai Rank: B Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element Affinity: Lightning Description: As the user flashes a number hand seals the shinobi begins to develop 4 kunai between his fingers that he can throw at his opponent. Many people often see elemental techniques that take the form of throwing weapons as low grade techniques, and as such enemy shinobi often scoff when they see this technique occurr. However this technique is not the same as any traditional element technique. The kunai that are developed are made of pure, concentrated lightning, heated to the point that with the amount of power that they are thrown it it could go through most forms of metal and still do some damage.
Name of Jutsu: Chain Lightning Rank: A Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-100 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: A useful technique generally used in an attempt to take out a group of enemies by surprise. Forming electricity into both hands the Cloud Nin launches a continuous stream of Lightning at one opponent, if the technique hits one person it immediately launches itself at the next non-friendly person in range. The lightning chain specifically targets water that is found in the body, so bunshins are generally left untouched unless it's a Water Bunshin. This chain can last as long as the user uses a B rank amount of chakra after every three targets.
Name of Jutsu: Sphere Shield Rank: A Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element Affinity: Lightning Description:Circulating electrically charged chakra around the entire area of the body the user is now able to push this chakra out of their body forming a personal-range electric sphere of defense that covers all angles and even overhead. Anyone who is attempting to break the shield with a taijutsu attack will be given a shock capable of leaving a third degree-burn and pushed back, any type of thrown weapon is immediately blocked as well. The shield can also deflect most ninjutsu attacks. The downside of this is that the user is unable to move while the shield is active.
Name of Jutsu: Ten Thousand Lightning Bugs Rank: S Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range:N/A Element Affinity: Lightning Description:The jutsu is just like it's name. A fairly simple, yet new technique. The user makes twenty consecutive seals ending with bird. At the end of the seal session of the jutsu, the user emits glowing chakra. It creates an aura around their body for one whole post . The glowing aura then disperses from the body, and turns into what would look like Fire Flies. These little fire flies are actually small balls, about a half inch in circumfrence, and made of pure Raiton Chakra. Once the bugs surround a certain area or abject, the ten thousand fire flies will explode once the bird seal is released. The send out an exposion of lightning about a half meter in diameter(per bug) electrocuting anything and everything in their path of destruction.
Name of Jutsu: Heaven's Judgement Rank: A Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: 0-400 meters Element Affinity: Lightning Description: A technique that causes overall destruction and chaos, performing a number of seals a large spinning tube of lightning launches itself out of the user's body and speeds away in the direction that the Cloud-Nin was facing. Going at a particularly high speed this tube begins to tear up all peices of land it touch and bores large holes through anything that has the horrible chance of being in front of it and then explodes in a huge burst of electricity essentially electrocuting anyone within close proximity of the explosion.
Name of Jutsu: Odin's Fury Rank: A Users: Temna Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element Affinity: Lightning Description: A technique often used for the sake of demolitions purposes. The user of this technique now must keep his eyes set on one specific object that he can see through this seal for the next two posts, if he moves or does anything else but aim during this period the technique is cancelled. After this, the skies suddenly open up, and a huge beam of white lightning strikes where the user was aiming, decimating the target and causing powerful shockwaves to affect the area 500 feet from the point of impact, most likely decimating anything with a foundation. One can generally tell that this technique is occurring by the fact that the skies turn black, thunder begins sounding, and it starts to rain during the time of preparation as well as a sudden increase of heat.
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| | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32 Posts : 869
| Subject: Re: Temna Clan Sat 24 Sep 2011, 10:22 am | |
| Nobody can manipulate the lightning you made with your chakra. Nor can you manipulate somebodies else lightning jutsus, or any element at all. So remove that part. Now that leaves you with the ocular part. I would like you to expand more on it. Describe it how it actually works and all. I would also suggest to expand just a bit more on the history also use commas where it's needed.
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- Name of Jutsu: Light Shield (Left Eye)
For just being invisible, this jutsu is actually ranked higher than needed. I could allow a C rank for this. But remember. Anybody with a good nose, especially the Inuzuka can smell you while the Hyuuga and the Uchiha can see through their eyes. Be sure to add what I just said. But don't copy paste it.
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- Name of Jutsu: Black Hole Sun (Left Eye)
Denied because that is gravity manipulation, not lightning.
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- Name of Jutsu: Jutsu Drain (Right Eye)
So let me get this straight. Nobody can use any type of jutsu, not just ninjutsu, but also genjutsu, taijutsu and so on for 3 posts? Denied. Even though it's just 3 posts, completely blocking the use of any jutsu is OP.
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- Name of Jutsu: Creeping Shadows (Right Eye)
I believe there is already a genjutsu like this. Also when doing a genjutsu, you should describe it much more. Also for the actual power of this genjutsu, you ranked it too high. Go to the Rules and Guides section and read the Genjutsu rules.
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- Name of Jutsu: Lightning Magnet
Denied
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- Name of Jutsu: Electrical Overdose
How can lightning jutsu make somebody heavier? That's gravity. Denied.
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- Name of Jutsu: Electric Skin
Denied. We have a Special Characteristic that enhances your lightning techniques.
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- Name of Jutsu: Chain Lightning
I doubt you will ever fight more than 2 opponents at the same time but I'll let you have this. However, you must use B rank amount of chakra for every person, not three.
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- Name of Jutsu: Ten Thousand Lightning Bugs
Denied for a simple reason. Ten thousand lightning bugs that explode. WAY too much bugs. I could allow hundred bugs, but ten thousand?
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- Name of Jutsu: Heaven's Judgement
Put it 0-50 meters
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- Name of Jutsu: Odin's Fury
S rank
Also don't forget to add Chakra Cost to every jutsu. |
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