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Uzumaki, Kakkō [Konoha Genin][Done]

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Killems
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Uzumaki, Kakkō


THE INFO.

Name: Uzumaki, Kakkō
Nickname: The Konoha Rose or Rosy by his friends
Age: 14 years of age
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Forehead Protector: Not wanting to interfere with his flowing red hair, Kakkō folds his forehead protector in a headband fashion and wears it as loose-fitting choker around his neck.
Personality:
Clan: Uzumaki Clan
Nindō: "Wishes can come true, but not if you just wait for miracles. Miracles are things we make for ourselves, here and now."


THE NINJA.

Origin: Hi no Kuni
Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin (C)
Specialties: Fuuinjutsu | Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon (Fire) | Fuuton (Wind)
Combat Style: Being part of the Uzumaki clan, as well as a Ninjutsu user, Kakkō detests close combat and prefers to fight his opponents from a distance whenever possible. He will often lead his assaults with Ninjutsu, while still maintaining solid defensive and offensive Fuuinjutsu seals to greater enhance his potential. Once the opponent has been exhausted from the constant bombardment of long ranged attacks, Kakkō will proceed to go for the final blow to end the confrontation outright. Although during this time, Kakkō will often "play" with his targets using jesting mannerisms and phrases, as a way to not only challenge them physically, but mentally as well. With his outward personality related much to that of a child, these jesting actions can relate closely with immature hazing, much like a little kid might be seen doing.
Special Characteristics:


THE BACKGROUND.

An Uzumaki is Born Arc:

The Humble Beginnings Arc:

Academy Training and Genin Arc:

Roleplay Sample:


THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu:

Uzumaki Jutsu:

Fuuinjutsu:

Katon Jutsu:

Fuuton Jutsu:

Non-Elemental Jutsu:

Equipment:


FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Axel
Source: Kingdom Hearts
Image URL: https://2img.net/h/i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n629/Avelt1590/Naruto/axel2.jpg


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Killems
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Bump for completion.
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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki, Kakkō [Konoha Genin][Done] Uzumaki, Kakkō [Konoha Genin][Done] EmptySat 15 Sep 2012, 4:37 pm

Please change Weaponry to Equipment.

Please expand Combat Style.

Everything looks spiffy, though I'm not a 100% on the length of your personality and appearance, since the spoiler feature makes them look bigger Razz See if you can add a line or two to each.
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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki, Kakkō [Konoha Genin][Done] Uzumaki, Kakkō [Konoha Genin][Done] EmptySat 15 Sep 2012, 6:22 pm

You are overweight with your current weight. Tone that down please.

Combat style is fine as it is. But if you feel you can add more do so. Your personality will need that second paragraph to go into a full paragraph. Not a half of it.

You're music needs to be taken off auto play. That will honestly get annoying when trying to add things to your application. You can keep it. Just not on auto play.
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Done, expanded on both although I don't think I can't add that much more on combat style. Combat style is ever evolving as a character grows and put under unique circumstances. Its almost impossible to tell how a character will handle every situation, which makes it hard to expand upon.
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Approved 1/2
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Approved 2/2

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Archived due to user inactivity.
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