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| Subject: Ōtani, Takumi [Konoha Genin] Thu 17 May 2012, 8:10 am | |
| ŌTANI, TAKUMI.THE INFO. Name: Ōtani, Takumi Nickname: N/A Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: Takumi's attire is divided into two categories, but within each of these categories there is one constant: bandages. In almost all situations he will be wrapped in a multitude of bandages that cover his entire body, hiding most of his face except for his eyes, and occasionally his mouth. For casual wear, a black kimono is sufficient enough for Takumi as it gives the illusion of width to an otherwise lean body. The sleeves extend to the knuckles and the cuffs are embroidered with a brilliant blue, the pattern creating the visual of waves. This pattern can be seen again around the boarder of the kimono in areas like the collar, the lower lining, and the over-collar. Footwear consists of basic wooden sandals with little room for complex maneuvering, although if necessary, Takumi is willing to be barefoot.
The boy's formal attire is equally as plain as the kimono with the only distracting feature being his fully-wrapped body. A black, strongly stitched shirt is the innermost layer with a hunter green jacket acting as the outermost layer. His bottom layer consists of simple black pants which is light yet durable, the complex sticking allowing for breathability while retaining a slimmer fit. Basic shinobi sandals are Takumi's chosen footwear.
Aside from the rather plain clothing there is more to Takumi than a well-trained body. Scars blemish his body in countless places from the areas where his disease was worst and although his body is capable of tanning, the wrappings which he constantly wears prevent the sun from turning his skin a glowing bronze. However, Takumi's most dazzling, or perhaps fear-inspiring feature, is the color of his eyes. The sclera are a ebony, his iris a sickly yellow, gifted to him from the illness that had lasted for a good portion of his early life. The eyes are fear-inducing, their discoloration has thrown many off guard, something which the boy takes pride in.
Overall, only a few features separate Takumi from the description of a typical teenage shinobi (lean muscle that hasn't finished developing, slowing increasing height and weight). These defining features are his scars, his eyes and his bandages although he is also a bit tall for his age, standing at five feet, eight inches and weighing 123lb. One characteristic that has yet to been discussed however is his hairstyle. Although his disease is cured, a lasting side-effect has left his dark-brown hair to grow wildely at times, only to fall out randomly. Thus, his hair is always a different length, sometimes longer so that it escapes from the bandages that cover his body, other times short and barely visible.
Forehead Protector: Forehead.
Personality: Stoic: During his childhood, Takumi wasn't the type who would run in the streets playing with others. His illness created limitations that would confine him in bed and so there was little opportunity for positive interactions with most others his age. This isolation led to an anti-social development and eventually resulted in Takumi possessing somewhat of a callous demeanor. However, because Takumi isn't much of a conversationalist, (something that some academy students made a point of discriminating against him for) most of his cruelty and cynicism is lost on others. That being said, Takumi does understand the benefits of conversation, though he refrains from it unless it becomes a necessity, as he is inclined towards making gestures instead of a "yes" or "no"; even a inelegant grunt is more common for him than speech. Additionally, the years of living with his sickness has given Takumi a strong tolerance for pain, both of the physical and mental sort. As a young boy, he experienced an uncommon amount of anguish, as most of his time was spent laying next to a father declining in health, while is own illness ate at him. All these factors (illness, collective family suffering, lack of childhood) have twisted what could've been a very happy boy, but above all, these events have made him stoic.
Scholarly: What's one to do when they're confined to a bed for years? Learn to read, write, and study the world from the view out the window was what Takumi discovered to be the best method to pass the time; there was little else he could do without using his feeble legs. For the many hours of reflection and studying, Takumi had become an avid reader, despite his young age and is stone-set on the idea that the more knowledgeable man is the better man. Due to this outlook Takumi reads whatever he can get his hands on, believing information to be power. This need for information leads Takumi to refrain from sharing his opinion in part because there may always be more to learn that effects his views, but also because the less knowledge others have of him, the greater his advantage would be when obtaining information about them (or so he thinks). His obsessive need for information has resulted in Takumi being quite keen and observant, although this was of little use when facing bullies at the academy, although it did grant him some praise from the instructors.
