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Renjiro Senju
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| Subject: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Wed 10 Mar 2010, 5:07 am | |
| Basic Information: Name: Renjiro Senju Secondary Title: Renji Age: 13 Gender: Male Physical Appearance:
Face and Hair
Usual Clothing
He has mudy brown eyes with medium length brown spikey hair. He usually has his hair spikey so that it can flow through the air and gently massage his scalp. His medium length hair is sometimes left flat and wavy, however this leaves him looking quite emo looking. It looks emo because it flows down his face and covers his left eye which he doesnt like at all. This style of look is mainly only seen in the morning when he wakes up.
His typically clothes are his a typical white judo gi top (with a Senju clan symbol behind the back of the neck) with a hakama around his waist. He also wears a black sash (embroided with gold thread senju symbols) tied around his hakamas to keep the hakamas on tight and keep his gi top closed. Renjiro doesn’t have any specific identifiers like scars. This is purely due to the fact that he is vain and is only a genin.
Personality: Wise, caring and considerate but always looks out for his team and his village. He looks at everyone as equals but does look down upon those who don’t conform to the social norms. Also he is usually up beat and happy but always keeps a straight and stern face. However being in sunagakure means that a ninja cannot show any emotion as it is a sign of weakness and is likely to get you picked on. Being a Senju brought up with strict guidelines and protocols to follow allow renjiro to maintain his composed state even if in the most scariest of times and whilst in immense pain.
His eyebrows are normal but when annoyed or angry they furrow extremely. However he is quite easily prone to mood swings and flashes of anger. This is because of the constant pressure of being in sunagakure, where its every ninja for his/herself. Renjiros one and only fear is a member of the Shokobutsukon clan. This is because of the two clans history and differences but mainly due to the fact of they can make a senju lose control over his mokuton jutsus. Renjiro, if crossed, can become a very horrid sight releasing his wood KKG to his fullest power.
Catch Phrase: N/A
Clan Information:
Clan Name: Senju
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Clan Location: Konoha Clan Traits: None Kekkei Genkai: The Senju clan has the ability of the manipulation of the advanced element wood, or "Mokuton". They achieve this by having complete balance with two elements: Earth and Water. By combining these two chakra and implementing them into jutsu they can create wood or manipulate preexisting wood. By converting chakra into the source of life, senju areble to create trees, cause them to grow to great sizes, and manipulate them to diverse shapes and battle uses at will. It was said this ability was used to create the very landscape and foundation that Konoha is built on. Clan Jutsu: Name: Wood Clone Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Wood Description: The Wood Clone Technique simply makes up to a few clones made of wood that emerges from the body of the user. The clones can be as simple in function as a wooden dummy for use in the Body Replacement Technique. More complex clones can travel far distances from the user and are able to communicate with the original Name: Wood Release Secret Technique: Birth of Dense Woodland Type: Ninjutsu Rank: S Element: Wood Description: The user forces trees to grow on any surface, and can easily create a dense forest anywhere. It was this technique that allowed Hashirama to build the foundations of Konoha. This jutsu can also be used to bind an opponent and alter a battlefield for their own uses. This jutsu has an initial range of 25 meters in each direction. By adding an additional B rank amount of chakra they can extend this up to an extra 5 meters, A- 10 meters, and doubling the normal chakra cost will allow it to go 15 meters past the original boundary. The trees can be used as a focal point for other wood jutsu or the limbs can be maneuvered themselves using their mastery of the wood element. Name: Wood Release Binding Nest Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Wood Description: This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. This technique is relatively powerful and holds opponents very gracefully, with less of a strain on the user, because the user sinks them into the ground. Afterwards, the user can enclose the opponent so that their body implodes. Name: Dense Woodland Wall Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wood Description: The user touches their hands to the ground and calls upon there ability to manipulate and create the wood element. The surge their chakras through the ground and force them to come up from the ground as wooden poles which interlace to form a wide barrier of 5 meters in front of themselves. Name: Four Pillars House Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Wood Description: Using this jutsu the user can create an fairly basic house made entirely out of wood. Due to time needed, approximately five minutes, it has no use in battle and is entirely intended for the purposes of creating a quick shelter for over night stay. Name: Four Pillars Prison Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wood Description: The user creates a quick, decently sized cage of straight wood pillars around the targets. This is for a quick capture and is not a very durable structure and can be quiet easily be broken out of. However it can also be used as a basis for other wood based jutsu. Name: Great Forest Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: Wood Description: A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time, if one changes the ends into sharp stakes, turn them into countless, sharp, spear-like piercing weapons. Name: Serial Pillar Houses Type: Ninjutsu Rank: S Element: Wood Description: This is a grander scale of Four Pillars House technique. It is the same basic concept on the houses get more complex and it can create several of them all at once. This exhausts the user very rapidly, taking about half of their chakra supply to complete. The limit to this technique is 25 houses per use. Name: Wood Release: Transformation Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wood Description: This jutsu is just like any other Transformation Technique. The user performs the necessary hand seals, then wood emerges and covers his entire body and a puff of smoke or chakra covers up the transformation. Once the jutsu is done, the transformation is complete. It acts more like a costume than a transformation, as a user is able to leave it behind if necessary. Name: Wood Locking Wall Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Wood Description: An extremely versatile move, this technique uses chakra to activate the roots in the ground and, using the user as a reference point, makes wooden pillars appear from left and right. The wooden pillars join together in a dome-shape with the user at the center. This process can be used to catch the enemy in a double sided attack. Also, in case one confronts the enemy at a short distance, the enemy can be locked up inside the dome, setting the situation for a one-on-one fight. This dome can also be collapsed or burnt with the enemy inside causing damage. Furthermore, it functions as a easy shelter against the enemy's long-distance attacks, like shuriken and kunai History: The Senju clan was descended from the younger of the two brothers chosen by the Sage of the Six Paths to inherit the way of the ninja. He was born with the "body" of the sage, and he believed that love was the key to peace. This led to the sage choosing him as his successor causing his older brother to attack him out of hatred. Eventually, the Uchiha clan was descended from this older brother and resulted in the bitter rivalry of the Senju and Uchiha. The Senju clan gained their fame in the era before the founding of the hidden villages. Where other clans focused on mastering one particular skill, the Senju were masters in all skills, from ninjutsu, to taijutsu, to genjutsu. Because of this, they were feared as "the clan with a thousand skills", which gave them their name Senju ("a thousand skills", "a thousand hands"). The most famous member of the clan was their leader, Hashirama Senju. His unique Wood Release ninjutsu even gave the clan the nickname the Senju clan of the Forest . This Wood Release, and his ability to control the tailed beasts, made him the greatest shinobi of his time. The Senjus' place at the top of the shinobi world was undisputed, but there was one clan that was able to stand up to them: the Uchiha clan. Whenever one country hired the Senju, their enemies would hire the Uchiha, and vice versa. This led to a rivalry between the two clans and, more specifically, between the leaders of the clans, Hashirama and Madara Uchiha. However, in a world of constant bloodshed, Hashirama had a dream of peace, and a great love for his fellow men. Known as the "Will of Fire" , this belief made the Senju clan propose a truce to the Uchiha clan. Weary of fighting, and persuaded by Hashirama's great charisma and negotiation abilities, the Uchiha accepted, ending their bloody rivalry. Only Madara was against this truce, believing the Senju would one day destroy the Uchiha clan. He was forced to accept, but his humiliation wouldn't end there. Some time after the alliance between the Senju and the Uchiha was signed, the Land of Fire hired them to stabilize its borders, and the clans created a permanent settlement within the country. Thus, Konohagakure was founded, and, with it, the system of one Hidden Village per country. As the system spread throughout the world, the constant violence stopped, and Hashirama's dream began to become a reality. From that point on the Senjuu have been highly revered in Konoha as one of their great families and some of the most powerful ninja in their ranks. Clan Details: Open
Rank Information: Rank: Konin (Experienced Genin) Village Affiliation: Sunagakure no sato
Special Information: Character Speciality: Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Fuuninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Main: Water Sub: Earth Special Characteristics:
[*]Name: Experienced Genin Type: Rank Trait Description: A character with this trait are highly experienced by the standards of their rank. To reflect this they are consider 10% faster, stronger and tougher then the average Genin without this trait. This trait is automatically lost on attaining the rank of Chuunin
Wood manipulation
Handseal and jutsu knowledge - He loves books and therefore knows a lot of information about a great list of jutsus. This aids him in fights due to knowing what to expect from the oncoming jutsu. E.g. Range, element and type of jutsu. The exception of this is custom jutsus. (only counts for Jutsus Renjiro knows)
Skill Information:
Jutsu Template:
Non Elemental Jutsus
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Supplementary Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Supplementary Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Supplementary Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique Rank: E Type: Supplementary Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves into the background.
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Supplementary Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique Rank: E Type: Supplementary Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. The skill and length in which one can stay hidden varies by rank and ability.
Name: Sennen Goroshi - One Thousand Years of Death Rank: E Type: Attack Description: Though it is called "Leaf's Ancient Supreme Technique", Sennen Goroshi serves more as an insulting shock technique rather than a skilled Taijutsu technique. The ninja forms their hands into the seal of the tiger, and then jabs their fingers into the nether regions of their target. The result is shocking violation of the targets sanctity and often their launching in the air to stop the awkward feeling.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: Supplementary Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: C Type: Supplementary Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D - S Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.
Water Jutsus
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Name: Houmatsu Rappa - Violent Bubble Wave Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Houmatsu Rappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After Pain summons his giant crustacean, the creature will expel a huge wave of water from its mouth.
Name: Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Kokuun no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Rain ninja Kagari which utilizes the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets.
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, he will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows him or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Name: Water Release: Clone Rank: C Element: Water Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it cannot travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Name: Rising Water Cutter Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Renjiro will then slam his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.
Name: Whip of water Rank: C Element: Water Description: Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The ninja can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to whip the crap out of little kids.
Name: Violent Water Wave Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Renjiro will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.
Name: Water Wave Hand Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Suihashu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Renjiro will raise his hand into the air and emit a continuous jet of water to disrupt his opponent's attacks. Due to the nature of water, this attack works especially well against smoke based jutsu.
Name: Water Prison Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a Bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Name: Large Projectile Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Taihoudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Elements. Renjiro will generate water in his mouth and spit it as a stream at his target.
Name: Waterfall Basin Technique Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water. This is un-mouldec water so it just simply appears and creates a large volume of water at area.
Name: Bullet Rank: C Element: Water Description: Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, Renjiro manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.
Earth Jutsus
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Name: Earth Release: Rising Stone Spears (Doton: Doryuusou) Rank: C Element: Earth Description: This technique lets the user summon stone spikes from the ground. This technique doesn't seem to be very effective but can slow a tracking ninja down at the very least. Renjiro hardly uses this technqiue but it is handy in certain situations.
Name: Earth Release: Mud shot Rank: C Element: Earth Description: After forming handsigns Renjiro will mould earth chakra and spit out shots of runny but formed mud at his opponent or the floor. The mud is sticky and slimey but also has the ability to blind people if the mud gets into their eyes.