Contradicting: As a contrast to his more studious nature, Takumi enjoys remaining active, and is not one to sit lethargically unless it's required. Therefore, is free time is mostly spent in different parts of Konohagakure; sometimes he'll be chasing strays in an alley, other times training or people-watching. This is perhaps the least odd trait that constitutes Takumi's personality, as the desire to get around, explore and study the intricacies of his surroundings has been delayed gratification for the boy since he was sick for the majority of his childhood.
Idiosyncrasies: Takumi, despite being cured of his crippling disease, continues to use bandages that cover his entire body. For several long years he had been using them to cover his unnatural appearance. Once treated for them, and having only some minor scars from the more serious areas of disease, the young man continued to apply the bandages out of habit. However, upon realizing that he no longer needed them, he decided to continue using them since a completely bandaged shinobi with ebony sclera eyes makes for an intimidating combination, not to mention that every time he bandages himself, Takumi is reminded of his past. It serves as a connection to his parents, his hardship. It keeps him in perspective. Takumi also coughs in order to keep up the persona of a sickly boy. He finds it helps separate potential friends from foes, not the mention that it also separates the true shinobi from the amateurs in that a true shinobi wouldn't fall easily any type of ruse.
Growth: Takumi still has room to grow in several categories; focusing on the physical and mental is a good place to begin. Physically, he's not at on par with the more Taijutsu-oriented shinobi. While fast, agile, athletic and flexible (all things he gained at the academy) Takumi isn't exceptionally talented in regards to those particular traits. Mentally, the boy is in a rut. Reserved, though not by design, Takumi can try harder to hold a conversation, and open up more to his allies. On the other hand, shinobi's are excepted to be secretive, at least when on official business so this area is dependent on how much he wants to devote to becoming a full-fledged shinobi and while his analytical abilities may be spot-on, his talent for Ninjutsu and Genjutsu apparent, developing true mental fortitude can only be done by experiencing the shinobi lifestyle in its entirety.
Clan: Senju Nindō: "Every act is an act of self-definition."
THE NINJA. Origin: Hi no Kuni Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato Rank: Genin (C-rank) Specialties: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu Elemental Affinities: 土遁, Doton; Earth 水遁, Suiton; Water 木遁, Mokuton; Wood
Combat Style: Takumi's combat style revolves around the use of Ninjutsu and Genjutsu. Due to an illness that haunts his earliest memories, he is unskilled with Taijutsu and therefore sticks to what he's good at, making up for the lack of physicality in his assaults with illusions and chakra/elemental manipulation. Other than Takumi's personal inclinations regarding what he has chosen to utilize most as a shinobi, the Genin has yet to develop a concrete forTakumila for combat. This is in part because of his inexperience both in and out of combat, but also because of the realization that each fighting scenario will be different from the previous, requiring different tactics with each new situation presented. Having said all this, returning to the point that Takumi's repertoire consists almost entirely of Ninjutsu and Genjutsu techniques, it is reasonable to assume that he prefers fighting at mid/long-range and will try to stay in that comfort-zone as much as possible, at least until he matures as a shinobi and can broaden his skills.
Special Characteristics:
- Physical:
Name: Advanced Stealth Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in the art of stealth. The ninja becomes very light and quick on their feet. Their movements no longer create sound and they now gain a natural skill for hiding and camouflage.