Name: Earth Release: Slippery floor Rank: C Element: Earth Description: After forming handsigns Renjiro will mould earth chakra then thrust a hand onto the floor and wet slippery mud will appear in a 10 meter radius. This mud is so slippery that without the walk on water technqiue you will 99.9% fall over, slide across the floor uncontrolably and sink into the mud surface.
Name: Earth Release: Mud Harden Rank: C Element: Earth Description: After forming handsigns Renjiro will mould earth chakra and then clap his hands together. By doing this all mud around him will expand, dry up and constrict the users limb if it is caught in mud or if the user has mud on their clothing.
Name: Earth Release: Mud Expansion Rank: C Element: Earth Description: After forming handsigns Renjiro will mould earth chakra and then clap his hands together. By doing this, at a select location, which is decided by where he looks, the mud at that location will expand by 25% of its original size. The sourse of mud can be on a tree, an animal or on a persons skin/clothing/amourer. The speed of this growth is almost instantanious, just short of a second, due to a senjus extensive knowledge of the molecular structure of earth and cells.
Fuuninjutsus
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Name: Sealing Style: Element Sealed Scroll Release Rank: D - S Element: N/A Description: Renjiro takes a previously used scroll, from within his Senju robe, that was used to seal any element previous water or earth jutsu within it using the Sealing Style: Written Water or Earth Sealing Scroll Activate Jutsu. He then un-rolls it so the huge Kanji in the centre of the scroll faces the enemy(s). He then forms 4 handsigns Snake, Monkey, Tiger and Snake. When he forms the last handsign the huge Kanji in the middle of the scroll rotates and then changes to RELEASE. When the Kanji changes all the ink on the scroll glows red and from the centre of the scroll the sealed jutsu is released. After the jutsu is release the RELEASE Kanji disappears however the surrounding kanji remains making the scroll useable again. All that needs to be done to reuse this scroll is to re-write the kanji SEAL again in fresh ink. To release this seal it requires the user to release one rank below its intended jutsus use of chakra. Aka if the sealed jutsu was a C ranked water jutsu it would require a D rank amount of chakra to unseal. This is because there was already a chakra cost to seal the jutsus in the first place. Empty/plain scroll ↑↑ Element Sealed Scroll Release ↑↑ Name: Sealing Style: Written Water Sealing Scroll Activate Rank: D - S Element: N/A Description: After writing the scroll with fresh ink (considering you dont have a pre-written scoll on you, otherwise just unroll your prewritten out) Renjiro will then thrusts the scroll into the air and then he forms 3 handsigns Snake, Monkey and Dragon. When he does this the ink turns red and the huge Kanji which reads SEALING in the centre of the scroll spins in the centre as a huge amount of smoke is produced and sent out at the jutsu and absorbs it/part of it. When the sealing jutsu has finished then kanji changes to WATER. Renjiro then rolls the scroll up and places it where he got the scroll originally. The chakra used to seal the oncoming jutsu must be the same as the jutsu itself aka sealing a c ranked water jutsu would take a c ranked amount of chakra. Sealing Scroll Activate ↑↑ Sealing Scroll Activate - With Water kanji ↑↑ Name: Sealing Style: Written Earth Sealing Scroll Activate Rank: D - S Element: N/A Description: After writing the scroll with fresh ink (considering you dont have a pre-written scoll on you, otherwise just unroll your prewritten out) Renjiro will then thrusts the scroll into the air and then he forms 3 handsigns Snake, Monkey and Dragon. When he does this the ink turns red and the huge Kanji which reads SEALING in the centre of the scroll spins in the centre as a huge amount of smoke is produced and sent out at the jutsu and absorbs it/part of it. When the sealing jutsu has finished then kanji changes to EARTH. Renjiro then rolls the scroll up and places it where he got the scroll originally. The chakra used to seal the oncoming jutsu must be the same as the jutsu itself aka sealing a c ranked earth jutsu would take a c ranked amount of chakra. Sealing Scroll Activate ↑↑ Sealing Scroll Activate - With Earth kanji ↑↑
Cannon KKG Jutsus
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Name: Wood Release: Transformation Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wood Description: This jutsu is just like any other Transformation Technique. The user performs the necessary hand seals, then wood emerges and covers his entire body and a puff of smoke or chakra covers up the transformation. Once the jutsu is done, the transformation is complete. It acts more like a costume than a transformation, as a user is able to leave it behind if necessary.
Name: Dense Woodland Wall Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wood Description: The user touches their hands to the ground and calls upon there ability to manipulate and create the wood element. The surge their chakras through the ground and force them to come up from the ground as wooden poles which interlace to form a wide barrier of 5 meters in front of themselves.
Name: Four Pillars Prison Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wood Description: The user creates a quick, decently sized cage of straight wood pillars around the targets. This is for a quick capture and is not a very durable structure and can be quiet easily be broken out of. However it can also be used as a basis for other wood based jutsu.