- Chakra-based:
Name: Advanced Chakra Control. Rank: D-S. Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: Must specialize in Medical Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, and must not have an Increased Chakra Capacity or Bijuu. Training Requirements: 700. Description: An exceptional attribution that one is innately born with and further invokes during the course of their training. Chakra Control is key to preserving your stamina which will increase your vitality and enable you to use techniques to it's fullest capacity. It is essential for nearly all specialties of Ninjutsu but is heavily coveted in the areas of Medical Ninjutsu and Genjutsu which require good chakra in order to perform their techniques proficiently. Those with Advanced Chakra Control however are able to take it to the next step and preserve more noticeable chakra from their standard pool. Depending on the rank of the technique, a small quantity of chakra is preserved within the body when executed the Jutsu, which ultimately lowers the cost of your techniques. Furthermore because your Chakra Control is so flawless and exceptional, your Surface Walking and Water Walking techniques no longer cost chakra because you can now perform them effortlessly. This technique does not lower the cost chakra points going towards maintaining a jutsu, only creating them. D - 1 cp reduced. C - 2 cp reduced. B - 4 cp reduced. A - 8 cp reduced. S - 12 cp reduced.
Name: Yin Release. Rank: D-S. Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: Must have Genjutsu specialty. Training Requirements: 700. Description: Genjutsu is a notably skillful specialization that requires great intelligence and chakra control in order to perform. Those who have attained this special characteristic have met those criteria which has allowed them to take their illusions to the next plane. Genjutsu fittingly falls under the broad category of Yin Release and it has been revealed that those with superior talent in Genjutsu likewise have greater mastery in Yin Release. This type of mastery allows them to more accurately manipulate the victim's chakra flow to their brain and stimulate more powerful illusions, making you're illusions more realistic and bypassing a persons perception. Because of your more powerful illusions, it now takes double the chakra cost to perform a Kai Release than it normally would for targets.
- Mental:
THE BACKGROUND. History: Born in the rural outskirts of Konohagakure no Sato within Hi no Kuni, Takumi was raised in an impoverished household with a father who became sick soon after his son's second birthday, and a mother who spent most of the day farming, replacing her bedridden husband in the fields. The unfortunate, but tight-knit family were fine living under modest circumstances, but ominous signs foretold more hardship as Takumi was struck by an unknown illness soon after he learned to walk. Now both the toddler and his father were bedridden, unable to function without the help of the third member of the family. Takumi's mother tried the best she could, but an overworked mother, both stricken by physical aches, and mental anguish was unsuitable to provide for a sick family. Sections of the field began to go unattended, as her time was split between her husband, her son, and the farm that provided their only source of food.
Takumi's illness took away his recently gained mobility, spending each day lying next to his father, whose eyes seem to dull further with each passing month. Although his father attempted to play with his son upon Takumi's contracting of the unknown illness, these efforts quickly ceased over the course of a couple years. During those two years, Takumi's condition began to express strange symptoms. His skin became dull, almost gray in color, prompting his mother to wrap him completely in bandages in case anyone caught a glimpse. Other attempts to care for her son included a desperate experiment in which Takumi's mother tried a strange home-remedy. The result was the permanent discoloration of his sclera, turning them a deep ebony. Distraught over what she had done, his mother deemed herself an unfit parent, and made preparations for her son to be sent to Konohagakure no Sato for adoption using what little savings the family had in order to relieve her son of a troubled future which included inheriting a scarcely productive farm, a sick father and a mother who, through a combination of age, physical labor and stress, was beginning to break.
It was a mournful day when a team sent from Konohagakure no Sato came to take Takumi away. There were long goodbyes, with Takumi, despite being unable to walk, clinging to his father's bedside and then to his mother's clothing. In reflecting back on the moment, Takumi would admit to not remembering the details of the scene but instead a profound sense of melancholy which is equally as heart-wrenching. That was the last day he saw his parents, separated from them at only five years of age, sick and now thrusted into an entirely new setting.
The intense glow of hospital lights were frequent in Takumi's childhood after relocating to Konohagakure. No family wanted to adopt a sick child, requiring the villages medical staff to diagnose and cure Takumi's ailment, although it wasn't their top priority. Simply getting a diagnosis took a year, as research was conducted slowly and erratically. Ultimately, the medical staff concluded that the boy had leprosy. However, for reasons unknown, the illness, (while taking into consideration the amount of time Takumi had lived with it) was not severely effecting his body nor was it contagious. Further interest was given to his condition, and after another year of sluggish progress, it was discovered that Takumi was a decedent of the Senju clan, prompting the hypothesis that the innate vitality which clansmen possessed might have been responsible for Takumi's perseverance while sick, as well as the reason for why the leprosy wasn't as unpleasant as it could have been.