Name: Wood Release: Binding Nest (Mokuton: Kubaku Eisou) Rank: B Element: Mokuton Description: This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. This technique is relatively powerful and holds opponents much more gracefully, with less of a strain on the user, because the user sinks them into the ground. Afterwards, the user can enclose the opponent so that their body implode
Custom KKG Jutsus
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Name: Mokuton no jutsu Rank: D-S Element: Mokuton Description: This jutsu creates a/some pillar/s of pure wood in any dimension the user wants (depends on rank, see below). This wood can emerge anywhere within a 10 meter radius of the user and can manipulated in any way or form. | D | C | B | A | S | Max Number of pillars | 1 | 4 | 9 | 22 | 45 | Max length of each pillar (meters) | 8 | 16 | 32 | 38 | 42 | Name: Seed Enzyme Rank: C Element: Wood Description: Similar to Binding nest jutsu, however, this requires a catalyse. Mokuton: Seeds. The user can have up to 5 seeds within his hand and charge them with his chakra. He will be able to spread them however he likes and after doing so may make the horse seal whenever he pleases, triggering an extremely fast growth of the seeds into ten foot deciduous trees. Name: Mokuton: Seed Rank: C Element: Wood Description: Renjiro will produce a seed in the palm of his hand. This is filled with his own chakra and is usually ingested by someone else which allows Renjiro to comunicate with them as if he was standing next to them. This seed also allows Renjiro to know exactly what direction and how far they are away from him. The communications range of this jutsu is almost limitless in the sense of that it can stretch the length of an entire country. Name: Mokuton: Stakes Rank: C Element: Wood Description: Usable with any source of wood that a Senju can get his hands on, whether that be by their own making or having a physical or chakra link with other sourses of wood. The Senju will send a charge of mokuton chakra into the source of wood at which time 10 stakes will shoot from the wood source and at the opponent. The stakes will then act like shrapnel and be able to pierce skin. The stakes are shoot out of the source of wood because of the speed of which the cells within the wood is changed and manipulated creating alot of kenetic engery in one direction. Name: Wood Release: Tree Restraints Technique Rank: C Element: Wood Description: Mokuton: Jubaku no Jutsu is a unique Ninjutsu technique used by Renjiro. Using his ability to utilize Mokuton (wood release) techniques, Renjiro will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from the ground. These beams will wrap around his target to bind them. Name: Wood Release: Replacement Rank: C Element: Wood Description: Wood Release: Replacement is a unique Ninjutsu technique used by Renjiro. Using his ability to utilize Mokuton (wood release) techniques, Renjiro will form a handseal and cause a wooden doll version of himself to instantly appear where he was. Renjiro himself to appear in any direction within a 7 meter radius of his original location. Note this is a advance version of the replacement jutsu using his own wood as a material instead of having to find, locate and remember where that source of wood is. This can only be used once per topic. It takes him 1 second to prepare the jutsu as it only requires one handsign and little chakra. Renjiro can only use one type of replacment per topic. Name: Wood Release: Body Plugging Rank: E-S Element: Wood Description: This technique is done with no handsigns just the thought inside their mind. It plugs up holes on the users body. An example of this is that a kunai connects with you and imbeds itself in your body by 3 inches. The user will use this jutsu to form wood around the kunai and then fill the hole, pushing the kunai out. Therefore stopping any bleeding from the wound. At E rank the user can produce an inch of wood, at D rank its 2 inches, at C rank its 5 inches, at B rank its 10 inches, at A rank its 23 inches and at S rank its 50 inches. Name: Wood Release: Wooden eyes Rank: C Element: Wood Description: This technique creates only one wooden eye with a full 360 degrees view of vision however at any one time the eye can only see 120 degrees of vision. These 120 degrees of vision are shared with only the caster of this technique and not with any other Senju or nature manipulator. The distance of this wooden eye is that of a normal human eye which is roughly 30 meters depending on weather conditions. To do this jutsu the user must clap their hands and the form the snake handsign, after this the user will open up a hand and the eye will form in their palm. This technique can be repeated many times to create a system of eyes to create a 3D image of the surroundings. To repeat this technqiue can produce ONE eye per use of this technqiue. And cannot be further away than 25 meters from the user at any one time. In addition, once the eye has been placed it cannot move on its own accord, it has to be moved by a living thing or moved by nature like the wind or earthquakes etc. A sideeffect of this jutsu is that it takes the vision of an eye each time this jutsu is used. Limited to 2 wooden eyes due to only having 2 eyes.
Summoning
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Name: Lions of the Senju Clan Rank: C to S Appearance: | - Quote :
- The lion is a member of the cat family, and shares many common traits of this family. The body is very muscular, with less bone mass than other animals of comparable size. This is also responsible for the grace of movement we associate with members of the cat family. The forebody of the lion is very powerfully built, and has the greatest forebody strength of any cat, except possibly the tiger. This enables the lion to deliver blows with it's forepaws heavy enough to break a zebra's back. The bones of the front legs are twisted in such a manner as to give a great range of motion to the forelimb.
Each paw is equipped with soft pads to make it's movements quiet. Like most carnivores, lions are digitigrade walkers. This means they essentially walk on their toes. But, the majority of the animal's weight is borne by the main paw pads, which would correspond on a human to the palm of the hand at the base of the fingers. Extra bones in the toe joints give the toes a wide range of motion.The claws are retractible and very sharp. The retractable feature helps keep the claws sharp, and prevents injury during play, etc. The dewclaw on the front limbs is often used as a toothpick. The claws grow as a series of layers. As a layer wears, it is shed, and a new sharp-pointed claw is exposed. The claw on a large lion can be 1 1/2 inches (38 mm) or more from base to tip along the curve.
The body is covered with a sandy brown coat in most subspecies of lions, but there is a white variant that shows up once in a while, especially in the Timbavati region of South Africa. (The white variant is also showing up more and more among captive lion populations.) Lions with a very dark brown coat have been observed, but this is quite rare. The coat color of a lion is not determined so much by the color of the hair, but by the ratio of light-colored hairs to dark-colored hairs.
The mature male lion has a mane that covers the backside of the head, and the shoulders. The extent of the mane varies from individual to individual, with some having no mane at all, while others have a luxurious mane that runs onto the body, along the abdomen, and even onto the fronts of the back legs in exceptional specimins. The mane varies in color from the rest of the body, and tends to grow darker with age. Some lions in the Serengeti area and from North Africa have a nearly black mane. Just like th body hair, the mane color is determined by the ratio of dark hairs to light hairs present. The mane hair is stiff and wiry, like stiff horeshair. Besides it's primary role of protecting the male during fights, it has been discovered that female lions prefer males with bigger and darker manes.
The eyes are proportinately larger than in other comparable-sized animals, and posess round pupils. Lions, like most cats, are visual animals. The eyes are also well-adapted for use under very low light. This helps the lion hunt at night. Contrtry to popular notion, a lion's eyes do not glow in the dark, but they contain a special reflective coating that will reflect even moonlight. This coating increses the lion's visual acuity in very low light by ensuring that every possible photon of light makes it to the cells in the retina. Their eyes are effective even by starlight. A white circle just below the eyes helps reflect light into the eyes to further improve night vision. Like most mammals, lions have a nictitating membrane which serves to clean and protect the eye in some circumstances. Lions, like most cats, have limited ability to move their eyes side-to-side, and must turn the head to look in a different direction.
The sense of smell is well developed. Lions mark their territories by means of scent deposits, necessitating a good sense of smell. This also helps them find kills made by other predators, and perhaps obtain an easy meal by driving the other predator off their kill. Another interesting thing that lions and all other cats posess is a special olfactory organ on the roof of the mouth called a Jacobson's organ. Sometimes, you will see a lion, or even your cat, grimace when smelling something. They are opening their lips to draw air over their jacobson's organs. This grimacing gesture is called Flehmen.
The sense of hearing is perhaps only slightly above average. The ears can be swiveled over a wide angle to enable the lion to hear distant sounds, and know what direction they are coming from.
The lion's tail is the only one in the cat family with a tassel at the tip. (Ligers also have a tassel, but they are not found in the wild.) This tassel conceals a spine, which is the last few tail bones fused together. What function this spine serves, if any, is unknown. The tail is very important for overall balance. Females also use their raised tail as a 'follow me' signal for the cubs. They also use it to signal each other during a group hunt.
The lion's teeth are well adapted for killing their prey and eating it. The great canine teeth are spaced such that they can slip between the cervical vertebrae of their favorite-sized prey animals, and sever the spinal cord. The shape of the back teeth, which are called carnassals instead of molars, makes them work like a pair of scissors, for cutting pieces of meat. The jaw is not capable of moving side-to-side, like ours. This helps keep the carnassal teeth in alingment for cutting. The rest of the teeth are conical, and designed for cutting and tearing. Lions, like all cats, do not chew their food, but swallow it in chunks. They also use only one side of their mouth at a time. This trait is also common to all cats, and is caused by the inability of the jaw to move side-to-side. The tongue is covered with rough spines, called papialle. This helps the lion scrape meat off of bones, and acts like a comb for grooming.
The digestive system of the lion is simple, not unlike a human's. Meat is fairly easy to digest, and the elaborate digestive mechanisms present in their prey for breaking down celluose are not needed. Cats, in general have the shortest digestive tracts of all animals.
A lion's body temperature ranges from 100.5 to 102.5 degrees farenheit. (38.05 - 39.16 degrees C.)
No physical description of the lion would be complete without some mention being made about it's magnificent roar. Only four cats can roar: The lion, tiger, leopard, and jaguar. These four cats have been assigned to the genus Panthera because they can roar. Of these cats, the lion roars the most. It is beleived the roar serves to alert other lions of an individual's presence. Roaring choruses of several lions, or a whole pride, also take place. When a lion roars, it can do so with enough force to raise a cloud of dust. Roaring is made possible by a special two-piece hyoid bone in the throat. All of the non-roaring cats have a one-piece hyoid bone. It is said that a lion's roar can be heard 5 miles (8 km) away. Taken from http://www.lionlamb.us/lion/lionfact.html Contract Type: Blood donation Species: Feline Elemental Affinity: Earth, Water and mokuton Special Abilities/Characteristics: Utilisation of mokuton technqiues Background: Renjiro was given the Lion summoning contract by his mother as it belonged to his father. Renjiro unwrapped it and placed a blood covered handprint on a free space on it and his mother showed him the handsign sequence. In a poof of smoke Renjiro summoned a little lion cub which laid infront of him. After 3 minutes it poofed away after becoming bored making the summoning a success. Renjiro spent numerious days practicing the technique and perfecting so that he got a mature 4ft tall lion which could understand and speak english. The small mature lion explained to Renjiro the structure of the lions land and how the summoning jutsu worked for them. From then on Renjiro became extremely efficent at this technique. Summons Jutsu: All summonings have all of Renjiros cannon and custom Mokuton jutsus. However the summonings can do them without handsigns. These lions can use mokuton jutsus through the ground or existing trees.
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Name: Kunai Quantity: 250 total. In person 5 or 6 Rank: E Appearance: Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: Ninja supplies shop as well as some from my deceased father. Name: Shuriken Quantity: 250 total. In person 5 or 6 Rank: E Appearance: Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: Ninja supplies shop as well as some from my deceased father. Name: Smoke Bombs Quantity: 250 total. In person 5 or 6 Rank: E Appearance: Special Abilities/Characteristics: Creates a 6 meter by 6 meter by 4 meter (HWD) cloud of smoke. However if it is slightly windy then the cloud increases in all directions by 2 meters. However in a storm or high strength wind then the smoke will be blown away and will by many meters long but not very wide or have much height Origin: Ninja supplies shop as well as some from my deceased father. Name: Explosive tag Quantity: 250 total. In person 5 or 6 Rank: E Appearance: Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: Ninja supplies shop as well as some from my deceased father. Name: Steel wire Quantity: 100 meters in total - 10 meters on person Rank: E Appearance: Special Abilities/Characteristics: Steel wire is that strong that 99% of all non-chakra infused weapons couldn't break it. Exceptions to theses are swords. Origin: Ninja supplies shop as well as some from my deceased father.