After undergoing treatment, Takumi's condition improved. His skin returned to a healthy color, although his eyes remained discolored by the concoction his mother had given him (without knowing the ingredients, it was impossible to find a solution to the issue). However, even with the leprosy cured, the child continued to wrap himself in bandages, insisting that he was still sick, perhaps as a method of staying connected his parents. There was little the medical staff could do to convince him otherwise. Takumi even developed a habitual, fake cough. This odd behavior only furthered the notion that he was unfit for adoption and on the year that he was cured, the boy found himself in the home of one of the medical shinobi who had overseen him for the past two years.
At this point, Takumi was eight, an age when some might consider their child a candidate for the shinobi academy. The Senju decedent however, was still not convinced of his good health, and in fact he was not. Physically, Takumi was underdeveloped, both malnourished and in need of physical rehabilitation as he hadn't used his legs in any meaningful way for years. The process of relearning how to use his legs properly took longer than anticipated, but once the function was regained, Takumi found himself taking regular runs around the village, much to the relief of the medical shinobi, who had officially taken on the role of an adoptive parent.
The improved physical health influenced Takumi's mental attitude. While he still retained the bandages, he no longer used a fake cough and was convinced of his good health. His adoptive mother had often thought of enrolling him in the academy, but figured that Takumi needed time to discover himself before taking on the daunting tasks of a shinobi. This was a good call. Takumi fervently absorbed all Konohagakure had to offer, exploring the village, the forests, and everything in between. He especially enjoyed swimming in the streams and lakes that spotted the village, and chasing stray animals through the streets although, sometimes just observing the vibrant surroundings was enough for him.
After a full four years of self-discovery, Takumi himself volunteered for enrollment into the Konohagakure's shinobi academy, much to the delight of his adoptive mother, who wished he'd follow in her footsteps as a medic. The first year of classes however, was not a fun experience for the eleven year-old, who faced hostility as he maintained a commitment to wrapping himself in bandages. Bullied, Takumi reverted slightly, once again taking up the habitual coughing. Unfortunate circumstances left the boy to fend for himself, as his adoptive mother departed on a month-long mission. To cope, Takumi mainly buried himself in books at the village's library, gradually shifting towards darker subjects as the bullying continued.
His second year at the academy went better than the first since the bullies had moved on, no longer paying any attention to Takumi. His adoptive mother never returned however, dampening the Senju's spirits and making him even more of a recluse. Regardless of cognitive and social development, Takumi's talents in the subjects of Ninjutsu and Genjutsu made themselves apparent during this time, making him well-regarded among his instructors, who were a source of encouragement. Already a teenager and almost a graduate, Takumi was granted the freedom of living on his own. While this raised the question of how well the boy could care for himself, Takumi was able to demonstrate self-sufficiency in all domestic affairs, and although his mind might have been a bit twisted from the odds events that transpired in his childhood, the teen managed to graduate to the rank of Genin at the age of fourteen.
Roleplay Sample:
- Spoiler:
[Just something I came up with on the spur of the moment.]
A fine amount of humidity coated Konohagakure no Sato uncharacteristically as Mitsunari awoke that morning. He typically rose at dawn, far earlier than most of the civilians who resided in the village, but common enough for a shinobi. While he deemed that thought to be true, the Chuunin realized that there were shinobi who lacked the discipline, and made a point to criticize any who revealed that they were that type of individual. “Laziness is something a village such as ours should avoid,” he imagined himself saying, “For the sake of our own lives as well as our comrades.” Yes, that would be a decent enough message to preach, for it would demonstrate his resolve towards discipline while giving a purpose to it as well (as obvious as such a purpose should be to a shinobi).