Background Information History: Pre-Birth Renjiros mother and father were happily married and had enough financial standing to have a child. The mother was of a small clan with no special abilities however his father was of the Senju clan with it’s frowned upon wood manipulation. Regardless of this the pair decided they had reached a point in their lives that they should have a child and Renjiros mother fell pregnant. Seven months passed and all was going to plan when Renjiros father fell ill after an A ranked mission. The mission was a success however his opponent had been a similar to an aburame but slightly different. The difference being instead of using all insects and bug this user used mosquitoes.
Renjiro fathers fever got worse and worse and there was nothing the Suna medics could do with a direct antidote or a living specimen of the mosquito, neither was found. This meant Renjiros father died 2 months 22 days before Renjiro was born and now without a father.
Child-hood
The event of his father’s death meant his mother was a single parent and was left to bring Renjiro up alone. This wasn't a problem as of yet, but this would prove problematic for Renjiro in later life. This would become problematic because his father held the knowledge of the wood manipulation ability that should have been passed down from father to son. This left Renjiro with a vital void of clan knowledge which he would have to make up in his academy days.
During his childhood nothing really happened, he was loved by his mother and Renjiro returned that love with being a good child and loving her with all his heart. However he still felt slightly empty without a father figure there to guide him in the ways of becoming a man.
Experiment
When Renjiro turned 7 his mother handed him over to the head geneologist of the village Jui Kai. Jui Kai was an expert in isolating specific genes and the village elders thought it would be a great idea to experiment on the young Renjiro to see if they could harness his Wood KKG to its fullest extent. Jui took many blood samples and worked for 3 years trying to isolate the specific genes that was responsible for the Senjus wood manipulation and he found 3 different genes that could be responsible. These strands were Alanine Condon 1G, Alanine Condon 1U and Serine Condon 6A. After isolating these specific genes and manipulating there influences on the body. Once tests was done in a laboritory using normal blood and muscle cells to see what the modifications of the genes protien structure would do it was found that new genes could work on a brand new level of manipulation and even turn the cells themselves in wood for 4 seconds before they reverted back to normal.
The Tests and work on the genes took another year to work and whilst all this was happening Renjiro was kept within the walls of the huge laboritory working on the essentials for coping with the total DNA reworking (Body building, chakra developement and chakra control) aswell as the new toll it would imediately take on every cell in Renjiros body.
5 days after Jui completed his trials he had a consulant meeting with the villages Kage, Elders and S rank jounins. He discussed his analysis of the genes and his results of the clinical trials with Renjiros own cells. The meeting lasted 4 hours from start to finish and Jui got the go ahead. When it was finished Jui headed straight for his lab and prepared his high ranking medical staff for the long and stenious operation. The operation lasted 18 hours, with blood tranfusions and the introduction of artifical protiens to his blood stream which within 2 hours post op would be absorbed and passed on through osmosis to every cell in his body making the tiny changes to the specific gene sequences.
When the transfusion and intregration of the protiens was happening Renjiro was full awake and was strapped down with full re-enforced iron bars just incase the changes in the genes caused a reaction of some description. Renjiro was constantly yelling out in pain and struggling to break free for 3 hours until he passed out from the pain. When the operation was complete and the protiens was taking there effects; parts of his skin was turning into wood.
22 hours after the start of the operation Renjiros' skin turned back to normal and his heart-rate stabilised. 48 hours Renjiro regained conciousness and gained his high level brain functions, however he wasnt able to fully recover for 12 days post operation.
Academy
Renjiro had turned 11 and was admitted into the Suna ninja academy. He had passed the entry exams and done so within the top 25% of the entrants, which pleased his mother. However upon entering the academy it was obvious that everyone knew what clan he was from when his name was called and the isolation started. The Senju clan was well known for its Kekkei Genkai but it wasn’t loved nor accepted by most of the ninja families. The children didn't want to be seen familiarising himself with the likes of Senju clan, however Renjiro knew it wasn’t their fault but it was because of their parents predeceases.
Renjiro spent most of his time self-learning about the academy jutsus and his clan’s special jutsus from books in his father’s old library. Renjiro could escape from the real world and read as much as he liked when he was in the library but the main reason he was in there was to feel as if he was close to his father.
A few months had passed and he can complete all of the essential jutsus of the academy with precise and accurate control. However what he never showed anyone was his secret learning of the clans wood manipulation jutsu that could be learnt by an academy student or even as an infant if it had the chakra to do so. Renjiros skills of the wood manipulation jutsu was good for his age however it only resulted in him being able to make small objects like cups or vases. The wood manipulation he was capable of doing was ok at best but it made Renjiro happy and made him feel closer to his father than ever before.
Genin
Renjiro had graduated the academy that year with acceptable grades and honours and now the true test of his will would come into play. He requested that he wouldn't be put into a team and instead would in secret he would be training his own clan’s jutsus mastering that at C ranked level one after the other until there was no more left. However Renjiro was clever and realised rather quickly that the skills of his Ninjutsu he had learnt off his sensei could be combined with his own KKG abilities and therefore continued his training from there. Two months had passed and Renjiro was bored after all this training and had put in a request to join a genin team. He had made many new friends within the village and knew almost all the stall holders in the market part of the village as he always took Saturdays off if he didn’t have a mission to help the old stall holders with their creates of stuff as he found it very rewarding and helped him integrate with the community. And this is where we continue.