Musing aside, the young man began to go about his usual morning routine, disrobing before stepping into the bath, for as much as the shinobi profession depicted hardened warriors who always followed order, never giving themselves time for a break, Mitsunari was still human, and all humans needed to bathe every once and a while when given the opportunity. That being said, he made a point to do so quickly, there would be no pleasure in the brief ten minutes that he let the water cleanse him, and having stepped out of the bath he dried himself, recounting his battle-scars along with the few burn marks, the shade of skin noticeably darker in these areas, clashing with his light skin tone. Only a few moments later Mitsunari was fully clothed and leaving his abode, heading toward the mission center in the heart of Konohagakure.
It was still early in the morning when Mitsunari arrived, the sun, he predicted, would be rising splendidly at about this moment, and the Chuunin briefly considered what the view would be like in other parts of the world, namely Kirigakure no Sato, with its perpetual mist, but it was upon sitting at his large wooden table that his personal thoughts were put aside for a greater purpose, duty. As a Chuunin, Mitsunari had been assigned to give missions to Genin and his fellow colleagues. It was a fine job, a necessary one, although the Chuunin assumed his duties with some annoyance, as paperwork and review of documentation was quite time-consuming.
Eyes tracing the words written on each document, the Chuunin thought about each mission with the same degree of consideration. "What type of shinobi would be best suited for this task," he asked himself. What type of shinobi am I to be stuck behind a desk? Conflicting feelings surged momentarily within the young man's heart. Wasn't his true purpose to be on frontline? Shouldn't it be he who undertook missions rather than assigning them? No. This was his duty, this was a part of his shinobi career. Reaffirming his convictions, Mitsunari casted aside his doubt. Such battles happened often within his mind, when the Chuunin would need to remind himself that absolute certainty in his duty was the only way to be a successful shinobi, and at the moment, Mitsunari was far from achieving anything even remotely close to success. More training this afternoon, he promised himself, setting aside a pile of papers as he did.
Odd. Mitsunari knew he placed the papers softly on the table, as he was not so fed up with his occupation that slamming was necessary. Then… Ah, fresh meat. The source of the bang had been a Genin, most likely one who had just graduated since his forehead protector was unblemished. Of course, Mitsunari would not need to wait long before the newbie opened his mouth, proclaiming this and that to a disinterested Chuunin who happened to be the only one on duty at the moment.
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| Subject: Re: Ōtani, Takumi [Konoha Genin] Thu 17 May 2012, 8:12 am | |
| THE ARSENAL.
WEAPONRY
- All:
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls
ACADEMY JUTSU
- All:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1CP to seal; 1CP to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
NINJUTSU
- Doton Ninjutsu:
Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes are brittle, and can be broken with a strong blow or tough defense. Chakra Cost: 7
- Suiton Ninjutsu:
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a solid bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby. Chakra Cost: 9 (2 per post)
Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles. Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)
- Mukuton Ninjutsu:
Name: Mokuton: Henge | Wood Release: Transformation Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: Mokuton (Wood Release) Clan: Senju Description: Mokuton: Henge is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. This jutsu is just like any other Transformation Technique. The user performs the necessary hand seals, then wood emerges and covers his entire body and a puff of smoke or chakra covers up the transformation. Once the jutsu is done, the transformation is complete. It acts more like a costume than a transformation, as the user is able to leave it behind if necessary. This transformation is able to withstand a reasonable amount of damage before dispersing. Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Mokuton: Gosunkugi Enjin | Wood Release: Wood Spike Ring Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Mokuton (Wood Release) Clan: Senju Description: Mokuton: Gosunkugi Enjin is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. In order for this technique to work the user must have their target surrounded in wood. The user forms spikes on their wood which surrounds their target in a spiked rings, preventing them from making sudden movements or even performing a substitution escape mechanic. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Mokuton: Semaijurin no Jutsu | Wood Release: Small Forest Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Mokuton (Wood Release) Clan: Senju Description: Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan.A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time. These branches, though not sharp, are still capable of performing ranged blunt damage and bind the target. Though a powerful technique, it's not capable of destroying a solid surface very easily, and is a beginner's version of Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu Chakra Cost: 8CP (2 per post)