Role-Play Sample: The day was fine and extremely hot with a lovely free flowing wind. The wind was lovely as it swept across Renjiros face and swept through his long black hair. The breeze was relaxing and calming but the heat that was intense. The heat meant that no training could be done due to the increased risk of heat stroke which annoyed Renjiro but it was nice to take a day off training. He decided to make the most of his day off by going past his ex-boyfriends house to see what he was up to. On his way his mind drifted and went to a time when the pair of them was happy together but shunned by the other shinobi because of their sexuality. It was a shame but a gay couple was a rare sight to see in the ninja world, so it was thrown upon by almost every person in the village. However Renjiro was used to this, his whole family that showed the gum manipulation Kekkei Genkai was frowned upon as if it was un-natural and dirty. However the clan believed quite the opposite, the gum manipulation was on par with the Mokuton manipulation, as gum is a pure and natural substance and its manipulation is going back to being one with nature.
He reached the door and knocked however there was no answer after two minutes of knocking and waiting so he moved on towards his room. However on the way he found his long time friend Ki Lai, a Tai-jutsu specialist, and Renjiro smiled at him. The smile was reciprocated and the pair walked together towards Renjiro room. The conversation on the way was light and funny; it was obvious the pair was quite well suited to be together however they were best of friends and nothing more. The night drew in and the pair had been talking for a period of 5 hours catching up on the stuff they had been doing since they last saw each other and filling the other in on training secrets with each other. Ki Lai yawned and Renjiro waved him goodbye with a long and heartfelt wave.
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| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Wed 10 Mar 2010, 5:16 am | |
| Follow the given Template. |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Wed 10 Mar 2010, 1:56 pm | |
| Soldier Pills are NOT part of the standard and your wire isn't special without using it in template form and getting it approved as a different weapon. |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Wed 10 Mar 2010, 3:21 pm | |
| editted |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Wed 10 Mar 2010, 11:23 pm | |
| Editted change of clan to senju |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 2:49 am | |
| We happen to have a Canon clan thread, and Senju just so happens to be on it. I KNOW theres more jutsu than that on the application, along with the picture and all that. Copy the code provided and add it accordingly. Unless you use the Canon stuff we have provided, Im not going to look this over as its 2 different Senju clans. |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 3:00 am | |
| sorry didnt realise there was a cannon section about my bad sorry editted |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 3:28 am | |
| Atleast 2 paragraphs of looks and personality.
Doton: Doryuudon, in my personal opinion is B-Rank, atleast. On Leaf Ninja it is unranked, but B seems to be a low enough rank for it, given its useage in the show.
Water Replacement is not allowed. Its been denied on previous apps, so just remove it. |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 4:27 am | |
| Approved. |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 5:30 am | |
| Unnapproved.
First of all, looks and personality are a tad short. 2 full paragraphs for each.
Second, a senju genin in kiri is a bit sketchy.
I'm pretty sure a few of your water techniques are B rank..go in and remove any that are truly B
2 paragraphs for childhood arc. |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 5:32 am | |
| Eh, we have a Senju in Suna, thats more sketchy. I dont see any problems with a Senju in kiri. We also have a Hyuuga in Kumo. |
| | | Renjiro Senju
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 5:36 am | |
| There is nothing in there that in the app according to leaf ninja that is wrongly ranked. if you can name a few then do so please |
| | | Renjiro Senju
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 5:58 am | |
| looks and personality IS 2 paragraphs long. Didnt you see them. also a childhood arc isnt very eventful unless you want random rubish thrown into the app. In addition id like to add this IS a genin application |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Thu 11 Mar 2010, 6:05 am | |
| Please don't reapprove this until I've found the time to post, I see some issues with jutsu I would like to address but presently cant find the time for. I'll try to get at it tomorrow if I can. |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Fri 12 Mar 2010, 11:41 pm | |
| This post is for Hage.
Wood clone needs to be removed, that was improperly ranked. Its actually B-Rank, not D.
Mokuton Boom needs to be explained better. As you dont have fire or lightning affinities, how does it explode?
Thats for starters atleast. Undoubtably he will have more to go over. |
| | | Jsalos
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Sat 13 Mar 2010, 3:45 am | |
| Waterfall Basin- A bit similar to just a C-rank version of a banned jutsu- not sure about this one.
Armor of Earth- B-rank.
Slippery Floor- 20 meters is too wide. 10 at most.
Mud Expansion- Needs more details. How fast does it expand? Also, 2x.
Mud Sink- I personally feel this is higher than C-rank, but i'll leave that up to others.
Wood Meld- IF you can't be hurt even if the tree is completely destroyed, this is B-rank. (as in an S-rank jutsu that annihilates the tree wouldn't kill you along with it.) If someone hits the part of the tree you are in, that should damage you also if you want this to be C. |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Sat 13 Mar 2010, 6:39 am | |
| Wood meld as that is a cannon yamato trait (you see him do it a tonne of times when he plases in and out of trees) also its shown that the whilst inside the tree yamato takes no damage even if its attacked. However i put it down as a jutsu as i know people would hate that as a TRAIT and not a jutsu so thats why its there.
Waterfall Basin - is a cannon jutsu used by yamato ONCE and narutos training waterfall flowing with water constantly for atleast 5 days and HAS been confirmed as C ranked
mud sink not touched
All done except those listed above |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Sun 14 Mar 2010, 1:08 am | |
| BUMP |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Sun 14 Mar 2010, 1:34 am | |
| I really don't care what the Canon says, but Wood Meld needs either way more detail, harm if the tree is harmed, or other such weaknesses or I won't permit it to be here because otherwise its ridiculously OP when you can endure any attack you please by going in a tree. Not happening.
The Canon also says that lots of jutsu are way lower rank than would be appropriate for an RP forum, so talking about ranking and getting snappy about it isn't going to help. Waterfall Basin is more like a B Rank jutsu for forum purposes, the canon on that matter is irrelevant.
Remove Temporary Body Paralysis, its OP.
Your age is a little young, try 13 or 14.
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Personality: Wise, caring and considerate but always looks out for his team and his village. He is usually up beat and happy but always keeps a straight and stern face. He looks at everyone as equals but does look down upon those who don’t conform to the social norms. He loves books and therefore knows a lot of information about a great list of jutsus. This aids him in fights due to knowing what to expect from the oncoming jutsu. That would be a special characteristic, don't try to sneak things in with your personality and hope nobody notices, its not cool.
Remove Earth Release, its not even a jutsu.
Stone Spears needs way more details.
Mud River is B Rank.
Mud Sink, denied, the Staff is very wary about Earth Style: Dark Swamp, and imitations are equally to be watched. I don't really think you want to deal with the details I'd require to get this approved so you're better off axing it.
Mud Expansion, a 100% size increase for mud with a C Rank jutsu? You've got to be kidding me...either you assign it a variable rank according to one rank lower than the jutsu it effects or tone it down to a lower percentile, at C Rank the most i'd permit would be 25%.
Your Fuuinjutsu make no sense, try clarifying, and you're not ANBU, you can't have an ANBU jacket.
Mokuton Seed, also confusing, clarify.
Mokuton Bang, a chakra charge couldn't achieve this kind of effect. Pure chakra of that kind of strength would be at least B Rank, theres no way a Genin could achieve this kind of effect with pure chakra force and you still need to explain how it works. The chakra just goes in and then disperses? How does it do that? Just remove the imbalance thing because if you want to try that route we're going to get into a discussion about how that makes no sense and why that would just cause the jutsu to fail completely.
Mokuton Great Forest and Mokuton Finger Spikes, you're not Yamato, you can't manipulate your own body into wood because thats not mentioned in the clan. You can manipulate wood you create or precreated wood, you can't turn yourself into it, remove these.
High Strength Steel Wire, make it normal wire, unless you want to up the rank to something more appropriate because the current effects would make it more suitable for a B Rank type of weapon. |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Sun 14 Mar 2010, 4:16 am | |
| all sorted pictures added mokuton bang changed to mokuton spikes |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Sun 14 Mar 2010, 11:40 pm | |
| A paragraph consists of 5-7 sentences
Your looks-
1st paragraph- 3 sentences 2nd paragraph- 2 sentences
your personality- 1st- 3 2nd- 2 |
| | | Renjiro Senju
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Mon 15 Mar 2010, 12:11 am | |
| If you wanna be grammatically correct, a paragraph can have any number of sentences in 1+. And a sentence can contain one word or more. Btw your speaking to a person whos taking an english module in his I.T. degree |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Mon 15 Mar 2010, 12:46 am | |
| Renji. Do what you are told and stop back talking, othrise the app will not be approved. This is the same rule as BR. If one of us tells you to do something, do it.
As it stands, Pat says your stuff is too short. Fix it. |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Mon 15 Mar 2010, 4:23 am | |
| Mokuton Stakes: You're not actually throwing them, and their not growing to that distance. Whats giving them the ability to be thrown however far. Also, more description: how big is each stake etc?
Mokuton no Jutsu: Give a Description for what this can do at each rank.
Wood Replacement: This is basically a clone substitution, why do you have this? once per fight limit as well, you cant just use this to dodge however much you want.
Wood Meld: Still way op. youre immune to basically all forms of attack except for fire and lightning ninjutsu? I don't think so. Anything that could smash into the tree to get to you will get to you, wind can slice through a tree as proven by temari, a hard enough kick can smash it. If you're able to tell where your opponents are while inside the tree, and be ablee to use jutsu against them then genjutsu immunity is also unnacceptable. |
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| Subject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Suna Genin] Mon 15 Mar 2010, 5:07 am | |
| All done
Added - Name: Wood Release: Body Plugging Rank: E-S Element: Wood Description: This technique is done with no handsigns just the thought inside their mind. It plugs up holes on the users body. An example of this is that a kunai connects with you and imbeds itself in your body by 3 inches. The user will use this jutsu to form wood around the kunai and then fill the hole, pushing the kunai out. Therefore stopping any bleeding from the wound. At E rank the user can produce an inch of wood, at D rank its 2 inches, at C rank its 5 inches, at B rank its 10 inches, at A rank its 23 inches and at S rank its 50 inches.
Name: Wood Release: Body shell Rank: C Element: Wood Description: This technique requires one single snake handsign and using the stratum corneum layer of skin as instantaneous cells to use. The user will manipulate those cells and create a thick layer of wood (aprox 3 inches). After the use of this technique the user will reverse the technique and return the wooden cells back into his stratum corneum cells. This technique usually takes 5 seconds to form and can only be used 3 times per topic with a 2 post length between uses.
Name: Wood Release: Wooden eyes Rank: C Element: Wood Description: This technique creates only one wooden eye with a full 360 degrees view of vision however at any one time the eye can only see 120 degrees of vision. These 120 degrees of vision are shared with only the caster of this technique and not with any other Senju or nature manipulator. To do this jutsu the user must clap their hands and the form the snake handsign, after this the user will open up a hand and the eye will form in their palm. This technique can be repeated many times to create a system of eyes to create 3D image of the surroundings.
Also the wood replacement is a Senjus was of securing that they can substitute. Like you can’t substitute with a log if you in a desert etc
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