Name: Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu | Wood Release: Four Pillars Prison Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: Mokuton (Wood Release) Clan: Senju Description: Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. The user changes chakra into timber under the ground and makes it grow rapidly, while forming it into a wooden prison. The size of the prison is five meters in each side, making it capable of containing multiple individuals if used in one spot. The timber itself is treated with a chakra coating, making its destruction extremely difficult. During war, it has the great ability to detain prisoners, but it can also be used as a disciplinary measure for quarreling subordinates. Chakra Cost: 8CP
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Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Far (0m - 20m) Element: - Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. The object must be within 20m of the user. Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Flower Petal Escape Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: If the user comes under attack, she or he can use this technique to cover her or his escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the user's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her or his opponent while she or he escapes or hides. This technique works very similarly to substitution, but can also be used to delude the enemy with more flower petal based Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Mukureru Bankon [To Be Tangled in Entwined Roots] Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Multiple Targets Range: Close (0m-5m) to Far (10m+) Element: N/A Description: After preforming a few hand seals, the user will create a simple illusion in which a countless number of tree roots spring up from the ground, attempting to entangle the target(s). The roots are strong enough to create some resistance against movement (reducing mobility and/or speed), and can in fact bind the target(s) in place if they were to ignore the illusion. The roots are capable of binding all extremities within two posts unless the target(s) retaliates against them via weaponry, jutsu, maneuvering away, etc. This technique can target a maximum of three people and has a duration length of four of the user's posts, ending on the fifth. Chakra Cost: 7 (+2CP per turn)
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single-Target Range: Line of Sight Element: - Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. If the target sees these leaves, the Gen jutsu will be cast. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. Chakra Cost:4 (1 per post)
Name: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Far (0m - 30m) Element: - Description: After the user forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his or her target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety. The fireball cannot reach further than 30m. Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
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| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Ōtani, Takumi [Konoha Genin] Fri 18 May 2012, 2:58 am | |
| Very well done good sir.
I have but a single issue with your character, and that has to do with a section of the appearance. You state your character wears thick clothing, which makes him immune to the blunt force of a kunai. Does this mean that he cannot be stabbed by a thrown kunai (or projectile for that matter)? If so, then you're required to register for the specific attire; since regular ninja attire isn't meant to be that strong against weapons that fall under a wide variety of Genin-oriented strategies. I would simply suggest removing the mentions of your character gaining such resistance for projectile weaponry. Other than that little nitpick, this character looks very good. :thumpsup: |
| | | Euphoria
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| Subject: Re: Ōtani, Takumi [Konoha Genin] Fri 18 May 2012, 3:28 am | |
| - Enzo wrote:
- Very well done good sir.
I have but a single issue with your character, and that has to do with a section of the appearance. You state your character wears thick clothing, which makes him immune to the blunt force of a kunai. Does this mean that he cannot be stabbed by a thrown kunai (or projectile for that matter)? If so, then you're required to register for the specific attire; since regular ninja attire isn't meant to be that strong against weapons that fall under a wide variety of Genin-oriented strategies. I would simply suggest removing the mentions of your character gaining such resistance for projectile weaponry. Other than that little nitpick, this character looks very good. :thumpsup: Why, thank you my good man.
I forgot to elaborate on that. What should've been included was that the shirt and jacket make a rather durable combination, enough to stop a fraction of a small projectile's (kunai, shuriken) momentum. In other words, his clothes aren't flimsy and easy to tear. Anyway, I've made the edit you've suggested. |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Ōtani, Takumi [Konoha Genin] Fri 18 May 2012, 3:38 am | |
| All looks good! You'll need another approval from a separate mod; and sadly there aren't any online at this point. You may have to wait until tomorrow before being approved. Or.. later today. Varies based on timezones, since there--
[1/2] Approved! |
| | | Cookie Monster
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| Subject: Re: Ōtani, Takumi [Konoha Genin] Sun 20 May 2012, 6:02 pm | |
| Character Approved. 2/2
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| Subject: Re: Ōtani, Takumi [Konoha Genin] Wed 06 Feb 2013, 1:42 pm | |
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